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Sallad4ever
2,942 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Ok ayo mulai :)

[General]
- Ok pertama2 set preview point, menurutku di 00:51:364 bagus
- Wa masih dapet osb filenya, hapus terus full submit lagi
- Combo color 1 ama 2 terlihat sama ganti atau hapus

[Baby Dino]
- Wa setuju ama Van, map diff ini sampe 01:21:598
- Kiai timenya taruh di chorus cocok nih
00:48:083 (1,2,3) - Note di blue tick agak membingungkan mungkin di ganti long slider aja

[T-Rex]
- hapus break antara 01:39:411 (4) ~ 01:41:520 (1)
01:51:598 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wa ga terlalu suka ama ini, tapi karena ini hard jd gpp maalah personal taste aja sih

[Rasyad45's Dino]
Stream map :o (g terlalu jago stream wa)
00:24:879 (7,8,9,10) - seperti yg van bilang lagi spacing tiba2 kembali ke normal g terlalu bagus
02:18:785 (10) - break yg terlalu tiba2 lyricnya masih lanjut lho (kalau ngikutin lyric)

Yap masih harus di betulin lagi coba cari modder buat ngemod
OK Good Luck :)
Real1
968 posts
Joined September 2008
Real1
Ohi!

[General]
Idk what album this is from, but put the album title in the tags field if there is any!

[Baby Dino]
Lower the HP drain! This is an Easy!! :o
00:30:739 (1) - Opinion: Sounds better if it ends at the next white tick.

[T-rex]
Is fine!

[Rasyad45]
00:19:254 (5,6) - Why 1/8 beats?
00:18:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - We want some spicey sound effects!
From 00:51:598 (1) - to 02:48:316 (5) - - There are absolutely no hitsounds. That's almost 2 minutes. There is a change in sampleset, but still, no hitsounds in all of this section!!
bearing019
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
bearing019
Baby;
00:16:676 (1) - I feel like there should be something before here; at 00:15:973, perhaps?
00:48:083 (1,2,3) - This is hard to read, and I don't like the 1/4s.
Map this diff to 01:21:598.

T-Rex;
00:23:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - LESS WHISTLES PLEASE
00:49:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:25:348 (1) - to 01:29:801 (4) - ^
01:51:598 (1) - to 01:53:473 (1) - ^

Dino;
00:19:313 (6) - This has no reason to be.
00:46:325 (2) - 1/4 later.
00:46:676 (3) - 1/4 earlier.
There's a lot of spacing I wouldn't be happy with here...

Tell me when you've got that done and I'll give ya a star.
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Done
Rasyad95
224 posts
Joined August 2009
Rasyad95

VanMoNky wrote:

Rasyad95 wrote:

00:49:723 (1) - Kalau kamu suka dengan stream panjang, slider ini kan bisa digantikan stream. Kalau bahasa hokkiennya
Istirahat dulu, biar ada kesempatan bisa nge-pause, soalnya inetku suka mati, jadinya aku buat slider ini supaya bisa nyalain inet lagi...
Walah, masaq karena masalah pribadi jadi harus mengorbankan diff?
Aku ga suka map yg terlalu banyak Stream, ingat waktu kubilang Miracle gumiracle-mu? Aku kurang suka yg Insane di situ, terlalu byk stream...
Arusha Shuna
1,793 posts
Joined August 2009
Arusha Shuna
Request Accepted
!WALL OF TEXT ALERT!

