DiamondCrash wrote:

General;

You have 2 .osbs. Delete the one that isn't being used.
Aha, you must downloaded the older version. Please re-download the newer one lol :3
Why do you have a photoshop file?
Aha, you must downloaded the older version. Please re-download the newer one lol :3
Are you not going to finish the storyboard?
Aha, you must downloaded the older version. Please re-download the newer one lol :3
Keep your stack leniency the same across all the difficulties, unless you have a reason for it, that is.
I have a reason :3
Use grid snap 3 from now on, it makes things much neater.
I think there's nothing wrong with the hitcircles placements :3

Novice;

Your sliders are covering that cool SB at the start... maybe vertically flip everything up to 00:04:470 (1) - ?
I don't think the SB is that awesome lol. Well, it's a good idea anyway.
00:07:740 (1) - New combo?
Oh, why not? :3
01:35:624 (2) - New combo?
Oh, why not? :3

Junior;

Your notes are covering that awesome SB again.
I don't know how to fix this, so I just flipped it vertically.
00:04:470 (5) - New combo?
Oh, why not? :3

Senior;

02:54:086 (10) - Straight?
Oops, lol. Thanks for noticing :3

Call me back for a star.
Oh, I don't get any star? Lol thanks for your star and your mod :3
AND FOR YOUR PINK STAR YAAY LOL :3

samipale wrote:

Hi,hi
Yoo!

[General]
Many strange timing points?
03:20:336(1) - I saw you use time section to low the volume but why also use mute spinnerbonus.wav and spinnerbonus2.wav?
osu! doesn't let mapper to completely silence any sound. So, I manually silence it using custom hitsound.

[Novice]
01:22:932(7) - Hmm..This finish sounds too weird...for me.
The music has a sound effect like that. Fixed anyway.

[Junior]
Just suggestion,OA+1?I'm not sure
Oh, ok :3
01:03:316(4) - Here(leave 01:03:893 blank,not following the vocal) looks good, but plays bad imo(because of the placement cheated?)But 03:00:240 plays well
Ok, I fixed the (4). But only the beginning :3
01:17:163(1) - Finish instead of whistle?
Ehm.. Sorry, I like how the way it is :3
01:22:932(7) - Same as Novice
Yeah, fixed.
02:48:316(1,2,3) - Spacing lol
Anything wrong..? A little jump is okay I think.
Hmm..00:47:740(1),01:00:047(2),02:56:970(2) - missed clap like 01:46:201(1),02:44:663(2)?
Oh yeah @@ Thanks for noticing :3

[Senior]
01:17:163(1) - Same as Junior
Ehm.. Sorry, I like how the way it is :3
01:22:932(7) - ^
Yeah, fixed.
02:35:816(4) - ...clap?Since following the music
YOU ARE SMART!!
02:46:586(4,6) - The only place you use stack in this map...I thought it was 1/4 and got 100 at (6) D:
Err, sorry I don't understand..
02:56:586(2) - Oh yay Lukaluka :3 Here newcombo instead of 02:56:393?
lol haha. Sorry but, I separate them based on the style.
　
[Lyrics]
00:38:605(LyricsE-12png) - Is "...which always shows me the way" the english translated version of "教えてくれる"? I'm sure "Smiling"="微笑んでる" and "while standing in the wind"="風の中"
01:17:740(LyricsJ-201.png) - "そんな風に考えたら苦しくなるもんね" is the correct lyric (English needn't to change)
01:30:624(LyricsJ-26.png) - "残しておきたいのよ" is correct (meaning like "hope that leave me alone")
01:35:047(LyricsJ-27.png) - omg Isn't it the same with J-26?But the English is right...

The correct version http://music.goo.ne.jp/lyric/LYRUTND78892/index.html

IMO you don't change all the Japanese cursive syllabary/Chinese characters to Chinese characters/Japanese cursive syllabary because they can always be converted by each other.I just point out the places which are really wrong
This will answer all the lyrics mods. It's hard to separate a japanese lyric with the english lyric to two parts. So, I ignore the japanese -> english meaning, and separate the english lyric without seeing the japanese lyric. Sorry if you don't understand, but I think it's okay. Also, about the japanese lyric. I got the lyric from here: http://wenwen.soso.com/z/q136559483.htm So, err, which page is wrong?

Poor English again
. 　 .
　ω
I love that smiley lol! Thanks for modding and for your pink star yaaayy :3

02:46:586(4,6) - The only place you use stack in this map...I thought it was 1/4 and got 100 at (6) D:
Err, sorry I don't understand..

