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MAX - Dance With You

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Marianna
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Marianna
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on quinta-feira, 21 de abril de 2016 at 10:23:53

Artist: MAX
Title: Dance With You
Tags: Malanaphy X Drag Queen Ataraxia fabiojhon RuPaul Presents CoverGurlz2
BPM: 128
Filesize: 12154kb
Play Time: 01:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. I Wanna Dance With You (2,98 stars, 139 notes)
  2. Marixia's Easy (1,48 stars, 57 notes)
  3. Normal (1,97 stars, 90 notes)
Download: MAX - Dance With You
Download: MAX - Dance With You (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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gif by: Underforest
Last edited by Marianna , edited 31 times in total.
Marianna
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Marianna
Mapset

Easy by: Me and Ataraxia
Normal by: Me
Hard by: Me

BG by: Bakari
Video by: ezek
Last edited by Marianna , edited 3 times in total.
Bastionior
560 posts
Joined January 2013
Bastionior
dae

[Dance]

  1. 00:21:859 (3) - 00:25:609 (3) - poderia muda a forma curvada, vc está repetindo a mesma sequencia de notas ;w;.
  2. 00:28:773 - mapper esqueceu uma nota aqui.
  3. 00:29:593 (4,5,6,7) - tem que ter uma ênfase nessas notas devido a batida forte tho.
  4. 00:33:578 (5) - seria mais aplicável se fosse 2 single notes, mas se prefere deixar assim ok oo
  5. 00:37:328 (4) - mesma coisa ^
  6. 00:44:828 (1) - poderia substitui por um slider 1/4 q-q
  7. a seleção do kiai está legal porém estou preocupado com alguns duplets 1/4 que vc colocou, creio que a diff é hard e os duplets são meio complicados fora isso acho que é o fim da lista.
[Collab eazy]

  1. 00:33:109 (2,1) - fixa a ds (o blanket) não pode ser tão aproximado 00:34:984 (2,1,2) - ^ mesma coisa
  2. 00:44:711 - precisa mesmo dessa super redução de velocidade, se caso sim de NC nessa nota 00:44:828 (3) -
  3. 01:01:703 (1) - NC desnecessário.
Marianna
1,392 posts
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Marianna

Kalindraz wrote:

dae

[Dance]

  1. 00:21:859 (3) - 00:25:609 (3) - poderia muda a forma curvada, vc está repetindo a mesma sequencia de notas ;w;. Ok
  2. 00:28:773 - mapper esqueceu uma nota aqui. Proposital kek
  3. 00:29:593 (4,5,6,7) - tem que ter uma ênfase nessas notas devido a batida forte tho. Ok
  4. 00:33:578 (5) - seria mais aplicável se fosse 2 single notes, mas se prefere deixar assim ok oo Mas assim fica bonitinho e facil :v
  5. 00:37:328 (4) - mesma coisa ^ Vocal
  6. 00:44:828 (1) - poderia substitui por um slider 1/4 q-q
  7. a seleção do kiai está legal porém estou preocupado com alguns duplets 1/4 que vc colocou, creio que a diff é hard e os duplets são meio complicados fora isso acho que é o fim da lista. É que é a musica né, mas é aquele ditado: Vamo fazer oq?
Lindo ♥
Ataraxia
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Joined February 2014
Ataraxia
Tudo consertado

http://puu.sh/o8RSJ/98794c5770.txt
sahuang
2,294 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang
M4M from your queue

[General]
  1. The soft-sliderslide.wav that you use is not 44kb,make sure you use the 44kb one.Now it's unrankable.
    44kb: http://puu.sh/o7EwR/8ea478164e.wav

[Easy]
  1. 00:36:859 (2,1) - blanket
  2. 01:01:703 (1) - this is really hard to miss for beginners,you can delete it
  3. 01:02:172 (1,3) - imo in Easy this overlap is not allowed

[Normal]
  1. 00:20:687 (3,1) - stacking them
  2. 01:01:703 (1) - also delete
  3. 01:14:359 (4) - i think reverse slider here sounds weird,you may use 2 sliders instead cuz vocal is 01:14:828 - but not 01:14:711 -
  4. Good kiai lol

[Hard]
  1. HP=6 for 3 star map
  2. 01:08:851 (6,7) - looks bad,maybe adjust a bit,e.g. 01:08:851 (6) - be a reflection of 01:08:265 (4) -

A really decent and clean mapset,so not much to write
GL for ranked :) :)
Marianna
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Marianna
Most Changed

About soft-sliderslide.wav I caught a qualified map so... Ya.
Ataraxia
673 posts
Joined February 2014
Ataraxia

sahuang wrote:

M4M from your queue


[notice][Easy]
[list]
[*]00:36:859 (2,1) - blanket That's irrelevant on gameplay
kunka
1,570 posts
Joined July 2012
kunka
Hi.
From your Q～
I Wanna Dance With You.

  1. 00:20:687 (5) - As for this diff, A circle of the end of 1beat, it is not almost done stack. Rather you use jumps well for next note. For example, here 00:16:937 (6) - 00:18:812 (4) - 00:22:562 (4) - ..etc. There are a lot. Therefore, according to consistency, I recommend placement to promote a jump.
  2. 00:24:203 (1) - This nc deviates from consistency. I recommend that I remove it. 00:42:953 (1) - same
  3. 00:45:531 - ～ 00:56:547 - I didn't feel the need of the blank. Because, I think that there is the sound that you can pick up. For example, 00:46:000 - 00:46:703 - 00:47:406 - 00:48:109 - 00:48:578 - 00:49:047 - etc.
  4. 00:56:547 (1) - I think that the hard diff can make it hard. try this plz http://puu.sh/obu7J.jpg
Normal.

