Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale · forum

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-05-09T00:32:35+00:00

From #modreqs and cuz your a filipino xD

General

Don't use comma on tags, space is enough for it
The quality of your mp3 is a bit low compared to the ranked version, maybe you want to steal it xDDD
Turn off widescreen support on Normal, Hard and zeroallies' Anti-love
00:18:406 - I think it's fine to put a red line here for resetting the metronome and also for less confusion on placing objects

Easy

Make it OD 2 and AR 3
00:01:632 - Remove the green line here, if your using it for volume, just put the volume in the redtick since there is no SV change here
00:03:910 (2) - I suggest that you move this on the downbeat (big white tick) cuz there is a sound there and put circle at 00:03:910, much better rhythm than you put the downbeat at the body of the slider
00:06:188 (1) - The spinner clearly ends at the downbeat
00:09:225 (1,2,3) - I think you can improve their shape why not blanket the tails of 00:09:225 (1,2) - to the body of 00:11:848 (3) - ?
Looks like you misplaced the claps, claps are mostly found at the up beats (2nd and 4th white tick) so maybe you need to rework them
00:19:717 (3,5) - Their overlap is noticeable, maybe adjust (3) upwards?
00:22:012 (1) - Remove NC and NC at 00:22:340 (2) -
00:23:651 (4) - NC and remove NC at 00:24:307 (1) -
00:27:258 (2) - Make these circles? because there are strong beat on the tail i think circle could emphasize it more
00:34:143 (4) - NC
00:36:110 (1) - Remove NC and NC at 00:36:766 (2) -
00:37:750 (3) - Same reason above
00:40:701 (3,5) - Might be confusing to new players, please avoid overlapping them like this
00:43:651 (1,2) - Fix blanket
00:46:274 (2,1) - Same reason above, thus it doesn't look good
00:48:242 (2) - The downbeat is very strong, so why just put it in a slider tail?
00:50:209 (2) - Ctrl+J?
01:02:340 (1) - Shorten it to 1/1 because downbeat is strong , must be clickable imo
01:03:324 (2,3) - Fix blanket
01:06:274 (1) - I think it would flow better if you Ctrl+J this slider
01:10:865 (2,3) - Avoid making gaps in the timeline like this, i don't see any reason to leave that tick blank, maybe you we're following the vocals but might be confusing imo
You need to be aware of your rhythms, keep in mind that every downbeat is strong and most of the time they are clickable for emphasis and also your NC is inconsistent, try to NC every 2 downbeats

Normal

Reduce HP and OD to 4
00:02:771 (2,3) - Swap these rhythms, don't let strong sound be on a slider tail, just like you did here 00:05:049 (5,6) -
00:06:188 (1) - The time recovery for the spinner in normal must be same as easy (1 downbeat) as this is also considered as the easy difficulties in a mapset, end it at 00:07:707
00:08:570 (1) - This is too difficult for beginners and also reverse slider like this are very uncommon on normals these days maybe just make it to 2/1 slider
00:13:160 (1) - Why not make two 1/2s instead of 2 time reverse slider?
Maybe ask some tips from Akitoshi how to map normals, beterano yan eh xDDD

I guess I'll stop here cuz I'm tired atm xDDD goodluck

pamutual po haha xDD

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Nitrous 2016-05-10T00:38:14+00:00

Janpai

Janpai wrote:
From #modreqs and cuz your a filipino xD
General
Don't use comma on tags, space is enough for it //Fixed
The quality of your mp3 is a bit low compared to the ranked version, maybe you want to steal it xDDD //I'll try getting a better version
Turn off widescreen support on Normal, Hard and zeroallies' Anti-love //Fixed
00:18:406 - I think it's fine to put a red line here for resetting the metronome and also for less confusion on placing objects

Easy
Make it OD 2 and AR 3 //Fixed
00:01:632 - Remove the green line here, if your using it for volume, just put the volume in the redtick since there is no SV change here //Fixed
00:03:910 (2) - I suggest that you move this on the downbeat (big white tick) cuz there is a sound there and put circle at 00:03:910, much better rhythm than you put the downbeat at the body of the slider //Added a note instead
00:06:188 (1) - The spinner clearly ends at the downbeat //Fixed
00:09:225 (1,2,3) - I think you can improve their shape why not blanket the tails of 00:09:225 (1,2) - to the body of 00:11:848 (3) - ? //Fixed *right?
Looks like you misplaced the claps, claps are mostly found at the up beats (2nd and 4th white tick) so maybe you need to rework them //Fixed
00:19:717 (3,5) - Their overlap is noticeable, maybe adjust (3) upwards? //Fixed
00:22:012 (1) - Remove NC and NC at 00:22:340 (2) - //Fixed
00:23:651 (4) - NC and remove NC at 00:24:307 (1) - //Fixed
00:27:258 (2) - Make these circles? because there are strong beat on the tail i think circle could emphasize it more //Fixed
00:34:143 (4) - NC //Fixed
00:36:110 (1) - Remove NC and NC at 00:36:766 (2) - //Fixed
00:37:750 (3) - Same reason above //Fixed
00:40:701 (3,5) - Might be confusing to new players, please avoid overlapping them like this //Fixed
00:43:651 (1,2) - Fix blanket //Fixed
00:46:274 (2,1) - Same reason above, thus it doesn't look good //Fixed
00:48:242 (2) - The downbeat is very strong, so why just put it in a slider tail? //Fixed
00:50:209 (2) - Ctrl+J? //Fixed
01:02:340 (1) - Shorten it to 1/1 because downbeat is strong , must be clickable imo //I can hear the vocals dominant here so I kept it at 3/1
01:03:324 (2,3) - Fix blanket //Fixed
01:06:274 (1) - I think it would flow better if you Ctrl+J this slider //Nah
01:10:865 (2,3) - Avoid making gaps in the timeline like this, i don't see any reason to leave that tick blank, maybe you we're following the vocals but might be confusing imo //Added a Circle
You need to be aware of your rhythms, keep in mind that every downbeat is strong and most of the time they are clickable for emphasis and also your NC is inconsistent, try to NC every 2 downbeats //Yup, everyone is complaining about my NC. I made this before learning how to place them.

Normal
Reduce HP and OD to 4
00:02:771 (2,3) - Swap these rhythms, don't let strong sound be on a slider tail, just like you did here 00:05:049 (5,6) - //Fixed
00:06:188 (1) - The time recovery for the spinner in normal must be same as easy (1 downbeat) as this is also considered as the easy difficulties in a mapset, end it at 00:07:707 //Fixed
00:08:570 (1) - This is too difficult for beginners and also reverse slider like this are very uncommon on normals these days maybe just make it to 2/1 slider
//Taboo right? Okay, I'll make it to 2 1/2 sliders then
00:13:160 (1) - Why not make two 1/2s instead of 2 time reverse slider? //Same here. Fixed
Maybe ask some tips from Akitoshi how to map normals, beterano yan eh xDDD //Akitoshi mai Senpai

I guess I'll stop here cuz I'm tired atm xDDD goodluck pamutual po haha xDD //Sure why not? Thanks too!

Akitoshi

2,685 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-05-10T03:16:53+00:00

you changed offset in a wrong way imo. Anyway I re-snapped them and I fixed few parts

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Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Vanillas 2016-05-11T11:31:38+00:00

From your queue, M4M here

I hope my poor English can express what I want to say.

Easy

Checking DS (I'm not sure whether it's bug or just my display problems)
00:12:832 (3,4) - 00:49:553 (2,3) -
00:04:516 (2) - It seems you followed the piano here, and as I see, you might follow the vocal at 00:02:618 (1,3) - (as you use long slidders), So I may remove it.
00:07:174 (1) - you may forget to change Volume here as it's a new red line. 10% or 15% seems good
00:10:209 (1,2) - start and end of the slidder stack together, which not seem good.
As for hitsound, you could add more. Such as 00:11:520 and 00:11:368 , It will be better if you add drum here.
00:16:438 add a circle here?
00:22:012 (5) - NC(new combo)? and cancel NC at 00:23:324 (1) -
00:32:504 (5) - NC here and cancel NC at 00:33:160 (1) -
00:42:996 (5) - NC here and cancel NC at 00:44:635 (1) -
00:45:619 (3) - NC here and cancel NC at 00:46:602 (1) -
00:47:258 (2,3,1) - avoid stack here ,It's dangerous for rank.
00:56:110 (2,3) - not looking good.
01:09:225 (5) - NC here
01:13:815 (4) - NC here and cancel NC at 01:15:127 (1) -
01:18:406 (4) - NC here and cancel NC at 01:20:373 (3) -
01:22:340 (6) - NC here

Normal

Try to use full screen, now you only use part of them, which make your notes all stack together. pic
Besides, NC seems not good, you could go through the map and correct them. And more important, I'm not very sure whether you follow the vocal or background music, you should hold on one of them and finish the map.So I recommend you remap this diff. It's up to you.
If you decided to remap it , pm me to let me know and I'll mod it after you finish remaping. And if you decide not to remap, also pm me and I will mod the diff.

Hard

Same as normal , as I see, the diff isn't polished yet. whether you wanna remap it or not, tell me I will come back later.
And check NC.

Akitoshi's Insane

main problem is that some notes seems overmap, though It's Insane diff, but also try to follow the song.
00:52:094 (6) - remove it seems overmap.
00:53:406 (7) - ^
00:55:947 (4,5) - ^
01:23:242 (4) - ^
not much to say , nice diff~

zeroallies Anti-Love

very nice diff after playing! nothing to say~

So sorry for short mod here.

