Ogura Yui - Baby Sweet Berry Love · forum

[Rumi's Extra]
00:06:407 (1) - consider reduce to 1/1 since there is a heavy vocal on 00:06:759 . (Imo, there's no need to highlight that delay of crash.) i think it is also fine to map the extended bass , keep for now
00:07:112 (2) - ^, then you can highlight the high pitch better on 00:07:642 .
00:09:936 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this overmap doesn't seems to be nice... This music needs a highly requirement on highlighting on vocals and high pitchs but not drums.. that is just 1 way of mapping
00:16:995 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^ these are fine imo
00:21:583 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^ fixed
00:45:054 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ also fine

00:37:465 (1) - make this better
00:57:583 (3,4) - seems poor. Delete it since the music needs a quiet air here.
01:25:289 (3,4) - move up them by 1/4. The drum exists on 01:25:201 and 01:25:289

[Rumi's Insane]
00:16:995 (3,4) - I think you should do like this: 00:12:759 (3,4)
00:45:936 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should do like this: 00:48:759 (1,2,3) giving different instrument of repeated part of the map is ok too~

Battle

𝓡𝓾𝓶𝓲'𝓼 𝓘𝓷𝓼𝓪𝓷𝓮[]
00:02:701 (1,2) - I know it's like the held vocal and stuff, but 2 sounds really awkward cuz there's like, nothing there, and the thing that's there happens on a blue tick, so I don't really know what to say lol. deleted

00:28:995 (1,2,3) - Visuals here are pretty meh, but I don't really find the overlap too big of a deal, just something that could be better. moved them a little but there is still overlap but i guess its fine tho

00:46:289 (2,3) - Ctrl + G rhythm here? It feels weird that this vocal 00:45:936 (1) - and 00:46:995 (4) - are clickable, but this one is on a slider end. mm yea

01:05:171 (2,3,4,1) - Blanket could be improved (to be fair, trying to blanket stacked things is gross). fixed

01:11:348 (1,3) - zz Not really a big fan of this overlap, because it's like, not totally an overlap, and not totally not overlapping, so it's just like, in the middle, and that's kinda gross lol. fixed lol

𝓡𝓾𝓶𝓲'𝓼 𝓔𝔁𝓽𝓻𝓪
00:02:701 (5,6) - z I kinda would expect it to try to follow that sound in the bg on this diff there are sound there??

00:02:701 (5,6,1) - Wouldn't it be better to move closer to 5 to emphasize vocals? i think its fine

00:14:171 (5,6,7,8) - I don't really see why you just didn't do a stream here. to give another feel instead of playing the same pattern

00:28:995 (1) - 1/2 repeat doesn't really fit well here imo since there's the held vocal.

00:30:407 (1) - I would make sense if this and ^ were flipped, since it would like, follow things better lol. z

Thanks for the triangles np

Broccoly

[rumi]
00:02:348 (3,5) - make better blanket fixed
00:06:407 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:07:818 (3) - NC fixed
00:11:348 (4,5,6,7,8) - make this curved like other streams? tilted the angle a bit , but remain as straight
00:29:701 (3,4,5,6) - 00:31:112 (3,4) - make both circles or both sliders to make it consistent it just happen that i want to give different feeling on everything that repeats
00:55:112 (5) - NC
00:57:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - what the heck.. you gotta learn to use the left half of the editor space too. dem .. time 2 remap lo , will do something about this
[box=]

01:28:642 - use a slider and extend it to here where the song ends?

[Rumi's I]
00:58:465 (1) - remove NC
00:58:818 (1) - NC
00:59:524 (5) - NC
01:12:583 (1) - 01:01:289 (4,5) - use both repeat sliders or slider + circle to make it consistent
fixed all above
01:28:642 - same thing i think it is also fine to just stop it here ( same to extra )

thanks for modssssssss ~~

Battle

2,862 posts

Joined February 2014

Battle 2016-04-18T12:06:14+00:00

ya like the sounds on 00:02:877 - and 00:03:142 - for the extra lo

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2016-04-18T12:53:14+00:00

m4m

rumia x

00:01:465 (3,1) - could move this around a bit so 1 gets more spacing and probably an angle that works better with spacing change, sth like http://i.imgur.com/VCLHjsY.jpg would work pretty well imo but requires moving 00:00:230 (1,2) -
00:03:230 (6) - 5-1 being bigger than 6-1 doesnt work that well with the music
00:04:907 (6,9) - triples feel overmapped to me
00:09:936 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - oh most 1/4 here too xd
and then 00:11:259 - suddenly skips a really audible 1/4 lol
00:12:759 (3,4,5,6) - mapping a stream over this really kills vocals emphasis, you did it better on your insane :d or use doubles
00:43:112 (1) - cute pattern, but having way lower spacing onto 1 doesnt really fit with the strong cymbal
00:50:701 (5,6,7) - tiny spacing to 6 even though it has that chime sound?

idk this just feels so forced with all those unnecessary 1/4 :/ even more so at spots where they kill actual emphasis

insane

similar overmap issues as rumias extra, I'd take a look at Karen's diff since it's done better there
00:06:936 (2,3) - plays really awkward and doesnt emphasize strong cymbal on 3 at all. even this low effort suggestion would work better http://i.imgur.com/sNQp06B.jpg (but you can probably find sth better since I only spent 5 seconds on this lol)
00:11:877 (4) - eww strong vocal on sliderend, doubleor even triple would work better here. or just ignoring it like http://i.imgur.com/GsWUH2W.jpg
00:12:759 (5,6,7,8) - same as for rumias extra, won't mention anymore
00:22:024 (1) - so much interesting stuff to be mapped and you put a spinner
00:23:348 - I'd reduce some jumps for this part since it's really calm
00:29:524 (3,1,2) - probably the worst possible movement here, huge spacing change with nearly no angle plays really bad
00:30:760 (2,3,1) - works much better
00:34:642 (1) - could really use a jump + some acute angle to emphasize it
00:40:995 (4,5,6,7) - mapping it as circles here and sliders for 00:42:407 (5,6) - ??
00:45:936 (1,1,1) - 00:48:759 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - rip consistency
00:51:230 (6) - way too strong for a stack imo => 01:23:701 (4,1) - too
01:06:759 (4,1) - same here, also doesnt make much sense compared to 01:07:465 (2,3) - lol
01:18:053 (4,1,2,3) - too since it's literally the same
01:10:554 - so much overmap and then this obvious 1/4 gets ignored

karen

not even a short kiai flash?
00:00:230 - why ignore intro vocals ;_;
00:05:701 (2,1) - - how about moving 2 a bit to get a nice jump for the cymbal on 1?
00:21:230 (4) - feels a bit too huge compared to surrounding jumps even if the soiund is strong
00:23:083 (10) - gradually increasing the spacing for every object would look a bit nicer imo

rumia i

00:00:230 - why is this mapped on one of your diffs but not on the other lol
00:07:112 (3) - stack for such a strong note
00:33:936 (5) - strong sound/change is here but currently 00:34:112 (6) - is placed like it's much more important
00:58:289 (4,1,2,3) - autostacking kills this http://i.imgur.com/HXIR62I.jpg, manually stack 00:58:818 (1,2,3) - under it or sth
01:00:054 (1) -

hard

00:10:465 (5,2,3,4) - check patterns like this with stacking enabled and manually fix them
also makes for some ugly tiny overlaps like 00:28:112 (2,3) -
00:16:289 (1,2,3,4) - overlap instead of stack would be better to read for this level of difficulty. shitty sketch: http://i.imgur.com/ylR3urQ.jpg
00:21:583 - clickable cymbal plsss
00:28:289 (3) - mapping tje claps a sliderends for the first part of this section makes me sad

normal

00:34:995 (2,3) - stack is incosistent with pretty much everything else
01:07:465 (5,6) - could overlap way less for better readability
01:18:759 (5,6) - ^
01:23:701 (3,4) - stack makes no sense at all with your other patterns and music
01:25:289 (6,7) - ^

gao between this and hard might be problematic as normal utilizes only a few 1/2 and hard already uses quite some 1/4..

easy

00:06:407 (1,2) - for this level of difficulty I'd avoid overlapping the hpbar (even if it is rankable) when it is easily avoidable like here since it just looks cleaner
00:31:818 (1,2,3) - bit dense for such a calm part on easy
01:09:230 (2,3,4,5) - and 01:20:524 (2,3,4,5) - could nerf a little bit since it'S the only time you use 3 1/1 taps in a row

edit: oh it got updated while I was modding, maybe some stuf for higher diffs makes no sense since I already got to rumia's insane

gl

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sahuang 2016-04-18T12:58:15+00:00

yep no worries

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sahuang 2016-04-18T13:29:42+00:00

Broccoly

Broccoly wrote:
m4m

[I]
00:18:230 (3) - pull this note up a bit cuz it's too low
01:03:407 (4,5) - maybe put them closer
all fixed

[H]
00:57:230 (1,2) - too close fine now
00:59:524 (4) - NC? yes

gl on rank!

