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Reol - Streaming Heart [Taiko]
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katkatkatkatdon, don
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[Inner Oni]
00:48:204 - this section looks way too consecutively mapped, i'd cut down some patterns to make it flow much better, continous kddkddkddk is waaaay boring
you could cut it into smaller sections, removing notes like 00:48:918 - 00:50:632 - 00:52:918 - 00:53:489 - to follow the guitar a bit more and make it flow way smoother
in fact idk why, when the pace starts to build up to the kiai at 00:55:061 - , there are only 1/1s lol. You missed hits like 00:55:489 - 00:55:775 - and other spots that could have notes to lead into the buildup befure the kiai
01:01:204 (467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476,477) - this pattern doesn't seem to fit music at all lol
trying something like
would flow better and still keep the kat rhythm flowing
02:01:061 - consider gradually decreasing volume instead, the sudden volume cut threw me off a lot.
02:01:347 - 02:09:061 - same as first pre-kiai suggestion
02:11:347 (994) - ninja note?
02:15:489 (1034,1035,1036,1037,1038,1039,1040,1041,1042,1043,1044) - same as 01:01:204 -
02:28:204 (1179) - kat for difference? ddkdkkd x3 is way too repetitive in my view
02:30:204 (1202) - finisher? strong hit
[Oni]
OD6 for better spread
00:55:489 - 00:55:775 - missed hits, the current flow does not represent song pace as it builds up from previous parts (same as Inner Oni basically)
01:33:061 - 01:33:489 - all the drum roll completely ignored?
02:00:204 (490) - forgot finisher
02:08:347 - and 02:08:632 - same as first concern
02:48:204 (834) - finisher to end the kiai?
02:49:347 (837) - move 1 red tick before to keep consistency with vocals
02:51:632 (842) - ^
02:53:918 (847) - ^
02:56:204 (852) - ^
[Nwolf's Muzukashii]
00:03:489 (9) - kat for higher vocal, also to end the monotonous don patterning
00:08:061 (27) - ^
those are some interesting 3/4 patterns I like them
00:32:775 - 00:33:347 - this gap is too unacceptably big to me, add a note somewhere please
00:35:061 - 00:35:632 - im ok with this one it represents the music well
01:05:632 - 01:05:775 - you should at least fill those gaps, the break sounds extremely forced
01:33:061 - same as in Oni, doesn't seem a good idea to me to ignore the entire drumroll
02:49:347 - 02:50:489 - Extremely forced break. Map at least some guitar notes please, even if they are 4/1
02:53:918 - 02:55:061 - ^
[Futsuu]
02:48:061 (234) - can be removed, as it's exactly the same pattern as in muzu
[Kantan]
SV1.0 is way too slow, try 1.2 please
02:09:347 (66) - again ignored the drumroll... use a slider or something please
[General]
Bring the background down a bit so we can see their faces. 100 works fine
What are those HP settings? Do them linearly
tell me when you've considered specially those ones in bold
[Inner Oni]
00:48:204 - this section looks way too consecutively mapped, i'd cut down some patterns to make it flow much better, continous kddkddkddk is waaaay boring
you could cut it into smaller sections, removing notes like 00:48:918 - 00:50:632 - 00:52:918 - 00:53:489 - to follow the guitar a bit more and make it flow way smoother
in fact idk why, when the pace starts to build up to the kiai at 00:55:061 - , there are only 1/1s lol. You missed hits like 00:55:489 - 00:55:775 - and other spots that could have notes to lead into the buildup befure the kiai
01:01:204 (467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476,477) - this pattern doesn't seem to fit music at all lol
trying something like
02:01:061 - consider gradually decreasing volume instead, the sudden volume cut threw me off a lot.
02:01:347 - 02:09:061 - same as first pre-kiai suggestion
02:11:347 (994) - ninja note?
02:15:489 (1034,1035,1036,1037,1038,1039,1040,1041,1042,1043,1044) - same as 01:01:204 -
02:28:204 (1179) - kat for difference? ddkdkkd x3 is way too repetitive in my view
02:30:204 (1202) - finisher? strong hit
[Oni]
OD6 for better spread
00:55:489 - 00:55:775 - missed hits, the current flow does not represent song pace as it builds up from previous parts (same as Inner Oni basically)
01:33:061 - 01:33:489 - all the drum roll completely ignored?
