Check some of that spelling on the SB, other than that, fine.
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DiamondCrash wrote:
Check some of that spelling on the SB, other than that, fine.
I think , i know which part
Hello~
mod
nicemap~
star & gl
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SPOILER
Baby Dino
01:20:426 (4,5) spacing error. I think best (4) move to center.
T-Rex
00:42:692 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) 1 grid up?(nazi)(grid lv3)
00:49:137 (6) 1 grid down (spacing error)
02:20:661 (4) 1 grid up (^)
02:41:754 (9) 1 grid down (^)
Rasyad95's
00:25:114 (1) remove new combo
00:25:348 (2) new combo
00:58:864 (1) remove new combo
00:59:098 (2) new combo
01:28:395 (1) remove new combo
01:57:926 (3) 1 grid up?(grid lv2)
01:20:426 (4,5) spacing error. I think best (4) move to center.
T-Rex
00:42:692 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) 1 grid up?(nazi)(grid lv3)
00:49:137 (6) 1 grid down (spacing error)
02:20:661 (4) 1 grid up (^)
02:41:754 (9) 1 grid down (^)
Rasyad95's
00:25:114 (1) remove new combo
00:25:348 (2) new combo
00:58:864 (1) remove new combo
00:59:098 (2) new combo
01:28:395 (1) remove new combo
01:57:926 (3) 1 grid up?(grid lv2)
nicemap~
star & gl
Topic Starter
Done tybanvi wrote:
Hello~
modSPOILERBaby Dino
01:20:426 (4,5) spacing error. I think best (4) move to center.
T-Rex
00:42:692 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) 1 grid up?(nazi)(grid lv3)
00:49:137 (6) 1 grid down (spacing error)
02:20:661 (4) 1 grid up (^)
02:41:754 (9) 1 grid down (^)
Rasyad95's
00:25:114 (1) remove new combo
00:25:348 (2) new combo
00:58:864 (1) remove new combo
00:59:098 (2) new combo
01:28:395 (1) remove new combo
01:57:926 (3) 1 grid up?(grid lv2)
nicemap~
star & gl
[SB]
4.png is awesome.
[General]
The Black color combo is hard to see. Try going with a darker gray.
[babby]
00:51:598 (1) - Kinda soon after a spinner for an easy.
For some reason when the notes finish up, the skip button isn't showing up for me. :/
[Rex]
02:38:473 (1) - The overlap here is pretty bad. Try moving this somewhere else.
[Dino]
00:58:864 (8) - Spacing?
02:49:957 (2,3) - Spacing.
4.png is awesome.
[General]
The Black color combo is hard to see. Try going with a darker gray.
[babby]
00:51:598 (1) - Kinda soon after a spinner for an easy.
For some reason when the notes finish up, the skip button isn't showing up for me. :/
[Rex]
02:38:473 (1) - The overlap here is pretty bad. Try moving this somewhere else.
[Dino]
00:58:864 (8) - Spacing?
02:49:957 (2,3) - Spacing.
Hai, sorry for the long wait.
Here's my mod~
[Overall]
Could you map [Baby Dino] to full length?
You... Need to fix 4.png. What is that? >_>
[Baby Dino]
Fine.
[T-Rex]
Fine.
[Rasyad95's Dino]
Why is there no preview point for this difficulty?
Other than that, fine.
*star*
Good job.
Here's my mod~
[Overall]
Could you map [Baby Dino] to full length?
You... Need to fix 4.png. What is that? >_>
[Baby Dino]
Fine.
[T-Rex]
Fine.
[Rasyad95's Dino]
Why is there no preview point for this difficulty?
Other than that, fine.
*star*
Good job.
General
That lyrics SB is horrible. At least get all the grammar and lyrics right, find them online. Also, make the lyric lines fade in instead of just appearing.
Don't use completely black and white circles, they look horrible. Make them dark/light grey.
Baby Dino
00:48:903 (2) - Start a tick before
Map to the end, shortened easy diffs are lazy :/
T-Rex
Those streams :/
01:36:832 (2) - move back a tick
01:51:598 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This isn't nearly as sexy as your last stream
Rasyad95's Dino
This diff has no preview point that I can see
00:22:536 - Add beat?
00:30:739 (1,2) - Remove a repeat from 1,Move 2 out of the way.
00:46:442 - Add beat?
01:42:457 (1,2,3) - Spaaaaccinnngg
01:51:129 (7) - Move under previous stack
01:53:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really awkward. Remap to the music pwease
That lyrics SB is horrible. At least get all the grammar and lyrics right, find them online. Also, make the lyric lines fade in instead of just appearing.
