CHiCO with HoneyWorks - Historia · forum

Secret Night:
00:50:408- 00:53:017- 00:55:626- 00:58:235- BSD needs to be at 1/12 for these to fit

Insane:
01:06:387- 01:07:365- sounds weird 01:08:506- 01:09:485- entire slider sounds weird
01:16:088 add spinner (same as Secret Night)

Both maps:
01:05:571- end kiai time
01:05:571- - 01:16:006- no need for kiai time

Also, I suggest you make easy, normal, and hard, difficulties. That's because the beatmap creator needs to have more difficulties than additional creators.

Last edited by wolfenstian 2016-03-20T18:31:05+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Sotarks

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Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-03-20T17:44:06+00:00

wolfenstian wrote:
Some small moderations!
Insane:

01:16:088 add spinner (same as Secret Night)

Sorry I won't apply any of your suggestion :/
Oh I only apply the spinner on Insane, i forgot it

Also I don't need to map E/N/H since I mapped 2 diff, made SB and Hitsounds... I already did much more.
Thanks anyway

EDIT 3/21 : PENDING ALL DIFF COMPLETED - READY FOR MODS

Kalibe

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Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2016-03-21T15:32:31+00:00

i'm heray dudes o/

Shyotamaze

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Shyotamaze 2016-03-21T16:16:23+00:00

Salut, petit NM encore une fois

General

Ajoute des tags
Active l'epilepsy warning

Insane

00:25:463 (3,4,5,6,7) - C'est pas une étoile parfaite
00:40:789 (1) - Le placement est pas très joli ici je trouve comparé au reste de la map, ptet stack le début du slider avec le début de celui-ci 00:40:137 (3) - et rotate 00:40:789 (1) - un peu pour que ça flow bien
00:42:093 (1) - Tu pourrais faire une petite courbe à la fin du slider pour que ça flow mieux et que ce soit plus joli comme ça https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4764777
01:08:995 (1,1) - Ils se touchent

Jolie map encore une fois, les autres diffs me semblent bien
Bonne chance!

Sotarks

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Sotarks 2016-03-21T16:34:37+00:00

Shyotamaze

Shyotamaze wrote:
Salut, petit NM encore une fois

General
Ajoute des tags Ouai je compte le faire soon tm
Active l'epilepsy warning Fixed all diff
Insane
00:25:463 (3,4,5,6,7) - C'est pas une étoile parfaite J'ai aps forcement envi de faire une étoile parfaite ici :/
00:40:789 (1) - Le placement est pas très joli ici je trouve comparé au reste de la map, ptet stack le début du slider avec le début de celui-ci 00:40:137 (3) - et rotate 00:40:789 (1) - un peu pour que ça flow bien Ok ça marche
00:42:093 (1) - Tu pourrais faire une petite courbe à la fin du slider pour que ça flow mieux et que ce soit plus joli comme ça https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4764777 Yes fixed
01:08:995 (1,1) - Ils se touchent Fixed
Jolie map encore une fois, les autres diffs me semblent bien
Bonne chance!

Thanks dude! :3

Ambient

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Joined August 2013

Ambient 2016-03-22T07:40:01+00:00

oh hey

Linada's Insane

00:20:408 (4,5) - I don't agree with this stack, feels too clumped. try moving the note to the right of the slider or move it in general.
00:23:180 (1,2) - Try adding a note on the red tick, it messes with the whole flow since there are no other patterns like this, I get that you're trying to emphasize the piano but its at the cost of the flow
00:24:974 (1,2) - Definitely remove the 2nd note and move the slider onto the red tick, a triple after a slider can be incredibly awkward.
00:46:985 (6,2) - What's with these 2 notes just BARELY touching the sliders. Move them a tad further out since you don't see this later on at 01:08:506 (3,4) - and 01:11:115 (3,4) -

So much overlappiiinngggggg but with more mods should be swell.