02:00:204 (490) - forgot finisher
02:08:347 - and 02:08:632 - same as first concern
02:48:204 (834) - finisher to end the kiai?
02:49:347 (837) - move 1 red tick before to keep consistency with vocals
02:51:632 (842) - ^
02:53:918 (847) - ^
02:56:204 (852) - ^
[Nwolf's Muzukashii]
00:03:489 (9) - kat for higher vocal, also to end the monotonous don patterning
00:08:061 (27) - ^
those are some interesting 3/4 patterns I like them
00:32:775 - 00:33:347 - this gap is too unacceptably big to me, add a note somewhere please
00:35:061 - 00:35:632 - im ok with this one it represents the music well
01:05:632 - 01:05:775 - you should at least fill those gaps, the break sounds extremely forced
01:33:061 - same as in Oni, doesn't seem a good idea to me to ignore the entire drumroll
02:49:347 - 02:50:489 - Extremely forced break. Map at least some guitar notes please, even if they are 4/1
02:53:918 - 02:55:061 - ^
[Futsuu]
02:48:061 (234) - can be removed, as it's exactly the same pattern as in muzu
[Kantan]
SV1.0 is way too slow, try 1.2 please
02:09:347 (66) - again ignored the drumroll... use a slider or something please
[General]
Bring the background down a bit so we can see their faces. 100 works fine
What are those HP settings? Do them linearly
tell me when you've considered specially those ones in bold
may I add that in the Inner Oni I still don't think that many of the long (let's say 9 notes) 1/4 streams don't fit, for example 01:35:489 - 02:00:489 - 02:22:347 - 02:25:489 - (compare with 02:20:918 - wtf) 02:28:918 - and all repetitions of these
01:33:632 - also maybe remove this note, there is nothing here and covers up the drum roll less.
(didn't move bg, I'm lazy)
01:33:632 - also maybe remove this note, there is nothing here and covers up the drum roll less.
thanks~Raiden wrote:
[Nwolf's Muzukashii]
00:03:489 (9) - kat for higher vocal, also to end the monotonous don patterning
00:08:061 (27) - ^ changed
those are some interesting 3/4 patterns I like them c: DID YOU HEAR EVERYBODY RAIDEN LIKES SOMETHING I DID
00:32:775 - 00:33:347 - this gap is too unacceptably big to me, add a note somewhere please to me the break fits as well as 00:30:632 - and 00:35:204 - because of the lack of drums. There is a 5-plet after the break that is not in Oni on purpose C:
01:05:632 - 01:05:775 - you should at least fill those gaps, the break sounds extremely forced 01:05:632 - added note here
01:33:061 - same as in Oni, doesn't seem a good idea to me to ignore the entire drumroll 01:33:347 - added note here
02:49:347 - 02:50:489 - Extremely forced break. Map at least some guitar notes please, even if they are 4/1
02:53:918 - 02:55:061 - ^ added a few notes
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(didn't move bg, I'm lazy)
Topic Starter
thx for the modRaiden wrote:
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[Inner Oni]
00:48:204 - this section looks way too consecutively mapped, i'd cut down some patterns to make it flow much better, continous kddkddkddk is waaaay boring
you could cut it into smaller sections, removing notes like 00:48:918 - 00:50:632 - 00:52:918 - 00:53:489 - to follow the guitar a bit more and make it flow way smoother to be honest i would like to keep this as it is, i don't think the pattern itsself is boring and since there are the kk things inbetween like 00:50:204 (385,386) - doesn't make it continuous kddkddk, also i think the repetitive pattern gives a nice buildup to the kiai. If you insist on this i would be willing to compromise here though
in fact idk why, when the pace starts to build up to the kiai at 00:55:061 - , there are only 1/1s lol. You missed hits like 00:55:489 - 00:55:775 - and other spots that could have notes to lead into the buildup befure the kiai the 1/1s build up more suspense before the kiai imo, so i'd like to keep it that way
01:01:204 (467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476,477) - this pattern doesn't seem to fit music at all lol
trying something like
02:01:061 - consider gradually decreasing volume instead, the sudden volume cut threw me off a lot. yeah, i implemented the volume changes from the muzu, but they kinda interferred with the streams here, i'm movig the volume change to 02:01:489 - so it doesn't go down mid stream (same for the other similar part at 00:48:347 - )
02:01:347 - 02:09:061 - same as first pre-kiai suggestion same response D:
02:11:347 (994) - ninja note?
