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- 00:30:583 (1) - Missing the bell finish.
- 00:31:873 (1) - This isn't on the downbeat but, there is a bell in the BG of the music. I'd add a bell finish here too.
- 03:00:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This section would sound better if you removed the whistle at 03:00:050 (1) - . It doesn't sound right with the transition.
- The snare on 05:19:799 (5) - this slider tick gets cut out by the end of the slider. I'm not exactly sure how to fix this but it sounds really ugly, maybe you should look into it and find a solution.
- 05:24:163 (5) - Missing clap.
- 05:26:618 (5) - What I said above about the red tick.
- 05:26:890 (1) - Missing whistle.
- 05:44:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Just an idea for this stream. Maybe find some tom hitsounds and compliment the drum fill? It'd sound super cool.
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- 00:26:066 (3) - Why not compliment the triplet like you did before?
- 00:28:647 (3) - ^
- 00:59:615 (5) - This is my opinion but this slider looks ugly being so diagonal. Rotating it by 21 degrees clockwise looks much better.
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- Ctrl+G'ing 01:53:240 (6) - , Ctrl+G'ing 01:53:513 (1) - , and stacking 01:53:513 (1) - 's head over the end of 01:52:967 (5) - would play much better and not affect aesthetic.
- 02:05:240 (6) - Ctrl+G'ing this would also play nicer.
- 02:17:513 (1) - This section is evil LOL.
- 03:27:322 (1) - ^
- 03:40:036 (3,4) - This can be easily is misread as a 1/4 jump but it might just be me with my shitty reading.
- 03:45:011 (4) - ^
- 03:47:060 (3,1) - ^ (They wouldn't misread it any of these other times, but I'm just pointing it out for consistency if you decide to fix it.)
- 03:49:402 (3,4) - ^
- 03:54:085 (3,4) - ^
- 05:19:799 (5) - I think this would play better as a 1/4 jump with a triplet after. Something like this?
General Thoughts
rank pls. /.