Especially normal and hard. You'd better remap two diffs if you wanna this map rank.
Whatever, if you don't decide remap, pm me and I'll finish modding normal and hard.

Good luck to you~~

Akitoshi

2,685 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-05-11T14:04:04+00:00

I fixed all except this:

Vanillas wrote:
Akitoshi's Insane
01:23:242 (4) - This one is fine imo since it's still on the kiai section.
not much to say , nice diff~

Thank you!

nasunog nog nog nog nog

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Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Nitrous 2016-05-11T14:18:44+00:00

Vanillas wrote:
From your queue, M4M here

I hope my poor English can express what I want to say.

Easy
00:04:516 (2) - It seems you followed the piano here, and as I see, you might follow the vocal at 00:02:618 (1,3) - (as you use long slidders), So I may remove it. // I removed the circle as it confused you which one I was following. I was actually following the vocals in that part.
00:47:258 (2,3,1) - avoid stack here ,It's dangerous for rank.
00:56:110 (2,3) - not looking good. // Polished

Normal
Try to use full screen, now you only use part of them, which make your notes all stack together. pic
Besides, NC seems not good, you could go through the map and correct them. And more important, I'm not very sure whether you follow the vocal or background music, you should hold on one of them and finish the map.So I recommend you remap this diff. It's up to you.
If you decided to remap it , pm me to let me know and I'll mod it after you finish remaping. And if you decide not to remap, also pm me and I will mod the diff.

Hard
Same as normal , as I see, the diff isn't polished yet. whether you wanna remap it or not, tell me I will come back later.
And check NC.

So sorry for short mod here. Especially normal and hard. You'd better remap two diffs if you wanna this map rank.
Whatever, if you don't decide remap, pm me and I'll finish modding normal and hard. // I decided not too long ago to remap Hard. As for normal, I'll try to remap aswell.

Good luck to you~~

Thanks for using my Queue and Modding! I'll mod back after a few hours. Its quite late in my timezone actually...
I don't mind the short mod, since you took your time to mod, I don't mind. Also, I know my NC is very inconsistent. I should watch out for that.

-NanoRIPE-

2,042 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2016-05-12T07:41:57+00:00

here the osz
i was change the hitsound for easy diff
*when i'm post the code on forum it doesn't work

flake

713 posts

Joined December 2015

flake 2016-05-17T05:24:28+00:00

first of all I have to say that the timing seems, slow. for some reason.

Hard
00:07:269 (1) - make this spinner end on the red tick
00:15:455 (2,3) - change these into a slider like 00:16:110 (4) -
00:26:438 (2,3) - switch these two
01:11:520 (7) - make this into a slider that ends on the last red tick 01:12:176 (1) - move this slider to the last white tick
01:12:668 (3,4,5,6) - move these to the white tick

zeroallies' Anti-Love
00:02:618 (1,3) - make these sliders like 00:04:136 (5) -
00:05:655 (3) - same

I dunno, I can't really mod a lot of things despite the fact you already have a lot of mods. Anyways m4m

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Nitrous 2016-05-17T05:43:56+00:00

crystalinfusion wrote:
first of all I have to say that the timing seems, slow. for some reason.

Hard
00:07:269 (1) - make this spinner end on the red tick // Fixed
00:15:455 (2,3) - change these into a slider like 00:16:110 (4) - // Fixed
00:26:438 (2,3) - switch these two // Fixed
01:11:520 (7) - make this into a slider that ends on the last red tick 01:12:176 (1) - move this slider to the last white tick
01:12:668 (3,4,5,6) - move these to the white tick

I dunno, I can't really mod a lot of things despite the fact you already have a lot of mods. Anyways m4m

Thanks for using my Modding Queue! and also for Modding!

Rieri

905 posts

Joined December 2014

Rieri 2016-05-17T14:58:05+00:00

m4m!

You should practice the NC's, there are some incorrect NC's in the diffs

Easy

00:15:127 (1) - nc shouldn't start here, 00:15:455 (2) - it should be here
00:22:012 (1,2) - blanket
00:41:684 (3,4) - ^
00:44:635 (2,3) - ^
00:55:455 (1) - no nc, 00:56:110 (2) - nc here
01:03:651 - this is kinda awkward cause you left this sound out, maybe make the slider a repeat

Normal

00:18:078 (1) - there should be at least a half a measure break from the next note
01:06:602 - this should actually be clickable, I recommend you move 01:06:602 (1) - there
same for 01:11:848.

Hard

00:09:553 (1) - ctrl-g would look nicer
00:10:209 (3,4) - not really great flow imo, because its going to the right and you're gonna have to move up all of a sudden
00:16:766 (4,5) - separate these two a little
00:17:914 (1) - a 1/4 measure of break is needed
00:20:373 - why did you skip this?
00:22:012 - this should be clickable!
00:24:799 (3,4) - these don't sound so good, how about getting rid of the 3rd circle
00:42:340 (7,8) - blanket
00:44:635 (3,4) - ^
00:50:373 (4,5,6,7) - seems like a really high ds for such a calm and steady part of the song
00:53:324 - skipped a note
01:00:701 (1,1) - not on a hard, make sure these two are touching
01:01:356 (1) - starting from here, i recommend this kind of rhythm http://puu.sh/oVceS/e9ebdd03f0.jpg
01:03:979 (1) - from here, http://puu.sh/oVckY/74da7fa0ca.jpg
01:07:914 (1,2,3) - not good rhythm, try this http://puu.sh/oVcob/3814bd2218.jpg
01:11:848 - this is where the new combo should start
01:26:766 (1,2) - if you are going to do this, this should have started from 01:26:274 (5) - here but I recommend to just map it normally, following the instrumentals or something.

Insane

00:11:029 (4,5) - not good flow, make the slider like this http://puu.sh/oVcHm/9a7f60a5ab.jpg but then you're gonna have to remap the next part so it flows smoothly

Wow, I couldn't find a thing here, nicely mapped.

anti-love

KIAI ISNT SNAPPED
00:06:985 (6,1) - this might feel a little awkward cause when you move from 00:06:985 (6) - to 00:07:174 (1) - here, you're moving left but the slider is pointing upwards, this may feel a little bit forceful
00:10:865 (3,1) - blanket
00:29:389 (1,2) - even though this may be an emphasis on drums, I honestly think you've overdone this. try decreasing ds a little
00:29:881 (1) - is there a way to know that this is a 3/4 slider?
00:32:340 (1,2) - hmm... why?
00:36:274 (1,3) - blanket these two
00:38:406 (3,5) - blanket
00:51:520 (2,3) - separate these two, the distance isnt correct
00:55:783 (4,5,1) - not a great flow imo, here's a suggestion http://puu.sh/oVdpK/ffd3ae0a41.jpg
01:02:996 (3,5) - blanket
01:03:651 (6,1) - ^
01:11:192 (1) - why in the world would you put this here?
01:11:848 (1,2,3) - i don't understand the spacing here 01:12:176 (2) - this is so close to 01:11:848 (1) - this but there's more distance to 01:12:340 (3) - here? they all have the same amount of break in between each object
01:25:783 (2,1,2) - really hard to play, consider remaking pattern

This was all I could find, hope this helps.

Good luck!

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Nitrous 2016-05-17T21:58:44+00:00

ProEzreal wrote:
m4m!

You should practice the NC's, there are some incorrect NC's in the diffs
Easy
00:15:127 (1) - nc shouldn't start here, 00:15:455 (2) - it should be here
00:22:012 (1,2) - blanket
00:41:684 (3,4) - ^
00:44:635 (2,3) - ^
00:55:455 (1) - no nc, 00:56:110 (2) - nc here
01:03:651 - this is kinda awkward cause you left this sound out, maybe make the slider a repeat

Normal
00:18:078 (1) - there should be at least a half a measure break from the next note
01:06:602 - this should actually be clickable, I recommend you move 01:06:602 (1) - there
same for 01:11:848.

Hard
00:09:553 (1) - ctrl-g would look nicer
00:10:209 (3,4) - not really great flow imo, because its going to the right and you're gonna have to move up all of a sudden
00:16:766 (4,5) - separate these two a little
00:17:914 (1) - a 1/4 measure of break is needed
00:20:373 - why did you skip this?
00:22:012 - this should be clickable!
00:24:799 (3,4) - these don't sound so good, how about getting rid of the 3rd circle
00:42:340 (7,8) - blanket
00:44:635 (3,4) - ^
00:50:373 (4,5,6,7) - seems like a really high ds for such a calm and steady part of the song
00:53:324 - skipped a note
01:00:701 (1,1) - not on a hard, make sure these two are touching
01:01:356 (1) - starting from here, i recommend this kind of rhythm http://puu.sh/oVceS/e9ebdd03f0.jpg
01:03:979 (1) - from here, http://puu.sh/oVckY/74da7fa0ca.jpg
01:07:914 (1,2,3) - not good rhythm, try this http://puu.sh/oVcob/3814bd2218.jpg
01:11:848 - this is where the new combo should start
01:26:766 (1,2) - if you are going to do this, this should have started from 01:26:274 (5) - here but I recommend to just map it normally, following the instrumentals or something.

This was all I could find, hope this helps.
Good luck!

While I can't note on all suggestions, One remark is that I used most of it. I'd say this really helped! Thanks for modding!
Forgot to note that I already fixed the Unsnapped Kiai in za's Anti-Love.

Last edited by Nitrous 2016-05-18T14:41:16+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Akitoshi

2,685 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-05-18T04:47:11+00:00

ProEzreal wrote:
00:11:029 (4,5) - not good flow, make the slider like this http://puu.sh/oVcHm/9a7f60a5ab.jpg but then you're gonna have to remap the next part so it flows smoothly well yes, the flow is good in your suggested image but I want to keep my current one for some edgy flow as an Insane diff.

