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Eagle - Icarus (Extended)

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Asahina Momoko
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Joined November 2013
Asahina Momoko
IRC log
2016-01-10 22:00 Faust: sup. Do you mind giving a testplay ?
2016-01-10 22:02 Asahina Momoko: oo ok 
2016-01-10 22:02 Faust: Thanks.
2016-01-10 22:02 Faust: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/870638 Eagle - Icarus (Extended)]
2016-01-10 22:02 Faust: Any feedback is welcome.
2016-01-10 22:03 Asahina Momoko: oh before it give me about 5mins
2016-01-10 22:03 Asahina Momoko: calling
2016-01-10 22:03 Faust: np
2016-01-10 22:06 Asahina Momoko: im back :3
2016-01-10 22:07 Faust: ACTION is watching [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/870638 Eagle - Icarus (Extended) [FOXTROT SIERRA]]
2016-01-10 22:07 Asahina Momoko: o
2016-01-10 22:07 Faust: ah lol. this guy got to me first.
2016-01-10 22:07 Asahina Momoko: sure lol
2016-01-10 22:07 Faust: I'll spec after him
2016-01-10 22:11 Faust: ok! ready
2016-01-10 22:11 Asahina Momoko: sure~
2016-01-10 22:17 Asahina Momoko: wow
2016-01-10 22:17 Asahina Momoko: so cool
2016-01-10 22:17 Faust: lol HD
2016-01-10 22:17 Asahina Momoko: usually i play with hd but for this map maybe none is better to play for me lol
2016-01-10 22:18 Faust: yeah
2016-01-10 22:24 Faust: :D
2016-01-10 22:24 Asahina Momoko: sorry im noob ;;
2016-01-10 22:24 Faust: no that was good
2016-01-10 22:25 Asahina Momoko: but map was yea really good and fun to play
2016-01-10 22:25 Asahina Momoko: 02:04:042 (5,1) - 
2016-01-10 22:25 Asahina Momoko: this is hell lol
2016-01-10 22:28 Faust: hmm
2016-01-10 22:29 Asahina Momoko: o no
2016-01-10 22:29 Asahina Momoko: wrong 
2016-01-10 22:29 Asahina Momoko: paste
2016-01-10 22:29 Asahina Momoko: 02:08:388 (1,2,3) - 
2016-01-10 22:29 Faust: lmao
2016-01-10 22:30 Faust: changing.
2016-01-10 22:30 Faust: move to opposite side
2016-01-10 22:30 Asahina Momoko: o sure
2016-01-10 22:32 Asahina Momoko: 02:56:872 (2,3) - 
2016-01-10 22:33 Asahina Momoko: may be the factor of misreading as 1/4 i guess
2016-01-10 22:34 Asahina Momoko: 02:57:324 (4,5) - and another interval with almost same distance
2016-01-10 22:35 Asahina Momoko: maybe
2016-01-10 22:35 Asahina Momoko: 02:56:872 (2) - stack on 02:56:511 (1) - s tail and
2016-01-10 22:35 Asahina Momoko: 02:57:324 (4,5) - completely stack should works well
2016-01-10 22:37 Faust: changed
2016-01-10 22:40 Asahina Momoko: 03:56:305 (4,5,6) - also these might be read as double ⇒ 1/4interval ⇒ slider
2016-01-10 22:41 Asahina Momoko: hmm change double to kick slider or put near 6 would be better
2016-01-10 22:42 Asahina Momoko: i meant cause misreading as like 04:21:617 (2,3,4) - 
2016-01-10 22:43 Faust: the double idea is pretty good
2016-01-10 22:43 Faust: will do it if another player says the same thing
2016-01-10 22:43 Asahina Momoko: sure
2016-01-10 22:43 Asahina Momoko: last thing, 04:28:180 (1,3) - 
2016-01-10 22:44 Faust: cause I am leaving the doubles like that since I put them in very early in the map
2016-01-10 22:44 Faust: so the player is used to spaced doubles
2016-01-10 22:44 Faust: oh overlaps
2016-01-10 22:44 Asahina Momoko: yea maybe
2016-01-10 22:44 Asahina Momoko: move abit xd
2016-01-10 22:45 Asahina Momoko: that's all from me :D
2016-01-10 22:45 Asahina Momoko: really cool map
2016-01-10 22:47 Faust: done
2016-01-10 22:47 Faust: post this log !
2016-01-10 22:47 Asahina Momoko: sure justa moment :3