Karen

Karen wrote:
Easy
00:20:348 (1,2) - 这个看起来真的别扭，低难度的物件一般都顺着来，这样绕个圈不合适
00:48:230 - 既然选择跟这句vocal那滑条可以停在这里
00:51:054 - ^前面都改了
01:00:054 - 从这里开始后面你漏了很多白线不map，低难度尽量不要搞奇怪的节奏，填满才是最容易的，这一节试试这样的节奏 http://puu.sh/omAkR/462b24c538.jpg 注意01:01:289 - 这种vocal是可以用折返跟的
这边我加了东西但是不是这种方法，跟了白线
01:16:642 - 像这里是100%应该map的
换了以后确实map了

Normal:
DS选的不好，物件之间碰那么小一块，似碰非碰的感觉逼死强迫症，你把CS改成3.5就能完美解决这个问题了，xixi 这是因为DS低了会碰上高了又会太far away。。反正ds3.5了
00:10:642 (4) - 这里新的一部分应该滑条开始吧，后面滑条是啥意思拆了，感觉还是有点难受
00:20:701 - 既然是normal那可以把这种音填上恩
00:56:171 (4,5) - 感觉有一点奇怪，这里听起来像是3个单点的样子滑条舒服，有音效emphasis所以还行
01:24:407 (5) - 节奏错了，01:24:407 - 这里圈，01:24:583 - 这里滑条
是的，前面摸改掉了的

Hard
00:44:524 (1) - 这转盘太短了，这不是insane所以不适合这么难的恩，换了个很奇葩的摆法
01:10:289 (2,3,4,5) - 这里DS呢？1.3啊。。没问题
01:22:112 (5,1) - 太近了，像这种突然变速的时候，关掉DS用肉眼看距离是
01:23:877 - 这里开始滑条速度应该比01:22:642 - 这里快结尾这边滑条就不变速了。。
这难度还可以

Lasse

Lasse wrote:
m4m

insane
similar overmap issues as rumias extra, I'd take a look at Karen's diff since it's done better there
00:06:936 (2,3) - plays really awkward and doesnt emphasize strong cymbal on 3 at all. even this low effort suggestion would work better http://i.imgur.com/sNQp06B.jpg (but you can probably find sth better since I only spent 5 seconds on this lol)
00:11:877 (4) - eww strong vocal on sliderend, doubleor even triple would work better here. or just ignoring it like http://i.imgur.com/GsWUH2W.jpg
00:12:759 (5,6,7,8) - same as for rumias extra, won't mention anymore
00:22:024 (1) - so much interesting stuff to be mapped and you put a spinner
00:23:348 - I'd reduce some jumps for this part since it's really calm
00:29:524 (3,1,2) - probably the worst possible movement here, huge spacing change with nearly no angle plays really bad
00:30:760 (2,3,1) - works much better
00:34:642 (1) - could really use a jump + some acute angle to emphasize it
00:40:995 (4,5,6,7) - mapping it as circles here and sliders for 00:42:407 (5,6) - ??
00:45:936 (1,1,1) - 00:48:759 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - rip consistency
00:51:230 (6) - way too strong for a stack imo => 01:23:701 (4,1) - too
01:06:759 (4,1) - same here, also doesnt make much sense compared to 01:07:465 (2,3) - lol
01:18:053 (4,1,2,3) - too since it's literally the same
01:10:554 - so much overmap and then this obvious 1/4 gets ignored
fixed some of them,but i cant agree with u as to overmap cuz if you listen with 25% u can hear the beat.e.g. 01:21:936 (3,4,1) -
i will recheck this insane tho cuz some jumps suck

hard
00:10:465 (5,2,3,4) - check patterns like this with stacking enabled and manually fix them guess stacked？
also makes for some ugly tiny overlaps like 00:28:112 (2,3) - stack now
00:16:289 (1,2,3,4) - overlap instead of stack would be better to read for this level of difficulty. shitty sketch: http://i.imgur.com/ylR3urQ.jpg
i will stack 1,3 and 2,4
00:21:583 - clickable cymbal plsssmaybe just like this cuz a note 00:21:936 (1) - added
00:28:289 (3) - mapping tje claps a sliderends for the first part of this section makes me sad xDDD keep

normal
00:34:995 (2,3) - stack is incosistent with pretty much everything else
01:07:465 (5,6) - could overlap way less for better readability
01:18:759 (5,6) - ^
01:23:701 (3,4) - stack makes no sense at all with your other patterns and music
01:25:289 (6,7) - ^
stack is fine imo,fixed overlap
gao between this and hard might be problematic as normal utilizes only a few 1/2 and hard already uses quite some 1/4..

easy
00:06:407 (1,2) - for this level of difficulty I'd avoid overlapping the hpbar (even if it is rankable) when it is easily avoidable like here since it just looks cleaner yes avoided
00:31:818 (1,2,3) - bit dense for such a calm part on easy it's fine,i raise difficulty for kiai
01:09:230 (2,3,4,5) - and 01:20:524 (2,3,4,5) - could nerf a little bit since it'S the only time you use 3 1/1 taps in a row remapped some part so it's fine

edit: oh it got updated while I was modding, maybe some stuf for higher diffs makes no sense since I already got to rumia's insane

gl

all checked
thx

Last edited by sahuang 2016-04-18T14:38:29+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

TtmnZk

Elite Mapper

597 posts

Joined March 2013

TtmnZk 2016-04-18T14:17:04+00:00

m4m,:3

[Easy]

00:01:465 (2,3,4) - 这人声这样下节奏不是很合适，怪怪的，00:01:465 (2) -
因为是ez不下1/2所以人声肯定就跟不全，一开始是从00:00:760 (1) - 这里开始下的是以鼓点开头跟的音，所以会有突兀感
初见可能会明不清节奏
00:09:583 00:10:289 这里地方有鼓点不应该略过，之后像00:13:112 这里之间人声比较重还好

00:25:818 这里00:24:407 (2) - 跟了这里就应该跟上

00:28:642^

00:51:583 (1,2) - 对称？

01:27:230 add note

kiai的clap音效因为不是跟的全snare drum所以不用节奏在了就加一个。可以隔一个加一个，这样就不会又中断感

01:01:112 01:02:524 01:03:936 (2) - 01:05:348 (4) - 这样下

[Normal]

00:03:407 (1,2,3) - 节奏切的略急

00:04:642 (4) - 大白线滑条尾部不推荐

00:20:348 (3,1) - 不要叠一起，而且是这种时间上不一的叠，我建议把3换成滑条到00:20:701

00:34:995 (2,3) - nm也是尽量不叠就不叠

00:50:877 折返把重音放了

[Hard]
00:05:965 (6) - overmap :3

00:16:289 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这梗放哪里都难打，不建议‘

00:19:112 (1,2,3,4) - 调一下弧度？http://puu.sh/omPpy/c57aad8684.jpg

00:21:230 (3,1) - 试试，http://puu.sh/omPs7/2d706d4953.jpg

[rumi'sInsane]

00:38:877 (4) - ctrl+g?

01:18:407 why miss :3

01:26:348 (6,7) - ctrl+g?

[Insane]
0:03:230 (5,6) - 这个跳的很没必要，首先00:02:701 (4,5,6) -这段本身就有00:02:877 00:03:142 00:03:407的低音鼓，
在这就没有其他的明显音了，打的时候就很容易误读

00:08:524 (3,4,5,6) - 这里连打也用一些音效修饰一下，要不存在感略低
00:10:288 (4,5,6,7) - ^

00:48:407 (6,7,8,9) - 连打修弧度,比如http://puu.sh/omQl7/e5ebf3768b.jpg

00:56:524 (5,6,7,8) - 用ctrl+shfit+f来弄连打

01:02:789 (7) - overmap

editL:其他的diff没啥问题，就这些了

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2016-04-18T14:27:52+00:00

ya~
又看到了疯狂求摸的萨之皇者，虾仁Σ( ° △ °|||)
[General]

00:10:465 - 和00:11:348 - 这一串不加个clap？

[Rumi's Extra]

00:00:760 (2,3) - kinda close cautz of distance of 00:00:230 (1,2) - , or just set NC on
00:00:760 (2) - ?
00:29:348 (2,3,4,5,6) - make a star and 00:30:230 (7) - on the center? if you prefer the distance of them, just ignore this
00:47:524 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:46:995 (1,2) - swap NC?
01:27:936 (7) - NC?
01:11:348 - unused inherit point, the same in your Insane diff

[Rumi's Insnae]

00:01:465 (2) - curve like this?
00:31:818 (5) - NC？
01:22:642 (1,2) - kinda close as this stack

[Insane]

