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Shiena Nishizawa - Meaning

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Dailycare
[True Meaning]
*00:10:229 (2) - 01:05:808 (2) - 01:10:861 (2) - 개인적으로 흰 틱에 슬라 꼬리가 있어야 할 이유는 굳이 없어보입니다.. 만 이 쪽이 더 좋으시거나 의도하셨다면 어쩔 수 없죠.. 그래도 역시 저는 00:05:019 (1,2,3) 가 더 낫다고 느껴져요 ㅠㅠ
*00:55:703 (4) - 조금만 우하단쪽으로 내려주시는게 어떨까요? (3,4) 거리가 앞에 비해 짧은 느낌을 받았습니다.
*01:20:334 (2) - 464, 148 로 옮겨보시는게?
*01:22:545 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 전체적으로 한 방향으로 도는 느낌이라 00:21:913 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) 에 비해 움츠러든 것 같아서 아쉬웠어요..
Topic Starter
Taeyang

Dailycare wrote:

[True Meaning]
*00:10:229 (2) - 01:05:808 (2) - 01:10:861 (2) - 개인적으로 흰 틱에 슬라 꼬리가 있어야 할 이유는 굳이 없어보입니다.. 만 이 쪽이 더 좋으시거나 의도하셨다면 어쩔 수 없죠.. 그래도 역시 저는 00:05:019 (1,2,3) 가 더 낫다고 느껴져요 ㅠㅠ
음 일단 앞에 두개를 강조해주고 싶었던 느낌도 있어서 저렇게 두었습니다.
음... 마땅히 다른패턴이 생각나지 않기에 이대로 두겟습니다.

*00:55:703 (4) - 조금만 우하단쪽으로 내려주시는게 어떨까요? (3,4) 거리가 앞에 비해 짧은 느낌을 받았습니다.
*01:20:334 (2) - 464, 148 로 옮겨보시는게?
*01:22:545 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 전체적으로 한 방향으로 도는 느낌이라 00:21:913 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) 에 비해 움츠러든 것 같아서 아쉬웠어요..
그렇다고 갑자기 반대로 가기엔 좀 어색해서 그냥 가던방향대로 박았습니다.
또한 지그재그 패턴은 01:33:124 (1) - 이곳에서도 또 쓰였기때문에..
나머지는 전부 고쳤습니다. 감사합니다.~!
Natteke desu
[Boatwaifulastdiff]
00:05:334 (3) - these two strong beats over here calls for circles
00:10:229 (2) - same with previous
00:13:229 (1) - 00:23:334 (1) - i'd say whole part needs spacing nerf. At the current state it's looks just too big comparing to part of the song. There is some examples:
00:13:229 (1,2,3,1) - would work way better as this
00:14:808 (2,3) - damn too far try this
00:15:755 (1,2) - pretty much the same
etc.
well, the idea of emphasising kicks and tombs by jumps is right, but spacing looks overdone song isn't really intense at this part
00:39:440 (4,5) - i'd say this should be stacked
00:44:176 (1,2,3,4) - eeeh, if idea was emphasising vocals here all this stuff should look like this:
00:44:019 (3,1) - doesn't sounds like two circles at all, slider will suit stuff much better
00:44:334 (1) - vocals grows at this point so we do meaty jumps
00:47:176 (5,1) - well this works okay-ish, but slider what will cover two red tics sounds way better immo
00:51:598 (3,4) - replace these by 1/2 slider i guess
I won't mod same parts at this point since they got same problems with mentoined above so if you agree with my suggestion you can apply stuff for simmiliar moments
Good luck!
Alevari
i wish this was ranked, it's fun to play and because i did this ; __ ; https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5044953
Topic Starter
Taeyang

Titus wrote:

i wish this was ranked, it's fun to play and because i did this ; __ ; https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5044953
LOL nice SS~!
DreaM117er
Mod req in game~

[True Meaning]

  • 00:10:229 (2,3) - circle first better than slider first, Ctrl+G??
    00:32:019 (1,1) - strange flow I think, 00:32:492 (1,2) - make this one Ctrl+G?? Same rhythm 01:05:808 (2,3) - 01:10:861 (2,3) -
    00:41:808 (6) - keep circles, no need slider :?
    01:01:703 (2,3,4) - suggest set NC here, for good to read
    01:44:019 (2) - ctrl+G??
  1. It doesn't really have big problem in this diff.