Wow, I couldn't find a thing here, nicely mapped.

Thanks for your check, anyway I fixed some blanket lel

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Zallies

499 posts

Joined April 2015

Zallies 2016-05-18T12:40:52+00:00

ProEzreal wrote:
m4m!

You should practice the NC's, there are some incorrect NC's in the diffs

anti-love
KIAI ISNT SNAPPED Theres nothing wrong?
00:06:985 (6,1) - this might feel a little awkward cause when you move from 00:06:985 (6) - to 00:07:174 (1) - here, you're moving left but the slider is pointing upwards, this may feel a little bit forceful I fixed the awkward pattern
00:10:865 (3,1) - blanket
00:29:389 (1,2) - even though this may be an emphasis on drums, I honestly think you've overdone this. try decreasing ds a little ok
00:29:881 (1) - is there a way to know that this is a 3/4 slider? Nah, this one isnt snap.
00:32:340 (1,2) - hmm... why? "Change into 3 cirlces."
00:36:274 (1,3) - blanket these two New pattern, also I, distance this
00:38:406 (3,5) - blanket DONE
00:51:520 (2,3) - separate these two, the distance isnt correct ok
00:55:783 (4,5,1) - not a great flow imo, here's a suggestion http://puu.sh/oVdpK/ffd3ae0a41.jpg no. this is better
01:02:996 (3,5) - blanket ?
01:03:651 (6,1) - ^ compressed
01:11:192 (1) - why in the world would you put this here? ctrl+j is nice/color]
01:11:848 (1,2,3) - i don't understand the spacing here 01:12:176 (2) - this is so close to 01:11:848 (1) - this but there's more distance to 01:12:340 (3) - here? they all have the same amount of break in between each object
01:25:783 (2,1,2) - really hard to play, consider remaking pattern

This was all I could find, hope this helps.
Good luck!

Thanks for the mod! :v btw this my first GD map, so i apparently, my diff gets mods again..
ok. New remapped, since nitrous said tomorrow. Someone would be a BIG mod for my difficulty, I decided to remap.

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Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2016-05-19T05:06:34+00:00

All right ladies and gents, lets get to work

[za's Anti-love]

Idk how well 7.2 OD will do, I suggest either sticking to 7 or 7.5
00:02:997 (2) - Inconsistent spacing between these four sliders 00:02:618 (1,2,3,4) - Should be spaced around 2.1-2.3
00:04:136 (5) - Flow here doesn't play well , this note is pratically linear 00:03:757 (4) - but then transitions very awkwardly into the next slider
00:04:136 (5) - NC should've started here, it goes off with the hard piano key in the BG. Starting here your NC should be like this http://puu.sh/oXbbu/93c232fb6d.jpg 4 note NC
00:07:554 (2) - Spacing here is too close and this whole part seems rather underdeveloped 00:06:985 (6,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think you should try a newer pattern here, something that could be done. 00:07:554 (2,4) - Ctrl+G these notes and make 00:08:314 (2,3,4) - like http://puu.sh/oXbmq/f54d507c44.png
00:08:692 (4) - I'd be careful it will be unrankable since it doesn't snap to anything. It's on a yellow 1/8 tick which is strange
00:11:848 (1) - Bad blanket and spacing too close for a NC, switch this with (2) and it will play better
00:12:176 (3,4) - These notes have the same sound but the hitsounds are completely different, I would make these identical to each other since the two clap sounds back to back is bad
00:12:832 (1) - Flow here is pretty awkward to hit, most people would map this as a complete rotation or ctrl+g this note, but you have it in a way where you have to play the rotation to hit another rotation right after it that feels strange to play. It's up to you to see what you want to do here
00:14:143 (1) - Same as above, NC but has a shorter distance snap than 00:13:815 (4,5) - feelsbadman should probably make spacing bigger for more impact on the violin
00:14:471 (2) - 00:14:471 (2) - You can make this as a note slider, It doesn't really serve any purpose being a repeat. The reason why it should be a note slider is that it matches the violin with 00:14:143 (1) - Or you can have the repeat slider here 00:14:635 - which is better imo
00:17:258 (2) - Again too close of spacing to really make this pentagon stand out.
00:19:389 (1,2) - This is better played as a stack, pretty big leap from a spinner to a 1.75 spacing
00:21:684 (4) - TBH it would look a lot nicer at x:274 y:187
00:24:635 (1) - This can cause trouble for players since they can misread this since the stack here serves no purpose, and yes this is considered an unrankable issue. the proper way would to ctrl+g this 1/2 but it's up to you
00:24:143 (6) - Maybe try to keep spacing similiar with (5) and (7) really would have more of a visual impact
00:24:963 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Nothing really in the song to all of a sudden make single note spam like this. Especially with all the 1-2 NC you used here. I think its
just too much too quickly
00:28:242 (6) - Wouldn't you say this would look cleaner with good spacing http://puu.sh/oXc0E/eda4217ad1.jpg
00:27:258 (3) - NC should be here instead of on a random vocal
00:30:209 (2) - Again spacing is just too close, this part of the song feels faster than the previous part of the song but then you have .95 spacing then the following note is 1.09 is just doesn't add up
00:31:684 (3) - Spacing is close switch with (3) would play better
00:32:504 (3) - NC should be here
00:32:340 (1,2,3) - This should be where (4) is placed at, it's better transitions this way
00:33:488 (1,2) - This seems like a rather random thing you just put in here, tbh stacking would've suited this better, and you can somehow make the straight slider have more of an impact, it's rather bland and looks like a slider that catch the beat might need
00:36:274 (1) - Sliderend is played on a really clickable beat, 00:36:110 (4) - starting here your rhythm should've been more effective as http://puu.sh/oXckf/122930ae8b.jpg
00:40:373 (1) - Why is this a single note? The long sound really holds clear near this part, could've been this rhythm http://puu.sh/oXcob/a6b07ae54f.jpg
00:44:799 (1) - No need to NC here yet
00:45:619 (1) - NC here
00:50:209 (1) - NC doesn't need to be here
00:50:865 (1) - NC here
00:52:832 (1) - Your rhythm should've been like this, you neglected a downbeat and a strong drum beat that stands out here as well, ending on drum beats on a slider doesn't feel as effective as having a clickable note on the beat http://puu.sh/oXcv9/f1b7d47d25.jpg
00:54:799 (1) - Inconsistent spacing, these should all be the same if you want to have a better playing effect 00:54:307 (3,4,5,1) -
00:56:110 (1) - Rhythm like this http://puu.sh/oXcy3/6e638b9b4e.jpg it balances out with 00:57:094 (4,5,1) - since it's the same pattern
01:03:979 (1) - Spacing can be changed
01:12:996 (2) - Sliderend ends on a white tick, again should be clickable note, so it should be a note and a 1/1 slider. Remove (4)
01:17:422 (2,3,4) - The triangle you are trying to form can definitely look cleaner
01:18:406 (1) - Spacing here can be a little bigger
01:19:061 (3) - Too close
01:22:012 (3) - This slider should only have a clap on head and nothing else.
01:22:340 (1) - Blanket can be better
01:23:979 (1) - Too close
The only problem was the spacing was inconsistent, the reason why your NC was off is because you aren't utilizing the white ticks for single notes or to start off your slider with. It creates inconsistent balance between your NC, it also messes with the rhythm that the notes and the song interact with each other.

[Akitoshi's Insane]

00:18:078 (1) - If you move the red anchor in more the blanket will be more toned out, but that's just me
00:50:373 (4) - How about like this with the spacing? http://puu.sh/oXd40/f8ba67c4c0.jpg
01:00:291 (3) - Drum-whistle is very strange here idk what sound this supports tbh.
Not bad

[Hard]

1st I want to say that your hitsounds are kinda just out there, you're using hitsounds the wrong way in a standard map. You're creating rhythms that doesn't feel like its part of the song. Sure taiko maybe but on standard idk. If it was a part where you can map out a specific part of the song sure I'm fine with it, but the whole thing with your rhythm... hmm I'm not so sure about this.

00:02:618 (1) - This is a strange angle and area to start of with this slider man...
00:07:174 (6) - Keep DS 1.4 pls
00:11:520 (7,8,9) - Hitsound here is very strange, should have a clap in here preferably on sliderstart of (8)
00:13:979 (5) - This note isn't technically needed, you're adding a lot with this note here. Try to create a pause effet which feels nice. As well as hitsounds, too much going on
00:14:143 (6) - NC pls
00:14:471 (7) - I don't actually like stacks on sliders it ruins the flow you had going
00:16:110 (3) - Distance snap doesn't correspond to where it's placed. I recommend to change this
00:16:766 (4) - NC
00:17:914 (1) - You started the spiner too early, you can hear the note that is clickable put placed a spinner over it. I would move it over and put a note here
00:20:209 (4) - Ew skipped a perfectly good downbeat
00:20:865 (6) - Same as ^
00:22:012 (2) - This should've been a NC
00:19:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - This is what the proper rhythm should've been. http://puu.sh/oXdEs/a52d6f6c8a.jpg
The next are also kinda meh
00:24:471 (2) - This could've been good with a triplet for the piano and sliderend hits on a clickable beat. Also NC pls
00:25:783 (6,2) - Same as ^ please utilize downbeats
00:33:651 (3,4,5) - Too repetitive too fast, should've been like this http://puu.sh/oXdM5/96cfadc16e.jpg
00:37:094 (5,6,7,8,1) - Break pauses like this actually can kill a map on hard, sure some are nice, but not all most sections
00:40:045 (1) - Sliderend hits a key note man, missplaced the NC because of this
00:40:701 (2) - At here your rhythm should've been http://puu.sh/oXdTo/120fa338b2.jpg The repeat sliders are to play off of vocals and and guitar, you can listen carefully and you can tell yourself why
00:45:619 (6) - NC
00:46:766 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too many stuff being played too quickly since the song is at the soft stages
00:46:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is what it should be http://puu.sh/oXe0d/5f605c34e2.jpg
00:53:651 (5,6) - You can delete this and make (4) a long repeat slider, you'll thank me later
01:01:356 (1) - This feels very off for some reason, it doesn't play correctly right after the repeats. It's kinda late, maybe because the repeats don't actually hit anything

since 01:00:045 (5) - is where the steam should be played at, somewhere at (5)
01:12:996 (5,6) - never end stuff on sliders
I don't usually say this, but this diffficulty needs a revamp if you want to get this map near qualified state.

