My english is veeery bad especially when I have to explain some reasons in mods, but I'll try.
- 01:11:546 (5,1,2,3) - It's not bad using unstacked notes in a diff, but I think you are abusing of them sometimes. This jump can be a bit hard to read well. Using jumps like this makes patterns similar to Extra as I've said, we just have the difference that Extra doesn't use 1/3 repeat sliders as much as Insane, so obviously the spread is not the same. I'd personally use something different as you have this in Extra 01:11:233 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - why you could do something like this on Insane.
- 01:17:796 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - This part is pretty annoying on Insane, you didn't start kiai with such spacing and jumps since you changed it suddenly. Stuff like this makes me think I'm playing a harder Insane or another Extra; just check this kiai on Extra. Moreover I feel like 01:18:733 (1) - is breaking the current flow and makes the diff even harder to play.
- 02:06:389 (7) - Again, it feels a bit broken again on Insane. You do the same many times and I can't get what are you trying, jumpy patterns maybe? As I've said, is fine using it, but don't abuse. Just because it makes a triangle pattern - which I kinda like - doesn't mean we need to go to the same direction once again and again. I personally think you can improve stuff like this, if you do something like the pic you still keep a good formation in pattern and there's still a fitting jump.
- 02:08:421 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Anyways, most of this part seems to be those rhythms more or less repeated, but they're pretty much the same as Extra, just with less spacing according to the last diff. However, they might not be a big problem because these ones are not difficult to read, but the problem again is kiai. 02:14:983 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - the spacing is pretty high before starting kiai and if you're using and abusing jumps in the diff it can be annoying and tiring even if it has slow BPM and 1/3 rhythm. 02:23:264 (6) - you don't need to move this note further, you can make this pattern just a bit easier like the pic I show you down. It might cannot have any sense to you or it is a nazi thingy, but I'm sure if you modify little things you can make more balanced and enjoyable mapset.
- 02:43:421 (1,2,3,4) - Starting this part is where more abusing of jumps I can see here. And you are breaking the flow again 02:47:327 (6,7) - could you move it somewhere to the left? I'm sure it would look better. 02:48:421 (3,4,5) - aaand I'm not sure if the distance between them is the same, more like 02:48:733 (4,5,6) - making jumps without any sense of spacing makes me feel like it's not an Insane that can play most players. That's what I meant with star rating - I know it's irrelevant sometimes but I'm sure this mapset is not balanced at all. 02:53:421 (1) - why unstacking again? No need to make spacing bigger - using stacks sometimes is also fine. No need to add jump here 02:55:139 (7) - neither, use this note to stack with 02:55:296 (1) - maybe. 02:58:421 (4,5,6,7) - again abusing of spacing... and being 02:58:889 (7) - so near from 02:58:577 (5) - makes it harder to read, consider rearranging this jump pattern somehow.
- 03:04:671 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 1/3 rhythm doesn't make the map easier. Consider reducing spacing also there - I'm pretty sure it's almost the same playability as Extra.
Anyways, I just tried to explain why it wasn't ready yet, but it's still an opinion of mine, and I accept if you disagree or not, as I'm not BN anymore and I can't decide the future of this beatmap. However I just came with respect, hope you understand I'm not here to hurt anyone or disrespect your map. I've been many months without modding or even being a BN - I may lost some experience during this time...
In other words, if you want a complete and detailed mod from the whole mapset before requalifying, you can ask me too, but I'm sure you don't need me anymore, because the rest of the map is fine at least for me. Good luck ~