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CHiCO with HoneyWorks - Sekai wa Koi ni Ochiteiru

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Topic Starter
litoluna
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018年1月12日 at 22:56:15

Artist: CHiCO with HoneyWorks
Title: Sekai wa Koi ni Ochiteiru
Source: AO--HARU--RIDE
Tags: blue spring opening アオハライド
BPM: 130
Filesize: 23771kb
Play Time: 05:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Love (3.66 stars, 936 notes)
Download: CHiCO with HoneyWorks - Sekai wa Koi ni Ochiteiru
Download: CHiCO with HoneyWorks - Sekai wa Koi ni Ochiteiru (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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- 今君に伝えるよ -
Re start ~Nonstop Love~
for APP -> for GD(2018)
timing mod
  1. Azure
  2. Momovely
modder
  1. Momovely
  2. Kinshara
  3. TT Mouse
  4. kakifly
  5. fuyuyu-
Momovely
Topic Starter
litoluna
ありがと**
Azure
try this?
[TimingPoints]
1000,461.538461538462,4,2,2,50,1,0
67477,461.538461538462,4,2,2,50,1,0
146857,461.738461538462,4,2,2,50,1,0
217952,461.838461538462,4,2,2,50,1,0
218875,461.538461538462,4,2,2,50,1,0
233636,461.638461538462,4,2,2,50,1,0
263176,461.538461538462,4,2,2,50,1,0
289002,461.538461538462,4,2,2,50,1,0
292694,461.738461538462,4,2,2,50,1,0

I love this song, GL! ;)
Topic Starter
litoluna
thanks Azure~:3
I was helpful
scanter
ganbatte >w<
Momovely
ts3 irc mod
00:24 Momovely: 05:01:925 (3) - 
00:25 Momovely: finish
00:26 Momovely: 05:02:390 (7) -
00:26 Momovely: clap
00:28 Momovely: 03:51:798 (1,2,3,5) -
00:28 Momovely: ぴっ ぴっ  ぴっ って感じ
00:29 litoluna: ピーーーーーーーーーーーーーーーー
00:29 Momovely: 00:13:951 (1,2,3) -
00:31 Momovely: 00:20:411 (5) -
00:34 Momovely: 00:22:488 (4) -
00:38 Momovely: 00:37:950 (1) -
00:38 Momovely: 00:39:796 (1) -
00:44 Momovely: 01:37:015 (1) -   ~
00:45 Momovely: 01:48:092 (1) -
00:49 Momovely: 02:06:092 (8) -
00:49 Momovely: 02:05:169 (2) -
00:49 Momovely: 02:06:092 (8,1) -
00:49 Momovely: 02:04:707 (1,2) -
00:50 Momovely: 02:04:707 (1,1) -
00:51 Momovely: 02:09:784 (1) -
00:53 Momovely: 02:24:553 (7) -
00:57 Momovely: 02:41:401 (6,7) -
00:59 Momovely: 02:48:558 (7) -
01:01 Momovely: 02:52:021 (4) -
01:02 Momovely: 02:54:099 (8) -
01:04 Momovely: 03:39:798 (6) -
01:13 Momovely: 04:55:926 (6) -
01:14 Momovely: 04:34:368 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - むっずw
Topic Starter
litoluna
thanks - Momo -
Tenseki
Ganbaru~~~ luna-chan
Kinshara
sugoi!

Hitsounds <33

Ask me for IRC mod! :3
Kinshara
IRC Mod!