[Normal]

00:03:757 (3) - Again don't end notes on a big white tick like that. Like this http://puu.sh/oXecZ/8b4bcc2fc9.jpg
00:06:415 (2,3) - Also don't stack notes like this on normal it's actually really bad
00:12:832 (1,2) - Flow is strange, also takes a random rotation because of how (4) is placed. Looks pretty meh
00:24:471 (7) - Same stuff like I said previously
00:26:930 (1) - Same as ^
00:29:389 (5,6) - No stacks pls
00:30:537 (2,3) - Repeat slider, keep consistent with 00:31:848 (1) -
00:35:783 (2,3) - None of this in general, it's kinda hard for beginners
00:41:684 (4,5,6) - Definitely no triple stacks
00:42:668 (1) - Same as above with ending sliders like this
00:44:471 (5,6,7) - Bad rhythm imo, more like this http://puu.sh/oXeoy/b5c80fc781.jpg
00:48:569 (3,4,5) - Pls
00:51:520 (2) - Big white tickerino
00:53:160 (1) - Ew same as ^
00:54:963 (4,5,6) - Bad rhythm
00:57:422 (4) - What? How did this get into a normal
01:05:947 (3,4,1) - No
01:10:537 (4,5) - Repeat pls, copy pasta with 01:09:881 (3) -
01:11:192 (1,2,3) - Not like this
01:16:438 (4,5,1) - Ooo baby
01:24:307 (2,3,4) - Well shit...
Same as hard tbh

[Easy]

00:16:766 (3,4) - this is better for rhythm http://puu.sh/oXeyV/ed3462c084.jpg
00:52:176 (3) - Bad DS
00:56:110 (1,2,1,2,1) - Random and out of nowhere, you had 1/2 sliders then downgrade to 3/2 and 1/1 sliders.
Needs a little more workage

Most are ok but really if hard normal and easy don't get fixed I can't possibly see this moving up any further even if it had 33SP

Sorry to say but it's the harsh reality of ranking maps.

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2016-05-19T05:11:21+00:00

that donald trump mod

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-05-19T05:12:44+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
that donald trump mod

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2016-05-19T05:23:25+00:00

My Bad

Bunnrei

1,044 posts

Joined May 2011

Bunnrei 2016-05-19T05:24:18+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
that donald trump mod

took me a minute to get it

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Nitrous 2016-05-19T05:46:55+00:00

Kocari wrote:
-snipped-

I always had that feeling that I need to fix it. It could be more. That's why I always end up remapping it.
This mod is so helpful that I can't contain my enjoyment from reading it. I see that you actually took the time to go into detail about the maps. I'm very grateful for your time and effort to make this mod.

Kibbleru wrote:
that donald trump mod

*gasp*

Kocari wrote:
My Bad

Not a problem

Chara wrote:
Kibbleru wrote:
that donald trump mod
took me a minute to get it

Same here.

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2016-05-19T09:33:12+00:00

That's how it's meant to be done
-Edit and if you need any assistance while mapping you can ask me

Last edited by Winnie 2016-05-19T16:25:40+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Zallies

499 posts

Joined April 2015

Zallies 2016-05-19T10:31:57+00:00

Kocari wrote:
That's how it's meant to be done

yep, my map.. :d

Akitoshi

2,685 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-05-19T12:41:49+00:00

Kocari wrote:
[Akitoshi's Insane]
00:18:078 (1) - If you move the red anchor in more the blanket will be more toned out, but that's just me ah, yes yes. Tried.
00:50:373 (4) - How about like this with the spacing? http://puu.sh/oXd40/f8ba67c4c0.jpg this is just me that that image was same as current one? :v
01:00:291 (3) - Drum-whistle is very strange here idk what sound this supports tbh. same tbh change to drumclap atm xd
Not bad not bad for pp

Thank you!

Kocari wrote:
Most are ok but really if hard normal and easy don't get fixed I can't possibly see this moving up any further even if it had 33SP Sorry to say but it's the harsh reality of ranking maps.

This is much better approach than other some toxics that spitting their cancer sarcasm around here and there.
@-Nitrous never give up, you can get ranked work in the future, just have fun. Maybe requesting BN isn't the right time yet, keep asking mod for others and learn more things

welp update des

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Zallies

499 posts

Joined April 2015

Zallies 2016-05-19T15:00:44+00:00

ok so it was Kocari mods :c

Kocari wrote:
All right ladies and gents, lets get to work

[za's Anti-love]
Idk how well 7.2 OD will do, I suggest either sticking to 7 or 7.5 OD8 is better :v
00:02:997 (2) - Inconsistent spacing between these four sliders 00:02:618 (1,2,3,4) - Should be spaced around 2.1-2.3 I dont understand.. 2.1-2.3? its so long
00:04:136 (5) - Flow here doesn't play well , this note is pratically linear 00:03:757 (4) - but then transitions very awkwardly into the next slider Fixed
00:04:136 (5) - NC should've started here, it goes off with the hard piano key in the BG. Starting here your NC should be like this http://puu.sh/oXbbu/93c232fb6d.jpg 4 note NC Fixed
00:07:554 (2) - Spacing here is too close and this whole part seems rather underdeveloped 00:06:985 (6,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think you should try a newer pattern here, something that could be done. 00:07:554 (2,4) - Ctrl+G these notes and make 00:08:314 (2,3,4) - like http://puu.sh/oXbmq/f54d507c44.png wowww wat a fail screenshot XD
00:08:692 (4) - I'd be careful it will be unrankable since it doesn't snap to anything. It's on a yellow 1/8 tick which is strange I moved the timing section
00:11:848 (1) - Bad blanket and spacing too close for a NC, switch this with (2) and it will play better Nice
00:12:176 (3,4) - These notes have the same sound but the hitsounds are completely different, I would make these identical to each other since the two clap sounds back to back is bad Okay...
00:12:832 (1) - Flow here is pretty awkward to hit, most people would map this as a complete rotation or ctrl+g this note, but you have it in a way where you have to play the rotation to hit another rotation right after it that feels strange to play. It's up to you to see what you want to do here ur right, I change patterns
00:14:143 (1) - Same as above, NC but has a shorter distance snap than 00:13:815 (4,5) - feelsbadman should probably make spacing bigger for more impact on the violin I think part look like awkward, so I got a new pattern since 00:12:831 - 1/1 slider.
00:14:471 (2) - 00:14:471 (2) - You can make this as a note slider, It doesn't really serve any purpose being a repeat. The reason why it should be a note slider is that it matches the violin with 00:14:143 (1) - Or you can have the repeat slider here 00:14:635 - which is better imo New patterns! would be better
00:17:258 (2) - Again too close of spacing to really make this pentagon stand out. Expanding..
00:19:389 (1,2) - This is better played as a stack, pretty big leap from a spinner to a 1.75 spacing Fixed
00:21:684 (4) - TBH it would look a lot nicer at x:274 y:187 Fixed
00:24:635 (1) - This can cause trouble for players since they can misread this since the stack here serves no purpose, and yes this is considered an unrankable issue (oh god). the proper way would to ctrl+g this 1/2 but it's up to you Thanks, now i know the unrankable patterns e_e
00:24:143 (6) - Maybe try to keep spacing similiar with (5) and (7) really would have more of a visual impact Fixed
00:24:963 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Nothing really in the song to all of a sudden make single note spam like this. Especially with all the 1-2 NC you used here. I think its
just too much too quickly yes sir
00:28:242 (6) - Wouldn't you say this would look cleaner with good spacing http://puu.sh/oXc0E/eda4217ad1.jpg Yes but this is more cleaner patterns
00:27:258 (3) - NC should be here instead of on a random vocal Fixed
00:30:209 (2) - Again spacing is just too close, this part of the song feels faster than the previous part of the song but then you have .95 spacing then the following note is 1.09 is just doesn't add up so my distance is 1.2. and now its great
00:31:684 (3) - Spacing is close switch with (3) would play better Fixed
00:32:504 (3) - NC should be here Fixed
00:32:340 (1,2,3) - This should be where (4) is placed at, it's better transitions this way Fixed
00:33:488 (1,2) - This seems like a rather random thing you just put in here, tbh stacking would've suited this better, and you can somehow make the straight slider have more of an impact, it's rather bland and looks like a slider that catch the beat might need Fixed
00:36:274 (1) - Sliderend is played on a really clickable beat, 00:36:110 (4) - starting here your rhythm should've been more effective as http://puu.sh/oXckf/122930ae8b.jpg Fixed
00:40:373 (1) - Why is this a single note? The long sound really holds clear near this part, could've been this rhythm http://puu.sh/oXcob/a6b07ae54f.jpg
00:44:799 (1) - No need to NC here yet Fixed
00:45:619 (1) - NC here Fixed
00:50:209 (1) - NC doesn't need to be here sorry, back from the version 1.0
00:50:865 (1) - NC here Fixed
00:52:832 (1) - Your rhythm should've been like this, you neglected a downbeat and a strong drum beat that stands out here as well, ending on drum beats on a slider doesn't feel as effective as having a clickable note on the beat http://puu.sh/oXcv9/f1b7d47d25.jpg Fixed
00:54:799 (1) - Inconsistent spacing, these should all be the same if you want to have a better playing effect 00:54:307 (3,4,5,1) - Redusing..
00:56:110 (1) - Rhythm like this http://puu.sh/oXcy3/6e638b9b4e.jpg it balances out with 00:57:094 (4,5,1) - since it's the same pattern
01:03:979 (1) - Spacing can be changed
01:12:996 (2) - Sliderend ends on a white tick, again should be clickable note, so it should be a note and a 1/1 slider. Remove (4)
01:17:422 (2,3,4) - The triangle you are trying to form can definitely look cleaner nice thanks
01:18:406 (1) - Spacing here can be a little bigger
01:19:061 (3) - Too close
01:22:012 (3) - This slider should only have a clap on head and nothing else. Fixed
01:22:340 (1) - Blanket can be better
01:23:979 (1) - Too close Fixed
The only problem was the spacing was inconsistent, the reason why your NC was off is because you aren't utilizing the white ticks for single notes or to start off your slider with. It creates inconsistent balance between your NC, it also messes with the rhythm that the notes and the song interact with each other.

