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HO-KAGO TEA TIME - Cagayake! GIRLS (TV size)

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Topic Starter
Mio_chan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 09 April 2016 at 00:24:20

Artist: HO-KAGO TEA TIME
Title: Cagayake! GIRLS (TV size)
Source: K-ON!
Tags: keion Toyosaki Aki Hirasawa Yui Akiyama Mio Tsumugi Kotobuki Tainaka Ritsu Nakano Azusa
BPM: 170
Filesize: 13297kb
Play Time: 00:01
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0 stars, 1 notes)
  2. Extra (5.12 stars, 474 notes)
  3. Hard (3.32 stars, 268 notes)
  4. Insane (4.01 stars, 61 notes)
  5. Normal (2.09 stars, 151 notes)
Download: HO-KAGO TEA TIME - Cagayake! GIRLS (TV size)
Download: HO-KAGO TEA TIME - Cagayake! GIRLS (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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remapping:
diffs done: Extra, Hard
working on: insane
Zelos
omah god im the first modder. yay.

oh yeah.*as requested*

Easy:

00:00:605 (1) - move the this slider under the next slider

Normal:

00:30:958 (1) - start this on the next red tick and end on 00:33:076

00:33:870 (1) - ^same thing as above but dont end in the same place stated above.(obviously)

do that same thing for all the spinners that you did that for. cant really do that on a Normal diff.

Hard:

00:00:605 (1,1,1,1) - since these notes arent spreaded out distance wise, my suggestion is you remove the new combo from them.

Insane:

00:00:605 (1,1,1,1) - ^same as above

01:20:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - you better find somewhere to end this combo. it is to long.

Pretty solid map for a first submission.Nice job.

Star.
Topic Starter
Mio_chan

Zelos wrote:

omah god im the first modder. yay.

oh yeah.*as requested*

Easy:

00:00:605 (1) - move the this slider under the next slider fixed
Normal:

00:30:958 (1) - start this on the next red tick and end on 00:33:076 fixed

00:33:870 (1) - ^same thing as above but dont end in the same place stated abovefixed

do that same thing for all the spinners that you did that for. cant really do that on a Normal diff.fixed

Hard:

00:00:605 (1,1,1,1) - since these notes arent spreaded out distance wise, my suggestion is you remove the new combo from them. fixed

Insane:

00:00:605 (1,1,1,1) - ^same as above fixed

01:20:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - you better find somewhere to end this combo. it is to long.fixed

Pretty solid map for a first submission.Nice job.

Star.
Sharp
I thought that offset was good of the 619.

I'm poor English.
I'm sorry

star :)
Topic Starter
Mio_chan
offset changed to -1,506

Thanks for staring~ =]
Gonzvlo
General:
  1. Resize BG to 1024x768
  2. Preview Time is not the same for all the diffs.
  3. Disable countdown because it's not used.
  4. I'd double check that timing.
Easy:
  1. 00:08:376 (1) - This is too close to the end of the spinner.
  2. 00:17:905 - This pattern will be too hard for east try this:
  3. 00:17:905 - Add a slider here (ends: 00:18:082) and a slider here 00:18:788 (ends: 00:19:493)
  4. 00:27:788 (5,1) - Unstack these.
Normal:
  1. Reduce AR at least 6 ticks.
  2. 00:07:846 (1,1) - Turn this into a single slider, maybe add a repeat to the first slider.
  3. Probably too hard for normal.
Hard:
  1. 00:10:494 (7,8) - Stack the end of these manually.
  2. 00:21:788 (7,8) - Stack these.
  3. 00:33:611 (7,1) - Unstack these please.
  4. 00:36:435 (10,1) - ^
Insane:
  1. D:

Nice Hitsounds, Keep up with the nice job.
Topic Starter
Mio_chan

Gonzvlo wrote:

General:
  1. Resize BG to 1024x768 fixed
  2. Preview Time is not the same for all the diffs. fixed
  3. Disable countdown because it's not used. fixed
  4. I'd double check that timing.I will wait
Easy:
  1. 00:08:376 (1) - This is too close to the end of the spinner. fixed
  2. 00:17:905 - This pattern will be too hard for east try this: fixed
  3. 00:17:905 - Add a slider here (ends: 00:18:082) and a slider here 00:18:788 (ends: 00:19:493)
  4. 00:27:788 (5,1) - Unstack these.
fixed

Normal:
  1. Reduce AR at least 6 ticks. fixed
  2. 00:07:846 (1,1) - Turn this into a single slider, maybe add a repeat to the first slider. fixed
  3. Probably too hard for normal. hmm...Maybe I should ask somebody else to try it
Hard:
  1. 00:10:494 (7,8) - Stack the end of these manually. fixed
  2. 00:21:788 (7,8) - Stack these. fixed
  3. 00:33:611 (7,1) - Unstack these please. fixed
  4. 00:36:435 (10,1) - ^ fixed
Insane:
  1. D:

Nice Hitsounds, Keep up with the nice job.
narakucrimson
Greetings (?)

[General]

It's all pretty good :)

There's just a thing I don't agree too much with: too long kiai times. I don't like them in general, they are like monotone. That's why I'd suggest to split your kiai into two sections: one starting where is starts now, and ending at 1:11:552 - there's already a timing section there - and the second one, starting at 1:11:905 and ending where it currently ends.
n.n

Also, your maps might be a little "square". I mean, everything is just vertical or horizaontal. It's not that it's wrong, but you may want to try some new patterns next time :)


[Easy]

19:493 (3) - Add a finish at the end of the slider.
1:27:611 (3, 4) - Move these one grid down.


[Normal]

27:788 (1) - Remove new combo?
33:435 (1) - Maybe move this 2 grids left?
39:082 (1) - remove new combo to keep it consistent with my first suggestion~~
44:729 (1) - Maybe move this 2 grids right?
56:023 (2) - I don't like the way this overlaps 3. Maybe you could try something like this:
SPOILER

I don't know :/


[Hard]&[Insane]

Hmm.. these two seem quiet right :)


Ok, that would be all!
Topic Starter
Mio_chan

narakucrimson wrote:

Greetings (?) Hi~

[General]

It's all pretty good :)

There's just a thing I don't agree too much with: too long kiai times. I don't like them in general, they are like monotone. That's why I'd suggest to split your kiai into two sections: one starting where is starts now, and ending at 1:11:552 - there's already a timing section there - and the second one, starting at 1:11:905 and ending where it currently ends.
n.n done

Also, your maps might be a little "square". I mean, everything is just vertical or horizaontal. It's not that it's wrong, but you may want to try some new patterns next time :) I will try next time =]


[Easy]

19:493 (3) - Add a finish at the end of the slider. fixed
1:27:611 (3, 4) - Move these one grid down. fixed


[Normal]

27:788 (1) - Remove new combo? fixed
33:435 (1) - Maybe move this 2 grids left? fixed
39:082 (1) - remove new combo to keep it consistent with my first suggestion~~ fixed
44:729 (1) - Maybe move this 2 grids right? fixed
56:023 (2) - I don't like the way this overlaps 3. Maybe you could try something like this: fixed
SPOILER

I don't know :/


[Hard]&[Insane]

Hmm.. these two seem quiet right :)


Ok, that would be all!
wmfchris
[General]
-mp3 is at 256 Kbps, compress it to 128 or 192.
-Resize your BG image to 800*600 (... and when I download the song, I don't see the BG is inserted into the diffs

[Insane]
0:02:905 (10) new combo
0:19:582 (13,1) (1)3 remove clap, (1) clap at beginning (C2)?
0:20:376 (3) left 1 grid
1:08:641 (15,16) spacing
1:28:405 the finish-like hitsound should appear at the end =d

[hard]
0:26:023 (3,4) down 1 grid
0:47:376 (6) delete

[normal]
quite off vocal, like 0:15:611 ~ 0:16:670, rearrange them a bit?

