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[Crz]Makii

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

[Crz]Makii 2016-06-17T07:27:10+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年10月1日星期六 at 18:23:47

Artist: u's
Title: Wonder zone(TV Size)
Source: ラブライブ！ School idol project
Tags: lovelive love live muse Pata-Mon
BPM: 130
Filesize: 4274kb
Play Time: 01:53
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.35 stars, 124 notes)
Happy Zone (4.32 stars, 338 notes)
Hard (2.9 stars, 248 notes)
Pata-Mon's Normal (2.15 stars, 198 notes)

Download: u's - Wonder zone(TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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μ's daisuki!

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Last edited by [Crz]Makii 2016-10-04T11:58:50+00:00, edited 63 times in total.

Pata-Mon

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Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-06-19T14:08:15+00:00

u's - Wonder Zone ([Crz]Sword) [Pata-Mon's Normal].osu

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 70640
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Wonder Zone
TitleUnicode:Wonder Zone
Artist:u's
ArtistUnicode:μ's
Creator:[Crz]Sword
Version:Pata-Mon's Normal
Source:ラブライブ！ School idol project
Tags:lovelive love live muse
BeatmapID:0
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
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SliderMultiplier:1.2
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Binguo

308 posts

Joined April 2015

Binguo 2016-06-22T14:34:17+00:00

拉拉人你好

[Easy]

既然你说你Easy不会做那么我就主观一点 00:01:684 (1) - 这种形状在这个难度里面一般是没必的
00:03:530 (2) - 这个方向太奇葩了建议放在更加显眼的方向
00:05:376 (3) - 尾端人声建议不跟，虽然说bpm才130我还是建议不要1/2比较好（特殊情况除外比如00:06:991 (1,2,3) - 不过建议吧2改成滑动条拉到3开头这里，3（原）尾端放圈）
00:12:760 (4) - 这里是可以拉长的转盘前面隔1/1完全没问题萌大奶
00:17:782 (1) - 多余的
00:22:111 (2) - 此处1/1折返怎样 00:22:699 (3,4) - 另外这个难度建议不跟人声，正如骏马所说：不好下音效（似乎没有下音效？）
00:29:954 在我看来连打适合1/1折返相似的不提了
00:42:307 (3) - 滑条拉长点退个1/2混过去
00:54:268 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5447955 你看看这样合适吗
00:58:974 (1,2,3) - 这一堆空拍没必要的要不要试着改进改进
01:09:954 (5) - 你懂的
Easy 就是1/1塞爆有规律一点在来一点变化 +比较响的音效加油

[Pata-Mon's Normal]
巴达兽的Normal很强不摸就能飞
你很有眼光

[Happy Zone]

00:25:150 (3) - 个人感觉有点多余要不要取缔？
00:29:562 - 塞个圈
00:29:954 (5) - 此处不要叠起来
00:35:444 (1) - 这里直接一笔带过真的好吗？改进一下吧
00:47:993 (1) - ↑
00:54:268 (1,2,1) - 这个是三个一组吧？
00:55:739 (3) - 要学会舍取
00:57:405 (1) - 1/1滑条
00:57:993 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 不要一直voice 01:06:817 (1,1,1) -
后面做的还不错的说

请原谅我说了一大堆

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

[Crz]Makii 2016-06-23T05:13:15+00:00

Binguo wrote:
拉拉人你好~~μ'sic forever!!!!~~
[Easy]
既然你说你Easy不会做那么我就主观一点 00:01:684 (1) - 这种形状在这个难度里面一般是没必的 fixed
00:03:530 (2) - 这个方向太奇葩了建议放在更加显眼的方向fixd
00:05:376 (3) - 尾端人声建议不跟，虽然说bpm才130我还是建议不要1/2比较好（特殊情况除外比如00:06:991 (1,2,3) - 不过建议吧2改成滑动条拉到3开头这里，3（原）尾端放圈）fixed
00:12:760 (4) - 这里是可以拉长的转盘前面隔1/1完全没问题萌大奶fixed
00:17:782 (1) - 多余的手贱多放个圈 deleted
00:22:111 (2) - 此处1/1折返怎样 00:22:699 (3,4) - 另外这个难度建议不跟人声，正如骏马所说：不好下音效（似乎没有下音效？）1/1折返很奇怪，我选择1/2折返
00:29:954 在我看来连打适合1/1折返相似的不提了这个地方塞不下1/1折返，我选择一个圈带过
00:42:307 (3) - 滑条拉长点退个1/2混过去这里我觉得音抓的正合适。。
00:54:268 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5447955 你看看这样合适吗changed in my way
00:58:974 (1,2,3) - 这一堆空拍没必要的要不要试着改进改进多压了一个2/1节奏，这里主vocal所以我基本忽略节奏了
01:09:954 (5) - 你懂的3/2塞上
Easy 就是1/1塞爆有规律一点在来一点变化 +比较响的音效加油谢谢啦
[Happy Zone]
00:25:150 (3) - 个人感觉有点多余要不要取缔？不了，有音
00:29:562 - 塞个圈其实我只想压vocal来着。。再有一个人说我就改掉
00:29:954 (5) - 此处不要叠起来好
00:35:444 (1) - 这里直接一笔带过真的好吗？改进一下吧好
00:47:993 (1) - ↑^
00:54:268 (1,2,1) - 这个是三个一组吧？因为这里00:55:052 (1,2,1,2) - 明显是两个一组，所以00:54:268 (1,2,1,2) - 这里我直接采用两个一组表示一组加强和一组减弱的音
00:55:739 (3) - 要学会舍取好，remap了后面几个跳
00:57:405 (1) - 1/1滑条
00:57:993 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 不要一直voice 01:06:817 (1,1,1) - 我想让player在这个地方休息一下因此放的比较空，以vocal为主了(音效为此我也改到soft)，如果modder普遍不满意的话我就改个节奏
后面做的还不错的说嘿嘿

