Easy00:24:683 (2) - Move up 1 unit with DS on to line it up better with 1.You should also adjust the last move point so that it isn't curved downward as much. Line up 00:25:826 (1,2) - afterward.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2191400:33:254 (1,2,3) - Horizontally flip this and try to mirror 00:28:683 (1,2,3) - ??
00:37:540 (1,2,3,4) - If you chose to do what I described above. Consider vertically flipping these notes and rotating them anti clockwise twice to place them here.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/21915BTW fix up the move points on that slider. It's lumpy in places.
00:42:969 (3,1) - Use standard distance snap here. The pattern is too different to deviate.
00:43:969 (2,3) - Apply distance snap to this too.
00:53:540 (4) - Move to 00:53:683 - and apply distance snap to it. You have some leeway with the spacing into the next combo. So it doesn't have to follow exact distance snapping with the red combo.
00:58:683 (1) - Move up 1 unit.
Normal00:44:683 (3) - Move up 1 unit.
00:46:683 - Please add a note here. It plays so much better.
00:48:397 (2) - Move 1/8th tick back to 00:48:326 -
00:50:683 (2) - Move 1/8th tick back to 00:50:611 - (Reapply distance snap and it plays fine)
00:53:683 (4,1) - Doesn't play right. Make that yellow stream more curved and place it more directly off of the brown combo.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2191701:38:397 (5) - I think this would play better (and conform better to the distance snap) if it was move back to the "to" vocal at 01:38:254 -
Once moved stack 01:39:540 (6) - on the end.
01:39:540 (6,1) - Is there anyway you could reduce this gap some? I feel that it breaks pace too much to hit the red combo.
01:41:683 (1,2,3) - Move down 3 units.
01:42:969 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Move right 1 unit and down 2 units.
01:53:826 (1) - Make part of the red combo?
02:14:398 (3,1) - Meh anti jump. I suggest you conform to distance snap. The snap will place note 1 right on the horizontal axis.
02:15:540 (1,2,3) - Reposition the other notes like this?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2191802:28:111 (4) - Move down 1 unit.
No Hitter's Hard01:38:969 (7,8) - Placed wrongly. Move to the previous blue ticks.
Reposition accordingly. 01:38:826 (7) - stacks nicely on note 6 and the gaps space out nicely.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2192001:41:826 (7,8) - Eh one note is on a beat and the other isn't on any beat. Place both on the previous blue ticks and reapply distance snap.
02:05:254 (3) - Eh that beat is hard to pick up. It sounds like a random tone and thus unmappable. Move this back to the vocal at 02:04:969 -
Hard00:35:254 (2,3) - Line up better??
00:48:826 (4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Apply distance snap to all these. The song has strange timing. It shouldn't have jumps in it. But that's just me.
00:54:397 (2) - Move right 1 unit.
00:55:540 (3) - Move left and down 2 units (Use distance snap)
00:56:112 (1,2,3) - Move up 1 unit.
00:59:826 (5) - Move up 1 unit and right 2 units
01:12:397 (3) - Move down 1 unit. (Either rotate or adjust the first move point to realign it with the previous note. Turn distance snap off if you adjust the move point)
Lots of spacing adjustments to be made. But the maps are in good shape. Star.
IMO ur maps are great.