00:01:465 (2) - 这个感觉离前面近了 flow也不是很好的样子试试00:01:465 (2) - 318|330, 00:01:642 (3) - 284|192, 00:01:818 (4) - 156|288
00:05:700 (3) - 也是flow 距离可能也是近了放112|160这样？如果这样后面也要调整了
00:06:407 (1,2,3) - 讲真不谈这个overlap的话这个flow也是比较迷这样这样这样应该都ok了
00:09:936 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这串overmap是真的不舒服
00:16:289 (1) - 按前面的情况这之后出现在左边区域感觉比较好吧
00:16:995 (5,6) - 这个放法，额感觉略误导，就这样正常放不好么QwQ
00:32:524 (2,1) - 这个确实是近了至少和前面那俩滑条的间距差不多吧应该
00:34:642 (1) - ^ 主要是这里NC应该小跳一下以区分强调这下重音不然都对不起这个finish酱啊 (好吧最后一句是我口胡的
00:43:818 (3,4) - 讲道理这两个不应该互换位置么
00:52:642 (5,1) - 两个连续顺时针flow还顺向的感觉用在这里不太好单说这个滑条的话这样接前面就好些
00:55:818 (1) - 一样的道理也是近了
00:58:818 (2,3,4,1) - 。。。我个人谴责一下这种排列因为我不会读这个Orz 而且NC应该压后面的vocal上吧
01:28:024 - 结尾消音

[Hard]

不考虑一下CS3.8或3.5么 AR都不到8
00:00:760 (1,2) - 顺着1的flow线走然后就跑到2的上面了。所以我建议2再往上点
00:02:701 (6,7) - 合成一个折返吧后面这个7号太突兀了，就算是跟人声也是白线人声优先啊这里
00:04:995 (1,2) - 换成滑条 Hard里连续单点断NC讲道理基本没见过几张
00:21:936 (1) - 这个我觉得可以不卡DS了直接放在全屏幕正中心接转盘也好啊
00:23:701 (1) - 可以删掉这个我说不太准
00:41:701 (1,2) - 这个跟人声还是跟鼓点好像都不太对诶还是NC那里的问题我觉得这俩直接俩滑条就ok了
01:24:407 - 试试这个节奏不然你这里空3/2然后白线三连抓节奏太难了 (其实我是建议放掉这个 ~~好像rumia的I就放掉了~~ 不对啊你的I不也放掉了么)

[人格's Angel Tsukiko]

诶color不一样是可以的么
诶非主难度自定义diff name是可以的么(主要是有点不和谐 ~~不如全难度自定义~~)
你的 Angel Tsukiko 然后 BG, 嗯。
00:59:524 - NC？

Good luck啊

BigEarsMau

786 posts

Joined June 2015

BigEarsMau 2016-04-19T02:25:27+00:00

Hi there, Sahuang!
M4M from my queue

Let's take a look....

[General]

The diff name "My Angel Tsukiko" can't be used in this situation since the diff is not the highest diff in the mapset

[Easy]

00:00:760 (1,2,3,4) - - Easy diffs rarely have 1/2 circles placed since newer players are still learning on following the basic rhythm of the song and a pattern like this might make trouble for some players. My tip is try to use white ticks for these kind of parts. Try to make 00:01:465 (2) longer until 00:02:171, then move 00:02:348 (3) to 00:02:524, and then move 00:02:701 (4) to 00:02:877 for a clearer pattern for new players, as shown here
00:07:465 - Maybe add a circle here to improve flow
00:13:112 - ^
00:41:348 - ^
00:42:759 - ^
00:13:465 (2) - Blanket it with 00:12:054 (1) so it looks nicer
01:08:524 (1,2) - Make them curved like this to make them NOT boring
01:15:230 (2,3) - A blanket would be nice

[Normal]

Check AIMod. There is an unsnapped object
00:08:171 (4,5) - Blanket
00:20:701 (4) - Don't you think it's a bit sudden for newer players?
00:27:407 - Add a circle here to match with the lyrics
00:38:701 - ^

[Hard]

00:07:112 (2,3) - Blanket these two
01:17:701 (3) - Maybe make it curved and blanket it with 01:18:053 (4)

[Rumi's Insane]

No probs imo. I enjoyed this diff a lot

[Insane]

AIMod
00:06:936 (2,3) - Would be better if blanketed

Other than those, this diff is alright

Can't mod Tsukiko and Extra bc I can't play them sorry

Hope this helps
Good luck in being ranked

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sahuang 2016-04-19T10:46:20+00:00

To further modders:

My Angel Tsukiko is a diff mapped by Karen

Diff name will be changed shortly

dw

Last edited by sahuang 2016-04-19T11:17:16+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sahuang 2016-04-19T10:50:18+00:00

TTM

TT Mouse wrote:
m4m,:3

[Easy]

00:01:465 (2,3,4) - 这人声这样下节奏不是很合适，怪怪的，00:01:465 (2) -
因为是ez不下1/2所以人声肯定就跟不全，一开始是从00:00:760 (1) - 这里开始下的是以鼓点开头跟的音，所以会有突兀感
初见可能会明不清节奏
00:09:583 00:10:289 这里地方有鼓点不应该略过，之后像00:13:112 这里之间人声比较重还好
一开始先这样，后面我智障了，改成了俩滑条

00:25:818 这里00:24:407 (2) - 跟了这里就应该跟上
00:28:642^
00:51:583 (1,2) - 对称？
01:27:230 add note
fixed all above
kiai的clap音效因为不是跟的全snare drum所以不用节奏在了就加一个。可以隔一个加一个，这样就不会又中断感
音效先放着了
01:01:112 01:02:524 01:03:936 (2) - 01:05:348 (4) - 这样下
换了个节奏，variety。。
[Normal]

00:03:407 (1,2,3) - 节奏切的略急
貌似只能这样，其实还行
00:04:642 (4) - 大白线滑条尾部不推荐
恩，改了
00:20:348 (3,1) - 不要叠一起，而且是这种时间上不一的叠，我建议把3换成滑条到00:20:701
没叠，但是感觉现在这样滑条也行吧
00:34:995 (2,3) - nm也是尽量不叠就不叠
改了
00:50:877 折返把重音放了
没办法。。这个
[Hard]
00:05:965 (6) - overmap :3
25%播放其实是有鼓点的
00:16:289 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这梗放哪里都难打，不建议‘
改了
00:19:112 (1,2,3,4) - 调一下弧度？http://puu.sh/omPpy/c57aad8684.jpg
队
00:21:230 (3,1) - 试试，http://puu.sh/omPs7/2d706d4953.jpg
果然好多了

[Insane]
0:03:230 (5,6) - 这个跳的很没必要，首先00:02:701 (4,5,6) -这段本身就有00:02:877 00:03:142 00:03:407的低音鼓，
在这就没有其他的明显音了，打的时候就很容易误读

00:08:524 (3,4,5,6) - 这里连打也用一些音效修饰一下，要不存在感略低
00:10:288 (4,5,6,7) - ^

00:48:407 (6,7,8,9) - 连打修弧度,比如http://puu.sh/omQl7/e5ebf3768b.jpg

00:56:524 (5,6,7,8) - 用ctrl+shfit+f来弄连打

01:02:789 (7) - overmap
insane算了，已弃

editL:其他的diff没啥问题，就这些了

Misure

Misure wrote:
ya~
又看到了疯狂求摸的萨之皇者，虾仁Σ( ° △ °|||) 爷爷
insane已经放弃rank，放在娱乐的地方
[Hard]
不考虑一下CS3.8或3.5么 AR都不到8
会overlap 还是4
00:00:760 (1,2) - 顺着1的flow线走然后就跑到2的上面了。所以我建议2再往上点把1往下了点，一样，不影响后面
00:02:701 (6,7) - 合成一个折返吧后面这个7号太突兀了，就算是跟人声也是白线人声优先啊这里这边不想改。。这样肯定是可以的，折返后面不好办
00:04:995 (1,2) - 换成滑条 Hard里连续单点断NC讲道理基本没见过几张不准备改。。虽然可以，其他人说了再改
00:21:936 (1) - 这个我觉得可以不卡DS了直接放在全屏幕正中心接转盘也好啊？？
00:23:701 (1) - 可以删掉这个我说不太准删了，应该好
00:41:701 (1,2) - 这个跟人声还是跟鼓点好像都不太对诶还是NC那里的问题我觉得这俩直接俩滑条就ok了
这边我改了下，感觉也行，后面俩滑条
01:24:407 - 试试这个节奏不然你这里空3/2然后白线三连抓节奏太难了 (其实我是建议放掉这个 ~~好像rumia的I就放掉了~~ 不对啊你的I不也放掉了么)
改啦
Good luck啊

多谢

BigEarsMau

BigEarsMau wrote:
Hi there, Sahuang!
M4M from my queue

Let's take a look....