totemo sugoi
23:18 *Kinshara is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/466777 CHiCO with HoneyWorks - Sekai wa Koi ni Ochiteiru [Love]]
23:18 Kinshara: irc mod? :3
23:20 litoluna: o o o realy? thanksss
23:20 Kinshara: yeah!
23:20 Kinshara: i like the map :)
23:20 litoluna: watashi mo desu :3
23:21 Kinshara: heheh
23:21 Kinshara: 00:01:028 (1) - make 1/2 slider?
23:21 Kinshara: vocal end @ 00:01:258 -
23:23 litoluna: 00:01:374 - vocal[ka] I want to pick it up
23:24 Kinshara: okay o/
23:24 Kinshara: 00:05:181 (2) - move closer to 1?
23:24 Kinshara: too far for 1/4th gap?
23:26 litoluna: ok I bring it close
23:26 Kinshara: like 00:03:797 (4,5) - space smaller
23:26 Kinshara: 00:04:720 (1,2) - space is bigger
23:26 Kinshara: for consistency
23:27 Kinshara: okay! :3
23:28 Kinshara: 00:11:643 (1) - make into 3/4 slider & add circle at 00:12:104 - ?
23:28 Kinshara: for emphasis on 00:12:104 -
23:28 Kinshara: o:
23:29 Kinshara: tell me if you don't understand something >.<
23:29 Kinshara: 00:15:335 (4) - make this slider slower?
23:31 litoluna: 00:11:643 (1) - vocal end @00:12:104 - and Because next is a spin, I do not want to pick up many sounds
23:32 Kinshara: ok~
23:32 litoluna: 00:15:335 (4) - nice desu!! changed
23:32 Kinshara: :3
23:34 Kinshara: 00:17:411 (7) - why clap at tail?
23:36 litoluna: umm Hitting rather low drum sound.
23:37 Kinshara: 00:29:642 (2,3,4,1) - nice desu!!
23:37 Kinshara: motto sugoi <3
23:37 Kinshara: *totemo
23:38 Kinshara: i am tired LOL
23:38 litoluna: w nihongo jouzu desu! thanks
23:39 Kinshara: LOL
23:39 Kinshara: usotsuki
23:40 Kinshara: 00:48:565 (1) - hmm
23:41 Kinshara: make 1/2 slider
23:41 Kinshara: 00:48:796 - add stream here ?
23:41 Kinshara: there is drumming o.o
23:43 Kinshara: 01:00:565 (2) - make into 1/2 slider? vocal @ 01:00:796 - (/.\)
23:43 Kinshara: then add circle 01:00:911 - ?
23:45 litoluna: 00:48:565 (1) - nice idea but I want to pick up a vocal. other modderI think if pointed out in other one!
23:45 Kinshara: oh okay :3
23:46 litoluna: 01:00:565 (2) - oh I missed it. changed~!
23:46 Kinshara: :3
23:46 Kinshara: 01:05:642 (1) - end at 01:07:257 -
23:46 Kinshara: 1/4 not enough time? :c
23:47 Kinshara: 01:10:707 (5) - space too big for 1/4
23:48 Kinshara: players will not read correctly :c
23:48 litoluna: 01:05:642 (1) - easily. changed
23:50 litoluna: umm KIAI TIME dakara yurushite~~
23:50 Kinshara: ohhh okay
23:50 Kinshara: iidesu
23:51 litoluna: arigatou!!
23:54 Kinshara: aaahhh demo 01:28:707 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice :3
23:54 litoluna: aaaaaaa arigato desu
23:54 Kinshara: 01:38:630 (4) - add clap at tail
23:54 Kinshara: like
23:55 Kinshara: in first part?
23:55 Kinshara: like @ 00:18:565 (3) -
23:55 litoluna: ok! add clap
23:56 Kinshara: 01:52:015 (4) - i think you should add nc o:
23:57 litoluna: i think so too owo
23:57 Kinshara: owo
23:58 Kinshara: 02:07:015 (2) - change to 1/2
23:58 Kinshara: 02:07:246 - vocal here (/.\)
23:59 litoluna: ok!! some 1st point w
00:00 Kinshara: 02:13:015 (1,2,3,4) - ahh skystar www
00:01 litoluna: yuko chan Stream w~
00:01 Kinshara: yuko-chan baka desu lol
00:02 litoluna: www obakaw
00:03 Kinshara: 02:33:783 (6,7,1) - make into stream?
00:03 Kinshara: i like it stream here because clap sounds owo
00:04 Kinshara: 02:47:519 - oooooooooo nice hitsounds <3
00:05 Kinshara: 02:55:946 - baka!!!!
00:05 Kinshara: w
00:06 litoluna: 02:33:783 (6,7,1) - ok desu~!
00:07 Kinshara: 02:56:408 (1) - make to 1/1 slider? 02:56:639 - no sound here :c
