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Kaivu
Hey, sorry for replying so late! I unfortunately couldn't find anything to comment on -- here's a star instead! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

Good luck on getting ranked! :)
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

Osuology wrote:

[Hard]
00:09:453 (2,3,4) - These aren't required in my opinion, it's way overmapped beyond. i dont have idea to fill this part
01:24:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - That's weird. its fine for me

TheOnlyLeon wrote:

Hey, Delayed from my queue, unfortunately due to losing priority I'm not going to full mod the entire set, but I'll do a complete mod the two diff's you made yourself.

NORMAL


Miscellaneous - First off, I personally feel like this map would feel better if CS was dropped to 3 and AR was increased to 5,5-5,8 i'll try
A.) This connects the spacing a little bit more making a slightly forgiving.
B.) The AR increase removes the rare instances of stacked approach circles which should be avoided in Normals
C.) Allows for a more forgiving HR play in terms of CS.
D.) For higher-level players looking back on the map creates a comfortable level to play in HR-DT.

Timing - Why does your Timing point have the hit sound volume level'd at 55% while you immediately use an inherited point to drop it to 30%? This is totally redundant, it doesn't affect game play but I'd suggest just lowering the initial volume to the 30% as it doesn't provide any change currently. 25% instead

In terms of note placement it all looks clean, Good work so far.

HARD


Timing - Same thing as with the normal, that initial inherited point is redundant and unnecessary. repair some inherited volume

00:48:667 - 01:00:239 - OK This entire section just bothers me. I don't have any ideas for mapping this, but the map would be much better if those anchor notes on every red tick were just removed and replaced with a break. I can't stress how irritating playing those are. its will be feels empty

01:01:739 - Being a hard and all, you're probably better off just replacing these with circles, you don't need to be mapping that level of the song here. i like this pattern though im not pro at std (playing)


Well that's about all, you've clearly already put alot into the map as it's fairly clean, But that one section of the hard just has to go. So far it's alright and GL getting this ranked.
Both Thanks For Mod!

Kaivu wrote:

Hey, sorry for replying so late! I unfortunately couldn't find anything to comment on -- here's a star instead! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

Good luck on getting ranked! :)
Thanks for Star~
Kuki


[Hard]
00:10:738 (1,2,3) - Fix spacing.
00:20:595 (5,6,7) - Move to X=308 Y=152 to fix square/diamond shape.
00:48:667 (1,2,3) - Even out spacing.
01:08:595 (4,5,6,7) - Even out spacing.
01:25:738 (5) - Snap this to grid to fix sliderend's overlap/stack on (1).

[Pho's Insane]
00:51:024 (6) - I don't really like the look of this slider, consider changing to this.
01:13:096 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+G perhaps.
Pho
No fixes, the 1st slidershape is pretty much personal preference & ctrl+g'ing the triple causes bad flow break.
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

Kuki wrote:



[Hard]
00:10:738 (1,2,3) - Fix spacing. not important, but well, repaired
00:20:595 (5,6,7) - Move to X=308 Y=152 to fix square/diamond shape.its looks fine for me, but i've repair 00:20:381 (4) - instead
00:48:667 (1,2,3) - Even out spacing. repair distance between those 00:48:024 (5,1) -
01:08:595 (4,5,6,7) - Even out spacing. uses 1/2 of the main distance, 0.6x for the 1/4 part its fine i guess
01:25:738 (5) - Snap this to grid to fix sliderend's overlap/stack on (1). repair da stacking
Thanks For Mod~ Updated


btw gais, did u already check DahplA's mod?
Umi


General

  1. Move the redline to 453, it's not unrankable to have notes before and better than a negative offset
  2. Almost each diff is using a different end on the last spinner, it'd be better to have it consistent.

Xinely's Easy

  1. It's probably intentionnal but i'd recommend u to switch S to S:C1 for sliderslide silenced, to add as well a normal sliderslide silenced and then to switch N to N:C1.
  2. 00:07:310 (1) - it's actually the same rythm as 00:00:453 (1) - or 00:02:167 (2) - this long slider feel pretty weird considering your previous rythms
  3. 00:30:667 (3) - if we follow your HS pattern it shouldn't have whistle on the end
  4. 00:47:167 (4) - Finish on end with auto sampleset, to emphasize the cymbal


Normal

  1. 00:01:953 (4) - i'd delete this note to let some break, 3x 1/2 rythms in a row is kinda too much for a normal imo
  2. 00:03:667 (4) - same as before
  3. 00:07:953 (2) -You forgot a whistle
  4. 00:08:810 (3,1) - How about stacking them, it look neater don't u think ? u'll have to arrange a bit the pattern after.
  5. 00:12:024 (3) - A finish drum would fit better than a clap.
  6. 00:22:524 (3) - Move this note 1/2 earlier, feel better this way
  7. 00:27:453 (3,4) - delete one of theses notes for the reason that i mentionned earlier (there is plenty of rythm like this one further in the map, so try to fix them if u agreed my suggestions > 00:36:024 (3,4) - , 00:42:881 (3,4) - , 00:44:596 (3,4) - etc ..)
  8. 00:34:739 (1) - A soft finish instead, to emphasize the cymbal, you did it in hard
  9. 00:47:167 (1) - how about this rythm ?
  10. 00:52:096 (2,1) - arrange the curve of (1) for a better blanket with (2)
  11. 00:57:239 (2,2) - the blanket between theres two could look better, use this code
    SPOILER
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  12. 01:21:667 (3) - finish on head
  13. 01:26:167 (1) - start the spinner at 01:26:381 - and then add a note with finish 01:26:167 - exactly like xinely did.