[General]
The diff name "My Angel Tsukiko" can't be used in this situation since the diff is not the highest diff in the mapset
yes,this is mapped by karen and diff name will be changed
[Easy]
00:00:760 (1,2,3,4) - - Easy diffs rarely have 1/2 circles placed since newer players are still learning on following the basic rhythm of the song and a pattern like this might make trouble for some players. My tip is try to use white ticks for these kind of parts. Try to make 00:01:465 (2) longer until 00:02:171, then move 00:02:348 (3) to 00:02:524, and then move 00:02:701 (4) to 00:02:877 for a clearer pattern for new players, as shown [url=http://puu.sh/onAqp/e1acd7dbd9.JPG]here
this might be better,but i fell the rhythm im using now is also correct,it's just a littble bit hard for new players.i will keep it now[/url]
00:07:465 - Maybe add a circle here to improve flow ye
00:13:112 - ^ fine here cuz 00:12:759 - heavy beat here
00:41:348 - ^
00:42:759 - ^yes
00:13:465 (2) - Blanket it with 00:12:054 (1) so it looks nicer cool
01:08:524 (1,2) - Make them curved like this to make them NOT boring yes
01:15:230 (2,3) - A blanket would be nice no thx
[Normal]
Check AIMod. There is an unsnapped object nope
00:08:171 (4,5) - Blanket don't need a blanket here imo
00:20:701 (4) - Don't you think it's a bit sudden for newer players? yes,deleted
00:27:407 - Add a circle here to match with the lyrics add the first but not the second cuz it looks ugly
00:38:701 - ^
[Hard]
00:07:112 (2,3) - Blanket these two ye
01:17:701 (3) - Maybe make it curved and blanket it with 01:18:053 (4) fixed
[Insane]
AIMod fixed
00:06:936 (2,3) - Would be better if blanketed sure

Other than those, this diff is alright

Can't mod Tsukiko and Extra bc I can't play them sorry
it's fine!!!thx a lot
Hope this helps
Good luck in being ranked

Thx

Meyrink

728 posts

Joined February 2014

Meyrink 2016-04-19T14:55:13+00:00

Hi ! from M4M

Easy

00:28:642 (4,2) - is it okay to overlap like this in easy? i t can be confusing with the slow ar
01:01:465 (3) - remove Finish and do just normal sampleset
01:09:936 (3) - Soft hitclap better imo
01:26:877 (2,3,4) - i suggest turning this rythm to smthing like this more simple ! http://puu.sh/oo621.jpg

Normal

00:44:171 (4) - stack ? aylmao xd
00:47:524 (4,4) - these feels really off for me for some reasons ! i think it would work better if u turn it to 2 1/2 sliders like http://puu.sh/oo6f5.jpg ! like that u'll hear the clap mapped aswell

Rumib's Insane

00:06:936 (2,3) - u can unstack these 2 ? so it gives more emphasis for the Finish in the slider 00:07:112 (3) -
00:38:877 (4) - ctrl g maybe ?
00:44:524 (3,4) - hitsound these ? there must be some claps there !

Karen's Insane

00:22:995 (9,10,11,12) - this stream is inconsistent ! unless u did it on purpose
00:57:936 (4) - Nc this for better reading imo
00:59:171 (4) - maybe this one too need nc
where's kiai o-o

Rumib's Extra

00:07:112 (2) - can u curve the last part of this slider too ? xdxdxd lmao !so it ll look more soft =w=
00:43:112 (1,4) - nazi stack

nicemap :3

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Rumia- 2016-04-19T16:29:52+00:00

sahuang plz cool down xd too many mods i need to reply ( will edit this post , need slp

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sahuang 2016-04-19T16:43:50+00:00

Sry I'm wrong

The thing is I need plenty of mods as a new mapper to improve but sometimes they mod your diffs and Karen's as well

For further mods I will tell modders to skip your diffs if u wish and probably Karen's after maybe 5 more modders, which will hopefully work well

Btw some people have already started modding so there might be ~4 more mods for you in the coming week then may not bother you until I find BN

I will try to let fewer modders mod your diffs lol

Meyrink

Meyrink wrote:
Hi ! from M4M

Easy
00:28:642 (4,2) - is it okay to overlap like this in easy? i t can be confusing with the slow ar right,changed direction
01:01:465 (3) - remove Finish and do just normal sampleset
01:09:936 (3) - Soft hitclap better imo will keep hitsounds for now
01:26:877 (2,3,4) - i suggest turning this rythm to smthing like this more simple ! http://puu.sh/oo621.jpg
wow,much better

Normal
00:44:171 (4) - stack ? aylmao xd
00:47:524 (4,4) - these feels really off for me for some reasons ! i think it would work better if u turn it to 2 1/2 sliders like http://puu.sh/oo6f5.jpg ! like that u'll hear the clap mapped aswell
well.if i do that the space will be hard to control. now im following vocal and seems to be good

nicemap :3

thx

Last edited by sahuang 2016-04-21T06:30:57+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2016-04-20T10:58:21+00:00

~~mark first~~

先扔个testplay成绩界面 , EX 打不动 gg

SPOILER

as you reqs ENH Diff

[Easy]

00:01:465 (2,3,4) - 有点奇怪,试试这个节奏

SPOILER

00:21:936 (2,3) - 也可以用1个滑条带过(这样的话00:21:583 - 加个note?

00:57:936 (1) - 没必要NC

01:05:701 (1,2) - 换滑条吗?

01:16:995 (1,2) - ^

01:21:230 (3,4,5) - 试试跟个人声?这样挺好的

SPOILER

01:26:524 (2) - 这里一个折返再接最后那个滑条?

[Normal]
不知道怎么说这diff

00:01:465 (2,3,5) - 这边我不喜欢这个flow,至少我fl会被坑,虽然我不怎么打fl了

00:03:583 (2,3) - ^

00:20:348 (3) - 换个滑条->00:20:701 - ?

01:27:583 (4,5) - 换个折返?

[Hard]

00:59:524 (1) - 取消nc? 你都是44拍1nc

01:09:936 (1,2) - 强迫症好难受

01:16:642 (5) - ^ ctrl+g?

太多flow不符合我口味...全程DS略显无聊

太水了,Orz..

09kami

828 posts

Joined August 2010

09kami 2016-04-20T12:11:33+00:00

09kami wrote:
[Rumi's Extra]
try Chinese mod！(只是偷懒

00:00:230 (1) - overmap 第一根红线前.不能有note

01:18:936 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 尝试这个
http://puu.sh/opcri/f05c52c6c1.jpg

01:26:524 (3) - 位置移动到x : 128 y: 264

[Hard]

00:04:818 (5) - 删掉这个note DT打起来怪怪的

00:03:407 (7) - 同上

看了下这个难度比起hard更加像insane 因为非常多的地方跟的人声 hard这个难度主要意义在于能不能DT 一些能省的部分最好是不要刻意加进去特别是人声部分不要和节奏混在一起如果这个难度之后还想保留的话估计要remap一次或者简化节奏之前joker的hard也和这个一样吃了节奏密集度的亏所以我才把那个难度删掉的

[Normal]

这个难度倒是比较像hard

00:01:465 (2,3) - nm里经量不要用这种大幅度的重叠减少滑条的相叠程度是个好的选择

00:01:995 (3,4,5,1) - 不对这一部分为什么不跟鼓点跟的另一段声音

00:04:995 (4,5,6) - 这一段我感觉可以换成一个滑条

00:24:583 (2,3) - 可以考虑忽略

00:57:230 (1,2) - 这个地方改成一个折返滑条白线折返1/2到白线

唔...怎么说呢很多地方跟的都是人声部分所以是红线开头的像这种难度除非是整首都跟人声否则在nm里显得怪怪的 NM难度里经量不要红线起头滑条

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sahuang 2016-04-20T12:12:05+00:00

噫，比较喜欢跟DS啦，作图习惯于中规中矩

flow因人而异吧，不过作为新人mapper很多地方肯定有不足之处，都是些没太大问题但可能卡player手的梗

Spread的问题我觉得还好，hard塞一些三连没什么问题，我这图也没有超过triple的东西，gap感觉不是特别大。如果BN实在是说要加diff我在考虑一个在nh之间的diff

二妹

moonlightleaf wrote:
~~mark first~~

先扔个testplay成绩界面 , EX 打不动 gg 人？
SPOILER

as you reqs ENH Diff

[Easy]

00:01:465 (2,3,4) - 有点奇怪,试试这个节奏恩，可以只是那个00:02:877 (3) - 感觉没音。。先用你的
SPOILER

00:21:936 (2,3) - 也可以用1个滑条带过(这样的话00:21:583 - 加个note?对的

00:57:936 (1) - 没必要NC ok

01:05:701 (1,2) - 换滑条吗?

01:16:995 (1,2) - ^都改了，好多了

01:21:230 (3,4,5) - 试试跟个人声?这样挺好的是，后面也都re了下
SPOILER

01:26:524 (2) - 这里一个折返再接最后那个滑条? re了不是折返

[Normal]
不知道怎么说这diff

00:01:465 (2,3,5) - 这边我不喜欢这个flow,至少我fl会被坑,虽然我不怎么打fl了

00:03:583 (2,3) - ^

00:20:348 (3) - 换个滑条->00:20:701 - ?

