Dzeko & Torres - 2015 in 10 Minutes · forum

Ambu5h

Joined February 2015

Ambu5h 2016-02-08T16:18:48+00:00

wajinshu wrote:
02:48:960 (1) -
So why not do something like this instead:
your option is quite good, but i wanted to make here slow rhythm and map only weak sound which is on white ticks

02:50:366 (2) - it should be 1/2 no cganges for same reason, sry

02:54:116 (3,5) - Stack please stacked

03:34:897 - Circle i'm mapping different rhythm, and i think circle here will break it, so i dont know, no changes for now

Thank you, wajinshu!

code: http://puu.sh/n0rxT/431bfbf5d2.osu

KappaPraise

316 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

KappaPraise 2016-02-08T18:56:55+00:00

wajinshu wrote:
Hi
general
• Difficulties have storyboard but [EpilepsyWarning] is not set (Check for quickly flashing SB elements)
Marathon} There just nicknames)

• Unused hitsounds:
normal-hitclap2.wav
soft-hitclap2.wav
soft-slidertick10.wav All of them used

• Files unused:
sb\bar.jpg Ok

• Duplicate timing points at:
02:30:210 Thx
mara
00:26:225 (5) - I do not recommend to finish the slider on the big white tick make it 1/1 finish on a red tick May be

00:27:280 (1) - Really blue tick? move it to red to focus on vocals Vocal stars between red and blue tick, i just start from blue to not confusing players with differrent BSD

00:28:803 (5,7) - This overlap...please fix and this weird flow There no overlaps

00:41:225 (6,4) - Little overlap ^

01:18:960 (1) - Spinner must end 01:23:178 Nope

01:39:585 (6) - NC Ok

01:44:272 - Here the vocals are why you missed it Thats fine
too lazy gl

Thx for mod

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Taeyang 2016-02-18T08:26:51+00:00

sry late mod xdd
Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

General

Fine

Storyborad

06:30:210 - about 'CircleChu' offscreen movement looks better x : 800 around

Marathon

00:29:506 (1) - remove slide and circle add here
SPOILER
00:37:475 (1) - remove NC ;can't find NC reason
00:39:819 (2) - this slide end here 00:40:170 -
SPOILER
00:40:991 (5,6,1) - not same DS a little bit werid 00:35:131 (4,5,1) - same to here
00:44:975 (1) - ^
01:00:210 (1,2,3,4) - DS too much there is 5.5DS
01:02:436 (2,3,4) - about flow ;i think jump stream point here 01:02:905 (4,5) - 01:02:553 (3,4) - not here so i suggest this pattern and flow
SPOILER
01:17:085 (1) - slide curve too much
01:30:561 (1,2) - try this rhythm and pattern 01:30:678 - i think need rhythm catch
SPOILER
01:42:749 (4,5) - 01:41:928 (1,2,3) - different circles and 01:42:866 (5) - shortslide little weird
01:45:678 (1) - remove NC
01:45:913 (2,3) - stack
02:11:928 (5) - NC point here ,not here 02:12:045 (1) - and 02:11:460 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - this stream a little hard
03:26:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same i suggest to make more easliy
02:29:741 (1) - remove NC
02:30:210 (1) - this slide you can be better
SPOILER
02:37:710 (2,3) - DS too far 02:34:897 (3,4,5) - like here
02:53:178 (1,2) - anti jump 02:53:647 (2,3,4) - over DS
03:02:670 - add circle
03:30:210 (1,2) - use same trill rhythm
04:54:116 (2) - NC point here ;and try like this
SPOILER
06:16:850 (6,1) - avoid overlap
06:34:897 (3,4,5) - use same DS nor 06:35:717 (5) - NC here 06:34:194 (1,2,3,4,5) - here rhythm a liitle hard
06:43:217 (5,1,3) - x73 y289

good luck~!

Ambu5h

153 posts

Joined February 2015

Ambu5h 2016-02-18T14:19:53+00:00

Taeyang wrote:

03:26:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same i suggest to make more easliy checked 2014 in 10 minutes and it contains some hard streams, so i think mine stream is obviously not easy but considering low bpm it should be doable for players
02:29:741 (1) - remove NC ok
02:30:210 (1) - this slide you can be better reworked
SPOILER
02:37:710 (2,3) - DS too far 02:34:897 (3,4,5) - like here sorry, i cant see any spacing issue here
02:53:178 (1,2) - anti jump 02:53:647 (2,3,4) - over DS 02:53:178 (1,2) - made jump here, but here 02:53:647 (2,3) - i think spacing is okay
03:02:670 - add circle i'm mapping voice here, so circle on this time is unnecessary,sorry
03:30:210 (1,2) - use same trill rhythm i still think here sound goes more intense, so thats why i dont really want to use 1/4 sliders here

Thank you for mod, Taeyang!

code: http://puu.sh/nctnc/0355a592a2.osu

KappaPraise

316 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

KappaPraise 2016-02-19T11:26:42+00:00

Taeyang wrote:
sry late mod xdd
Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

General
Fine
Ok

Storyborad
06:30:210 - about 'CircleChu' offscreen movement looks better x : 800 around
Yes

[notice][list]Marathon
00:29:506 (1) - remove slide and circle add here Its fine
SPOILER
00:37:475 (1) - remove NC ;can't find NC reason Ok
00:39:819 (2) - this slide end here 00:40:170 - Idk
SPOILER

00:40:991 (5,6,1) - not same DS a little bit werid 00:35:131 (4,5,1) - same to here Ok
00:44:975 (1) - ^ Ok
01:00:210 (1,2,3,4) - DS too much there is 5.5DS Its fine
01:02:436 (2,3,4) - about flow ;i think jump stream point here 01:02:905 (4,5) - 01:02:553 (3,4) - not here so i suggest this pattern and flow Changed flow, but jump not
SPOILER
01:17:085 (1) - slide curve too much May be
01:30:561 (1,2) - try this rhythm and pattern 01:30:678 - i think need rhythm catch Ok
SPOILER
01:42:749 (4,5) - 01:41:928 (1,2,3) - different circles and 01:42:866 (5) - shortslide little weird May be
01:45:678 (1) - remove NC Nope
01:45:913 (2,3) - stack Thx
02:11:928 (5) - NC point here ,not here 02:12:045 (1) - and 02:11:460 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - this stream a little hard
03:26:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same i suggest to make more easliy Fixed

Thx for mod)

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,074 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-02-20T07:27:14+00:00

Taeyang wrote:
sry late mod xdd
Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

06:34:897 (3,4,5) - use same DS nor 06:35:717 (5) - NC here 06:34:194 (1,2,3,4,5) - here rhythm a liitle hard // 처음엔 그냥 놔뒀었는데, 그냥 고치는게 나을 것 같네요.. 리듬은 안고쳤어요 ㅋㅋㅋ
06:43:217 (5,1,3) - x73 y289

good luck~!