Don't use completely black and white circles, they look horrible. Make them dark/light grey.
Baby Dino
00:48:903 (2) - Start a tick before
Map to the end, shortened easy diffs are lazy :/
T-Rex
Those streams :/
01:36:832 (2) - move back a tick
01:51:598 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This isn't nearly as sexy as your last stream
Rasyad95's Dino
This diff has no preview point that I can see
00:22:536 - Add beat?
00:30:739 (1,2) - Remove a repeat from 1,Move 2 out of the way.
00:46:442 - Add beat?
01:42:457 (1,2,3) - Spaaaaccinnngg
01:51:129 (7) - Move under previous stack
01:53:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really awkward. Remap to the music pwease
[General]:
star for your first try, it's not that bad.
- I wanna complain about the BG and the circle color, they doen't fit at all
- 00:49:489 inheret this section in all your difss.
- Rasyad95 should be added to all diffs' tags
- 01:05:661 (4,5) - switch to grid level 3 (ctrl+1) and move them 1 grid left
- placing note by lyrics makes this diff hard to play for me, really
- 00:36:598 (5) - new combo
- 00:46:676 (T) - add a note here
- 01:51:833 (3) - 1 grid right
- 00:28:864 (4,5,6) - spacing
- 00:30:739 (1,2) - place (2) exactly on (1) plz
- 00:58:395 (6,7,8) - spacing
- 01:01:442 (3,4,1) - ^
- 01:50:778 (4,5,6,7) - stack all of them plz
star for your first try, it's not that bad.
[quote="RandomJibberish"]General
That lyrics SB is horrible. At least get all the grammar and lyrics right, find them online. Also, make the lyric lines fade in instead of just appearing.
Don't use completely black and white circles, they look horrible. Make them dark/light grey./quote]
That. And Text4... really?
Baby Dino
00:11:286 (8) - Spacing
00:49:723 (1) - Big spinners can't adjust to the next beat quickly, either move the beats or replace this with a slider or something.
01:00:036 (2) - Move 1/2 back and maybe extend by 1/2
Map to the enders
T-Rex
Dem streams suck ridiculous ones don't belong in a Hard
02:39:176 (2) - Use (1) but flipped
Blah
That lyrics SB is horrible. At least get all the grammar and lyrics right, find them online. Also, make the lyric lines fade in instead of just appearing.
Don't use completely black and white circles, they look horrible. Make them dark/light grey./quote]
That. And Text4... really?
Baby Dino
00:11:286 (8) - Spacing
00:49:723 (1) - Big spinners can't adjust to the next beat quickly, either move the beats or replace this with a slider or something.
01:00:036 (2) - Move 1/2 back and maybe extend by 1/2
Map to the enders
T-Rex
Dem streams suck ridiculous ones don't belong in a Hard
02:39:176 (2) - Use (1) but flipped
Blah
[Mod Infos]
Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]
[Baby Dino]
Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
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[General]
- • The SB images contains unnecessary trasparency.
• Add "Rasyad95" into Tags (tags should be the same on all diffs)
[Baby Dino]
- • 00:07:067 (x) - Add a circle
• 00:10:583 (6,7) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)
• 00:13:161 (2,3) - Move 1/2 earlier
• 00:14:333 (x) - Add a circle
• 00:18:317 (x) - ^
• 00:30:739 (1,2) - Spacing
• 00:39:879 (x) - Add a circle
• 00:49:489 (red timing section) - Inherit previous timing setting
• 00:53:942 (x) - Add a circle
• 00:56:286 (3,4) - Move 1/2 earlier
• 00:57:458 (x) - Add a circle
• 01:00:036 (2) - Move 1/2 earlier
• 01:01:208 (x) - Add a circle
• 01:02:848 (1) - Add a repetition
• 01:09:176 (2) - Move 1/2 later
- • Overall Difficulty: 8
• 00:49:489 (red timing section) - Inherit previous timing setting
• 01:03:317 (4) - Add a repetition
• 01:04:254 (x) - Add a circle
• 01:04:723 (x) - ^
• 01:37:536 (3) - Add a repetition
• 01:43:629 8x) - Add a circle
• 02:06:598 (x) - ^
• 02:36:129 (x) - ^
- • Add a preview point
• 00:16:911 (x) - Add a circle
• 00:17:379 (x) - ^
• 00:17:848 (x) - ^
• 00:46:442 (x) - ^
• 01:03:786 (x) - ^
• 01:04:254 (x) - ^
• 01:04:723 (x) - ^
• 01:24:645 (x) - ^
• 01:24:879 (x) - ^
• 01:25:114 (x) - ^
• 02:05:660 (x) - ^
• 02:06:129 (x) - ^
• 02:06:598 (x) - ^
• 02:13:629 (x) - ^
• 02:17:379 (x) - ^
• 02:24:879 (x) - ^
• 02:28:629 (x) - ^
• 02:32:379 (x) - ^
• 02:36:129 (x) - ^
Wow, this has to be the best first map I've seen, great job! 
