-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

m4m as request, i'll do quick scan cuz some reason
first i havent lot of time, and kinda lazy i has just back after long hiatus, so dont expect too much

General

1. you dont need to put a "comma" ( , ) in the tag coulom also some diffs havent a Source, you miss it
2. for CTB AR = OD, so u can should set OD in every diffs same with AR
3. you dont have any SB, so you can uncheck widescreen support in every diffs
4. your Background has 1128x767 , Rankable background for 16:9 is 1366x768 and 1024x768 for 4:3
5. Try to manage the volume, u use 100% volume in all inherited points which it isnt good for your map
6. Try to add Kiai Time in somewhere of your map

Salad I

1. HP Drain 4
2. CS 2,5? is it not too big? is there any reason to you set CS to 2,5, i think 3 such as usual salad is good
   AR = OD
   
   reminder that i used CS3, AR and OD 6,8 when i was mod this salad
   
   
3. 00:13:304 (1,2) - aww isit rly snapped in 1/8 tick? i know what did u follow, but its feels awkward, check ur BPM and offset or ask someone to check it if its the correct BPM and offset or not, i'll continue scan this map with current BPM and offset Changed offset
4. 00:15:109 (5,1,2,3,1) - this isnt good for a Salad, 00:15:295 (1,2,3) - break the flow, and this flow isnt good for salad, try to stack 00:15:295 (1,3) - into
5. 00:15:387 (2) - , yea sth like that Changed!
6. 00:16:776 - you miss this loud sound, try to change 00:16:591 (3) - onto 1/2 slider Changed!!
7. 00:18:072 (1) - u can remove this NC Changed!
8. 00:58:072 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl+h, its still a salad, make it a bit easier for beginner, at least natural flow Changed
9. 01:10:109 - add note? i heard sound here added note
10. 01:10:480 (1) - change into 1/2 slider, the reverse isnt follow anything here it sounds nice This made up rhythm
11. 01:12:609 (2,3) - its kinda follow nothing, idk y this was here this is made up rhythm the next sections copy the same pattern
12. 01:22:147 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i dont catch the rhythm here xd I will look over it again
13. 01:51:221 (8) - stack with (7) and 01:51:406 (9) - put in (10)'s place but move (10) stack with (11) Stacked!
    
    thats all~ i wont pointed details thing
    
    this map still need to be improved, there are a lots of stuff that need to be repaired, but i believe this would be better further

Platter II

• 
  there are 2 diff with same difficulty, as wat i wrote in my queue (although already rip) i'll choose 1 among them to mod

1. AR n OD = 8
2. CS = 3,5 or 4
3. 00:06:777 (2) - move 2 grid to left, for consistent with previous Moved
4. 00:12:147 (1,2,3,4) - ahhh how i need to say bout this,ee.. its seem boring and.. idk, its not big problem just imo it would be better if you ctrl+g'd 00:12:147 (1,2) - , looks more fun to me Yay Fun!
5. 00:16:776 - as wat you did in salad, you miss the sound here, add note or change into 1/2 slider instead? changed to 1/2 slider
6. 00:28:721 (4) - make this more far from (3) moved
7. 00:36:406 (1) - remove reverse, its follow nothing it follows the buzzing noise
8. 00:38:813 (1,2,3,4) - 2 grid to left moved
9. 00:52:887 (1) - change to a circle changed!
10. 00:54:924 (4) - delete? it follows buzzing noise
    
    I cant feels the rhythm in some part, maybe caused of BPM or the offset idk
    Thats all, overall its played well

Rain IV

1. 00:14:369 - missing note good eye
2. 00:17:147 (1) - spiner should be end at 00:18:628 - i guess I mean i guess
3. 00:43:443 (4,5) - hyper bettween those? sure why not
4. 00:51:776 (7,8) - should be a triplet Yup!
5. 01:22:054 (3,4) - those have potential to be hyper, add hyper between those Added H-Dash
   
   its played well but i see that this diff can be more better with some magic, if i check it thorougly it would take more time

And i leaves Overdose cuz i cant even pass it :'3

Thats all from me, hope this help you, sry i cant give lot of suggestions cuz i dont have a lot time to do
GL~

Kyuare wrote:

m4m

General

1. Add a kiai time please, kiai is really important, it gives adrenaline to the player. Kiai brings hype?
2. Use 1024*768 for the BackGround, I made it for you: http://puu.sh/oJu08/0f7f04ac91.jpg You da Real MVP TwT
3. Add かめりあto artist, keep Camellia in romanised LOL What does that even say, it could say "Dick" For all i know
4. Add them in your tags: Masaya Oya 大箭マサヤ Oh god more words i cant read
5. CS3 for Platter is so big, try CS3.5 and CS3 fo the Salad Sure!
6. AR9.5 for two different difficulty is weird, try AR9.2-9.3 for Overdose, AR9.4-9.6 for Deluge

Yup!

Rain

1. 00:15:866 (4) - This slider is too far and player will shitmiss here, try to move it to x:304 it fits well
2. 00:22:348 (4,5) - no need to add a H dash here, bring closer 00:22:348 (4,5) -
3. 00:48:274 - You can add a circle here, try x:352
4. 01:19:755 (7,1) - This jump is really cancer, bring closer 01:19:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - by moving 01:19:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - to x:256
5. 01:23:644 (1,2) - Can be much funnier, add more distance by moving to x: 480, don't forget to fix 01:23:922 (3) - to x:304 and 01:24:477 (4) - to x:216 to make it more consistent.
6. 01:28:366 (1,2) - Cancer spacing here too, add a H Dash to help the player please.
7. 01:29:107 (1,2,3,4,5) - For ALL streams like this, try to improve them to have a nice shape, here you can move 01:29:200 (2) - to x:160. 01:30:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is well made.
8. 01:31:329 (1,2,3,4) - It flows so bad, try something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5099721
9. 01:32:811 (2,3,4) - Try to make it cleaner like you've done for 01:33:181 (2,3,4) - I made an example for you: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5099764

Made All Changes to IV!!


Overdose

1. 00:41:608 (1,2,3,4,5) - It can be cleaner, like for the rain, try to move 00:41:608 (1) - to x:176
2. 00:43:275 (2,3) - Here you add an unjustified jump, all your jumps must be justified by a strong beat, you can add a circle to 00:43:644 - and 00:43:737 (1) - must start by the blue tic, try something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5099954
3. 00:47:302 (3) - Big timeline problem, why did you map in 1/8 ? Use 1/4 timeline, it start by a blue tic here, same for 00:47:626 (8,1) - , 00:47:224 (5,6) - are on 1/6 tics, I've made an example for you: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5099998
   Same thing for 00:48:460 (3) - use 25% playback rate if you're not sure.
4. 00:54:386 (3) - This slider is just too far, the player must learn it to pass it, move it to x:64 to make the spacing more accessible
5. 00:57:349 (1,2,3,4,5) - I have a good idea for this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5100043
6. 00:58:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to make something similar, the flow will be much better.
7. 01:22:349 (2) - You could make something really fun, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5099850
8. 01:22:996 (7) - Same thing, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5099870
9. 01:23:275 (1) - This antiflow is not really fun, I think Ctrl+G would make it much better
10. 01:24:664 (1,2) - This jump is just too hard, move 01:24:941 (2) - to x:304, it will be more playable.
11. 01:25:126 (3) - You can add a H Dash here, the flow will be much better, try to Ctrl+H it

Made All Changes to V!!



Deluge

1. 00:19:571 (3,4,5,6) - I love it Delete it? Ok!
2. 00:47:210 (1) - 1/6 tic here
3. 01:22:349 (1,2) - Here you can add a H Dash, move 01:22:349 (1) - to x:144
4. 01:35:404 (5,1) - Cancer spacing here, bring closer 01:35:589 (1) - to 01:35:960 (2) - please
5. 01:41:238 (3,1) - Same thing, bring closer 01:41:515 (1) - to 01:41:237 (3) - like x:256

Made All Changes to VI!!

Dyskl wrote:

Hi xi-False ! I'm doing a mod with Kyuare but be warned I'm not nice, I'm straight and my english is not really good !

