Mami Kawada - Aozora to Taiyou · forum

Mayoi Neko

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Mayoi Neko 2010-03-24T12:54:40+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年8月13日星期五 at 21:27:15

Artist: Mami Kawada
Title: Aozora to Taiyou
Source: Hayate no Gotoku
Tags: anime S i R i R u
BPM: 132
Filesize: 6343kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:

Easy (0.99 stars, 53 notes)
Hard (4.96 stars, 409 notes)
Normal (3.9 stars, 203 notes)
S i R i R u's Insane (4.99 stars, 452 notes)

Download: Mami Kawada - Aozora to Taiyou
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hayate no Gotoku

Storyboard help:quintitem.

Skin by yes.

ruru moe moe.

Last edited by Mayoi Neko 2010-08-13T13:32:05+00:00, edited 9 times in total.

soulfear

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soulfear 2010-03-24T13:32:51+00:00

问题很多首先是SPACE问题
第一个难度也就是Normal SPACE要统一可以在1.0X以下对于新手而言
而且最好不要变速因为我看到一些变速的地方
还有几个地方UNSNAPPED
HARD也是 UNSNAPPED的地方非常多
还有最重要的一点 TIMING...
BPM只有一个...你的BPM太多了...

重新制作一下吧...问题很多得下点工夫了

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-04-03T20:22:58+00:00

offset 12,825 bpm 162.12
offset 83,920 bpm 163
offset 154,650 bpm 162.12
offset 166,495 bpm 163

試試這樣的看下如何~

Shinxyn

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Shinxyn 2010-07-02T04:19:47+00:00

Revived~

sisiJiang

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sisiJiang 2010-07-02T18:09:34+00:00

每天都做图
不厌吗

DeadAlready

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DeadAlready 2010-07-02T18:54:20+00:00

star >w</

Download: sb.rar

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Mayoi Neko

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Mayoi Neko 2010-07-02T20:05:31+00:00

~~悄悄的放下~~

Download: sb.rar

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Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-07-04T09:04:36+00:00

mami <3

TerisKey

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TerisKey 2010-07-05T09:41:14+00:00

感觉做的越来越好了
SA加油！

JamesLeao

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JamesLeao 2010-07-06T05:05:02+00:00

can u beat Al?

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-07-06T12:48:44+00:00

All

Stack 設置的高一點?
去掉.osb文件?
再放一個approachcircle.png文件? (某些蝙蝠會指出www
comboburst.png 最大是500*600?

Hard

00:45:979 (8) - 這一段跟著節奏下slider?
00:50:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - 左右鏡像?( 1和之前的11 感覺離的太遠/太突然了對於hard來說
00:51:888 (5) - 移遠點?
01:03:706 (1,3) - 移近點?
01:28:934 (2,3) - 是我錯覺么..感覺1和2 ..2和3之間的距離不同@.@
01:57:797 (1,2,3,4) - 這3連應該是123 4 ?
(感覺有一些newcombo的跳太大了點這樣的話觸手沒就法開DT完了啊(逃

Normal

01:26:888 (3,5) - 下錯音效了?
01:35:297 (4,5,6) - 這3連有點違和..
02:05:979 (1) - 音效finish?
02:15:979 (2) - 往右移一點?
02:45:752 (1) - 從左邊的白線上開始?(音效finish?

@.@!!!

Zetsubou Sensei

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Zetsubou Sensei 2010-07-06T20:32:11+00:00

Hayate no Gotoku!

Nice map. Very well done

[Easy]
Just check your spacing...