I only picked out a couple of things that would would make your map play better:
T-Rex - 02:53:708 (1,1,2) I'd take out these last three notes, as they aren't intuitive for the player to hit, since there's no beat during that section.
Rasyad95's Dino - 02:53:707 (1,2,3) Same as above.
*Starred because this map is very good and deserves ranking soon
I only picked out a couple of things that would would make your map play better:
T-Rex - 02:53:708 (1,1,2) I'd take out these last three notes, as they aren't intuitive for the player to hit, since there's no beat during that section.
Rasyad95's Dino - 02:53:707 (1,2,3) Same as above.
*Starred because this map is very good and deserves ranking soon
Modding request via in-game PM.
sorry tadi keasyikan main jadi lupa
[Baby Dino]
Add "Rasyad95" to the tags on this difficulty.
00:18:317 (3,4) - The spacing shocked me... Jumps on easy difficulty is not a good idea
00:26:286 (4) - Make it symmetrical? (use lv3 grid, delete the second waypoint, and adjust)
00:27:223 (1) - Finish at end?
00:30:739 (1) - Make it symmetrical? (lv3 grid, move the first waypoint one grid right and two or three grid up)
00:38:473 (1) - Make it symmetrical?
00:48:083 (1,2) - I think it's better like this... but I don't know if 3/4 notes are allowed for an Easy or not
00:55:348 (2,3) - I personally don't like the jump here
[T-Rex]
00:16:442 (3) - Add a repeat on this note, and adjust 00:17:145 (4,5).This is just my pattern suggestion, just use our creativity.
00:30:036 (6) - For a perfect triangle, (maybe) one grid down. I'm not sure.
01:20:426 (4) - Vertical flip and make it symmetrical?
01:28:629 (7) - Add finish?
02:19:254 (9) - Make it wave? Slider yang "tanggung" begini nggak enak dilihatnya
02:34:254 (6) - ^
02:38:473 (1) - Shift into triangle pattern?
[Rasyad95's Dino]
Tested. Nothing really wrong about the spacing or patterns, but this map is quite overmapped... An Insane doesn't have to be overmapped with lots of streams. For example, see Shuna's Insane on my map, it doesn't have too much streams but still fun to play.
Star!
sorry tadi keasyikan main jadi lupa
[Baby Dino]
Add "Rasyad95" to the tags on this difficulty.
00:18:317 (3,4) - The spacing shocked me... Jumps on easy difficulty is not a good idea
00:26:286 (4) - Make it symmetrical? (use lv3 grid, delete the second waypoint, and adjust)
00:27:223 (1) - Finish at end?
00:30:739 (1) - Make it symmetrical? (lv3 grid, move the first waypoint one grid right and two or three grid up)
00:38:473 (1) - Make it symmetrical?
00:48:083 (1,2) - I think it's better like this... but I don't know if 3/4 notes are allowed for an Easy or not
00:55:348 (2,3) - I personally don't like the jump here
[T-Rex]
00:16:442 (3) - Add a repeat on this note, and adjust 00:17:145 (4,5).This is just my pattern suggestion, just use our creativity.
00:30:036 (6) - For a perfect triangle, (maybe) one grid down. I'm not sure.
01:20:426 (4) - Vertical flip and make it symmetrical?
01:28:629 (7) - Add finish?
02:19:254 (9) - Make it wave? Slider yang "tanggung" begini nggak enak dilihatnya
02:34:254 (6) - ^
02:38:473 (1) - Shift into triangle pattern?
[Rasyad95's Dino]
Tested. Nothing really wrong about the spacing or patterns, but this map is quite overmapped... An Insane doesn't have to be overmapped with lots of streams. For example, see Shuna's Insane on my map, it doesn't have too much streams but still fun to play.
Star!
•Overall•
Offset : 4.250 ~ Resnap All Notes.
Remove the .osb file in the song's folder and then Full Submit.