SPOILER
General
you're using too many clap hitsounds. standard no hitsounds sometimes OFTEN sounds better that claps/whistles
delete Dinosaur from Rasayd95's diff (you don't need a permission from the diff maker to add or delete tags/source in a GD)
Baby Dino
00:10:817 (7,8) - move 1 Lv2 grid to the right (turn off dist snap)
00:18:786 (3) - spacing issue, suggestion : stack with (2)
00:37:536 (5) - move 1 Lv3 grid to the right
00:41:286 (4) - move 1 Lv2 grid to the right
00:42:926 (x) - add a note
00:45:973 (7) - reverse selection this (select this then Ctrl+R), also add new combo
00:47:379 (8) - move this above (7)'s slider start
01:05:192 (3) - move 1 Lv3 grid down
01:05:661 (4) - move 1 Lv2 grid to the left
01:08:473 (3) - add new combo
01:12:223 (3,4,5,6) - stack them, it's a little too much for an easy diff
T-Rex
00:06:833 (1,2) - move 1 Lv3 grid to the right (turn off dist. snap)
00:31:208 (2) - spacing issue, also fix (3)'s spacing after fixing this one
00:38:004 (x) - add a note?
00:45:153 (4) - align this slider with (3)'s slider then...
00:45:504 (5) - put this slider between (3) and (4)
00:57:458 (4) - add a new combo
01:36:832 (2) - move this to the next white tick
01:37:536 (3) - spacing issue
01:39:411 (4) - ^
add something between 01:40:114 - 01:41:285
01:56:754 (6) - move 1 Lv3 grid down
01:59:801 (7) - move 1 Lv3 grid left
02:09:879 (6) - move 2 lv3 grid to the left then move 2 Lv3 grid up
02:10:817 (2) - align this with (1)
02:53:708 (1,1,2) - put them ALL in the center (turn off dist snap)
Rasyad95's Dino
00:16:676 (4) - spacing issue
00:18:083 (1,2,3,4) - they doesn't sound very good, change them
00:25:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is a big NO, yes you MAY think this spacing is good, but a rankable map should be readable by others not just by yourself, in short, CHANGE THEM
00:28:395 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - they doesn't sound very good, change them
00:31:207 (2) - spacing issue
00:33:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - i KNOW you like streams, but they don't fit well with the music. Not with any instrument in it. In short, CHANGE THEM!
00:42:223 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1 prefer a normal 5-note stream rather than to be placed like this
00:57:223 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is a big NO, yes you MAY think this spacing is good, but a rankable map should be readable by others not just by yourself, in short, CHANGE THEM
01:01:676 (4) - spacing issue
01:02:965 (x) - add a note
01:04:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - i KNOW you like streams, but they don't fit well with the music. Not with any instrument in it. In short, CHANGE THEM!
01:25:348 (1-15,1-14) - ...do i have to say it again?
01:34:489 (11) - i prefer this note to be changed into a 1 beat ling slider (to the next red tick), delete 01:34:957 (12) afterwards
01:40:817 (5) - delete this note
01:40:934 (6,7) - move 1/4 beat earlier
01:44:098 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - the beat placement are very bad, remap this part and try to follow the music more
02:06:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ...you know the drill
02:09:879 (x)- add a new note
02:10:113 (5) - new combo
02:16:676 (5,6) - move 1 Lv2 grid right
02:17:848 (7) - add a new combo
02:18:785 (B) - why break time?
02:27:223 (7) - add a new combo
02:27:926 (1) - remove new combo
02:33:317 (3,4,5,6,7) - the stream seems clustered, place them better using Lv3 Grid snapping
02:42:223 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - no no no

OTL
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Baby Dino - Finished (100%)

T-Rex - Finished (100%)

Rasyad95's Dino - WIP (90%) Finished (100%)

Thanks Arusha for the suggestion :)
bearing019
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
bearing019
Check some of that spelling on the SB, other than that, fine.
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey

DiamondCrash wrote:

Check some of that spelling on the SB, other than that, fine.
Ummmm.....Which part exactly?
I think , i know which part
Last edited by ayey , edited 1 time in total.
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Hello~

mod
SPOILER
Baby Dino
01:20:426 (4,5) spacing error. I think best (4) move to center.
T-Rex
00:42:692 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) 1 grid up?(nazi)(grid lv3)
00:49:137 (6) 1 grid down (spacing error)
02:20:661 (4) 1 grid up (^)
02:41:754 (9) 1 grid down (^)
Rasyad95's
00:25:114 (1) remove new combo
00:25:348 (2) new combo
00:58:864 (1) remove new combo
00:59:098 (2) new combo
01:28:395 (1) remove new combo
01:57:926 (3) 1 grid up?(grid lv2)

nicemap~
star & gl ;)
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey

banvi wrote:

Hello~

mod
SPOILER
Baby Dino
01:20:426 (4,5) spacing error. I think best (4) move to center.
T-Rex
00:42:692 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) 1 grid up?(nazi)(grid lv3)
00:49:137 (6) 1 grid down (spacing error)
02:20:661 (4) 1 grid up (^)
02:41:754 (9) 1 grid down (^)
Rasyad95's
00:25:114 (1) remove new combo
00:25:348 (2) new combo
00:58:864 (1) remove new combo
00:59:098 (2) new combo
01:28:395 (1) remove new combo
01:57:926 (3) 1 grid up?(grid lv2)

nicemap~
star & gl ;)
Done ty :)
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
[SB]
4.png is awesome.

[General]
The Black color combo is hard to see. Try going with a darker gray.

[babby]
00:51:598 (1) - Kinda soon after a spinner for an easy.
For some reason when the notes finish up, the skip button isn't showing up for me. :/

[Rex]
02:38:473 (1) - The overlap here is pretty bad. Try moving this somewhere else.

[Dino]
00:58:864 (8) - Spacing?
02:49:957 (2,3) - Spacing.
Tatsuo
575 posts
Joined January 2009
Tatsuo
Hai, sorry for the long wait.
Here's my mod~

[Overall]
Could you map [Baby Dino] to full length?
You... Need to fix 4.png. What is that? >_>

[Baby Dino]
Fine.

[T-Rex]
Fine.

[Rasyad95's Dino]
Why is there no preview point for this difficulty?
Other than that, fine.

*star*
Good job.
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Done
and yeah my mistake on 4.png :P
RandomJibberish
osu! Alumni
1,833 posts
Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish
General
That lyrics SB is horrible. At least get all the grammar and lyrics right, find them online. Also, make the lyric lines fade in instead of just appearing.

Don't use completely black and white circles, they look horrible. Make them dark/light grey.

Baby Dino
00:48:903 (2) - Start a tick before
Map to the end, shortened easy diffs are lazy :/

T-Rex
Those streams :/
01:36:832 (2) - move back a tick
01:51:598 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This isn't nearly as sexy as your last stream

Rasyad95's Dino
This diff has no preview point that I can see
00:22:536 - Add beat?
00:30:739 (1,2) - Remove a repeat from 1,Move 2 out of the way.
00:46:442 - Add beat?
01:42:457 (1,2,3) - Spaaaaccinnngg
01:51:129 (7) - Move under previous stack
01:53:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really awkward. Remap to the music pwease
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. I wanna complain about the BG and the circle color, they doen't fit at all
  2. 00:49:489 inheret this section in all your difss.
  3. Rasyad95 should be added to all diffs' tags
[Baby Dino]:
  • 01:05:661 (4,5) - switch to grid level 3 (ctrl+1) and move them 1 grid left
  1. placing note by lyrics makes this diff hard to play for me, really
[T-Rex]:
  1. 00:36:598 (5) - new combo
  2. 00:46:676 (T) - add a note here
  3. 01:51:833 (3) - 1 grid right
[Rasyad95's Dino]:
  1. 00:28:864 (4,5,6) - spacing
  2. 00:30:739 (1,2) - place (2) exactly on (1) plz
  3. 00:58:395 (6,7,8) - spacing
  4. 01:01:442 (3,4,1) - ^
  5. 01:50:778 (4,5,6,7) - stack all of them plz
suggest remap the Baby Dino diff :/

star for your first try, it's not that bad.
NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta
[quote="RandomJibberish"]General
That lyrics SB is horrible. At least get all the grammar and lyrics right, find them online. Also, make the lyric lines fade in instead of just appearing.

Don't use completely black and white circles, they look horrible. Make them dark/light grey./quote]
That. And Text4... really?

