ZZHBOY wrote:

[fly]
00:20:178 - 没音 把圈去了 音樂還是有一點音 這note不remove
01:21:210 - 这一带音效好像有点乱 建议按固定节奏去统一一下 這我知道，但想試試看街機板的擺法，現在聽沒啥怪的
02:03:645 - 忽然冒出一个whistle太突兀了 要么这一带都不放 放就不要只放一个 根據街機下的
03:24:734 - 没音 不要overmap 後面有一點音樂不算overmap吧
03:26:515 - 这里为什么变ds 并不合理 改成沒跳了
03:33:452 (1,2,3) - 也许可以摆直线 沒改直線 但這3個有移了一些擺放
[Insane]
01:24:491 - 这个whistle怎么回事 这一带音效有点乱 建议统一一下 有的音效不要放在打不到的地方 至少统一下让节奏听起来舒服些 目前聽的這還好，不然我就考慮看看吧

低难度好像都还好 船业注意下高难度没有音的地方就不要强放note 然后可以修一下音效 你觉得满意了喊我吧 修了一點點

SPOILER

1. 00:13:897 (1,2) - 不太舒服 有點難抓準然後出100 可以直接做折返
2. 00:19:710 (9) - 按你的nc排法這裡應該nc一下
3. 00:20:085 (1,2,3,4) - 如果這裡是兩個kick slider的話我會覺得更有趣
4. 00:40:147 (2,3) - 這也是kickslider的話更好
   
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5. 00:53:460 (1,2) - 這裡用兩個1/2 slider我覺得不太合適 畢竟背景也沒有太特別的鼓或者人聲之類的去支持
   
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6. 01:34:147 (1,2,3) - 這個排版試試看
   
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7. 01:46:584 (3) - 放到x444 y188形成3角形?
8. 02:12:270 (1,2) - 同
9. 02:14:145 (5) - 漏whistle?

1. 02:01:021 (3,8) - nc?

IamKwaN wrote:

我來射個星 感覺沒啥問題 就是音效打了點

OblivioN wrote:

我靠，爽
不知道船爷开了这个，好可惜，好想map
Fly Senpuu里的02:09:739 这里漏的有点明显，要不加上做个三连？ 不用了，想照大型機台的方式放
no kds
别拦我，我要射十个 雖然沒射，但還是謝謝

Rizia wrote:

[Fly Senpuu]

1. 00:13:897 (1,2) - 不太舒服 有點難抓準然後出100 可以直接做折返 恩 就fix了
2. 00:19:710 (9) - 按你的nc排法這裡應該nc一下 OK
3. 00:20:085 (1,2,3,4) - 如果這裡是兩個kick slider的話我會覺得更有趣 改了
4. 00:40:147 (2,3) - 這也是kickslider的話更好 改了
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:53:460 (1,2) - 這裡用兩個1/2 slider我覺得不太合適 畢竟背景也沒有太特別的鼓或者人聲之類的去支持 考慮了很久還是改了
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:34:147 (1,2,3) - 這個排版試試看 移動了一些
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:46:584 (3) - 放到x444 y188形成3角形? 可以
8. 02:12:270 (1,2) - 同 改了
9. 02:14:145 (5) - 漏whistle? 加了

[Hard]

1. 02:01:021 (3,8) - nc? 將與117討論NC且fix

111111 555555
normal和hard nc可以複查一下 我發現有的放得亂或者漏了 OK將會檢查和mapper討論下

DreaM117er wrote:

No KD~

I'm tired to change input language...so, NC check for Normal and Hard~~

[Normal]

• 
  00:48:210 (1) - can remove nc here, up to you Fixed
  00:51:210 (5) - you can set nc here or 00:53:085 (9) - , last one is on music change. Same as 02:10:020 (5,9) - Fixed, select first one
  01:10:710 (1) - can remove nc too, still...up to you Removed
  01:16:710 (1) - remove nc Removed
  01:19:710 (1) - ^ Removed
  01:19:710 (1) - ^ Removed
  01:45:272 (1) - can remove nc too, you know Removed
  02:07:020 (1) - remove nc Removed
  02:29:519 (1) - ^ Removed
  02:35:519 (1,1) - ^ Removed
  03:13:391 (7,1) - swap nc Fixed
  03:16:016 (4,1) - ^ Fixed
  03:30:265 (1) - remove nc Fixed

[Hard]