어.. 한국어로 하셔도 됬는데ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 모딩 감사합니다

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Squichu

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Joined November 2012

Squichu 2016-03-13T19:38:26+00:00

o/ mod from your request~

General

aren't there a few tags missing? at least the better known artists of the songs used should be in tags, imo~
tbh I'm not really sure if this is rankable as it is, becasue the main contributor of a set has to be the host, but going after drain time each contributor has mapped, you'll notice that freebird has mapped ~20seconds more than anyone else. (128seconds to be precise , all other have 107seconds)
Ye, I'm not so sure about this, especially because this thread popped up 2 days ago- t/430242 -but most likely this really isn't rankable as it is. :c

Anyway, still some suggestions-

WispG_G

I'm confused by the hitsounds. ;__; They seem totally random to me?
00:22:710 (1,2,3) - I'd prefer if you unstack them because the song's pace doesn't change but players have to stop here for two full beats before moving on
also the same rhythm as ^ repeats at 00:23:647 - so the rhythm should look like http://puu.sh/nFejF.jpg I think
If you disgaree - 00:24:350 (5) - should be closer to (4) because it might get mistaken for 2/1 instead of a jump
00:25:522 (3,4,5) - similar here, move (5) a little closer?
00:26:225 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - I don't hear aynthing on these blue ticks tbh, what did you map them to?
also there's one at 00:27:280 (1) - so why is this blank?
Consider using this rhythm instead- http://puu.sh/nFexE.jpg
00:28:803 (5,6,7) - avoid the overlap of (5,7), it's visible while playing (even if only for a few ms..)
00:29:741 (7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - I don't really have a problem with this except for that the actual rhythm starts on the downbeat here 00:30:210 - , so consider changing the rhythm up to emphasize the strong beats better~
example- http://puu.sh/nFeP3.jpg (the overlapping stuff won't work with this rhythm, but I'm sure you can come up with something nice! :3)
00:33:491 (2) - consider replacing this with a 1/2 slider to emphasize this static background sound (maybe use slow down)
00:38:413 (2) - the beat on the reverse is the strongest, so you might want to have it clickable? > use cirlce+ 1/1 slider instead
same for 00:45:913 (2) -
00:41:460 (1) - conside splitting this up so the sliderend becomes clickable. It's a different sound than before and also the vocals kick in, so a clickable object matches this better, imo~
00:48:491 (5,6) - the beat on 6 is very very weak, especially compared to 00:48:960 (1) - , so I'd prefer a slider here and then a small jump to (1), instead of consistent circles with same spacing
00:50:600 (6,1,2) - this jump is unreadable; make sure players can clearly differentiate between 1/1 and 2/1!
same for 00:54:350 (5,1,2) - 00:55:991 (1,2,1) - 01:04:428 (3,1,2,3) - etc
01:03:491 (1,1) - tack feels awkward to me because the music becomes more intense here, consider unstacking this
01:30:210 - consider adding a 1/2 slider here, starting on a 1/4 beat after the break is irritating even if it matches with the vocals.

freebird42

02:19:194 (2) - there's a different sound on the end of the slider, consider using a 1/4 slider at 02:19:428 - instead of the last reverse
02:19:897 (3,4) - imo, these rhythms feel kinda uncomfortable to play, becaue there's a 3/4 gap. (4) makes sense with the music, but (3).. Idk, I think 1/4 sliders work better with the rhythm, because it's not just one sound, it goes on for a few ms.
same for 02:20:835 (1,2) - 02:27:397 (3,4) - etc
02:23:881 - 02:23:999 - I'm missing a two circles here
02:25:288 (4,5) - the sounds become more intense so this should be 1/4 slider + two circles, imo.. or actually, maybe this is even better- http://puu.sh/nFggB.jpg
02:30:210 (1) - the music becomes quieter with time, so consider reducing hitsound volume, too. the sliderslider is really annoying after a while, imo. >-<
02:41:694 - missing a circle? I mean it goes well with the previous rhythms you've used, but completely ignoring strong beats like this feels off. (Or turn 02:41:460 (1) - into a slider?)
02:47:085 (2) - reverse doesn't work here, because of the sound on the second blue tick. It matches the vocals nicely, ya, but the sound is just too strong to be ignored. I throws players off.
02:47:788 (1,2) - clicking the second slider feels weird, because there's only vocals but absolutely no beat. Consider using a long reverse slider instead of two- http://puu.sh/nFgLu.jpg
02:48:960 (1) - hmh, you're ignoring several strong beats, but you could emphasize them so nicely, without ignoring the vocals.. consider using http://puu.sh/nFgTi.jpg
02:53:178 (1,2,3) - I don't think the change in DS is appropiate.. :/ make sure players can tell what's spaced by 1/2 and what's 1/4 without relying on approach circles too much
same for 03:12:163 (2,3,4) - and several others..
03:02:788 (6,7,8) - stack after the spaced stream plays pretty boring consider spacing this, too
03:18:491 (5) - downbeat should be clickable, cause it's the beginning of a new part
03:53:178 (2,1) - why's there this small break here? The sound (2) followed repeats two more times, and it doesn't even get quieter, so this makes absolutely no sense to me. >:
04:13:217 (6) - 04:15:092 (5) - and several other - eh, downbeats? :c Vocals are there but you can still emphasize them by adding another circle and starting the slider on the beats
04:24:116 (4,1) - pretty strong beat on (1), consider unstacking for more impact~~

CircleChu

04:37:475 (7,8,1) - how about spacing them to make them different from the other stacked 1/4 with only 1 circle?
same for 05:01:850 (7,8,1) - 05:09:350 (7,8,1) -
04:42:631 (5,6,7,8) - missing a circle at 04:42:749 - ?
04:44:624 - and 04:46:499 - and 04:48:374 - too
05:33:022 (4,5,6) - should be spaced like 05:32:085 (1,2) - , no?
05:46:850 (1) - consider replacing this with two circles, cause the sound on the sliderend is the same as 05:47:319 (2,3,4) - which are all clickable
06:00:210 (8) - misisng NC? (cause new part)

Dailycare

06:43:217 (5) - missing NC? because consistency with other patterns

Avishay

08:58:335 (1,2,3,4) - shouldn't they be spaced the same, including (1)? It's the same sound
09:25:522 (2,3) - overlap looks kinda off, can you avoid the overlap?
09:29:272 (1,2,3) - spacing should be the same, imo, because it's both 1/4, but circle looks like different snapping
same for 09:36:772 (1,2,3) -
NCs at the end are imo unnecessary but looks nice so~~ xD

Yup, that's it from me.
Good luck!
//squee

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,074 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-03-14T10:41:29+00:00

@Squirrel
WISPG_G will fix it. Thanks for mod!