Baby Dino
00:11:286 (8) - Spacing
00:49:723 (1) - Big spinners can't adjust to the next beat quickly, either move the beats or replace this with a slider or something.
01:00:036 (2) - Move 1/2 back and maybe extend by 1/2
Map to the enders

T-Rex
Dem streams suck ridiculous ones don't belong in a Hard
02:39:176 (2) - Use (1) but flipped

Blah
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Ok then i'll just delete the SB
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

  • • The SB images contains unnecessary trasparency.
    • Add "Rasyad95" into Tags (tags should be the same on all diffs)

[Baby Dino]

  • • 00:07:067 (x) - Add a circle
    • 00:10:583 (6,7) - Spacing (keep "Distance Snap" active and fix it)
    • 00:13:161 (2,3) - Move 1/2 earlier
    • 00:14:333 (x) - Add a circle
    • 00:18:317 (x) - ^
    • 00:30:739 (1,2) - Spacing
    • 00:39:879 (x) - Add a circle
    • 00:49:489 (red timing section) - Inherit previous timing setting
    • 00:53:942 (x) - Add a circle
    • 00:56:286 (3,4) - Move 1/2 earlier
    • 00:57:458 (x) - Add a circle
    • 01:00:036 (2) - Move 1/2 earlier
    • 01:01:208 (x) - Add a circle
    • 01:02:848 (1) - Add a repetition
    • 01:09:176 (2) - Move 1/2 later
[T-Rex]

  • • Overall Difficulty: 8
    • 00:49:489 (red timing section) - Inherit previous timing setting
    • 01:03:317 (4) - Add a repetition
    • 01:04:254 (x) - Add a circle
    • 01:04:723 (x) - ^
    • 01:37:536 (3) - Add a repetition
    • 01:43:629 8x) - Add a circle
    • 02:06:598 (x) - ^
    • 02:36:129 (x) - ^
[Rasyad95's Dino]

  • • Add a preview point
    • 00:16:911 (x) - Add a circle
    • 00:17:379 (x) - ^
    • 00:17:848 (x) - ^
    • 00:46:442 (x) - ^
    • 01:03:786 (x) - ^
    • 01:04:254 (x) - ^
    • 01:04:723 (x) - ^
    • 01:24:645 (x) - ^
    • 01:24:879 (x) - ^
    • 01:25:114 (x) - ^
    • 02:05:660 (x) - ^
    • 02:06:129 (x) - ^
    • 02:06:598 (x) - ^
    • 02:13:629 (x) - ^
    • 02:17:379 (x) - ^
    • 02:24:879 (x) - ^
    • 02:28:629 (x) - ^
    • 02:32:379 (x) - ^
    • 02:36:129 (x) - ^
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Done
Thanks xxheroxx
It looks great now :D
jmaeshawn
170 posts
Joined May 2008
jmaeshawn
Wow, this has to be the best first map I've seen, great job! :D

I only picked out a couple of things that would would make your map play better:

T-Rex - 02:53:708 (1,1,2) I'd take out these last three notes, as they aren't intuitive for the player to hit, since there's no beat during that section.

Rasyad95's Dino - 02:53:707 (1,2,3) Same as above.

*Starred because this map is very good and deserves ranking soon :)
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Done ~
Thanks :)
Niva
Global Moderator
3,196 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Modding request via in-game PM.
sorry tadi keasyikan main jadi lupa :P

[Baby Dino]
Add "Rasyad95" to the tags on this difficulty.
00:18:317 (3,4) - The spacing shocked me... Jumps on easy difficulty is not a good idea
00:26:286 (4) - Make it symmetrical? (use lv3 grid, delete the second waypoint, and adjust)
00:27:223 (1) - Finish at end?
00:30:739 (1) - Make it symmetrical? (lv3 grid, move the first waypoint one grid right and two or three grid up)
00:38:473 (1) - Make it symmetrical?
00:48:083 (1,2) - I think it's better like this... but I don't know if 3/4 notes are allowed for an Easy or not
SPOILER
00:55:348 (2,3) - I personally don't like the jump here

[T-Rex]
00:16:442 (3) - Add a repeat on this note, and adjust 00:17:145 (4,5).This is just my pattern suggestion, just use our creativity.
SPOILER
00:30:036 (6) - For a perfect triangle, (maybe) one grid down. I'm not sure.
01:20:426 (4) - Vertical flip and make it symmetrical?
01:28:629 (7) - Add finish?
02:19:254 (9) - Make it wave? Slider yang "tanggung" begini nggak enak dilihatnya :P
02:34:254 (6) - ^
02:38:473 (1) - Shift into triangle pattern?