great. good luck on this :3/
Faust
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Faust
A big thank you to all who have contributed their testplays/time for this. Gladly appreciated.
-GN
Champion Above Champions
734 posts
Joined June 2011
-GN
JUST

log
14:51 Faust: hm anyway
14:51 *Faust is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/870638 Eagle - Icarus (Extended)]
14:52 -GN: how many 251bpm streams does it have
14:52 Faust: not a lot
14:52 Faust: compressed to sliders
14:52 -GN: ahh
14:52 -GN: yeah i was outside in the cold some time ago so i can't stream very well
14:52 Faust: dunno why I deleted the lexus map but I did..
14:52 Faust: lol
14:52 -GN: i'll play it now
14:52 *-GN is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/870638 Eagle - Icarus (Extended) [FOXTROT SIERRA]]
14:58 Faust: lmao
14:58 Faust: that miss.
14:58 -GN: lol still s ranked
14:58 Faust: pro
14:59 -GN: hmm
15:00 -GN: 03:11:032 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - not sure what to say about it but i think it speeds up kinda abruptly when you use circles for these
15:00 -GN: it was unexpected
15:00 -GN: 03:13:612 (1,2) - also this is very mean
15:01 Faust: hyahaha
15:01 Faust: will change
15:01 -GN: otherwise i think the sliderend jump gimmick was pretty well done
15:01 Faust: spacing, I assume ?
15:01 -GN: yeah
15:01 -GN: i broke there
15:02 -GN: also it might just be personal taste but i don't like it when people replace hitnormals in their hitsounding
15:02 -GN: it removes the player's customized hit circle feedback
15:02 -GN: i'd advise against that but obviously it's up to you
15:02 -GN: didn't have any other complaints
15:02 -GN: nice map
15:03 Faust: I see.
15:03 Faust: this is the first time I've done that
15:04 Faust: yeah this 1/6 kickslider part is tricky
15:07 Faust: thanks ! post this log for kd.
15:07 Faust: or if you don't want kd. post it anyway :D
15:07 -GN: fair enough \:D/
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
random irc mod
irc log
2016-01-10 22:26 Faust: any and all suggestions will be considered
2016-01-10 22:26 Hollow Wings: well done <3
2016-01-10 22:26 Faust: :DD
2016-01-10 22:27 Hollow Wings: 00:30:902 (11) - 
2016-01-10 22:27 Hollow Wings: missed hs?
2016-01-10 22:27 Faust: wow
2016-01-10 22:27 Faust: nice find.
2016-01-10 22:27 Faust: lol
2016-01-10 22:27 Hollow Wings: w
2016-01-10 22:28 Hollow Wings: 01:16:229 (1,2) - this jump can be larger imo
2016-01-10 22:29 Faust: changed
2016-01-10 22:30 Hollow Wings: 02:34:633
2016-01-10 22:30 Hollow Wings: this tick requires a note, maybe merge 02:34:514 (4) - into a slider?
2016-01-10 22:31 Faust: yes will do that
2016-01-10 22:31 Faust: hmm
2016-01-10 22:32 Hollow Wings: 03:25:525 lol, these red lines are covered by a spinner <3
2016-01-10 22:33 Faust: done
2016-01-10 22:33 Faust: is that unrankable..
2016-01-10 22:33 Faust: lmao
2016-01-10 22:33 Faust: if yes I'll just nuke them
2016-01-10 22:33 Faust: :D
2016-01-10 22:33 Hollow Wings: nope it's not unrankble
2016-01-10 22:33 Faust: thank god
2016-01-10 22:33 Hollow Wings: i just think it's a pity to not use those red lines ;w;
2016-01-10 22:34 Faust: lmao
2016-01-10 22:34 Faust: I'd love to
2016-01-10 22:34 Faust: but I don't think I can handle that entire section appropriately
2016-01-10 22:34 Faust: probably make the map worse
2016-01-10 22:34 Hollow Wings: 03:56:305 (4,5,6) - magic pattern lol, haven't noticed this haha
2016-01-10 22:35 Hollow Wings: well it's ok to keep those red lines and spinner
2016-01-10 22:35 Faust: since the streaming would be changing BPM every ..3-5 notes ?
2016-01-10 22:35 Faust: lol
2016-01-10 22:35 Hollow Wings: those words are just comments lol
2016-01-10 22:35 Faust: 3:56 is fine ?
2016-01-10 22:36 Hollow Wings: yeah ofc fine
2016-01-10 22:37 Hollow Wings: 05:03:634 (7) - nc
2016-01-10 22:38 Faust: ooh
2016-01-10 22:38 Faust: done
2016-01-10 22:38 Faust: pretty sharp of you.
2016-01-10 22:38 Hollow Wings: 04:58:691 (1) - and why nc here? w
2016-01-10 22:38 Hollow Wings: sharp? www
2016-01-10 22:39 Faust: because of the overlap
2016-01-10 22:39 Faust: though it's slight
2016-01-10 22:39 Hollow Wings: ok, it's fine
2016-01-10 22:39 Hollow Wings: but i think
2016-01-10 22:39 Hollow Wings: 04:58:691 (1,2) - maybe swap those nc setting is better
2016-01-10 22:39 Hollow Wings: set nc at the slider
2016-01-10 22:41 Faust: done
2016-01-10 22:41 Hollow Wings: ok!
2016-01-10 22:41 Hollow Wings: that's all i think <3
2016-01-10 22:41 Hollow Wings: i think this map is really well made
2016-01-10 22:41 Faust: great irc mod
Side
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Joined October 2013
Side
Hi here's a thing :v