3 Colors :

Problems
Propositions
Big problems (praticly never used)

I (Salad)

00:13:320 (1) - This slider doesn't start when he should starts, he starts on a 1/8 tick : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5099524 he should starts on the red tick Changed!

00:13:690 (2) - Same for this circle he stats on a 1/8 tick. Make it starts on the red tick just before.

00:14:014 (3,4) - Those two doesn't fit very well with the song behind. I did some changes with 1/8 and like that :https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5099601 and it fit really better ! You should try by yourself you'll see. Changed!

00:19:755 (3) - Here the second shock doesn't start here but a tick before, here : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5099620 and you should actualy put a third slider because there is a third shock, for this pattern I would recommend you to do like that : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5099667 , you don't need to force a dash right here, but you should put a third slider that's what I'm trying to convince you here xD

00:28:829 (1) - Just before this circle (listen with 50% to understand me) there is a not that should be here, it'll fit better with the music, like that : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5099710 , in the middle to let the player dash Changed!

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5099727 Why there is no circle here ? There is a drop.. you should put one like I did. added note

01:32:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - There the stream should continue after the 1, like that : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5099773 Changed!

Ok now let's move on to the difficulty,

00:16:607 (3,1) - Here there is a drop but the player don't know if he needs to dash or not, actualy he doesn't reallly need because he can pass it without dash but sometimes if the player doesn't have any luck he will miss. You should up the spacing between those two by a bit to show that the player must dash to get it.

There is not enough dashes in your salad so I'll show you some places where you could put one or two because here your salad is too easy actualy.

00:39:014 (3,1,2) - Here you can up the distance between the slider 3 and 1 by moving the slider 1 to the right, the player will have to dash between the slider 3 and 1, and the slider 1 and 2. And if you do that you'll have to do this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5099871

00:40:681 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - You can move all this pattern a bit to the right to make a dash between the slider 3 and the circle 4 (a little one, don't up it too much)

00:41:977 (1) - By moving this circle a bit to the right you'll make a dash to introduce the next pattern etc. Changed!

00:44:200 (1,2) - It's a good place to put a dash here just by moving the slider 1 a bit to the left and make the slider 2 be straight like I showed you here : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5099871 Changed!

00:48:459 (1,2) - You can move the slider 1 a bit to the right to make a dash between the two sliders.

00:50:774 (3,4,5) - By moving the circle 5 like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5099945 the player will have to dash to get it, not like the old one . seems good!

00:52:533 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can move this stream a bit to the right to make a dash here too.

00:53:829 (2) - You can move the slider 2 a bit to the right to make the player dash because here, if he doesn't dash he'll get it anyway

The end is the most important part of the map, it's well mapped but there is not enough movements so I think you should try to find some places to put dashes and change a bit your patterns to make the plate move more than here. I'll show you some for exemple but you'll try by yourself to find what you like the most because I'm not in your head x)

First of all before I try to show you some exemple of movements that you could make at the end there is a circle that I don't like lmao : 01:10:866 (2) - Pliz put it a bit to the right that's making a little just a little little little space between the circle 2 and the slider 3 :') Changed!

Just by moving those two 01:10:496 (1,4) - a bit to the left like that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5100063 make some movements witch is great, that's what we want.

So I had an idea, I'll show you a place and show you with a screen what I did so you can try by yourself because talking and talking, it's a bit boring lol :

01:24:477 (4,5,6) - : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5100096

01:25:403 (2,3,4,1) - : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5100109

01:26:885 (2,3,4,1) - : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5100118 These changes seem good but it;s not that big of a change so I'll leave it as is

I think I'm gonna stop here, I'm not going to do all the map sorry^^ But I think you understand me now !

II (Platter)

00:16:238 (4,5) - Timing problem here, there is 3 shocks here and you start the second slider where there is nothing. Like the salad try to do a pattern with 3 sliders or something like that (yeah I searched a long time :') ) : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5100198 Changed!

00:20:126 (2,3,4) - Sometimes you map and sometimes you don't map this sound behind, it's a bit weird but you don't want to repeat yourself witch is good, I'm just showing this here because I want to show you another pattern that will be better for this moment than a straight line : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5100286 , it fit better with the music in my opinion.

00:26:423 (1,2) - I don't think we need this space between those sliders, you can pass it without dashing but you don't really know if you need to dash or not, You should probably nerf the distance. Nerfed!

00:40:126 (1,2,3,4) - Like the salad there is not enough movement, and you must find some places to put them like here. I found a pattern here that would fit perfectly with the moment : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5100360

00:44:756 (2,3,4,5,1) - Still not enough movement. A dash here would be nice (between 5 and 1) you should move a bit the slider 1 to the left and make it straight, a bit like that : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5100398

00:48:275 (3) - Here peoples will sometimes miss because the space is too big right here, I don't think that we need a dash here. I propose you this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5100434 (I show you patterns because I don't think that you'll understand me if I'm trying to explain you what I was thinking about xD)

00:48:645 (4,5,6) - Here you can do a lot of things, but you just did a straight line where you don't even need to dash and I don't think it's a good thing with the music behind. This time I propose you this pattern : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5100464 Changed!

00:52:349 (2,3) - There is something missing here, I don't think those two sliders are the best way to do this moment. Let me propose you a pattern AGAIN :') : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5100493 Changed!

00:56:052 (2,3,4,5) - Same here, no movement. An exemple of what you could do : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5100513

01:08:830 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe it's the start but a line straight like that could be better. Like with a little left right it would be funnier (like that : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5100707 x) ) Changed!

01:15:312 (1) - until here : 01:34:015 (1) - There is not enough movement just like the salad exept that at the end it's really good ! The best way to fix that in my opinion would be to expand some pattern or streams and make them move more, for exemple this one : 01:19:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you could do it like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5100800 and then continue like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5100803 it fit very well with the song and start the kiai really well ! Then try to do the same with others stream to make them move a bit more (don't put more hyper just some movement, some dashes and all that stuff it'll be more funnier !)

changed!

This mod took me a lot of time, I'm a bit bored right now xD I'm sorry, I'll do the III later. There is not many things but I really tried to innove your map because they have to be innoved so I searched a lot for patterns and all that stuff at your place. All the patterns I showed you here, I tried them myself and I mapped them the most perfect as possible so if you want to do them again I have a save of your map with the changes that I did, pliz PM me I'll give you the save. Or if you want me to put it here xD.

The save of the Platter :')

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368,144,41608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,41793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,256,42164,5,0,0:0:0:0:
80,208,42256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,160,42349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,224,42534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,176,42719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,128,42904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,43089,5,0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,43275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,160,43460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,144,43645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,272,44201,6,0,L|112:272,2,90
320,176,44756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,176,44849,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,44941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,128,45034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,288,45312,6,0,L|8:288,1,45
208,192,45589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,200,45867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,208,46238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,160,46608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,208,47256,5,0,0:0:0:0:
160,176,47349,2,0,L|320:176,3,135
384,216,48275,2,0,P|440:192|480:176,1,90
368,192,48645,2,0,L|272:192,1,90
112,192,49015,2,0,L|240:192,1,90
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160,288,50682,5,0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,50775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,224,50867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,176,50960,2,0,L|272:176,1,135
432,208,51423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,160,51515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,128,51608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,320,51793,6,0,P|176:272|176:192,1,180
440,224,52348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,192,52440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,128,52533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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144,104,52903,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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336,192,54941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,55126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,304,56052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,240,56238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,208,56330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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96,192,56978,5,0,0:0:0:0:
160,272,57349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,272,57441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,272,57534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,272,57626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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160,208,58089,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,208,58274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,208,58366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,208,58459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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368,192,64386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,224,68830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,216,69201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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160,288,70312,5,0,0:0:0:0:
96,240,70497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,160,70682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,71330,5,0,0:0:0:0:
336,352,71608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,320,71793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,256,71978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,208,72164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,112,72349,6,0,L|83:112,2,45
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144,352,73089,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,304,73275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,224,73460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,144,73645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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32,304,78275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,256,78367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,224,78460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,336,78830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,336,78923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,288,79015,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,79201,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,176,79293,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,176,79386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,79478,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,352,79664,5,0,0:0:0:0:
344,344,79756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,304,79849,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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328,160,80126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,168,80312,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,216,80404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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248,296,80589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,288,80682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,264,80775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,208,80867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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104,216,81052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,152,81145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,88,81238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,72,81330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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440,144,81515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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368,24,81793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,16,81886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,16,81978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,16,82071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,96,83367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,83460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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96,288,87626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,272,87719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,240,87812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,87904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,144,87997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,88089,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,336,89108,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,304,89201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,89293,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,208,89386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,176,89478,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,89756,6,0,L|400:160,1,45
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384,288,90589,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,256,90682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,208,90775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,90867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,90960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,112,91052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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432,240,92071,5,0,0:0:0:0:
464,208,92164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,160,92256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,128,92349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,92534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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352,208,94015,5,0,0:0:0:0:
96,224,94386,2,0,L|128:176,1,45
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432,288,96701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,288,96793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,224,96978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,192,98275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,176,98460,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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208,256,99201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,224,99293,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,176,99386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,192,99571,5,0,0:0:0:0:
496,144,99664,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,112,99756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,99941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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96,304,101145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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416,192,101793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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464,240,102626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,208,102719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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264,208,110497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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1. Change the background image tbh. i imagine more of a calm song that goes with it.
2. are the countdown diff names necessary? they would work fine without the numbers in my opinion.
3. Overall Difficulty should have the same value as the Approach Rate across all the difficulties. Source
   And someone even pointed it out in a previous mod, pay attention XD
4. Change preview point to 01:21:422 - works better there.
5. across all difficulties, you shjould add a break between 00:17:163 - and 00:19:200 - and also between 00:20:126 - and 00:22:348 - and also between 00:58:644 - and 01:08:644 - (just do what you did for all diffs like you did with the cup for this one) i feel like there's not enough sound to backup the notes, plus it makes more sense to follow the bass kick instead of the melody at this part just because the kick is louder. i'm saying this here becuase i'd rather not repeat myself across all the diffs.

