DiamondCrash wrote:

Hi

General;

According to Wiki, the song's title is "Where Is The Love". You might wanna fix that.
Not making an easy, bro? In my opinion, the spacing on Normal is far too wide for it to be the easiest difficulty. I'm sure I could make one if you're stuck.
I'm not sure how the background is in any way related to the song. Not am I sure it's terribly SFW...

Lunah's Normal;

00:20:300 (1,2,3) - Make the 3 of this combo be on the center line...
00:23:010 (1,2,3) - ...and make the 3 of this combo be in the same place.
00:51:132 (1) - This spinner is a little short and a little random; you could map through it for greater effect.
02:15:496 (5) - 1/4 repeating slider in a normal = D: You could change it to a 1/2 repeating slider to the same effect.
02:32:775 (1) - I'd rather there just be a hitcircle here, then a slider from 02:33:114 to 02:33:453.

Jericho's Hard;

OD -1?
01:24:674 (3) - Clap goes on the end of this slider...
01:25:352 (4) - ...and not on the start of this one.
01:47:035 (1) - Clap is out of place on the end of this slider.
02:22:272 (1) - ^

Insane;

00:24:704 (7,1) - Dat antijump
00:30:803 (7,8) - Mid-combo mid-stream jump o.o
01:10:444 (2,3,4) - Flip horizontally? Or the previous slider, it doesn't really matter.
01:31:450 (5,6) - It's probably just me but I found this spacing incredibly hard to read.
01:34:330 (5) - This slowdown seems a little out of place, and, among the sliders of the same length and same pattern, is also pretty hard to read.

ztrot wrote:

this mp3 sounds really fuzzy if you can give me the non nightcore mix I should be able to get you a decent ver also you need to tell me how much the % is used on the tempo and pitch adjustments

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  01:34:410 (5) - if YOU BATs do this, then don't tell people not to make 0.5 sliders like these
  New combos are not consistent: sometimes they're based on voices, sometimes on rhythm...
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:08:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:44:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:28:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ok for symmetry, but try making them well spaced too was too hard?
  00:03:948 (7) - 00:06:658 (7) - 01:34:918 (6) - change of pattern, new combo to make it look better?
  00:31:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:33:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 2007 (?) random placement
  00:50:195 (4) - 00:54:261 (4) - 01:32:208 (7) - 01:34:918 (6) - 01:57:957 (6) - new combo to tell rhythm change
  01:38:815 (1) - i don't see the reason for it to be so up
  01:55:078 (4,5) - CTRL-H and new combo to (4) looks waaaaaaaaay cooler
  .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
  00:30:883 (7,8,1) - 01:31:530 (5,6) - 02:44:713 (5,6) - what the hell?
  02:15:576 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - this stack looks TERRIBLE during play.
  02:20:997 (4,5) - new combo to (5)

Mafiamaster wrote:

01:34:410 (5) - Yes, as card said. This 0.5x shouldn't be here and should be changed.
Cyclone mentioned this as well in a different map. (Bottom of page and next)
A certain MAT agrees as well.