SPOILER
x_x Here's a hitsound mod (as in I probably won't mod the actual map unless it's something that REALLY stands out)

[Lima Oscar Lima]

00:03:288 (6) - Clap on tail

00:04:993 (4) - clap

00:06:356 (7) - ^

00:07:720 (5) - ^

00:09:084 (8) - ^

00:10:447 (4) - ^ on head

00:11:811 (8) - ^ on head

00:13:174 (4) - ^ on head

00:13:856 (6) - Missing WHISTLE on head

00:14:197 (7) - Clap on tail

00:15:902 (1) - ^ on head. Also remove NC so it keeps that 8/1 pattern.

00:16:924 (5) - ^ on tail

00:17:947 (10) - Add NC here instead.

00:18:629 (9) - Clap on head

00:19:311 (1) - Missing WHISTLE on head. Also remove NC.

00:19:652 (2) - Clap on tail

00:21:186 (3) - Whistle. Also you could probably add a NC here so it goes with that low beat. If you do however, remove NC from 00:21:868 (1) - and add it at 00:21:697 - And maybe at 00:22:890 (6) - But yeh thats it for NC suggestions since idk if you were going for something already.

00:22:038 (3) - Clap

00:22:890 (6,7,8,9) - Could probably do like a cool thing with drum sample and whistle finish clap like 00:22:890 (6,7) - are clap, 00:23:061 (8) - Is finish on slider head/end and uh...I guess 00:23:231 (9) - is just drum sample with no additions. So it kinda has that tom-like drum effect like in the musics. Or you could always throw in some custom hitsounds if you want :v

00:32:947 (5) - Missing whistle on head

00:43:004 (2) - Consider moving this up a bit maybe to around x:267 y:261 so the 1/4 gap is within player vision of the first slider and so there's a bit more significant jump from 2 to 3 since it keeps that rhythm.

