Julie wrote:
All your difficulty are currently HP:8 and OD:8 except your 4K NM, you should really make a spread about it.
Why is the current kiai ending here 01:28:749 - or 01:28:915 -, there isn't much different if you put it here 01:28:665 - , which will make more sense since this is where the map finish.
Your current BG size is kinda random and unrankable.
Here a 1500 x 1024 http://puu.sh/ni477.jpg, try to resize it as you like to fit in a 1366 x 768. I don't mind resizing for you, but I don't know which part you want it to cut a bit. Contact me if you'd like me to resize it for you.
This is a mania map, so please remove the combo color in Kagii-'s 4K MX, make it as same as other, don't make any custom colours.
Disable Widescreen Support in 7K EZ, and 7K NM.4K |1|2|3|4|[4K EZ]
00:05:499 (5499|2,5832|1) - Make these into clap2 if you want to fit the loud drum, the finish is really too loud compare to this 00:05:999 - .
00:09:165 (9165|2,9165|3) - and 00:09:665 (9665|1,9665|0) - Should be the same hitsound as 00:08:665
00:11:332 - to 00:12:999 - and 00:13:999 - to 00:15:665 - The pattern feel a bit random compare to NM, it might be a bit hard to play since there is less alternate hands in some part, suggest look at what I post for this part on the NM mods.
00:18:999 (18999|2,19332|3,19999|2,20332|3,20665|2,21332|3,21665|2) - This feel a bit too much on the right hands, try to put some on the left as well. Mostly this part 00:19:999 (19999|2,20332|3,20665|2) - .
00:21:999 - hitnormal are really too low for this cymbal sound from the song, add up a finish, to emphasize the sound and the end of a part.
00:26:665 (26665|1,26999|1) - Don't jack it suddendly!! Many beginners might be unstable if they see this, suggest moving this one 00:26:999 (26999|1) - to the 4th column
00:31:165 - Drum really more louder then this 00:30:999, and trust me , even if you add 2 notes, it doesn't change the fact that the soft hitnormal is actually more softer then the whistle you are currently using.
00:37:332 - Why no more whistle for the bass? Is still loud and clear.
00:41:665 - Shouldn't this be a clap?
00:42:165 - Same reason as 00:37:332 -
00:41:499 (41499|2,41665|1,41832|0,41832|3,42165|1,42332|0,42332|3) - To be honest, you really could make the rhythm much more easier then NM, is kinda your hardest part in EZ since is the same as NM.
00:43:332 - I know that is less loud the previous part, but the cymbal is still really clear to hear, and soft hitnormal is really kinda feel too normal compare to the song.
00:43:999 - 00:44:832 - 00:45:332 - 00:46:665 - 00:47:999 - 00:49:332 - 00:50:165 - 00:50:665 - 00:52:999 - Isn't all of them should be clap2 to fit the snare from the song, just like you did here :00:51:999 -
00:49:665 (49665|2) - Why is there a note here while there is none in Normal.
00:54:665 - 00:55:332 - 00:55:999 - 00:56:665 - 00:57:332 - Shouldn't these be whistle for the bass? clap clap clap is kinda loud x.x
00:57:999 - Should be a clap for the snare or a finish for the cymbal.
01:07:999 - 01:08:665 - 01:09:332 - Where the whistle to match the bass? Even if the bass sound a bit lower, is sstill pretty much audible and should not be ignore.
01:25:999 (85999|1,85999|2,86499|1,86499|2,86999|0,86999|3) - There is still drum sound pretty clearly, the cymbal shouldn't be ignore at all, I really suggest adding up a finsih hitsound on those.[4K NM]
00:01:999 (1999|2,1999|3) - and 00:03:332 (3332|0,3332|2) - 00:04:665 (4665|3,4665|1) - 00:07:332 (7332|0,7332|3) - Switch the hitsound, the whistle should be on normal notes. You can call me nazi, but I look at all possibility of how player can feel.
00:05:499 (5499|0,5832|0) - Make these into clap2 if you want to fit the loud drum, the finish is really too loud compare to this 00:05:999 - .
00:09:165 (9165|2,9165|3) - Should be the same hitsound as 00:08:665 (8665|2,8665|1) -
00:09:665 - hitwhistle and hitnormal are kinda too low compare to the drum sound, I clearly hear a cymbal. So a finisher will really fit more.
00:12:832 (12832|3,12999|1) - Why is this one going right to left? While the these are 00:11:332 (11332|0,11499|2,11832|1,11999|3,12332|0,12499|2) - left to right, it should be consistent, since the song is still consitent here. And it can put a more special feeling to these note 00:13:332 (13332|3,13499|2,13665|1,13832|0) - that are right to left.