Ambu5h

153 posts

Joined February 2015

Ambu5h 2016-03-14T20:56:11+00:00

Squirrel wrote:
freebird42
02:19:194 (2) - there's a different sound on the end of the slider, consider using a 1/4 slider at 02:19:428 - instead of the last reverse ok
02:19:897 (3,4) - imo, these rhythms feel kinda uncomfortable to play, becaue there's a 3/4 gap. (4) makes sense with the music, but (3).. Idk, I think 1/4 sliders work better with the rhythm, because it's not just one sound, it goes on for a few ms.
same for 02:20:835 (1,2) - 02:27:397 (3,4) - etc fine
02:23:881 - 02:23:999 - I'm missing a two circles here added
02:25:288 (4,5) - the sounds become more intense so this should be 1/4 slider + two circles, imo.. or actually, maybe this is even better- http://puu.sh/nFggB.jpg second option is too hard imo, i'm also not sure about changing second slider to 2 circles, because i already had in mind, that i would emphasize sound on white ticks by 1/4 slider, so for now no changes, sorry btw, added note on 02:26:225 -
02:30:210 (1) - the music becomes quieter with time, so consider reducing hitsound volume, too. the sliderslider is really annoying after a while, imo. >-< thats strange, cause there is 5% volume on this slider, also WISPG_G set silenced sliderticks on this, so i dunno really
02:41:694 - missing a circle? I mean it goes well with the previous rhythms you've used, but completely ignoring strong beats like this feels off. (Or turn 02:41:460 (1) - into a slider?) added circle
02:47:085 (2) - reverse doesn't work here, because of the sound on the second blue tick. It matches the vocals nicely, ya, but the sound is just too strong to be ignored. I throws players off. changed
02:47:788 (1,2) - clicking the second slider feels weird, because there's only vocals but absolutely no beat. Consider using a long reverse slider instead of two- http://puu.sh/nFgLu.jpg sure
02:48:960 (1) - hmh, you're ignoring several strong beats, but you could emphasize them so nicely, without ignoring the vocals.. consider using http://puu.sh/nFgTi.jpg sorry, i wanted to map here slow rhythm, emphasizing only weak sound on white ticks
02:53:178 (1,2,3) - I don't think the change in DS is appropiate.. :/ make sure players can tell what's spaced by 1/2 and what's 1/4 without relying on approach circles too much changed
same for 03:12:163 (2,3,4) - and several others..
03:02:788 (6,7,8) - stack after the spaced stream plays pretty boring consider spacing this, too its fine imo
03:18:491 (5) - downbeat should be clickable, cause it's the beginning of a new part sorry, but i think the slider ending on downbeat here is fine
03:53:178 (2,1) - why's there this small break here? The sound (2) followed repeats two more times, and it doesn't even get quieter, so this makes absolutely no sense to me. >: maybe you're right, changed this
04:13:217 (6) - 04:15:092 (5) - and several other - eh, downbeats? :c Vocals are there but you can still emphasize them by adding another circle and starting the slider on the beats changed
04:24:116 (4,1) - pretty strong beat on (1), consider unstacking for more impact~~ ok

Thank you very much, Squirrel!

http://puu.sh/nGBKh/cb19b88911.osu

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2016-03-16T17:12:57+00:00

Squirrel wrote:
o/ mod from your request~

Avishay
08:58:335 (1,2,3,4) - shouldn't they be spaced the same, including (1)? It's the same sound Not really, they are not, the drum is much stronger on (1) and the other objects have that weird instrument as the strongest.
09:25:522 (2,3) - overlap looks kinda off, can you avoid the overlap? To be honest I like it and it does not feel off for me at all.
09:29:272 (1,2,3) - spacing should be the same, imo, because it's both 1/4, but circle looks like different snapping What would the circle be then? Those are different objects, a circle and a slider, having the same spacing with the circle looks overdone and reducing the spacing between the sliders ruins it.
same for 09:36:772 (1,2,3) -
NCs at the end are imo unnecessary but looks nice so~~ xD

@wispg - I rechecked the timing points in the end and they were slightly off, here are the ones you should use - http://puu.sh/nIMgY/2d1754652f.png

KappaPraise

316 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

KappaPraise 2016-03-20T15:24:27+00:00

Squirrel wrote:
o/ mod from your request~

General
aren't there a few tags missing? at least the better known artists of the songs used should be in tags, imo~ There tracklist, i guess thats enough?
tbh I'm not really sure if this is rankable as it is, becasue the main contributor of a set has to be the host, but going after drain time each contributor has mapped, you'll notice that freebird has mapped ~20seconds more than anyone else. (128seconds to be precise , all other have 107seconds)
Ye, I'm not so sure about this, especially because this thread popped up 2 days ago- t/430242 -but most likely this really isn't rankable as it is. :c
Mapped few empty moments in my part.

Anyway, still some suggestions-

WispG_G
I'm confused by the hitsounds. ;__; They seem totally random to me? May be
00:22:710 (1,2,3) - I'd prefer if you unstack them because the song's pace doesn't change but players have to stop here for two full beats before moving on
also the same rhythm as ^ repeats at 00:23:647 - so the rhythm should look like http://puu.sh/nFejF.jpg I think Ok
If you disgaree - 00:24:350 (5) - should be closer to (4) because it might get mistaken for 2/1 instead of a jump
00:25:522 (3,4,5) - similar here, move (5) a little closer? That's fine, readable, but 5 there for blanket
00:26:225 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - I don't hear aynthing on these blue ticks tbh, what did you map them to? There like in begin little stream "To-to-to-to-to"
also there's one at 00:27:280 (1) - so why is this blank?
Consider using this rhythm instead- http://puu.sh/nFexE.jpg Added kick-slider
00:28:803 (5,6,7) - avoid the overlap of (5,7), it's visible while playing (even if only for a few ms..) Ok
00:29:741 (7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - I don't really have a problem with this except for that the actual rhythm starts on the downbeat here 00:30:210 - , so consider changing the rhythm up to emphasize the strong beats better~
example- http://puu.sh/nFeP3.jpg (the overlapping stuff won't work with this rhythm, but I'm sure you can come up with something nice! :3) Changed with own rhythm
00:33:491 (2) - consider replacing this with a 1/2 slider to emphasize this static background sound (maybe use slow down) Ok
00:38:413 (2) - the beat on the reverse is the strongest, so you might want to have it clickable? > use cirlce+ 1/1 slider instead
same for 00:45:913 (2) - Ok
00:41:460 (1) - conside splitting this up so the sliderend becomes clickable. It's a different sound than before and also the vocals kick in, so a clickable object matches this better, imo~ Ok
00:48:491 (5,6) - the beat on 6 is very very weak, especially compared to 00:48:960 (1) - , so I'd prefer a slider here and then a small jump to (1), instead of consistent circles with same spacing Done
00:50:600 (6,1,2) - this jump is unreadable; make sure players can clearly differentiate between 1/1 and 2/1!
same for 00:54:350 (5,1,2) - 00:55:991 (1,2,1) - 01:04:428 (3,1,2,3) - etc Fixed
01:03:491 (1,1) - tack feels awkward to me because the music becomes more intense here, consider unstacking this Done
01:30:210 - consider adding a 1/2 slider here, starting on a 1/4 beat after the break is irritating even if it matches with the vocals. Ok
Yup, that's it from me.
Good luck!
//squee

Thx for mod //squee

Aphoristic

2 posts

Joined June 2011

Aphoristic 2016-03-27T15:30:34+00:00

What's wrong with the quality of the mp3 on this map? I love the yearly 201x in 10 minutes songs and this one sounds horribly off from what it should. You know the song is free and you don't have to rip a bad quality one off youtube right? https://www.hive.co/l/gtjk is the official link to get it.