00:08 litoluna: ok! changed
00:08 Kinshara: 03:01:949 (1) - here too?
00:10 litoluna: 03:02:179 - piano sound here~
00:10 Kinshara: 03:30:115 (2) - move closer
00:11 Kinshara: music is calm w
00:11 Kinshara: oh okay :3
00:11 Kinshara: kiite inai >.<
00:12 Kinshara: 03:36:348 (1) - could be hard to read... aah change like this - http://puu.sh/grhFu/810a2e23ac.jpg ?
00:13 litoluna: 03:30:115 (2) - ok! brought it close
00:13 Kinshara: 03:38:413 (1) - same here. Also 1/8 too far move to here http://puu.sh/grhJ0/3cbeb93603.jpg ?
00:16 litoluna: w ok! changed. It was pointed out to Satellite .u.
00:16 litoluna: 03:36:348 (1) -
00:16 Kinshara: souka
00:19 Kinshara: 04:11:178 - not following voal? :c
00:19 Kinshara: *vocal
00:20 Kinshara: 04:09:793 (6) - make into reverse? 04:09:966 - vocal here owo
00:20 litoluna: yes. 04:08:408 - ~following guitar only..
00:20 Kinshara: http://puu.sh/gri7w/4f49577237.jpg like this
00:20 Kinshara: and okay!
00:21 Kinshara: 04:07:485 (1) - make this slider faster?
00:21 Kinshara: 04:07:946 (2) - make this slower?
00:21 Kinshara: 03:37:952 (1) - make this faster?
00:22 Kinshara: 03:50:413 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - very nice! <3
00:22 litoluna: nice idea 0~0b
00:23 Kinshara: =w=b
00:24 Kinshara: 04:24:560 (5) - this is very far! 4.42x o:
00:27 litoluna: haha...I spurt last KIAI. I change it if pointed out in other one!
00:27 Kinshara: 04:29:637 (4,5,6) - sugoi
00:28 Kinshara: haha okay :3
00:29 Kinshara: 04:44:752 - put circle here there is strong strong
00:29 Kinshara: *strong sound
00:29 Kinshara: 04:44:637 (4) - or make into 1/4 slider?
00:29 Kinshara: 04:44:868 (5) - make into 1/2 slider - sound at
00:30 Kinshara: 04:45:099 -
00:31 litoluna: 04:44:752 - add note~!
00:32 Kinshara: okay
00:32 Kinshara: add some tags?
00:32 Kinshara: no tags :c
00:33 Kinshara: change AR to 8.5
00:33 Kinshara: also source to ao haru raido
00:33 litoluna: I forgot tag... I try ar8.5
00:34 Kinshara: source should be AO--HARU--RIDE
00:35 Kinshara: tags: blue spring opening アオハライド
00:37 litoluna: ok add tags and source!
00:37 Kinshara: :3/
00:37 Kinshara: MODDING GA OWATTA!!!
00:38 Kinshara: good map!
00:38 Kinshara: ganbare luna-san! :3
00:38 litoluna: UOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! /0/ arigatou Kinshara sa~n!
00:38 litoluna: Thank you at long time~!
00:38 Kinshara: youkoso youkoso~
00:39 Kinshara: hehe
00:39 Kinshara: iidesu
00:39 Kinshara: tanoshikatta!
00:40 Kinshara: http://puu.sh/grjee/5c5481685e.jpg hentaiii!! ;A;
00:41 litoluna: muhuhu=w=
00:42 Kinshara: i will try to play xD
00:47 Kinshara: ahhhh
00:47 Kinshara: i suck :c
00:47 litoluna: aaaaaaaa ;w;
00:47 Kinshara: fun fun!!
00:47 Kinshara: can't wait for rank :3
00:48 litoluna: modder atsume mesu!!!!! 0/
00:52 Kinshara: xD
00:52 litoluna: aaaaaaaaa muzukasii
00:52 Kinshara: iie
00:52 Kinshara: i am bad player
00:52 Kinshara: LOL
00:53 Kinshara: ok
00:53 Kinshara: i am done playing xD
00:54 litoluna: I go to other game!!! thanks modding and playing /0/
00:54 Kinshara: okayyy
00:54 Kinshara: :3
00:54 Kinshara: sayonara!
00:54 litoluna: bye!!
Topic Starter
litoluna
thanks Kinshara
SPOILER
2015-03-08 14:19 Kinshara: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/466777 CHiCO with HoneyWorks - Sekai wa Koi ni Ochiteiru [Love]]
2015-03-08 14:19 Kinshara: irc mod? :3
2015-03-08 14:20 litoluna: o o o realy? thanksss
2015-03-08 14:20 Kinshara: yeah!
2015-03-08 14:20 Kinshara: i like the map :)
2015-03-08 14:20 litoluna: watashi mo desu :3