01:27:583 (4,5) - 换个折返?
都改了
[Hard]

00:59:524 (1) - 取消nc? 你都是44拍1nc
恩
01:09:936 (1,2) - 强迫症好难受
01:16:642 (5) - ^ ctrl+g?
都+g了
太多flow不符合我口味...全程DS略显无聊
qwq
太水了,Orz..

⑨神

09kami wrote:
[Hard]

00:04:818 (5) - 删掉这个note DT打起来怪怪的
删了
00:03:407 (7) - 同上
恩
看了下这个难度比起hard更加像insane 因为非常多的地方跟的人声 hard这个难度主要意义在于能不能DT 一些能省的部分最好是不要刻意加进去特别是人声部分不要和节奏混在一起如果这个难度之后还想保留的话估计要remap一次或者简化节奏之前joker的hard也和这个一样吃了节奏密集度的亏所以我才把那个难度删掉的
具体原因前面写了的，不看星数，单看note数量其实不是差的特别大，normal的1/4也有不少，hard最多是原地三连，我觉得可以

[Normal]

这个难度倒是比较像hard 233

00:01:465 (2,3) - nm里经量不要用这种大幅度的重叠减少滑条的相叠程度是个好的选择

00:01:995 (3,4,5,1) - 不对这一部分为什么不跟鼓点跟的另一段声音

00:04:995 (4,5,6) - 这一段我感觉可以换成一个滑条

00:24:583 (2,3) - 可以考虑忽略

00:57:230 (1,2) - 这个地方改成一个折返滑条白线折返1/2到白线

唔...怎么说呢很多地方跟的都是人声部分所以是红线开头的像这种难度除非是整首都跟人声否则在nm里显得怪怪的 NM难度里经量不要红线起头滑条
normal的我都没改，我觉得不需要刻意忽视一些地方，可能我比较喜欢跟vocal，很多地方确实在红线上，不过RC上没问题，可能比较卡手。normal我觉得这样没什么问题

thx for mod

Last edited by sahuang 2016-04-21T07:04:51+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Beomsan

1,878 posts

Joined November 2013

Beomsan 2016-04-20T12:27:07+00:00

=w=/m4m
sorry for poor English ._.

[General]

good

[Easy]

00:17:701 (1,2,1,2,3) - finish is not fit imo. I recommend 00:17:701 (1) - center and tail remove finish and add crap -> 00:19:112 (2,1) - change to crap 00:21:936 (2) - keep
00:35:348 (2) - 00:38:171 (2) - recommend use slidertick hitsound.
01:05:348 (4,1,2) - 01:16:642 (4,1,2) - As far as I know, It's unrankable. (continuity notes?) I recommend 01:05:701 - change to 1/1 slider.
01:08:171 - 01:19:465 - add a note?
01:08:524 (1) - head / sampleset is set to normal. change to auto
01:26:877 - I think spinner is good too

[Normal]

00:40:289 (1,2,3,4) - change to whistle is better imo
00:47:524 (4) - um... yeah This is correct. However, it lacks something. I recommend it
00:50:348 (4) - ^
01:19:112 (6) - It's just recommend -> (delete 01:19:289 - add 1/2 slider)
01:25:112 - add a note and 01:25:289 - delete.

[Hard]

nothing to say from me.... sorry

[Karen's Insane]

00:44:877 (2,6) - crap
00:56:524 (6) - tail / 00:56:965 (8,9) - sampleset change to normal

sorry for poor mod. but hope it helps.
good luck on ranking!

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2016-04-20T14:56:42+00:00

fixed almost everything!
something i didn't fix:
Lasse:
00:00:230 - didn't really want to add notes before the red line
00:20:877 (2,3,4,5) - i made this for the pattern here o.o, it fits with the music well
00:23:083 (10) - i think you mean decreasing

Beomsan:
00:44:877 (2,6) -what

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59348
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Baby Sweet Berry Love
TitleUnicode:Baby Sweet Berry Love
Artist:Ogura Yui
ArtistUnicode:小倉唯
Creator:sahuang
Version:Karen's Insane
Source:変態王子と笑わない猫。
Tags:Ending TV Size Short Version Ver. Hentai Ouji to Warawanai Neko. The "HENTAI" prince and the stony cat. Rumia- karen
BeatmapID:956195
BeatmapSetID:442263

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bgkaren.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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58465,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
60054,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
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87848,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
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Combo1 : 238,153,83
Combo2 : 251,142,235
Combo3 : 249,51,56
Combo4 : 98,222,95
Combo5 : 97,146,248
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333,357,68701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,202,68877,2,0,L|215:204,1,42.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,277,69054,1,0,1:0:0:0:
354,241,69230,2,0,P|363:199|349:151,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,74,69583,1,8,0:0:0:0:
458,145,69759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,74,69936,5,0,1:0:0:0:
387,23,70112,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,17,70201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
437,10,70289,1,8,1:2:0:0:
353,158,70465,1,0,1:0:0:0:
322,174,70554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,176,70642,1,0,1:0:0:0:
254,168,70730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,150,70818,6,0,L|231:206,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,166,70995,2,0,L|125:123,1,42.5,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,204,71171,2,0,L|47:260,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,261,71348,6,0,P|225:228|237:316,2,170,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,367,72230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
107,161,72407,1,8,0:0:0:0:
250,301,72583,6,0,B|331:341|342:269|438:320,1,170,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
503,362,73112,1,8,0:0:0:0:
378,211,73289,2,0,P|375:160|388:122,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,7,73642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,7,73818,1,8,0:0:0:0:
307,58,73995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,58,74083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,58,74171,6,0,P|265:65|211:53,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,128,74524,2,0,P|426:121|480:133,1,85,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
291,311,74877,2,0,P|258:232|300:154,1,170,0|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
357,236,75407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,314,75583,6,0,L|95:308,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
51,193,75936,2,0,L|135:198,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,119,76289,2,0,L|301:62,1,42.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,14,76465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
237,203,76642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
399,95,76818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,108,76995,6,0,B|124:133|93:127|60:101|60:101|67:76|58:37,2,170,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,14,77877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,108,78054,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,177,78230,6,0,B|362:131|368:211|460:160,1,170,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,74,78759,1,8,0:0:0:0:
329,265,78936,2,0,L|337:355,1,85,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,177,79289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,260,79465,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,325,79642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,325,79730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,325,79818,6,0,P|197:332|144:324,1,85,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,248,80171,2,0,P|44:241|97:249,1,85,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
52,147,80524,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,343,80701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,236,80877,1,8,1:2:0:0:
50,343,81054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
155,140,81230,5,0,1:0:0:0:
192,134,81318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,142,81407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,161,81495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
282,193,81583,1,8,1:2:0:0:
278,57,81759,1,0,1:0:0:0:
191,237,81936,1,0,1:0:0:0:
191,237,82024,1,0,1:0:0:0:
191,237,82112,6,0,L|201:294,1,42.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,323,82289,2,0,L|287:281,1,42.5,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,218,82465,2,0,L|379:275,1,42.5,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,379,82642,6,0,B|424:393|476:362|476:362|509:367,2,127.500004863739,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,203,83701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,126,83877,6,0,P|442:186|392:295,1,170,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
295,323,84407,1,0,1:0:0:0:
331,203,84583,2,0,L|509:192,1,170,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
467,27,85112,5,0,1:0:0:0:
433,34,85201,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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418,241,85465,1,0,1:0:0:0:
400,43,85642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,203,85818,1,8,1:2:0:0:
491,94,85995,1,0,1:0:0:0:
306,101,86171,2,0,B|222:136|223:67|131:113,1,170,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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0,67,86877,5,4,0:0:0:0:
0,67,86965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,67,87054,1,0,3:0:0:0:
69,216,87230,1,8,1:2:0:0:
87,24,87407,1,0,1:0:0:0:
69,216,87583,1,0,1:0:0:0:
65,258,87671,1,2,0:0:0:0:
101,279,87759,1,2,0:0:0:0:
134,252,87848,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,215,87936,5,2,0:0:0:0:

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sahuang 2016-04-20T15:42:20+00:00

Again, feel free to mod only ENH and skip the GDs

Setz

1,419 posts

Joined August 2013

Setz 2016-04-20T20:55:00+00:00

m4m return

[Easy]

00:04:995 (3) - move this down so that it flows better from the previous object
00:12:054 (1,2) - and 00:16:289 (3) - makes more sense to extend these to the next white ticks to cover all the sounds.
01:26:524 - maybe add something here

[Normal]

00:12:054 (1,2) - idk about these 1/1 stacks, this could get you in trouble with QATs, but i am not 100% sure
00:20:348 (3) - instead of having this weird polarity change to the next object, you could just make this a slider that ends where the next object is
00:24:054 (1) - this doesnt make sense to me, this part is more dense with notes than 00:34:642 (1) - when there is more going on with the music in the latter.