[Rasyad95's Dino]
Tested. Nothing really wrong about the spacing or patterns, but this map is quite overmapped... An Insane doesn't have to be overmapped with lots of streams. For example, see Shuna's Insane on my map, it doesn't have too much streams but still fun to play.

Star!

Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
•Overall•
Offset : 4.250 ~ Resnap All Notes.
Remove the .osb file in the song's folder and then Full Submit.

•T-Rex•
00:43:629 (8) - 1 grid down?
01:25:348 (1,2) - 1 grid down?
02:06:833 (1) - Jump? :(
02:17:848 (5) - New combo?
02:48:786 (4) - 1 grid left?
02:50:426 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:51:129 (1) - Remove new combo.

•Baby Dino•
00:14:333 (4) - Distance error.
00:18:786 (4) - ^
00:56:051 (3) - ^

•Rasyad95's Dino•
Fix the offset (red timing section) in this difficulty.
00:43:278 (8) - New combo.
01:04:254 (7) - ^
01:04:957 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:348 (1) - This slider should start 1/2 later.
01:25:113 (12) - Distance error.
01:49:957 (1) - Move this note on the centre-grid.
02:52:770 (1) - ^

+Star
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Done
Thanks for starring~ Nivalis and Kecco :)
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3
If my mod was helpful, feed me with kudosu.

[General]
You need a Normal Difficulty from my point of wiev.

[Baby]
Can you tell me which Distance spacing ahve you used? there's no one okay in this map D:
00:04:723 (1) - Using grid level 3, make this more symmetrical.
00:15:973 (6,1) - Switch combos.

[Rasyad]
00:07:653 (5) - Delete.
00:52:418 (4) - ^.
01:58:746 (6) - ^.
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,958 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Hello.

[General]
Combo colours..they're just bad.Well,nvm.

[Baby Dino]
00:12:926 (2) - Jump on easy? No way.
00:14:333 (4) - Fix distance.
00:27:223 (1) - ^
01:01:911 (4) - ^

[Hard]
Some jumps are confusing,like this:
01:45:973 (1) - Like this,yeah.
Well,I think it fits,wait for BAT's final word then.
But you better fix this:
02:06:598 (7) - Ugh..put closer to 02:06:833 (1) then.It's way too confusing.

[Rasyad95's Dino]
00:21:364 (1) - Fix distance.
02:24:879 (4) - ^.It should be somewhere in the middle between 02:24:410 (3) and 02:25:348 (1),otherwise it's confusing.
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Done~
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
Hi~

[Easy]
00:23:473 (1,2,3) - Why the spacing change here ?


[T-Rex]
02:06:598 (7) - Remove this note?


[Rasyad's Dino]
00:07:536 (4,5,6) - This triplet does not fit.
00:11:520 (8,9,10) - ^
00:23:473 (1) - Spacing