请原谅我说了一大堆谢谢啦

updated!
我决定自己做hard

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Mei 2016-06-24T04:34:11+00:00

tag 加上gder的id

[Easy]

00:22:111 (2) - 尾巴放在左下角这样折返好些
00:54:268 (3) - 这个红点放在上面这样折返好些
01:24:072 (1,2) - 用一样的形状啊
01:30:739 (1) - 这个我建议你用01:32:307 (3) - ctrl+H的形状
01:33:484 (4,1) - 这两个换下nc，然后单点改成1/1滑条好些

[Normal]

00:12:760 (1) - 红点在上面这样我感觉比较好
00:17:348 (1) - 这个nc我个人意见可以不加
00:56:621 (1) - 放这个方向有点坑爹啊，不过估计你也不好改
01:06:229 (3,1) - 其实吧，这种特别短的滑条你要是方向搞不好我就觉得打起来会比较坑爹，虽然看起来是很好的
01:07:405 (2) - 这个note可以删掉
01:17:405 (4,1) - 合并成一个滑条？简单点
01:27:013 (4) - 往左上方移一点好些
01:43:484 (2,4) - 可以删掉

[嗨皮棕]

00:21:327 (1,2,3) - 1最好能拆成1/2的节奏，23反而可以合成一个长滑条，这样效果个人感觉更好
00:27:209 (5,1) - 太近了
00:29:366 (2) - 改成滑条好些
00:35:248 重音从这里起的，我建议你吧那个折返滑条不要折返，然后在这个点上加一个note并NC
00:36:229 (10) - 三连在这滑条中间
00:41:523 (5) - 鉴于你前面也空拍，这里感觉也可以删掉
00:42:405 (3,4) - 跳的太有迷惑性了，和整个图的风格格格不入
00:48:778 (6) - 这里也是白线起的三联
00:58:974 (1) - 前面红线的音最好别漏
01:02:111 (1) - 这个也是，前面红线的音别漏

rank加油！

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

[Crz]Makii 2016-06-28T04:10:55+00:00

Mei wrote:
tag 加上gder的id 忘加了233

[Easy]
00:22:111 (2) - 尾巴放在左下角这样折返好些右下角吧嘿嘿 fix
00:54:268 (3) - 这个红点放在上面这样折返好些fixed
01:24:072 (1,2) - 用一样的形状啊这样我觉得还可以吧...
01:30:739 (1) - 这个我建议你用01:32:307 (3) - ctrl+H的形状好
01:33:484 (4,1) - 这两个换下nc，然后单点改成1/1滑条好些好

[嗨皮棕]
00:21:327 (1,2,3) - 1最好能拆成1/2的节奏，23反而可以合成一个长滑条，这样效果个人感觉更好我把长滑条拆成1/2了
00:27:209 (5,1) - 太近了改了
00:29:366 (2) - 改成滑条好些好吧，改掉了
00:35:248 重音从这里起的，我建议你吧那个折返滑条不要折返，然后在这个点上加一个note并NC
00:36:229 (10) - 三连在这滑条中间00:36:033 - 这的三连音更明显，后面那个鼓点有点听不出来所以我干脆就没抓了，打起来的话应该没有节奏问题
00:41:523 (5) - 鉴于你前面也空拍，这里感觉也可以删掉好
00:42:405 (3,4) - 跳的太有迷惑性了，和整个图的风格格格不入没大明白...按照自己的方法改了下
00:48:778 (6) - 这里也是白线起的三联^
00:58:974 (1) - 前面红线的音最好别漏
01:02:111 (1) - 这个也是，前面红线的音别漏both fixed

rank加油！

Thanks！

_MiaoFUuU_

314 posts

Joined April 2014

_MiaoFUuU_ 2016-07-02T14:32:11+00:00

NM

Easy

00:22:111 - 既然easy这里跟不了人声，建议改成这种节奏来弥补一下节奏点，打的舒服点 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5521380
00:56:621 (5) - 建议取消折返，在大白线加个圈
01:40:542 - 同第一点 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5521407
01:47:601 - 感觉结尾太仓促了，后面几个节奏点就不见了，你看这样怎样 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5521429

