1. captin's Insane (4.83 stars, 179 notes)
2. deetz' Insane (4.04 stars, 175 notes)
3. Extra (5.08 stars, 195 notes)
4. Lach's Hard (3.05 stars, 148 notes)
5. Leader's Normal (2.25 stars, 94 notes)
6. RLC's xlNi Makasete (5.26 stars, 183 notes)
7. Some1's Easy (1.41 stars, 52 notes)

Xbox wrote:

[deetz' Insane]

1. 00:07:316 (1) - Why the NC?
2. 00:17:270 (1) - Have this sliderend be the same position as 00:18:251 (5) - sliderhead? I think it makes it much more cleaner xd
3. 00:38:718 (1) - Why not have this slider be the same shape as 00:39:700 (1) - , 00:35:354 (1,2) - ? different intonation
4. 00:41:522 (3) - Have this be more in the middle between (2,4); cleans it up quite a bit.
5. Really well done diff thank

Glyphic wrote:

mod

normal
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00:30:868 (5,6) - i would make (5) 1/4th longer and have (6) start on the white tick. had a lower ranking player test the map and it made more sense to him when i changed it. o shit tru

insane
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maybe add a inherited point at 00:49:933 making the sliderend silent? but there's an ending note

pretty shit mod tbh

Anxient wrote:

GOD SAVE US ALL

weebshit title
00:01:148 (3,5,6) - avoidable overlap d
00:07:316 (1) - increase spacing. there is empahsis on sliderstart. ctrl g'd
00:11:102 (9,10,1) - this works better maybe? http://puu.sh/oq92G/014dfc7831.jpg i dun like it but i see where ur coming from so i fixed it my own way
00:16:849 (4) - NC ya
pls remap ???
00:35:214 (5,7) - snap onegai shimasu g
00:40:541 (9,3) - stack pls ya
00:42:503 (6,7) - use the same slider mhm

jamimc2 wrote:

From my NM Queue

Easy

1. 00:02:830 (1,2) - Don't stack on Easy diffs i dont see the problem with it but i suck at making easies so if someone else points out ill fix
2. 00:27:503 (1,2,3) - I think you should do this, the current pattern doesn't look very good g
   
3. 00:42:083 (3) - I think you should end it at 00:42:503 to match the vocals vocals land on the tick i mapped it to?

Normal

1. I think you should add a circle at 00:12:083 gimme a suggestion on where to place it and sure coz idk where itd work to keep the spacing consistent LOL
2. 00:15:167 (3) - You should end this at 00:15:447 g
3. 00:25:401 (1) - I don't think there's enough recovery time after this spinner g

Hard

1. 00:24:139 (5) - New Combo g

Good luck.

fieryrage wrote:

DEET
ar 8.5 pls n0 i mapped it for ar9
00:08:158 (3) - this is 1/8 not 1/6 tbh K
00:31:989 (1,2,3,4) - this might work better if you stack it on the slider end instead of the slider head but idk the way it is is kind of good right now so??? yeha i like it how it is

Atsuro wrote:

Boku ni asdf
00:16:849 (1) - I don't think this NC is necessary8 pattern
00:25:260 (11) - NC? 00:24:139 (1) - ima just put it here coz it fits the pattern
00:43:204 (1) - I'm pretty sure this slider's head needs a soft finish or something i think its fine

Nice set, GL

Atsuro wrote:

Fiery's Ez
00:00:588 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This has a different distance spacing than the rest of the map, i'm pretty sure this needs to be consistent on diffs as easy as this one. whoops lol
00:23:578 (1,2) - imho this plays better as two 1/2 sliders as it sticks to the beat on the white lines better, with the repeat you click on the red line making it feel weird repeat slider is following vocals more than drum, i think it's fine as it is

1. Remove ass, lewd from tags
2. Make the artist Kyle Massey, if you refuse to do so, add him to the tags (his voice is still blatantly in the background even with the dub).

1. 00:00:588 (1,2,3,4) - This sequence plays really awkwardly in my opinion. It has this weird anti-flow that just seems jarring as the first beats in the song. A few suggestions: Move the 00:01:148 (3) - slider to the left of 00:00:588 (1,2) - and then reposition them accordingly. 4>5 is fine as long as 1>2>3 is changed to flow a bit better. Another possible solution is tilt the 00:01:148 (3) - slider moreso in the direction of 00:01:569 (4) - as a visual indicator to where the next note is. I think the first combo could definitely be improved - and its honestly my biggest qualm with the map.
2. 00:17:830 (4,5,6) - These jumps are super obtuse and therefore feel kind of awkward to snap. Repositioning the slider or curving it and then slightly changing the location of 6 should solve this easily.
3. 00:23:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - You can make a better pattern than this. I get why you've done it, but I feel like it doesn't fit the music properly. If you're following the vocals, one of the two patterns below would be better suited.
   