02:15:489 (1034,1035,1036,1037,1038,1039,1040,1041,1042,1043,1044) - same as 01:01:204 -yep, did the same as for the last one
02:28:204 (1179) - kat for difference? ddkdkkd x3 is way too repetitive in my view i wanna keep this one repetitive to emphasize the repeating "mou mou mou" sound better
02:30:204 (1202) - finisher? strong hit yep
[Oni]
OD6 for better spread sure
00:55:489 - 00:55:775 - missed hits, the current flow does not represent song pace as it builds up from previous parts (same as Inner Oni basically) the 1/1 rythm builds up more suspense imo, so i'd like to keep it as it is for the buildup
01:33:061 - 01:33:489 - all the drum roll completely ignored?
02:00:204 (490) - forgot finisher added
02:08:347 - and 02:08:632 - same as first concern same
02:48:204 (834) - finisher to end the kiai? yep, nice
02:49:347 (837) - move 1 red tick before to keep consistency with vocals
02:51:632 (842) - ^
02:53:918 (847) - ^
02:56:204 (852) - ^ not really following the vocals here and i also think the pattern i have now plays and sounds better
[Nwolf's Muzukashii]
00:03:489 (9) - kat for higher vocal, also to end the monotonous don patterning
00:08:061 (27) - ^
those are some interesting 3/4 patterns I like them
00:32:775 - 00:33:347 - this gap is too unacceptably big to me, add a note somewhere please
00:35:061 - 00:35:632 - im ok with this one it represents the music well
01:05:632 - 01:05:775 - you should at least fill those gaps, the break sounds extremely forced
01:33:061 - same as in Oni, doesn't seem a good idea to me to ignore the entire drumroll
02:49:347 - 02:50:489 - Extremely forced break. Map at least some guitar notes please, even if they are 4/1
02:53:918 - 02:55:061 - ^
[Futsuu]
02:48:061 (234) - can be removed, as it's exactly the same pattern as in muzu removed the one before instead
[Kantan]
SV1.0 is way too slow, try 1.2 please sure
02:09:347 (66) - again ignored the drumroll... use a slider or something please yep
[General]
Bring the background down a bit so we can see their faces. 100 works fine yep
What are those HP settings? Do them linearly changed futsuu to HP6.5, that should be ok right?
tell me when you've considered specially those ones in bold
Topic Starter
also added nwolf to the tags, forgot to do that before lmaoNwolf wrote:
may I add that in the Inner Oni I still don't think that many of the long (let's say 9 notes) 1/4 streams don't fit, for example 01:35:489 - 02:00:489 - 02:22:347 - 02:25:489 - (compare with 02:20:918 - wtf) 02:28:918 - and all repetitions of these not really going to change anything here, the first longer pattern is ok compared to the other ones imo because it's standing alone and not in a row of 1/4 patterns, the other ones are for escalation of the kiai or for extra emphasis on the kiai ending or a strong note
01:33:632 - also maybe remove this note, there is nothing here and covers up the drum roll less. yep, and changed the note before that to kat
01:15:632 - two green lines, delete one
02:48:204 - ^
all diffs except Nwolf's
02:48:204 - ^
all diffs except Nwolf's
Topic Starter
fixed, kekRaiden wrote:
01:15:632 - two green lines, delete one
02:48:204 - ^
all diffs except Nwolf's
Nominated.
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Topic Starter
thanks, and also thanks for your help in getting this ranked mannewyams99 wrote:
Congrats man
Congratulations, Chromoxx! Glad to see this is qualified
Gratz!