Lol thats all i have

~STAR

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-07-08T08:34:59+00:00

sorry for late. :3

ps. can you -2 or -1 your HP Drain in hard ? maybe it's crazy for hard
and if hard already 8+ I think Insane need 9+ but it's crazy XD

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Nitsuki_Yukikawa

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Nitsuki_Yukikawa 2010-07-08T18:49:44+00:00

seems fair

star

Alace

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Alace 2010-07-17T15:51:26+00:00

It is better to use custom claps to set hitsounds(like Bakaru`s insane), too many spftwhistles don`t sound that good i this song IMO

<Easy>
use slidertick 0.5 necause you add a muted slidertick sample, don`t use high sliderticks to add scores lol

<Normal>
00:32:797 (3) - remove the slider sound
01:54:615 (3) - ^

<Hard>
00:32:797 (5) - remove the slider sound
00:59:161 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - too many whistles XD
02:23:706 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part sounds not so good, follow the heavy beat to map ?

Offset is pretty good for me

Rucker

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Rucker 2010-07-20T07:50:13+00:00

OwO/

Alace

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Alace 2010-07-20T13:49:54+00:00

<Hard>
01:55~02:25 part has 40% volumes only,55~60% is better (like the first part of the map)
Also, i am fine tith those whistles anyway,

ok bubble

James2250

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James2250 2010-08-13T04:01:14+00:00

*bubble popped* why can't I do that

maximum width allowed for a combo burst is 500, yours is 559x604 resize it
you don't really need anime in tags as it will show up as the genre
make sure tags are all the same (says anime in easy, not in normal etc)
hitsounds are too quiet, can barely hear the whistles
why not cut mp3?

Maps themselves look ok

*star*

Edit: I was kidding about bubble pop thing

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abcde1234qaz

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abcde1234qaz 2010-08-13T06:18:14+00:00

star~ :3

Alace

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Alace 2010-08-13T06:29:09+00:00

My fault

I am ok with the mp3.but the file size is a bit large.so just cut it and fade out the last part)
I suggest cut the mp3 on 03:10:07. fade out from 03:04:61 (I don`t know if you need a new offset after cutting)

Fix those files and full upload
blurbg.png (800 x 600)
comboburst.png (500 x767)

Hitsounds are pretty ok to me. i can listen to them clearly
No kds thnak you

btw.i don`t get why MAT needs power to pop bubbles. you already popped after your posting

Mayoi Neko

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Mayoi Neko 2010-08-13T13:34:00+00:00

finished

Mapper 31

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Mapper 31 2010-08-13T14:03:53+00:00

star

PSPDS Eddie

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PSPDS Eddie 2010-08-13T14:14:35+00:00

ah19980924

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ah19980924 2010-08-14T12:54:46+00:00

我覺的bpm只有131.95而已0.0

Alace

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Alace 2010-08-14T16:58:42+00:00

強烈希望你能把原mp3重切一次.在最後的部份加上淡出效果(音量漸小的效果.這樣子在選單放的時候才不會那麼怪)

mayosiiiiii

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mayosiiiiii 2010-08-17T01:38:58+00:00

>A</

Mayoi Neko

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Mayoi Neko 2010-08-17T11:07:18+00:00

oh done. thanks all>w</

Alace

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Alace 2010-08-18T21:09:48+00:00

Ok
offset+30ms XD

Tomoka Rin

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Tomoka Rin 2010-08-19T10:19:20+00:00

star~

soulfear

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soulfear 2010-08-22T11:36:28+00:00

Alace

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Alace 2010-08-22T16:53:24+00:00

http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/Get_my_way! OK i find where the song comes from
So it`s better to remove Anime from tag (already done)
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/5572 Genre is Anime here, shoukd i use pop for both or Anime ?? needs opinions
Last thing is fixing the SB+full submit again (i will ask RuRu to do it)

i am really like a babysitter now XD

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-08-23T09:38:18+00:00

Fixed some weird effect ^^

for Lyric , 條條 use fade style , and I think Lyric is not weird ~

OSB ~

Download: Mami Kawada - Aozora to Taiyou (Suzuka Asahina).osb

Mayoi Neko

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Mayoi Neko 2010-08-23T09:57:51+00:00

thank you ruru >A<

Alace

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Alace 2010-08-23T12:40:18+00:00

oh yeah!!!!