   ^

   
   
4. 00:32:270 (2,3) - I'm gonna complain about the blunt angle again here, but this one plays the best out of all the other ones so its really just a weak suggestion.
   
   Looks good I guess. It was fun to play.

1. 00:20:214 (3) - Obligatory blanket mod (in relation to 00:19:513 (4) - ).
2. 00:28:625 (1) - Based off your patterns, I expected this slider to start in a CTRL+G position (as in, it felt awkward to get to the slider head). Maybe move around 00:28:625 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern to better play off the pattern you started 00:27:503 (1,2,3,4) - here? Its the same vocal-line so I feel like they should fit together a bit better.
   
   Overall a really solid diff, also a bit of fun.

1. Ehh, remap? I mean, its definitely moddable and you can get it to a good state, but being that its only 50 seconds I'd say a remap entirely is just quicker. Overall, blanket more and avoid harsh flows like these: 00:17:690 (6,7,8,9,1) - since they play more like a light insane than a Hard.

1. Not touching this diff - probably remap would be my suggestion here too.

1. Someone messaged me right before I started and I minimized firefox and I forgot to do it. Message me tomorrow evening for an IRC.

Crimmi wrote:

Easy

1. 00:18:531 (1) - This will be slightly hard to see because 00:16:288 (1) is blocking it, so I suggest you move it somewhere else.

moved the thingy

Underforest wrote:

from queue
some diffs doesn't have video, check them k
add コーリー ホワイトハウスでチョー大変! to source and That's so Raven to tags k

s's e
00:13:485 (4,2) - i don't think this kind of overlaps are very fittable with the song its k bb
00:30:868 (4,2) - same its k bb

l's n
00:40:961 (1,2) - rhythm inconsistence comparing easy diff so?

l's h
00:27:503 (1,2,3,4) - this kind of jumps can be very overmapped with hard of low bpm k
00:45:307 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - please try to avoid this ?


boku ni makasete

00:46:989 (6) - no need for a finish on start slider k

r's x
00:29:746 (1,2) - low a little bit the spacing between those and similar jumps i think its fine

gl

Underforest wrote:

d's i
00:31:989 (1) - move last symmetry point to x:440 y:180, it will perfectly match with 00:31:429 (3) - slider and both will look better prefer mine
00:39:700 (1) - you can center the middle red point to do better symmetry imo nah its intentional

Lasse wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5524643
mod this I guess https://osu.ppy.sh/s/436799 (yes it's graved, going to revive after mod)

memes _-

video on all diffs except your insane is missing d
sure you know about the custom diffname thing lol ?

rlc
00:01:569 (4,1) - pretty sure you stacked all other similar 1/1 patterns, so why not this? d
00:03:531 - i see this patterning is probably following the longer held vocals, but why not something like http://i.imgur.com/06HY9Ol.jpg cause having that "yo" clickable instead of on the end of a repeat slider would be great nah
00:08:158 (3) - could consider adding another repeat here as that follow the scratch much better. at this low bpm that works fine (at least when I testplayed it). totally okay for an extra I think bufferd - _ -
00:18:531 (1) - guess you wanted this to feel similar to 00:00:588 (1) - but I think extending doesn't fit here with the pretty important vocal being on the red tick slider body compliments it
00:34:232 (1,2) - this is like completely unjustified. if you want to go with huge spacing here at least build it up starting from 00:33:672 (1,2,3,4) - ?
and even then I think it doesn't fit at all, the intensity doesn't really increase by a huge amount here nerfd
00:38:017 (3) - random huge jump on really weak beat is what fits other jumps but nerfed a bit
00:43:064 (2,3,4) - 00:44:887 (1,2,3,4) - no idea why you'd suddenly drop spacing this much for these patterns? makes it overally feel a bit random pause between the main vocalist singing

spaghetti
you are using single measure comboing but you map it like it was double the bpm, migh reconsider using half measure nc or something as they get quite long k
00:16:429 (2,2) - don't think those work with the song at all, 1/2 gaps or 1/4 slider would fit better disagree
00:17:690 (3,4,6,7) - noticeable inconsistent overlaps are so triggering lol d
00:20:214 (9) - with the circular flow from before movement into this feels so forced. a possible solution would be something like http://i.imgur.com/lCzWzOm.jpg which still fits your visuals/concept here k
00:20:774 (1) - feels like it needs way more emphasis with how high your overall spacing in this part is k
00:21:055 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this whole part feels so clumped with how you focus so much on the middle of the playfield, could consider rearranging it a little k

lach
00:29:186 (4,1,2) - even when utilizing slider leniency, movement feels so forced here with how you go down-bit up - down
shitty possible thing you could do http://i.imgur.com/ELNzpP7.jpg is k

leader
personally really dislike normal with ds so much below 1, the movement on sliders is so much faster than circles which just doen't feel nice to play for such a difficulty
usage stacks for multiple snapping is also something I don't really see as fitting
like 00:30:588 (2,3,4) - <=> 00:32:550 (2,3) - etc will change if someone else mentions
00:07:597 (1,1) - around half a second seems kinda low for spinner recovery on a normal morethan2beatz