Hard

  1. 1,80 SV for a Hard is way too much :o also pkhg's insane is using 1,40, so i highly recommend to decrease it like 1,60 or 1,50 and then instead of using SV change x0,85 and x1,00 u can just switch to x1,00 and x1,15.
  2. Your HS pattern is completly different than normal difficultyl from 00:00:453 - to 00:12:453 - any reason ? if no then consider use the same in both.
  3. 00:03:238 (4) - how about reducing this slider by 1/2 and then adding a note 00:03:667 - so it follow better the voice and instru as well.
  4. 00:38:167 (1) - i'd use the same shape as 00:37:738 (3) - for a better toward 00:38:810 (2) - , see bellow:
  5. 01:16:310 (2,3) - this jump is too much imo, reduce it.

pkhg's Insane

  1. Reduce AR to 8
  2. 00:03:667 (1,3) - switch NC
  3. 00:07:096 (1,3) - ^
  4. 00:10:167 (4) - this 1/3 rythm is pretty hard to read, u should follow the instru instead
  5. 00:15:453 (8) - curve it this way to increase the flow
  6. 00:24:239 (1,1) - switch NC
  7. 00:30:024 (2,3) - i'd untsack them, since (3) is a strong beat a jump would be cool, example:
  8. 00:52:524 (5,1) - switch NC according to your pattern

Gero's Insane

  1. isame as xinely's easy, i'd recommend u to use a sliderslide silenced from 00:00:239 - to 00:12:024 -, it doesn't fit at all
  2. 00:15:453 (8) - what is this supposed to follow ? '-' i tried my best but i can't hear anything, use a normal rythm
  3. 00:23:381 (3) - don't u wanna curve it, to give a better flow
  4. 00:24:453 (1,3) - how about a blanket between these two, look neater!
  5. 00:26:060 (6) - delete this note there is nothing here
  6. 00:29:489 (5) - ^
  7. 00:32:917 (8) - ^
  8. 00:46:631 (6) - ^ and the last one >< It migh be fun and easy to read, but as long as there nothing to follow, u shouldn't add extra note like this
  9. 01:02:167 (1,2) - switch the rythm, it fit nicely the voice :
  10. 01:15:881 (1,2) - same as before

Pho's Insane

  1. 00:10:167 (4,1,2) - same reflexion as Pkgh's insane this 1/3 is pretty weird even if it fit the voice, following the instru would be way better.
  2. 00:27:774 - u're missing something here, add a note maybe ?
  3. 01:26:274 - add a spinner for consitent with others diff

That's it, pretty good set, the rank should be almost there GL. o/
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

Umi wrote:



General

  1. Move the redline to 453, it's not unrankable to have notes before and better than a negative offset Fix it
  2. Almost each diff is using a different end on the last spinner, it'd be better to have it consistent. i'll try to consistent with all GD's

Normal

  1. 00:01:953 (4) - i'd delete this note to let some break, 3x 1/2 rythms in a row is kinda too much for a normal imo
  2. 00:03:667 (4) - same as before
  3. 00:07:953 (2) -You forgot a whistle my fault, added
  4. 00:08:810 (3,1) - How about stacking them, it look neater don't u think ? u'll have to arrange a bit the pattern after. ok
  5. 00:12:024 (3) - A finish drum would fit better than a clap. aah.. well changed
  6. 00:22:524 (3) - Move this note 1/2 earlier, feel better this way
  7. 00:27:453 (3,4) - delete one of theses notes for the reason that i mentionned earlier (there is plenty of rythm like this one further in the map, so try to fix them if u agreed my suggestions > 00:36:024 (3,4) - , 00:42:881 (3,4) - , 00:44:596 (3,4) - etc ..) deleted, cuz in before i add note in here for increase the star rating but well its not good for an normal i guess, also changed to 1/2 slider rather than deleted in some part
  8. 00:34:739 (1) - A soft finish instead, to emphasize the cymbal, you did it in hard
  9. 00:47:167 (1) - how about this rythm ? i'll consider to use ur suggest
  10. 00:52:096 (2,1) - arrange the curve of (1) for a better blanket with (2)
  11. 00:57:239 (2,2) - the blanket between theres two could look better, use this code it doesnt stacked with (1)? i'll try to fix it by my self (uses ur code)
    SPOILER
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  12. 01:21:667 (3) - finish on head looks good
  13. 01:26:167 (1) - start the spinner at 01:26:381 - and then add a note with finish 01:26:167 - exactly like xinely did.

almost fix everything, also repair some part

Hard

  1. 1,80 SV for a Hard is way too much :o also pkhg's insane is using 1,40, so i highly recommend to decrease it like 1,60 or 1,50 and then instead of using SV change x0,85 and x1,00 u can just switch to x1,00 and x1,15. 1.60 and uses SV change to repair the slider that changed
  2. Your HS pattern is completly different than normal difficultyl from 00:00:453 - to 00:12:453 - any reason ? if no then consider use the same in both. ahahhaa.. i reduce da music volume and hear the sound of HS and i laughed not obvious XD dunno y i do dat, fixed lol
  3. 00:03:238 (4) - how about reducing this slider by 1/2 and then adding a note 00:03:667 - so it follow better the voice and instru as well.
  4. 00:38:167 (1) - i'd use the same shape as 00:37:738 (3) - for a better toward 00:38:810 (2) - , see bellow:
  5. 01:16:310 (2,3) - this jump is too much imo, reduce it. keep this although i not pro at playing std but this isn't too force player to jump

Same as normal, almost fix everything except the red one
That's it, pretty good set, the rank should be almost there GL. o/
Thanks for mod Umi~
Pho

Umi wrote:

Pho's Insane

  1. 00:10:167 (4,1,2) - same reflexion as Pkgh's insane this 1/3 is pretty weird even if it fit the voice, following the instru would be way better. Hmm, maybe, but since my focus heavily relied on vocal beats in general and vocals are the dominant line here i feel it should be fine. Idk, maybe I'll change it in another way if it's getting pointed out again.
  2. 00:27:774 - u're missing something here, add a note maybe ? It's a fainting sound, current pattern works well already since it emphasises the strong beats better.
  3. 01:26:274 - add a spinner for consitent with others diff I'd rather not. I believe spinner is unnecessary here and adds unnecessary tension at the end.