[Hard]

00:27:583 (1,2) - bad looking overlap in play mode
00:45:936 (1) - maybe move like this to improve aesthetics
SPOILER
00:54:054 (3) - shouldnt have the strong beat on the slider end
01:04:289 (1) - angle downward a little for better flow, something like
SPOILER
01:11:877 (2,3) - Really uncomfortable flow because of 3's head shape
01:27:759 (4) - why not triple?

[Rumi Insane]

00:11:259 - stream actually starts here, and there is no sound here 00:11:789 -
00:10:201 (4) - again no sound here, while you ignore the drums at 00:09:671 -
00:21:583 (4,5,6,7) - more overmap
and so on, there is alot of overmapping that I dont agree with, but i will just stop here.
00:43:995 - why ignore the red tick drums?
00:48:407 - good place for a stream that you didnt map

[Rumi Extra]

ok, i didnt point this out in the insane, but why dont you map this drum? 00:03:142 - can do something like
SPOILER
same overmapping comments as insane

Last edited by Setz 2016-04-21T09:04:52+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2016-04-21T08:00:28+00:00

Old song but so cute :3

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sahuang 2016-04-21T08:48:21+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Old song but so cute :3

Yea Nice anime

~~Also my waifu~~

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sahuang 2016-04-21T13:18:24+00:00

Beomsan

Beomsan wrote:
=w=/m4m
sorry for poor English ._.

[General]
good
[Easy]
00:17:701 (1,2,1,2,3) - finish is not fit imo. I recommend 00:17:701 (1) - center and tail remove finish and add crap -> 00:19:112 (2,1) - change to crap 00:21:936 (2) - keep
00:35:348 (2) - 00:38:171 (2) - recommend use slidertick hitsound.
01:05:348 (4,1,2) - 01:16:642 (4,1,2) - As far as I know, It's unrankable. (continuity notes?) I recommend 01:05:701 - change to 1/1 slider.ye
01:08:171 - 01:19:465 - add a note? no,it's easy
01:08:524 (1) - head / sampleset is set to normal. change to auto
01:26:877 - I think spinner is good too nope
hitsounds fixed most
[Normal]
00:40:289 (1,2,3,4) - change to whistle is better imo fine now
00:47:524 (4) - um... yeah This is correct. However, it lacks something. I recommend it
00:50:348 (4) - ^sure
01:19:112 (6) - It's just recommend -> (delete 01:19:289 - add 1/2 slider)fine now
01:25:112 - add a note and 01:25:289 - delete.
[Hard]
nothing to say from me.... sorry
sorry for poor mod. but hope it helps.
good luck on ranking!

thx

Setz

Setz wrote:
m4m return

[Easy]
00:04:995 (3) - move this down so that it flows better from the previous object yes
00:12:054 (1,2) - and 00:16:289 (3) - makes more sense to extend these to the next white ticks to cover all the sounds. no cuz it's easy and i want some time between slider and object
01:26:524 - maybe add something here
remapped so it's fine
[Normal]
00:12:054 (1,2) - idk about these 1/1 stacks, this could get you in trouble with QATs, but i am not 100% sure fixed
00:20:348 (3) - instead of having this weird polarity change to the next object, you could just make this a slider that ends where the next object is
ye
00:24:054 (1) - this doesnt make sense to me, this part is more dense with notes than 00:34:642 (1) - when there is more going on with the music in the latter.keep for now
[Hard]
00:27:583 (1,2) - bad looking overlap in play mode no overlap
00:45:936 (1) - maybe move like this to improve aesthetics yeah
SPOILER
00:54:054 (3) - shouldnt have the strong beat on the slider end maybe,but here i mapped a bow and arrow so maybe keep for now cuz i dunno how to improve
01:04:289 (1) - angle downward a little for better flow, something like
SPOILER
01:11:877 (2,3) - Really uncomfortable flow because of 3's head shape fixed
01:27:759 (4) - why not triple?looks better

thx

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

FCL 2016-04-21T13:58:53+00:00

yea nice anime ~~I didn't see him lol~~

[hard]

00:00:760 - Can you increase the volume? I feel hs's volume really quiet here. 50% sounds better
00:00:760 (1) - finish sounds good on the slider since the it's start of the song, also the song has sound like finish here
00:01:995 (4) - whistle on the tail may looks good cuz has melody sound. Also you added whitstles on 00:02:524 (5,6) - but they have same sounds
00:05:348 (3) - ^ instead of whistle on 00:05:701 (4) - for similar reasons
00:07:112 (2,3) - blanket maybe? just for aesthetic http://puu.sh/oqs0W/d3c0cd4f0e.jpg
00:21:583 (4) - yea, you following to melody here, but drum at red tick sounds really strong
00:27:583 (1,2) - wat?
00:33:583 (2,3) - fix the spacing too
00:41:524 (4) - add whitstle, hi's just feels good here
00:42:759 (4) - w on tail for similar reasons
00:45:054 - just feels weird without mapping that sound
00:57:230 (1,2) - a bit broken flow, you could rotate the slider to fix it http://puu.sh/oqswl/ccba57d70c.jpg
01:23:877 (3,1) - blanket pls

[normal]

00:47:524 (4) - 1.5/1 repeat looks better, since you will map strong sound at 00:48:054 what really should be mapped
00:50:348 (4) - ^
01:07:818 (6) - http://puu.sh/oqv4T/4f852c821d.jpg I think this rhythm is better cuz you mapping sound at 01:07:995 what can be good for clickabling
01:16:818 - too long section without 1/2 rhythm things. You coud make this beat clickable to diluted rhythm
01:19:112 (6) - similar as before

[easy]

00:47:524 (2) - don't agree with ending of this slider at red tick. White tick is much stronger and should be mapped imo. http://puu.sh/oqvvc/0a8dc7d1ed.jpg
00:50:348 (2) - ^
01:25:112 - this beat feeels empty imo. Add circle

gl with ranking

thzz

579 posts

Joined May 2012

thzz 2016-04-21T16:54:41+00:00

hi~
M4M request from my queue.

Easy

00:20:348 (1,2,3) - how about to make curving flow? 00:20:348 (1,3) - are curving.
image
00:30:054 - add clap.
00:31:465 - ^
00:41:701 - add finish? you put finishes per 4 beats.
00:57:230 (1) - I suggest changing Sampleset to Normal. It’s a bit silent for me.
01:18:407 (3) - move downside a bit for better flow?
image

Normal

01:00:054 (2) - I want NC here. then you can remove NC at 00:59:524 (1) - .

Hard

00:51:583 (3,4,5) - distance should be 1.3x
01:01:995 - whistle will fit for this high sound.
01:18:936 - ^
01:24:583 - add finish or change Sampleset to Normal. consistency with Normal dif.

It’s just what I felt but normal-hitnormal sound isn’t fit for this song imo.
I recommend to stop using it.

gl~

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-04-21T19:06:15+00:00

真™可怕，怎么就要到了这么堆gd，怎么就找了这么多摸

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sahuang 2016-04-22T02:00:39+00:00

Pata-Mon wrote:
真™可怕，怎么就要到了这么堆gd，怎么就找了这么多摸

摸基本上是为了我自己diff找的多多益善

GD好多是自主的

-Nanaka-

815 posts

Joined July 2013

-Nanaka- 2016-04-22T05:11:32+00:00

hi

from M4MMy Modding Queues

Easy

00:35:348 (2,2) - I think it's a useless reverse.there's a very noticeable drum hit right here that should be emphasis.
this is better rhythm
SPOILER
01:22:642 (1,2) - Do not align the slider form?