[easy] ok

like the hitsound, star~
aesopl19193
Flandre Scarlet // 我的愛永不休说:
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/22355
支持HK人做圖
Topic Starter
Mio_chan

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
-mp3 is at 256 Kbps, compress it to 128 or 192. fixed
-Resize your BG image to 800*600 fixed(... and when I download the song, I don't see the BG is inserted into the diffs

[Insane]
0:02:905 (10) new combo fixed
0:19:582 (13,1) (1)3 remove clap, (1) clap at beginning (C2)? fixed
0:20:376 (3) left 1 grid fixed
1:08:641 (15,16) spacing fixed
1:28:405 the finish-like hitsound should appear at the end =d fixed

[hard]
0:26:023 (3,4) down 1 grid fixed
0:47:376 (6) delete not fixed since I follow the bass' pattern

[normal]
quite off vocal, like 0:15:611 ~ 0:16:670, rearrange them a bit?try to change a bit... actually I want this diff to be guitar and vocal based

[easy] ok

like the hitsound, star~
JoJo
Poor English.Sry.

Here is some advise of mine.

[General]

I suggest to start a Kiai time in easy and normal diff from 00:08:412 to 00:19:706,though it isn't important.Of cource,you may remove all kiai time,especially insane diff.Kiai always influences some players' performance.You make the choice.

[Easy]

Nothing to change.Perfect diff.

[Normal]

A little hard.This is normal+.Some short sliders are hard to read and usually result in releasing early.
00:21:824 (5) Reducing a return will be better.
01:25:353 (5) ^
00:50:059 (2) Place to 00:50:235.You can ignore this.
01:01:882 (5) Lengthen to 01:02:412.
01:03:118 (7) Change to a circle,not slider.

[Hard]

00:20:324 (3) Remove it.Not recommend in hard diff.
00:23:147 (3) ^
01:23:853 (3) ^
01:26:677 (3) ^
01:08:412 (10) Reduce a return.You know.

[Insane]

Spacing is good.But there is no jumping-hits.
Good diff.In another hand,I suggest you to change some line sliders to curvy ones.There is too many line sliders.XD

Nice work for just 2nd map!Fix your map and make it better~
Star~^^
Kamure
Here's another random mod, close to the one before me.

Easy
00:31:000 (1,1) - it's really bad for sliders to go across the screen
00:44:765 (1) - remove this note and extend the spinner to there

Normal
00:07:882 (1) - move 1 grid up
00:09:471 - add a note
00:11:059 (5) - move back 1 red tick and remember spacing
00:26:059 (2) - 1 grid down
01:19:177 (4,5,6) - make sure they have the same origin point (where they start is the same place)


Hard
00:56:765 (2,4,6,8) - i dont think it's a good idea to put circles here
01:13:706 - add a note

Insane
same as what the last guy said

well.......... good luck, and *star*
indyinyou
hi ~ my mod

[Easy]
00:40:177 : add note ?

[Nomal]
00:27:647 : add note ?
00:38:941 : add note ?
00:55:353 : add note ?
00:58:353 : remove slider and add 1 note ?

[Hard]
00:03:647 : slider end at 00:03:824 ?
00:16:706 : remove this note ?
00:24:912 : add note 00:25:000 add note / tp note
00:25:000 : remove this note ?
00:29:235 : add note ?
Saten
Some New Combo suggestions :D


Hard
00:55:177 (1) - New Combo?
01:19:177 (9) - ^

Insane
00:18:118 (7) - New Combo?
00:30:647 (9) - ^
00:36:294 (11) - ^
00:41:765 (8) - ^
00:47:412 (6) - ^
00:53:059 (4) - ^
01:01:882 (9) - ^
01:08:412 (12) - ^
01:11:588 (8) - ^
01:13:177 (11) - ^
01:16:000 (10) - ^
01:17:235 (4) - ^
01:18:824 (11) - ^
01:19:706 (4) - ^
01:27:471 (7) - ^


Star~!
Topic Starter
Mio_chan
Thanks for staring~ =]
I'll go working tomorrow
artpiggo
Normal
00 22 177 add clap
00 55 353 finish sound
01 06 294 whistle instead
01 13 117 add clap
01 18 824 whistle
01 19 177 add clap

Hard is fine

Star
Topic Starter
Mio_chan
Thanks for staring =] all fixed
-s4B-
[General]
delete " keion " in tags ?