1. 00:15:681 (1) - avoid using vertical shapes like that, creates a stack and makes it too easy and boring.
2. 00:41:607 - could fill this empty space.
3. 00:53:829 (2) - shorten this slider a little bit so it follow the kick better, try to make your notes follow the kick because it's pretty loud and makes more sense to follow it.
   

1. 00:39:478 - this part could be worked on better, the notes don't reaaaally follow the rythm and the strong kick.
2. 00:45:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - same here too, the kick is pretty loud but the notes don't really back it up at all.
3. 01:20:960 (1) - maybe a little too difficult there and for the next 3 combo streams for a platter. make it a little simpler.
   

1. 00:46:422 - strong kick there but no notes?
2. 01:25:034 (7,1) - only going to highlight this one part since it re-occures throughout this drop. I would avoid having this tiny empty space, for a Platter+ there should constantly be notes to make everything a little harder and funner. and i;ve noticed that when i first played it with DTHD, felt kinda weird to have this mili second empty space there. so yeah watch out for those throughout this part of the song.
3. 01:50:682 (2) - could use a triple instead of a slider since you can hear a triple-ish sound there.

1. 00:16:237 (1,2,3) - really emphasize the kick there, make it work
2. 00:28:737 (2) - move a little to the left so it would flow better with these kinds of jumps.
   
3. 00:39:570 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - everything there is happening on the right side of the screen D: make it a little more spread out.
4. 00:58:459 (5) - move all the way to the left so it would make a better jump from 4 to 5.
5. 01:33:737 (1) - remove spinner XD
   

1. 00:05:126 (1,2,1,1) - dont make those so stacked, make a little jump there. and make the combo 1,2,1,2

klonoa wrote:

m4m
i'm not a professional mapper/modder XD so pretty much i give you my opinions and what makes more sense for me.

[General]

1. Change the background image tbh. i imagine more of a calm song that goes with it.
2. are the countdown diff names necessary? they would work fine without the numbers in my opinion. Actually I'm going to take off the Difficulty names once it's close to getting ranked I put the default names so people will know what's what.
3. Overall Difficulty should have the same value as the Approach Rate across all the difficulties. Ok!Source
   And someone even pointed it out in a previous mod, pay attention XD Lol sometimes i just forget once i get to the end of the mod
4. Change preview point to 01:21:422 - works better there. I like how the Preview point is
5. across all difficulties, you shjould add a break between 00:17:163 - and 00:19:200 - and also between 00:20:126 - and 00:22:348 - and also between 00:58:644 - and 01:08:644 - (just do what you did for all diffs like you did with the cup for this one) i feel like there's not enough sound to backup the notes, plus it makes more sense to follow the bass kick instead of the melody at this part just because the kick is louder. i'm saying this here because I'd rather not repeat myself across all the diffs.

it feels really empty when i do that, I will most likely change it if another person suggests it

[Salad]
change to:
AR:7 Changed!
OD:7 ^
Huge lack of usage for the dash button, i only ever had to use it at 01:25:403 (2,3) - , you dont have to make too many jumps and dash jumps, but i find that this diff felt a little too easy. added more Dashes

1. 00:15:681 (1) - avoid using vertical shapes like that, creates a stack and makes it too easy and boring. made it more horizontal
2. 00:41:607 - could fill this empty space. Added slider
3. 00:53:829 (2) - shorten this slider a little bit so it follow the kick better, try to make your notes follow the kick because it's pretty loud and makes more sense to follow it. made it shorter

the kiai time was fun and i didnt really find anything wrong :D

[Platter]
change to:
AR:8
OD:8

1. 00:39:478 - this part could be worked on better, the notes don't reaaaally follow the rythm and the strong kick. Changed!
2. 00:45:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - same here too, the kick is pretty loud but the notes don't really back it up at all. Changed!
3. 01:20:960 (1) - maybe a little too difficult there and for the next 3 combo streams for a platter. make it a little simpler. Nerfed!

It feels way harder than it actually is? plays really nice though. nice job on this one

[Platter adv.]
super fun with DTHD
change to:
AR:8.5
OD:8.5
HP:6

1. 00:46:422 - strong kick there but no notes? added note!
2. 01:25:034 (7,1) - only going to highlight this one part since it re-occures throughout this drop. I would avoid having this tiny empty space, for a Platter+ there should constantly be notes to make everything a little harder and funner. and i;ve noticed that when i first played it with DTHD, felt kinda weird to have this mili second empty space there. so yeah watch out for those throughout this part of the song. Changed!
3. 01:50:682 (2) - could use a triple instead of a slider since you can hear a triple-ish sound there.

I would make it into a triplet but I want to create that Dash from the slider to the note!

[Rain]
change to:
CS:4 Changed!

1. 00:16:237 (1,2,3) - really emphasize the kick there, make it work Good idea Deleted and changed!
2. 00:28:737 (2) - move a little to the left so it would flow better with these kinds of jumps. Ok!
   
3. 00:39:570 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - everything there is happening on the right side of the screen D: make it a little more spread out. Spread it out more
4. 00:58:459 (5) - move all the way to the left so it would make a better jump from 4 to 5. Alright!
5. 01:33:737 (1) - remove spinner XD LoL DaFuq!! xD I blame my past Self.....

[Overdose]
change to:
OD:9.3

1. 00:05:126 (1,2,1,1) - dont make those so stacked, make a little jump there. and make the combo 1,2,1,2

Lol honestly ive been meaning to change the start of this overdose since i hated how it was made and it triggers me everytime i see it, but i always just forgot!

[Deluge]
change to:
OD:9.6 Fixed and for all the other maps too!
HP:6 Changed!

i'm not really good at modding Overdose and + so i won't touch the 2 last diffs.
Really good job at mapping this and i love your determination!
Good luck with your mapping future

Shadow131999123 wrote:

Hello xi-False! I am new to mapping, but i hope you enjoy my mods and find them useful.

Salad I

00:13:366 (1,2) - Move these notes to the red tick, at 00:13:274 (1,2) - Changed!
00:08:088 (3) - Makes this the combo that comes after it, not the blue. Changed!
00:23:274 (1,2) - These notes should stay yellow, and not turn purple. I think you mean not a NC well, i will change it!
00:40:681 (4) - New Combo Here. added new combo!