• 
  00:42:210 (1) - remove nc, up to you
  00:45:210 (1) - ^ 跟上面這一個還是想1大白一NC
  00:52:710 (6,1) - swap nc 感覺沒啥異狀,這keep
  01:04:522 (5) - nc here, up to you 改了，連insane也fix
  01:07:522 (5) - ^ 改了，連insane也fix
  01:13:710 (4) - NC 改了，連insane也fix
  01:33:491 (2,3) - different than first part, set nc or not. choose one method in this diff. Same with 03:31:296 (2,3) - 03:34:296 (2,3) - Cancel NC for 00:26:460 (1) - here
  02:02:521 (8) - nc 改了
  02:04:020 (1) - same with first part 這個我看第一部份的NC是都一樣的呢，所以keep
  02:11:520 (6,1) - swap nc 感覺沒啥異狀,這keep
  02:20:519 (5) - NC 改了
  02:23:332 (5) - same with first, up to you 改了，連insane也fix
  02:26:332 (5) - ^ 改了，連insane也fix
  02:32:519 (4) - NC 改了，連insane也fix
  02:54:267 (1) - you can remove nc here, these are different with 02:41:518 (1,2,1,2) - . No hiding here, so no need nc Removed

Fly~Fly~Fly~~~ 感謝117的NC check 現在NC變得好不一樣看得舒服

caren_sk wrote:

nice mapping and bg
gogo !

Thanks your support ~ caren_sk

I will manage it if my another qualified map enter to ranked

Julie wrote:

Hmm ok let's try this, sorry for the wait onii-chan~ XD

Let's just try last diff post, if is too hard to understand we go irc and irc with the rest I guess. I don't mind going back point by point on irc~ Sure I will pick someday do a IRC with you lol

Fly Senpuu

00:42:772 (3,4,5) - This honestly look weird that it isn't straight with 00:42:585 (2) - or not diagonal enough. Okay, I let this note 00:42:585 (2) - stack at 00:41:460 (2) - sliderend, seems better to me I think

00:52:335 (6,7,8,9,1) - Can make a better curve no? Because it look kinda weirdly curved in-game, and look the difference when you add a nice curved slider on them : http://puu.sh/oEPCA/2198385304.jpg Sure, fixed a bit.

01:10:710 (1,2,1,2) - I know you probably want this to be symetrie, but the spacing are a bit forcing to play, like these 2 could fit due to the vocal going up, but here 01:11:460 (1,2) - there is a downside and should have less spacing then this one 01:11:835 (2,1) - due to the crash of the song. Seems really so far, then I reduce a bit distance for 01:10:710 (1,2,1,2) - these.

01:19:710 (1,2) - Remove the hitsound on the end of these 2 slider, your making it sound like there is some kind of 7 notes drum from the song, while there is not. The 1/2 drum should only be here 01:20:460 (3,4,5) -. I know, but I follow game machine to add here, mind keep it?
Also you could have make something really cool here 01:19:710 (1,2,3,4,5) - because right now it feel unfitting and really forced to play those jump. Okay, reduce a bit distance here
This part 01:20:647 (4,5) - is probably the part that should be the most important in it, while is the same spacing for these 3 01:20:460 (3,4,5) - , is ok, but could have been better. Keep, feel fine to me
What's not ok is this 01:20:647 (4,5) - being way lower space then this 01:19:710 (1,2) - , this part REALLY feel too forced to play those jump. Change a bit patter place (reduce distance) for 01:19:710 (1,2) - this That's how it look : 01:18:210 (1,2) - relax~ This although it is relax but it really can do jump, keep this ....01:18:960 (2,1) - relax~ Fine, too ...01:19:710 (1,2) - SUPER JUMP Reduce a bit distance , 01:20:460 (3,4,5) - normal then 01:21:210 - + ahhhh hard Okay, recuce a bit distance and I add a NC to distinguish this jump
What I'm trying to say is 01:18:210 - starting here, it should go calm -> hard because of this 01:20:835 - , not calm -> random super hard -> normal. I know these, but I try to reduce a bit distance here, believe it is not hard to play for players

01:37:579 (6) - Ok this is kinda misleading xD. All of these have drum hitsound 01:36:267 (1,2,3,4,5) - , even the end of a slider. I'm not sure if you actually hear the loud bass in the song here 01:37:579 (6) - , since you put it 0.11x spacing with 01:37:392 (5) - , but your normalhitsound sound soooo low on a note that player have to tap, is so low that people might think there is a break between 01:37:392 (5,1) - . Okay, then I just change a bit place (01:36:642 (2,3,5,6) - this), hope more satisfy for you
Conclusion : really suggest you add a hitsound, a clap or a whistle since the hitnormal is too low, and player might feel a bit confuse after hitting the note, feel like they hit an empty note. The drum sound for this 01:37:579 - is the same as this 01:37:392 - so a whistle if you want to match the drum, or a clap if you want to match the synth.
01:40:579 (7) - ^ Same reason, but this doesn't feel weird to play since the crash sound from the song is really loud and audible, but still suggest you to put a hitsound for it. Also will ask further check from you, because really now nothing need to add to me