00:14:999 (14999|2,15165|1,15499|3,15665|0) - ^
00:21:332 - Why is this bass suddendlt 2 notes? Keep it consistent with 1 note.
00:21:999 - hitnormal are really too low for this cymbal sound from the song, add up a finish, to emphasize the sound and the end of a part.
00:21:999 - to 00:30:999 - I kidna hate how this part have more note then 00:16:665 - to 00:21:999 - and 00:32:665 - +, while it should be more calm.
Your calm part is 2 / 2 / 2 / 2 / etc. while previous part that is more hype is 2 / 1 / 2 / 1 / etc.
00:31:165 - Drum really more louder then this 00:30:999 (30999|1,30999|0) - , leaving it to soft hitnormal, you can barely feel it, add up a clap2
00:37:332 (37332|2) - Why no more whistle for the bass? Is still loud and clear.
00:41:665 - Shouldn't this be a clap?
00:42:165 (42165|1) - Same reason as 00:37:332 (37332|2) -
00:43:332 - I know that is less loud the previous part, but the cymbal is still really clear to hear, and soft hitnormal is really kinda feel too normal compare to the song.
00:43:999 - 00:44:832 - 00:45:332 - 00:46:665 - 00:47:999 - 00:49:332 - 00:50:165 - 00:50:665 - 00:52:999 - Isn't all of them should be clap2 to fit the snare from the song, just like you did here :00:51:999 -
00:52:999 (52999|3,52999|2,53332|3,53332|2) - Try to make these 2 the same hitsound without making it too loud, I would suggest a clap, since the snare are more audible then the cymbal.
00:54:665 - 00:55:332 - 00:55:999 - 00:56:665 - 00:57:332 - Shouldn't these be whistle for the bass? clap clap clap is kinda loud x.x
00:57:999 - Should be a clap for the snare or a finish for the cymbal.
00:58:332 (58332|2) - The drum is really consistent, keep up your whistle for this note as well.
01:02:665 (62665|3) - I personally would find the clap2 more fitting then the finish, due to the snare sound being WAY mmore loud and clearer then the cymbal from the song.
01:07:999 - 01:08:665 - 01:09:332 - Where the whistle to match the bass? Even if the bass sound a bit lower, is sstill pretty much audible and should not be ignore.
01:15:332 - Add one more note, you are having less note then EZ here.
01:25:999 (85999|1,85999|2,86499|1,86499|2,86999|0,86999|3) - There is still drum sound pretty clearly, the cymbal shouldn't be ignore at all, I really suggest adding up a finsih hitsound on those.[4K HD]
00:05:499 (5499|1,5832|1) - Ugh, isn't that a bit too much finish hitsound spam, it kinda hurt ears a lots, a clap2 will be more fitting if you ask me. Since the drum is clearly different as this part 00:05:999 - .
00:09:165 - and 00:09:665 - This is where you should put finish.
00:21:999 - The hitnormal hitsound are really really too low! Add up a finish hitsound to fit the song drum!
00:31:165 - ^ Just like above reason, really too low thos hitnormal, but instead of adding a finsih hitsound add up a clap2 for the kick.
00:37:332 - Did you forget your hitwhistle here?
00:41:665 - Should be a clap2 here.
00:42:165 - Add a hitwhistle hitsund on one of the note for the bass.
00:43:332 - Add up a finish hitsound to emphasize the end of an section with the cymbal sound coming from the song.
00:43:999 - 00:44:832 - 00:45:332 - 00:46:665 - 00:47:999 - 00:49:332 - 00:50:165 - 00:50:665 - Isn't all of them should be clap2 to fit the snare from the song, just like you did here :00:51:999 -
00:52:999 - 00:53:332 - Try to make these two the same hitsound without making it too loud, I would suggest a clap, since the snare are more audible then the cymbal
00:53:999 - I kinda hear a bass clearly, a hitwhistle would also fit in one of those note, hitwhistle/hitfinish.
00:54:665 - 00:55:332 - 00:55:999 - 00:56:665 - 00:57:332 - Shouldn't these be whistle for the bass? clap2 seem a bit too loud.
00:57:999 - Add up a finish or a clap2 to match the drum of the song.
01:24:665 - I know you were trying to be consistent on your hitsound, but if you follow the drum for the song, it should be clap2.
01:25:999 - 01:26:999 - Ok this small part is pretty much inconsistent.
01:25:999 - and 01:26:499 - should be the same yes, but why is this 01:26:832 - the same too? So this one 01:26:832 (86832|3,86832|2) - really need to be in |1|2|[Kagii-'s 4K MX]
00:05:999 - This part should have more impact then this 00:05:832 - , mostly due to the new stanza and the guitar finally hopping in the song. So you should add another note.
00:08:832 - No more soft-hitwhistle.wav for the bass?