Platter II

01:08:459 - Maybe Add a note here or Remove the note here 01:09:201 (3) - . I just thought it sounded a little awkward. Yea that section is awkward changed it!
00:40:682 (5,6) - Make These notes the yellow color that comes after, not green. Took off NC
00:48:645 (4) - New combo here. Added NC
00:52:349 (2) - New combo here. ^
01:37:256 (6) - New combo!^

Exothermia wrote:

I hate to be one of those who tells a mapper to do this and that as an order when it's their map, and not the modders. It's the modders job to come with ideas and solutions to improve the map, not make it their own. I have no idea how to link note placements as I am new. If anyone could explain how, that'd be appriciated a bunch <3. Used screenshots instead. Here are my suggestions.

Rain

I highly suggest flipping 00:57:348 (1,2,3,4,5) - horizontally and increase the distance between 4 and 5 as it looks better and feels a bit more nice in my opinion. Example http://imgur.com/6ID6eLl Changed!!

Overdose

I had no problems at all with this diff. Good job <3 Thank you

Deluge

I got a few suggestions.
00:19:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - At this point the Overdose for some reason has a better solution, as it does not entirely enforce you to stay still and just dash. An idea could be something like http://imgur.com/t7emLuj Reason being is that the map further on is rather control heavy, and standing still and dashing at this part doesn't "prepare" you for what is to come. I highly suggest doing something of the sort for both as it fits the map a bit better. I tried it out but I like my way better

00:44:756 (4,5,6) - To encourage more movement I would suggest making it something like http://imgur.com/Ud1MSn5 as it goes along with the 00:42:164 (5) - slider. I often see triples going 45 degrees to Left/Right or they're stacked, and that becomes extremely boring when it's the only solution for the tripples. Some parts it fits the map well and goes with the flow while other times it could be different. Added more movement!

00:57:349 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Let's try not to overdo this. So suggested change would be changing 00:58:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - to something like http://imgur.com/28bytte that change would be perfectly fine but I like the repetitiveness of that part, to me it feets better being that this section has similar beats back to back!

CelegaS wrote:

Here my mod

VI (Deluge)

VI (Deluge)

1. 00:16:238 (2) - This fruits is hard to catch because hdash to the previous fruit is super fast. I miss read the timing between 00:15:867 (4,1) this slider and circle so I dash too long and miss 00:16:238 (2). You can do something like that http://puu.sh/patB5/ca60450d89.jpg easier to read. I want it to be hard!
2. 00:16:515 - Strong beat I think you can add a circle at x:272 Good looking out added note!
3. 00:53:552 (2) - This one has not the same angle than the 2 others. I think you can make 00:53:275 (1,2,3) - longer ingame Made longer!
4. 00:57:349 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - It's simple but nice Thanks you c:
5. 00:57:534 (3) - Not allowed when you come by hdashing. It's at least x:16 (actualy 8). Need to move 00:57:349 (1,2,3,4,5) to x:344. Moved!
6. 00:58:274 (3) - ^ It's at most to x:496. Need to move 00:58:089 (1,2,3,4,5) to x:168 Moved!
7. 01:10:682 (1,2) - Slider 1's end is at x:8 so move this two sliders at least to x:88. I hit sometime the border of playfield. Changed!
8. 01:13:089 (4) - Hard to read and I hit often the border (because it's hard to read I think). Move it more to the right. Wow your right changed!
9. 01:24:108 (3) - ^ Move at least x:16. You are not mapping major beats but I think it can be interesting to map them by this way https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5276332 (inscrease difficulty) or this way https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5276354 (less difficult than previous way). Here all beat that can be mapped, 01:26:978, 01:27:348, 01:28:459, 01:28:829, 01:29:755, 01:30:126, 01:30:496, 01:35:496, 01:35:866, 01:36:237, 01:38:459, 01:38:829. You can just map some of them (or none), some can be inappropriate or can destroy some pattern. Changed it similar to first photo really good suggestion 10/10!
   
10. 01:27:071 (2) - Slider's end out of playfield lol. Move at most x:344 Changed!
11. 01:30:960 (4) - Move at least x:16 Changed!
12. 01:38:182 (4) - ^ ^
13. 01:36:515 (1) - Move at least x:24 (end is at x:8) Changed!
14. 01:50:775 (2) - make this having prev and next at 1.21 it will prevent from shitmiss. I really like that part :^)

V (Overdose)

V (Overdose)

1. 00:15:960 (2) - end at x:508 so move slider at most x:456 Changed!
2. 01:42:071 (7) - end out of playfield. Move at most x:432 Changed!

Not found issue as this Overdose is supposed to be less mapped than Deluge.

IV (Rain)

IV (Rain)

1. 00:39:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - "Combos should not exceed 16 objects including slider tails and repeats." 22 here so I suggest NC 00:41:422 (7) Changed, added 2 NC's

It feel good. Thanks man!!

III (Platter Advanced)

III (Platter Advanced)

1. 00:51:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Here 13 combo and it should not exceed 12 for platter. Added NC
2. 00:58:459 (5) - This king of pattern is not allowed because this fruit is too close to a playfield border as I said earlier. I think it's fine because there is no fruit after. im not sure what to do
3. 01:38:645 (2) - Slider repetition is out of playfield. Move it to x:416 Moved!

II (Platter)

II (Platter)

1. 00:58:459 (5) - Same as in III (Platter Advanced) same circle. Im not sure how to change it xD
2. 01:26:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Here 16 combo. Suggest NC 01:27:626 (5) Added NC!
3. 01:38:645 (2) - Same as in III (Platter Advanced) same slider Changed Pattern!

I (Salad)

I (Salad)

1. 01:10:496 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here 11 combo and it should not exceed 10 for salad. Suggest 5 goes to next combo group
2. 01:29:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ I suggest NC 01:30:403 (3)
3. 01:34:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ I suggest NC 01:35:033 (3)
4. 01:36:329 (3) - NC for same reason ^
5. 01:37:811 (2) - ^
6. 01:39:570 (6) - ^
   
   All Changed!
   

For any problem you can pm me!

willia02 wrote:

General

1. No need to add "," coma at tags.
2. Uncheck the widescreen support in every diffs.
3. Tags conflict, make sure to make it same in every diffs.

4. -[ Asuna ]- wrote:

   "your Background has 1128x767 , Rankable background for 16:9 is 1366x768 and 1024x768 for 4:3

5. Use "かめりあ" as the artist name and use "Camellia" as the romanised artist name. (Change it in every diffs).

Salad (I)

Resnap

1. 00:39:107 (3) - Slider end isn't snapped.
2. 01:28:088 (1) - Slider end isn't snapped.

3. -[ Asuna ]- wrote:

   " 00:13:304 (1,2) - aww isit rly snapped in 1/8 tick? i know what did u follow, but its feels awkward, check ur BPM and offset or ask someone to check it if its the correct BPM and offset or not, i'll continue scan this map with current BPM and offset"

   Oh so this is just not me. (Sorry Asuna, I didn't change anything at your quote)
4. 00:58:644 - until 01:09:478 - maybe you can add sliders if you want to kill break time.

Basic Platter (II)

Space

1. 01:27:626 (1,2) - Spacing.
   

   -[ Asuna ]- wrote:

   "I cant feels the rhythm in some part, maybe caused of BPM or the offset idk."

   Yeah I can't feel the kick beat at 00:25:866 - until 00:29:015 - .

Advance Platter (III)

Resnap

1. 00:06:609 (2) - Snap this object.
2. 00:06:794 (3) - Snap this object.

Space

1. 00:10:867 (3,4,5) - Space this to make a pattern.
2. 00:52:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Space this to make a pattern.

Rain (IV)

I found nothing wrong here.

Overdose (V)

Overmapped

1. 01:02:164 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Should be removed or just want to kill break time?
2. 00:21:052 (1,2,3,4) - Overmapped beats.
3. 00:18:089 (1,2,3,4) - Overmapped beats. maybe you can change it into sliders.

Resnap

1. 00:38:892 (4,5) - Snap this.

Deluge (VI)

Space

1. 00:25:682 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Screenshot
2. 01:15:960 (2,3) - Fix the spacing.
3. 01:20:034 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - This one.
4. 01:42:719 (3,4) - and this one too.
5. 01:43:182 (3,4) - and 01:43:645 (4,5) - Edit: This one is okay since it make the Hyperdash easier if the end of combo near with new combo.