01:58:021 (1,2) - It feel like your kind of modifying the song, this part should really be more calm, and that whistle hitsound make it sound like there is an actual drum in the song while there only a really low hithat from the song. If you ask me start here 01:58:021 - of the song should be way more calm to prepare for this part 01:58:771 - , and you made a calm part more hard then a normal drum part of the song 01:57:646 (5,6) - . Agree, reduce a bit distance for this calm part, but hitsound keep

01:59:146 (3,4,5,6,1) - This look weirdly curved in-game, could force yourself to make it better baka onii-chan =w=. XD..hha okay, fix a bit curve here.

02:04:395 (2,3,4,5) - This diagonal really look weird in-game, if you were trying to not make it perfect straight, it still kinda look weird xD Change a bit here xD

02:11:895 (1,2) - Why is this lower spacing then this 02:12:082 (2,3) - , usually this part should be way more relax, and this 02:12:082 (2,3) - should have more spacing if you follow the song, but is probably better to keep it consistent and make it all same spacing like you did here 00:53:085 (1,2,3) - , except if you are willing to make some few change. I select let 1 to 2 more close and make 2 to 3 far a bit, seems better?

02:41:331 (7) - Probably really suggest to not put it that high up on the grid, since some player might have a bigger HP bar then the default one and this hitting this note might be hitting the HP bar. Okay, I move down a bit

02:40:018 (1,2,3) - Make these the same spacing as 02:43:018 (1,2,3) - to keep it consistent and mostly because of the change between 02:43:018 (1,2) - and 02:43:206 (2,3) - , which make it really cool matching the song . Okay, keep consistent distance for this part

02:48:830 (6,1) - Should be higher spacing then this 02:48:643 (5,6) - , due to the low hithat (from the song) + hitnormal hitsound at 02:48:830 - and here 02:49:018 - there is a nice cymbal sound. Since all your other hitsound are loud compare to hitnormal, making this 02:48:830 (6) - jump, some player might feel like hitting some kind of ghost notes which play kinda bad if you ask me :S. Okay, I agree make a jump for 02:48:830 (6,1) - here, fixed

02:51:268 (5) - Nice bass sound here, while your note sound way too low with that soft-hitwhistle, and mostly because the instrument isn't consistent 02:51:080 (4,5) - , there is a sound here 02:51:174 - , it make even more weird to play this note 02:51:268 (5) - that don't have any hitsound on. Feel this hitsound volume not so low to me, keep it to this part.

03:00:829 (6) - and 03:03:829 (5) - and 03:08:516 (1) - and 03:08:516 (1) - ^ same reason for the hitsound. I probably understand that some part you put hitnormal due to no the main sound of the song, but you are making quite a big jump for a no main sound. Same, hitsound keep, and jump pattern I reduce a bit distance for here

1. 00:07:137 (3) - Consider removing this object. The intro was the only section which is using 1/2 in this difficulty, and it was partially understandable considering how the drums in the song was constructed. However this rhythm felt too complicated as an Easy combined with 1/2 rhythms.
2. 01:26:835 (4) - Hitsound emphasis felt weaker than the song.
3. 01:34:767 - 03:08:516 (3) - 03:11:516 (3) - Hitsound please.
4. 02:26:894 (4,1) - 02:32:144 (3,4) - Blanket could be better balanced.

1. 01:04:147 (3) - 01:45:834 (6) - 03:11:516 (4) - Hitsound.

1. 00:40:710 (1,2) - Spacing 1.3x.
2. 01:15:772 (2) - Spacing could be better balanced.
3. 01:33:022 (4,1) - A jump here is not recommended. Since the rhythm of 01:33:210 (1,2,3) is 3/4 which is pretty abnormal, keeping the spacing is a good idea to get intuitive.
4. 03:13:016 (1) - Finish?

1. 00:01:887 (2) - 01:04:147 (3) - Spacing.