KappaPraise

316 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

KappaPraise 2016-03-27T18:00:44+00:00

Aphoristic wrote:
What's wrong with the quality of the mp3 on this map? I love the yearly 201x in 10 minutes songs and this one sounds horribly off from what it should. You know the song is free and you don't have to rip a bad quality one off youtube right? https://www.hive.co/l/gtjk is the official link to get it.

That's better, thx

CircleChu

190 posts

Joined May 2012

CircleChu 2016-03-28T15:23:07+00:00

Squirrel wrote:
o/ mod from your request~

CircleChu
04:37:475 (7,8,1) - how about spacing them to make them different from the other stacked 1/4 with only 1 circle?
same for 05:01:850 (7,8,1) - 05:09:350 (7,8,1) - No :c
04:42:631 (5,6,7,8) - missing a circle at 04:42:749 - ?
04:44:624 - and 04:46:499 - and 04:48:374 - too Yes yes yes, fixed fixed fixed.
05:33:022 (4,5,6) - should be spaced like 05:32:085 (1,2) - , no? no :p
05:46:850 (1) - consider replacing this with two circles, cause the sound on the sliderend is the same as 05:47:319 (2,3,4) - which are all clickable No, i`ll keep it
06:00:210 (8) - misisng NC? (cause new part) Yes
//squee

Thanks for mod \o/

sahuang

2,294 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-04-05T13:30:08+00:00

My only suggestion is that pls change ar to 8~8.3
It's 3.75* BPM128,everyone knows this should be a DT map with pp
ar 9 is too hard to dt for those playing 3.75*dt at this stage

Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Log Off Now 2016-04-05T13:47:51+00:00

M4M from your queue

[General]

~~Maybe buff AR a little bit, but apart from that it's fine~~ nevermind i had an older version, updated it now

[Marathon]

Honestly this map is honestly really good so I don't have many comments

02:14:975 (1,2,3,4) - I honestly feel like this would either play better as a stack or alternatively increase the spacing, this just feels underwhelming to me personally

02:18:490 - Maybe a short fast slider can go here to follow the slight change in the bass? Would also be a good link into the next combo

02:22:475 (2) - I honestly think this slider should be faster instead of slower than the rest, personal taste though

02:25:990 (7,1) - I misread this part because of how you mapped the same piece of music at 02:23:647 (4,5,6) - and 02:24:584 (1,2,3) - differently here, I think placing a circle here 02:26:107 - would make this play better

02:36:303 (1) - Slider art to follow the vocal echo here? Just something that could add a little more to this section]

02:43:803 (9) - Same comment as above

02:55:053 (5,6) - I think slider end on 5 and 6 should be claps instead of whistles, both fit I just think claps would sound better rhythmically since thats what you did for 02:52:943 (1,2,3,4) - and it would also match the music (not vocals)

03:10:287 (3) - I think this should end on the blue tick, vocal switches on the blue tick along with the main part of the music

03:16:850 (2,3,4) - Start introducing circles on the red ticks in this section too to follow the vocals and also helps build up into the next section?

03:34:662 - Major beat missed here

04:10:756 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved

04:15:678 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe try this rhythm instead? More involving to play and adds a bit more click based rhythm

Image

04:23:178 (1,2,3) - Same suggestion as above

04:30:795 (4,5) - Move these slightly to the right since they almost almost overlap

05:41:693 (2,3) - Double check these are parallel

07:25:756 (5) - NC slider velocity changes, would make this much more readable

07:33:256 (5) - Same comment as above

07:53:881 (5,6,1) - Try to have the same distance between each gap in the sliders, would look much better

Honestly the outro is really satisfying to play so I don't really have any comments here, it's a fitting end to this map

[]

Hope this helps!

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,074 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-04-05T14:30:30+00:00

Log Off Now wrote:
M4M from your queue

[General]

~~Maybe buff AR a little bit, but apart from that it's fine~~ nevermind i had an older version, updated it now

[Marathon]

Honestly this map is honestly really good so I don't have many comments

07:25:756 (5) - NC slider velocity changes, would make this much more readable

07:33:256 (5) - Same comment as above

07:53:881 (5,6,1) - Try to have the same distance between each gap in the sliders, would look much better // It's fine for me ahh

[]

Hope this helps!

Thanks for mod

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Ambu5h

153 posts

Joined February 2015

Ambu5h 2016-04-05T20:36:29+00:00

Log Off Now wrote:
02:14:975 (1,2,3,4) - I honestly feel like this would either play better as a stack or alternatively increase the spacing, this just feels underwhelming to me personally stacked

02:18:490 - Maybe a short fast slider can go here to follow the slight change in the bass? Would also be a good link into the next combo why not

02:22:475 (2) - I honestly think this slider should be faster instead of slower than the rest, personal taste though it actually has same velocity as others and i think its ok, sorry

02:25:990 (7,1) - I misread this part because of how you mapped the same piece of music at 02:23:647 (4,5,6) - and 02:24:584 (1,2,3) - differently here, I think placing a circle here 02:26:107 - would make this play better holy shit, man, thanks a lot, i just realized how awful this part, and gonna add some notes, cause its just so undermapped

02:36:303 (1) - Slider art to follow the vocal echo here? Just something that could add a little more to this section] sorry, i think its not necessary (interesting suggestion tho, but i just suck at slider arts \:D/)

02:43:803 (9) - Same comment as above same

02:55:053 (5,6) - I think slider end on 5 and 6 should be claps instead of whistles, both fit I just think claps would sound better rhythmically since thats what you did for 02:52:943 (1,2,3,4) - and it would also match the music (not vocals) you're right, but i did it only because i set finish on 02:56:225 (1) - , i dunno how to explain, maybe its just my personal preference to have whistles on 5 and 6, but maybe i'll change it in future