2015-03-08 14:21 Kinshara: heheh
2015-03-08 14:21 Kinshara: 00:01:028 (1) - make 1/2 slider?
2015-03-08 14:21 Kinshara: vocal end @ 00:01:258 -
2015-03-08 14:23 litoluna: 00:01:374 - vocal[ka] I want to pick it up
2015-03-08 14:24 Kinshara: okay o/
2015-03-08 14:24 Kinshara: 00:05:181 (2) - move closer to 1?
2015-03-08 14:24 Kinshara: too far for 1/4th gap?
2015-03-08 14:26 litoluna: ok I bring it close
2015-03-08 14:26 Kinshara: like 00:03:797 (4,5) - space smaller
2015-03-08 14:26 Kinshara: 00:04:720 (1,2) - space is bigger
2015-03-08 14:26 Kinshara: for consistency
2015-03-08 14:27 Kinshara: okay! :3
2015-03-08 14:28 Kinshara: 00:11:643 (1) - make into 3/4 slider & add circle at 00:12:104 - ?
2015-03-08 14:28 Kinshara: for emphasis on 00:12:104 -
2015-03-08 14:28 Kinshara: o:
2015-03-08 14:29 Kinshara: tell me if you don't understand something >.<
2015-03-08 14:29 Kinshara: 00:15:335 (4) - make this slider slower?
2015-03-08 14:31 litoluna: 00:11:643 (1) - vocal end @00:12:104 - and Because next is a spin, I do not want to pick up many sounds
2015-03-08 14:32 Kinshara: ok~
2015-03-08 14:32 litoluna: 00:15:335 (4) - nice desu!! changed
2015-03-08 14:32 Kinshara: :3
2015-03-08 14:34 Kinshara: 00:17:411 (7) - why clap at tail?
2015-03-08 14:36 litoluna: umm Hitting rather low drum sound.
2015-03-08 14:37 Kinshara: 00:29:642 (2,3,4,1) - nice desu!!
2015-03-08 14:37 Kinshara: motto sugoi <3
2015-03-08 14:38 Kinshara: *totemo
2015-03-08 14:38 Kinshara: i am tired LOL
2015-03-08 14:38 litoluna: w nihongo jouzu desu! thanks
2015-03-08 14:39 Kinshara: LOL
2015-03-08 14:39 Kinshara: usotsuki
2015-03-08 14:40 Kinshara: 00:48:565 (1) - hmm
2015-03-08 14:41 Kinshara: make 1/2 slider
2015-03-08 14:41 Kinshara: 00:48:796 - add stream here ?
2015-03-08 14:41 Kinshara: there is drumming o.o
2015-03-08 14:43 Kinshara: 01:00:565 (2) - make into 1/2 slider? vocal @ 01:00:796 - (/.\)
2015-03-08 14:43 Kinshara: then add circle 01:00:911 - ?
2015-03-08 14:45 litoluna: 00:48:565 (1) - nice idea but I want to pick up a vocal. other modderI think if pointed out in other one!
2015-03-08 14:45 Kinshara: oh okay :3
2015-03-08 14:46 litoluna: 01:00:565 (2) - oh I missed it. changed~!
2015-03-08 14:46 Kinshara: :3
2015-03-08 14:46 Kinshara: 01:05:642 (1) - end at 01:07:257 -
2015-03-08 14:47 Kinshara: 1/4 not enough time? :c
2015-03-08 14:47 Kinshara: 01:10:707 (5) - space too big for 1/4
2015-03-08 14:48 Kinshara: players will not read correctly :c
2015-03-08 14:48 litoluna: 01:05:642 (1) - easily. changed
2015-03-08 14:49 litoluna: umm KIAI TIME dakara yurushite~~
2015-03-08 14:50 Kinshara: ohhh okay
2015-03-08 14:50 Kinshara: iidesu
2015-03-08 14:51 litoluna: arigatou!!
2015-03-08 14:54 Kinshara: aaahhh demo 01:28:707 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice :3
2015-03-08 14:54 litoluna: aaaaaaa arigato desu
2015-03-08 14:54 Kinshara: 01:38:630 (4) - add clap at tail
2015-03-08 14:54 Kinshara: like
2015-03-08 14:55 Kinshara: in first part?
2015-03-08 14:55 Kinshara: like @ 00:18:565 (3) -
2015-03-08 14:55 litoluna: ok! add clap
2015-03-08 14:56 Kinshara: 01:52:015 (4) - i think you should add nc o:
2015-03-08 14:57 litoluna: i think so too owo
2015-03-08 14:57 Kinshara: owo
2015-03-08 14:58 Kinshara: 02:07:015 (2) - change to 1/2
2015-03-08 14:58 Kinshara: 02:07:246 - vocal here (/.\)
2015-03-08 14:59 litoluna: ok!! some 1st point w
2015-03-08 15:03 Kinshara: 02:33:783 (6,7,1) - make into stream?
2015-03-08 15:03 Kinshara: i like it stream here because clap sounds owo