•T-Rex•
00:43:629 (8) - 1 grid down?
01:25:348 (1,2) - 1 grid down?
02:06:833 (1) - Jump?
02:17:848 (5) - New combo?
02:48:786 (4) - 1 grid left?
02:50:426 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:51:129 (1) - Remove new combo.
•Baby Dino•
00:14:333 (4) - Distance error.
00:18:786 (4) - ^
00:56:051 (3) - ^
•Rasyad95's Dino•
Fix the offset (red timing section) in this difficulty.
00:43:278 (8) - New combo.
01:04:254 (7) - ^
01:04:957 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:348 (1) - This slider should start 1/2 later.
01:25:113 (12) - Distance error.
01:49:957 (1) - Move this note on the centre-grid.
02:52:770 (1) - ^
+Star
Offset : 4.250 ~ Resnap All Notes.
Remove the .osb file in the song's folder and then Full Submit.
•T-Rex•
00:43:629 (8) - 1 grid down?
01:25:348 (1,2) - 1 grid down?
02:06:833 (1) - Jump?
02:17:848 (5) - New combo?
02:48:786 (4) - 1 grid left?
02:50:426 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:51:129 (1) - Remove new combo.
•Baby Dino•
00:14:333 (4) - Distance error.
00:18:786 (4) - ^
00:56:051 (3) - ^
•Rasyad95's Dino•
Fix the offset (red timing section) in this difficulty.
00:43:278 (8) - New combo.
01:04:254 (7) - ^
01:04:957 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:348 (1) - This slider should start 1/2 later.
01:25:113 (12) - Distance error.
01:49:957 (1) - Move this note on the centre-grid.
02:52:770 (1) - ^
+Star
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3
If my mod was helpful, feed me with kudosu.
[General]
You need a Normal Difficulty from my point of wiev.
[Baby]
Can you tell me which Distance spacing ahve you used? there's no one okay in this map D:
00:04:723 (1) - Using grid level 3, make this more symmetrical.
00:15:973 (6,1) - Switch combos.
[Rasyad]
00:07:653 (5) - Delete.
00:52:418 (4) - ^.
01:58:746 (6) - ^.
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3
If my mod was helpful, feed me with kudosu.
[General]
You need a Normal Difficulty from my point of wiev.
[Baby]
Can you tell me which Distance spacing ahve you used? there's no one okay in this map D:
00:04:723 (1) - Using grid level 3, make this more symmetrical.
00:15:973 (6,1) - Switch combos.
[Rasyad]
00:07:653 (5) - Delete.
00:52:418 (4) - ^.
01:58:746 (6) - ^.
Hello.
[General]
Combo colours..they're just bad.Well,nvm.
[Baby Dino]
00:12:926 (2) - Jump on easy? No way.
00:14:333 (4) - Fix distance.
00:27:223 (1) - ^
01:01:911 (4) - ^
[Hard]
Some jumps are confusing,like this:
01:45:973 (1) - Like this,yeah.
Well,I think it fits,wait for BAT's final word then.
But you better fix this:
02:06:598 (7) - Ugh..put closer to 02:06:833 (1) then.It's way too confusing.
[Rasyad95's Dino]
00:21:364 (1) - Fix distance.
02:24:879 (4) - ^.It should be somewhere in the middle between 02:24:410 (3) and 02:25:348 (1),otherwise it's confusing.
[General]
Combo colours..they're just bad.Well,nvm.
[Baby Dino]
00:12:926 (2) - Jump on easy? No way.
00:14:333 (4) - Fix distance.
00:27:223 (1) - ^
01:01:911 (4) - ^
[Hard]
Some jumps are confusing,like this:
01:45:973 (1) - Like this,yeah.
Well,I think it fits,wait for BAT's final word then.
But you better fix this:
02:06:598 (7) - Ugh..put closer to 02:06:833 (1) then.It's way too confusing.
[Rasyad95's Dino]
00:21:364 (1) - Fix distance.
02:24:879 (4) - ^.It should be somewhere in the middle between 02:24:410 (3) and 02:25:348 (1),otherwise it's confusing.
Hi~
[Easy]
00:23:473 (1,2,3) - Why the spacing change here ?
[T-Rex]
02:06:598 (7) - Remove this note?
[Rasyad's Dino]
00:07:536 (4,5,6) - This triplet does not fit.
00:11:520 (8,9,10) - ^
00:23:473 (1) - Spacing
star
[Easy]
00:23:473 (1,2,3) - Why the spacing change here ?