03:10:287 (3) - I think this should end on the blue tick, vocal switches on the blue tick along with the main part of the music oh, well, added note on blue tick, dunno if it helps or not, but i'm sure i want this slider 03:10:287 (3) - end on red tick

03:16:850 (2,3,4) - Start introducing circles on the red ticks in this section too to follow the vocals and also helps build up into the next section? good idea

03:34:662 - Major beat missed here its not missed, some people point out this beat, some people dont, i decided for myself to not emphasize this beat

04:10:756 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved i tryed

04:15:678 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe try this rhythm instead? More involving to play and adds a bit more click based rhythm

Image

04:23:178 (1,2,3) - Same suggestion as above refused sorry

Dude, thank you 10000 times for helping with first song, i was so stuck on it, and for whole mod again big thanks

i'm actually bad at writing mods but if you need one - let me know

code: http://puu.sh/o7p69/ba0b4ed59d.osu

The Ash Raichu

89 posts

Joined December 2015

The Ash Raichu 2016-04-10T07:04:10+00:00

Looking for a Mod for Mod. Here's my mod. I was directed here from WISPG_G's queue. Bear in mind that I'm not a terribly experienced modder.

WISPG_G:

- 00:38:412 (3) - Consider making this a 1/2 slider with a reverse arrow to follow the rhythm better.
- 00:45:912 (3) - Same thing here.
- 01:14:037 (1) - Same thing here, only it would be a 1/4 slider.
- 01:59:975 (1) - I'm not exactly sure how I feel about the four spinners in a row here, but at the same time, I don't know what to suggest to make it better. Maybe replace the last two spinners with 1/1 circles?

Freebird42:

- 02:36:303 (1) - Starting here, you have a couple of weird pauses in your portion of the map. I think some slow sliders would be great to fill in for the faint vocals during these pauses. (Not necessarily slider art like Log Off Now suggested, just something there.)
- 03:58:100 (6) - Unless this is supposed to be a drain section, which it doesn't look like, putting this slider here just looks lazy. Especially since you weren't afraid to put in crazy rhythms before.

CircleChu:

- The entire first part of your section of the map uses a blue polarity rhythm that isn't reflected well in the rhythms used. 04:29:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This combo is where it starts breaking away. The blue note should be between (5) and (6), not (3) and (5) where it currently is. 04:41:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This combo is where it gets back on track.
- 05:47:787 (1,2,3,4) 05:55:287 (1,2,3,4) - For consistency's sake, consider changing the spacing of one of these two combos to be like the other. I personally prefer the cleaner stacks in the second one, but that's just me.

Dailycare:

- This may or may not be me being an inexperienced player, but the wild rhythms the song uses right at the beginning of your section makes the map a bit unintuitive. Maybe substitute some sliders there to get rid of bad polarity shifts. Can't really find anything else in your section.

Avishay:

- 09:14:037 (4) - Is there any reason why this slider is crumpled? It doesn't make a lot of sense to me.
- New Combo placement in the outro seems a bit weird to me. I get that you're starting each new combo at the start of every measure, but in this case, it makes more sense (at least to me) to end each combo on those really strong notes that they currently start on.

Ambu5h

153 posts

Joined February 2015

Ambu5h 2016-04-10T21:20:45+00:00

The Ash Raichu wrote:
Freebird42:

- 02:36:303 (1) - Starting here, you have a couple of weird pauses in your portion of the map. I think some slow sliders would be great to fill in for the faint vocals during these pauses. (Not necessarily slider art like Log Off Now suggested, just something there.) ok, mapped something here, but i guess WISPG_G will NotLikeThis since my part again longer than his, and that means he cant rank this map ROFL
- 03:58:100 (6) - Unless this is supposed to be a drain section, which it doesn't look like, putting this slider here just looks lazy. Especially since you weren't afraid to put in crazy rhythms before. ye, you are totally right, remapped this part

Thank you for mod The Ash Raichu! and sorry for late reply, i had to change many stuff in my part

btw you are 14 hours without kudosu for now, hope you'll get it in this year

code: http://puu.sh/odyQP/6a1703a2f5.osu

Rejoux

3 posts

Joined August 2014

Rejoux 2016-04-11T12:43:07+00:00

Can't wait till this map ranked, so nice =) This is my first marathon with fc x2600+ combo

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2016-04-11T19:33:56+00:00

Greetings WISPG_G and the collabers!

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General]

'Marathon' looks useless being in tags since the difficulty name is Marathon
I don't think you need to have the epilepsy warning enabled since there are only movements of the collabers' names.You have to disable it because it looks kinda useless since it is just a SB name
The pictures with collabers' names have different size.Why don't you resize them at the same size?

[

Marathon]

[WISPG_G]

00:14:740- Maybe add a note here? Feels weird to leave this noticeable beat unemphasized and also when the music is still going and also it gets intensified if you listen more carefully this beat and also the music.Same goes for:
00:18:490-
00:19:428-
00:21:771(6)- Feels weird to see it as a 1/1 slider (starting and ending on 1/2 ticks) because it ignores the stronger beat from 00:22:006- and also the slider snapped in that way seems that it does not follow the music really well as I can see.You can snap the slider by 1/2 slider (moving the tail backward to the 1/1 tick (white tick)) and then add a note on 00:22:240- so the beat from 00:22:006- will be emphasized plus the new rhythm will follow the music much better and more properly in my point of view
00:29:037(6,7)- I know that on (7)- the vocals are getting intensified but why did you make an big 1/2 jump? I think this jump is one random in my point of view so you have to lower the distance a bit but still to emphasize the intensified vocals
00:49:193(1)- You already have a NC on 00:48:725(1)- because for the reset of the instruments plus to make it readable since it is stacked under 00:48:256(5)-'s head but on this note, the NC is pretty useless so you have to remove it

Continue tomorrow...

