Yoratama wrote:
a BN response
then never replyingPoor New Mapper Like Me
you say before 'bout your mapping... STYLE, wut?!
>Oni
* you need fill 00:02:639 - 00:05:165 - these because guitar strong at here than 00:05:481 - you follow this, its fairly and better for create neat structure ( xx xxxx xx )
* ^ 00:08:007 - move at 00:07:691 - here
* 00:08:639 (34,35,36) - mirror to kkd, and 00:03:902 - add don to make consistency structure. 00:06:428 - also this just flow not a beat sound. so keep it as blank
* 00:10:218 - add don to consistency the xxxx pattern
* 00:10:534 (43,45) - I think this really not needed as pattern, better to delete it since these sound just a guitar. you just need follow the cymbal for easir play and this seems too over Imo
* 00:13:376 - change to ddd? the vocal is smooth, just over to make it kkd
* 00:14:007 - kat, to avoid monotone on this pattern also 00:13:849 (57,58) - same vocal
* 00:15:665 (66,70) - delete? you just need fill at 00:15:902 - here kkd to follow the strong flow and avoid spam 3plet
* 00:16:612 - I suggest to delete this, just over with vocal. the lyric is 2 words and 00:16:534 - change this to don for 00:16:691 (73) - same vocal
* 00:17:323 - change kat? to follow the 00:17:007 - similar vocal
* 00:18:586 - don? will better on contrast with 00:18:902 - this vocal
* 00:23:481 - like previous point and 00:24:270 - change this kat to follow 00:24:586 - similar sound both vocal or bass
* 00:25:691 - at here you might change this kat for variation, you had ddkd at before so here is better to make dkkd and also it fits with Instument or vocal Imo
* 00:26:876 - kat? this sound strong than 00:27:507 - this
* 00:28:376 - K? same above on reason
* 00:30:665 - move to 00:30:507 - here? I think is better emphasize. 00:30:428 - flow as 3plet and 00:30:744 - single beat as don
* wait, 00:30:191 - move to 00:29:876 - here, same above on reason. this and above suggestion will consistent like 00:32:323 (167,168,169,170) - this pattern
* 00:34:928 - , 00:35:560 - see above
* 00:44:323 - make ddd? the flow looks fits imo
* 00:46:376 - delete or add? 00:43:849 - because here is blank. I prefer to delete it to more focusing on drum
* 00:46:849 - same reason at 00:44:323 -here
* 00:48:112 - 00:49:376 - add don both of here? 00:48:270 (263,269) - had strong flow so not very boring
* 00:50:323 - change to don, not following main sound just a drum
* 00:53:481 - move to 00:53:165 - here and change kat, 00:55:218 (299,300,301,302,303) - see this
* 00:58:218 - kat, 00:58:060 - same vocal
* 00:59:481 - don ^ dem :C ( why you swap the emphasize, seems weird.. eww )
* 01:00:112 - add kat to follow instrument on 00:59:955 - this snare
* 01:01:376 - fade drum, just like flow. 01:01:455 - move to here to make reflex on vocal 01:01:691 (330,331) - and change this don, not snare right?
* 01:01:928 - delete, 01:02:007 - ddk :V
* 01:03:586 - ^, 01:02:323 - blank right?
* 01:03:191 - ^, its too over. 01:04:534 - and this empty also fine, you 01:04:849 - follow the vocal. good varies structure
* 01:06:665 - ^ I dont hear drum just guitar.. but it heard weird or too over Imo
* 01:11:639 - don, this tom drum (?). lol kdd rip Imo ( and check muzu, its close pattern, make kddk 1/2 on muzu. not k ddd k cuz this clooseee )
* 01:12:270 - from here, refer to previous suggestion from 00:11:639 - here
* 01:35:323 - from here has additionally the guitar bass, I suggest you to make it different from 01:30:270 - here. so the overall not monotoonnee
* 02:01:139 - move to 02:00:981 - here, hear that bass. 02:01:139 - and this nothing ( also I hit on this section, I get shitmiss.. )
* 02:03:507 - move here ^
* 02:06:034 - ^
* 02:06:981 (704,705) - delete, on before in similar sound its empty. 02:04:455 - and you might delete this to make neat increasing notes
* 02:10:376 - refer on previously suggestion
* 02:25:534 - NOICE
* 02:28:060 - I recommend from here you should make it similar like previous part, is not boring because the part is like this. but 02:32:797 - from here you can make differently because the lyrics
* 02:36:902 - too over? d k kkd
* 02:38:165 - rip increasing, to much 3plet plet plet... and looonng 1/2. 02:39:665 - delete, 02:41:165 - delete to 02:41:323 (910,911,912) - give these a emphasize more
* 02:47:639 - I think at here, you can fill kk 1/1, since the instrument and vocal is coincide
* 02:48:270 - are you sure this part to be rage increasing like this? rip... please consistent it like previous part
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edit:
jadi intinya kamu butuh mod, butuh improvisasi map kamu, butuh Opini yg lebih dan lain. bukan bersikap lantang ke BN kek gitu
coba kamu jadi BN, trus tiba2 di PM gitu tanpa alasan ( alasan juga umur map, SP yang gede ). masih mending kalau bilang buat jelasin kondisi mapset di diff diff kamu kek struktur, penyebaran, atau ngeliat statment dan kondisi dia.. huft
ojo kesusu-susuw
seng penting "alon alon tor kelakon"
edit:
jadi intinya kamu butuh mod, butuh improvisasi map kamu, butuh Opini yg lebih dan lain. bukan bersikap lantang ke BN kek gitu
coba kamu jadi BN, trus tiba2 di PM gitu tanpa alasan ( alasan juga umur map, SP yang gede ). masih mending kalau bilang buat jelasin kondisi mapset di diff diff kamu kek struktur, penyebaran, atau ngeliat statment dan kondisi dia.. huft
Consindering the spread betwen muzu and oni, I saw before still had close on 1/2 patterns. ex: xxxxx on oni but still same on Muzu
low diff seems good. ,