Pata-Mon's Normal

00:05:837 - 要么把这里改成一个圈要么把 00:06:068 (2) - 这个改成两个圈，这样节奏打的舒服点
00:06:991 (1) - 这个结尾放红线
00:42:307 - 改成这个节奏看看 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5521550
00:50:935 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5521631
00:57:405 - 改成这样 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5521659 00:57:993 - 这个不按不舒服
00:59:170 - 这里改，原因↑ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5521686 （后面类似的同，不要用滑条尾去带人声开头）
01:06:033 (2,3) - 这两个节奏ctrl+g一下
01:47:601 (1,2) - ctrl+g的节奏

Hard

突然从 00:18:190 - 这里节奏就变密了，我觉得 00:14:607 - 到 00:17:782 - 铺垫不够
00:22:699 - 用这种节奏比较好 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5521755
00:27:013 - ↑https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5521771

Happy Zone

01:08:778 - 短滑条换圈圈
01:38:876 (3,2) - 换圈吧

good luck！

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-07-02T15:55:32+00:00

@Mei 第一条改了，其他都没改。不觉得打起来坑
@_MiaoFUuU_ 全不改。懒得解释了，我现在的节奏没有问题

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nika mika

397 posts

Joined January 2014

nika mika 2016-07-02T18:05:47+00:00

群里送个摸

[general]
感觉offset要微调……第二根红线改成136 然后把147的去掉，153的挪到136后第一根长白线上？
sliderside的音效要考虑去掉吗？

[easy]
如果全盘1/1拍用到底这图节奏还是需要重新考虑一下……个人意见
比如说切分音啊附点节奏啥的……红线！红线！
00:28:386 (2) - ds基础上往下面放，3可以和滑条尾叠起来
00:33:091 (5) - 拉直一点不然不好看（逃
用4一样的形状啊啊啊啊啊
01:20:935 (1) - 感觉太突兀了在前后全放重音的情况下忽然跑出来一个跟vocal的长滑条……
01:33:484 (1) - 同上
最好还是1/1走到死除非你收了我第一条，那就配合一下新想出来的节奏
01:15:837 (2) - 放在上一个combo的4头上
相应地，3和4在ds基础上水平向右行进如果你想保持之后的位置不用改太多的话
01:39:758 (1,2) - 改成两个一拍半的长滑条听起来会好不少
01:53:876 - spinner在这边停另外可以考虑在01:49:170 - 这里放个圈， spinner向后挪半拍
另外全程顺时针画圈圈……吐个槽

[Pata-Mon's Normal]
00:43:680 (2) - 这里的音效改成normal的hitsnormal
01:05:837 - 删掉后面的2，在这里放个1/2拍的滑条？
音效上有一段（不是kiai）是军鼓地鼓……的样子，但是除了那一段（不是kiai）以外就全是咚咚咚咚不知道是故意为之还是没下完音效
没别的问题啦

[Hard]
节奏上感觉就是easy的翻版……请在kiai段符合歌的基础上适当加些原地三连什么的
flow也是全程画圈圈虽然没什么不行……
另外好多地方都是差一点正三角形/五边形改不改无所谓但为了美观最好改一下
00:09:530 (1,2,1,2) - 这里都是滑条尾占了downbeat 在00:09:530 - 用圈后面依次放滑条
00:32:307 (1,2) - ds基础上向右放一些
01:06:817 (1,2,3) - 这里叠起来比用ds全盘跳感觉上要好一点

[Happy Zone]
排列节奏摸不动
音效和低难度diff相比有不少出入最好是统一一下……虽然也是改不改无所谓
但是01:01:523 (4) - 类似的clap最好是在后面的圈上也加一次不然太突兀了

混水摸yu技术一流
;w;

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-07-03T05:46:17+00:00

offset这么调肯定不对……现在这样已经可以了。

不过我觉得好像第一根不够准
换成这样：
第一根 130.000 1680
第二根 133.400 16449
后面没有问题

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Lilyanna 2016-07-04T02:19:15+00:00

Hi frome my queue

I Hope this help a little ^.^

MOD

Pata-Mon's Normal
00:15:530 (2,3) - you can change something like this

to emphasize the next downbeat that is rly clear here 00:16:453 -
00:53:484 (3,4) - maybe change to two 1/2 sliders i dont hear anything clickable at 00:54:072 (4) -
00:56:621 (1) - can be end at red tick
hard
00:05:376 (3) - prefer wavy cuvers than sharp at a soft music but ur choice not big deal
00:15:299 (1) - u can start the spinner at red tick it feels like empty pause
00:18:974 (3,4) - blanket maybe
00:19:758 (1,2) - same here just to be more neat
00:21:131 (5,1) - ^
00:21:327 (1,2) - ^
00:26:425 (2,3) - 00:35:444 (1,2) - 00:58:778 (4,1) - same here not blanket well i wont mention them all i hate modding blankets but u can go through ur map and polishing it with nice blankets
00:49:562 (5,2) - looks kinda overlapping
00:49:170 (4,5,1) - how about space them more just to emphasize 00:49:562 (5) -