Most are ok but really if hard normal and easy don't get fixed I can't possibly see this moving up any further even if it had 33SP Sorry to say but it's the harsh reality of ranking maps.

:dddddddddddddd y u do this.
Thanks for the BIGGG MODDS!!

za's Anti-love 2.1.5

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-NanoRIPE-

2,042 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2016-05-31T06:41:28+00:00

HI Again ~ M4M :<

[General]
01:22:340 - end of kiai time?

[Easy]
00:07:174 (1) - end of spinner must be here 00:08:693
00:12:831 (1,2) - Blanket
00:37:749 (1,2) - ^
00:50:864 (1) - fix the DS
01:03:651 (5) - NC and remove NC here 01:03:979
01:11:848 (6) - NC
01:14:143 (9) - NC here and remove NC 01:14:471
01:16:438 (4) - NC
01:22:340 (3) - ^

Many Mistakes for Hitsounding,i think you must fix it especially in the kiai time section
if u dont mind try my hitsound ~

hehe

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61029
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:W:Wonder tale (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:W:Wonder tale (TV Size)
Artist:Tamura Yukari
ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
Creator:-Nitrous
Version:Easy
Source:俺の彼女と幼なじみが修羅場すぎる
Tags:oreshura ending Akitoshi zeroallies Ore no Kanojo to Osananajimi ga Shuraba Sugiru
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[Difficulty]
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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[Normal]
00:07:364 (1) - end of spinner same as easy
00:54:143 (2) - move to x:77 y:223
01:24:635 (4,1) - blanket

for this diff i think Mistakes of hitsounding less than easy ~

[Hard]
00:06:795 (7,8) - dont stack them
00:29:389 (1,2) - use drum clap
00:39:061 (5,6) - ^
01:18:405 (1,3) - try to blanket them
01:26:274 (1) - hmmm remove clap

Nah ~

[Akitohsi's insane]
00:04:896 (2) - remove clap
00:56:110 (1) - finish
01:27:586 (1) - remove finish

[Extra]
00:19:389 (1) - finish
00:28:569 (7) - ^

GL ~

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Nitrous 2016-05-31T07:26:59+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

HI Again ~ M4M :<

[General]
01:22:340 - end of kiai time?

[Easy]
00:07:174 (1) - end of spinner must be here 00:08:693 // Done
00:12:831 (1,2) - Blanket // Done
00:37:749 (1,2) - ^ // Nay
00:50:864 (1) - fix the DS // Done
01:03:651 (5) - NC and remove NC here 01:03:979 // Done
01:11:848 (6) - NC // Done
01:14:143 (9) - NC here and remove NC 01:14:471 // Done
01:16:438 (4) - NC // Done
01:22:340 (3) - ^ // Done

Many Mistakes for Hitsounding,i think you must fix it especially in the kiai time section
if u dont mind try my hitsound ~ // Used it

hehe

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ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
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Source:俺の彼女と幼なじみが修羅場すぎる
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[Normal]
00:07:364 (1) - end of spinner same as easy // Done
00:54:143 (2) - move to x:77 y:223 // Done
01:24:635 (4,1) - blanket // Done

for this diff i think Mistakes of hitsounding less than easy ~

[Hard]
00:06:795 (7,8) - dont stack them // Done
00:29:389 (1,2) - use drum clap // Done
00:39:061 (5,6) - ^ // Done
01:18:405 (1,3) - try to blanket them // Done
01:26:274 (1) - hmmm remove clap // Done

GL ~

Thanks for Modding! Will reply shortly for the M4M.

wojciooo

28 posts

Joined July 2013

wojciooo 2016-05-31T15:28:16+00:00

from modreqs, dunno if it helps but:

anti-love

combos:
00:05:655 (5) - nc
00:06:415 (1) - and here remove nc
00:22:012 (3) - i would make Nc on this slider
00:32:340 (6) - remove nc
00:32:504 (1) - nc
00:41:684 (5) - nc
00:52:176 (6) - nc

circles:
00:50:537 (3,4,5,1) - this kinda lack flow for me
00:51:848 (4) - maybe move it a bit far from slider?

akitoshi's insane

00:42:668 (3,1) - overlap :O ?
cant really thing anything more in this diff

Very good map, gl :>

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Nitrous 2016-06-01T04:21:21+00:00

wojciooo wrote:
from modreqs, dunno if it helps but:
anti-love
combos:
00:05:655 (5) - nc
00:06:415 (1) - and here remove nc
00:22:012 (3) - i would make Nc on this slider
00:32:340 (6) - remove nc
00:32:504 (1) - nc
00:41:684 (5) - nc
00:52:176 (6) - nc

circles:
00:50:537 (3,4,5,1) - this kinda lack flow for me
00:51:848 (4) - maybe move it a bit far from slider?
akitoshi's insane
00:42:668 (3,1) - overlap :O ? // Akitoshi: still rankable because the head of the tail is still visible
cant really thing anything more in this diff
Very good map, gl :>

Zallies

499 posts

Joined April 2015

Zallies 2016-06-02T10:59:48+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
HI Again ~ M4M :<

[Extra]
00:19:389 (1) - finish Fixed
00:28:569 (7) - ^ Fixed

GL ~

wojciooo wrote:
from modreqs, dunno if it helps but:
anti-love
combos:
00:05:655 (5) - nc Fixed
00:06:415 (1) - and here remove nc Fixed
00:22:012 (3) - i would make Nc on this slider ok
00:32:340 (6) - remove nc already did it
00:32:504 (1) - nc Fixed
00:41:684 (5) - nc Fixed
00:52:176 (6) - nc 00:52:340 (7) - This is better, you'll probably understand the patterns

circles:
00:50:537 (3,4,5,1) - this kinda lack flow for me because of hitosund btw, change the 3 circle becuase its much if 5 circle lmao
00:51:848 (4) - maybe move it a bit far from slider? ctrl + G
Very good map, gl :>

Oh thank god, finally some small mods! Thanks for the Mods~~ <3

=====
[General]
01:01:028 - I put some New timing here cuz when I here my 01:01:336 (1) - last stream, lol I think its late timing so I put it in the 01:01:028 - this time
http://puu.sh/pdRGP/0c9c2c254e.txt <-- Timing Points
=====

My Newest Hitsounds! Becuase there's so many that didn't use for the beatmap, so I'd fix my hitsound soft-hitnormal10/20/30 to soft-hitnormal3, etc.
Erase the hitsounds, 10,20,30.