star
iDwarf
1,202 posts
Joined February 2010
iDwarf
~Overall~
  1. Offset: 4720
  2. Preview point must be on same place on all difficulties
  3. KIAI sections should be the same on all difficulties.
  4. Removing .osb is optional. You can ignore it.
~Baby Dino~
  1. 00:06:360 (2,3,4,5) - 1 grid down.
  2. 00:30:735 (1) - Remove new combo.
  3. 00:59:095 (1,2) - Spacing.
~T-Rex~
  1. 00:15:036 (4) - 2 grid right. | 2 grid down.
  2. 02:46:676 (1) - Remove new combo.
  3. 02:47:379 (1) - ^
~Rasyad95's Dino~
  1. 01:02:848 (1,2,3) - Stack
  2. 01:07:418 (2,3) - ^
  3. 01:26:285 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - 1 grid right.
  4. 01:33:785 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Some wrong stacks here.
  5. 01:44:332 (2,3,4) - ^
  6. 01:45:973 (1,2) - ^
  7. 01:52:770 - Timing section seems to be useless. Remove it.
  8. 02:36:598 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Stacks.
  9. 02:48:785 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^ Fu.
deepsea
osu! Alumni
855 posts
Joined April 2008
deepsea
The difficulty gap between Baby Dino and other 2 is too big imo.<_<

Other than that all fine.

Starrrrrrrrrr
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
[Baby Dino]
Black Circles make people confuse in such BG. Same as grey circles. White is good
Map seems to me good.

[T-Rez]
00:49:723 - simmetry*
01:51:598 - ^ like this

[Final difficulty]
This is good :3

Star~

*

ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Done~
Thanks all
:)
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja
Hi,

[baby dino]
fine to me
00:32:145 (5) - 1/2 gird left and line up with (4)?
01:12:223 (3) - new combo?

[t-rex]
also fine
00:48:903 (4-7) - don't think all those claps fit, but I'm not good with hitsounds
01:41:989 (1) - no new combo?

[rasyad95's dino]
also fine
kiai is different from the others, but no big deal

nice map
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey

roflninja wrote:

nice map
TY :)
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
*Star*
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey

kokoroanime wrote:

*Star*
Thanks for the star :)
gregar55
12 posts
Joined September 2009
gregar55
star for this beatmap :D
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
1,179 posts
Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
Meh
Kiai during the roar is.. unnecessary :x
diff names are silly ><~

Baby Dino-
00:10:583 (6,7) - felt there were ganna be claps here... maybe just add clap to 7 at least?
Hm.. follow vocal, but fairly easy
Okay

T-Rex- score difference is big ><
Had some suggestions, but this diff is fine as it is
Good

Rasyad95's- hmm.. I would prefer higher OD, lower drain, but that's just me
You used grid level 2, yet some parts still look inconsistent
01:10:114 (1) - ... add note to where this starts and have the slider start on the white tick instead?
01:41:168 (2) - this note feels too extra? remove or add hitsounds to the combo before to make it sound like your own beats?
01:43:278 (4) - this feels extra, and sounds extra, remove please
The hitsound you have do sound okay, but the whole map could be more consistent with the hitsound pattern
Lots of extra notes, most played okay though...
Fair

Hmm...
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Done~
Thanks Shinxyn and gregar55 :)
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
[Baby Dino]
00:48:903 (2) - SUGGESTION: start 1/4 later, but end the same place, I believe 1/4 blue notes are pretty tough for Easy (it doesn't really matter, if the player uses the approach circle, but if they are following the music, it'll be hard to hit for beginners).
00:54:411 (1) - remove the new combo
00:55:348 (2) - New combo (if above is done, which it should be)

[T-Rex]
The preview point is different. It's not a big difference, but the maps must have the same preview time
01:36:833 (2) - move 1/4 back?

[Rasyad95]
cool

it's good for a first map actually, good job
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey

eee wrote:

[Baby Dino]
00:48:903 (2) - SUGGESTION: start 1/4 later, but end the same place, I believe 1/4 blue notes are pretty tough for Easy (it doesn't really matter, if the player uses the approach circle, but if they are following the music, it'll be hard to hit for beginners).
00:54:411 (1) - remove the new combo
00:55:348 (2) - New combo (if above is done, which it should be) Done

[T-Rex]
The preview point is different. It's not a big difference, but the maps must have the same preview time
01:36:833 (2) - move 1/4 back? idk it feels weird if I move it

[Rasyad95]
cool

it's good for a first map actually, good job
Thanks~
Luvdic
2,113 posts
Joined July 2009
Luvdic
Eh... just as i thought. The map itself is fine, at least i didnt saw anything that this map wouldnt be ranked.
Mod that could help the map be better i didnt see much either imo (in fact, i deleted the small mod post i had cause its just way too nazi/unnoticeable)
And btw, avoid getting you map over modded, it will just make your map worse and worse imo
KRZY
Former osu! Champion: OWC#3
4,850 posts
Joined May 2009
KRZY
Hi!