good luck with ure map (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

[Crz]Makii 2016-07-05T09:45:48+00:00

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:
NM

Easy
00:22:111 - 既然easy这里跟不了人声，建议改成这种节奏来弥补一下节奏点，打的舒服点 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5521380
还是比较怪，先不改了
00:56:621 (5) - 建议取消折返，在大白线加个圈ok
01:40:542 - 同第一点 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5521407^
01:47:601 - 感觉结尾太仓促了，后面几个节奏点就不见了，你看这样怎样 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5521429这里想给转盘前面留下足够时间...我想想
Hard
突然从 00:18:190 - 这里节奏就变密了，我觉得 00:14:607 - 到 00:17:782 - 铺垫不够好
00:22:699 - 用这种节奏比较好 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5521755现在这样我觉得尚可，先这样
00:27:013 - ↑https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5521771
Happy Zone
01:08:778 - 短滑条换圈圈短滑条这里的音乐表达的更好一些
01:38:876 (3,2) - 换圈吧换圈没法排列。。。
good luck！

nika mika wrote:
群里送个摸
[general]
感觉offset要微调……第二根红线改成136 然后把147的去掉，153的挪到136后第一根长白线上？按照巴达兽的方法改了
sliderside的音效要考虑去掉吗？去了

[easy]
如果全盘1/1拍用到底这图节奏还是需要重新考虑一下……个人意见
比如说切分音啊附点节奏啥的……红线！红线！嘿嘿其实有跟一些1/2
00:28:386 (2) - ds基础上往下面放，3可以和滑条尾叠起来这个没什么问题吧
00:33:091 (5) - 拉直一点不然不好看（逃好
用4一样的形状啊啊啊啊啊
01:20:935 (1) - 感觉太突兀了在前后全放重音的情况下忽然跑出来一个跟vocal的长滑条……改了
01:33:484 (1) - 同上^
最好还是1/1走到死除非你收了我第一条，那就配合一下新想出来的节奏
01:15:837 (2) - 放在上一个combo的4头上
相应地，3和4在ds基础上水平向右行进如果你想保持之后的位置不用改太多的话
01:39:758 (1,2) - 改成两个一拍半的长滑条听起来会好不少
这两个我觉得现在还行，后面那个changed in my way
01:53:876 - spinner在这边停另外可以考虑在01:49:170 - 这里放个圈， spinner向后挪半拍fixed
另外全程顺时针画圈圈……吐个槽

[Hard]
节奏上感觉就是easy的翻版……请在kiai段符合歌的基础上适当加些原地三连什么的
flow也是全程画圈圈虽然没什么不行……
另外好多地方都是差一点正三角形/五边形改不改无所谓但为了美观最好改一下我看看，改了一些
00:09:530 (1,2,1,2) - 这里都是滑条尾占了downbeat 在00:09:530 - 用圈后面依次放滑条这里节奏比较轻，我觉得这样可以，再有一个人说我就改掉
00:32:307 (1,2) - ds基础上向右放一些没懂qwq
01:06:817 (1,2,3) - 这里叠起来比用ds全盘跳感觉上要好一点好

[Happy Zone]
排列节奏摸不动
音效和低难度diff相比有不少出入最好是统一一下……虽然也是改不改无所谓嘿嘿我就主难度好好下了音效，低难度还没复制
但是01:01:523 (4) - 类似的clap最好是在后面的圈上也加一次不然太突兀了这里主要强调那三个拍手音的
混水摸yu技术一流
;w;

Pata-Mon wrote:
offset这么调肯定不对……现在这样已经可以了。

不过我觉得好像第一根不够准
换成这样：
第一根 130.000 1680
第二根 133.400 16449改了
后面没有问题

Lilyanna wrote:
Hi frome my queue

I Hope this help a little ^.^

MOD
hard
00:05:376 (3) - prefer wavy cuvers than sharp at a soft music but ur choice not big deal hmm I think it's ok now,maybe I like this pattern to show xD,anyone else to point this question I will fix it.
00:15:299 (1) - u can start the spinner at red tick it feels like empty pause deleted lol
00:18:974 (3,4) - blanket maybe
00:19:758 (1,2) - same here just to be more neat
00:21:131 (5,1) - ^
00:21:327 (1,2) - ^
00:26:425 (2,3) - 00:35:444 (1,2) - 00:58:778 (4,1) - same here not blanket well i wont mention them all i hate modding blankets but u can go through ur map and polishing it with nice blankets
many blanket fixed lol
00:49:562 (5,2) - looks kinda overlapping looks good in playing,so I don't want to fix it.
00:49:170 (4,5,1) - how about space them more just to emphasize 00:49:562 (5) -It's ok now imo ;w;

good luck with ure map (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

Thanks all!!

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2016-07-05T15:15:21+00:00

M4M 债

[General]

你自己的难度所有结尾必须一致

[Easy]

00:03:526 (2,3) - blanket 查查,有不少

SPOILER

00:07:910 (2,1) - overlap

感觉最后直接转盘不要那个单点了

[到处怕她猛]

00:56:621 (1) - 没必要NC

[Hard]

00:06:987 (4) - 没对称啊.ctrl+h 就知道

00:35:444 (1,2) - 可blanket

00:44:072 (2,3,4) - 试试

SPOILER

00:47:405 (3,4) - ^

SPOILER

00:50:346 (2,3,4) - ^相似节奏

01:07:601 (5,6) - 可以做ant-jump

SPOILER

01:17:405 (5,6) - 试试

SPOILER

[Happy Zone]

00:35:444 (2,4) - ctrl+g ?