[T-Rex]
02:06:598 (7) - Remove this note?
[Rasyad's Dino]
00:07:536 (4,5,6) - This triplet does not fit.
00:11:520 (8,9,10) - ^
00:23:473 (1) - Spacing
star
~Overall~
- Offset: 4720
- Preview point must be on same place on all difficulties
- KIAI sections should be the same on all difficulties.
- Removing .osb is optional. You can ignore it.
- 00:06:360 (2,3,4,5) - 1 grid down.
- 00:30:735 (1) - Remove new combo.
- 00:59:095 (1,2) - Spacing.
- 00:15:036 (4) - 2 grid right. | 2 grid down.
- 02:46:676 (1) - Remove new combo.
- 02:47:379 (1) - ^
- 01:02:848 (1,2,3) - Stack
- 01:07:418 (2,3) - ^
- 01:26:285 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - 1 grid right.
- 01:33:785 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Some wrong stacks here.
- 01:44:332 (2,3,4) - ^
- 01:45:973 (1,2) - ^
- 01:52:770 - Timing section seems to be useless. Remove it.
- 02:36:598 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Stacks.
- 02:48:785 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^ Fu.
The difficulty gap between Baby Dino and other 2 is too big imo.<_<
Other than that all fine.
Starrrrrrrrrr
Other than that all fine.
Starrrrrrrrrr
[Baby Dino]
Black Circles make people confuse in such BG. Same as grey circles. White is good
Map seems to me good.
[T-Rez]
00:49:723 - simmetry*
01:51:598 - ^ like this
[Final difficulty]
This is good :3
Star~
*
Black Circles make people confuse in such BG. Same as grey circles. White is good
Map seems to me good.
[T-Rez]
00:49:723 - simmetry*
01:51:598 - ^ like this
[Final difficulty]
This is good :3
Star~
*
Hi,
[baby dino]
fine to me
00:32:145 (5) - 1/2 gird left and line up with (4)?
01:12:223 (3) - new combo?
[t-rex]
also fine
00:48:903 (4-7) - don't think all those claps fit, but I'm not good with hitsounds
01:41:989 (1) - no new combo?
[rasyad95's dino]
also fine
kiai is different from the others, but no big deal
nice map
[baby dino]
fine to me
00:32:145 (5) - 1/2 gird left and line up with (4)?
01:12:223 (3) - new combo?
[t-rex]
also fine
00:48:903 (4-7) - don't think all those claps fit, but I'm not good with hitsounds
01:41:989 (1) - no new combo?
[rasyad95's dino]
also fine
kiai is different from the others, but no big deal
nice map
*Star*
Meh
Kiai during the roar is.. unnecessary :x
diff names are silly ><~
Baby Dino-
00:10:583 (6,7) - felt there were ganna be claps here... maybe just add clap to 7 at least?
Hm.. follow vocal, but fairly easy
Okay
T-Rex- score difference is big ><
Had some suggestions, but this diff is fine as it is
Good
Rasyad95's- hmm.. I would prefer higher OD, lower drain, but that's just me
You used grid level 2, yet some parts still look inconsistent
01:10:114 (1) - ... add note to where this starts and have the slider start on the white tick instead?
01:41:168 (2) - this note feels too extra? remove or add hitsounds to the combo before to make it sound like your own beats?
01:43:278 (4) - this feels extra, and sounds extra, remove please
The hitsound you have do sound okay, but the whole map could be more consistent with the hitsound pattern
Lots of extra notes, most played okay though...
Fair
Hmm...
Kiai during the roar is.. unnecessary :x
diff names are silly ><~
Baby Dino-
00:10:583 (6,7) - felt there were ganna be claps here... maybe just add clap to 7 at least?
Hm.. follow vocal, but fairly easy
Okay
T-Rex- score difference is big ><
Had some suggestions, but this diff is fine as it is
Good
Rasyad95's- hmm.. I would prefer higher OD, lower drain, but that's just me
You used grid level 2, yet some parts still look inconsistent
01:10:114 (1) - ... add note to where this starts and have the slider start on the white tick instead?
01:41:168 (2) - this note feels too extra? remove or add hitsounds to the combo before to make it sound like your own beats?
01:43:278 (4) - this feels extra, and sounds extra, remove please
The hitsound you have do sound okay, but the whole map could be more consistent with the hitsound pattern
Lots of extra notes, most played okay though...
Fair
Hmm...