That's it, pretty good set, the rank should be almost there GL. o/
No change for now, but thanks for the mod anyway Umi! o/
pkhg
i'll reply soon
Gero
I wonder if you're going to qualify this set someday.
Topic Starter
Arlecchino
Sry for waiting so long, kinda busy irl, im also still semi-active till jul or aug, school stuff and im in apprenticeship at japanese factory atm
but revived with couple of change in my diff
also after considering the offset, i think i'll kept it in a negative offset due some reason

i'll do my best to end this asap
pkhg

Umi wrote:



pkhg's Insane

  1. Reduce AR to 8 its dense enough to use 8.5
  2. 00:03:667 (1,3) - switch NC
  3. 00:07:096 (1,3) - ^ i prefer keeping them on the triplet start
  4. 00:10:167 (4) - this 1/3 rythm is pretty hard to read, u should follow the instru instead its a slider so u cant get a 100 on it (yet)
  5. 00:15:453 (8) - curve it this way to increase the flow rip puush
  6. 00:24:239 (1,1) - switch NC lol
  7. 00:30:024 (2,3) - i'd untsack them, since (3) is a strong beat a jump would be cool, example: done
  8. 00:52:524 (5,1) - switch NC according to your pattern done

That's it, pretty good set, the rank should be almost there GL. o/
thanks

@asuna: video offset must be -320 its a bit late right now

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Topic Starter
Arlecchino
yeshh, change video offset to -320
updated!
Pho
oh, this lives again :D sending a rework of my Insane since i wasn't content with it anymore, hope you don't mind that!

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398,199,67096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
398,199,67203,1,0,0:0:0:0:
398,199,67310,5,4,0:0:0:0:
492,331,67524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,362,67739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,247,67953,2,0,P|217:160|231:53,1,179.999994506836,4|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
227,67,68381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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200,363,69667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,363,69774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,363,69881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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211,86,71167,2,0,P|289:95|342:78,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,64,71489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,50,71596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,66,71703,1,0,0:0:0:0:
491,104,71810,2,0,L|480:236,1,119.999996337891,0|8,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
391,345,72239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,123,72453,6,0,L|306:247,1,119.999996337891,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
228,327,72881,1,8,0:2:0:0:
108,146,73096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,146,73203,1,0,2:0:0:0:
108,146,73310,1,0,2:0:0:0:
221,229,73524,1,0,0:2:0:0:
42,345,73739,1,2,0:1:0:0:
17,112,73953,5,0,0:0:0:0:
54,73,74060,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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472,216,74810,6,4,P|431:230|382:228,1,59.9999981689454,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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188,216,75667,1,8,0:2:0:0:
220,260,75774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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201,365,76524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,365,76631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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262,54,77489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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340,17,85739,6,2,B|299:3|262:20|262:20|234:2|234:2|184:19,1,150,2|2,0:1|2:0,0:0:0:0:
152,74,86167,1,4,1:2:0:0:
Topic Starter
Arlecchino
yessh, update it now because i think i will quite busy tomorrow

EDIT : =w=) c
pkhg
GERO
DeletedUser_6181859
Hey from my queue, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
And yep, I am just learning. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate.
P.S. OMG THREE BNs MAKE DIFFS (sorry for this caps)
P.P.S. Modding starred map is hard for me. But i'll try. If i'll useless - don't give me kudosu.

Song and beatmaps

I think you need change "Full Metal Alchemist" to "鋼の錬金術師" in Source.

Diffs

Normal
  1. 00:07:953 (2) - Hmm... My suggestion - it's strange flow. Try to direct end of slider with flow to 00:08:810 (3)
  2. 00:17:810 (1,2) - if I were you - i'll make curved sliders. Try to add sliderpoint in the middle of sliders.
  3. 00:33:667 (2,1) - try to move it away to each other
  4. 00:45:024 (1) - remove middle slidepoint or move it to x=64 y=28
  5. 01:00:453 (3,1) - move a bit down for don't overlap with 01:00:881 (1,3)
  6. 01:06:881 (3) - move smiddle sliderpoint to x=128 y=324
  7. 01:24:453 (1) - try to make like in %image%
Hard
  1. 00:01:524 (4) - move to x=236 y=272 for better blanket
  2. 00:21:667 (2) - move to x=204 y=260 for better blanket
  3. 00:29:596 (1) - move to x=152 y=108 for better blanket
  4. 00:42:239 (2) - move to x=28 y=296 for better blanket
  5. 00:47:810 (4,1) - try to avoid this overlap
  6. 01:23:167 (2,4) - maybe stack? (move 2 to x=188 y=236)
Good luck with ranking!
{end of mod}
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

100bit wrote:

Hey from my queue, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
And yep, I am just learning. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate. its ok, me too
P.S. OMG THREE BNs MAKE DIFFS (sorry for this caps) lol
P.P.S. Modding starred map is hard for me. But i'll try. If i'll useless - don't give me kudosu. anything that makes my map get improved is deserved for get kds