  1. 00:45:531 - ～ 00:56:547 - It is the same as hard diff. I think that I can add notes.
  2. 01:03:109 (3) - I think that it is not necessary to pick up a sound of the 01:03:461 - . Rather I think 01:03:578 - to be need. The 01:03:578 - becomes the vocal follow, too. 01:04:984 (2) - 01:06:859 (3) - 01:09:672 (1) - 01:12:484 (3) - same.
  3. 01:04:750 - Would you add a circle? You did pick up a circle here that is the same rhythm 01:02:875 (2) -
Marixia's Easy <3.

  1. 00:20:922 (3,1) - I can't recommend this overlap. Would you change the direction? http://puu.sh/obvV0.jpg
  2. 01:01:703 (1) - It is down beat here. I think that it is not necessary for the easy diff.
I think it to be good map overall. gl ;)
Marianna
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Marianna
Thanks for mod @kunkakunkakunkakunka :D
Kyouren
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Kyouren
As request! <3



Legend:
Black: Not to Important
Red: Is Unrankable
Blue: If not change, I'm ask with other BN and QAT
[General]
  1. Add "fabiojhon" since it's Ataraxia's old username!
  2. Maybe change other BG because that BG already used by Come[Back]Home's map!
[Normal]

  • OD -1
  1. 00:38:734 (2) - Overlap in tail
[Hard]

  • OD -0.5 & HP -1
  1. 00:35:453 (6) - Overlap
NO KDS because it's short mod!

Good Luck~
Underforest
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Underforest
As requested

I saw overall map and it's very clean :)
congrats and gl
Marianna
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Marianna

Underforest wrote:

As requested

I saw overall map and it's very clean :)
congrats and gl
Sankyuu :3

Thanks for the New BG Kitty ♥
Dashyy-
751 posts
Joined May 2015
Dashyy-
m4m from queue :)

easy:

01:05:922 (1,2) - looks better like this


normal:

01:02:172 (1) - make this slider like this:


map is well done. gl on ranking :)
ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache
Hi~ As requested~ Shitmod incoming~

General
  1. Would you like this higher quality video?

Marixia's Easy <3.
00:44:828 (1) - Ugh, this slider feels really bad imo, I think it doesn't flow well, especially for beginners~ This would fit better imo. But.. I also think that there is an important change in the music at 00:45:297 - and it should be emphasized with a circle. So what I recommend you to do is deleting 00:44:359 (2) - then add a repeat to 00:43:422 (1) - and make 00:44:828 (1) - into two circles. All this so you can emphasize correctly that part~

Normal.
00:44:828 (1) - guess what? Same suggestion as in easy. Here you could end the slider at the red tick and add a circle.

Hard.
00:42:953 (1) - Hmm... Remove NC?00:44:828 (1) - You could do the same suggestion as in normal or just make it 3 circles~

That's it! Well done Marianna! :O
Underforest
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Underforest
9999999999999999999999999

Posuto
Marianna
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Marianna
Thanks for the mod and the New Video Zezek ♥

And on the slider, I wanted to follow the back beats and these sliders cover the entire area, and the beats are the most up then hear I think it's better this way, Thank you ♥
Kyouren
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Kyouren
Called BN \w/
Marianna
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Marianna

KittyAdventure wrote:

Called BN \w/
xD
Ataraxia
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Ataraxia
chama um beN

Opa esqueci de salvar toma ae http://puu.sh/ocgvG/c920870afd.osu
Jonarwhal
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Jonarwhal
M4M on your queue~
No formatting because it's short.
SPOILER
Easy~
00:19:047 (1) - Ctrl+g for flow.
00:28:422 (3) - This might encourage flow.
00:34:047 (1) - Move this away from 00:33:109 (2) - this like this.

Normal~
00:30:062 (4,1) - Fix blanket.

Dance~
00:40:843 (4) - This is close to going offscreen.
Good Luck with this~!
Marianna
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Marianna
Thanks For mod jonawaga ♥
Marianna
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Marianna
double post oops xD
Ataraxia
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Ataraxia
Easy
00:19:047 (1) - Ctrl+g for flow.
00:28:422 (3) - This might encourage flow.
00:34:047 (1) - Move this away from 00:33:109 (2) - this like this. Fixed

Mari meu Querido
Bastionior
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Bastionior
Call BN 911 NOW !!
Marianna
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Marianna

Kalindraz wrote:

Call BN 911 NOW !!
I'll try xD
Underforest
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Underforest
Little suggestion for Hard
00:44:828 (1) - replace this for a 1/8 repating slider

Yeah, you should call BN
Star *3*
Marianna
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Marianna

Underforest wrote:

Little suggestion for Hard
00:44:828 (1) - replace this for a 1/8 repating slider

Yeah, you should call BN
Star *3*
1/8 is very difficult to put T-T

And i'm trying xD
Underforest
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Underforest

Marianna wrote:

1/8 is very difficult to put T-T
32,172,44828,2,0,L|32:216,8,23.9999992675781,8|8|8|8|8|8|8|8|12,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
GL :)
Marianna
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Marianna

Underforest wrote:

Marianna wrote:

1/8 is very difficult to put T-T
32,172,44828,2,0,L|32:216,8,23.9999992675781,8|8|8|8|8|8|8|8|12,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
GL :)
Okay :3
Kyouren
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Kyouren
Why you adding max in tags? It's has already in artist, so remove that!
Marianna
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Marianna

KittyAdventure wrote:

Why you adding max in tags? It's has already in artist, so remove that!
Because Max Malanaphy It's the full name of MAX
Kyouren
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Kyouren
Well, it's keep remove it!
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