Normal

00:21:936 (2) - err that hitclap doesn't really works here immo
change the finish
00:24:759 (3) - because technically the slider-ends of these 1/2 sliders are incorrectly snapped.
extended 00:25:289 -
00:27:583 (4) - same as above
00:40:289 (1,2,3,4) - quite a weird rhythm.
00:40:995 - 00:41:348 - The sound must be the same
SPOILER
00:43:112 (1,2,3,4) - Agree to setz
You had better avoid because it uses the stack in 1/2
00:56:171 (4,5) - ^
00:59:524 (1) - better flow
SPOILER
00:59:524 (1,2) - Swith NC
01:06:407 (3,4) - sliderend of 1 halfway through slider 2. looks kinda cool
01:07:465 (5) - I'm not sure. So if you follow the vocal
SPOILER
SPOILER
01:09:230 - 01:20:524 - sample normal
01:18:759 (5) - ^
01:24:583 - addition soft Finish
01:25:112 - you missed a strong drum here.01:24:583 (6) - extend end points
01:25:465 (8,1) - Swap NC or 01:25:289 (7) - NC

Hard

01:01:995 (3,1) - tbh.This overlap is messy
01:24:407 (1) - Clap
01:24:583 - Sample normal addtion soft finish

Rumia-

2,513 posts

Joined July 2012

Rumia- 2016-04-22T07:42:39+00:00

Lasse

rumia x

00:01:465 (3,1) - could move this around a bit so 1 gets more spacing and probably an angle that works better with spacing change, sth like http://i.imgur.com/VCLHjsY.jpg would work pretty well imo but requires moving 00:00:230 (1,2) - did move a bit
00:03:230 (6) - 5-1 being bigger than 6-1 doesnt work that well with the music
00:04:907 (6,9) - triples feel overmapped to me
00:09:936 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - oh most 1/4 here too xd there are sounds tho . and there is only 1 1/4 part ther
and then 00:11:259 - suddenly skips a really audible 1/4 lol not worth mapping
00:12:759 (3,4,5,6) - mapping a stream over this really kills vocals emphasis, you did it better on your insane :d or use doubles fine either way
00:43:112 (1) - cute pattern, but having way lower spacing onto 1 doesnt really fit with the strong cymbal did sth
00:50:701 (5,6,7) - tiny spacing to 6 even though it has that chime sound? whats wrong with

rumia i

00:00:230 - why is this mapped on one of your diffs but not on the other lol added lol
00:07:112 (3) - stack for such a strong note fixed somehow
00:33:936 (5) - strong sound/change is here but currently 00:34:112 (6) - is placed like it's much more important i think both works
00:58:289 (4,1,2,3) - autostacking kills this http://i.imgur.com/HXIR62I.jpg, manually stack 00:58:818 (1,2,3) - under it or sth
01:00:054 (1) - fixed

TT Mouse

[rumi'sInsane]

00:38:877 (4) - ctrl+g? fixed

01:18:407 why miss :3 intentional

01:26:348 (6,7) - ctrl+g? fixed

Misure

[Rumi's Extra]

00:00:760 (2,3) - kinda close cautz of distance of 00:00:230 (1,2) - , or just set NC on
00:00:760 (2) - ? fixed somehow
00:29:348 (2,3,4,5,6) - make a star and 00:30:230 (7) - on the center? if you prefer the distance of them, just ignore this cool idea but i like the flow of the current circles going
00:47:524 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:46:995 (1,2) - swap NC? x , strong beat + sv change on the slider
01:27:936 (7) - NC? not necessary
01:11:348 - unused inherit point, the same in your Insane diff fixed

[Rumi's Insnae]

00:01:465 (2) - curve like this?
00:31:818 (5) - NC？
fixed both above
01:22:642 (1,2) - kinda close as this stack i think its fine!

Meyrink

Rumib's Insane

00:06:936 (2,3) - u can unstack these 2 ? so it gives more emphasis for the Finish in the slider 00:07:112 (3) -
00:38:877 (4) - ctrl g maybe ?
00:44:524 (3,4) - hitsound these ? there must be some claps there !
fixed all

Rumib's Extra

00:07:112 (2) - can u curve the last part of this slider too ? xdxdxd lmao !so it ll look more soft =w= ok xd
00:43:112 (1,4) - nazi stack it wasnt meant to be stack tho . .

09Kami

[Rumi's Extra]
try Chinese mod！(只是偷懒

00:00:230 (1) - overmap 第一根红线前.不能有note可以吧

01:18:936 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 尝试这个
http://puu.sh/opcri/f05c52c6c1.jpg 我remap了

01:26:524 (3) - 位置移动到x : 128 y: 264 fixed

Setz

[Rumi Insane]

00:11:259 - stream actually starts here, and there is no sound here 00:11:789 - yes , but i think starting on white is better to play . . and removed the reverse
00:10:201 (4) - again no sound here, while you ignore the drums at 00:09:671 -
00:21:583 (4,5,6,7) - more overmap fixed
and so on, there is alot of overmapping that I dont agree with, but i will just stop here.
00:43:995 - why ignore the red tick drums? following the vocal
00:48:407 - good place for a stream that you didnt map since this diff is supposed to be easier i dont want it to be heavy stream

[Rumi Extra]

ok, i didnt point this out in the insane, but why dont you map this drum? 00:03:142 - can do something like doesnt play well imo..
SPOILER
same overmapping comments as insane

thanks for mods ~ ~
update : http://puu.sh/orrX0.zip

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

[Crz]Makii 2016-04-22T07:55:10+00:00

~~真可怕这是要准备飞了~~

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sahuang 2016-04-22T09:06:52+00:00

FCL

FCL wrote:
yea nice anime ~~I didn't see him lol~~

[hard]
00:00:760 - Can you increase the volume? I feel hs's volume really quiet here. 50% sounds better ye
00:00:760 (1) - finish sounds good on the slider since the it's start of the song, also the song has sound like finish here
00:01:995 (4) - whistle on the tail may looks good cuz has melody sound. Also you added whitstles on 00:02:524 (5,6) - but they have same sounds
00:05:348 (3) - ^ instead of whistle on 00:05:701 (4) - for similar reasons
hs above all fixed
00:07:112 (2,3) - blanket maybe? just for aesthetic http://puu.sh/oqs0W/d3c0cd4f0e.jpg
it's already blanketed imo
00:21:583 (4) - yea, you following to melody here, but drum at red tick sounds really strong
changed to a reverse slider
00:27:583 (1,2) - wat?
00:33:583 (2,3) - fix the spacing too
00:41:524 (4) - add whitstle, hi's just feels good here
00:42:759 (4) - w on tail for similar reasons all fixed
00:45:054 - just feels weird without mapping that sound maybe,but now it's clean
00:57:230 (1,2) - a bit broken flow, you could rotate the slider to fix it http://puu.sh/oqswl/ccba57d70c.jpg yes
01:23:877 (3,1) - blanket pls yeee

[normal]
00:47:524 (4) - 1.5/1 repeat looks better, since you will map strong sound at 00:48:054 what really should be mapped
00:50:348 (4) - ^ the reverse looks nice to me
01:07:818 (6) - http://puu.sh/oqv4T/4f852c821d.jpg I think this rhythm is better cuz you mapping sound at 01:07:995 what can be good for clickabling
01:16:818 - too long section without 1/2 rhythm things. You coud make this beat clickable to diluted rhythm
01:19:112 (6) - similar as before
don't feel like changing them cuz there's nothing wrong with that 01:07:818 (6) - imo,if i use click+slider it will be more messy

[easy]
00:47:524 (2) - don't agree with ending of this slider at red tick. White tick is much stronger and should be mapped imo. http://puu.sh/oqvvc/0a8dc7d1ed.jpg
even tho there is a strong beat on the white line,i choose to follow vocal here,so imo it's fine now. also 6/4 will be too long and not looking good
00:50:348 (2) - ^
01:25:112 - this beat feeels empty imo. Add circle fixed
gl with ranking

thzz

thzz wrote:
hi~
M4M request from my queue.

Easy
00:20:348 (1,2,3) - how about to make curving flow? 00:20:348 (1,3) - are curving.sure
http://puu.sh/oqEed/10741573e1.png
00:30:054 - add clap.
00:31:465 - ^
00:41:701 - add finish? you put finishes per 4 beats.
00:57:230 (1) - I suggest changing Sampleset to Normal. It’s a bit silent for me.
01:18:407 (3) - move downside a bit for better flow?
http://puu.sh/oqEwa/68a5d76406.png
all fixed ,thanks for the hitsound help
Normal
01:00:054 (2) - I want NC here. then you can remove NC at 00:59:524 (1) - .
i will NC there
Hard
00:51:583 (3,4,5) - distance should be 1.3x no,for slow sv part i use 1.5x(no rule for Hard must use DS right
01:01:995 - whistle will fit for this high sound.
01:18:936 - ^
01:24:583 - add finish or change Sampleset to Normal. consistency with Normal dif.
yes,fixed all
It’s just what I felt but normal-hitnormal sound isn’t fit for this song imo. well,it's fine for me to use it:)i will just revise your ideas
I recommend to stop using it.

gl~

-Nanaka-

-Nanaka- wrote:
hi
from M4MMy Modding Queues

Easy
00:35:348 (2,2) - I think it's a useless reverse.there's a very noticeable drum hit right here that should be emphasis.
this is better rhythm
SPOILER

yes,fixed
01:22:642 (1,2) - Do not align the slider form? wut?

Normal
00:21:936 (2) - err that hitclap doesn't really works here immo
change the finish fixed
00:24:759 (3) - because technically the slider-ends of these 1/2 sliders are incorrectly snapped.
extended 00:25:289 - fixed
00:27:583 (4) - same as above fixed
00:40:289 (1,2,3,4) - quite a weird rhythm. fine imo
00:40:995 - 00:41:348 - The sound must be the same
SPOILER
00:43:112 (1,2,3,4) - Agree to setz
You had better avoid because it uses the stack in 1/2
00:56:171 (4,5) - ^
00:59:524 (1) - better flow
SPOILER
00:59:524 (1,2) - Swith NC
01:06:407 (3,4) - sliderend of 1 halfway through slider 2. looks kinda cool
01:07:465 (5) - I'm not sure. So if you follow the vocal
SPOILER
SPOILER
01:09:230 - 01:20:524 - sample normal
01:18:759 (5) - ^
01:24:583 - addition soft Finish
01:25:112 - you missed a strong drum here.01:24:583 (6) - extend end points
01:25:465 (8,1) - Swap NC or 01:25:289 (7) - NC
all fixed

Hard
01:01:995 (3,1) - tbh.This overlap is messy well ill keep for now
01:24:407 (1) - Clap
01:24:583 - Sample normal addtion soft finish
hs fixed

thx for mod,especially hit sounds mods!!!

