Odaril's Green Lines
00:01:455 (1) - [form] Try to make this symmetrical ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17940
00:12:749 (1) - [sound] Whistle hitsound on the beginning.
00:14:160 (3) - [sound] Replace Clap with Whistle.
00:15:572 (1) - [sound] Whistle hitsound on the beginning.
00:16:984 (3) - [sound] No hitsound.
00:17:337 (4) - [sound] Whistle hitsound.
└All accepted.
00:18:396 (1) - [form] SHARP ANGLES FJREKTFBEUITH >_> I told you to smoothen all sliders. *stops raging* also Whistle hitsound in the beginning.
└Accepted. (editing this was a little difficult)
00:19:807 (3) - [sound] Replace Clap with Whistle.
└Accepted.
00:25:454 (2) - ^
Replace all Clap hitsounds by Whistles hitsounds. Once again, the song is very soft to the ears, and Clap hitsounds are too aggressive. Use Whistles hitsounds on high-pitched notes, too.
└Damn, it had too many claps.
00:36:749 (4) - [form] Make it symmetrical http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17943
└Accepted.
01:00:749 (1) - [form] Ugly slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17944
└Accepted.
01:03:572 (7) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17948
└Accepted.
01:54:396 (1) - [form] SHARP ANGLES KFHZIFUGYEIFHBK >_> smoothen it (click it, then compose > slider curve type > Bézier)..
└Accepted.
02:09:925 (5) - [form] Ugly slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17950
└Accepted. (But not the same.)
02:20:160 (7) - ^ and use the same screenshot to make it nicer
└Accepted. (Copy and paste usually works ><)
02:33:925 (4,5) - [form] Same as 02:09:925 and same screenshot.
└Accepted. (Maybe I'll hate this type of slider..)
02:42:396 (6) - [form] Make it Bézier type curve.
└Accepted.
02:54:396 - [pattern] Fill in this break.
└changed no.5 to slider.
03:30:396 (1) - [form] Same as 02:09:925 and same screenshot.
└Accepted.
03:33:572 (7) - [form] Very ugly. I think you should even move the rest of the pattern down.
└Accepted.
03:41:690 (4) - [form] Same as 02:33:925.
└Accepted. (I start to hate this. REALLY. Symmetry is too complicated.)
00:12:749 (1) - [sound] Whistle hitsound on the beginning.
00:14:160 (3) - [sound] Replace Clap with Whistle.
00:15:572 (1) - [sound] Whistle hitsound on the beginning.
00:16:984 (3) - [sound] No hitsound.
00:17:337 (4) - [sound] Whistle hitsound.
└All accepted.
00:18:396 (1) - [form] SHARP ANGLES FJREKTFBEUITH >_> I told you to smoothen all sliders. *stops raging* also Whistle hitsound in the beginning.
└Accepted. (editing this was a little difficult)
00:19:807 (3) - [sound] Replace Clap with Whistle.
└Accepted.
00:25:454 (2) - ^
Replace all Clap hitsounds by Whistles hitsounds. Once again, the song is very soft to the ears, and Clap hitsounds are too aggressive. Use Whistles hitsounds on high-pitched notes, too.
└Damn, it had too many claps.
00:36:749 (4) - [form] Make it symmetrical http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17943
└Accepted.
01:00:749 (1) - [form] Ugly slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17944
└Accepted.
01:03:572 (7) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17948
└Accepted.
01:54:396 (1) - [form] SHARP ANGLES KFHZIFUGYEIFHBK >_> smoothen it (click it, then compose > slider curve type > Bézier)..
└Accepted.
02:09:925 (5) - [form] Ugly slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17950
└Accepted. (But not the same.)
02:20:160 (7) - ^ and use the same screenshot to make it nicer
└Accepted. (Copy and paste usually works ><)
02:33:925 (4,5) - [form] Same as 02:09:925 and same screenshot.
└Accepted. (Maybe I'll hate this type of slider..)
02:42:396 (6) - [form] Make it Bézier type curve.
└Accepted.
02:54:396 - [pattern] Fill in this break.
└changed no.5 to slider.
03:30:396 (1) - [form] Same as 02:09:925 and same screenshot.
└Accepted.
03:33:572 (7) - [form] Very ugly. I think you should even move the rest of the pattern down.
└Accepted.
03:41:690 (4) - [form] Same as 02:33:925.
└Accepted. (I start to hate this. REALLY. Symmetry is too complicated.)
Moded myself
00:27:925 (3,4,5,6) - Whistle, not, whistle, not.
00:40:984 (1,2,3) - End sound removed.
01:57:219 (1,2) - ^
02:05:690 (1) - Whistle, not, whistle.
02:20:160 (7) - Head sound whistled.
03:26:160 (3) - Same as 00:40:984.
00:40:984 (1,2,3) - End sound removed.
01:57:219 (1,2) - ^
02:05:690 (1) - Whistle, not, whistle.
02:20:160 (7) - Head sound whistled.
03:26:160 (3) - Same as 00:40:984.
Thanks to resizing and yellow star.
*I usually accept if suggestion isn't bad. Yup.