00:47:405 (4) - ^

00:52:111 (4,5,6) - 试试

SPOILER

01:27:993 (3) - 叠好

01:28:190 (4,6) - 强迫症blanket

01:49:170 - 拆个note?

Yorita Yoshino

370 posts

Joined April 2014

Yorita Yoshino 2016-07-07T13:37:55+00:00

m4m

[easy]
00:53:680 - 不知道是否rankable，我建议把前面那个滑条拉到这，然后00:53:876 (2) - 这个删掉
01:49:170 (1,1) - 这个rankable？转盘和物件好像是要隔一个大白线的距离

[Pata-Mon's Normal]
很强

[hard]
00:17:348 (3,4,5,6) - 这里这么放的话00:17:456 - 这个音就漏了，改成两个折返？
00:30:739 (5) - 大白线滑条尾，这里读图还有点坑
00:37:013 (4) - 加个finish？还能凸显空拍
00:46:425 (1) - 我觉得这种半包不包的看着有点难受
01:06:229 (1,2,3,4) - 换个梗吧，这里两个二连不合音乐01:06:817 (4,5,6) - 顺便这几个都NC下怎么样(
01:43:288 (2,3) - 这里节奏好像有点问题，01:43:288 (2,3,4,5) - 这样怎么样

[happy zone]
00:05:372 (3,4) - 不如拉个缪斯玩玩(
00:17:348 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个地方感觉过度的有点太突兀了，~~嘛，虽然我也没有什么主意~~
00:45:248 (2,3) - blanket
00:58:386 (4) - 这个音效...迷
01:01:523 (4) - ^
01:28:190 (4,6) - blanket

这歌的节奏怎么这么难做.....辛苦了
GL

my map：https://osu.ppy.sh/b/808775

Osu FLagstar

36 posts

Joined November 2013

Osu FLagstar 2016-07-08T14:18:07+00:00

Hi M4M pls

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/359545

Easy

00:42:307 (3) - This slider is off-beat and doesn't fit the music. Not a good idea in an Easy. You should replace it with something else.

Pata-Mon's Normal

I feel like the sliders often don't follow the line of the cursor movement and are placed like kicksliders. This is usually not a problem in higher diff's, but you should try to avoid that in a Normal Diff.

Hard

00:05:372 (3,4) - This overlap doesn't look very nice.

00:20:739 (4) - ctrl+j this slider.

00:21:327 (1,2) - This is a weird change of direction.

Circles near sliders are weirdly placed and like in the Normal Diff, aren't following the cursor movement. It doesn't break any principles but it just plays oddly.

Happy Zone

00:05:372 (3,4) - Not the most beautiful sliders I've ever seen and they also overlap, which doesn't look nice either.

00:22:699 (1) - Not perfectly symmetrical.

00:26:621 (3) - There are a lot of sliders like this one, where the edge isn't exactly in the middle. I don't know if this is on purpose but symmetrical sliders just
look better.

01:41:131 (1) - See above.

01:38:876 (3) - Replace this with two single notes.

01:41:817 (2) - See above.

01:42:111 (3) - It would fit the music better if this slider started on the red tick afterwards.

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

[Crz]Makii 2016-07-10T00:35:53+00:00

moonlightleaf wrote:
M4M 债

[General]

你自己的难度所有结尾必须一致

[Easy]

00:03:526 (2,3) - blanket 查查,有不少
SPOILER

00:07:910 (2,1) - overlap

感觉最后直接转盘不要那个单点了

[Hard]

00:06:987 (4) - 没对称啊.ctrl+h 就知道我拉不出来对称qwq

00:35:444 (1,2) - 可blanket 我觉得这样还行

00:44:072 (2,3,4) - 试试
SPOILER

00:47:405 (3,4) - ^
SPOILER

00:50:346 (2,3,4) - ^相似节奏

01:07:601 (5,6) - 可以做ant-jump
SPOILER

01:17:405 (5,6) - 试试 changed in my way
SPOILER

[Happy Zone]

00:35:444 (2,4) - ctrl+g ? 跳的太大了

00:47:405 (4) - ^

00:52:111 (4,5,6) - 试试这里我还是想继续采用之前放的那种转圈摆法
SPOILER

01:27:993 (3) - 叠好

01:28:190 (4,6) - 强迫症blanket

01:49:170 - 拆个note?