2015-03-08 15:04 Kinshara: 02:47:519 - oooooooooo nice hitsounds <3
2015-03-08 15:05 Kinshara: 02:55:946 - baka!!!!
2015-03-08 15:05 Kinshara: w
2015-03-08 15:06 litoluna: 02:33:783 (6,7,1) - ok desu~!
2015-03-08 15:07 Kinshara: 02:56:408 (1) - make to 1/1 slider? 02:56:639 - no sound here :c
2015-03-08 15:08 litoluna: ok! changed
2015-03-08 15:08 Kinshara: 03:01:949 (1) - here too?
2015-03-08 15:10 litoluna: 03:02:179 - piano sound here~
2015-03-08 15:11 Kinshara: 03:30:115 (2) - move closer
2015-03-08 15:11 Kinshara: music is calm w
2015-03-08 15:11 Kinshara: oh okay :3
2015-03-08 15:11 Kinshara: kiite inai >.<
2015-03-08 15:12 Kinshara: 03:36:348 (1) - could be hard to read... aah change like this - http://puu.sh/grhFu/810a2e23ac.jpg ?
2015-03-08 15:13 litoluna: 03:30:115 (2) - ok! brought it close
2015-03-08 15:13 Kinshara: 03:38:413 (1) - same here. Also 1/8 too far move to here http://puu.sh/grhJ0/3cbeb93603.jpg ?
2015-03-08 15:15 litoluna: w ok! changed. It was pointed out to Satellite .u.
2015-03-08 15:15 litoluna: 03:36:348 (1) -
2015-03-08 15:16 Kinshara: souka
2015-03-08 15:19 Kinshara: 04:11:178 - not following voal? :c
2015-03-08 15:19 Kinshara: *vocal
2015-03-08 15:20 Kinshara: 04:09:793 (6) - make into reverse? 04:09:966 - vocal here owo
2015-03-08 15:20 litoluna: yes. 04:08:408 - ~following guitar only..
2015-03-08 15:20 Kinshara: http://puu.sh/gri7w/4f49577237.jpg like this
2015-03-08 15:20 Kinshara: and okay!
2015-03-08 15:21 Kinshara: 04:07:485 (1) - make this slider faster?
2015-03-08 15:21 Kinshara: 04:07:946 (2) - make this slower?
2015-03-08 15:21 Kinshara: 03:37:952 (1) - make this faster?
2015-03-08 15:22 Kinshara: 03:50:413 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - very nice! <3
2015-03-08 15:22 litoluna: nice idea 0~0b
2015-03-08 15:23 Kinshara: =w=b
2015-03-08 15:25 Kinshara: 04:24:560 (5) - this is very far! 4.42x o:
2015-03-08 15:27 litoluna: haha...I spurt last KIAI. I change it if pointed out in other one!
2015-03-08 15:27 Kinshara: 04:29:637 (4,5,6) - sugoi
2015-03-08 15:28 Kinshara: haha okay :3
2015-03-08 15:29 Kinshara: 04:44:752 - put circle here there is strong strong
2015-03-08 15:29 Kinshara: *strong sound
2015-03-08 15:29 Kinshara: 04:44:637 (4) - or make into 1/4 slider?
2015-03-08 15:29 Kinshara: 04:44:868 (5) - make into 1/2 slider - sound at
2015-03-08 15:30 Kinshara: 04:45:099 -
2015-03-08 15:31 litoluna: 04:44:752 - add note~!
2015-03-08 15:32 Kinshara: okay
2015-03-08 15:32 Kinshara: add some tags?
2015-03-08 15:33 Kinshara: no tags :c
2015-03-08 15:33 Kinshara: change AR to 8.5
2015-03-08 15:33 Kinshara: also source to ao haru raido
2015-03-08 15:33 litoluna: I forgot tag... I try ar8.5
2015-03-08 15:34 Kinshara: source should be AO--HARU--RIDE
2015-03-08 15:35 Kinshara: tags: blue spring opening アオハライド
2015-03-08 15:37 litoluna: ok add tags and source!
2015-03-08 15:37 Kinshara: :3/
2015-03-08 15:37 Kinshara: MODDING GA OWATTA!!!
2015-03-08 15:38 Kinshara: good map!
2015-03-08 15:38 Kinshara: ganbare luna-san! :3
2015-03-08 15:38 litoluna: UOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! /0/ arigatou Kinshara sa~n!
2015-03-08 15:38 litoluna: Thank you at long time~!
2015-03-08 15:39 Kinshara: youkoso youkoso~
2015-03-08 15:39 Kinshara: hehe
2015-03-08 15:39 Kinshara: iidesu
2015-03-08 15:39 Kinshara: tanoshikatta!
2015-03-08 15:40 Kinshara: http://puu.sh/grjee/5c5481685e.jpg hentaiii!! ;A;
2015-03-08 15:41 litoluna: muhuhu=w=
aww
TtmnZk
Hi OVO /
M4M
from Satellite litoluna Modding Queue

