Thanks!6th wrote:
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[Hard]
CS is 3,3 but even Intermediate uses CS 3,7. You should increase AR also, having something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5291079 is a bit too much. Fixed! AR is 7, CS is 3,5
00:14:196 (3,1,2) - CTRL+G rhythm Fixed!
00:14:996 (3,4) - overlapping for nothing Fixed!
00:17:196 - why are you suddenly ignoring this ? Fixed!
00:22:896 - ^ Fixed!
00:24:196 (1) - make it longer Fixed!
00:25:796 (1,2,3,4) - what are you mapping here ? this 00:26:096 - or this 00:26:296 - should have been mapped, it's not clear enough actually. Fixed!
00:33:796 (1) - it becomes more intense and you make it easier... Fixed!
00:39:796 (1,2) - they could be better connected. Also I noticed that rhythm is really inconsistent, just take a look at 01:14:996 (3,4,5,6,7) - for instance. 01:15:196 - and 01:15:896 - are not following the same sound. Fixed!
00:51:996 (2) - here it follows nothing lol ): here it follows nothing Fixed!
01:03:396 (3,4) - those shapes feel like a slowdown if you play them, some movement would be nice. Fixed!
01:13:596 - bad overlap imo Fixed!
01:16:996 - Make it clickable please Fixed!
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