[Baby Dino]
00:48:903 (2) - SUGGESTION: start 1/4 later, but end the same place, I believe 1/4 blue notes are pretty tough for Easy (it doesn't really matter, if the player uses the approach circle, but if they are following the music, it'll be hard to hit for beginners).
00:54:411 (1) - remove the new combo
00:55:348 (2) - New combo (if above is done, which it should be)
[T-Rex]
The preview point is different. It's not a big difference, but the maps must have the same preview time
01:36:833 (2) - move 1/4 back?
[Rasyad95]
cool
it's good for a first map actually, good job
00:48:903 (2) - SUGGESTION: start 1/4 later, but end the same place, I believe 1/4 blue notes are pretty tough for Easy (it doesn't really matter, if the player uses the approach circle, but if they are following the music, it'll be hard to hit for beginners).
00:54:411 (1) - remove the new combo
00:55:348 (2) - New combo (if above is done, which it should be)
[T-Rex]
The preview point is different. It's not a big difference, but the maps must have the same preview time
01:36:833 (2) - move 1/4 back?
[Rasyad95]
cool
it's good for a first map actually, good job
Topic Starter
Thanks~eee wrote:
[Baby Dino]
00:48:903 (2) - SUGGESTION: start 1/4 later, but end the same place, I believe 1/4 blue notes are pretty tough for Easy (it doesn't really matter, if the player uses the approach circle, but if they are following the music, it'll be hard to hit for beginners).
00:54:411 (1) - remove the new combo
00:55:348 (2) - New combo (if above is done, which it should be) Done
[T-Rex]
The preview point is different. It's not a big difference, but the maps must have the same preview time
01:36:833 (2) - move 1/4 back? idk it feels weird if I move it
[Rasyad95]
cool
it's good for a first map actually, good job
Eh... just as i thought. The map itself is fine, at least i didnt saw anything that this map wouldnt be ranked.
Mod that could help the map be better i didnt see much either imo (in fact, i deleted the small mod post i had cause its just way too nazi/unnoticeable)
And btw, avoid getting you map over modded, it will just make your map worse and worse imo
Mod that could help the map be better i didnt see much either imo (in fact, i deleted the small mod post i had cause its just way too nazi/unnoticeable)
And btw, avoid getting you map over modded, it will just make your map worse and worse imo
Hi!
[Easy]
00:59:801 (2) - Spacing, try not to have jumps on Easy please.
The rest was fine.
Can't believe this is your first map. Wonderfully done.
Star and good luck with your first map!
[Easy]
00:59:801 (2) - Spacing, try not to have jumps on Easy please.
The rest was fine.
Can't believe this is your first map. Wonderfully done.
Star and good luck with your first map!
Topic Starter
TYDJ KRZY wrote:
Hi!
[Easy]
00:59:801 (2) - Spacing, try not to have jumps on Easy please.Done
The rest was fine.
Can't believe this is your first map. Wonderfully done.
Star and good luck with your first map!
Edit:Wow a kudos star thanks Rasyad95
General:
-- Grey BG, black and grey combo colors... I guess it's okay but the colors are kinda... dull?
-- Claps are too loud imo, maybe reduce the hitsound volume a little.
Baby Dino:
-- You could map to the end I guess.
00:12:458 (x) - Note?
00:12:926 (x) - Note. Definitely expected one here.
00:43:629 (3) - Remove finish from the end.
00:55:348 (1) - This looks awful in game, down 1 square (grid 3).
01:30:739 (3,4) - Spacing! (Too close)
01:31:208 (4) - x0.5 feels weird.
02:00:973 (1) - Keep kiai active here.
You might want to add a few more note where you left gaps in the vocal.
T-Rex:
01:36:833 (2) - This should start at 01:36:715 if your following the vocal.
01:37:301 (x) - Note?
01:40:348 (1,2,3) - Overlap with 01:39:411 (4) - is a bit weird and makes 01:40:700 (2) - harder to see imo.
01:46:442 (3,4,5) - Sounds weird, maybe have 01:46:442 (3) - as a single note.
02:36:129 (5) - Delete? (Following previous pattern)
It's okay but your patterns seem quite disorganized at times examples:
00:46:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It's all misaligned and overlaps with the previous combo
01:45:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Clustered, and again the overlaps look a bit messy.
Yeah, that's my opinion, feel free to ignore it. ^_^
Rasyad95's Dino:
00:36:130 (10) - Weird position, maybe put it at the end of 00:35:895 (9) -
01:07:419 (2) - Delete? To me this feels out of place. (Or something like 01:10:348 (7) - would be good)
01:27:926 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:32:145 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Stream doesn't really fit here, I guess it's okay though.