[Love]

00:30:796 why use a 3/4 silder,have drum on 00:30:796, try rhythm like 00:32:411 (1,2,3) - better

00:33:565 (5,6) - i think ctrl+g better for flow and make a good jump

00:39:565 (7) - move to x409 y244,better blanket with 00:38:411 (3) - right?

00:41:180 (6,7) - ctrl+g? 7 and 00:41:642 (1) - better to show vocal i think

01:21:784 (4,1) - blanket?

01:50:746 have drum there,so i suggest flow it

02:33:783 (6,7) - why not like 02:13:015 (1,2,3,4) - ?

02:47:173 (1) - move x37 y 281 http://puu.sh/grBZI/d51fdc2e88.png

02:47:866 (3,4,5,6) - nazi mod, objects need keep straight line pattern. http://puu.sh/grCbu/cdb162c45d.png

02:52:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ↑,have some question in stream, 02:53:637 (7) - move to x192y119 better

03:00:448  02:58:947 / 03:00:794 (3,5) - 03:06:335 (2,1) -03:15:570 (3,1) - nazi mod,stack

03:04:488 (3) - move to x58y236

03:47:528 have a piano ,can make 1/4 slider to flow it

that's all
nice map and song , like honey works and CHiCO :3
good luck
kakifly
hi litoluna o/