[Easy]
00:59:801 (2) - Spacing, try not to have jumps on Easy please.

The rest was fine.

Can't believe this is your first map. Wonderfully done.

Star and good luck with your first map!
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey

DJ KRZY wrote:

Hi!

[Easy]
00:59:801 (2) - Spacing, try not to have jumps on Easy please.Done

The rest was fine.

Can't believe this is your first map. Wonderfully done.

Star and good luck with your first map!
TY :)
Edit:Wow a kudos star thanks Rasyad95
Shulin
1,333 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

-- Grey BG, black and grey combo colors... I guess it's okay but the colors are kinda... dull?
-- Claps are too loud imo, maybe reduce the hitsound volume a little.

Baby Dino:

-- You could map to the end I guess.

00:12:458 (x) - Note?
00:12:926 (x) - Note. Definitely expected one here.
00:43:629 (3) - Remove finish from the end.
00:55:348 (1) - This looks awful in game, down 1 square (grid 3).
01:30:739 (3,4) - Spacing! (Too close)
01:31:208 (4) - x0.5 feels weird.
02:00:973 (1) - Keep kiai active here.

You might want to add a few more note where you left gaps in the vocal.

T-Rex:

01:36:833 (2) - This should start at 01:36:715 if your following the vocal.
01:37:301 (x) - Note?
01:40:348 (1,2,3) - Overlap with 01:39:411 (4) - is a bit weird and makes 01:40:700 (2) - harder to see imo.
01:46:442 (3,4,5) - Sounds weird, maybe have 01:46:442 (3) - as a single note.
02:36:129 (5) - Delete? (Following previous pattern)

It's okay but your patterns seem quite disorganized at times examples:

00:46:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It's all misaligned and overlaps with the previous combo
01:45:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Clustered, and again the overlaps look a bit messy.

Yeah, that's my opinion, feel free to ignore it. ^_^

Rasyad95's Dino:

00:36:130 (10) - Weird position, maybe put it at the end of 00:35:895 (9) -
01:07:419 (2) - Delete? To me this feels out of place. (Or something like 01:10:348 (7) - would be good)
01:27:926 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:32:145 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Stream doesn't really fit here, I guess it's okay though.
01:33:786 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:40:700 (4,1) - Spacing? (Too close)
01:45:973 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Rhythm? Maybe remove a few claps and it will sound better.
02:30:270 (1,2,3) - Sounds weird, imo just delete 02:30:270 (1,2) - the triple atm doesn't fit the music =/
02:37:770 (8,9,10) - ^ same thing. But new combo 02:37:770 (8) - to be consistent with ^
02:45:270 (x) - Note.
02:52:770 (1) - Triple doesn't fit, and this looks weird after a spinner. Maybe just have a note at 02:53:004 -

Overmapped at parts. It's okay, but played odd when you weren't following the rhythm of the song.

All opinions/suggestions, feel free to ignore. Star.
Lissette
osu! Alumni
1,496 posts
Joined July 2008
Lissette
Rasyad95's Dino
01:49:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this combo kinda confuse me @.@ specially (4,5)
02:44:098 (9) - separate a bit from 8 :p
02:45:270 - add note?