Song and beatmaps

I think you need change "Full Metal Alchemist" to "鋼の錬金術師" in Source. seems all ppl can read kanji easily, cuz you all read da source instead da tags when want to download a beatmap in beatmaplist, yes i'll try to switch those

Diffs

Normal
  1. 00:07:953 (2) - Hmm... My suggestion - it's strange flow. Try to direct end of slider with flow to 00:08:810 (3) ok, made a normal curved slider
  2. 00:17:810 (1,2) - if I were you - i'll make curved sliders. Try to add sliderpoint in the middle of sliders. i like this since da flow looks fine with this, so keep this
  3. 00:33:667 (2,1) - try to move it away to each other ok, i'll try
  4. 00:45:024 (1) - remove middle slidepoint or move it to x=64 y=28 y28 for better flow
  5. 01:00:453 (3,1) - move a bit down for don't overlap with 01:00:881 (1,3) its seems fine here, idk where is da overlapped part
  6. 01:06:881 (3) - move smiddle sliderpoint to x=128 y=324 i know wat you mean, fix this with a little different in my way
  7. 01:24:453 (1) - try to make like in %image% seems a bit hard for a normal, i use a simple rhythm for makes it readable for beginner
Hard
  1. 00:01:524 (4) - move to x=236 y=272 for better blanket k
  2. 00:21:667 (2) - move to x=204 y=260 for better blanket its already blanket well, also it makes unstacked with prev section, so nope
  3. 00:29:596 (1) - move to x=152 y=108 for better blanket improve the blanket in my way
  4. 00:42:239 (2) - move to x=28 y=296 for better blanket already good i guess
  5. 00:47:810 (4,1) - try to avoid this overlap i'll try
  6. 01:23:167 (2,4) - maybe stack? (move 2 to x=188 y=236) already stacked well
Good luck with ranking!
{end of mod}

thanks for mod!
Deppyforce
g

[Xinely]
00:39:239 (2,3) - 00:46:095 (2,3) - maybe merge to 3/2 sliders cuz vocals

[Normal]
idk but imo barely overlapping sliderborders looks so bad :C but yu would have to change ds to fix that..
00:12:453 (1) - could move this up a bit for better flow
00:36:024 - make 1/2 slider here for vocals? should be fine since its only 140 bpm
01:04:524 (2) - i recommend u land on 1/2 instead to follow vocals since its more noticeable sound to beginners
01:26:167 (1) - again, could move it to around x209 y69 for better flow!

[Hard]
00:03:774 - yo i assume theres missing note here since u mapped 00:07:203 (6) -
00:17:810 (1,2,3,4) - these are even stronger than 00:24:453 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - are u sure u wanna stack??
01:00:881 (2,3) - fix blanket
01:24:453 (1,2,3) - might be too sharp movement for this lv players idrk

others looks fine, gl!
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

Deppyforce wrote:

g

[Normal]
idk but imo barely overlapping sliderborders looks so bad :C but yu would have to change ds to fix that.. guess so ;w;
00:12:453 (1) - could move this up a bit for better flow done.
00:36:024 - make 1/2 slider here for vocals? should be fine since its only 140 bpm idk, keeping since i did it same with 00:37:739
01:04:524 (2) - i recommend u land on 1/2 instead to follow vocals since its more noticeable sound to beginners using same rhythm like 01:02:167 (1,2,3) -
01:26:167 (1) - again, could move it to around x209 y69 for better flow! do it on somewhere in that area

[Hard]
00:03:774 - yo i assume theres missing note here since u mapped 00:07:203 (6) - it was a note b4, deleted due some reason, but i'll consider more to put it in, also in others section
00:17:810 (1,2,3,4) - these are even stronger than 00:24:453 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - are u sure u wanna stack?? unstack 00:17:810 (1,2) - these, but keep 00:18:239 (3,4) - cuz the beat is down further
01:00:881 (2,3) - fix blanket Done?
01:24:453 (1,2,3) - might be too sharp movement for this lv players idrk seems fine

others looks fine, gl!
thanks for m4m
-NanoRIPE-
Hi ~ NM Request from my q

[Easy]
None :') ~

[Normal]
00:02:810 (2) - di turunkan kebawah sedikit slidernya
00:17:381 - coba tambah circle karena ada suara cymbal disini
01:21:024 (1) - finish

[Hard]
00:17:381 - sama dengan yg normal
01:00:239 (5,1) - blanket?

[pkhg's Insane]
00:46:310 (4) - remove whistle?


GL ~
Lefia
From my queue
mod
[Normal]
00:09:667 Coba kek gini supaya flownya lebih bagus


00:17:381 mulai dari sini aja?
00:19:953 Coba kek gini




00:53:596 (1) ctrl+h , ctrl + j , ctrl + g pindahin ke x:304 y:36
01:07:953 (2) hilangin curve nya
01:12:667 (1) ^
01:13:953 (4) pindahin ke x:472 y:264

[Hard]

AR nya 7,5 aja gimana? (biar sesuai sama star nya)

00:17:381 mulai dari sini aja?

Ga banyak masalah disini, flow nya udah bagus, mungkin cuma perlu recheck blanketnya

GL~
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Hi ~ NM Request from my q

[Easy]
None :') ~

[Normal]
00:02:810 (2) - di turunkan kebawah sedikit slidernya oki
00:17:381 - coba tambah circle karena ada suara cymbal disini kayanya malah bikin kaget player, toh emang pengen break selesai di slow partnya gitu
01:21:024 (1) - finish sure, my mistake missed it

[Hard]
00:17:381 - sama dengan yg normal same reason thoo
01:00:239 (5,1) - blanket? sure, y not


GL ~
about insane mod, whose insane is it?