WannaRock1

1 post

Joined October 2015

WannaRock1 2016-04-12T10:15:07+00:00

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Squichu

1,013 posts

Joined November 2012

Squichu 2016-04-13T00:49:54+00:00

Ahoi~ o/

Wisp

00:03:725 (1) - I don't think many people enjoy spinning for 6 seconds, how about splitting this up? You could use simplified versions of the following rhythm for this
00:11:225 (1,2) - hmmh, (2) starts on a rather weak beat, whereas all the strong ones before have less impact, because none are clickable. My suggestion is to split (1) up and move (2) on the last strong beat like this: http://puu.sh/og2ye.jpg ; same goes for 00:14:975 (1,2,3) -
And it's similar here: 00:12:865 (1,2) - , this would work better like this, I think: http://puu.sh/og7id.jpg ; same for 00:16:615 (1,2,3,4) -
00:14:740 - and 00:18:490 - I agree with Byby, there should be an object here. You can just add a circle
00:19:193 (5) - consider replacing this with a 1/2 slider to emphasize the on-going sound
00:22:943 (3,4) - feels a little weird that you skip the beat on the red tick, how about snapping the slider to 1/2 and adding another circle on the blue tick?
00:24:115 (1,2) - stack seems rather random, the sound on (2) is stronger than the one on (1), so spacing them would work better, I think
00:25:756 (5,6) - ctrl+g this rhythm to have the start of the stream clickable. It's the same as 00:18:725 (1,2,3,4,5) - so should be clickable
00:28:568 (5,6,7) - the flow is a little awkward, I didn't expect this kind of movement (might be just me, tho, I'm not sure). I'd prefer a pattern like this: http://puu.sh/og9bd.jpg
00:35:365 (1) - should be snapped to 1/2, because there's a sound there that shouldn't be skipped, while the 1/4 is silent; same for 00:39:115 (1) - and 00:41:225 (1) - and 00:42:865 (1) - and 00:46:615 (1) -
00:37:475 (1) - similar to ^, should be 1/1 slider instead of 5/4; same here 00:44:975 (1) -
00:38:412 (3) - weird that you ignore the sound on the red tick here, how about replacing this with three circles? Same for 00:45:912 (3) -
00:48:256 (5,1) - stack on sliderhead looks pretty random, why don't you just stack it below the slidertail instead? Players don't have to move either way, but if stacked below the tail it's less confusing
00:49:193 (1) - NC is unnecessary
00:49:662 (3,4) - can you move them a little closer? Jump feels a little exaggerated to me
00:51:068 (1,2,3,4,5) - strong beats are on (1,3,5) so it doesn't make sense to put the jumps on (2) and (4), imo. Consider re-arranging this to emphasize the strtonger beats more.
Also, why a repeat slider suddenly? The rhythm repeats, so there should be another four circles on head/reverse/tail and 00:52:709 -, imo.
01:01:850 (1,2,3) - kinda high spacing, imo. I'm not sure if it's clear to players that this is 1/4.. maybe just move them closer so the jump is not that extreme?
Also, 01:03:725 (1,2,3) - / 01:11:576 (2,3) - and several other should be spaced similar to ^ (or vice-versa), for consistency between patterns
01:07:826 (2,3) - sounds more like http://puu.sh/ogb2A.jpg to me, the 1/8 is too strong to completely ignore it
01:22:475 - starting here this section could use a silent sliderslide for 01:22:943 (3,4) - , I think, it's pretty quiet but dimnishes focus from the strong beats
01:24:818 (7,8,1) - (7,8) are stronger than (1), but they're stacked while (1) is spaced.. doesn't work that well, imo. Consider stacking (8) above (1) instead, or spacing all of them just like 01:28:568 (5,6,1) -
01:26:225 (3,1) - why change DS here?
01:28:100 (4,5) - mentioned this already, if you want to stack them, stack below the slidertail, but in this case I advice against that, the circle should be spaced regularly at a better visible place, imo.
01:30:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:32:318 (1,2,3,4) - spacing between these patterns for 1/4 is inconsistent, you should keep all of them spaced similar, imo, so better re-arrange the first pattern (the others match already)

freebird

02:16:381 (1) - imo this would work better as two circles or two 1/4 sliders to emphasize both on-going sounds that you emphasized similarly here 02:17:787 (5) -
02:35:600 (5) - missing NC? (should be on each downbeat, or am I wrong? Following pattern has NC on each, so I'm not sure. but you should make them consistent)
02:40:521 (4,1) - feels a little empty because vocals go on and there's another sound on the red tick, maybe move (4) to 02:40:756 - and add a circle at 02:40:521 - ?
02:41:459 (2,3,4) - what happened to the stack? xD
02:43:100 (7) - missing NC?
02:45:912 (1,2,3,4,1) - not sure aboout NCs here either; (1) doesn't need an NC even if there's different spacing, it's pretty obvious, but (2) is beginning of the next line, so should have NC.
02:48:725 (1,2) - copypasting one slider looks a little off, considering you've been using many creative sliders together previously, how about a different shape for the second slider? (maybe some kind of blanket for (1) or next object?)
02:58:100 (6) - reverse doesn't work well here because of the beat at 02:58:451 - ; consider removing the reverse and adding circles instead
03:08:412 (4) - and 03:10:287 (3,4) - same rhythm and simialr vocals, shouldn't they be consistent? I'd prefer if (3,4) were just one slider~~
03:45:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - a litte confusing that this isn't like 03:37:709 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , cause it's the exact same rhythm
04:24:350 (1) - you've been sticking to vocals with NCs for this song, so better to remove it here, imo. (the jump is obvious)

CircleChu

05:10:287 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - most important sounds are on (1,3,4,5) and it would be nice if they had more impact than (2), so I'd suggest to turn (1) into a 1/2 slider, you'll have (1) still clickable, but (2) moves more into the background which puts a lot more emphasis on (3,4)
05:25:639 - pretty strong sound that shouldn't be ignored, imo. Add a circle?
05:37:006 (4,5,6) - there's no sound on (5), but there's one at 05:37:357 - so this feels a little off. Might be better to move it there?
05:50:365 (1) - pretty strong sound on the blue tick, why did you ignore it here? Might work better if you replace the slider with circles
05:54:115 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I expected something similar to 05:46:615 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - because it's the same rhythm, but some variety might not be bad~~ however, these circles 05:47:787 (1,2,3,4) - are a one-time-only-accurance and it feels a little weird to only play it once, I suggest you match this with all the other similar ryhthms or use it more often instead (I'd like to have them more often, they're fun >w<)

Dailycare

07:57:631 (6) - and 07:59:506 (6) - why do you switch to so many reverses here? The beat on the red tick is so strong, it feels a little weird to not click it, imo.. especially becauss the ones before were all clickable. Might be more interesting to make the pattern a little harder again and use four circles instead? Like you did in the beginning with 07:48:256 (5,6,7,8) -

Avishay

08:29:740 (3) - poor strong downbeat. :c Maybe this would work better if you use a 1/2 + reverse instead of (3,4)? You'd have at least some emphasis on the downbeat and still cover the vocals. Or you could make 08:30:092 - clickable, because that's were the vocals start, (4) is compared to that extremely weak.. > shorten slider to 1/2, remove (4) and add a 1/4 slider at 08:30:092 -
08:48:256 (7,8,9) - hmh. Rhythm doesn't change so why do you add (8)? :/
08:49:662 (8) - consider adding NC here, combo's getting pretty pretty long and looks random compared to the other short combos
Also is 08:49:428 (7) - inteded as it is? If you want to split this equally into 2/1 mapped with circles and 2/1 with sliders it should be two more circles(?)
09:25:287 (2,3) - I still don't know why.. :'C you could create a blanket with (2) sooo nicely..