00:45:220 (10) - NC :v

01:12:991 (4) - Could probably shorten this to a 1/2 slider and add a note at 01:13:246 - so it has a triplet effect but more importantly gets that whistle sound at 01:13:161 - with the slider end.

01:15:718 (5) - Same as above.

01:20:917 (3) - Could shorten this to a 1/4 slider to also get dat whistle sound at 01:21:002 -

01:22:280 (2) - Same as above. Also stack over 01:21:172 (4) - slider head :v

01:26:201 (2,3,4) - Add whistle to all of these and 01:27:138 (7,8,9,10) - as well

01:27:991 (1) - Whistle at the head and end 01:27:479 (1) - To go with dat one two three four five six DO IT!!!!!! Or similar to 00:22:890 (6,7,8,9,1) - You could use drum additions or cool customs that follow that sound.

01:29:525 (3) - So these hitsounds are kind of optional but at the same time I highly recommend them since they follow what the drums are doing. Anyway 01:29:525 (3) - Add clap on tail.

01:30:206 (1) - Whistle on head

01:30:547 (2) - ^ on tail

01:31:059 (4,5) - Add clap on 4 and remove from 5.

01:31:229 (6) - Add whistle on head.

01:32:593 (6) - Clap

01:33:189 (2,2) - A bit optional but these two COULD have clap on slider heads per the music.

01:35:320 (5) - Clap

01:35:661 (1) - Whistle on head

01:37:792 (4) - ^ on head

01:38:047 (5) - Clap

01:38:218 (6,1) - Whistle on both

01:38:644 (2) - ^

01:38:900 (4,5) - On both

01:39:752 (1) - Whistle. Finish also (that one is optional)

01:41:371 (2) - Clap on head

01:44:098 (4) - 01:44:098 (4) - ^ (optional I suppose)

01:51:343 (4) - Whistle on tail sounds cool.

01:53:047 (3) - Clap on tail

01:53:388 (1) - Whistle and remove whistle from 01:53:559 (2) - and 01:53:900 (5) - :(

01:54:155 (6) - Could add whistle on the head here probably works even though normally it'd go on the red tick right after :v

01:55:008 (4,6) - Clap on both heads

01:56:116 (1) - Whistle on head

01:56:883 (4) - Remove whistle from tail. Could probably add whistle to the head though.

02:03:871 (4) - This sound should actually be at 02:03:956 - per the music. A cool fix could be to move (4) to that position and change it to a 1/4 slider then remove the repeats from 02:04:042 (5) - and ctrl+g it so it looks like this following the rhythm of the drums and stuff and also adding fun 1/4 slider jumps :v

02:10:775 (1) - Could be cute and blanket 02:10:263 (6) - with that slider

02:31:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Aww changed rhythm from what the drums are doing. Use the same hitsound pattern as you did at 02:29:633 (1,2,3,4,5) - It stays pretty much the same throughout that section anyway so probably best to remove all the later hitsounds up until 02:44:633 - and do it in a way it follows the music correctly.

02:58:306 (2) - Remove clap from slider endand change to whistle. Same for 02:58:657 (3) - Remove hitsound from head and add whistle to end

03:11:032 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Lol no mercy xD

03:31:930 (7,8) - Would be cool if these were 1/4 sliders (at least 7 so it gets both sounds when they say DO IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

03:33:634 - Missing a strong sound. Technically 03:33:719 (1) - should begin here.

03:34:998 - same as above.

03:56:816 (1) - Missing whistle on head also remove from slider end.

03:57:583 (5) - Whistle on slider end

03:58:180 (1) - Remove clap and change to whistle.

03:58:521 (2) - Personally I'd remove the clap from 03:58:861 -

04:03:038 (4) - Whistle on head would sound kinda cool I suppose. Might wanna remove from the end as well.

04:07:384 (5) - Clap on tail is cool

04:13:180 (1) - Change clap for whistle. Also add clap to head of 04:13:435 (2) -

04:38:577 (5) - Whistle would be cool.

