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IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2016-06-24T03:12:30+00:00

Those not mentioned below are fixed.
Sonnyc: All fixed!

[Hard]
00:02:617 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 仔细听几遍我建议把这里整个都换成spinner 实在太弱几乎听不到我聽得蠻清楚的，還是100%聽的..

[Easy]
00:11:903 (1) - 弯曲弧度再大一点现在看上去就是直的欸我喜歡這種啊

~~你看我写这么多能换个泡吗~~

Binguo

[Beginner]
01:01:903 (4) - 个人感觉有点丑我是根據人聲才這樣弄的滑條..

[Hard]
00:51:189 (2,3) - 这一小段BPM似乎变了建议找个会玩的看看沒有吧由記老師最愛kiai前放1/6

:o

Karen

[Hard]
00:30:474 (4) - 这滑条都直了，中间的锚点没意义，而且理应跟后面3个滑条一样形状你這樣說就不對了後面三個是跳這個不是而且我眼睛看到的不是直的啊
00:51:903 - 这里节奏怎么听都怪怪的，关键是00:52:260 - 这里不知道为啥要跟，如果是我肯定用这种，感觉更舒服点 o.o 人聲加上背景的結果啦我後面都這樣子lol
00:53:332 (3,4) - 00:54:760 (1,2) - ^， 00:57:617 (1,2,3) - 这里又变成常规节奏了 O_o 都是人聲跟背景的混合下法這個圖BENH我都這樣下 00:52:439 - 這裡是人聲的開始圓圈表達不了她們優美的聲音

[Normal]
00:51:189 (5) - 滑条尾 O.O 1/6

实在不懂怎样mod easy map 我只會做easy map 嗚嗚嗚

听到Saber那句aishiteru的时候我一口老血吐了出来，辣鸡土狼土土土我發現我做的歌我都沒看番

Thanks for mods, wheeeee

Natsu

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Natsu 2016-06-25T06:26:49+00:00

General:

you can save more than 1 mb if you cut the silent part of your hitsounds:
http://puu.sh/pFfLb.rar

Hard

00:30:474 (4) - 00:36:189 (3) - in the normal diff you HL some vocals with NC, but you didn't at your hard diff, is this on purpose?
your map is really easy to play and the difficulty spike at 00:50:117 (1,2,3,4) - is going to cause a lot of combo breaks, I'd use some slider or at least do a more friendly placement.

Normal

00:12:617 (2) - Could you move this a bit up? to avoid it overlapping the accuracy meter if you care about the game elements
Also take a look at what I said about the combos in your hard diff, I find them nice, but why you didn't the same at the hard diff.

Easy

00:36:903 (4,1) - a little spacing error
00:07:617 (3) - this touching the HP bar, I know is rankable, but doesn't look professional or nice, it's like painting a wall and dropping paint in the door and leaving it like that.

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2016-06-25T07:35:20+00:00

i only didn't fix the circles before the kiai in Hard because the difficulty of the kiai actually rises a lot with the soar of the spacing, so i think the difficulty is kinda parallel and balanced. is that alright o.o?

metadata please refer to: http://www.sonymusic.co.jp/artist/kalaf ... hy/SEJL-27

thanks so much!

edit: the offset seems to be quite early, just +7 on it. i'm not sure, the drums sound fluctuating :UUU help

edit2: updated!

Natsu

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Natsu 2016-06-25T08:29:11+00:00

bubbled

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2016-06-25T10:53:21+00:00

01:21:910 (3,4,5,1) - (normal) The consistent spacing for this section is 0.85x. Why did it increased to 0.96x? If it isn't intended, I hope the pattern can be rearranged. If it is intended, consider adding NC at (3) for a better transition.

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2016-06-25T11:10:36+00:00

Nominated.

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2016-06-25T11:19:17+00:00

Thank you both :3

Kalibe

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Kalibe 2016-06-25T11:29:45+00:00

Gratz KwaN!

Xinely

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Xinely 2016-06-25T12:09:34+00:00

Ayy congrats kwan ~

Mafumafu

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Mafumafu 2016-06-25T12:18:22+00:00

when KwaN raaaanks a map

gratz!

Yuii-

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Yuii- 2016-06-25T12:38:48+00:00

I didn't even...
Request a DQ : (

Ayyy congrats

Prophecy

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Prophecy 2016-06-25T12:47:14+00:00

KwaN issued a command : /summon BN

Gratz~

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2016-06-25T13:53:34+00:00

Congrats KwaN~~ :3

Btw Love marginal when? :laugh_cry:

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2016-06-25T13:57:09+00:00

why does everybody mention love marginal f (cry

thank you all!

Yuii-: ah, next time next time :c

Karen

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Karen 2016-06-25T16:15:40+00:00

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:
Btw Love marginal when? :laugh_cry:

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Congratz!

Evil_Twilight

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Evil_Twilight 2016-06-25T20:27:15+00:00

後排支持君兒

Nathan

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Nathan 2016-06-25T23:29:59+00:00

grats~

Natsu