[Easy]
00:06:294 (1) spinner , can you make it longer , because its easy diff :)
01:17:588 (1,2,3,4)spacing.

[Normal]
00:27:735 (5)spacing
00:30:471 (1) too far ?
00:52:529 (1) spacing
00:55:353 (1) remove new combo
01:00:647 (1) remove new combo


[Hard]
00:03:647(1) remove new combo
00:10:529 (1) spacing
00:40:529 Add a combo :)
01:07:882 (9) spacing


[Insane]
00:17:059 (1) remove new combo
00:36:647 (1) remove new combo

many got new combo problem at insane.

You need some mods :)
to fixed all your problem :D
Star for now :3
Topic Starter
Mio_chan
fixed =] Thanks for staring =]
nimi
Hey ^^

Easy
00:37:353 (x) - add a note here?
00:39:118 (5) - new combo here instead of 00:39:471 (1) is better imo

Normal
00:48:029 - remove break time

Hard
Why are KIAI sections different in this diff? owo
00:18:471 (5) - start it at 00:18:294 (5)? seems a bit off for me

Insane
Same of [Hard] about the KIAI thing
Way too streamy imo, but well :v

That's all. Star'd ^w^
Topic Starter
Mio_chan
All fixed~ thx for staring =]
frost-b-spec
thx request

[Easy]
resnap all note.


[Normal]
0.10.882(7) - spacing
0.17.235(2) - spacing

+star
Topic Starter
Mio_chan
All fixed. thanks for staring =]
Hellzero
My suggestions.

Easy
00:33:471 (4,1) - 1 grid up
00:37:353 (2,3) - 2 grid up
01:16:882 (4) - ctrl+R

Normal
00:56:412 (6) - more symmetric

Insane
00:28:000 (2) - 1 grid down

Star~
Topic Starter
Mio_chan
All fixed~ thanks for staring =]
Kyonko Hizara
:) :)
professeur layton
i like this beatmap Mio-chan
good mapping and sounds and more are being
Good Job Mio-chan^^
phonic
Good Song !!!

K - ON!!! Love




Rnked Go Go!!

Star
Cirno
真老图...
Some suggestions

[General]
tick音很烦,而且到处效果不统一... 建议把不用custom tick地方的tick全都换成Soft sampleset, 或者你懒人的话用custom把normal的tick改为soft

[Easy]
00:01:343 (1) - 为什么要new combo? 删掉new combo
00:40:167 - 加note?
00:47:931 (1) - 删new combo, 理由同前
00:57:461 - 加note? 这个节奏间隔对新手有点难
01:00:108 - 加一个1/2重复slider?
01:22:167 - 加note? 理由同00:57:461
最后那段换成spinner 也在01:28:519结束 和其他难度统一比较好

[Normal]
00:01:343 (1) - 为什么new combo....
00:15:814 - 加note?
00:19:696 (1) - 这jump毫无理由不说, 单是这样jump的存在在normal中就是不合理的,就算有理由jump. 还是老实DS吧
00:42:461 (1,1,1) - 好偷懒.....前面已经用过一次这个了 这次map成别的东西怎么样?
01:14:755 (1) - 隐藏的repeat arrow是unrankable的... 而且在normal里用遮挡也不太好

[Hard]
01:04:519 (4) - 这个有碰hp bar...
01:12:637 (3) - 我觉得这个能读出来 不过隐藏的repeat arrow是unrankable的...
01:28:167 (9) - 应该加1repeat吧
这难度有些tick sound用的不错. 我觉得没问题, 不过现在不少mat/bat认为tick不该放一般的sound. 资讯提供给你 你看着办...