no reply=fixed

-ClariS- wrote:
m4m
[easy]
00:53:680 - 不知道是否rankable，我建议把前面那个滑条拉到这，然后00:53:876 (2) - 这个删掉这样节奏没有问题，不想改
01:49:170 (1,1) - 这个rankable？转盘和物件好像是要隔一个大白线的距离删了圈
[hard]
00:17:348 (3,4,5,6) - 这里这么放的话00:17:456 - 这个音就漏了，改成两个折返？好
00:30:739 (5) - 大白线滑条尾，这里读图还有点坑啊我改过了
00:37:013 (4) - 加个finish？还能凸显空拍(音效我还没从主难度复制嘿嘿嘿
00:46:425 (1) - 我觉得这种半包不包的看着有点难受这里没包的，尾巴直接对头去
01:06:229 (1,2,3,4) - 换个梗吧，这里两个二连不合音乐01:06:817 (4,5,6) - 顺便这几个都NC下怎么样(2连跟vocal，NCf fixed
01:43:288 (2,3) - 这里节奏好像有点问题，01:43:288 (2,3,4,5) - 这样怎么样changed in my way
[happy zone]
00:05:372 (3,4) - 不如拉个缪斯玩玩(~~不会拉哭哭~~
00:17:348 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个地方感觉过度的有点太突兀了，~~嘛，虽然我也没有什么主意~~ 还好吧
00:45:248 (2,3) - blanket fixed
00:58:386 (4) - 这个音效...迷
01:01:523 (4) - ^ 怎么都说迷...改了
01:28:190 (4,6) - blanket好
这歌的节奏怎么这么难做.....辛苦了 heihei
GL
my map：https://osu.ppy.sh/b/808775

Osu FLagstar wrote:
Hi M4M pls

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/359545

Easy

00:42:307 (3) - This slider is off-beat and doesn't fit the music. Not a good idea in an Easy. You should replace it with something else.I think it's ok,and it actually fit the music :3

Hard

00:05:372 (3,4) - This overlap doesn't look very nice.Just want to draw a W xD

00:20:739 (4) - ctrl+j this slider.fixed

00:21:327 (1,2) - This is a weird change of direction.I think it's ok

Circles near sliders are weirdly placed and like in the Normal Diff, aren't following the cursor movement. It doesn't break any principles but it just plays oddly.

Happy Zone

00:05:372 (3,4) - Not the most beautiful sliders I've ever seen and they also overlap, which doesn't look nice either.overlap fixed

00:22:699 (1) - Not perfectly symmetrical.yep but I think it's ok when played.

00:26:621 (3) - There are a lot of sliders like this one, where the edge isn't exactly in the middle. I don't know if this is on purpose but symmetrical sliders just
look better. I will think more about it.

01:41:131 (1) - See above.

01:38:876 (3) - Replace this with two single notes.with od 7.3 maybe it's a place that players lose their acc,so I put a slider.But I will think about putting 2 notes

01:41:817 (2) - See above.

01:42:111 (3) - It would fit the music better if this slider started on the red tick afterwards.It's ok imo

Thanks all!!

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2016-07-12T01:41:46+00:00

[General]

BG可以試試換標準大小
安靜的地方或者全程都可以加上消音滑條，文件名是soft-sliderslider，別的圖裏面很容易找到
低難度結尾的轉盤也可以種草淡出

[Easy]

沒有音效
01:03:288 (5) - 你全程只疊了這一個，所以去掉的話會統一一點，或者多疊一點

[Pata-Mon's Normal]

NC有點多，尤其前面數字組平均都超不過3 。00:01:680 (1,1) - 00:09:064 (1,1) - 這種對稱的顏色不一樣有點奇怪，還有像00:17:348 (1) - 00:56:621 (1) - 單獨NC 我覺得大可不必
音效還是建議至少兩個，全白線finish 枯燥の極限，或者你可以空掉弱拍或者強拍也比全填上顯得錯落有致

[Hard]

沒有音效
00:05:372 (3) - 扔個NC 好一點因為太久了，Normal 在你一個NC 的長度裏面都扔了四個NC 了，而且SV也比Normal 低 …… 主要是我覺得節奏密度實在應該大一點
DS太蠢了

[Happy Zone]

00:19:758 (1) - 00:24:464 (1) - 重音建議大跳，反向，各種強調方式，很想疊起來可以overmap 扔三連，總之單純的疊起來太過平淡
01:08:680 (2,3,4) - 這三個推遲1/4正常一點……因為習慣是有音的地方按下去……
01:09:954 (1) - 0.5減速有點太過了

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

[Crz]Makii 2016-07-12T03:33:18+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
[General]
BG可以試試換標準大小
安靜的地方或者全程都可以加上消音滑條，文件名是soft-sliderslider，別的圖裏面很容易找到
低難度結尾的轉盤也可以種草淡出
都改了
[Easy]
沒有音效 Done
01:03:288 (5) - 你全程只疊了這一個，所以去掉的話會統一一點，或者多疊一點叠取消了
[Hard]
沒有音效 Done
00:05:372 (3) - 扔個NC 好一點因為太久了，Normal 在你一個NC 的長度裏面都扔了四個NC 了，而且SV也比Normal 低 …… 主要是我覺得節奏密度實在應該大一點 ;w;因为是前奏我就忽略了很多节奏
DS太蠢了 -.-
[Happy Zone]
00:19:758 (1) - 00:24:464 (1) - 重音建議大跳，反向，各種強調方式，很想疊起來可以overmap 扔三連，總之單純的疊起來太過平淡好
01:08:680 (2,3,4) - 這三個推遲1/4正常一點……因為習慣是有音的地方按下去……好
01:09:954 (1) - 0.5減速有點太過了我觉得还可以吧。。应该不会出现断combo的问题