1. 00:19:991 (4,1) - Such spacing usage doesn't appear even in the intensed part of the stream. You'll want to use a closer spacing.
2. 00:21:116 (8,1) - Spacing.
3. 00:59:835 (5,1,2) - Just a personal comment here. The pattern felt for the sake of symmetry itself, instead of fitting the song. Even the stanza starts from (1), a noticable change appears at (2) while (1) is pretty a similar sound with (5). The expression of 01:02:835 (2,1,2) felt better to reflect such difference.
4. 01:21:960 (9) - 01:23:460 (9) - 01:24:960 (9) - 01:26:460 (9) - 01:27:960 (9) - 01:29:460 (9) - 01:30:960 (9) - Even it will cause 4 note stream, I strongly recommend adding NC for consistency.
5. 01:26:460 (9,10) - Spacing.
6. 02:26:144 - No hitsound?
7. 03:24:734 (6,7,8) - 03:30:921 (8) - Missing hitsounds.
8. 03:35:046 (2,3) - Add a little more spacing for a consistent in-game follow point display.
9. 03:35:890 (1) - The song is pretty strong here. Use a higher volume please.

Sonnyc wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:07:137 (3) - Consider removing this object. The intro was the only section which is using 1/2 in this difficulty, and it was partially understandable considering how the drums in the song was constructed. However this rhythm felt too complicated as an Easy combined with 1/2 rhythms. Okay, removed
2. 01:26:835 (4) - Hitsound emphasis felt weaker than the song. Added finish
3. 01:34:767 - 03:08:516 (3) - 03:11:516 (3) - Hitsound please. Added : clap, clap, clap here
4. 02:26:894 (4,1) - 02:32:144 (3,4) - Blanket could be better balanced. Fixed

[Normal]

1. 01:04:147 (3) - 01:45:834 (6) - 03:11:516 (4) - Hitsound. Added : clap, keep, clap here

[Hard]

1. 00:40:710 (1,2) - Spacing 1.3x. Fixed
2. 01:15:772 (2) - Spacing could be better balanced. Okay fix the same distance
3. 01:33:022 (4,1) - A jump here is not recommended. Since the rhythm of 01:33:210 (1,2,3) is 3/4 which is pretty abnormal, keeping the spacing is a good idea to get intuitive. Agree, fix a bit
4. 03:13:016 (1) - Finish? Added

[Insane]

1. 00:01:887 (2) - 01:04:147 (3) - Spacing. Fixed

[Fly Senpuu]

1. 00:19:991 (4,1) - Such spacing usage doesn't appear even in the intensed part of the stream. You'll want to use a closer spacing. Okay, let it close a bit seems I forgot to notice it lol
2. 00:21:116 (8,1) - Spacing. Fixed
3. 00:59:835 (5,1,2) - Just a personal comment here. The pattern felt for the sake of symmetry itself, instead of fitting the song. Even the stanza starts from (1), a noticable change appears at (2) while (1) is pretty a similar sound with (5). The expression of 01:02:835 (2,1,2) felt better to reflect such difference. Okay, then I make 01:00:210 (1,2) - make more closer here
4. 01:21:960 (9) - 01:23:460 (9) - 01:24:960 (9) - 01:26:460 (9) - 01:27:960 (9) - 01:29:460 (9) - 01:30:960 (9) - Even it will cause 4 note stream, I strongly recommend adding NC for consistency. All added
5. 01:26:460 (9,10) - Spacing. Fixed
6. 02:26:144 - No hitsound? Add whistle hitsound
7. 03:24:734 (6,7,8) - 03:30:921 (8) - Missing hitsounds. Added : (clap + whistle +whistle), whistle hitsound
8. 03:35:046 (2,3) - Add a little more spacing for a consistent in-game follow point display. Fixed a bit
9. 03:35:890 (1) - The song is pretty strong here. Use a higher volume please. Okay, adjust volume 35 -> 85 here

2016-05-24 20:46 Sonnyc: I think you can do some minor improves for finish hitsounds in kiai section.
2016-05-24 20:46 Sonnyc: 00:59:835 - 01:00:210 - These are finish 
2016-05-24 20:46 Sonnyc: 01:02:835 - 01:03:210 - while these are not. -> (Okay, added)
2016-05-24 20:48 Sonnyc: 01:06:210 - 02:31:019 - strong beats like this could be finish. -> (Okay, added)

-Nanaka- wrote:

恭喜

Dino99 wrote:

旋風之舞~ 恭喜! ww

DakeDekaane wrote:

What does "Fly Senpuu" stand for? Because it looks like two words randomly sticked.