00:09:165 - Shouldn't this have as much note as this 00:08:665 - ? Due to the crash sound and all. Also change the soft-hitwhitle to hitfinish.
00:09:332 - Same reason as 00:08:832 -
00:09:665 - Add a soft-hitfinish, really should be more loud then this 00:08:665 - due to the cymbal sound trying to emphasize the end of this part.
00:14:582 (14582|0) - Is kinda weird you map this but not this 00:14:749 - . I understand is for the pattern, but that's not how the song go. These two should be the same.
00:15:582 (15582|0) - Not sure if you are trying to keep consistent, or you actually hear a drum, but I don't hear it much. Really suggest remove, there are other drum more fitting to be map then this.
00:18:165 (18165|2,18832|2) - These 2 LN really don't fit what you were trying to match for the LN. Example the sound you were trying to map here 00:18:165 - doesn't continue to here 00:18:332 - , but end at 00:18:165 -. Really suggest your turn these into normal notes. Just like you did here 00:21:165 - ! Which totally fit more the song!
00:21:999 - Hey this new section of the song, the drum doesn't go lower or anything, it also have a nice audible cymbal sound. Add up one more note on 1st column with a soft-hitfinish
00:23:999 - 00:26:665 - 00:29:332 - these part should be similar, one have LN the other doesn't. I'm not sure if your trying to be original, but it look kinda random to me. Hope is possible if you would keep it consistent.
00:31:999 (31999|0,32332|0,32499|3) - All these soft-hitwhistle, put them on the normal note instead of the LN. because you did match the normal note with the drum like these 00:32:082 (32082|2,32165|1,32249|2,32332|1,32415|2,32582|2) - .
00:41:999 - to 00:43:332 - Can you try to keep stuff consistent? >< *READ ALL BEFORE APPLYING*
00:41:999 - Not sure if 2 notes is good, because I only hear the guitar and vocal (and you aren't mapping for the vocal)
00:42:165 - Should have a whistle for the bass
00:42:665 - and 00:42:832 - should have more note then 00:41:999 -, but not too much, 2 max to keep it consistent and those note should have a whistle sound on it. Because right now, there is only this 00:42:999 (42999|2,42999|3) - , and it feel random, it should be keep consistent.
00:43:165 - ^
00:43:332 - Add one more note on 3rd column with a nice finish hitsound on it to emphasize the start of a new section by following the song of the drum.
00:43:499 - Shouldn't this be map? Is the same instrument as 00:43:665 (43665|1) - , to keep it consistent.
00:45:499 - ^
00:45:999 - The bass is pretty clear as well, you could add up a whistle hitsound with it.
00:46:332 (46332|0,46332|3) - Keep this 1 notes for the piano, since it should be the same as this 00:46:165 (46165|2) - . And delete only the 1st column one, so that if follow this 00:46:165 (46165|2) - .
00:46:832 - Same reason as 00:43:499 -
00:43:999 - 00:44:832 - 00:45:332 - 00:46:665 - 00:47:999 - 00:49:332 - 00:50:165 - 00:50:665 - Wouldn'T a soft-hitclap2 fit way more then a whistle? Just like you did here 00:51:999 - woot!
00:52:999 - Should have the same hitsound as 00:52:665 (52665|0) -
00:53:999 - Add one more note should have more impact these these 00:53:499 (53499|3,53499|0,53665|0,53665|3,53832|2,53832|0) - .
00:54:915 (54915|0) - Delete, there isn't any new sound, even if you one to keep those triplet consistent, this note can be consider as overmap.
00:54:665 (54665|0) - 00:55:332 (55332|0) - 00:55:999 (55999|1) - 00:56:665 (56665|1) - 00:57:332 (57332|3) - Wouldn't it be better to follow the actual drum in the song and turn these into soft-hitwhistle instead of clap2?
00:57:915 (57915|2) - Same reason as 00:57:915 (57915|2) -
00:57:999 - Forgot your finisher hitsound.
00:58:332 - Keep these 2 notes, so you can make it feel different from 00:57:999 (57999|3,57999|0,57999|1) - and 00:58:665 (58665|3,58665|1,58665|2,58832|0,58832|1,58832|3,58999|0,58999|3,58999|2) -
00:58:665 (58665|2,58665|3,58665|1,58832|3,58832|1,58832|0,58999|0,58999|3,58999|2,59165|1,59165|3) - Do somethign about these, I know you are trying to make this part 00:59:165 (59165|3,59165|1) - less note then this 00:59:332 (59332|1,59332|3,59332|0) - , but you just made this whole part 00:58:665 (58665|2,58665|3,58665|1,58832|3,58832|1,58832|0,58999|0,58999|3,58999|2,59165|1,59165|3) - unconsistent.