04:43:521 - Clap sound here would be cool but u know 1/2 slider kinda prevents that unfortunately. I suppose you could change that to a 1/2 slider/reverse or something if you want it.

04:52:384 (7) - Missing clap

04:57:839 (7) - ^

05:01:759 (5) - Clap on slider end

05:12:157 (2) - Change to clap

05:19:998 (1) - Whistle on head

05:20:339 (3) - Whistle on slider end


x_x

Well hope this helped. Good luck! :)
Faust
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If you're happy and you know it clap your hands.
Kyubey
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Kyubey
00:54:765 - 00:55:787 - 00:56:116 - make the sampleset and volume same for both green and red lines on these points.
How about adding Konami to the tags?

01:21:428 (5,1) - maybe unstack them more a little? in current state it was kinda hard to notice the second slider for me
01:35:064 (4,5) - this part doesn't really sound that intensive for me to make such a huge jump, i'd like to reduce it
01:51:684 (5,1) - since hitting a circle is harder than hitting a slider due to different hit windows, i suggest to move this thing closer to make it more comfortable
03:36:873 (8,9) - this spacing is kinda uncomfortable for this quiet part, could you move it closer?
03:51:617 (3,5) - nonono, reverse arrow is totally covered here and invisible till the last moment, move it somewhere
03:56:390 (5,6) - totally unexpected and will cause combobreaks. and you didn't use same patterns before and later, so it looks inconsistent, so somehow change it
Lach
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Lach
10:54 Lach: 03:56:305 (4,5,6) - this sticks out a bit during this section because it's sort of the only one like it
10:54 Lach: circle stream jump where as most of the rest in that section use slider leniency
10:56 Lach: 01:31:059 (4,5,6) - also i thought this was double with a gap every time it came up in that first section
10:56 Faust: changed
10:56 Faust: haha..will keep that.
10:56 Lach: you cruel
10:56 Lach: but ok
10:57 Lach: 01:27:479 (1,2,3) - i get you're trying to do the 1,2,3,4 etc
10:57 Lach: but i read it as 3/4 gaps because of the spacing
10:57 Lach: maybe if they were stacked or something idk
10:57 Lach: or much tighter spaced because they currently look like they're spaced out for the kick sample
10:58 Lach: personally i would use the 3/4 rhythm instead of the count
10:59 Faust: I see.
11:00 Lach: 04:25:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - all of the other instances of circle stream works imo but i really don't like this because it's so long
11:01 Lach: and there's like 6 possible places in there that you can miss
11:02 Lach: that's pretty much it i think, everything that stood out while playing
11:07 Faust: alright thanks !
Faust
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Thanks Kyubey & Lach !
Liiraye
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Liiraye
dam son dream is real!

like shit dude this is why you're the coolest mapper I know of. Your mapping style is simply COOL as fuck

also rip
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Irreversible
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Irreversible
Interesting concept. Good luck!
Okoratu
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Okoratu
would you consider muting sliderslides in the beginning of this? like they sound like im hitting sandpaper or something similar lmao
Faust
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Done.

Should've thought of that sooner.
Kyubey
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Your silent normal-sliderslide is not proper blank file we should use, use this instead: http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav
00:54:765 - make the sampleset same on both green and red line
03:32:271 - do same with kiai, just to make sure it won't bug

01:31:144 (5,6) - i'm sure something's wrong with this spacing
03:02:819 - shouldn't clap be here?

Obviously no kd, since I modded it before.
Faust
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Updated.