[Insane]
贪食蛇风Beta2......总体上还是可以的. 我觉得你的combo有点长了 像00:02:225 (6,10) - 这些完全可以combo分开 应该会好看点(?
00:18:108 (1) - 如果你要做先直后弯的slider, 你应该中间加个红点, 像这样
00:30:637 (9,10,11,12) - 老实排成弯的也没差吧...这样直着不怎么合剩下的map
00:31:696 (2) - 同之前, 先直后弯/先弯后直中间要加红点
00:44:402 (7) - ^
01:28:519 - 应该加1note吧...
...真心不知道贪食蛇风该怎么mod 婆婆救我!

感觉和现代图风有些差异 不过总体上还是可以的. Decent map. Good luck.
Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on. More details will follow soon.
Kawayi Rika
[General]

做的还好,Easy 可以试着 换点 弯曲的slider 直线很多难看的.


[Easy]

做的还好 没什么要挑的.



[Normal]

00:06:990 (1,1,2) - 这里音效很吵,音量50%.
00:48:108 - 这里的Break time 毫无意义 建议填上.
01:11:402 (6) - slider结尾加finish.
01:21:637 (3) - slider开始加finish.


[Hard]

00:01:343 (5) - 删掉finish,加NC
00:25:167 (5) - 删掉note.(觉的很多余,不适合节奏)
00:53:578 (1,2,3) - 建议2个重叠.


[Insane]

00:29:843 (6) - 建议删掉Note.
00:38:314 (8) - ^
00:54:814 (5) - 建议删掉一个折返移动到00:54:990
01:27:461 (1) - 这里音效很吵,音量50%.

加油加油,中文不好请谅解~

good luck~ :)
Topic Starter
Mio_chan
Kawayi Rika's mod:

[General]

做的还好,Easy 可以试着 换点 弯曲的slider 直线很多难看的. try to be fixed


[Easy]

做的还好 没什么要挑的.



[Normal]

00:06:990 (1,1,2) - 这里音效很吵,音量50%. fixed
00:48:108 - 这里的Break time 毫无意义 建议填上. filled
01:11:402 (6) - slider结尾加finish. fixed
01:21:637 (3) - slider开始加finish. 我覺得加了有點怪


[Hard]

00:01:343 (5) - 删掉finish,加NC fixed
00:25:167 (5) - 删掉note.(觉的很多余,不适合节奏) fixed
00:53:578 (1,2,3) - 建议2个重叠. 沒有作改動


[Insane]

00:29:843 (6) - 建议删掉Note. fixed
00:38:314 (8) - ^ fixed
00:54:814 (5) - 建议删掉一个折返移动到00:54:990 這是跟vocal弄的
01:27:461 (1) - 这里音效很吵,音量50%.fixed

加油加油,中文不好请谅解~

[General]
tick音很烦,而且到处效果不统一... 建议把不用custom tick地方的tick全都换成Soft sampleset, 或者你懒人的话用custom把normal的tick改为soft
fixed

[Easy]
00:01:343 (1) - 为什么要new combo? 删掉new combo fixed
00:40:167 - 加note? fixed
00:47:931 (1) - 删new combo, 理由同前 fixed
00:57:461 - 加note? 这个节奏间隔对新手有点难 沒有改動...加了音我覺得好像會更難= =
01:00:108 - 加一个1/2重复slider? fixed
01:22:167 - 加note? 理由同00:57:461 同00:57:461
最后那段换成spinner 也在01:28:519结束 和其他难度统一比较好 fixed

[Normal]
00:01:343 (1) - 为什么new combo.... fixed
00:15:814 - 加note? fixed
00:19:696 (1) - 这jump毫无理由不说, 单是这样jump的存在在normal中就是不合理的,就算有理由jump. 还是老实DS吧fixed
00:42:461 (1,1,1) - 好偷懒.....前面已经用过一次这个了 这次map成别的东西怎么样? fixed
01:14:755 (1) - 隐藏的repeat arrow是unrankable的... 而且在normal里用遮挡也不太好 fixed

[Hard]
01:04:519 (4) - 这个有碰hp bar... fixed
01:12:637 (3) - 我觉得这个能读出来 不过隐藏的repeat arrow是unrankable的... fixed
01:28:167 (9) - 应该加1repeat吧 fixed
这难度有些tick sound用的不错. 我觉得没问题, 不过现在不少mat/bat认为tick不该放一般的sound. 资讯提供给你 你看着办...

