Down wrote:

M4M각입니다.

[General Setting]
何もありません。

[Normal]
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[Hard]
■ 01:39:471 (3,2) - 너무 붙어보여서 시각적으로 불안정해 보입니다. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5266794 이런식으로 (3)번슬라를 굽혀주시던가 거리를 벌려주세요. // 넵 하지만 저런 식으로 굽히진 않았습니다
■ 02:13:871 (1) - 블랭킷이라면 상당히 나간듯한..? // 블랭킷 어렵습니다아..
■ 03:13:071 (1,2) - 보컬을 따라가서 괜찮긴 한데 앞부분에는 계속 1/2박자를 나눠서 사용하시다가 1/1슬라가 나오니 약간 어색하다고 느꼈어요. 누르고 있는 느낌을 주면서 박자를 표현하기 위해 1/2리버스슬라들로 대체해도 괜찮다고 생각합니다. // 엇 일단 이거는 넘어갈게요. 나중에 고쳐볼게요. 그렇다해도 1을 1/2 리버스 슬라로 만들 것 같진 않아요ㅠㅠㅠ
■ 03:19:871 - 이부분에 클리커블이 있었으면 좋겠습니다. 음이 굉장히 강하거든요.. // 이건 맨 밑에서 설명해드릴게요....

[Lunatic]
■ 00:50:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 취향저격당함; // 헉...
■ 02:49:071 (1,2,3,4) - 너무 직선플로우 같아서 치기 어려울 것 같은데 데케님 맵에서 많이 보이는 패턴이라 흠.. // 앗 이건 일부러 치기 어려우라고 직선쓴게 맞고.. 노래랑도 그다지 안 맞는 것 같지도 않아서.. 더 지적 들어온다면 고칠게요ㅠㅠ
■ 02:56:271 (1) - 노래 느낌상 다른부분들과 다른 이부분에 들어갈 슬라이더는 S자형 보다는 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5266928 번개(?)모양 슬라이더가 들어가는 것은 어떻게 생각하시나요? 맵 전체적으로 S자형을 쓰셨는데 분위기 전환용도로 괜찮아 보입니다. // 헐 굿
■ 03:13:071 (1,2) - 하드에서 언급드린 부분입니다. 만약 하드에서도 안고치셨다면 이부분도 두는게 낫겠군요. // 이것도 역시.. (2)만 고치는걸 고려하겠습니다
■ 03:19:871 - 이부분도 클리커블.. 하드는 몰라도 루나틱인 만큼 3/4슬라와 서클하나로 표현할 수 있지 않을까요?
■ 03:44:271 (5,6) - 거리가 엄청 멀다고 생각해요. 이정도 거리는 마지막 끝내는부분(03:50:671 (5,6) - )같은곳에 넣어주는게 더 어울린다고 생각합니다.

[Poi]
■ 00:21:471 - , 00:34:271 - ~etc.. 혹시 이곳 힛사들은 왜 제거하셨는지 알 수 있을까요? 제가 저번에 텟플할때는 이부분 누르는 느낌이 거의 안나서 어색했습니다. 뭔가 눌렀는데 틀린기분? 같은게 들더군요. // 음.. 이건 앞에서 3/4리버스슬라를 써서.. 근데 없애봐도 어색해서 일단은 냅둘게요 ㅠㅠ
■ 01:19:471 (1) - 매애애우 개인적인 관점이라 무시하셔도 좋습니다. 이부분에서 끝나는 줄 알고 손을 놨습니다. 근데 아니더군요 ㅠ 인센보다 ar이 빨라서 그 다음노트는 보이지도 않고 노래는 잔잔해져서 브레이크 타임이라고 인식하기 좋았습니다. // 앗 이건 어떻게 할 수가.. 슬라이더를 쓰기엔 그다지 적합하진 않아보이는 부분이어서..

윗부분은 그냥 무시하셔도 되는 잡소리들이고 모딩 하겠습니다.

■ 02:51:471 (4,5) - 이 슬라이더초밥도 02:53:071 (4,5) - 이런식으로 하시는게 어떨까요? 02:55:471 (1,2) - 이부분도 그런식이니까요.
■ 02:56:271 (1) - 루나틱에서 언급드린 부분입니다. 만약 루나틱에서도 안고치셨다면 이부분도 두는게 낫겠군요. // 아 저도 직선이 좋아보이는데 이건 1/4 슬라들때문에 어쩔 수가없네요ㅠㅠㅠ
■ 03:19:871 - ㅇㅇ..
■ 항상 점프들이 상당히 맘에드는 흐름입니다 // 감사합니다 xD

과제한 후에 한 모딩이라 그런지 매우 잡소리가 많은듯 하네요. 죄송 ㅠ
굿럭입니닷

FCL wrote:

hi iam flc

• [general]

1. are you really need a osb? I think not // I think so lol
2. anime picture in your mp3 must be deleted cuz ranking criterias said so // it is just .. album cover.. hm, i'm gonna make sure of it until next modding
3. idk about your bf, this size is acceptable but a any another anime picture with 1366x768 size would be better // oops it's still good for me xd

• [osu (insane)]

1. maybe increase hp by 0.5 at least? 6 hp seems small for the hardest diff, also same has the lunatic diff // made it seven xd
2. 00:23:671 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - these patterns sounds pretty quiet since volume of the song was increasing. I would add normal sampleset for their or increase volume to 90% // increased them to 85%, but i just added normal-hitnormal only at each downbeats
3. 01:05:071 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - as you could heard these patterns was accompanied by extra instrumentals, so adding something like claps normal samplesets would be great. also same for similar // uh um, but it's just fine for me TwT
4. 01:07:271 (2) - just feel that whistle on head sounds better than on tail cuz vocal. same for similar
5. 03:03:071 (4) - normal sampleset sounds better imo
6. 03:04:671 (3) - soft-whistle would be cool too
7. 03:11:071 (3) - ^
8. 03:14:271 (3) - ^ same idk, these beats have pretty loud vocal so why not // cuz im noob at hitsoundings :p
9. 03:19:471 (1) - soft-whistle on head
10. 03:44:671 (1) - adding of normal sampleset on tail sounds.... epic idk, really feel it good
11. really can't say something about patterns, they looks great for my eyes. Only some issues about hitsounds, but only in my opinion // lol thanks!