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Taeyang

EvilElvis wrote:

[Boatwaifulastdiff]
00:05:334 (3) - these two strong beats over here calls for circles
^
00:10:229 (2) - same with previous
but 00:05:334 - here is strong then here 00:05:492 - so i keep on
00:13:229 (1) - 00:23:334 (1) - i'd say whole part needs spacing nerf. At the current state it's looks just too big comparing to part of the song. There is some examples:
00:13:229 (1,2,3,1) - would work way better as this
00:14:808 (2,3) - damn too far try this
00:15:755 (1,2) - pretty much the same
etc.
well, the idea of emphasising kicks and tombs by jumps is right, but spacing looks overdone song isn't really intense at this part
hmm this is extra diff so i think a little high jump is fine,
anyway i fixed some space~!

00:39:440 (4,5) - i'd say this should be stacked
half stack readable then stack and in the song 00:39:676 (5) - has strong three strong sound so i think it's fine
00:44:176 (1,2,3,4) - eeeh, if idea was emphasising vocals here all this stuff should look like this:
flow a little fixed
00:44:019 (3,1) - doesn't sounds like two circles at all, slider will suit stuff much better
00:44:334 (1) - vocals grows at this point so we do meaty jumps
maybe we can take vocal sound 00:44:019 (3,1) - 'ra' 'yi'
and 00:44:492 (3,4) - for emphasisng here...

00:47:176 (5,1) - well this works okay-ish, but slider what will cover two red tics sounds way better immo
00:47:334 - for take here durm sound
00:51:598 (3,4) - replace these by 1/2 slider i guess
ok~!
I won't mod same parts at this point since they got same problems with mentoined above so if you agree with my suggestion you can apply stuff for simmiliar moments

Good luck!
Thanks mod~

DreaM117er wrote:

Mod req in game~

[True Meaning]

  • 00:10:229 (2,3) - circle first better than slider first, Ctrl+G??
    i answered about this issue ^
    00:32:019 (1,1) - strange flow I think, 00:32:492 (1,2) - make this one Ctrl+G?? Same rhythm 01:05:808 (2,3) - 01:10:861 (2,3) -
    ok first one changed all
    00:41:808 (6) - keep circles, no need slider :?
    ok fixed
    01:01:703 (2,3,4) - suggest set NC here, for good to read
    ok
    01:44:019 (2) - ctrl+G??
    no, but flow a little fixed
  1. It doesn't really have big problem in this diff.

Good luck :)
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15:19 *Taeyang is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/799913 Shiena Nishizawa - Meaning [True Meaning]]
15:19 Taeyang: 이거 한판만용
15:20 Down: ??
15:20 Taeyang: 잠ㅅ
15:20 Taeyang: 잠시만요
15:20 Taeyang: 업데점
15:21 Taeyang: ㄱㄱ
15:21 Down: 타블렛 드라이버가 갑자기 이상해져서
15:21 Down: 다운받는중 ㄱㄷ
15:21 Taeyang: 힠
15:21 Taeyang: 그럼
15:21 Taeyang: 일단 다른분
15:21 Taeyang: 갔다올게요
15:21 Down: 10초면 받는뎅
15:22 Taeyang: 히잌
15:22 Taeyang: 잠깐만영
15:45 Taeyang: 됬어염
15:45 Taeyang: ㄱㄱ
15:45 Taeyang: 논이랑
15:45 Taeyang: 하락 해주시면되엽
15:45 Down: 헉
15:45 Down: 하락을 깰수있을지..
15:47 Down: ㅠㅠ
15:48 Down: 헉
15:48 Down: 하락 6.1성이라니
15:48 Taeyang: 핡?
15:49 Down: 그렇습니다
15:49 Down: 노페일점;
15:49 Taeyang: 어렵구만
15:49 Taeyang: 끆ㅋㅋ
15:51 Taeyang: 흐름이상한거
15:51 Taeyang: 발견하시면
15:51 Taeyang: 알려주십사
15:52 Down: 음
15:52 Down: 논으로 할때는 별로 없었는데
15:52 Down: 하락할때 약간 어려웠던부분이랄까
15:53 Down: 00:13:387 (2) -
15:53 Down: 연타 이후라 그런지 몰라도
15:53 Down: 계속 저부분을 틀렸어영
15:54 Down: 00:13:229 (1,2) - 이게 좀 가까우면
15:54 Down: 맞았을지도..
15:56 Down: ㅇㅇ?
15:56 Taeyang: 고쳤어염
15:56 Down: 헉
15:56 Down: 몇개더있긴한데
15:57 Down: 제실력문제일수도
15:57 Taeyang: 쿠도스 받아가시고 싶다면
15:57 Taeyang: 받아가셔도됩니다.
15:57 Taeyang: ㅋㅅㅋ
15:57 Down: 헉
15:58 Down: 잘먹겠습니다
Cellina