Resnap

1. 00:35:373 (1,2) - Snap this. Edit: This one need new timing because it can't sync with the music if the note snapped.
2. 00:37:472 (2,3,4) - Snap this.

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Hibari wrote:

Camellia - Proluvies

General
Add "REFLEC BEAT groovin'!!" in Source

V
You need change the OD here; because AR is 9.3 you need put OD in 9.3

00:14:015 (1,2) - this spacing is so high for the beginning of the map, maybe you should reduce the distance. 00:14:756 (2) - in x:248 is better i thinks
00:36:978 (4,5) - you should reduce the distance a bit here , try 00:37:164 (5) - in x:192
01:26:608 (3,4,1) - this spacing is hard and not really justified, reduce the distance with each fruit
01:31:701 (2) - move this in x:96 for add hyperdash is not bad i thinks

Made all Changes to V

VI
00:16:515 (4,5) - The jump is not comfortable; you should move the stream 00:16:608 (5,6,7,8) - to the right of the screen, example : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5281219 yea moving it there make its more smooth!
00:44:756 (4,5,6) - you should rotate this for add more diversity on your map, example : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5281246 I like how it is because it forces the player to do a zigzag pattern!
00:50:960 (5) - better if you moving a bit this fruit to the right, try in x:272 Moved!

Super fun map and camellia is a great artist, so nice job and goodluck for ranking

willia02 wrote:

I add some new mod on it so please read that again.

General

1. No need to add "," coma at tags. Changed!
2. Uncheck the widescreen support in every diffs. Changed!
3. Tags conflict, make sure to make it same in every diffs. Changed!

4. -[ Asuna ]- wrote:

   "your Background has 1128x767 , Rankable background for 16:9 is 1366x768 and 1024x768 for 4:3

5. Use "‚©‚ß‚è‚ " as the artist name and use "Camellia" as the romanised artist name. (Change it in every diffs). someone gave me the background i have on now. he said his is also rankable. lol what do i do

Salad (I)

Resnap

1. 00:39:107 (3) - Slider end isn't snapped. Changed!
2. 01:28:088 (1) - Slider end isn't snapped. Changed!

3. -[ Asuna ]- wrote:

   " 00:13:304 (1,2) - aww isit rly snapped in 1/8 tick? i know what did u follow, but its feels awkward, check ur BPM and offset or ask someone to check it if its the correct BPM and offset or not, i'll continue scan this map with current BPM and offset"

   Oh so this is just not me. (Sorry Asuna, I didn't change anything at your quote)
4. 00:58:644 - until 01:09:478 - maybe you can add sliders if you want to kill break time.

Basic Platter (II)

Space

1. 01:27:626 (1,2) - Spacing. changed! Changed!
   

   -[ Asuna ]- wrote:

   "I cant feels the rhythm in some part, maybe caused of BPM or the offset idk."

   Yeah I can't feel the kick beat at 00:25:866 - until 00:29:015 - .

Advance Platter (III)

Resnap

1. 00:06:609 (2) - Snap this object. Changed!
2. 00:06:794 (3) - Snap this object. Changed!

Space

1. 00:10:867 (3,4,5) - Space this to make a pattern. I believe i already changed this last time
2. 00:52:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Space this to make a pattern. same here

Rain (IV)

I found nothing wrong here.

Overdose (V)

Overmapped

1. 01:02:164 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Should be removed or just want to kill break time? Yeaa killing break time
2. 00:21:052 (1,2,3,4) - Overmapped beats. I Like how these are
3. 00:18:089 (1,2,3,4) - Overmapped beats. maybe you can change it into sliders. ^

Resnap

1. 00:38:892 (4,5) - Snap this.

Changed!

Deluge (VI)

Space

1. 00:25:682 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Screenshot lol changed it
2. 01:15:960 (2,3) - Fix the spacing. fixed spacing!
3. 01:20:034 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - This one. same here
4. 01:42:719 (3,4) - and this one too. I like how it is
5. 01:43:182 (3,4) - and 01:43:645 (4,5) - Edit: This one is okay since it make the Hyperdash easier if the end of combo near with new combo.

Resnap

1. 00:35:373 (1,2) - Snap this. Edit: This one need new timing because it can't sync with the music if the note snapped. snapped into place
2. 00:37:472 (2,3,4) - Snap this.

changed

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1. Please uncheck widescreen support.
2. Please change combo colour that suitable with BG.
3. Important: if you really want to get this ranked, please delete 2 diff from this maps. No need to make 2 overdose remove the last one & remove also II or III. Depend on you, its will make modders easy to mod with only 4 diff. Recently, there is a lot of PP CtB maps, to me its not necessary to make a lot of diff in one maps. If you still want that diff, there's nothing I can do. Please consider.
4. I will mod 4 potential diff in this maps, regarding spread, star rating, pattern & others.
5. I'm not good with hitsounding but you know that your hitsound is not consistent with all diff, please make some improvement.

1. HP Drain Rate: 3 & Circle Size: 3.
2. 00:07:163 - I think this beat same as 00:06:237 (1) - this. Maybe you can put note 00:07:163 - here.
3. 00:13:089 - ^.
4. 00:15:681 (1) - split this into hitcircle and slider.
5. 00:16:237 (2) - make this hitcircle & 00:16:422 - this until 00:16:978 - this, you can make a long slider.
6. 00:25:681 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - why not you only map strong beat here.
7. 00:28:459 (3) - I can't hear strong beat here, please remove.
8. 00:34:755 - start a long slider here until 00:35:403 - here, 00:35:496 - make this a slider until 00:35:681 - here.
9. 00:37:718 - make a slider until 00:38:274 - here, 00:38:274 (1) - the tail of this slider make it a hitcircle.
10. I will stop here, please make sure to map suitable and potential beats. Its kinda unstable tho.

1. HP Drain Rate: 4, AR = OD: 8
2. 00:08:089 - I can hear sound here.
3. 00:16:792 - strong beat here.
4. 00:26:052 (4) - move to x:328 & 00:26:238 (5) - move to x:440.
5. 00:57:349 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - you can create many shape to represent this stream.
6. 01:51:052 (3,4) - too far, please reduce some distance.
7. Overall this diff is good but you can sharpen the pattern at the beginning a little bit.

1. HP Drain Rate: 5
2. 00:22:348 (4,5) - this pattern is so ugly, please maintain the same as 00:19:385 (1,2,3) - this.
3. 00:57:348 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - you can create different pattern here, not just horizontal stream.
4. 01:19:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make this closer a little bit to 01:19:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - here.
5. Still okay, playable.

1. 00:14:015 (1) - please make this more horizontal because the lack of movement here is so awkward.
2. 00:23:275 (1) - what with this cute pattern, just make it horizontal.
3. 00:28:089 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - this part is so hard & easy to miss, please change to easier pattern.
4. 00:54:386 (3,1) - please reduce some distance with these two sliders.
5. 00:56:515 (3) - move to x:160.
6. 01:17:071 (1,2,3,1,2) - this pattern is weird, consider make it more horizontal.
   01:39:108 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - please change this into the shape of reverse slider, like 01:39:201 (3) - move to x:128 & 01:39:571 (6) - move to x:496.
7. 01:50:126 (1,2,3) - this pattern is easy to miss, please move 01:50:312 (2) - this to x:240.
8. Please gather more mods on higher diff.

RoseusJaeger wrote:

M4M from chat. Take my mod with a grain of salt. Also, my computer crashed while modding it the first time so if it seems rushed, I was trying to get back all the progress I'd made the first time around.
This was fun to testplay.
If after you get another mod and none of the spacing issues I saw were not pointed out by other modders, I might come back. It'll depend if I have time and am not suffering because of a severe cold.

General

After test playing, the spread makes sense now.

Make sure your metadata is the same on all your diffs. The artist name conflicts on the higher diff. Alright i believe its correct now!

You don't need commas to separate your tags when spaces already do. took out the commas

Check AiMod in all diffs, you have some unsnapped notes/sliders and inherited points not snapped from what I saw.

BG needs to be resized to 1366 x 768 to be rankable.

Uncheck “Widescreen Support” on all maps since you don't have a storyboard. unchcked widescreen

Add combo colors? That's always fun. Added combo colors!