Thanks !
Kyubey
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Bubble #1.
Liiraye
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Liiraye
oh wow it's happening!
Irreversible
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Irreversible
Checked it quickly, seems fine. #2
Yuii-
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metadata before qualifying?
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http://korsk.jp/s2tb-0012/
Yuii-
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Lesgo
Faust
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Ah, thank you all so mcuh !
Shiirn
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123456
Liiraye
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Liiraye
Nice dude! Took forever tho lol
Cpu-x
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Cpu-x
Hey thats pretty good
Natteke desu
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Natteke desu
congrats!
Faust
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In-coming DQ.
IamKwaN
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As requested.
Faust
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Updated.
pishifat
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pishifat
hi i make the post
2016-06-10 16:23 pishifat: hi um
2016-06-10 16:23 pishifat: just wondering, who timed ur new map
2016-06-10 16:24 Faust: me
2016-06-10 16:24 pishifat: u fucked up dood
2016-06-10 16:25 Faust: all ears
2016-06-10 16:25 pishifat: its like
2016-06-10 16:25 pishifat: everything is late
2016-06-10 16:26 pishifat: literally everything
2016-06-10 16:26 Faust: first offset-late or just happens to be everything.
2016-06-10 16:27 pishifat: legiteverything
2016-06-10 16:27 pishifat: first offset was especially late then you adjusted it after the first bpm change with
2016-06-10 16:27 pishifat: 00:55:787 (3) - that thing there
2016-06-10 16:28 pishifat: but even that point at 00:56:116 (1) - is slightly late lol
2016-06-10 16:28 pishifat: im going through it right now so you dont really have to do anything
2016-06-10 16:28 pishifat: will show you what ive got when that's done
2016-06-10 16:29 Faust: sure
2016-06-10 17:13 pishifat: alright timing is in https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/751 ... 5Bd%5D.osu
2016-06-10 17:14 pishifat: should be able to compare and see what was weird with the original
2016-06-10 17:14 Faust: on it
2016-06-10 17:17 Faust: hm
2016-06-10 17:18 Faust: 1584 > 1561
2016-06-10 17:19 pishifat: very
2016-06-10 17:21 Faust: oh you bothered to time the speed up too
2016-06-10 17:21 Faust: nice
2016-06-10 17:22 Faust: yeah this is what I get for being in-active for years and timing multi-bpm :p
2016-06-10 17:22 pishifat: [everythingwasearly]
2016-06-10 17:22 pishifat: lol
2016-06-10 17:27 Faust: hm, I don't think the first offset should be so early though
2016-06-10 17:28 Faust: might be me
2016-06-10 17:28 pishifat: sounds right to me gg
2016-06-10 17:29 pishifat: can always ask other people what they think
2016-06-10 17:43 Faust: Yeah, some review will be done. Thank you for your time.
2016-06-10 17:43 Faust: I'll ask that you post in the thread after I request a DQ.
2016-06-10 17:44 Faust: (this log)
2016-06-10 17:52 pishifat: o
2016-06-10 17:52 pishifat: ok
2016-06-10 23:30 Faust: DQ'd. You can go make the post :)
Faust
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All ready for re-qualification.

Thanks to all whom have contributed.

zeborg
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I'm not forcing my opinion or anything, but
05:20:241 (2,3) - stack looks ugly, fix pls

I really enjoyed the map from beginning to the end, although my accuracy was crap.
SPOILER
And mapping is totally badass imo, especially the beat-transitioning part!
Faust
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Applied. I appreciate it.
Kyubey
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#1
Let's go back?
Faust
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123456DOIT
Okoratu
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Okoratu
uh so i want to say a few things because the map is neat

I think using a lower AR like 9.2 would make this a more pleasant reading experience
03:15:169 (1) - have this spinner end in 03:21:349 - and start the other one delayed so that you can actually hitsound it ?
04:43:422 (2) - kind of throws youoff if you map every of these drum things i think doing it like 04:54:076 (1,2) - would be better
04:47:939 (5,6) - that this has so much spacing and only gets a quad seems odd, the white tick is pretty strong you should consider making it a circle by taking the repeat off the slider imo
Faust
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Fair enough. I'm going with AR 9.3 instead.

Applied all but the final suggestion.
I am really digging the intended aesthetic effect, since it uses a rebound straight into a stream.

Thanks !
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