MadaoX wrote:

From my queue
mod
[Normal]
00:09:667 Coba kek gini supaya flownya lebih bagus sure y not


00:17:381 mulai dari sini aja? same reason as before
00:19:953 Coba kek gini gak deh, suka sama yang kek gini




00:53:596 (1) ctrl+h , ctrl + j , ctrl + g pindahin ke x:304 y:36 nope, ini masih kebaca kok sama pemula
01:07:953 (2) hilangin curve nya pengen bikin flownya gak bosen bosen amat, jadi tak bikin kek gini dibanyak tempat, tapi tak pertimbangin lagi deh kalo ada yang pointed tentang ini lagi
01:12:667 (1) ^ seems fine
01:13:953 (4) pindahin ke x:472 y:264 mmm ok, sama benerin slider selanjutnya

[Hard]

AR nya 7,5 aja gimana? (biar sesuai sama star nya) 7 udah cukup deh

00:17:381 mulai dari sini aja? kaya dimod sebelumnya, kalo disini agak kaget gitu kesannya, sama emang pengen break berhenti di slow part bukan di cymbal

Ga banyak masalah disini, flow nya udah bagus, mungkin cuma perlu recheck blanketnya

GL~
thanks you both for the mod!

for GDr im sorry if there are some mod but only mod my diff, cuz my diff seems too bad for your awesome GDs and please wait i need to improve my diff further while waiting bn check, but sure i'll finding quality mod for our diff not only mine
Len
from q


Normal:
  1. 00:01:096 (2,3) - this flow is bad i think; try this? i think its better than before :d http://puu.sh/pl8HX/ba234573fd.jpg
  2. 00:48:453 - ~ 01:00:239 - about this, for me, too boring imo..... try to add note and sliders instead like this? http://puu.sh/pl8Ub/ec461b0da4.jpg well, i dont know actually
  3. 01:20:167 (3,4,1,2,3) - straight pattern is abit hard for "Normal" users imo. isnt it?

Hard:
  1. 00:05:167 (4) - distance?
  2. 00:07:096 (5,6,1) - stack is better imo
  3. 00:21:024 (1,2) - distance is too big and no need to emphasize here i think
  4. 01:01:739 (4) - add 2 reverses and remove 01:01:953 (5) - is better! i was surprised..
  5. 01:08:596 (4,5,6,7) - , 01:15:453 (3,4,5,6) - add 1/4 reverse slider instead?
  6. 01:22:417 (5) - delete it for make easier?
  7. 01:24:774 (2,3) - its better for playing ....... http://puu.sh/pl9en/d7e0e35a96.jpg
  8. 01:26:381 (1) - move to 01:26:274 - ?

gl
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

Len wrote:

from q


Normal:
  1. 00:01:096 (2,3) - this flow is bad i think; try this? i think its better than before :d http://puu.sh/pl8HX/ba234573fd.jpg yes, do sth like this
  2. 00:48:453 - ~ 01:00:239 - about this, for me, too boring imo..... try to add note and sliders instead like this? http://puu.sh/pl8Ub/ec461b0da4.jpg well, i dont know actually i make variant of long slider for give a little movement, indeed seems a bit boring, but its not that boring imo
  3. 01:20:167 (3,4,1,2,3) - straight pattern is abit hard for "Normal" users imo. isnt it? yes, change those so its more flowed

Hard:
  1. 00:05:167 (4) - distance? my mistake, repaired
  2. 00:07:096 (5,6,1) - stack is better imo i'll consider due some reason
  3. 00:21:024 (1,2) - distance is too big and no need to emphasize here i think in a case i want to keep this but.. rrr indeed this doesnt need a emphasizing, remap this section
  4. 01:01:739 (4) - add 2 reverses and remove 01:01:953 (5) - is better! i was surprised.. idk if its a big problem or not, i like this pattern, though im not pro at playing std, probably the distance is a bit over, but its still clickable and readable i guess, lets see how other ppl say about this
  5. 01:08:596 (4,5,6,7) - , 01:15:453 (3,4,5,6) - add 1/4 reverse slider instead? 1/4 reverses seems good, but i want to add more tapping here :^)
  6. 01:22:417 (5) - delete it for make easier? its been like this since long tim ago, but i forgot how its become like this lol
  7. 01:24:774 (2,3) - its better for playing ....... http://puu.sh/pl9en/d7e0e35a96.jpg sure
  8. 01:26:381 (1) - move to 01:26:274 - ? spinner start seems fine for now

gl
tq for mod fsto
Cerulean Veyron
Hello! A mod as requested.

[- - Normal - -]
  1. 00:31:953 (2) - This anchor looks pretty okay, but how about a neater shape of this slider? Doesn't seem much to affect flow or sth, but it's your call.
  2. 01:05:381 - Add a note here? Well, you've added some on the next few tracks which are similar, so why not here for rhythm consistency or so?
  3. 01:06:667 (2,3) - I assume you wanted to keep this for some reason, but imo I prefer splitting these two for a bit visibility. The slider blanket is good, but (kinda) unnoticeable.