Besides that I couldn't find much else worth mentioning in the other diffs, so have a star

GL

Sotarks

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Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-03-22T09:49:43+00:00

Ambient wrote:
oh hey

Besides that I couldn't find much else worth mentioning in the other diffs, so have a star
GL

Thanks for the star dewd! :3

Linada

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Joined November 2014

Linada 2016-03-22T09:56:54+00:00

I feel the hate ;w;

I'll fix this when im home (around 17)

Anxient

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Joined June 2014

Anxient 2016-03-22T13:53:09+00:00

m4m for https://osu.ppy.sh/b/905047, assigned to HB24.

secret night
00:26:767 - you might want to map this. as it is right now, the spacing for 00:26:604 (2,3) - can be easily misread as a 1/2 jump, especially after you do something like 00:27:582 (3,1) - this later. so please fix the spacing.
00:30:680 (2) - wanna ctrl g this? theres a emphasis on this note so might wanna represent that note.
00:41:115 (2) - ctrl g, coz 00:40:789 (1,2) - these two belong in the same song part and imo 00:41:441 (3) - you dont need to emphasis it that much. if you still insist on emphasizing it, consider moving it to somewhere around x148:y268
00:44:539 (6,1) - the spacing in here is far too low, especially if the previous jumps were 00:44:213 (4,5,6) - that big. consider moving it like this? http://puu.sh/nPLdD/65873b8c53.jpg or at least make the spacing that wide or wider. this is a boss diff so dont hold back.
00:51:550 (2) - ctrl g this. feels more natural to me.
01:07:854 (5,6,1) - space these normally. they can be easily misread if you space em with a distance as wide as this.
01:11:930 (2,1) - emphasis is lacking. consider ctrl+g'ng 01:12:093 (1) - . itll give a nice flow break with additional distance.

nice diff. really like it.

hb's insane
00:28:316 - silence this note.
00:49:267 (1,2,3) - this feels quirky to play. make the moving distance about the same. http://puu.sh/nPLAD/eecd1cea11.jpg here is a ugly workaround to show you what i mean, but i believe that you can find a better solution.
00:54:811 (4,1) - lower the spacing, it looks weird lol to me at least :l looks better like this imo http://puu.sh/nPLDr/668696aa84.jpg
00:55:789 (4) - 00:57:745 (4) - 00:58:398 (7) - NC?
00:59:702 (3) - ctrl g?

01:02:637 (5,6,1) - same here. make the moving distance about the same. feels weird to play. try this? http://puu.sh/nPLJH/c148d6f95f.jpg
01:08:017 (4,1) - not enough emphasis to 1 imo. try doing this http://puu.sh/nPLMQ/4cf4faab70.jpg
01:15:843 (1) - why NC?
01:18:615 - delete unused green line.

good luck!

Aihuro

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Joined January 2015

Aihuro 2016-03-22T13:56:02+00:00

Hello! Here as requested in-game~
Hopefully my mod will be useful >.<
Well, here goes nothing.

Janpai's Easy:

00:06:876 (3) - Why not follow the same rhythm like you did here: 00:08:180 (1) - . It follows the vocal nicely~ http://puu.sh/nPKD1/a831938218.jpg
00:12:093 (2) - ^ Same here. Not sure why you do this, so maybe an explanation would be nice.
00:18:615 (1) - Move this slider here: X: 232 Y: 296; then move this note: 00:19:267 (2) - here: X: 368 Y: 352. To avoid overlapping with 00:16:658 (2,1) - .
00:23:506 (1) - I don't really like the way you start the slider here. I don't hear a beat ( Or it can just be me being deaf ). But I suggest you add a note here: 00:23:506 - and move that slider over here: 00:23:832 -. OR, instead of adding a note, just add another slider, like these: 00:21:876 (2,3) - . Sounds better to me~
00:30:354 (3,3) - Don't like this overlap, looks really messy. Maybe stack them by bringing 00:31:985 (2) - closer, like this: http://puu.sh/nPL3x/da975b0f99.jpg
00:55:463 (2) - I think it would be better if you end the slider here: 00:55:789 - . It ends on the beat and fits the music better imo.
01:06:224 (2,3) - Maybe make them similar? Would look neater imo.
Otherwise, the diff looks really neat and plays very nicely~ Just some overlaps keep begging me.

Akitoshi's Normal:

This diff looks fine to me~ Good job!