[Lyrics]
00:38:605(LyricsE-12png) - Is "...which always shows me the way" the english translated version of "教えてくれる"? I'm sure "Smiling"="微笑んでる" and "while standing in the wind"="風の中"
01:17:740(LyricsJ-201.png) - "そんな風に考えたら苦しくなるもんね" is the correct lyric (English needn't to change)
01:30:624(LyricsJ-26.png) - "残しておきたいのよ" is correct (meaning like "hope that leave me alone")
01:35:047(LyricsJ-27.png) - omg Isn't it the same with J-26?But the English is right...

The correct version http://music.goo.ne.jp/lyric/LYRUTND78892/index.html

IMO you don't change all the Japanese cursive syllabary/Chinese characters to Chinese characters/Japanese cursive syllabary because they can always be converted by each other.I just point out the places which are really wrong
This will answer all the lyrics mods. It's hard to separate a japanese lyric with the english lyric to two parts. So, I ignore the japanese -> english meaning, and separate the english lyric without seeing the japanese lyric. Sorry if you don't understand, but I think it's okay. Also, about the japanese lyric. I got the lyric from here: http://wenwen.soso.com/z/q136559483.htm So, err, which page is wrong?

Nivalis wrote:

Hi VanMoNky!
Hi Nivalis :3
Let's see...

[Novice]
00:00:240 (1) - Tested with DoubleTime + HardRock, and the reverse arrow touches the HP bar (which is quite annoying for me). Perhaps move it?
You grabbed the older version lol :3
01:41:778 (1,2) - The curves' angle aren't same, grid lv3 may help here
Honestly, I don't really understand what you mean..

[Junior]
02:12:547 (1) - Add whistle at end?
Hmm.. Only a single whistle is not good here..

[Senior]
Nothing found
Oh great

Can't find much... Star, awesome map!
Thanks for you mod :3 and also for your star

Arusha Shuna wrote:

damn you for being too awesome

Arusha Shuna wrote:

damn you for being too awesome

ignorethis wrote:

Arusha Shuna wrote:

damn you for being too awesome

SPOILER

Normal whistle doesn't fit this song :/

don't kd me

Selee wrote:

I love this song >w<

ayey wrote:

Arghh....
This BM is too awesome
ed~

[-R-] wrote:

The STFU Truck!! Post it on every page that spams!
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| The STFU Truck ||l ""|""__,_
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(@)@)*********(@)(@)**(@


(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

-SiN- wrote:

☆⌒ヽ(*'､＾*) drop

aria.. zzz

Neethime wrote:

;) Wow awesome SB and Skin!
Thanks :3. Yeah, it's a nice skin. Shinde made it :3
And map itself is quite perfect to me,so let me try my best to give some suggestions?lol

[General]

- 00:06:20 This timing point,volume 50 seems a bit loud to me,40 may be better.
If you think so, alright.
- Is there any difference between timing point 00:06:20 and 00:13:12?If not,please remove second one.
It was yes, but since you ask me to lower down the volume, I think you're right.
- Personally,kiai time is a bit too long,many people are not fans of long kiai...so maybe just keep the third kiai section?
Hmm.. Well, I will definitely do this if other modder also ask me for this. Kiai time on every reffs is my style anyway.. :3


[Novice]

00:58:701 (1) - you may close grid snap and move slider point like this (notice left one)
Actually, I don't see any difference lol but I fixed it in my way.
01:00:240 (1) - ^ this one.
Oh, ok.

[Junior]

00:04:855 (2) - try to move this a bit lower? covered by HP bar.
Ok. :3
01:03:316 (4) - one more repeat?
Hey, it should be done @@ Someone also asked for it lol. Thanks :3
01:20:047 (4) - clap at end instead of start?
Oh, I don't think so.
01:20:816 (6) - clap at end
Hmm... Nope?

[Senior]

OD+1?
Oh no. This song is relaxing and catchy. Higher OD won't fit to the song.
00:02:932 (6) - All hail symmetry! click this
Ok :3
00:43:509 (5) - Nicer to look? click this
Yeah of course.

Your map deserve two stars~
Thanks for your mod! Especially for the pink star yaay :3

Arusha Shuna wrote:

i regret nothing

Shulin wrote:

Sorry for the delay.
It's okay :3 Thanks for your mod :3

General:

-- Offset seems early to me (I was lagging so I won't suggest one xD)
If other modder point this out again, I will try to fix it.
-- Max SB size is 800 x 600 right? If so then bg2 and kira are too big.
Fixed. I don't use "Kira.png" anyway, lol.

