17:08 koliron: ash sorry for that i was doing a check ;__;
17:08 koliron: f oyu dont want its ifne
17:08 koliron: if you*
17:08 Riari: ill have a look at it now
17:08 koliron: o
17:08 koliron: aaa
17:09 koliron: ok im here
17:09 *koliron is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/906421 DystopiaGround - AugoEidEs [Freezing]]
17:11 Riari: ok
17:11 *Riari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/906421 DystopiaGround - AugoEidEs [Freezing]]
17:12 Riari: 00:35:480 (8) - Movement into this feels extremely weak, it may have to hyper into 00:35:769 (1) - but the movement into 00:35:480 (8) - itself is weaker than 00:35:045 (4,5) - even though it is a stronger sound.
17:13 Riari: Maybe something like [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4791740 this?]
17:13 koliron: oh
17:18 Riari: stupid internet
17:19 koliron: ayy
17:19 koliron: XD
17:21 Riari: 00:43:885 (1) - Bit nazi here, but this sounds better as a circle 1/2, a pattern like [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4791797 this] seems to fit better to me, the increased gap differentiates between the change I suggesed and 00:44:320 (3) - whilst still flowing nicely.
17:23 koliron: mmh
17:24 koliron: i think the difference of those sounds is not much noticeable
17:24 koliron: i preefer keep the current pattern owo
17:24 Riari: okay
17:25 Riari: 00:48:523 (1) - I don't think this is strong enough to hyper into. I would split this up with a circle on 00:48:523 - and have that hyper into a slider on the downbeat. It is much stronger there and I feel it would fit better.
17:27 koliron: mh
17:27 koliron: i will reduce the distance
17:28 koliron: yeah without antiflow feels better :3
17:28 Riari: Maybe do something similar to [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4791844 this?]
17:29 koliron: 00:48:523 - this sound is very diffent, i prefer keep the dash to this because maybe 00:48:668 - is stronger but 00:48:813 - is even more, in that way the pattern would be an unnecessary spam of hyper :/
17:30 koliron: but yeah i reduced the distance, now feels better
17:30 Riari: 00:48:813 - is a continuation of 00:48:668 - so surely having a slider there would make more sense
17:30 Riari: The way you put it, the same can be said for 00:49:248 (4) -
17:31 koliron: mh true
17:31 koliron: changed
17:33 Riari: 00:53:595 (5,6,7,8) - these feel different to 00:53:306 (1,2,3,4) - and sound like they would play well in sets of twos, something like [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4791870 this] would show that rather than the simple stream you have going here
17:34 Riari: 00:53:885 (1,2,3,4) - It is also the same here, you have split 00:53:885 (1,2,3,4) - into sets of two even though it is similar to 00:53:885 (1,2,3,4) -
17:35 koliron: mmh is different imo 00:53:885 - has a really strong drum, thats why i added hyper
17:35 koliron: but 00:53:595 - is not noticeable if you dont listen it in 25%
17:35 Riari: You hypered into that, it is fine
17:35 Riari: I think it is quite noticable
17:35 Riari: oh I didn't meant o hyper into 00:53:595 -
17:36 Riari: Just a simple side to side movement would be fine
17:36 Riari: the only hyper near there should be between 00:53:813 (8,1) -
17:36 koliron: if i add a different movement maybe the pattern would be a bit hard XD i prefer keep it, just in case :3 and as i said to me is not enough noticeable
17:37 Riari: but then surely 00:54:175 (5,6,7,8) - shouldn't be any different to 00:53:885 (1,2,3,4) -
17:37 Riari: The change between 00:53:306 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:53:595 (5,6,7,8) - is far more notiacble than the one you have clearly mapped on the next set
17:38 koliron: riari, vary with that is not bad XD the idea is keep a rhythm but i dont like make repetitive patterns
17:38 koliron: i usually add hypers when i can, but not in all
17:38 Riari: Doesn't have to be the same, what i gave was only a suggestion.
17:38 koliron: because, basically htis song has a looot of oportunities to add hyper
17:39 Riari: 00:53:523 (4,5,6,7,8) - does not have to be hypered into, however some different movement would be better
17:39 koliron: so i tried to vary with that
17:39 koliron: yeah i know, just im explaining it :3
17:39 koliron: mh
17:39 koliron: lemme see if i can do another movement ther
17:40 Riari: Even something simple like [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4791927 this] would be better
17:41 koliron: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4791942
17:42 koliron: now there is more curve since 5
17:42 koliron: xD
17:42 Riari: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4791950 ?]
17:42 Riari: offers a clear disctinction between the two
17:43 koliron: hum, personally i dont like that pattern
17:43 koliron: imo now is better
17:43 Riari: doesn't have to be as steep
17:43 koliron: that movement in 207 bpm 1/4 is a bit hard XD
17:43 koliron: would be a stop dash
17:44 Riari: and 207bpm chain hypers arent?
17:44 Riari: you can change it, but the placement of 5 behind 4 clearly differentiates between the two parts
17:44 Riari: whilst yours doesn't really show anything
17:44 koliron: uhh
17:44 koliron: lemme try
17:45 koliron: i need play this
17:46 koliron: ok ._.