[- - Hard - -]
  1. 00:07:953 (3) - You skipped a few good notes on this part, but ended up a slider repeat? I recommend removing the repeat and start a 1/2 slider after it. This should do.
  2. 00:21:667 (2) - This slider's end is not properly snapped. It looked pretty obvious with the slider's tick on the tail.
  3. 00:43:739 (2) - Optional objective: Did you use a grid snap here? No wonder the spacing between this circle is a bit too odd. How about moving it a little, somewhere x:374|y:147 or more left? It might present a neater blanket or sth.
  4. 00:56:381 (4,5,1) - I'm not a fan of one of these, it's like "After you've clicked circle (4), you might end up clicking (1) rather than (5)". Well, sometimes because of the NC. I prefer putting it away instead of placing an aftercome circle between the current circles.
  5. 01:16:524 (3) - Probably another unsnapped slider end.
  6. 01:18:239 (2,3,4) - I couldn't say another thing but an overdone flow. It doesn't seem right to me when a cursor moves down the slider's curve, and pulls too much stress hovered to circle (3). I probably didn't like this one. Either Ctrl+G the two circles, or stack them.

[- - Pho's Insane - -]
  1. - hi
  2. 00:25:524 (5,6) - This is some sudden jump to me, not just because of the downbeat on slider (6)'s end. This looked a bit too early though, you should've tried on (1) at least. Or better yet, no jumps here at all. To represent the low tune in the music. So a little spacing snap should work.
  3. 01:14:381 (5,3) - Is... this intentional? Doesn't look like a "manual stacking" to me. More like an overlap.
  4. 01:18:667 (8,9) - Why this +2x 1/4 distance? Unlike any other streams you've did previously, this is the only different notes I've seem from any parts of the set.

I'm sorry if my mod wasn't a complete full mod, but I hope it helps even a slight of it ;p
Impressive map btw!
Pho

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

[- - Pho's Insane - -]
  1. - hi yo
  2. 00:25:524 (5,6) - This is some sudden jump to me, not just because of the downbeat on slider (6)'s end. This looked a bit too early though, you should've tried on (1) at least. Or better yet, no jumps here at all. To represent the low tune in the music. So a little spacing snap should work. The jump was there to accentuate the pitch drop. I evened the spacing out a bit.
  3. 01:14:381 (5,3) - Is... this intentional? Doesn't look like a "manual stacking" to me. More like an overlap.
  4. 01:18:667 (8,9) - Why this +2x 1/4 distance? Unlike any other streams you've did previously, this is the only different notes I've seem from any parts of the set. New verse that's why the spacing is increased here. I toned it down a bit.

I'm sorry if my mod wasn't a complete full mod, but I hope it helps even a slight of it ;p
Impressive map btw!
Thanks Veyron!

SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Yui - Again.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 62060
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:again
TitleUnicode:again
Artist:YUI
ArtistUnicode:YUI
Creator:-[ Asuna ]-
Version:Pho's Insane
Source:Full Metal Alchemist: Brotherhood
Tags:鋼の錬金術師 Gero Xinely Pho pkhg FMA FMOST1 Hisashi Kondo Ayumi Hamasaki Holydays in the Sun
BeatmapID:603329
BeatmapSetID:262627

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4.2
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Topic Starter
Arlecchino

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Hello! A mod as requested.

[- - Normal - -]
  1. 00:31:953 (2) - This anchor looks pretty okay, but how about a neater shape of this slider? Doesn't seem much to affect flow or sth, but it's your call. sure, make the slider shape more neater, hope i did it correctly
  2. 01:05:381 - Add a note here? Well, you've added some on the next few tracks which are similar, so why not here for rhythm consistency or so? remove the circle and add 1/2 slider instead, cuz after a bit consider, though only 2, but 2 circles in a row is quite hard for normal, also changing in some section
  3. 01:06:667 (2,3) - I assume you wanted to keep this for some reason, but imo I prefer splitting these two for a bit visibility. The slider blanket is good, but (kinda) unnoticeable. did it, i guess

[- - Hard - -]
  1. 00:07:953 (3) - You skipped a few good notes on this part, but ended up a slider repeat? I recommend removing the repeat and start a 1/2 slider after it. This should do. sure
  2. 00:21:667 (2) - This slider's end is not properly snapped. It looked pretty obvious with the slider's tick on the tail. woops, my mistake, i dont realize how it can be like that XD
  3. 00:43:739 (2) - Optional objective: Did you use a grid snap here? No wonder the spacing between this circle is a bit too odd. How about moving it a little, somewhere x:374|y:147 or more left? It might present a neater blanket or sth. i always use grid snap when mapping, idk but, i moved it onto x:376|y:144 instead also repair blanketing with da slider
  4. 00:56:381 (4,5,1) - I'm not a fan of one of these, it's like "After you've clicked circle (4), you might end up clicking (1) rather than (5)". Well, sometimes because of the NC. I prefer putting it away instead of placing an aftercome circle between the current circles. replacing some note too
  5. 01:16:524 (3) - Probably another unsnapped slider end. how it ca-, fixed!
  6. 01:18:239 (2,3,4) - I couldn't say another thing but an overdone flow. It doesn't seem right to me when a cursor moves down the slider's curve, and pulls too much stress hovered to circle (3). I probably didn't like this one. Either Ctrl+G the two circles, or stack them. i've do with stacking those, previously. And i made change due some reason, also its play well i guess, i like this section cuz its seems more dynamic or sth?! XD


I'm sorry if my mod wasn't a complete full mod, but I hope it helps even a slight of it ;p Thanks a lot, its help me so much
Impressive map btw!
Thanks for mod!