Novice:

00:29:278 (1) - The direction is a little odd to me, maybe rotate by 90 degrees.
Alright.
00:46:393 (1,1) – Slider slide sounds bad, use C1 or reduce volume?
Oh, ok.
01:31:009 (1) – Maybe extend this to 01:31:778 and add clap to keep with SB rhythm.
Fine.
01:37:163 (1) - Slider slide sounds weird appearing mid slider =S
Oh, ok.
01:44:855 (1,1) – Reduce volume of this slider slide (or C1)?
Oh, ok.
01:47:547 (2) - New combo.
:3
02:26:009 (1) - Remove new combo.
XD
02:47:163 (1,2) – Confusing stack?
Oh, it's okay. Newbie player must learn the approach circle.
03:20:432 (1) – End at 03:27:932 like other diffs.
No problem.

Some of the red tick notes felt too hard for Easy but I don’t know since I’m not a new player.
I don't think so, Shulin :3

Junior:

-- + 1 OD please? xD
Err, ok if that's fine with you.

00:40:047 (x) - Note?
Oh, no. This part, I follow the rhythm.
01:03:316 (4) – Remove return?
Ok, back to the it was. Someone was asking me to increased it. Lol.
02:28:316 (1) – Start at 02:28:124?
Ok.

Oh yeah, some note hit the hp bar like 01:28:509 (4) – but I don’t think that’s important.
Oh, it's not a big problem I think :3

Senior:

-- Remove countdown.

02:28:316 (1) – Start at 02:28:124?
Oh, haven't I?
02:55:047 (2) - The way this overlaps with 02:54:086 (10) - looks bad imo.
Okay, fixed.
03:20:336 (1) - Start at 03:20:432, end same place.
Alright.

All minor things, great map.
Yay! Thanks Shulin! Another pink star from you lol :3 :3 :3

Garven wrote:

Aaah, I'm so late. D:
It's okay, Garven :3

[SB]
J-28.png - I think "barefooted" is an awkward conjugation. "barefoot" would probably work better imo
Ok :3
J-35a.png - "Had just been brighten" With the context of "It's just that the future I envesion... "okay, that one needs fixing too. "Envisioned" Anyway, "It's just that the future I envisioned back then" "Had just been brighten" Is this supposed to be "brighter"?
Fixed :3

[General]
It sounds kind of weird to suddenly hear the slider slide during the kiai sections. I'd just keep them all silent.
Done :3

[Novice]
02:47:163 (1,2) - This might be a little tricky getting the rhythm down for new players.
I don't think so. It's only one there, so I hope new players could learn the approach circle.

[Senior]
Maybe up OD by one? It'd make 02:54:855 (1) - this part easier to read, if anything.
If I do it, then this diff will be no fun to play. Higher OD will ruin my diff since the song itself is a relaxing song.

Good work on this!
Thanks fo your mod :3 I love you.

Derekku wrote:

[General]
*Map asked me to update after I downloaded it. Hmm...
yeah, I know. Sorry, I was canceled the uploading yesterday. I'm so sorry..
*Source should never be the name of an artist's album, so please move "Again" from source to tags.
I prefer fill the Source box with "Again" than leave it empty. Sorry
*Perhaps add a custom comboburst?
Could you help me with the comboburst? Idk what fit to become the comboburst...
*Offset feels a tiny bit late. I felt like I was hitting late while playing, but test mode said that I was early. So... perhaps try something like 234 offset?
I also feel that the offset is not really good. I will ask it to a BAT. Thanks for telling me :3

[Novice]
00:07:163 (2,3) - Perhaps turn this first rhythm into a slider so that the player can see the pattern more clearly
Good idea :3
00:41:586 (3,4) - ^
^
01:23:316 (2) - I actually thought that this was a loop-de-loop at first, but with the large circle size and follow circle, I guess it won't be that confusing
:3
02:27:547 (1) - expected this to end on the next white tick (like the other two diffs)
Ok :3

[Junior]
01:28:989 (5,6) - (5) is the only blue tick note in the entire diff. =x I suggest making 5/6 a slider since it's really unexpected.
Alright.

[Senior]
01:28:990 - you have the triplet pattern as a slider here, so that definitely should say something about [Junior]'s part. :v
Yeah lol :3
02:21:201 (8,9,1,2) - bahhhh trap. Jump out of nowhere and then super close spacing. I really suggest that you get rid of the 8,9 jump. x__x
Ah, lol. Fixed :3
02:54:855 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - "this is insane these anti-jumps should be expected" dammit derek you hypocrite *shuts up*
It's okay lol. Fixed.