01:00:999 - Shouldn't you be mapping this piano sound too? Is really a beautifull note like the previous one you mapped~
01:02:665 (62665|0) - Replace it by clap2 hitsound.
01:09:999 - Hey the cymbal is loud too, make it 3 notes, you probably hear the vocal going down so you made it 2 notes, but instead of bass, snare, bass snare, you can hear this one is different, and shouldn't have the same feeling of play as bass, snare, bass, snare, etc. Also while adding a note, add a soft-hitwhistle on it.
01:13:999 - WOW! Why is this 2 notes!! should really be a crash part! Add up note!
01:14:332 (74332|0) - Should be a whistle.
01:13:999 (73999|0,74165|0,74332|0,74499|0,74665|0,74832|0) - This is um, quite some note on the 1st column no?
01:15:332 - Even if you dont hear the crash sound super loud, is actually supose to be loud judging by the song and vocal, add up more note.
01:20:665 - Samre reason as 01:09:999 - .
01:25:832 (85832|1,85832|3) - 01:25:499 (85499|2,85499|1) - These 2 should have the same hitsound. I kinda don't like the whistle in there, since is kinda loud, but is your choice.
01:25:999 - Where is the 3 note with a finish?
01:26:499 - ^
01:26:999 - Where are hitsound? Drum still continue~
Good luck
All update and Absolutely All Accept >< now waiting ExKagii for the reply 4K MXKawawa wrote:
00:08:665 - add a note. I recommend that you should consistence for amount of note with your 4K NM diff.
You used 2note at here from 4K EZ. You can compare with this 00:16:665 - I could see it. considered that.
[7K NM]
You have to fix this part 00:00:666 - ~ 00:09:665 -
I don't think so that you used 2note as bass drum these.
You can say that is intetion. but something weird feeling. over chord.
00:00:666 - 00:00:999 - 00:01:332 - 00:02:332 - 00:02:665 - 00:02:999 -
00:03:665 - 00:03:999 - 00:04:332 - 00:04:999 - 00:05:332 - 00:06:332 -
00:06:665 - 00:06:999 - 00:07:665 - 00:07:999 -
please use 2 note only at here
00:05:499 - 00:05:832 - 00:08:332 - 00:08:665 - 00:09:165 - 00:09:665 -
except these cymbal line, you have to remove one for bass drum.
You can see your note density graph. and I did not think that should be high dentisy.
It is important for structure of pattern with music.
except these, is not big problem. but I recommend self-mods with 4K diffs. for consistence.
but some of parts can be improved by yourself. after I will see it again.
[Draftnell's 7K HD]
You have to re-arrange this part 00:00:666 - ~ 00:09:665 -
I did not feel sure from this.
00:00:832 (832|1,999|2,1165|3,1332|4,1499|6,1665|5) -
00:02:332 (2332|0,2499|1,2665|2,2832|3,2999|4) -
maybe you did follow synth instrumental.
but It should be changed to allow for exact feeling. some parts are missing.
00:05:499 - 00:05:832 - and here should be emphasize than these bass drum 00:04:999 (4999|0,4999|1,5332|0,5332|1,5665|0,5665|2) -
00:03:665 (3665|5,3665|4,3999|4,3999|5,4332|4,4332|5) -
You can remove a note(only this one) at bass drum part. or follow the all synth sounds in this part.
just sample as example :: http://puu.sh/nhZwm/776c8f4c19.jpg
00:14:332 - 00:14:832 - 00:15:332 - add a note a there.
you did not follow only guitar sounds. I could see from this 00:11:665 (11665|6,12165|4,12665|5,13165|3) -
because you did follow hihat sounds too. so it should be consistence with above pattern for structure.
00:15:999 (15999|6,16082|5,16165|4,16249|3,16332|2,16415|1,16499|0,16582|1) - You can change this pattern. I felt that is not suit for music.
because this one 00:16:415 (16415|1,16499|0,16582|1) - this one makes confusing for music.
I recommend these sample :: http://puu.sh/nhZKS/98c287ea64.jpg
00:21:415 (21415|1,21749|5) - there is no drum sounds. If you did follow drum, you have to remove these.
00:47:999 - add a note for snare sounds. consistence with these 00:46:665 -
00:52:332 - add a note at here for hihat sounds. it will be keep rhythm for playable
00:53:165 - 00:53:499 - 00:53:582 - add a note at here. there is a drum too. and seems missing. If you want to ignore these bass drums, then It will be make weird feeling for playable.
it is important beat as main.
[Zevioz's 7K MX]
00:10:832 - I felt here, too. add a note for hihat sound at here.
00:41:832 - You can add a note at here for emphasize
01:02:665 - add a note at col6. these snare sounds is not weak sound. can be emphasize.
Good luck!
and Draftnell 7K HD and Zevioz 7K MX i'll handle it