Love


-00:03:335 (2,4) - maybe blanket like this ? http://puu.sh/gth9f/f24597487b.jpg
-00:07:951 (6) - imo ctrl + g will have better flow, make necessary adjustments to following notes if needed
-00:24:565 (1) - i think it would be better if you ended this at the blue tick 00:24:911 - and add a circle at 00:25:026 - so its consistent with your previous rhythms http://puu.sh/gthsO/360de78b1b.jpg
-00:31:488 (3) - remove whistle? you dont have it anywhere else
-00:35:180 (1) - i would prefer if you followed your previous nc pattern here, i don't see the reason behind the NC http://puu.sh/gthE6/f81f058890.jpg
- 00:42:334 (4) - similar suggestion as 00:24:565 (1) -
-00:49:488 (3,1) - i think swapping nc would be better, because the new instrument sound starts at 00:49:488 -
-00:50:411 (2,1) - 00:51:334 (2,1) - ^
-00:51:565 - to 00:55:603 - did you forget clap on the repeats of the 1/4 sliders or is it on purpose?
-01:04:488 (5) -add NC for SV change
-01:25:477 (4,2) - nazi orz but you can blanket better :p
-01:44:284 (7) - i kind of feel like this note is 1/3 because in the music the drum speeds up a bit, not sure though, it may be inbetween
-01:48:900 (3) - whistle on repeat
-01:57:323 (3) - add soft whistle? it fits the music nicely
-02:53:637 (7) - nc to show the change in spacing?
-02:55:946 - baka >:V
-03:01:025 (4) - add clap/whistle to follow piano?
-03:36:348 (1) - imo you should remove this,because it only follows the vocals, you havent been following vocals before, like at places like 01:57:323 -
-03:38:875 (1) - nc for change in tempo?
-03:55:020 (5,1,2) - - personally, i would switch this rhythm, because the tail of (1) lands on a downbeat it doesnt feel as natural to play , and (2) is passive http://puu.sh/gtjW0/cf492256d2.jpg
-03:56:867 (5) - add finish on body?
-04:07:946 (2) - hitsound on body?
-04:23:180 - you have a red & green line at the same spot but volume is different, change the volume so they are the same http://puu.sh/gth1O/a53ca104be.png
-04:37:483 (5) - maybe add nc? to indicate the change in rhythm, at first it might just look like a crowded stream
-04:47:637 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe if you added some drum sampleset in here it would sound cool ; )
-05:03:786 (1) - i think this is a bit offscreen :x

good luck, nice map shot :D
Silky
Hi~
[General]

AIBat wrote:

Audio Lead-In There is only 1028 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
だそうです。無くてもいいと思います

[Love<3]
  1. 00:12:220 (1) - Whistle→Clap? 個人的にはClapのほうがしっくりきます
  2. 00:29:642 (2,3) - (nazi)すごい細かい事なんですがこだわりが無いのなら同じ形をCtrl+Rしたものを使いませんか?
  3. 01:04:488 (5) - 少し曲げませんか?
  4. 01:21:784 (4) - 1/8(1/12?)のリバーススライダーで取りませんか? ピアノを取っているわけではないでしょうが...
  5. 01:31:015 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
  6. 01:40:246 (1) - Remove NC...? 1番や大サビの後の同じようなところにNCないので外してもいいかなって思いました
  7. 01:57:323 (3) - S:C2のClapの音を入れませんか?
  8. 01:59:169 (1) - Add finish
  9. 02:09:323 (6,1) - 1番とおんなじ感じになっちゃってるんでこうしてみてはどうでしょう!
  10. 02:38:400 (5,7,9) - add NCしてみては?
  11. 04:09:447 (4,5) - Ctrl+G
  12. 04:10:947 (2) - ^
  13. 04:37:483 (5) - Add NC? 1/8になってるのであった方がいいと思います

Good Luck~
Topic Starter
litoluna
thanks guys!!!!
i was helpful
OPYoshi
I want to give it a second try to mod a map. Hope it is helpful.

01:07:477 (1) - Maybe the spin should end here.

01:20:400 (1) - Would be nice to sort the "kikasete"-notes. Put them on one spot or shift them a bit.

02:13:015 (3) - For me they are a bit out of the rhythm. Maybe just normal notes?

02:26:857 (1) - The same with the spinner here. Maybe a bit longer.

02:53:060 (2) - The slider maybe a bit longer (till number two) and go on like it is now?

02:56:408 (1) - This whisper part would be a nice break because it is a long map. Maybe till 03:09:336 (1)

03:40:144 (6) - Six together with seven as slider? Then it fits better with the piano

04:22:257 (3) - Slider together with No. 4 or maybe end at 04:22:719 (4)
zyoi
やった~~♥♥♥♥
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