Such a pretty song. <3 Great SB (and use of skinning) as well!
Thanks for your mod Derek! If you have time, please help me find a comboburst :3 Thanks

1. 01:23:316 (2) - You should change this slider

1. 00:58:701 (3) - This note overlaps with the bar.
2. 01:42:739 (1) - ^
3. 03:01:393 (6) - ^

Gonzvlo wrote:

Hey (:
Yoo :3

[Novice]

1. 01:23:316 (2) - You should change this slider
   lol is it weird? Changed to simpler slider.

[Junior]

1. 00:58:701 (3) - This note overlaps with the bar.
2. 01:42:739 (1) - ^
3. 03:01:393 (6) - ^
   Oh it's okay I think :3

You don't need to change anything if you don't want to.

Great Map~
Star~
Thanks for your mod Gonzvlo :3
Good luck :3

arken1015 wrote:

[General]
Circle notes are translucent while sliders are unclear ;_; Unless osu!'s problem, why don't you check this thing one more time :3 ?
Oh it's okay :3

[Novice]
01:43:124 (2) - [Suggestion] Some parts are covered with Score part ;_; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19458
Since so many people asked me to fix this, I will fix lol :3

[Junior]
00:58:701 (3,1) - [Suggestion] Some parts are covered with HP bar ;_;

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19461
Since so many people asked me to fix this, I will fix lol :3
01:42:739 (1,1) - ^
Since so many people asked me to fix this, I will fix lol :3
02:50:624 (2) - [Suggestion] How about align with 02:49:470 (1)'s end :3? (Not x-axis but y-axis)
Great idea :3
02:56:009 (1) - [Suggestion] Some parts are covered with HP bar ;_; Maybe I would suggest to move 1 grid down but if you wanna, you can keep :3
Since so many people asked me to fix this, I will fix lol :3

[Senior]
No problem :3
Umm? Sudden 1/4 3-combos?
They follow the drum sound from the song. :3



Sorry for late modding ;_;
No it's okay. Thanks for the mod :3
BTW, this song is...
I bet you will say great, won't you?
Err... Great SB ;_;
Positive comment with negative emoticon? lol thanks :3

Anyway, good luck :3

ps. Cuz of late modding, I won't take kudosu :3
You have to get what you should get :3

Shinde wrote:

You don't really need to use .pngs for backgrounds in the SB as they don't contain any transparency. .jpgs would save file size and look the same afaik. Should be able to cut about 2mb down, maybe a bit more. Also, wtf @ section-fail? Lol.

Not much to say. I normally don't like Grid 2 mapping, but beautiful map, love it. Star.

RandomJibberish wrote:

This map is incredibly beautiful
Oh thanks :3

General
When "Cry" appears it's weird and pixelly around the edges because if osu's scaling. Here's a slight modification that scales better

SPOILER

[attachment=0:c7a13]E-8a.png[/attachment:c7a13]

Yeah that's true, and you fixed it greatly. make sure you teach me this trick!
I don't like the spinner, it doesn't really fit with the map's smooth atmophere. I'd make something cleaner without the water texture personally
I don't have any idea how to change the spinner skin.. Do you have any?
02:22:171 - Should the Lyrics be behind the dark layer here?
It shouldn't. My mistake :p

Novice
Really short combos.
I always keep the combos short since this is Easy diff and I don't like long combos in such this diff.
01:33:316 (1,1,1,1) - Unnecesary combo spam
Okay I fixed it :3

Junior
00:10:624 (4,7) - Gah overlap
00:11:778 (1,3) - Gah overlap
00:13:893 (2,3) - Gah overlap
etc. I suggest you space those and similar out a little more just for prettiness's sake, since they probably wouldn't be overlapping on grid level 3 :/
I think I won't fix this overlap issues. Such those issues won't affect the diff a lot even I know this diff will be better without overlapped notes.
00:55:239 (1,2) - I personally don't like this stack but I guess it isn't confusing
01:52:355 (5,6) - ^
02:39:855 (1,2) - ^ Although this one is slightly more confusing
Alright, all fixed :3
01:54:855 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't follow the music
Oh, you think so? Okay fixed.