I made a minor change, adding triplet in some section.
Updated w/ Pho's!
Vivyanne
late from queue but!
can't mod this i don't think i can add much to the mapset

so take 2 stars instead \o/
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

HighTec wrote:

late from queue but!
can't mod this i don't think i can add much to the mapset

so take 2 stars instead \o/
ok, thanks for coming and the stars

EDIT : Pho, tag n source conflicts, i switch the source w/ the kanji one, and place the romanji in the tag also add "Haganenorenkinjitsushi"

i fix it 4 u, re-Updated for this!
Electoz
Hi, from my modding queue~

[General]

  1. Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:

    1. soft-hitfinish5.wav
[Xinely's Easy]

  1. 00:41:596 (1,2) - DS
[Normal]

  1. 00:40:310 (4,1) - 00:47:167 (1,2) - Idk why you NC these differently.
  2. Overall looks good but kiai has a very long chain of 1/2 rhythm, some objects like 01:10:524 (4) - 01:19:096 (4) can be removed so it won't be too hard/tiring for players. (The ones I mentioned should be removed also because to keep consistency with 01:03:667 .)
[Hard]

  1. 00:33:667 (2,3) - Ctrl+G rhythm here? So the both whistles on 00:33:667 - 00:34:310 will be clickable.
  2. 00:48:453 - Aw feels so wrong for not being clickable on this one, I guess it's intentional but how about shorten 00:48:024 (5) into a 1/2 slider + circle then?
[pkhg's Insane]

  1. 00:18:453 (3,4) - The spacing here is pretty small compared to the others in this part, I prefer moving 00:18:881 (4) up a bit for a bigger spacing.
Overall a solid mapset, hope this helps~
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~

[General]

  1. Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:

    1. soft-hitfinish5.wav
[Normal]

  1. 00:40:310 (4,1) - 00:47:167 (1,2) - Idk why you NC these differently. my mistake, idk why its become like that, NC'd 00:40:310 (4) - and remove NC at 00:40:524 (2) -
  2. Overall looks good but kiai has a very long chain of 1/2 rhythm, some objects like 01:10:524 (4) - 01:19:096 (4) can be removed so it won't be too hard/tiring for players. (The ones I mentioned should be removed also because to keep consistency with 01:03:667 .) 01:19:096 (4) - i was trying to reduce it indeed, so i removing 01:19:096 (4) - and change 01:10:310 (3,4) - onto 1/2 slider instead, hope this fine enough
[Hard]

  1. 00:33:667 (2,3) - Ctrl+G rhythm here? So the both whistles on 00:33:667 - 00:34:310 will be clickable. I follow the vocal here, also i do it same with 00:26:810 (2,3) - for consistent tho
  2. 00:48:453 - Aw feels so wrong for not being clickable on this one, I guess it's intentional but how about shorten 00:48:024 (5) into a 1/2 slider + circle then? sure

Overall a solid mapset, hope this helps~
Thanks for mod! and star :3
Xinely
ds fixed. those rhythms in deppyforce's mod are following drums instead so i prefer keep mine. thanks 4 mod~

also that soft-hitfinish5 is fine as it has waves between start until 5 ms

SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1000
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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:again
TitleUnicode:again
Artist:YUI
ArtistUnicode:YUI
Creator:-[ Asuna ]-
Version:Xinely's Easy
Source:鋼の錬金術師
Tags:Full Metal Alchemist: Brotherhood Haganenorenkinjutsushi Gero Xinely Pho pkhg FMA FMOST1 Hisashi Kondo Ayumi Hamasaki Holydays in the Sun
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eeezzzeee
hi from my queue

[Pho]
  1. 00:05:810 (6) - NC
  2. 00:56:489 (6) - pls consider one of these instead http://puu.sh/q4IQh/6077577964.jpg or http://puu.sh/q4IRf/6376450d7f.jpg
  3. 00:56:596 (1,2,1,2) - 00:57:453 (1,2,1,2) - these really don't sound similar at all no reason to use this style imo. if you are going to change it i think the first one fits much better than the second one so yeah
  4. 01:08:596 (1,2,3,4) - check hs sounds like something is missing
[Gero]
  1. 00:15:453 (8) - i don't hear anything for this 1/8 tbh
  2. 00:18:453 (3,4,5) - sudden transition from small spacing into huge spacing doesn't flow very well, also considering that the music is very similar for all 3 of them a massive jump doesn't fit the song imo
  3. 00:56:382 (1) - no need to nc since the style of the stream doesn't really change at all..
  4. 01:01:310 (4,1) - swap NC
[pkhg]
  1. 00:10:167 (4) - would it sound better if it ended on the blue tick? or just silence the end
Ok that's all from me, all the diffs i checked seem really nice c:

good luck! (rip i wanted to shoot a star but i cant cuz its graved lol)
Topic Starter
Arlecchino
ohh sry for letting this map get graveyarded, i'll revive it asap
Izzywing
Hey, NM as requested.

[Xinely's Easy]

00:12:453 (3) - I suggest a NC for this note for emphasis, even if it breaks consistency
01:26:381 (1) - rest of the diffs end the spinner on 01:29:274, so you may want to as well.

Otherwise, looks like a great diff.

[Normal]

00:55:524 (2) - perhaps line up the bend with 00:56:167 (a vocal sound) to fit the song
01:26:381 (1) - end this on 01:29:167 - ?

[Hard]

Nothing specifically for this diff, just I think your spaced triplets sometimes range in spacing, and it might be a good idea to keep the spacing of the spaced triplets (or any stream really) the same in this diff.

[pkhg's Insane]

00:52:524 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this neater, it looks kinda random right now

Really fun diff!

[Gero's Insane]

00:18:881 (4,5) - This spacing feels like a bit too much

Another really fun diff. Love the way you did the combos during the streamy sections.

Can't find anything for Pho's Insane.