[Insane]
贪食蛇风Beta2......总体上还是可以的. 我觉得你的combo有点长了 像00:02:225 (6,10) - 这些完全可以combo分开 应该会好看点(? 改動了
00:18:108 (1) - 如果你要做先直后弯的slider, 你应该中间加个红点, 像这样
fixed
00:30:637 (9,10,11,12) - 老实排成弯的也没差吧...这样直着不怎么合剩下的mapfixed
00:31:696 (2) - 同之前, 先直后弯/先弯后直中间要加红点fixed
00:44:402 (7) - ^fixed
01:28:519 - 应该加1note吧...fixed
JauiPlaY
hihi~
一些建議:

[General]
如果你愿意的話,請刪掉.osb文件

[Easy]
有unsnapped note,請resnap一下
00:42:284 (1) - 在00:44:402結束
00:44:755 (1) - 在00:45:108開始,00:47:225結束
01:23:370 (T) - 這條綠線有用...?

[Normal]
00:17:941 (T) - 這條綠線有用...?

[Hard]
01:07:872 (2) - 感覺不太合歌詞,改成個短的折返slider?

[Insane]
這slider好快...
00:07:342 (T) - 這條綠線有用...?
00:07:518 (T) - ^
00:07:695 (T) - ^
00:19:518 (T) - ^
00:25:077 (T) - ^
00:36:371 (T) - ^
00:47:666 (T) - ^
00:59:401 (T) - ^
01:11:754 (T) - ^
01:22:871 (T) - ^

加油!
Topic Starter
Mio_chan
hihi~
一些建議:

[General]
如果你愿意的話,請刪掉.osb文件 fixed- -*


以下來的all fixed
[Easy]
有unsnapped note,請resnap一下
00:42:284 (1) - 在00:44:402結束
00:44:755 (1) - 在00:45:108開始,00:47:225結束
01:23:370 (T) - 這條綠線有用...?

[Normal]
00:17:941 (T) - 這條綠線有用...?

[Hard]
01:07:872 (2) - 感覺不太合歌詞,改成個短的折返slider?

[Insane]
這slider好快...
00:07:342 (T) - 這條綠線有用...?
00:07:518 (T) - ^
00:07:695 (T) - ^
00:19:518 (T) - ^
00:25:077 (T) - ^
00:36:371 (T) - ^
00:47:666 (T) - ^
00:59:401 (T) - ^
01:11:754 (T) - ^
01:22:871 (T) - ^

加油! 55 =]
Ekaru
Insane:

01:02:755 (4,5) - There should be a jump between these two notes IMO
01:08:402 (1,2,3,4,5) - ...huh? To me, the music's screaming, "Have 3 notes 1/2 apart here, with GIGANTIC JUMPS!" Gigantic jumps that go to the music are much more satisfying than streams that ignore what the music's screaming.
01:19:696 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

That's all, really. Decent map
Topic Starter
Mio_chan
All fixed =]

Ekaru wrote:

Insane:

01:02:755 (4,5) - There should be a jump between these two notes IMO
01:08:402 (1,2,3,4,5) - ...huh? To me, the music's screaming, "Have 3 notes 1/2 apart here, with GIGANTIC JUMPS!" Gigantic jumps that go to the music are much more satisfying than streams that ignore what the music's screaming.
01:19:696 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

That's all, really. Decent map
Rizia
wow
Topic Starter
Mio_chan

Rizia wrote:

wow
居然有人留言 :)
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