za's Anti-love 3.0.0

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ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
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Version:za's Anti-Love
Source:俺の彼女と幼なじみが修羅場すぎる
Tags:oreshura ending Akitoshi zeroallies Ore no Kanojo to Osananajimi ga Shuraba Sugiru
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140,152,63631,2,0,P|147:105|184:63,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,152,63959,6,0,L|232:260,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,248,64287,2,0,P|434:216|386:208,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,336,64615,1,8,0:3:0:0:
288,224,64779,1,8,0:3:0:0:
192,336,64943,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,224,65107,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,304,65271,6,0,P|40:200|94:125,2,200,8|8|8,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
196,332,66090,2,0,L|312:324,1,100,8|12,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,264,66418,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,252,66500,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,232,66582,6,0,P|449:181|442:128,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,104,66910,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,196,67074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,260,67238,2,0,L|156:268,1,100,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
276,104,67566,5,8,0:0:0:0:
320,196,67730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,280,67894,2,8,L|472:288,1,100,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:1:0:0:
384,96,68222,2,0,P|336:76|272:80,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,280,68549,2,0,P|413:248|441:191,1,100,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
204,164,68877,2,0,P|210:215|246:268,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,188,69205,6,0,P|65:136|29:83,1,100,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,24,69533,2,0,P|176:43|240:40,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,111,69861,1,8,0:3:0:0:
340,43,70025,1,8,0:3:0:0:
364,136,70189,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,16,70353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,174,70517,5,8,0:3:0:0:
340,43,70681,1,8,0:3:0:0:
356,240,70845,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,16,71008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,71172,1,8,0:3:0:0:
248,336,71336,1,8,0:3:0:0:
219,86,71500,2,0,L|94:54,1,100,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,71746,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,64,71828,6,0,P|75:109|74:158,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,224,72156,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,76,72320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,264,72484,2,0,L|440:248,1,100,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
292,180,72812,5,8,0:0:0:0:
136,316,72976,2,8,L|32:300,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:3,0:1:0:0:
88,216,73304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,124,73468,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,212,73631,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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392,184,74123,2,0,L|278:201,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,176,74451,6,0,P|124:229|146:273,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,284,74779,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,112,74943,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,60,75107,2,0,L|96:48,1,100,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
356,168,75435,2,0,L|460:156,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,284,75763,5,8,0:3:0:0:
280,112,75927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,180,76090,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,28,76254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,184,76418,2,0,L|316:288,1,100,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
160,196,76746,2,8,L|171:96,1,100
236,40,76992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,40,77074,6,0,L|339:50,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,96,77402,2,0,L|68:106,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,192,77730,2,0,L|80:276,1,100,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
180,268,78058,2,0,L|222:173,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,76,78386,6,0,P|344:84|392:64,1,100,8|0,0:3|0:1,0:1:0:0:
500,184,78713,2,8,P|444:176|396:196,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:1,0:1:0:0:
336,336,79041,1,8,0:3:0:0:
184,308,79205,1,8,0:3:0:0:
216,152,79369,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,184,79533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,308,79697,6,0,L|80:304,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,196,80025,2,0,P|64:144|100:120,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,164,80353,1,8,0:3:0:0:
256,40,80517,1,8,0:3:0:0:
368,132,80681,2,0,L|468:108,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,24,81008,5,8,0:3:0:0:
256,216,81172,1,8,0:3:0:0:
408,320,81336,2,0,B|433:277|433:277|433:226,1,100,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,132,81664,5,8,0:3:0:0:
256,216,81828,1,8,0:3:0:0:
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32,80,82238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,80,82320,6,0,P|54:168|160:172,1,200,8|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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280,144,82976,2,0,L|397:137,1,100,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
212,60,83304,5,8,0:0:0:0:
128,120,83468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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312,196,83959,5,8,0:0:0:0:
224,144,84123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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180,244,84615,5,8,0:0:0:0:
236,336,84779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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488,152,85599,1,8,0:3:0:0:
328,248,85763,1,8,0:3:0:0:
397,121,85927,1,8,0:0:0:0:
489,237,86090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,80,86254,6,8,L|460:24,1,50,2|2,0:3|0:3,0:2:0:0:
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288,112,86582,2,4,P|288:84|280:60,1,50,4|4,0:3|0:3,0:2:0:0:
188,112,86746,2,8,P|188:140|196:164,1,50,8|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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288,236,86992,1,2,0:3:0:0:
320,240,87074,1,4,0:3:0:0:
356,225,87156,1,2,0:3:0:0:
390,217,87238,1,2,0:3:0:0:
425,219,87320,1,4,0:3:0:0:
458,229,87402,1,4,0:3:0:0:
484,250,87484,1,2,0:3:0:0:
496,284,87566,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87648,12,0,90189,0:0:0:0:

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Shishou 2016-06-03T07:07:25+00:00

[easy]
00:04:896 (2) - move slider here 00:05:655 then put circle here 00:04:896 (2) -

00:31:848 (4) - ds

01:19:061 (2) - ^

01:17:094 (2) - remove clap

01:24:963 (1) - reverse slider then move this 01:26:274 (2) - here 01:26:602 (2) -

00:11:520 (3) - add whistle

00:12:176 (4) - ^

00:12:831 (1) - ^

00:16:766 (3) - ^

[normal]
00:16:766 (3) - add finish

00:14:799 (5) - add whistle

00:15:454 (1) - in teh slider tail

00:54:143 (2) - <copy paste . put it here 00:53:487 (1) - then ctrl+h

00:57:422 (3) - change the claps to whistle

01:02:668 (3) - remove clap the put whistle

[hard]
00:10:208 (3) - nc

00:15:454 (8) - nc

00:16:766 (1) - remove nc

00:17:586 (6) - nc

00:36:438 (5) - ^

how to map low diffs
how to mod
teach pls

good luck with ranking

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Nitrous 2016-06-03T07:25:48+00:00

abanes16 wrote:
[easy]
00:04:896 (2) - move slider here 00:05:655 then put circle here 00:04:896 (2) -
// Kept the original

01:24:963 (1) - reverse slider then move this 01:26:274 (2) - here 01:26:602 (2) - // Kept the original

[normal]
00:16:766 (3) - add finish

00:14:799 (5) - add whistle

00:15:454 (1) - in teh slider tail

00:54:143 (2) - <copy paste . put it here 00:53:487 (1) - then ctrl+h

00:57:422 (3) - change the claps to whistle

01:02:668 (3) - remove clap the put whistle // Applied Hitsound mod

[hard]
00:10:208 (3) - nc

00:15:454 (8) - nc

00:16:766 (1) - remove nc

00:17:586 (6) - nc

00:36:438 (5) - ^ // Applied NC Mod

how to map low diffs
how to mod
teach pls

good luck with ranking

Thanks for M4M!

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-06-04T03:29:51+00:00

Just a quick mod of za's Difficulty. If everything I noted is intentional, don't give me kudosu!!

za's Anti-Love

Some of the blankets look a bit off, not sure if they are intentional:

00:11:520 (1,3) -

00:13:815 (4,2) - (just a tiny bit)

00:25:290 (3,4) -

00:31:356 (2,3,4) -

00:41:520 (4,1) -

00:52:831 (4,5) -

00:56:766 (3,1) -

Spacing:

00:35:127 (1,2) -

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Nitrous 2016-06-04T14:58:52+00:00

Ora wrote:
Just a quick mod of za's Difficulty. If everything I noted is intentional, don't give me kudosu!!

za's Anti-Love
Some of the blankets look a bit off, not sure if they are intentional:

00:11:520 (1,3) -

00:13:815 (4,2) - (just a tiny bit)

00:25:290 (3,4) -

00:31:356 (2,3,4) -

00:41:520 (4,1) -

00:52:831 (4,5) -

00:56:766 (3,1) -
Spacing:

00:35:127 (1,2) -

Noted. I'll wait for zeroallies to reply.

Zallies

499 posts

Joined April 2015

Zallies 2016-06-04T15:05:14+00:00

Ora wrote:
Just a quick mod of za's Difficulty. If everything I noted is intentional, don't give me kudosu!!

za's Anti-Love
Some of the blankets look a bit off, not sure if they are intentional:

00:11:520 (1,3) -

00:13:815 (4,2) - (just a tiny bit)

00:25:290 (3,4) -

00:31:356 (2,3,4) -

00:41:520 (4,1) -

00:52:831 (4,5) -

00:56:766 (3,1) - ok
Spacing:

00:35:127 (1,2) - ok

thank you
http://puu.sh/pgvfw/58e883f028.txt 3.1

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2016-06-06T07:59:38+00:00

m4m.

[easy]
00:18:077 - add a note.
00:19:389 (1,2,3,4) - 00:24:635 (1,2,3,4,5) - similar music, but you use other rhythm. why? It could be very awkward about consistency. fix them.
00:27:258 (1,2) - It feels very awkward flow, so beginners can be hard to play, and 00:27:258 (1,3) - they are too closed, and beginners can hard to read,too.
my suggestion
00:28:569 (3) - slider sound is too loud. could you decrease?
00:32:504 (1) - this is bad for consistency, too. you used 1/1, but I can't understand why you used 2/1. Fix them please.
00:35:454 (2,3,4) - In this pattern. you can use symmetry like this
00:37:749 - ~ 00:40:045 - rhythm is verrry awkward. my rhythm suggestion
00:44:307 (3,4) - this is. too. rhythm is bad. you can use 3/2 sliders. why you use only 1/1? try this
00:49:553 (3,4) - ^
00:53:487 (1) - divide into 2 sliders.
01:23:651 (1) - remove NC

[Normal]
00:14:635 (4,5) - CTRL G rhythm is better.
00:20:536 - why you didn't added rhythm? It has a strong vocal.
01:02:012 (2,4) - bad overlap. could you fix them?
01:08:241 - you ignored this beat

01:07:913 (3,4) - this flowbreak could be bad in normal.

[Hard]
00:09:553 (1,2) - too loud. Could you decrease this sound?
00:11:192 (4,5) - they look near because of 4's slider body. and it can be confused about reading. fix them please.
01:26:274 (1) - you can devide into 2 sliders, 01:26:930 (2) - too.

Good luck

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Nitrous 2016-06-06T09:06:56+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
m4m.
~snipped
Good luck

While I can't note every change I made. Most things were changed were the rhythm consistency. I took your suggestions and it worked great!
Thanks for modding!

Chihara Minori

1,239 posts

Joined December 2013

Chihara Minori 2016-06-07T11:40:59+00:00

Quick Mods

Hard:
00:22:012 (1) - curve down feel better
00:31:848 (3) - decrese the curve a bit
00:51:520 (3) - blanket
00:53:487 (3) - same slider as 00:27:258 (1)

Thats the only thing i can found
Gl with rank

Nitrous

1,206 posts

Joined October 2015

Topic Starter

Nitrous 2016-06-07T13:43:34+00:00

eclipselotus wrote:
Quick Mods

Hard:
00:22:012 (1) - curve down feel better
00:31:848 (3) - decrese the curve a bit
00:51:520 (3) - blanket
00:53:487 (3) - same slider as 00:27:258 (1)

Thats the only thing i can found
Gl with rank

All is applied. Thanks for modding!