Senior
I don't like the random slowdowns, they're nothing but confusing
What do you meant by random slowdowns?
01:16:009 (1,1,1,1,1) - Unnecesary new combo spam
Fixed.
02:35:432 (1,2,3) - I feel this would look and play better if it was just a stack
Okay :3

This map is awesome.
Thanks for modding :3
You should come back to re-check, RJ :3

arsrun wrote:

nice♫

_lolipop wrote:

YUI ~ (。╹ω╹。)


Nice SB~
It's Alace that told me to mod this SB .
Ah, you must be a pro SB modder :3

SPOILER

line 140 (in osb file)
change 0.00693243 to 0

line 36
change 0.9984401 to 1

line 37
change 0.9984401 to 1

line 153
change 0.9960001 to 1

line 154
change 0.9960001 to 1

line 919 to 928
framedelay: I think 100 and 130 would be better.

decrease opacity of star2.png

the section-fail.png........ lol

star.

All fixed.
Thanks for your mod :3
Now I learned how to mod SB properly

Alace wrote:

pretty nice map
but normalclap doesn`t fit the song well
try to use softwhistle to replace ? (you don`t really need to do this )

don`t forget to fix the SB
Discussed through IRC. Thanks for your star :3

Ever17 wrote:

I love it

James wrote:

bg and sb bg are not really related but they are awesome~ *steals*
got hi-res for both of them? gimme~

anyways, here are just some suggestions for making the sound patterns *kinda* better (to me)

i think its better to use another soundsample for clap, its too loud. not that its really important.. so it should be fine
senior:
03:00:047 (5,6,1) - claps
03:00:816 (4) - clap
03:01:009 (5) - clap only at 03:01:009 and 03:01:393.
03:13:124 - put clap
03:13:509 - remove circle
03:13:701 - put clap
03:07:547 (1) - clap?
normal modding wise - its all good, no problems whatsoever

other two diffs: perfect. although junior looks like senior but with bigger circles..

timing: perfect.

not popping the bubble~ whether you change it or not, ill get this ranked. or another bat will

Glass wrote:

damn I didn't get to star this

SamiPale wrote:

late congrat lol
congratulatons!

Krisom wrote:

Well, I find amusing that you guys actually think that 9.6 is low star rating.

DJPop wrote:

Dude, At least yours are better than mine.

People still vote 1 no matter what.

So no point in raging at those bastards anyway >__>

VanMoNky wrote:

LOL I'm not telling that 9.6 is low. I just disappointed because someone voted 1. It may because he doesn't like my map, or maybe he just a haters who's gonna hate.

Krisom wrote:

That always happens. Always. As the star rating system is stupid, someone can just say "Hey, this has a 9.5 but I think it deserves an 8", and then he/she votes 1 to lower the star rating as much as he/she can instead of voting 8, wich is what he really think the map deserves.

This is specially true to non-anime/no-nightcore maps, wich get tons of 1 votes just for not having anime elements on them.

VanMoNky wrote:

Krisom wrote:

Well, I find amusing that you guys actually think that 9.6 is low star rating.

LOL I'm not telling that 9.6 is low. I just disappointed because someone voted 1. It may because he doesn't like my map, or maybe he just a haters who's gonna hate.

GladiOol wrote:

Name me a map which hasn't got a 1 star rating~
Come on, every map has atleast one 1.

Your map was good, I voted a 9.
That also decreased your rating now, didn't it? D:

Roddie wrote:

On my 1st map, people give me bad ratings once it was ranked because it wasn't anime, touhou, or nightcore related.>_>

Cifica wrote:

Thanks for mapping, i love it. Awesome SB too. =]

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

I'm fascinated by this beatmap, i haven't seen something like this in a while.

Really good work, VanMoNky, really.

Seeing this, i understand what you mean by "being disappointed to see a 1":
I can see you put a lot of work into this and seeing a 1 just makes you feel sad for all the work you've done.

But try to think about the people who really enjoyed (and still enjoy) this beatmap instead, it will make you feel better right away.


Can't wait to see your next one

VanMoNky wrote:

Ahh what did I type?

SamiPale wrote:

voted. I can find a heart that hard working on this map

Gabi wrote:

Please don't double post.

This map is pretty nice

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

This didn't get in the chart for two votes.

This is a really sad day.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

This didn't get in the chart for two votes.

This is a really sad day.

Krisom wrote:

I'd honestly rather for this map to be on the 2010 charts than my own map, Yellow
Though, you should not let this discourage you MonKy, just keep doing great maps !

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

I've never even seen this map in my life

Vanmonky wrote:

I almost cried watching this map. Didn't realize osu! gave me a lot of great childhood memories <3