That's all for now. öö

Ambu5h

153 posts

Joined February 2015

Ambu5h 2016-04-13T19:20:52+00:00

Squirrel wrote:
freebird
02:16:381 (1) - imo this would work better as two circles or two 1/4 sliders to emphasize both on-going sounds that you emphasized similarly here 02:17:787 (5) - ok
02:35:600 (5) - missing NC? (should be on each downbeat, or am I wrong? Following pattern has NC on each, so I'm not sure. but you should make them consistent) big fail by me, thanks
02:40:521 (4,1) - feels a little empty because vocals go on and there's another sound on the red tick, maybe move (4) to 02:40:756 - and add a circle at 02:40:521 - ? why not
02:41:459 (2,3,4) - what happened to the stack? xD i honestly didnt see issues here, but well, made here stack another one time, hope now everything's clear
02:43:100 (7) - missing NC? yes
02:45:912 (1,2,3,4,1) - not sure aboout NCs here either; (1) doesn't need an NC even if there's different spacing, it's pretty obvious, but (2) is beginning of the next line, so should have NC. im so bad with nc's
02:48:725 (1,2) - copypasting one slider looks a little off, considering you've been using many creative sliders together previously, how about a different shape for the second slider? (maybe some kind of blanket for (1) or next object?) i dunno really, as long as both of them emphasize the same sound i used copypaste here, but maybe i'll change the second one, i'm not sure
02:58:100 (6) - reverse doesn't work well here because of the beat at 02:58:451 - ; consider removing the reverse and adding circles instead why am i so deaf
03:08:412 (4) - and 03:10:287 (3,4) - same rhythm and simialr vocals, shouldn't they be consistent? I'd prefer if (3,4) were just one slider~~ as you say
03:45:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - a litte confusing that this isn't like 03:37:709 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , cause it's the exact same rhythm actually yes, made them the same
04:24:350 (1) - you've been sticking to vocals with NCs for this song, so better to remove it here, imo. (the jump is obvious) but it has special finish hitsound and thats like the epic final for my part (LOL) so thats why nc

Big thanks again for mod, Squirrel! You can see things i just never thought about!

code: http://puu.sh/oh1iV/111105a5aa.osu

Cellina

Beatmap Nominator

1,004 posts

Joined March 2013

Cellina 2016-04-14T12:16:47+00:00

ar is too fast ;w; consider to reduce it (maybe 8.7?)

Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,074 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2016-04-14T12:35:27+00:00

@squirrel
fixed :3

@the ash raichu
Uhh, I can understand somewhat, but I wonder why you thought these rhythms are unintuitive.. Whole rhythms are fine for me.. Anyway thanks for your opinion

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Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2016-04-14T16:51:45+00:00

Squirrel wrote:
Ahoi~ o/

Avishay
08:29:740 (3) - poor strong downbeat. :c Maybe this would work better if you use a 1/2 + reverse instead of (3,4)? You'd have at least some emphasis on the downbeat and still cover the vocals. Or you could make 08:30:092 - clickable, because that's were the vocals start, (4) is compared to that extremely weak.. > shorten slider to 1/2, remove (4) and add a 1/4 slider at 08:30:092 - I like that suggestion a lot, changed.
08:48:256 (7,8,9) - hmh. Rhythm doesn't change so why do you add (8)? :/ Because there is a 1/4 note? Listen closely.
08:49:662 (8) - consider adding NC here, combo's getting pretty pretty long and looks random compared to the other short combos Uhm sure.
Also is 08:49:428 (7) - inteded as it is? If you want to split this equally into 2/1 mapped with circles and 2/1 with sliders it should be two more circles(?) Oops fixed and redesigned.
09:25:287 (2,3) - I still don't know why.. :'C you could create a blanket with (2) sooo nicely.. I tried, I like nothing :<
That's all for now. öö

@Ash, it's a vocal play, it is stuttered to symbolize the vocals, as for the NCs, they are finee imo

Thanks both!

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KappaPraise

316 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

KappaPraise 2016-04-14T19:28:55+00:00

Squirrel wrote:
Ahoi~ o/

Wisp
00:03:725 (1) - I don't think many people enjoy spinning for 6 seconds, how about splitting this up? You could use simplified versions of the following rhythm for this Mapped something else
00:11:225 (1,2) - hmmh, (2) starts on a rather weak beat, whereas all the strong ones before have less impact, because none are clickable. My suggestion is to split (1) up and move (2) on the last strong beat like this: http://puu.sh/og2ye.jpg ; same goes for 00:14:975 (1,2,3) - Ok
And it's similar here: 00:12:865 (1,2) - , this would work better like this, I think: http://puu.sh/og7id.jpg ; same for 00:16:615 (1,2,3,4) - Ok [2]
00:14:740 - and 00:18:490 - I agree with Byby, there should be an object here. You can just add a circle Ok [3]
00:19:193 (5) - consider replacing this with a 1/2 slider to emphasize the on-going sound Ok [...]
00:22:943 (3,4) - feels a little weird that you skip the beat on the red tick, how about snapping the slider to 1/2 and adding another circle on the blue tick? Yes
00:24:115 (1,2) - stack seems rather random, the sound on (2) is stronger than the one on (1), so spacing them would work better, I think Changed
00:25:756 (5,6) - ctrl+g this rhythm to have the start of the stream clickable. It's the same as 00:18:725 (1,2,3,4,5) - so should be clickable To-to-to-to-to
00:28:568 (5,6,7) - the flow is a little awkward, I didn't expect this kind of movement (might be just me, tho, I'm not sure). I'd prefer a pattern like this: http://puu.sh/og9bd.jpg Nice flow
00:35:365 (1) - should be snapped to 1/2, because there's a sound there that shouldn't be skipped, while the 1/4 is silent; same for 00:39:115 (1) - and 00:41:225 (1) - and 00:42:865 (1) - and 00:46:615 (1) - Fine
00:37:475 (1) - similar to ^, should be 1/1 slider instead of 5/4; same here 00:44:975 (1) - ^
00:38:412 (3) - weird that you ignore the sound on the red tick here, how about replacing this with three circles? Same for 00:45:912 (3) - Um, ok
00:48:256 (5,1) - stack on sliderhead looks pretty random, why don't you just stack it below the slidertail instead? Players don't have to move either way, but if stacked below the tail it's less confusing Ok, i guess
00:49:193 (1) - NC is unnecessary Um, ok
00:49:662 (3,4) - can you move them a little closer? Jump feels a little exaggerated to me Changed
00:51:068 (1,2,3,4,5) - strong beats are on (1,3,5) so it doesn't make sense to put the jumps on (2) and (4), imo. Consider re-arranging this to emphasize the strtonger beats more. Changed
Also, why a repeat slider suddenly? The rhythm repeats, so there should be another four circles on head/reverse/tail and 00:52:709 -, imo. Idk
01:01:850 (1,2,3) - kinda high spacing, imo. I'm not sure if it's clear to players that this is 1/4.. maybe just move them closer so the jump is not that extreme? Fixed
Also, 01:03:725 (1,2,3) - / 01:11:576 (2,3) - and several other should be spaced similar to ^ (or vice-versa), for consistency between patterns Fixed i guess
01:07:826 (2,3) - sounds more like http://puu.sh/ogb2A.jpg to me, the 1/8 is too strong to completely ignore it Fine
01:22:475 - starting here this section could use a silent sliderslide for 01:22:943 (3,4) - , I think, it's pretty quiet but dimnishes focus from the strong beats Well
01:24:818 (7,8,1) - (7,8) are stronger than (1), but they're stacked while (1) is spaced.. doesn't work that well, imo. Consider stacking (8) above (1) instead, or spacing all of them just like 01:28:568 (5,6,1) - Fixed
01:26:225 (3,1) - why change DS here? Ops missed
01:28:100 (4,5) - mentioned this already, if you want to stack them, stack below the slidertail, but in this case I advice against that, the circle should be spaced regularly at a better visible place, imo. Yep
01:30:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:32:318 (1,2,3,4) - spacing between these patterns for 1/4 is inconsistent, you should keep all of them spaced similar, imo, so better re-arrange the first pattern (the others match already) I am not sure looks fine for me.
That's all for now. öö