01:33:786 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:40:700 (4,1) - Spacing? (Too close)
01:45:973 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rhythm? Maybe remove a few claps and it will sound better.
02:30:270 (1,2,3) - Sounds weird, imo just delete 02:30:270 (1,2) - the triple atm doesn't fit the music =/
02:37:770 (8,9,10) - ^ same thing. But new combo 02:37:770 (8) - to be consistent with ^
02:45:270 (x) - Note.
02:52:770 (1) - Triple doesn't fit, and this looks weird after a spinner. Maybe just have a note at 02:53:004 -
Overmapped at parts. It's okay, but played odd when you weren't following the rhythm of the song.
All opinions/suggestions, feel free to ignore. Star.
-- Grey BG, black and grey combo colors... I guess it's okay but the colors are kinda... dull?
-- Claps are too loud imo, maybe reduce the hitsound volume a little.
Baby Dino:
-- You could map to the end I guess.
00:12:458 (x) - Note?
00:12:926 (x) - Note. Definitely expected one here.
00:43:629 (3) - Remove finish from the end.
00:55:348 (1) - This looks awful in game, down 1 square (grid 3).
01:30:739 (3,4) - Spacing! (Too close)
01:31:208 (4) - x0.5 feels weird.
02:00:973 (1) - Keep kiai active here.
You might want to add a few more note where you left gaps in the vocal.
T-Rex:
01:36:833 (2) - This should start at 01:36:715 if your following the vocal.
01:37:301 (x) - Note?
01:40:348 (1,2,3) - Overlap with 01:39:411 (4) - is a bit weird and makes 01:40:700 (2) - harder to see imo.
01:46:442 (3,4,5) - Sounds weird, maybe have 01:46:442 (3) - as a single note.
02:36:129 (5) - Delete? (Following previous pattern)
It's okay but your patterns seem quite disorganized at times examples:
00:46:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It's all misaligned and overlaps with the previous combo
01:45:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Clustered, and again the overlaps look a bit messy.
Yeah, that's my opinion, feel free to ignore it. ^_^
Rasyad95's Dino:
00:36:130 (10) - Weird position, maybe put it at the end of 00:35:895 (9) -
01:07:419 (2) - Delete? To me this feels out of place. (Or something like 01:10:348 (7) - would be good)
01:27:926 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:32:145 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Stream doesn't really fit here, I guess it's okay though.
01:33:786 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:40:700 (4,1) - Spacing? (Too close)
01:45:973 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rhythm? Maybe remove a few claps and it will sound better.
02:30:270 (1,2,3) - Sounds weird, imo just delete 02:30:270 (1,2) - the triple atm doesn't fit the music =/
02:37:770 (8,9,10) - ^ same thing. But new combo 02:37:770 (8) - to be consistent with ^
02:45:270 (x) - Note.
02:52:770 (1) - Triple doesn't fit, and this looks weird after a spinner. Maybe just have a note at 02:53:004 -
Overmapped at parts. It's okay, but played odd when you weren't following the rhythm of the song.
All opinions/suggestions, feel free to ignore. Star.
Rasyad95's Dino
01:49:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this combo kinda confuse me @.@ specially (4,5)
02:44:098 (9) - separate a bit from 8 :p
02:45:270 - add note?
T-Rex
00:46:676 (3) - move to prev blue tick
00:47:262 - add note
01:45:504 (8,1) - reduce a bit that jump
01:46:442 (3) - move to prev blue tick (fix spacing after change this)
Baby Dino
This difficulty was hard to follow @.@ even been the easiest diff
maybe that's because you follow the vocals, and with this type of song, definitely is way to easy follow the music
anyway you don't have to change it, is just my opinion ><
00:13:629 (3) - wrong spacing
01:01:442 (3) - same
01:31:208 (4) - same (look time line)
01:53:473 (1) - to near to the spinner for easy diff ><
Star!
01:49:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this combo kinda confuse me @.@ specially (4,5)
02:44:098 (9) - separate a bit from 8 :p
02:45:270 - add note?
T-Rex
00:46:676 (3) - move to prev blue tick
00:47:262 - add note
01:45:504 (8,1) - reduce a bit that jump
01:46:442 (3) - move to prev blue tick (fix spacing after change this)
Baby Dino
This difficulty was hard to follow @.@ even been the easiest diff
maybe that's because you follow the vocals, and with this type of song, definitely is way to easy follow the music
anyway you don't have to change it, is just my opinion ><
00:13:629 (3) - wrong spacing
01:01:442 (3) - same
01:31:208 (4) - same (look time line)
01:53:473 (1) - to near to the spinner for easy diff ><
Star!