I

Hard patterns for a Salad diff. Spacing is a problem, too. I might get nazi-ish with spacing because I want it to flow better. May need to increase grid level to make the changes.

Im not sure what 1.20x is im big noob so here it goes!

00:05:125 (1,2) – Make the spacing 1.20x Changed!
00:05:496 (2,1) – Make spacing 1.00x Changed!
00:06:237 (1,2) – Make it 1.20x Changed!
00:07:718 (2,3) – Make it 1.00x Moved around!
00:08:088 (3,1) – Make it 1.50x Im not sure if i changed correctly
00:08:274 (1,2) – Make it 0.50x I like the spacing of these notes, its weird cause 5 1/4 ticks apart
00:16:607 (3,1) – Make it 2.50x because the jump is hard to read for a newer player. I changed it my way made it easier
00:20:125 (1) – Lower volume on this slider because it doesn't have much emphasis. lowerd Volume!
00:21:237 (2,3,4) – It's hard to read a dash stream in a Salad, make the spacing 1.00x or 1.20x Nerfed!
00:22:163 (1,2) – Make it 1.50x or 1.20x Changed to 1.10x
00:22:903 (3,4,1,2) - Make it 1.20x between each. made it easier by making it 1.10x
00:23:459 (2,3) – Make it 0.80x Changed too 0.80x
Okay, I'm done getting nazi-ish with spacing unless you wanna fix it yourself. (I'm lazy) Only gonna point out problematic stuff now. Common values for spacing in Salads I've noticed are 0.80x, 1.00x, 1.20x, 1.50x, 2.00x and 2.50x
00:27:996 (2,1) – Lessen this jump, its a bit hard for newer players. Lessen to about 2.00x Moved!
00:28:644 (5,6,1) – Lessen to 2.00x because it's hard to catch. i dont want to make it too easy
00:40:403 (3,1) – Make it 2.00x i feel like its ok!
00:40:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – Lessen the spacing so it's not required to dash to it all. It's a hard pattern for a newer player. i added better flow
00:41:422 (1,2) – Make it 2.00x moved it to 1.80x
00:51:422 (1,2) – Make it 2.00x or 1.50x I feel like this part is fine
00:52:903 (5,1) – I'd make it 1.60x Changed!
00:57:348 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) – I'd reduce the spacing so you don't have to dash through the streams. I feel like im making the map to easy so the jump from I ---> II is going to be pretty big
01:25:403 (1,2,3,1) – Reduce spacing by at least 0.50x because the dashing jumps back and forth are too hard for a Salad. its ok!
01:50:125 (1,2,3) – Reduce distance a bit between each note to be less taxing on the player. i feel like this is also fine

II

Spacing is an issue, like the Salad. I'm done being nazi-ish though.
00:28:552 (3,4) – I think there should be an h-dash here. Increase distance and make (4) more horizontal for an easier catch. Changed!
01:51:423 (1) – Ctrl+G to reverse the slider and fix the flow problem. If you intend to keep it hard to catch, make it an h-dash on the previous note. I like how it is it not too hard


III

I can't be bothered with spacing, I'm too tired as I write this to care.
It's kinda like a light rain, I like it.
00:28:552 (1,2) – Make it an h-dash and make (2) more horizontal. its an H-Dash now
00:38:460 (6,1) – Feels like it should be an h-dash here since this is like a light rain. Yea!
00:56:238 (3) – Ctrl+G to fix a flow issue. Fixed!
00:56:978 (1,2) – Increase spacing, make it a little more difficult. Its good!
I think there was a pixel jump I missed but I can't remember where exactly.


Good luck with your map, I look forward to your mod on my map as well.

Paranoid Grapes wrote:

This map has gone so far.... proud of ya xi, time to dump some more stars I have on this.

Ascendance wrote:

As requested.

[General]

Tags
You could add the following:

1. plus (cause of REFLEC BEAT plus)
2. MYSTICAL STRIKE (event in reflec beat)
3. VOLZZA (reflec beat volzza)
4. leviathan

Added all Tags suggested

Metadata

1. All good

Ok!

Spread/Other

1. not the biggest fan of the difficulty naming here. especially without the addition of a cup, starting from "I" is really vague and can cause confusion. Using classic naming meta is best here imo. Have not changed!
2. Your salad is only CS 2.5, increase to CS3 to bring it in line with other salads. decreased CS size on II (Salad)
3. Drop Platter's AR to 8, because the gap between I/II/III is 7/8.3/8.5 which is pretty bad imo Dropped the AR down to 8 on III ( platter)
4. IV / V / VI all have CS4 which leads to low variety between the diffs. At the very least, the CS of the highest diff could be improved. not sure what to do, i feel like making the CS higher on VI would make it too easy and lower would feel awkward.
5. You have unsnapped timing lines in every difficulty, namely at 00:58:635 Snapped it into place with 1/4 for all difficulties
6. Your ending times are inconsistent, with I ending at 01:51:607, IV ending at 01:51:514 and the others ending at 01:51:515 Changed it so that they all end at 01:51:515 -
   

Hitsounds

1. OKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK Nice!

placeholder for modding the diffs when i wake up, don't reply or change anything yet. LOL i didn't read this my bad, well then....

Ascendance wrote:

=w= please dont reply until im ready this time xdd i take breaks when im textwall modding

I'll mod the more problematic diffs. I'm only going to point out one or two instances of each problem I find in the diffs, because I don't want to do all the work for you. Please be sure to look through the whole difficulty by yourself and find things that apply that I've brought up already.

[ I]

General

1. Uhh this difficulty plays more like a cup cause there's almost no dashes at all which isnt good ;A; imo, going through the whole difficulty and thinking about some places to add some dashes would be beneficial after applying what I've said here
2. 00:13:274 (1,2) - Weird overlap here that goes against the distance snap you've been using for every other note in this section, I'd just make it a repeat slider
3. 00:15:125 (5,1,2,1,2,3,1) - This whole section is really dense, and is really difficult imo for a salad player, especially since it's the lowest difficulty in the set. You could try removing notes at the following points: 00:15:311 - 00:15:866 - 00:16:422 -
4. 00:21:607 (4,1) - low distances here aren't good cause it doesnt promote any movement :v try rearranging so that way the catcher has to move in between these short pauses.
5. 00:24:200 - uhh lol all of a sudden you don't map the notes that you've been mapping for the entire intro... 00:24:385 - 00:24:570 - etc
6. 00:25:681 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - too much density. Even though the pattern itself is simple, this kind of stuff can be way too challenging for a player of this level to read, and will leave them confused as to what to do. As suggested above, removing some "less strong" notes here would be beneficial, as well as some repatterning to keep things simple.
7. 00:36:978 - Really important note that you have on a slidertail here. Imo, make 00:37:163 (1) - a repeat slider and 00:36:792 (2) - just a circle. also fix the distances here so that way the stronger note has the bigger distance rather than the other way around like you have here.
8. 00:38:274 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This entire section is super dense, same as above and could do with a rework. This is the lowest difficulty, which means the rhythms should be simple (AKA, stuff like 00:40:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - should not exist).
9. 00:44:755 (2) - stuff like this can be simplified into just a simple circle for example.
10. 00:45:866 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - really odd linear spacing makes this tricky to play, try to make a more curved movement back to the right side of the screen.
11. 00:50:125 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really awkward spacing here, it lacks consistency
12. 00:51:422 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Decrease density as above.
13. 00:55:311 (3,1) - Low movement between these notes, try doing as I explained earlier and flipping this and the following patterns to the other side.
14. 00:56:051 (1,2,3,4) - Should have higher spacing in between them due to their snapping on the timeline in correlation to each other. It's too low as it is now.
15. 00:57:348 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - As above.
16. 01:10:311 - I talked with some other BN's, and we agreed this shouldn't be a kiai section in any of the diffs. It's meant to be a "build up" to the kiai section, and making it a kiai makes the other sections of the map feel lackluster in comparison. Toggling the kiai off here is much better as a build-up effect.
17. There's more than one place this applies, but patterns such as this 01:14:014 (2,3,4,5) - that start shallow and gain spacing are really not a good place to be in a salad. The spacing should be consistent and the patterns should be simple to ensure reading is easy to understand for beginners.
18. 01:19:663 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - stream
19. The actual kiai has a lot of things that I've repeated time and time again. I'd really like to see you go through and attempt to fix this on your own, if possible.
20. 01:43:922 (4,5,6,7,8) - Odd and inconsistent spacing here.
21. 01:50:126 - Another kiai point that's unneeded imo.