T-Rex
00:46:676 (3) - move to prev blue tick
00:47:262 - add note
01:45:504 (8,1) - reduce a bit that jump
01:46:442 (3) - move to prev blue tick (fix spacing after change this)

Baby Dino
This difficulty was hard to follow @.@ even been the easiest diff
maybe that's because you follow the vocals, and with this type of song, definitely is way to easy follow the music
anyway you don't have to change it, is just my opinion ><
00:13:629 (3) - wrong spacing
01:01:442 (3) - same
01:31:208 (4) - same (look time line)
01:53:473 (1) - to near to the spinner for easy diff ><

Star!
braian5234
230 posts
Joined April 2010
braian5234
8-)
koujiro nonomiya
9 posts
Joined September 2009
koujiro nonomiya
Ayey, bagus kok
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
First of all thanks braian5234 and koujiro nonomiya for the stars

Shulin wrote:

Mod
Done

Lissette wrote:

Mod
Done

Thanks guys :)
Rasyad95
224 posts
Joined August 2009
Rasyad95
Kumpulin Star yey, naikin priority...
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey

Rasyad95 wrote:

Kumpulin Star yey, naikin priority...
Udah 44 >.>
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Hi!~

Remember these are just suggestions that you can totally ignore :P

~Baby Dino~
00:06:364 (2,3,4,5) - This would be fine if this wasn't the easiest diff, but antijumps are pretty confusing so I suggest fixing the spacing here (though if you know the song well it can be intuitive...)
01:45:973 (1) - This slow down feels a bit weird... =x
01:53:473 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner end for being the easiest diff =(
02:04:723 (1,2,3) - Fix spacing in this whole combo.

~T-Rex~
00:17:145 (4,5) - Change positions? (4) makes a sudden weird jump >:
01:27:926 (4) - Nazi!! This isn't stacked properly under (3).
02:27:223 (1) - Nazi!! This isn't stacked properly under (5)'s end.

~Rasyad95's Dino~
02:07:770 (6) - Fix Spacing.
02:20:192 (2,3) - Try to mantain the same spacing (or something intuitive enough) on the same combo >.<
02:40:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make the spacing more even here.

Nice map ^^ Good luck with it!!
*star*
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi!~

Remember these are just suggestions that you can totally ignore :P

~Baby Dino~
00:06:364 (2,3,4,5) - This would be fine if this wasn't the easiest diff, but antijumps are pretty confusing so I suggest fixing the spacing here (though if you know the song well it can be intuitive...)
01:45:973 (1) - This slow down feels a bit weird... =x
01:53:473 (1) - This slider is too close to the spinner end for being the easiest diff =(
02:04:723 (1,2,3) - Fix spacing in this whole combo.
Done

~T-Rex~
00:17:145 (4,5) - Change positions? (4) makes a sudden weird jump >:
01:27:926 (4) - Nazi!! This isn't stacked properly under (3).
02:27:223 (1) - Nazi!! This isn't stacked properly under (5)'s end.
Done

~Rasyad95's Dino~
02:07:770 (6) - Fix Spacing.
02:20:192 (2,3) - Try to mantain the same spacing (or something intuitive enough) on the same combo >.<
02:40:582 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make the spacing more even here.
Done

Nice map ^^ Good luck with it!!
*star*
Thanks beuchi <3
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
[Baby Dino]
02:08:122 - Unused timing section here. Delete unless you forgot to enable Kiai at 02:05:661.
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Baby Dino]
02:08:122 - Unused timing section here. Delete unless you forgot to enable Kiai at 02:05:661.
Done
Thanks Mafiamaster <3
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Dinosaur.
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Wow my first bubble
Love you Mafiamaster
Gens
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2008
Gens
Well, I had a few difficulty concerns, but I didn't notice the harder difficulty was from a guest. I also thought about having to update the map to play, but that happens with all Ke$ha maps and should be fine.

I'm ranking this.
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
SPOILER
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey
Yay,my first ranked BM
TY all for helping
Aerial Alchemist
20 posts
Joined August 2008
Aerial Alchemist
Random, I know, but this version of the song sounds a lot different than the version I have. Same with a few other Ke$ha beatmaps...Are there multiple versions of the CD or something?
ayey
274 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
ayey

Aerial Alchemist wrote:

Random, I know, but this version of the song sounds a lot different than the version I have. Same with a few other Ke$ha beatmaps...Are there multiple versions of the CD or something?
The quality is different , maybe?
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