Ayey, bagus kok
Topic Starter
First of all thanks braian5234 and koujiro nonomiya for the stars
Thanks guys
DoneShulin wrote:
Mod
DoneLissette wrote:
Mod
Thanks guys
Topic Starter
Udah 44 >.>Rasyad95 wrote:
Kumpulin Star yey, naikin priority...
Hi!~
Remember these are just suggestions that you can totally ignore
~Baby Dino~
00:06:364 (2,3,4,5) - This would be fine if this wasn't the easiest diff, but antijumps are pretty confusing so I suggest fixing the spacing here (though if you know the song well it can be intuitive...)
01:45:973 (1) - This slow down feels a bit weird... =x
01:53:473 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner end for being the easiest diff =(
02:04:723 (1,2,3) - Fix spacing in this whole combo.
~T-Rex~
00:17:145 (4,5) - Change positions? (4) makes a sudden weird jump >:
01:27:926 (4) - Nazi!! This isn't stacked properly under (3).
02:27:223 (1) - Nazi!! This isn't stacked properly under (5)'s end.
~Rasyad95's Dino~
02:07:770 (6) - Fix Spacing.
02:20:192 (2,3) - Try to mantain the same spacing (or something intuitive enough) on the same combo >.<
02:40:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make the spacing more even here.
Nice map ^^ Good luck with it!!
*star*
Remember these are just suggestions that you can totally ignore
~Baby Dino~
00:06:364 (2,3,4,5) - This would be fine if this wasn't the easiest diff, but antijumps are pretty confusing so I suggest fixing the spacing here (though if you know the song well it can be intuitive...)
01:45:973 (1) - This slow down feels a bit weird... =x
01:53:473 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner end for being the easiest diff =(
02:04:723 (1,2,3) - Fix spacing in this whole combo.
~T-Rex~
00:17:145 (4,5) - Change positions? (4) makes a sudden weird jump >:
01:27:926 (4) - Nazi!! This isn't stacked properly under (3).
02:27:223 (1) - Nazi!! This isn't stacked properly under (5)'s end.
~Rasyad95's Dino~
02:07:770 (6) - Fix Spacing.
02:20:192 (2,3) - Try to mantain the same spacing (or something intuitive enough) on the same combo >.<
02:40:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make the spacing more even here.
Nice map ^^ Good luck with it!!
*star*
Topic Starter
Thanks beuchi <3Beuchi-chan wrote:
Hi!~
Remember these are just suggestions that you can totally ignore
~Baby Dino~
00:06:364 (2,3,4,5) - This would be fine if this wasn't the easiest diff, but antijumps are pretty confusing so I suggest fixing the spacing here (though if you know the song well it can be intuitive...)
01:45:973 (1) - This slow down feels a bit weird... =x
01:53:473 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner end for being the easiest diff =(
02:04:723 (1,2,3) - Fix spacing in this whole combo.
Done
~T-Rex~
00:17:145 (4,5) - Change positions? (4) makes a sudden weird jump >:
01:27:926 (4) - Nazi!! This isn't stacked properly under (3).
02:27:223 (1) - Nazi!! This isn't stacked properly under (5)'s end.
Done
~Rasyad95's Dino~
02:07:770 (6) - Fix Spacing.
02:20:192 (2,3) - Try to mantain the same spacing (or something intuitive enough) on the same combo >.<
02:40:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make the spacing more even here.
Done
Nice map ^^ Good luck with it!!
*star*
[Baby Dino]
02:08:122 - Unused timing section here. Delete unless you forgot to enable Kiai at 02:05:661.
02:08:122 - Unused timing section here. Delete unless you forgot to enable Kiai at 02:05:661.
Topic Starter
DoneMafiamaster wrote:
[Baby Dino]
02:08:122 - Unused timing section here. Delete unless you forgot to enable Kiai at 02:05:661.
Thanks Mafiamaster <3
Dinosaur.
Well, I had a few difficulty concerns, but I didn't notice the harder difficulty was from a guest. I also thought about having to update the map to play, but that happens with all Ke$ha maps and should be fine.
I'm ranking this.
I'm ranking this.
Random, I know, but this version of the song sounds a lot different than the version I have. Same with a few other Ke$ha beatmaps...Are there multiple versions of the CD or something?