Pho wrote:

[Railgun's Normal]

1. 00:11:530 (2,1) - Care of the spacing here. done intentionally for emphasis
2. 00:13:924 (5) - 00:24:137 (6) - 01:20:945 (1) - 01:42:009 (5) - 01:52:222 (5) - I highly doubt kicksliders are comprehensible for a Normal difficulty stage, especially when you use backsliders of the same length a lot already. Switching this with two 1/2 sliders would be more manageable I use double repeats very strictly so that the player can comprehend the pattern. Look at 00:12:009 -, 00:22:222 -, 01:20:945 -, 01:31:158 -, 01:40:094 -, and 01:50:307 -. They all follow the same pattern. Since this is a Normal, I expect that the player should be able to pick up patterns in the map. Such patterns make it more fun for the average player IMO. It also helps even out spread with Hard, which is important.
3. 00:34:349 (4,5,1,2) - 00:44:562 (5,6,1,2) - inconsistent rhythm, you're following the basic instruments in the first one and start focussing on vocals on the next one, that feels a bit weird done intentionally, all of my maps are like this! I don't see how it's weird. It plays fine to me and my test players didn't experience any issues either.
4. 00:55:413 (1,2,3) - Rhythm feels poor here because you skip the strong drum beat on the white tick at 00:56:051 - . I mean you followed them properly on the previous combo at 00:52:860 (1) - , so not sure why you left them out here. I also recommend you map 00:57:168 - this beat out, here the rhythm suggestion for this combo: I'm not following the drum here. I didn't even notice it until you mentioned it, so I assume that the lyrics have more emphasis? I tried your suggestion and found the former easier to play.
   
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5. 01:08:179 (1,2) - blanket lol Isn't this already a blanket? I also don't want to collide too much with 01:07:860 (5) -.
6. 01:34:988 (4,5,6,1) - Would make this simpler because the music is toning down here: I use this pattern because I'm following the emphasis of vocal here. I tried your pattern but it didn't sound right.
   
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7. 01:36:902 (2,3,4) - How about the following to not skip that strong beat on the white tick at 01:37:222 - : Done, plays much nicer now!
   
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8. 01:38:498 (5,6) - Spacing please. Also the flow is not the best at this point, you want to push up slider 6 more for a less flow-breaking transition Moved up some & now it plays better. DS is intentional so that it isn't too hard for the player
9. 00:47:754 (5) - Considering 00:37:541 (1) - is more or less identical to this beat, I recommend you 1.) make this a 1/1 for a more continuous flow and 2.) set a NC here. I tried this pattern, and although it plays fine, I prefer the circle for emphasis in both the song and the video
10. Hmm, could need a bit more polishment.

Pho wrote:

And I just starting playing trainstrails in the sky =.=

[General]

1. Got rusty, didn't find a thing here.

[Easy]

1. 00:54:296 - A beat at this point would be really nice ti catch the drum beat, since you did the same at 00:57:328 (3) - im actually following vocals here to justify the lower density
2. 01:07:541 (4) - Would swiitch this off with a slider+circle because cymbal on the big white tick. kk
3. 00:56:530 (2,3) - Idk, but this gap feels a bit awkward to play, probably would've extended the first slider by 1/2 to avoid the polarity issue... oh well actually making a constant switch from 1/2 to 3/4 is more difficult to play imo
4. 01:40:732 (2,3,1) - I might ask around whether this is fine since there have been DQs over similar patterns where distant objects are too close to the reversearrow in easy diffs: i think this is fine, i've used similar patterns in easy diffs before and never experienced any problems
   
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[Hard]

1. 00:41:371 (1) - Delete this whistle for a better effect.
2. 01:08:658 (2,4) - Idk, this makes me sad for some reason.
3. 01:16:796 (4,5) - blanket
4. 01:54:934 (6) - Clap on tail.
   fixed everything here

[Nightmare]

1. 00:28:285 (3) - Maybe: http://puu.sh/iQbB2/c0b08303b2.jpg fixed
2. 00:37:860 (2) - This stretched slider takes away quite some momentum, why not shorten it and set a circle at its tail: yep
   http://puu.sh/iQbjq/624b51ab37.jpg
3. 01:20:626 (4) - idk lol lol its there to support that whewww sound in the music

Nice set, nice song, but zj's map needs more improvement IMO before it can be pushed forward.
Anyway, good luck with this guys.

1. Inconsistency in Tags Please check this.
   
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1. 02:01:637 (3) - this slider end should be 02:02:275 - here. please check other difficulty.

1. 00:31:956 (7,8) - I think this stack to be unfavorable in Hard diff. so changed another pattern better.
2. 01:03:073 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing is really awkward imo. what do you think this spacing... T_T

1. 00:33:232 (4) - Just a sugguestion I don't like stack pattern. so move 00:32:434 (1) - this slider head ? because not use stack next place at 00:34:349 (3,4) -

1. 00:01:477 (3) - That hook in the slider looks awkward, straight slider would fit better to the previous ones imo.
2. 00:07:541 (2,3,1) - Equal spacing please.
3. 00:11:690 (1) - Straight slider would look nicer lol
4. 00:18:073 - I can't see why this isn't mapped out, this is a really notable beat. Shift 00:18:073 (7) - 1/2 back, and make it a repleat slider or add a circle on the white tick at 00:18:392 - instead.
   Same for 01:46:158 -
5. 00:24:775 (1,2,3) - Be consistent with the spacing here and do what you did at 00:14:562 (1,2,3) - here as well.
6. 01:04:988 (3,4,5,1) - Make it look nicer:
   http://puu.sh/oCoch/65f97e9097.jpg
7. 01:05:626 (1,3) - Would avoid this overlap it doesn't look great.
8. 01:07:541 (3) - 339|279 would give this better emphasis.
9. 01:37:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you should try a little bit harder lol.
10. 02:01:637 (6) - Could make a nice slider like lfj at the end.
11. 00:17:115 (5) - NC. Same for 01:48:871 (4) -
12. 00:26:530 (1) - Delete NC. Same for: 00:29:243 (1) - 01:04:668 (1) - 01:11:371 (1) - 01:57:328 (1) -
13. 01:11:849 (4,1) - Nc switch.
14. Looks better than the previous version now, gj