Qiyana

1,585 posts

Joined April 2014

Qiyana 2016-06-08T02:55:19+00:00

Hi

IRC Log

22:22 *-Nitrous is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/927029 Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale (TV Size)]
22:22 Dyl-Byl: Oreshura <3
22:22 -Nitrous: I already got the OP in WIP ~lol
22:22 Dyl-Byl: I like tamura yukari too
22:23 -Nitrous: yeah
22:23 Dyl-Byl: Oreshura is my second favorite anime
22:23 -Nitrous: its my second favorite too
22:23 -Nitrous: rokujouma took its spot from 1st
22:24 Dyl-Byl: Himouto! Umaru-Chan! Is my first
22:24 -Nitrous: so, umm you're up for it right?
22:24 -Nitrous: wait... Dyl-Byl...
22:24 Dyl-Byl: Well yess
22:24 -Nitrous: ah I remember you now!
22:24 Dyl-Byl: I'm a sad 11 year old
22:25 -Nitrous: [http://puu.sh/pkNgU/9a9f3cf68c.jpg you're that guy 3 months ago!]
22:25 Dyl-Byl: Well yes
22:25 -Nitrous: I rarely see the first page of the forums xd
22:26 Dyl-Byl: ok
22:26 -Nitrous: its been 3 months and it has 41 sp with tons of remaps (except the insane)
22:26 Dyl-Byl: ok
22:26 Dyl-Byl: Which diffs
22:26 -Nitrous: Ignore the Insane. It doesn't need mods anymore tbh
22:26 Dyl-Byl: ok
22:26 -Nitrous: thanks!
22:27 Dyl-Byl: Tbh, it looks like my old mapping style
22:27 -Nitrous: which one? The Easy to Hard diff or the gd expert?
22:27 Dyl-Byl: Easy
22:28 Dyl-Byl: Whatever you do, don't change your easy mapping style
22:28 Dyl-Byl: Keep blanketing in each fidd
22:28 Dyl-Byl: *diff
22:28 -Nitrous: haha I love my Easy mapping style. It looks so clean
22:29 Dyl-Byl: No, in all your diffs, don't change your mapping style
22:29 Dyl-Byl: I have tried changing my mapping style, it does not look good
22:29 Dyl-Byl: Keep the blankets
22:29 -Nitrous: tbh my mapping style is inspired from Akitoshi and Fycho
22:29 -Nitrous: Akitoshi's blankets and Fycho's rhythm patterns
22:29 Dyl-Byl: So, where do you want me to mod. In IRC or in the thread
22:30 -Nitrous: whatever you're comfortable with
22:30 Dyl-Byl: IRC is more quick so we're going for that
22:30 -Nitrous: ok
22:31 Dyl-Byl: Starting of with easy diff
22:32 -Nitrous: got it
22:32 Dyl-Byl: 00:04:896 (2) - It doesn't really sound good with that first slider from earlier
22:33 -Nitrous: should I tone down the volume or change it to a long slider
22:33 Dyl-Byl: Probably the volume
22:33 Dyl-Byl: 00:14:143 (3) - Move this onto x:253 and y:260
22:34 Dyl-Byl: 00:14:799 (4) - Replace that hitsound on the tail with a drum
22:35 -Nitrous: got it
22:35 Dyl-Byl: ok
22:36 Dyl-Byl: 00:33:815 (4) - Remove the sliderslide
22:36 -Nitrous: hitsound?
22:36 Dyl-Byl: Yes
22:36 -Nitrous: got it
22:36 Dyl-Byl: It doesn't sound good
22:36 -Nitrous: okay.
22:37 -Nitrous: I didn't hear any since I'm using the default skin for editing
22:37 Dyl-Byl: oh
22:38 Dyl-Byl: 00:40:372 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This section does not sound good for a effect volume of 70, maybe make it lower
22:38 Dyl-Byl: 00:54:143 (2,3) - Blanket properly
22:38 Dyl-Byl: 00:58:733 (1,2) - Fill in the gap
22:39 Dyl-Byl: 01:08:897 (4) - Fix Distance snap
22:39 -Nitrous: fill the gap?
22:39 Dyl-Byl: 01:08:897 (4) - Blanket this
22:39 Dyl-Byl: Add a note in between
22:39 Dyl-Byl: That's what I meant
22:40 Dyl-Byl: 01:22:340 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Tbh this doesn't look good
22:40 Dyl-Byl: That's all for that diff.
22:40 -Nitrous: in what way?
22:40 -Nitrous: aesthetically or rhythm
22:40 Dyl-Byl: Idk, the overlaps
22:40 -Nitrous: oh the aesthetics then
22:40 -Nitrous: ok
22:40 Dyl-Byl: I would remap that part
22:41 -Nitrous: ok
22:41 Dyl-Byl: On with the next diff
22:41 -Nitrous: got it
22:41 Dyl-Byl: Wait, there's one thing you missed in tags
22:41 Dyl-Byl: Oreshura
22:42 -Nitrous: nope, its in the very first
22:42 Dyl-Byl: Didn't notice that let's move on
22:42 -Nitrous: ok
22:43 Dyl-Byl: 00:07:174 (3,1) - The spinner is a bit too close to the 3
22:43 -Nitrous: is it unrankable?
22:44 Dyl-Byl: Idk
22:44 -Nitrous: I'll keep it for now.
22:44 Dyl-Byl: It seems a bit difficult for the diff
22:44 Dyl-Byl: I would just delete the 3 and put the spinner there
22:44 -Nitrous: ok I'll remove (3) and move the spinner to (3)'s position
22:44 Dyl-Byl: ok
22:46 Dyl-Byl: 00:10:209 (1,2,3,4,1) - This doesn't look ok for some reason
22:47 -Nitrous: lacks aesthetics?
22:47 Dyl-Byl: Well yes
22:47 -Nitrous: the rhythm is fine. it just lacks art
22:47 Dyl-Byl: well yes
22:48 Dyl-Byl: 00:16:766 (3) - Remove the finish there
22:48 Dyl-Byl: 00:23:323 (1) - Take out the new combo
22:48 Dyl-Byl: 00:24:635 (3) - Add the new combo there
22:49 Dyl-Byl: 00:24:635 (3) - Remove it here
22:49 Dyl-Byl: 00:27:258 (3) - Add the new combo here
22:49 Dyl-Byl: 00:35:127 (1) - Remove the drum hitsound
22:49 -Nitrous: the 2 before the last have the same link
22:49 Dyl-Byl: oh
22:50 Dyl-Byl: 00:35:127 (1) - Remove it there
22:50 Dyl-Byl: Oh god i'm dumb
22:50 Dyl-Byl: 00:25:946 (1) - I meant that one
22:51 -Nitrous: its ok
22:51 Dyl-Byl: Add a finish on the beginning of that
22:51 Dyl-Byl: 00:25:946 (1) - 
22:51 Dyl-Byl: nvm
22:51 Dyl-Byl: 01:01:356 (1) - 
22:51 Dyl-Byl: That I meant that
22:52 Dyl-Byl: 01:01:356 (1,2,3) - Fix distance snap
22:52 Dyl-Byl: 01:26:274 (3) - ^
22:52 Dyl-Byl: And that's all I got for the mod
22:53 Dyl-Byl: Thanks for choosing Dylan Airline Mods
22:53 -Nitrous: I can't believe that I missed this
22:53 -Nitrous: 01:25:618 (2,3) - the distance snap is way off
22:53 -Nitrous: no more hard?
22:53 Dyl-Byl: Well yes
22:53 Dyl-Byl: Umm no
22:53 -Nitrous: thanks!
22:53 Dyl-Byl: It's almost my bedtime
22:53 Dyl-Byl: My dad's going to yell at me
22:54 -Nitrous: ok, you can leave a forum post and I'll kudos you
22:54 -Nitrous: thanks alot!
22:54 Dyl-Byl: ok

Nitrous

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Nitrous 2016-06-08T02:56:03+00:00

Dyl-Byl wrote:

Hi

IRC Log

22:22 *-Nitrous is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/927029 Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder tale (TV Size)]
22:22 Dyl-Byl: Oreshura <3
22:22 -Nitrous: I already got the OP in WIP ~lol
22:22 Dyl-Byl: I like tamura yukari too
22:23 -Nitrous: yeah
22:23 Dyl-Byl: Oreshura is my second favorite anime
22:23 -Nitrous: its my second favorite too
22:23 -Nitrous: rokujouma took its spot from 1st
22:24 Dyl-Byl: Himouto! Umaru-Chan! Is my first
22:24 -Nitrous: so, umm you're up for it right?
22:24 -Nitrous: wait... Dyl-Byl...
22:24 Dyl-Byl: Well yess
22:24 -Nitrous: ah I remember you now!
22:24 Dyl-Byl: I'm a sad 11 year old
22:25 -Nitrous: [http://puu.sh/pkNgU/9a9f3cf68c.jpg you're that guy 3 months ago!]
22:25 Dyl-Byl: Well yes
22:25 -Nitrous: I rarely see the first page of the forums xd
22:26 Dyl-Byl: ok
22:26 -Nitrous: its been 3 months and it has 41 sp with tons of remaps (except the insane)
22:26 Dyl-Byl: ok
22:26 Dyl-Byl: Which diffs
22:26 -Nitrous: Ignore the Insane. It doesn't need mods anymore tbh
22:26 Dyl-Byl: ok
22:26 -Nitrous: thanks!
22:27 Dyl-Byl: Tbh, it looks like my old mapping style
22:27 -Nitrous: which one? The Easy to Hard diff or the gd expert?
22:27 Dyl-Byl: Easy
22:28 Dyl-Byl: Whatever you do, don't change your easy mapping style
22:28 Dyl-Byl: Keep blanketing in each fidd
22:28 Dyl-Byl: *diff
22:28 -Nitrous: haha I love my Easy mapping style. It looks so clean
22:29 Dyl-Byl: No, in all your diffs, don't change your mapping style
22:29 Dyl-Byl: I have tried changing my mapping style, it does not look good
22:29 Dyl-Byl: Keep the blankets
22:29 -Nitrous: tbh my mapping style is inspired from Akitoshi and Fycho
22:29 -Nitrous: Akitoshi's blankets and Fycho's rhythm patterns
22:29 Dyl-Byl: So, where do you want me to mod. In IRC or in the thread
22:30 -Nitrous: whatever you're comfortable with
22:30 Dyl-Byl: IRC is more quick so we're going for that
22:30 -Nitrous: ok
22:31 Dyl-Byl: Starting of with easy diff
22:32 -Nitrous: got it
22:32 Dyl-Byl: 00:04:896 (2) - It doesn't really sound good with that first slider from earlier
22:33 -Nitrous: should I tone down the volume or change it to a long slider
22:33 Dyl-Byl: Probably the volume
22:33 Dyl-Byl: 00:14:143 (3) - Move this onto x:253 and y:260
22:34 Dyl-Byl: 00:14:799 (4) - Replace that hitsound on the tail with a drum
22:35 -Nitrous: got it
22:35 Dyl-Byl: ok
22:36 Dyl-Byl: 00:33:815 (4) - Remove the sliderslide
22:36 -Nitrous: hitsound?
22:36 Dyl-Byl: Yes
22:36 -Nitrous: got it
22:36 Dyl-Byl: It doesn't sound good
22:36 -Nitrous: okay.
22:37 -Nitrous: I didn't hear any since I'm using the default skin for editing
22:37 Dyl-Byl: oh
22:38 Dyl-Byl: 00:40:372 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This section does not sound good for a effect volume of 70, maybe make it lower
22:38 Dyl-Byl: 00:54:143 (2,3) - Blanket properly
22:38 Dyl-Byl: 00:58:733 (1,2) - Fill in the gap
22:39 Dyl-Byl: 01:08:897 (4) - Fix Distance snap
22:39 -Nitrous: fill the gap?
22:39 Dyl-Byl: 01:08:897 (4) - Blanket this
22:39 Dyl-Byl: Add a note in between
22:39 Dyl-Byl: That's what I meant
22:40 Dyl-Byl: 01:22:340 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Tbh this doesn't look good
22:40 Dyl-Byl: That's all for that diff.
22:40 -Nitrous: in what way?
22:40 -Nitrous: aesthetically or rhythm
22:40 Dyl-Byl: Idk, the overlaps
22:40 -Nitrous: oh the aesthetics then
22:40 -Nitrous: ok
22:40 Dyl-Byl: I would remap that part
22:41 -Nitrous: ok
22:41 Dyl-Byl: On with the next diff
22:41 -Nitrous: got it
22:41 Dyl-Byl: Wait, there's one thing you missed in tags
22:41 Dyl-Byl: Oreshura
22:42 -Nitrous: nope, its in the very first
22:42 Dyl-Byl: Didn't notice that let's move on
22:42 -Nitrous: ok
22:43 Dyl-Byl: 00:07:174 (3,1) - The spinner is a bit too close to the 3
22:43 -Nitrous: is it unrankable?
22:44 Dyl-Byl: Idk
22:44 -Nitrous: I'll keep it for now.
22:44 Dyl-Byl: It seems a bit difficult for the diff
22:44 Dyl-Byl: I would just delete the 3 and put the spinner there
22:44 -Nitrous: ok I'll remove (3) and move the spinner to (3)'s position
22:44 Dyl-Byl: ok
22:46 Dyl-Byl: 00:10:209 (1,2,3,4,1) - This doesn't look ok for some reason
22:47 -Nitrous: lacks aesthetics?
22:47 Dyl-Byl: Well yes
22:47 -Nitrous: the rhythm is fine. it just lacks art
22:47 Dyl-Byl: well yes
22:48 Dyl-Byl: 00:16:766 (3) - Remove the finish there
22:48 Dyl-Byl: 00:23:323 (1) - Take out the new combo
22:48 Dyl-Byl: 00:24:635 (3) - Add the new combo there
22:49 Dyl-Byl: 00:24:635 (3) - Remove it here
22:49 Dyl-Byl: 00:27:258 (3) - Add the new combo here
22:49 Dyl-Byl: 00:35:127 (1) - Remove the drum hitsound
22:49 -Nitrous: the 2 before the last have the same link
22:49 Dyl-Byl: oh
22:50 Dyl-Byl: 00:35:127 (1) - Remove it there
22:50 Dyl-Byl: Oh god i'm dumb
22:50 Dyl-Byl: 00:25:946 (1) - I meant that one
22:51 -Nitrous: its ok
22:51 Dyl-Byl: Add a finish on the beginning of that
22:51 Dyl-Byl: 00:25:946 (1) - 
22:51 Dyl-Byl: nvm
22:51 Dyl-Byl: 01:01:356 (1) - 
22:51 Dyl-Byl: That I meant that
22:52 Dyl-Byl: 01:01:356 (1,2,3) - Fix distance snap
22:52 Dyl-Byl: 01:26:274 (3) - ^
22:52 Dyl-Byl: And that's all I got for the mod
22:53 Dyl-Byl: Thanks for choosing Dylan Airline Mods
22:53 -Nitrous: I can't believe that I missed this
22:53 -Nitrous: 01:25:618 (2,3) - the distance snap is way off
22:53 -Nitrous: no more hard?
22:53 Dyl-Byl: Well yes
22:53 Dyl-Byl: Umm no
22:53 -Nitrous: thanks!
22:53 Dyl-Byl: It's almost my bedtime
22:53 Dyl-Byl: My dad's going to yell at me
22:54 -Nitrous: ok, you can leave a forum post and I'll kudos you
22:54 -Nitrous: thanks alot!
22:54 Dyl-Byl: ok

Its been 3 months pal! Thanks for accepting my request!

Karen

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Karen 2016-06-10T04:32:18+00:00

hey here comes a mod, blame Kocari

General

All of your own diffs should end at the same point, so your Easy diff should end 01:30:208 - here
za's Anti-Love diff missing video
Unused hitsound normal-hitclap2.wav
soft-hitclap3.wav has a huge delay which is unrankable, use this one: http://puu.sh/pnjns/f865757623.wav

za's Anti-Love

00:09:553 - volume conflicts, this needs to be fixed
00:21:848 (5,6) - here is 1/6 not 1/4 i think
00:40:045 (2,1) - you may want to enlarge the spacing here since it's confusing considering 00:39:881 (1,2) - this one
00:41:192 (3) - i can't understand what the slider head is following, if you don't have a proper reason i think you need to make the rhythm here like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5353981
00:45:618 (1,2) - same as 00:40:045 (2,1) - , you can make a anti-jump here as well or just stack them
00:49:389 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - i don't think this pattern fits here, 00:49:717 (2,4,2,4) - these beats need to be emphasized imo
00:53:815 (7,1) - the stack is so annoying :c
00:55:290 (3,4) - enlarge the spacing since it's almost the same with the spacing for a 1/4 rhythm 00:55:782 (4,5) -
00:58:077 (3,5) - the blanket can be improved a bit
00:58:405 (5,1,2,3) - hmm the flow isn't that comfortable to play i think, try ctrl+g (2) and (3)
01:06:110 (2) - the slider head follows nothing, also 01:06:274 - this needs to be clickable :c
01:09:553 (2,3) - such a small spacing shouldn't exist in a kiai part

Akitoshi's Insane

00:09:553 - volume conflicts, this needs to be fixed
hp7 is not necessary
01:00:865 (1) - whistle starts here?
nice diff :3

Hard

00:09:553 - volume conflicts, this needs to be fixed
hitsound suggestions apply to all your own diffs
from the beginning to 00:07:174 - , add some whistles?
00:05:655 (5) - NC
00:16:766 (3,4,5) - the rhythm sounds weird, i'd suggest something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5354065
00:19:389 (1) - where is the finish
00:23:815 (2,3,4) - space them with distance snap, i don't think here needs a spacing change
01:15:127 (3,4) - i think it's better to use a same shape for the sliders o.o
01:26:274 (1,2) - add some hitsounds?

Normal

00:10:208 - if you don't need sv change here please delete the green line and move the volume and custom hitsound settings to the red line to avoid unnecessary troubles
from 00:19:389 - to 00:28:569 - , add some hitsounds, same for Easy
00:20:045 (1,2,3) - flow looks bad and a bit ugly, you can slightly adjust a bit like http://puu.sh/pnimf/2a70c68ca0.jpg
00:29:881 (2,3) - not a good flow and the reverse arrow is too close with 00:29:881 (2) - this slider, try http://puu.sh/pnipA/b2e0077061.jpg

Easy

00:10:209 - same as Normal
00:02:618 - increase the volume here, 10% is almost inaudible, don't forget to add some hitsounds
00:57:422 (1) - unnecessary NC
01:00:045 (3,1) - the spacing change increases the difficulty a lot, plus the flow isn't easy to catch, you need to rework here i think, like this: http://puu.sh/pniRZ/a0f212a357.jpg

set isn't bad but the highest difficulty needs a bit more improvement i think, anyways if you think your set is ready for being ranked, poke me back.

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