Thanks!-Tochi wrote:
M4M :3
General
- Unused hitsounds: soft-sliderslide.wav deleted
- Red line and green line's volume should be the same: 00:01:374 - (it's an unrankable issues) fixed
4:18 AM
- 00:03:088 (3,4,5) - Maybe blanket like: http://puu.sh/myTqT/d8ed31849f.png And then eventually stack this 00:04:116 (1) - under 00:03:431 (5) - I prefer current pattern
- 00:22:288 (1,2) - Deleting these two notes makes the stream start at the red tick which fits with the strong finish here 00:22:459 (3) Now add a kick slider here 00:22:288 - to make it sound the same as before, but it's better if this part 00:22:459 - is the start because of the strong finish sound. Try something like: http://puu.sh/myTI4/14ddd0b0a0.png I like your point but right now it plays and feels fine too so I think I'll keep it
- 00:44:316 - Add circle? There's a loud sound here. very good point. Added.
- 01:16:631 (2,1,1,2,3) - Same as last same part. 00:22:288 (1,2) -
- 01:27:945 (1,1,2,3,4) - Same as above. Imo it would be best to make the strong finish the start the of the longer stream.
- 02:07:031 (3) - Shortening this slider to 02:07:202 - would be better imo, and move the kickslider more down: http://puu.sh/myU6N/07d094291d.png Just like here 02:09:259 (3,4,5) - I wanted to focus the vocal extension
- 02:33:602 (1) - Rotate the end a bit more to the lower right like: http://puu.sh/myUb3/302d03ed8c.png So it doesn't make the stream look bad. done
- 02:59:574 (4,1) - This surprised me xD Hmmm, just keep it lol.
- 03:42:002 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Same as the other parts like this.
- 03:53:231 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - Those two 1/2 slider that involves in this stream should be mapped earlier to fit with the vocal. Try something like: http://puu.sh/myUpr/b724a0d454.png focus of the music isn't on vocals here so I'll keep it
- 04:03:945 (4,1,1,2,3,4,1) - You know what I'm going to say here :>
- 04:15:431 (1) - Are you sure that you're not gonna map this sound here? 04:15:602 Would be cool maybe more fitting if you did, then you could add a circle here 04:15:688 - like: http://puu.sh/myUwn/c3f0dfe6e5.png makes it unnecessarily complex when there's a big downbeat going on which I want to focus on
- 04:23:659 (4) - Idk why, but in my eyes it feels confusing and not emphasizing to have the circle being in the middle of those 04:23:316 (3,5) - So maybe move it close too 04:23:316 (3) - to make it emphasize? Try to stack 04:23:659 (4) - under 04:22:631 (4) - 's head. moved a bit closer
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Nice map and song
Good luck with this!
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