17:46 koliron: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4791969
17:46 koliron: feels so weird
17:46 koliron: but ok if oyu really really want i can keep it
17:46 Riari: 00:53:595 (5,6,7,8) - doesn't have to be as flat
17:46 koliron: uh
17:47 Riari: its just the movement between 00:53:523 (4,5) - that sets the tone of the pattern
17:47 Riari: you could make it into a '3' shape
17:48 koliron: no sorry, dont feels better
17:48 koliron: i prefer the previous stream
17:48 koliron: :/
17:49 koliron: i can ask the bn about htis if you want
17:49 Riari: mkay
17:49 koliron: :3
17:51 Riari: 02:12:291 (4,5) - This might be because I have sound in one year, but this is totally unjustified
17:52 Riari: This is the weakest sound in the whole section and you have a half screen hyper that totally breaks the tone of the section
17:52 koliron: do you mean
17:52 Riari: 02:13:016 (2,1) - should be the only hyper here, 02:13:016 (2,1) - should be a heavy dash in favor of accenuating the heaviness of 02:13:306 (1) -
17:52 koliron: 5?
17:53 Riari: yeah
17:53 Riari: the hyper between 02:12:291 (4,5) - seems completely unjustified
17:53 Riari: I hear nothing worth hypering
17:53 koliron: there is a strong drum XD but i will change the hyper to 02:12:581 (1) -
17:53 koliron: done
17:53 Riari: I only have sound in my left ear so that might be it
17:54 koliron: ah yeah probably
17:54 Riari: hypering to 02:12:581 (1) - is bad because it is soft
17:55 koliron: yeah but imo the voice is enough strong there
17:55 koliron: also to highlight the new stanza
17:56 Riari: but you haven't been working with the vocals
17:56 Riari: you've had focus compeltely in the instrumental
17:56 Riari: parts such as 02:13:306 (1) - are merely coincidental to hyper on strong vocals
17:56 koliron: no i followed both o.o
17:56 Riari: feels very instrumental focused
17:56 koliron: the thing is
17:57 koliron: usually the vocal is strong when intrumen is too
17:57 koliron: but sometimes only is the instrument and other only the voice
17:57 Riari: and your main focus throughout the song is on the sintrumental
17:57 koliron: also, the instrument is not so noticeable in 02:13:306 -
17:57 koliron: hahaha
17:57 Riari: the majority of your hypers on vocals have been because its been a high instrumental part too
17:57 Riari: I think it is noticable
17:58 koliron: mmh, but still i prefer follow the vocal, too
17:58 koliron: feels weird without hypere
17:58 koliron: hypere
17:58 Riari: okay
17:59 koliron: :3
17:59 Riari: 02:52:436 (9,10) - seperate 02:52:436 (9,10) - from the rest of the stream? Facing it out to the left would add focus to 02:52:581 (1) -
17:59 koliron: mh
17:59 koliron: yeah good idea
18:01 koliron: doneee
18:03 Riari: 03:53:885 (1) - Split this up? 03:53:740 (5) - feels like it should be a 1/2 and another 1/2 after it would sound much better
18:04 Riari: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4792103 this] looks and plays quite well
18:05 koliron: yeah in the first version had a note in 1/2 but a lot of people suggested me to remove it, because that note is so different to the rest, is like a soft note and the rest are normal/drum
18:05 koliron: the only soft notes which i added are in
18:05 koliron: 05:12:436 - this section
18:05 koliron: and when the voice is so calm, like 03:26:929 -
18:05 Riari: feels pretty big to miss out
18:06 koliron: |o
18:06 Riari: I think it plays well by feeding into the stream
18:07 koliron: maybe i can curve it, then the seed in 03:54:030 - can notice that sound bette
18:07 koliron: done
18:12 Riari: 06:14:175 (1,2) - swapping to vocals here feels very off, i think keeping 06:13:740 (3,4,5,6) - going would be much better here
18:13 koliron: i will finish the first slider in 06:14:175 (1) - and add a note in 1/4
18:13 koliron: but in the second imo the vocal is much more noticeable
18:14 Riari: Same can be said in this section at 04:08:088 (2,3,1) -
18:14 Riari: you could easily map the solo
18:15 Riari: its more prominent
18:15 koliron: mmh
18:15 Riari: but you choose not to do that until later
18:15 koliron: but that would be an obvious inconsistency in the rhythm
18:16 Riari: hm?
18:16 koliron: sometimes this song
18:16 Riari: You have 04:24:175 (1) - as a form of intermission
18:16 koliron: has weird inconsistencied
18:16 Riari: However 06:14:175 (1,2) - is very sudden
18:16 koliron: so i tried to follow as i can to be consistent, to not break the hrythm
18:16 koliron: oh
18:17 koliron: now is
18:17 koliron: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4792191
18:17 koliron: i think feels better
18:17 koliron: aaaa
18:17 Riari: yeah thats fine
18:17 koliron: :D
18:18 Riari: thats about it I guess
18:18 koliron: aaa
18:19 koliron: i want to ask you something
18:19 koliron: probably you saw why i asked the dq
18:19 Riari: hmm?
18:19 koliron: was becaouse those vertical sldiers
18:19 koliron: i changed a lot
18:19 Riari: I didn't check that
18:19 koliron: do you think now are fine?
18:19 Riari: however I think your DQ request was stupid
18:19 koliron: lol
18:20 Riari: and your reversion of mods was stupid
18:20 Riari: you were not forced to do any of it
18:20 koliron: mh
18:20 Riari: so why do it to appease some people
18:20 koliron: not really but
18:20 koliron: usually people want to make drama
18:20 koliron: and i hate the drama
18:20 Riari: anways
18:20 Riari: ill post logs
18:20 koliron: so i prefered just dq it before more
18:20 koliron: XD
18:20 koliron: yeah
18:21 koliron: thank you :D
18:21 koliron: i hope this time people will like it