• [need (lunatic)]

1. 00:49:471 (3) - feels bad because red tick is at strong vocal, so doing him clickable would be have more sense // hmm right. but current rhythm is not bad imo and if i fix them, i might change whole patterns lol. So i didn't fix them sorry ;w;
2. 00:49:871 (4) - should be nc I guess
3. 01:14:971 - maybe map him? Sounds like clickable // oh no that's not a good choice imo xD

• [more]

1. 02:10:471 (5,6,1) - since you didn't use so much distance as here, I would recommend reduce similar patterns, imo they looks kinda hard for 2.8
2. 03:09:871 (1) - 1.7 distance also doesn't look good for me, At least 1.5 would more acceptable for 2.8

• [dailycare]

1. okay, nothing to say // ^^b

you must ask satellite for bubble, this mapset is ready

1. Iceon kamase-tora かませ虎Yuuhei Satellite 幽閉サテライト Touhou flandre scarlet フランドール・スカーレット 魔法少女達の百年祭 The Centennial Festival for Magical Girls 東方紅魔郷 Embodiment of Scarlet Devil extra stage theme 上海アリス幻樂団 ZUN 例大祭 Reitaisai

1. AR-1 or -0.5 AR5 is too early in mapset without Easy diff.
2. 00:30:671 (2,3) - The right side is tight. so Move left placement pattern ?
3. 01:17:871 (4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. It is hard to watch the flow to reverse a little. so If you can changed pattern. I think changed another pattern more better.
4. 02:41:071 (1) - It is slightly difficult in the Normal diff without Easy. so remove 1/2 slider changed to circle better.
   
5. 02:49:871 (2,3) - Consecutive 1/2slider is dangerous. so changed this rhythm ?
   
6. 03:48:271 (1) - same as 02:41:071 (1) -

1. 00:41:871 (3,4,5) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. move 00:41:871 (3) - stack 00:42:271 (5) - ?
2. 00:48:271 (3) - same as above.
3. 00:52:071 (5,6,1) - more better Nc pattern w
   
4. 02:00:271 (3) - same as 00:48:271 (3) -
5. 02:06:671 (3) - w-why not circle + circle pattern ???
6. 02:10:471 (5,6,1) - same as 00:52:071 (5,6,1) -
7. 03:05:871 (3) - same as 00:48:271 (3) -
8. 03:12:271 (3) - same as above.
9. 03:16:071 (5,6,1) - same as 00:52:071 (5,6,1) -

1. 01:25:871 (4) - forgot add nc ?
2. 02:48:871 (4,5,1) - nc pattern same as hard diff.

1. 00:52:671 - remove BreakTime
   
2. 01:25:871 (3) - add nc w
3. 02:11:071 - same as above.
4. 03:44:671 (1) - missing nc ? remove nc better. you r pattern 02:37:471 (3) - 01:19:071 (3) -

Satellite wrote:

[Normal]

1. AR-1 or -0.5 AR5 is too early in mapset without Easy diff. // 4.5 w
2. 00:30:671 (2,3) - The right side is tight. so Move left placement pattern ?
3. 01:17:871 (4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. It is hard to watch the flow to reverse a little. so If you can changed pattern. I think changed another pattern more better. // make it curved leftside
4. 02:41:071 (1) - It is slightly difficult in the Normal diff without Easy. so remove 1/2 slider changed to circle better.
   
5. 02:49:871 (2,3) - Consecutive 1/2slider is dangerous. so changed this rhythm ?
   
6. 03:48:271 (1) - same as 02:41:071 (1) -

[Hard]

1. 00:41:871 (3,4,5) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. move 00:41:871 (3) - stack 00:42:271 (5) - ? // fixed it, but didn't use stack ww
2. 00:48:271 (3) - same as above.
3. 00:52:071 (5,6,1) - more better Nc pattern w
   
4. 02:00:271 (3) - same as 00:48:271 (3) -
5. 02:06:671 (3) - w-why not circle + circle pattern ??? // （/ω＼）
6. 02:10:471 (5,6,1) - same as 00:52:071 (5,6,1) -
7. 03:05:871 (3) - same as 00:48:271 (3) -
8. 03:12:271 (3) - same as above.
9. 03:16:071 (5,6,1) - same as 00:52:071 (5,6,1) -

[Lunatic]

1. 01:25:871 (4) - forgot add nc ? // putting NC is not a good choice imo TwT
2. 02:48:871 (4,5,1) - nc pattern same as hard diff.

[poi]

1. 00:52:671 - remove BreakTime
   
2. 01:25:871 (3) - add nc w // nope w
3. 02:11:071 - same as above.
4. 03:44:671 (1) - missing nc ? remove nc better. you r pattern 02:37:471 (3) - 01:19:071 (3) -

looks good mapset. call me back. if you are Readycare ~

Dailycare wrote:

i wanna keep my decision because this song is not a short ver.. touhou > sdvx imo..

SDVX SOUND VOLTEX KONAMI BENAMI ULTIMATE TRACKS -東方紅魔郷REMIX- 

SDVX SOUND VOLTEX II -infinite infection- ULTIMATE TRACKS -東方紅魔郷REMIX-