1. tickrate on the Easy diff is 2, when the tickrate on every other diff is 1... usually I wouldn't have anything to say about that but how come the tickrate on the easiest diff is the highest?
2. just gonna assume you know about the video thing, as basically everyone above me has said something about it

1. 00:05:354 (3,4) - if you wanted, you could make the jump between these two smaller so that the jump between the same sound of the next two 00:06:475 (3,4) here feels stronger
2. 00:29:326 (2,3,4) - you could rotate this or bring it up a little to get rid of the overlap 00:28:905 (2,4) here if you wanted to clean it up a bit
3. 00:31:288 (1,2) - move the nc down one note? nc on the blue tick doesn't really make sense here to me
4. 00:32:830 (4,1) - could avoid overlaps like this here too really easily, unless you're doing it on purpose and i'm just not picking up on that
5. 00:34:232 (1,2) - this jump seems kinda big to me and having a bigger jump here makes sense but I don't think this particular part of the kiai is the spot for the biggest jump in your map

1. 00:01:989 (6) - imo you should make this into a 1/2 slider with a circle after it, because the slider ending on the drum sound seems pretty meh for emphasis
2. 00:13:345 (9,10,11) - bring this up and to the right a tiny bit? 00:12:784 (6,9) would look cleaner

1. 00:06:756 (3,4) - i would make this jump bigger because the sound behind it is more powerful than 00:05:634 (3,4) here, but the jump here is bigger
2. 00:08:718 (5) - move this to the left a bit so that it's the same distance from 00:08:158 (3) as 00:08:859 (6) is?
3. 00:34:232 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't really like how this looks, but maybe you could do something like this instead? idk

1. okay i couldn't find anything to complain about in this diff

1. i personally think that the spacing of the 3/4 rhythms in this diff are kinda big for it to be a Hard, but I'm not going to timestamp every one of them and then ask you to change it. I reccomend just going back and rechecking the distance between things like 00:04:933 (6,1) or 00:06:055 (3,4)
2. 00:30:868 (1) - nc here?
3. 00:31:148 (2,3) - maybe space these two out a bit more to make the distance equal from the two sliders earlier
4. 00:42:924 (6,7,8,9,10) - this rhythm is kinda questionable, why not just make 00:43:204 (8,9) - into a 1/2 slider
5. 00:45:307 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - spacing here is kinda huge

1. the rhythms in this diff when paired with a fast slider speed seem kinda overdone to me, so I don't really have much to say about this map other than I don't really like it... imo it needs to be toned down to make it play more like a Normal

1. this diff seems relatively fine I guess, though imo the sliders are kinda fast for an Easy diff but I think it's personal bias and is completely passable here

1. 00:13:485 (4) - Try making that slider end clickable for emphazis purposes, that downbeat is a fairly strong beat
2. 00:30:868 (4,2) - Only overlap on the whole diff, looks a bit ugly and it's easy to fix with some flips and stuff
3. 00:45:447 (1) - This might be better as a slider since new players don't really expect to see two spinners in succesion (also makes more sense :p)

1. 00:18:391 - Doesn't sound right how you skip over this note, it's strong and can be mapped with rhythms you used on other parts of the map like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6260588

1. 00:44:887 (4,5) - Why did you go from mapping vocals to percussion suddenly? a 1/2 slider made more sense with what you were doing

1. 00:29:186 (3) - Thought this needed a bit more emphazis and found that ctrl+g works nice for that

1. 00:48:812 (1) - Might want to start the spinner on the blue tick like deetz diff

1. 00:07:316 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Some hitsounds like whistles or smth would be nice
2. 00:24:700 (3) - Normal sampleset on head?
3. 00:36:896 (3) - ^ but slider end
4. 00:39:139 (3) - ^
5. 00:46:989 (6) - It doesn't feel right how you follow that 3/2 rhythm with the sliders with the jumps and finishes and suddenly you stop, apparently for the "pati da" lol, but this feels weird since the thing cory says is not sincronized to the beat to begin with.

1. 00:33:952 (3,4,1) - This feels more comfortable with a sharper angle, right now it plays a bit uncomfortable and weird. Making another pattern would work better tbh but idk lol