Made all Changes!

[ II]

General

1. This is the difficulty that should have AR reduced to AR8, not III.
2. 00:10:312 (2,1) - Why is this a hyperdash? I don't even hear a noise here to constitute this, not to mention 00:10:682 (1,2,3,4,5) - isn't necessary at all in a platter.
3. 00:13:275 (1,2) - Remove the stack here, try to promote more constant movement. x:40 for 00:13:645 (2) - ?
4. 00:15:126 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Really hard back and forth dashing movements here, maybe better to ctrl+h 00:15:682 (5,1,2,3) - and move to x:464.
5. 00:16:515 (5) - You could probably do without this note here, would make the pattern easier to read.
6. 00:23:089 - Missing main rhythm here again
7. 00:24:385 - same
8. 00:28:552 (3,4) - Unrankable, remove the hdash
9. 00:37:349 (1,2,3,4) - imo you could just swap this out for a slider to keep this stuff simple. Even a 1/2 slider works.
10. 00:39:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - really dunno about this pattern, especially at 00:39:849 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - which features a direction change + a tap dash pattern which is way too hard at this level. I'd suggest remapping this pattern entirely, with a more linear style and less notes
11. 00:40:960 (4,5) - Also unrankable cause 1/4 hypers in a platter
12. 00:47:349 (2,3) - Really harsh distance, especially at 1/4 snapping, so just reduce it a bit. x:384 for 00:48:275 (3) - maybe.
13. 00:52:626 (3,4) - Really high distances here, lower by a few grids? 00:52:626 (3) - to x:344 works
14. 00:58:366 (4,5) - :V same unrankable hdash
15. 01:06:978 (1) - unnecessary NC
16. 01:15:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Reduce density
17. 01:16:608 (3,4,5) - Reduce distance (01:16:423 (1,2,3) - to x:248)
18. 01:16:607 - no sound
19. 01:17:440 - there's no sound here lol
20. 01:18:275 (5,6) - ^
21. 01:18:830 (2,3) - ^
22. etc etc
23. 01:19:663 - kill the stream please
24. 01:37:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - A bit too hard, try to trim the density or at least reduce the distances so it isn't so hard to read.
25. 01:40:312 (1,2) - Too large distances, try 01:40:682 (2) - x:352
26. 01:43:552 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - Also really high distances, reduce by a lot or force the hyper between 01:43:552 (2,1) - .
27. 01:51:423 (1) - ctrl+g and remove nc

Made all Changes!

I'm not gonna mod anymore actually since this took me a lot of time already. I've gone through the other difficulties and some are plagued by unrankable issues such as the ones I found in this difficulty, overmapping, high density patterns, or other things. You should look to get some more mods, and perhaps consider adding a cup to the set, since the current lowest difficulty is too hard. Ok Ascendance I will get more mods, but like what if everyone mods my map and it's still unrankable

If you have any questions, feel free to poke me by forum pm or in-game. Good luck!

SYAHME wrote:

M4M, not from my modding queue.
[General]

1. Please uncheck widescreen support. Ok widescreen is unchecked on all of them!
2. Please change combo colour that suitable with BG. Changed to Blue & Light Blue
3. Important: if you really want to get this ranked, please delete 2 diff from this maps. No need to make 2 overdose remove the last one & remove also II or III. Depend on you, its will make modders easy to mod with only 4 diff. Recently, there is a lot of PP CtB maps, to me its not necessary to make a lot of diff in one maps. If you still want that diff, there's nothing I can do. Please consider. Ok SYAHME but, I want many diffs so people of all skills levels can enjoy my map but I need to fix the spread Difficulties first for this to work.
4. I will mod 4 potential diff in this maps, regarding spread, star rating, pattern & others. Ok sounds good!
5. I'm not good with hitsounding but you know that your hitsound is not consistent with all diff, please make some improvement. Ok i will check hit sounds again

[Salad I]

1. HP Drain Rate: 3 & Circle Size: 3. I would change it to CS: 3 but since II has CS:3 I want my maps to gradually get harder and harder
2. 00:07:163 - I think this beat same as 00:06:237 (1) - this. Maybe you can put note 00:07:163 - here. Actually that doesnt follow the base music im following
3. 00:13:089 - ^. ^
4. 00:15:681 (1) - split this into hitcircle and slider. Ok added slider!
5. 00:16:237 (2) - make this hitcircle & 00:16:422 - this until 00:16:978 - this, you can make a long slider. Made it one whole slider!
6. 00:25:681 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - why not you only map strong beat here. Changed it so that the strong beat stands out more!
7. 00:28:459 (3) - I can't hear strong beat here, please remove. Removed!
8. 00:34:755 - start a long slider here until 00:35:403 - here, 00:35:496 - make this a slider until 00:35:681 - here. Added all the sliders x)
9. 00:37:718 - make a slider until 00:38:274 - here, 00:38:274 (1) - the tail of this slider make it a hitcircle. ^
10. I will stop here, please make sure to map suitable and potential beats. Its kinda unstable tho.
    Ok I will try to apply everything you've told me already to the rest of the song

[Platter III]

1. HP Drain Rate: 4, AR = OD: 8
2. 00:08:089 - I can hear sound here. its very low sound
3. 00:16:792 - strong beat here. changed pattern to show the strong beat more!
4. 00:26:052 (4) - move to x:328 & 00:26:238 (5) - move to x:440. changed!
5. 00:57:349 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - you can create many shape to represent this stream. I like how these streams are!
6. 01:51:052 (3,4) - too far, please reduce some distance. Reduced Distance!
7. Overall this diff is good but you can sharpen the pattern at the beginning a little bit.
   Thank you

[Rain IV]

1. HP Drain Rate: 5
2. 00:22:348 (4,5) - this pattern is so ugly, please maintain the same as 00:19:385 (1,2,3) - this. I feel like the small stream before 00:22:904 (5) - fits well
3. 00:57:348 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - you can create different pattern here, not just horizontal stream. I like these Horizontal stream i feel like it goes with the music being very monotone
4. 01:19:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make this closer a little bit to 01:19:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - here. Made closer!
5. Still okay, playable.

[Overdose V]
Made all changes But whats in red for V!

1. 00:14:015 (1) - please make this more horizontal because the lack of movement here is so awkward.
2. 00:23:275 (1) - what with this cute pattern, just make it horizontal.
3. 00:28:089 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - this part is so hard & easy to miss, please change to easier pattern.
4. 00:54:386 (3,1) - please reduce some distance with these two sliders.
5. 00:56:515 (3) - move to x:160.
6. 01:17:071 (1,2,3,1,2) - this pattern is weird, consider make it more horizontal.
   01:39:108 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - please change this into the shape of reverse slider, like 01:39:201 (3) - move to x:128 & 01:39:571 (6) - move to x:496. I changed everything except for this, Having these vertical patterns makes that sounds its mapped to stand out more
7. 01:50:126 (1,2,3) - this pattern is easy to miss, please move 01:50:312 (2) - this to x:240.
8. Please gather more mods on higher diff.

Good luck on ranking this, don't give up and please learn more for improvement.

RoseusJaeger wrote:

OD and AR need to be the same for both Salad and Cup to be rankable. (They both should be 7)
AR should be a maximum of 6 on a Cup diff according to the Ranking Criteria. so Cup should be AR 6 and OD 6

No kudosu since I modded this awhile back.

1. I want to discuss kiai parts in Cup and Salad. why are they not the same as all diffs? don't you think it's bad to reject the mapsets's kiai idea?
2. Why won't you make 5126 offset?