Great mapset, sorry that my mod wasn't very long. Couldn't find many problems.
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

Hobbes2 wrote:

Hey, NM as requested.
[Normal]

00:55:524 (2) - perhaps line up the bend with 00:56:167 (a vocal sound) to fit the song i'll try
01:26:381 (1) - end this on 01:29:167 - ? idk, i want to keep consistent with others gd, we'll try discuss about slider end

[Hard]

Nothing specifically for this diff, just I think your spaced triplets sometimes range in spacing, and it might be a good idea to keep the spacing of the spaced triplets (or any stream really) the same in this diff. i dont rly get the problem x.x
Thanks for mod!
Garden
as said so i would mod normal & hard only
[Normal]
  1. ar5 is fairly enough for this bpm and ur note density, and 3->5->7 seems a nice diff spread lol
  2. 00:00:453 (1,2) - overlapping things only a little makes the diff look messy to me, consider rearranging the diff with higher ds + cs3.2-3.5 to leave them untouched, that would make the whole diff neater
  3. 00:21:024 (1) - soft-finish? just like the hard diff
  4. 00:21:667 (2) - 00:23:381 (2) - 00:25:096 (2) - etc. using drum finish on slider head instead? cuz the drums sound consistent in the song and i think it's just better to hitsound that way, would make more sense than the soft whistle imo
  5. 01:19:953 (2,3,4) - the 2,4 stack is probably not super nice for normal players to read, can try something like this to make that more intuitive, tho need some adjustments on the latter objects
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:810 (1) - can probably delete this note and start a 1/1 slider from 00:17:381 - , this pattern would give emphasize to the cymbal sound and a reference beat as well cuz ppl would easily get straight 100 after a break when there comes a note (dt especially)
  2. 00:36:453 (1) - make it a curved one maybe, would make visual flow to 00:37:096 (2) - much better
  3. 00:53:596 (1) - 00:54:239 (3) - 01:00:453 (1) - 01:01:096 (3) - finishes like these can be emphasized with a relatively larger ds, but following the same ds is also ok so it's finally ur choice. ( 01:07:739 (2,3) - yes this is what i exactly mean, then why not there isn't a jump here 01:07:096 (5,1) - ? it feels inconsistent now. )
  4. 01:16:310 (2,3) - this jump makes no sense to me cuz there's nothing worthy of emphasizing imo.. random suggestion
  5. another thing is that i don't get where do u wanna use a spaced triplet and where u don't.. like 00:03:667 (5,6,1) - is featured in the calm part, while a stacked one like 01:03:667 (5,6,1) - is used in the intense kiai part. but.. a spaced triplet is.. literally harder than a stacked one right?
btw hitsounding in hard diff is more consistent it seems, unlike what i mentioned in normal diff, so u can probably consider copying it to ur normal diff~
Topic Starter
Arlecchino

Garden wrote:

as said so i would mod normal & hard only
[Normal]
  1. ar5 is fairly enough for this bpm and ur note density, and 3->5->7 seems a nice diff spread lol k
  2. 00:00:453 (1,2) - overlapping things only a little makes the diff look messy to me, consider rearranging the diff with higher ds + cs3.2-3.5 to leave them untouched, that would make the whole diff neater indeed, but its not the real problem. i need to remap the whole diff if i change the ds
  3. 00:21:024 (1) - soft-finish? just like the hard diff
  4. 00:21:667 (2) - 00:23:381 (2) - 00:25:096 (2) - etc. using drum finish on slider head instead? cuz the drums sound consistent in the song and i think it's just better to hitsound that way, would make more sense than the soft whistle imo
  5. 01:19:953 (2,3,4) - the 2,4 stack is probably not super nice for normal players to read, can try something like this to make that more intuitive, tho need some adjustments on the latter objects i'll try, also adjusting latter objects
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:810 (1) - can probably delete this note and start a 1/1 slider from 00:17:381 - , this pattern would give emphasize to the cymbal sound and a reference beat as well cuz ppl would easily get straight 100 after a break when there comes a note (dt especially) idc about dt plays, i want to end the break here, not on cymbal sound.
  2. 00:36:453 (1) - make it a curved one maybe, would make visual flow to 00:37:096 (2) - much better doesnt affect so much to game play though
  3. 00:53:596 (1) - 00:54:239 (3) - 01:00:453 (1) - 01:01:096 (3) - finishes like these can be emphasized with a relatively larger ds, but following the same ds is also ok so it's finally ur choice. ( 01:07:739 (2,3) - yes this is what i exactly mean, then why not there isn't a jump here 01:07:096 (5,1) - ? it feels inconsistent now. ) well, removes those jump
  4. 01:16:310 (2,3) - this jump makes no sense to me cuz there's nothing worthy of emphasizing imo.. random suggestion i'll try
  5. another thing is that i don't get where do u wanna use a spaced triplet and where u don't.. like 00:03:667 (5,6,1) - is featured in the calm part, while a stacked one like 01:03:667 (5,6,1) - is used in the intense kiai part. but.. a spaced triplet is.. literally harder than a stacked one right? stacked those triplet and adjusting the pattern
btw hitsounding in hard diff is more consistent it seems, unlike what i mentioned in normal diff, so u can probably consider copying it to ur normal diff~ copied hard's hitsounds to normal diff
Thanks for mod!
pkhg

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

[pkhg's Insane]
00:46:310 (4) - remove whistle? guitar


GL ~

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~
[pkhg's Insane]

  1. 00:18:453 (3,4) - The spacing here is pretty small compared to the others in this part, I prefer moving 00:18:881 (4) up a bit for a bigger spacing. the pitch is lower so what i did makes sense
Overall a solid mapset, hope this helps~

Hobbes2 wrote:

[pkhg's Insane]

00:52:524 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this neater, it looks kinda random right now how

Great mapset, sorry that my mod wasn't very long. Couldn't find many problems.
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