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2016-07-12T04:02:16+00:00

irc modded

SPOILER

2016-07-12 11:36 [Crz]Sword: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1004742 u's - Wonder Zone [Happy Zone]]
2016-07-12 11:39 Crystal: 00:01:680 (1,2) - 
2016-07-12 11:39 Crystal: http://puu.sh/pYFjy/ae424bf434.jpg
2016-07-12 11:40 [Crz]Sword: 我靠 还能这么摆
2016-07-12 11:40 [Crz]Sword: 改了
2016-07-12 11:40 Crystal: 00:06:987 (2) - 有点丑
2016-07-12 11:41 [Crz]Sword: 还好吧 稍微修了下
2016-07-12 11:42 Crystal: 不如摆个缪斯的缪（
2016-07-12 11:42 [Crz]Sword: 不会摆(
2016-07-12 11:42 [Crz]Sword: 诶等会
2016-07-12 11:42 [Crz]Sword: 我去抄一个过来
2016-07-12 11:42 Crystal: 请教一下384大师
2016-07-12 11:44 [Crz]Sword: 搞定了
2016-07-12 11:44 Crystal: 00:14:372 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/pYFx1/634d11545c.jpg
2016-07-12 11:44 Crystal: 叠在一起感觉不好 因为是重音
2016-07-12 11:44 Crystal: 00:21:915 (3,1) - 后面这些是类似的改法
2016-07-12 11:45 [Crz]Sword: 好的
2016-07-12 11:45 Crystal: 00:22:699 (1,2) - 间距好小啊
2016-07-12 11:46 [Crz]Sword: 我拉右边去了
2016-07-12 11:46 Crystal: http://puu.sh/pYFDl/254b6f54d9.jpg 这个样子如何
2016-07-12 11:47 Crystal: 00:30:739 (1,2) - swap nc?
2016-07-12 11:47 Crystal: 00:37:013 (1,2) - ^
2016-07-12 11:47 Crystal: 00:40:150 (1,2) - ^
2016-07-12 11:48 [Crz]Sword: 都改了
2016-07-12 11:48 Crystal: 00:48:582 (4,5,6,7) - 这边节奏是这样的 http://puu.sh/pYFKM/499a920325.jpg
2016-07-12 11:48 Crystal: 你发挥一下
2016-07-12 11:49 Crystal: 00:54:268 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ez pp :^)
2016-07-12 11:49 [Crz]Sword: ez pp for dt xD
2016-07-12 11:50 [Crz]Sword: 前面我换折返了 红线上好像有音
2016-07-12 11:50 Crystal: 01:25:640 (1,2) - 强迫症
2016-07-12 11:50 Crystal: 可
2016-07-12 11:51 Crystal: 01:29:170 (1,2,3,4) - 完全可以不stack啊
2016-07-12 11:51 Crystal: 柑橘怪怪的
2016-07-12 11:51 [Crz]Sword: 嗯....我拉远点
2016-07-12 11:51 Crystal: 01:30:346 (1,2,1,2) - 感觉有点空 可以塞爆1/2slider
2016-07-12 11:53 [Crz]Sword: 这里我觉得vocal比较明显所以跟了vocal
2016-07-12 11:54 Crystal: 01:40:542 (5) - 
2016-07-12 11:54 Crystal: puush突然崩了
2016-07-12 11:54 Crystal: 我发群里了
2016-07-12 11:55 [Crz]Sword: 好
2016-07-12 11:55 Crystal: 其他的还要看么
2016-07-12 11:55 [Crz]Sword: 应该不大用啦 hard全ds的 ez大概也就那样 :3
2016-07-12 11:55 Crystal: 行

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-07-12T13:21:52+00:00

nika mika wrote:
群里送个摸
[Pata-Mon's Normal]
00:43:680 (2) - 这里的音效改成normal的hitsnormal 原曲是finish
01:05:837 - 删掉后面的2，在这里放个1/2拍的滑条？后面重音啊前面在normal里基本属于听不到的声音
音效上有一段（不是kiai）是军鼓地鼓……的样子，但是除了那一段（不是kiai）以外就全是咚咚咚咚不知道是故意为之还是没下完音效原曲基本就这样
没别的问题啦
;w;

Lilyanna wrote:
Pata-Mon's Normal[/b]
00:15:530 (2,3) - you can change something like this to emphasize the next downbeat that is rly clear here 00:16:453 - keep
00:53:484 (3,4) - maybe change to two 1/2 sliders i dont hear anything clickable at 00:54:072 (4) - vocal
00:56:621 (1) - can be end at red tick heavy sound at 00:57:013 -

good luck with ure map (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

moonlightleaf wrote:
[到处怕她猛]

00:56:621 (1) - 没必要NC 前面都两个一组的这里不加强迫症不舒服

Osu FLagstar wrote:
Pata-Mon's Normal

I feel like the sliders often don't follow the line of the cursor movement and are placed like kicksliders. This is usually not a problem in higher diff's, but you should try to avoid that in a Normal Diff. everyone has his style

Narcissu wrote:
[Pata-Mon's Normal]
NC有點多，尤其前面數字組平均都超不過3 。00:01:680 (1,1) - 00:09:064 (1,1) - 這種對稱的顏色不一樣有點奇怪，還有像00:17:348 (1) - 00:56:621 (1) - 單獨NC 我覺得大可不必 ~~强迫症无法抢救~~
音效還是建議至少兩個，全白線finish 枯燥の極限，或者你可以空掉弱拍或者強拍也比全填上顯得錯落有致因为这歌大部分段落就主要是finish……先这样，回头要不然就复制别的难度

thanks for mods
no change

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2016-07-13T09:15:49+00:00

膜拜大佬

[General]