1. 00:08:274 (4) - don't you think you should fit the music? move it to 00:08:089
2. 00:27:163 (6) - what about to turn into something like this? ofc if you wanna use 1/4 in cup
   screen

   

1. 00:08:274 (1) - please, the same mistake as in previous diff? make this fit the music!
2. 00:45:311 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - this plays awkard, try to change this into something, what requires more movements
3. 01:15:496 (2) - c'mon, this is too much for a salad! please, change this, or at least make it CTRL G, but this won't solve this problem, still try to make this more fun to play for a Normal diff
4. 01:32:903 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - do you understand this is salad, not a platter? consider changing this pattern, at least into the normal stream without pseudo 1/4 jumps, which will really confuse newbie players.
5. 01:35:496 (6,1) - same^, 1/4 jumps is too much for a salad.

1. 00:23:274 (4,5) - increase the distance a liitle bit, so it would be more clear it requires dash, without dash it's too hard to catch this
2. 01:24:664 (1,2,3) - actually, the same problem as ^, this cam be completed even without dash, so might confuse platter players

1. Is it only me or there's no combo colors? If I'm right, please be sure to set them as same color as in previous diffs
2. 00:11:052 (5,6) - I think you can increase the distance here for a HD, just a suggestion though
3. 00:12:348 (2) - unnecessary NC?
4. 00:16:052 (3,4) - wowow, bad idea even for a adv platter diff, please reduce the distance between this!
5. 00:48:644 (1,2) - and again, I can count this as a pixeljump in platter diff, reduce the distance or increase for a HD
6. 01:13:460 (1,2) - ^ same
7. 01:24:664 (3,4,5,6,7) - nuu, looks not too good, please make it smoothly a little bit
8. 01:26:145 (1,2) - I really, really think this is not good for a platter diff! condiser changing this or reducing the distance
9. 01:50:682 (2,3) - and again this almost pixeljump

1. 00:39:107 (5,1) - might be a little bit hard for a rain diff, this this 00:39:570 (1) - not left but right
2. 00:53:274 (1,2) - a little bit confusing after completing hard patterns, what about to decrease the distance?
3. 01:17:348 (1,2,1,2) - this might be a little bit hard too, please, try to avoid a HD between the somehow 01:17:533 (2,1)

1. 00:47:348 (3,4,1) - really confusing, even for an overdose diff, try to change this or at least make slider curved but not straight
2. 01:12:071 (6,1) - fun fact about this: there's no HD in this diff, but there is in Rain diff, maybe you should make a HD like you did in Rain?

1. 00:16:423 (3,1) - this is really not ok for a deluge diff! don't force ctb players clicking the keyboard like std players do triplets!
2. 00:57:349 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - actually that plays well for me, btw you really want to such a risky pattern? might cause some ranking problems
3. 01:30:589 (2,3,4) - this clearly needs to tap keyboard like you do streaming in std. y'know, I come here to catch fruits, not to stream
4. 01:36:515 (4,5,6) - clear copy of ^

Myle wrote:

hey, here's M4M, so I'll try my best
[General]

1. I want to discuss kiai parts in Cup and Salad. why are they not the same as all diffs? don't you think it's bad to reject the mapsets's kiai idea? i didnt even know they were differant changed it!
2. Why won't you make 5126 offset?changed offset!

[I]

1. 00:08:274 (4) - don't you think you should fit the music? move it to 00:08:089 moved!
2. 00:27:163 (6) - what about to turn into something like this? ofc if you wanna use 1/4 in cup changed!
   screen

   

[II]

1. 00:08:274 (1) - please, the same mistake as in previous diff? make this fit the music! added note!
2. 00:45:311 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - this plays awkard, try to change this into something, what requires more movements LOL what is wrong with me changed it!
3. 01:15:496 (2) - c'mon, this is too much for a salad! please, change this, or at least make it CTRL G, but this won't solve this problem, still try to make this more fun to play for a Normal diff changed it!
4. 01:32:903 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - do you understand this is salad, not a platter? consider changing this pattern, at least into the normal stream without pseudo 1/4 jumps, which will really confuse newbie players. im bad at making easy Difficulties xD changed!
5. 01:35:496 (6,1) - same^, 1/4 jumps is too much for a salad. decreased spacing

[III]

1. 00:23:274 (4,5) - increase the distance a liitle bit, so it would be more clear it requires dash, without dash it's too hard to catch this changed!
2. 01:24:664 (1,2,3) - actually, the same problem as ^, this cam be completed even without dash, so might confuse platter players ^

[IV]

1. Is it only me or there's no combo colors? If I'm right, please be sure to set them as same color as in previous diffs changed combo color
2. 00:11:052 (5,6) - I think you can increase the distance here for a HD, just a suggestion though Hmm maybe i will change it in the future
3. 00:12:348 (2) - unnecessary NC? took off NC
4. 00:16:052 (3,4) - wowow, bad idea even for a adv platter diff, please reduce the distance between this! reduced distance!
5. 00:48:644 (1,2) - and again, I can count this as a pixeljump in platter diff, reduce the distance or increase for a HD Nerfed!
6. 01:13:460 (1,2) - ^ same
7. 01:24:664 (3,4,5,6,7) - nuu, looks not too good, please make it smoothly a little bit changed pattern!
8. 01:26:145 (1,2) - I really, really think this is not good for a platter diff! condiser changing this or reducing the distance It doesnt feel to hard for Adv platter
9. 01:50:682 (2,3) - and again this almost pixeljump Nerfed spacing!

[V]

1. 00:39:107 (5,1) - might be a little bit hard for a rain diff, this this 00:39:570 (1) - not left but right
2. 00:53:274 (1,2) - a little bit confusing after completing hard patterns, what about to decrease the distance?
3. 01:17:348 (1,2,1,2) - this might be a little bit hard too, please, try to avoid a HD between the somehow 01:17:533 (2,1) i made some the notes around it easier to land!

[VI]

1. 00:47:348 (3,4,1) - really confusing, even for an overdose diff, try to change this or at least make slider curved but not straight having them Stright give it more movment!
2. 01:12:071 (6,1) - fun fact about this: there's no HD in this diff, but there is in Rain diff, maybe you should make a HD like you did in Rain? I wanted to change up the patterns by having that S shape in the middle

[VII]

1. 00:16:423 (3,1) - this is really not ok for a deluge diff! don't force ctb players clicking the keyboard like std players do triplets! Deluge maps should be hard! and pro players need to adapt
2. 00:57:349 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - actually that plays well for me, btw you really want to such a risky pattern? might cause some ranking problems Changed it up!
3. 01:30:589 (2,3,4) - this clearly needs to tap keyboard like you do streaming in std. y'know, I come here to catch fruits, not to stream you are catching fruits its just harder to do this way!
4. 01:36:515 (4,5,6) - clear copy of ^ ^

1. 00:05:496 (2) - move to x:432
2. 00:06:608 (2) - x:120
3. 00:19:385 (2) - Ctrl+H and move to x:336
4. 00:22:348 (2) - add whistle in slider tale and 00:22:903 (3)
5. 01:25:125 (1) - Reduce distance please

1. 00:16:238 (4) - move to x:184 if you accept this 00:16:607 (5,6,1) - move to x:280
2. 00:21:423 (2) - x:368, 00:21:608 (3) - x:416
3. 00:42:534 (4) - Reduce or add Hdash

1. 00:16:978 (1) - move to x:160
2. 00:40:126 (7) - reduce distance
3. 01:16:793 (4) - ^
4. 01:19:201 (1) - ^
5. 01:23:923 (2) - ^
6. 01:26:330 (2) - ^ x:304
7. 01:34:664 (3) - ^
8. 01:35:034 (4) - ^
9. 01:37:626 (2) - ^

1. 00:41:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - move to x:240
2. 01:19:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move to x:96 and make Hdash
3. 01:43:551 (3) - move to x:248 and 01:43:736 (4) - move to x:504

1. How about this pattern
   00:16:238 (3) - x:256 00:16:423 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+H
2. 00:28:922 (1) - How about make Spin in Break Time
3. 00:47:256 (2,3) - move to x:384
4. 00:52:534 (4) - Ctrl+G
5. 00:52:718 (5) - ^ (if you accept)
6. 01:44:941 (7,8,9,10,11) -
   How about this

   
7. If you accept 01:44:941 (7) - x:192 01:45:126 (8) - x:384 01:45:312 (9) - x:32 01:45:497 (10) - x:400 01:45:682 (11) - x:0

1. 00:29:014 (1) - same suggestion in make spin