Last edited by sahuang 2016-04-22T13:15:51+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Seijiro

osu! Alumni

3,438 posts

Joined April 2013

Seijiro 2016-04-22T09:14:12+00:00

Reegading our M4M deal: I might actually be able to mod this map soon, but do not take it as a definite statement since I'm not sure of my own words yet.
Sorry again for the delay.

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sahuang 2016-04-22T09:16:03+00:00

MrSergio wrote:
Reegading our M4M deal: I might actually be able to mod this map soon, but do not take it as a definite statement since I'm not sure of my own words yet.
Sorry again for the delay.

No worries

It's not in a hurry so take your time lol

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Suimya 2016-04-22T11:13:48+00:00

M4M from my queue~

Easy:
how about changing the cs to 3 instead, i think it's gonna be better tbh

00:03:583 (1,2) - how about removing this slider 00:04:289 (2) - and making the (1) with repeat and then a note. I think it's gonna follow the voice much better imo
00:09:936 (2) - maybe changing this slider to curve slider instead? but that's just a suggestion tho ></
00:12:054 (1) - whistle on slider's tail maybe? o.o
00:13:465 (2) - ^
00:15:583 (2) - I think whistle instead of finish would be better imo
00:16:289 (3) - maybe make this slider like this? for better shape ofc o3o/
00:17:701 (1,2) - I think finish on 00:17:701 (1) - repeat's and 00:19:112 (2) - slider's tail, would fit much better than clap tbh =3=/
00:23:348 - I think it would be better if you could rise the volume here a bit, maybe about +10% would be good owo/
00:31:818 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's start? i think it's gonna follow the vocal much better, and ofc remove it on tail
00:35:348 (2) - I don't think adding the repeat on big tick would go okay, how about changing the into a note and maybe 1/1 slider after it o.o
00:38:171 (2) - ^
00:40:289 (1) - maybw whistle on tail instead of clap, i think it's gonna be better imo
00:41:701 (3) - ^ but on the head instead
00:54:407 (1) - how about adding a finish to this spinner, it's gonna follow the music better o.o
00:57:230 (1) - ^ but only on this note

Normal:

00:16:289 (3,4) - I don't think the shape of these sliders are very well done, so how about doing something like this instead? ofc,copy and paste it, after that o3o/
00:23:348 - same thing on easy

Hard:

00:05:965 (6) - I don't think this note follows anything tbh, so i suggest you to just remove it
00:16:289 (1,2,3,4) - how about making some of these note a 1/2 slider? maybe make (1,2) sliders? i think it's gonna follow your style much better imo o.o
00:24:054 (1,2) - I don't think i like this stucks tbh, since it's even in hard diff, which is making this diff a bit more confusing. so how about doing something like this instead. I think it's gonna be better ></
01:22:642 (1) - how about adding a whistle to this slider's repeat? i think it's gonna follow music nicely o3o/

Karen's Insane:
I like this diff, good job Karen =w=b

That's all i could find, good luck with this owo/

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2016-04-22T11:29:59+00:00

1

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TitleUnicode:Baby Sweet Berry Love
Artist:Ogura Yui
ArtistUnicode:小倉唯
Creator:sahuang
Version:Garden's Insane
Source:変態王子と笑わない猫。
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hi im late comer
hitsound下次改摸一起加上=w=b

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sahuang 2016-04-22T13:31:53+00:00

Sekai

Sekaii wrote:
M4M from my queue~

Easy:
how about changing the cs to 3 instead, i think it's gonna be better tbh ok
00:03:583 (1,2) - how about removing this slider 00:04:289 (2) - and making the (1) with repeat and then a note. I think it's gonna follow the voice much better imo imo it's fine now,flows well
00:09:936 (2) - maybe changing this slider to curve slider instead? but that's just a suggestion tho ></ yes
00:12:054 (1) - whistle on slider's tail maybe? o.o
00:13:465 (2) - ^ yes
00:15:583 (2) - I think whistle instead of finish would be better imo i prefer f here,it's the same as the previous one
00:16:289 (3) - maybe make this slider like this? for better shape ofc o3o/ seems good
http://puu.sh/ory85/7d710669c3.jpg
00:17:701 (1,2) - I think finish on 00:17:701 (1) - repeat's and 00:19:112 (2) - slider's tail, would fit much better than clap tbh =3=/
00:23:348 - I think it would be better if you could rise the volume here a bit, maybe about +10% would be good owo/
00:31:818 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's start? i think it's gonna follow the vocal much better, and ofc remove it on tail
00:35:348 (2) - I don't think adding the repeat on big tick would go okay, how about changing the into a note and maybe 1/1 slider after it o.o
00:38:171 (2) - ^
00:40:289 (1) - maybw whistle on tail instead of clap, i think it's gonna be better imo
00:41:701 (3) - ^ but on the head instead
00:54:407 (1) - how about adding a finish to this spinner, it's gonna follow the music better o.o
00:57:230 (1) - ^ but only on this note
wow,good hitsound advice,all fixed and thanks a lot^^

Normal:
00:16:289 (3,4) - I don't think the shape of these sliders are very well done, so how about doing something like this instead? ofc,copy and paste it, after that o3o/ fixed
http://puu.sh/oryxV/cf3662aec3.jpg
00:23:348 - same thing on easy wut,it's fine now

Hard:
00:05:965 (6) - I don't think this note follows anything tbh, so i suggest you to just remove it ok
00:16:289 (1,2,3,4) - how about making some of these note a 1/2 slider? maybe make (1,2) sliders? i think it's gonna follow your style much better imo o.o fixed
00:24:054 (1,2) - I don't think i like this stucks tbh, since it's even in hard diff, which is making this diff a bit more confusing. so how about doing something like this instead. I think it's gonna be better ></ fixed
http://puu.sh/oryPN/5c9ed3ebde.jpg
01:22:642 (1) - how about adding a whistle to this slider's repeat? i think it's gonna follow music nicely o3o/
o3oo3o

Karen's Insane:
I like this diff, good job Karen =w=b
=w=b=w=b

That's all i could find, good luck with this owo/

thx,also Garden's Insane updated

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2016-04-22T18:34:25+00:00

Misure

01:09 Misure: 00:08:524 (3,4,5,1) - 这个
01:09 Misure: 感觉有点近了
01:09 Misure: 我个人可能会读成滑条尾+二连那种
01:09 Garden: ok 稍拉远了一点
01:10 Misure: 剩下all fine for me
01:10 Garden: =w=b ok

fixedfixed

Mikagura Seisa

01:22 Mikagura Seisa: 要说的话就kiai那个1/1折返
01:22 Mikagura Seisa: 那个不太舒服(
01:22 Mikagura Seisa: 01:27:583 (3,4,5,6,1) - 这5个用滑条convert一下吧
01:22 Mikagura Seisa: 弧度有点不好看
01:22 Garden: 好
01:23 Garden: 折返我再想想,,不想弄的全程太紧张
01:24 Mikagura Seisa: 你前面弄个这种比较好 别在kiai里面弄吧
01:24 Garden: 好像是不太连贯（

修了一下最后五连，那个折返我再想想

Pata-Mon

01:59 Pata-Mon: 00:03:583 (1,2,3) - 节奏上我更喜欢ctrl+G
01:59 Pata-Mon: 强调一下鼓声
01:59 Pata-Mon: 00:22:465 (4,5) - 感觉有点近
02:01 Pata-Mon: 00:41:701 (1,2) -
02:01 Pata-Mon: 节奏上ctrl+G
02:02 Pata-Mon: 01:01:289 (4,1,2,3) -
02:02 Pata-Mon: 人声开头全在滑条尾感觉不太爽
02:02 Pata-Mon: 这里的话我觉得相比鼓声还是人声更重要
02:04 Pata-Mon: 美丽

那个近的是故意的，跳的距离就是远近远近这样，保持间距负担会大；两个ctrlg节奏我同意，但前面那个3/4折返接滑条应该判定会更稳一些，然后后面那个还没想好暂时keep一下；kiai那个跟人声的改了

Thank you~

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sahuang 2016-04-23T00:43:35+00:00

Garden wrote:
e忽然想起来该打包发你

ok updated
我觉得还是随便帮你找4-5个非irc摸吧，那样看起来会好点

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