没用的音效把删了:drum-hitclap.wav\\rum-sliderslide.wav\soft-hitclap.wav\soft-sliderslide.wav
你Easy的artist 是u不是μ

[Easy]

00:05:372 (3) - 感觉可以弧度小点包好点
00:09:526 (1,3) - 这种可以弧度大一点点会包好点不过都无妨
01:42:503 (5,1) - 节奏换下

[Normal]

00:17:348 (1) - 意义不大更多人会接受这里没有nc
00:47:601 - 其实有的音你放箭头上我觉得也没啥连clap也放也太蛋疼了吧

[Hard]

00:48:386 (2) - 别用3/4 00:48:582 - 这里音不是挺明显的 1/4那声空了也没啥
00:51:523 (2) - 01:16:033 (1) - 01:28:582 (1) - ^'
01:19:366 (2) - 01:20:935 (1) - 把移开别碰到前面哪个箭头
01:31:915 (2,1) - ..谁叫你的以后别这么摆了
01:35:052 (1,2) - 感觉有点强行跟人声用1/2或者1/1就可
01:41:131 (1) - 也是1/1就行了
01:43:582 (3,4) - 用这个的话前面3/4滑条的地方都可以用这个

唔节奏有点蛋疼感觉大部分都在无脑放1/2 可以考虑放点1/1的滑条然后不要用什么 3/4和5/4

[Happy Zone]
唔好多你放1/4的地方没1/4的音

00:21:229 (5) - 这里就没你却放了但是00:20:052 - 00:20:444 - 都有音你却没放我觉得可以改改节奏
这个问题你可以把从头到尾检查一遍看看尽量都改了我就不一一说了顺便建议你多用1/1的滑条你试试多在长白线放一个1/1滑条我感觉会让节奏舒服点
00:30:346 (5) - ctrl+g好打点
01:11:523 - 你开头放了1/4 这里却无脑放1/2 感觉可以考虑适当放放1/4打起来会舒服点
01:20:542 (3) - 然后就是别用3/4 用1/2或者1/1不是挺好的
01:28:190 (4,6) - 这种可以包好点
01:38:876 (3) - 不要用这种1/2后面跟一个1/4的滑条滑条尾还在重音上要跟1/4的音的话放两个圈就可后面的都是

其他还好

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-07-13T11:59:22+00:00

好

osu file format v14

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[Crz]Makii

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[Crz]Makii 2016-07-14T05:05:18+00:00

ZZHBOY wrote:
膜拜大佬

[General]
没用的音效把删了:drum-hitclap.wav\\rum-sliderslide.wav\soft-hitclap.wav\soft-sliderslide.wav
你Easy的artist 是u不是μ
all fixed
[Easy]
00:05:372 (3) - 感觉可以弧度小点包好点好
00:09:526 (1,3) - 这种可以弧度大一点点会包好点不过都无妨这个还行吧
01:42:503 (5,1) - 节奏换下好
[Hard]
00:48:386 (2) - 别用3/4 00:48:582 - 这里音不是挺明显的 1/4那声空了也没啥fixed
00:51:523 (2) - 01:16:033 (1) - 01:28:582 (1) - ^ 都改了
01:19:366 (2) - 01:20:935 (1) - 把移开别碰到前面哪个箭头
01:31:915 (2,1) - ..谁叫你的以后别这么摆了...好
01:35:052 (1,2) - 感觉有点强行跟人声用1/2或者1/1就可改成1/2了
01:41:131 (1) - 也是1/1就行了 ok
01:43:582 (3,4) - 用这个的话前面3/4滑条的地方都可以用这个放了几组不想太多的扔1/4(
唔节奏有点蛋疼感觉大部分都在无脑放1/2 可以考虑放点1/1的滑条然后不要用什么 3/4和5/41/2感觉其实还挺合hard 我主难度多扔点三连好了

[Happy Zone]
唔好多你放1/4的地方没1/4的音
00:21:229 (5) - 这里就没你却放了但是00:20:052 - 00:20:444 - 都有音你却没放我觉得可以改改节奏
这个问题你可以把从头到尾检查一遍看看尽量都改了我就不一一说了顺便建议你多用1/1的滑条你试试多在长白线放一个1/1滑条我感觉会让节奏舒服点多塞了点1/4 1/1放了几个在kiai
00:30:346 (5) - ctrl+g好打点好
01:11:523 - 你开头放了1/4 这里却无脑放1/2 感觉可以考虑适当放放1/4打起来会舒服点 kiai段有塞1/4 现在我觉得节奏还好吧打起来也比较顺
01:20:542 (3) - 然后就是别用3/4 用1/2或者1/1不是挺好的可
01:28:190 (4,6) - 这种可以包好点好
01:38:876 (3) - 不要用这种1/2后面跟一个1/4的滑条滑条尾还在重音上要跟1/4的音的话放两个圈就可后面的都是全改了
其他还好

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