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Topic Starter
Taeyang

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Cellina wrote:


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Taeyang
Finally SB done

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I can't met synpoo,so i'll fix his mods instead him

2016-05-14 synpoo's insane back up.ver
osu file format v14

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170,77,102124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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451,303,102913,5,12,0:0:0:0:
324,363,103071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,363,103229,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,193,103387,1,12,0:0:0:0:
370,274,103545,1,2,0:0:0:0:
370,274,103703,1,2,0:0:0:0:
225,285,103861,1,12,0:0:0:0:
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370,274,104650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,372,104808,1,2,0:0:0:0:
421,347,104966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,268,105124,1,8,0:0:0:0:
327,384,105282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
398,253,105440,5,2,0:0:0:0:
305,167,105598,2,0,P|246:170|215:189,1,88.000002685547,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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274,78,109229,6,0,P|337:37|437:81,1,176.000005371094,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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512,59,110019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
381,145,110176,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,198,110334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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251,173,112861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,173,113019,6,0,P|270:253|281:352,1,176.000005371094,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Taeyang
synpoo's insane cehcking now~

Beomsan wrote:

헬로우
리얼 쓰레기 M4M 왔습니다.

sorry for terrible english

[Synpoo's Insane]
  1. 00:53:019 (3) - add curve..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4440327
  2. 01:53:650 (3) - ^
    ok
  3. 01:18:913 (1) - I think here is 1/2 bit..
    01:20:176 (1,1) - 여기와의 일관성을 봤을땐 그냥 1/2이 더나아보입니다.
  4. 01:44:098 - The sound is heard. (you should see hard diff and Chippy's diff.)
    고쳤습니다.

Flask wrote:

[Synpoo's Insane]
  1. 01:06:282 - You probably miss a finish here
    added
    Fine
Good luck!

Gloria Guard wrote:

[Synpoo's Insane]

■ 00:02:966 (6,7,1) I think, this pattern flow can be improved further. You try this
고쳤습니다.
■ 00:09:755 (3,4,5) I suggestion this pattrern shape
패턴보단 00:10:387 (5,1) - 흐름적으로 봤을떈 지금것이 좀더 나아보입니다. 00:10:071 (4,5) - 이미 대칭으로 패턴이 잡혀있고요
■ 00:31:387 (3,4,5) The (5) sliders distance isn't consistent
이미 고친 패턴인듯?
■ 00:51:913 (3) You try this slider Ctrl+g, so the sliders pattern is improved flow.
지금도 괜찮다고 생각,컨쥐는 안티점프가 되어버리니...
■ 00:54:913 (5,1,2) I suggestion this patterns flow, (1) note move x:240 y:212 and before (5) note Ctrl+G is good imo.
■ 01:01:229 (7) Remove whistle, I don't hear different sound here.
분위기상 나쁘지 않다고 생각
■ 01:13:861 (5) The slider end remove whistle.[/notice]

Aerous wrote:

Synpoo :
00:06:124 (2,3) - blanket it
no
00:07:861 (6) - http://puu.sh/o31nV/d6285a451e.jpg
not bad but i hope originer one
00:48:598 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/o31sa/ce984c53b3.jpg
^

ok nothing else , can't find much in the lower diffs rip ;w;


BRB GONNA FINISH THIS IN LEAGUE GAME

jonathanlfj wrote:

[Synpoo's Insane]
00:39:440 (3,4,5) - i'd give this a little more spacing since the drum roll is pretty loud
i think that's enough only here space 00:39:440 (3,4) -
00:53:019 (3,4,5,6,7) - using soft sample here is a little underwhelming, you can try hitsounding it like the Extra or xChippy's Insane
oh that' looks good ok fixed with this point 01:53:650 (3) -
01:17:650 - did you intentionally snap the break to end here? cause its slightly unsnapped right now
fixed
01:53:650 (3,4,5,6,7) - same as 00:53:019 (3,4,5,6,7)
^

Xinely wrote:


  • Synpoo's Insane
  1. 00:02:966 (7) - just my taste but i think moving this circle to rightward 464,268 would give better flow
    fixed with slide
  2. 00:28:229 (7) - maybe you can increase a bit distance for next jump with move this to 264,84. it plays better for me
    fixed
  3. 00:35:334 (5) - a bit too near for me which making a bit overlaps with 2 previous sliders, i would say move this circle to 348,176
    00:35:334 (5,2) - i move circle 2 in the slide tail 5
  4. 00:53:019 (3,4,5,6,7) - you can improve the flow, its weird to see straight slider compared with curving streams really
    ok a little made curve
  5. 01:06:282 - finish for cymbal pls
    ok
  6. 01:32:334 (4) - nazi, 384,104 for symmetrical
    remaped with 01:31:703 (2,3,4) -
  7. 01:57:913 (4) - 148,28 please for making aesthetic symmetrical pattern with sliders
    well... that's make anti jump with this 01:57:598 (3,4) - flow a little werid
    but pattern a little fixed


i think extra still can improved more, try find 2-3 mods for extra diff and then i will come back
Sidetail
Storyboard Update:

Entire osz: http://puu.sh/oSyC7/03ca0ccf9a.osz

Synpoo Diff & .osb: http://puu.sh/oSyEv/b4eb380036.zip


Talked to mapper in-game and updated some more

nvm: http://puu.sh/oSD4o/b808975813.zip (OSB)
Topic Starter
Taeyang

BetaStar wrote:

Storyboard Update:

Entire osz: http://puu.sh/oSyC7/03ca0ccf9a.osz

Synpoo Diff & .osb: http://puu.sh/oSyEv/b4eb380036.zip


Talked to mapper in-game and updated some more

nvm: http://puu.sh/oSD4o/b808975813.zip (OSB)
업로드 완료~
jonathanlfj
great sb, map is fine so here you go

note to next BN:
sb load goes over 5x at 01:04:308, but it only lasts for less than 1 second, so i think it is fine given some past examples i've encountered
Sidetail

jonathanlfj wrote:

great sb, map is fine so here you go

note to next BN:
sb load goes over 5x at 01:04:308, but it only lasts for less than 1 second, so i think it is fine given some past examples i've encountered
thanks!

just small idea
that ranking criteria suggests for sb load to be less than 5x (still rankable over 5 as many of you knows), but that ranking criteria for sb has not been updated for really long time. modern computers can run much faster than computers that were used back in 6years(?) ago when SB was proposed. i guess what you are trying to get here is that not all players have decent system, but really osu itself is pretty power-hungry game than most people think.

tldr i personally think it is all right regardless of high load or length of high load unless it is ridiculously high load like 10x

thanks for checking the map! and enjoy the sb everyone.
Xinely
lfj ninjaed me

map looks fine for me, sb is too strong, i like it. i dont see overload in time lfj mentioned idk why. it was 4,61x. altho it was over 5, i thought its fine also as long as it made because no way to reduce anymore

Qualified ~

厉害
Topic Starter
Taeyang
holy... sry Xinely,jonathanlfj
i forgot change SB file ....

Self DQ reason : Only 'Synpoo's Insane' diff SB different ,with another diff 01:53:650 (3,4,5,6,7) - here

+ Also this song original is 3min https://osu.ppy.sh/s/364298
source is here https://osu.ppy.sh/s/335828 (already ranked mania map)
but this song is 2min (maybe cutting edit ver.)we are add 'short ver.' or 'edit ver.'?
Sidetail
Synpoos diff: http://puu.sh/oTBqk/35296a46fa.zip





edit: Asked Kwan for DQ ;w; rip heart
IamKwaN
As requested.

Please also move the Source to the Tags. The song is only a co-track of the single.
Topic Starter
Taeyang
1. Synpoo's Insane fixed

2. source moved in tag '艦隊これくしょん -艦これ- '

3. in tag added 'short ver.'

+player request : True Meaning diff 00:41:019 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - flow changed
Xinely
just poke me once you're ready again, i would like to move this mapset forward once again
jonathanlfj
ok
Xinely
01:53:650 - on easy, the sb. is it only to me or i still see SquareSM.png there which making inconsistency like Synpoo's Insane had before
Topic Starter
Taeyang
yesterday i checked my maps and SB

to beta : 00:43:229 (1,2,3,4) - only 'xChippy's Insane' different another diff
(but is not big matter because xChippy's Insane only has circles also that's not bad)

-----------------

fixed
jonathanlfj
rebub
Xinely
recheck

only 1 thing about SB, i wrote it in above already but well, i will say it again

Easy : 01:53:650 - 01:53:966 - i saw SquareSM.png for effect when in other diffs (normal until true meaning) at 01:53:650 - until 01:54:203 - have highlights as effect. is the different intentional?
Topic Starter
Taeyang
betastar fixed all
and uploaded
Xinely
let's try again ~
Underforest
congrats
Bara-
Gratz!
Topic Starter
Taeyang

Bara- wrote:

Gratz!
;w; sry rip your diff...
Janpai
Congratszxc :)
caren_sk
congratz !
nice mapping,and sb

i want join it~XD
Affirmation
Alarido
Gratz per le map and per le Storyboard, it remind me some of amazing SB from hwre (:
and with pleasant girls ooh
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