Thx again

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2016-04-22T05:29:35+00:00

I was asked to have a look at FCL's parts.

[Collab]

04:28:920 (4) - тут лучше на основной бас смотреть и его мапать, давай уберем (4), т.к. триплет там играется слабовато.
04:44:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - не сказал бы, что выглядит аккуратно. Может что-то попроще в визуальном плане попробуешь? Это закруглдение в конце грустно смотрится, выпрямим его?
04:46:264 (4,5,6) - а давай раздвинем серклы, для большей читабельности? не критично, но визуально приятнее будет.
04:48:725 (1,2) - такой стак сложно будет сходу прочитать, анстакни, пожалуйста. 05:06:068 (2,1) - аналогично
04:57:279 - бит куда-то выпал. Может хотя бы реверсом слайдеора выделить? +05:01:029 - аналогично
05:31:850 (1) - из-за вокалов на красном тике слайдер звучит неприятно. Давай укоротим его? 05:33:725 (1) - аналогично
05:48:725 (1,2,3,4) - ♥
05:59:037 (6,7) - уменьши или увеличь спейсинг, можно прочитать как 1/4.
06:18:725 (1,2,3) - не знаю, мне такой джамп не нравится. Вроде как он работает и играется, но визуально выглядит слабо. Да и раньше подобного не было. 06:22:475 (1,2) - аналогично

Shoga

232 posts

Joined January 2015

Shoga 2016-04-22T06:04:45+00:00

Mod

00:03:021 - add a spinner there
00:09:115 (3,1) - U miss the sound here that some thing like these 00:11:225 (1,2) -
00:26:225 (6) - NC here?
00:48:256 (5) - Increase SV by a bit here to emphasize the beat there since it is louder
04:25:756 (1,2,3) - U might wanna put this in the middle of the screen or some where futher to 04:26:225 (1) for better visual feel and for the better transition to FCL part?
04:40:756 (5) - feel like u should space that slider abit futher out to fit with the follow sliders
04:54:350 (1,2,3,4,5) - Space these out a bit so the it is ezier to read?
Stupid suggestion: U Might wanna to add the song track in the sb.

queue if u want some mods

Ayy gl all~

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

FCL 2016-04-22T09:51:10+00:00

Bakari wrote:
I was asked to have a look at FCL's parts.

[Collab]
04:28:920 (4) - тут лучше на основной бас смотреть и его мапать, давай уберем (4), т.к. триплет там играется слабовато. а я отчетливый бас там слышу, почему бы и не замапать. Посмотрю что другие скажут
04:44:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - не сказал бы, что выглядит аккуратно. Может что-то попроще в визуальном плане попробуешь? Это закруглдение в конце грустно смотрится, выпрямим его? неправда, но я выпрямил
04:46:264 (4,5,6) - а давай раздвинем серклы, для большей читабельности? не критично, но визуально приятнее будет. ну давай
04:48:725 (1,2) - такой стак сложно будет сходу прочитать, анстакни, пожалуйста. 05:06:068 (2,1) - аналогично там похожие звуки стаки были бы ок. Тем не менее я анстакнул но с меньшим спейсингом
04:57:279 - бит куда-то выпал. Может хотя бы реверсом слайдеора выделить? +05:01:029 - аналогично а я то думал, что тут не так
05:31:850 (1) - из-за вокалов на красном тике слайдер звучит неприятно. Давай укоротим его? 05:33:725 (1) - аналогично все верно, укоротил до 1/2, но при этом добавил ноту на синий тик, т.к. там есть сильный звук
05:48:725 (1,2,3,4) - ♥ thanks mr. monstrata for giving me that idea
05:59:037 (6,7) - уменьши или увеличь спейсинг, можно прочитать как 1/4. уменьшил
06:18:725 (1,2,3) - не знаю, мне такой джамп не нравится. Вроде как он работает и играется, но визуально выглядит слабо. Да и раньше подобного не было. 06:22:475 (1,2) - аналогично на самом деле я их использую на протяжении всего этого киая, так что все вполне последовательно

Спасибо!
@Shoga applied your second suggestion, ty
http://puu.sh/orwji/318804e1e6.osu

Ambu5h

153 posts

Joined February 2015

Ambu5h 2016-04-22T12:13:11+00:00

Shoga wrote:
[*]04:25:756 (1,2,3) - U might wanna put this in the middle of the screen or some where futher to 04:26:225 (1) for better visual feel and for the better transition to FCL part? dont wanna move that triple, but removed nc from 04:25:756 (1) - so i hope noone will fail this moment

Thanks, Shoga

Deadmadeon

148 posts

Joined October 2014

Deadmadeon 2016-04-23T02:42:07+00:00

Hi, here is my mod wich is only composed by a suggestion to make more constant with difficulty

Suggestion

02:17:553 (4) - Ctrl + g

LoL It's the only

KappaPraise

316 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

KappaPraise 2016-04-23T03:58:30+00:00

Deadmadeon wrote:
Hi, here is my mod wich is only composed by a suggestion to make more constant with difficulty

Suggestion
02:17:553 (4) - Ctrl + g

LoL It's the only

LOL, best mod ever
P.S. Thx for Star =)

Squichu

1,013 posts

Joined November 2012

Squichu 2016-04-23T11:39:36+00:00

So.. we deleted a useless green line and everything else looks good to me. Here's bubble #1! (\^w^/)

BoatKrab

740 posts

Joined September 2012

BoatKrab 2016-04-23T16:02:25+00:00

Wooo ~ Great one!
GL with it! xD

KappaPraise