Kalibe's Hard:

00:22:202 (4,2) - I suggest you stack them please, looks really nazi atm.
00:23:180 (3,1) - ^ Same here, please stack them.
00:27:745 (1,2,1) - The distance here are too close and some players might get confused. Please move them further away from each other. Like this for instance: 00:30:354 (1,1) -
00:32:800 (6,2) - ^ I'm pretty sure it will be better if you stack them.
00:36:550 (4) - Move this note here: X: 256 Y: 248. It will make a nice triangle pattern.
00:52:528 (1,2,3,1) - Looks really nazi here and also crammed. . Why not just stack 00:53:017 (3,1) - ? It will avoid overlapping.
00:57:745 (1,4) - Same here. . ^ Please try to avoid this kind of overlapping.
Maybe end the diff with a spinner? Like Easy and Normal?
This diff is really fun to play! Just some minor overlaps and stacking problem bugs me a lot. Please try to polish your diff a bit more. Even though it's a hard you must still try to make a look neater more polished.

I will end my mod here. (Can't mod Insane diffs >.< Gomen)
Hope this song gets ranked! I love it!

Star*

Kalibe

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Kalibe 2016-03-22T14:23:45+00:00

Aihuro wrote:
Kalibe's Hard:
00:27:745 (1,2,1) - The distance here are too close and some players might get confused. Please move them further away from each other. Like this for instance: 00:30:354 (1,1) - i did that on purpose, also it can be change on ds cause of NC imo.

fixed all except this, thanks for mod !! :3

ananab

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SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,106 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2016-03-22T14:36:24+00:00

as you request :3

[Secret Night]

00:16:006 (1,2) - i would make the spacing bigger cause the spacing here is similar with 00:05:572 (1,2,1,2) - , and this confused player(me) lol
00:26:604 (2,3,4,1) - make this as same/similar as 00:28:398 (3,4) - or 00:29:702 (5,1) - since 2>3 is 1/1 but the spacing is similar as 00:26:441 (1,2) -
00:30:354 (1) - dont need to NC on this (suggestion
00:42:908 (4,5,6,1) - spacing here should be increasing shouldnt be decreasing imo
01:07:365 (2) - stick with 01:05:898 (2) - sliderend?
01:09:321 (2) - move to 294 159 to cinsist th espacing with 01:08:343 (2,2) -

[HB's Insane]

i prefer AR9, 9.1 just seems weird
00:27:419 (6) - NC or make 5>6 spacing bigger, this is hard to read/play, same 00:30:028 (6) - 00:32:637 (6) - 00:34:756 (2) - you can consult Linada's Insane
00:35:245 (4,5) - i would make 1/1 spacing bigger then 00:34:756 (2,3) - since is hard to read, just like sth you map it 00:51:061 (1,2,3) -
00:43:071 (5) - stick with 00:42:093 (1) -
00:45:680 (4) - move a little bit sownward to stick with 00:45:028 (2) - sliderend
01:07:691 (2,3) - here should decreasing the DS since the music got lower here ( hope you know wat i mean lol
01:10:300 (2,3,4) - ^

[Linada's Insane]

00:36:550 (2) - i would change this to a note since there isnt really a beat at 00:36:713 -
01:06:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - there are different tone 01:07:528 - to 01:08:017 - so it this shouldnt be all stick together
01:14:539 - stream start at here, since HB's Insane and Secret Night start here

well GL~

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2016-03-22T15:25:54+00:00

Heya~ M4M here.

Secret Night:

00:23:506 (2) –Nazi thing, but I suggest moving this circle to the left and upwards a bit for better flow with 00:23:180 (1) –
Picture
00:24:974 (1,2) –Spacing looks a bit intense for such a fast rhythm in the music >.< I suggest spacing it normally and not placing a jump there.
01:02:637 (1,2) –For a very fast rhythm I suggest making the spacing between these two a bit smaller. The jump looks pretty big. This similar jump: 01:05:245 (3,4) – looks better since the spacing is smaller.
01:07:854 (5,6) –Same as 00:24:974 (1,2) – These two notes: 01:08:099 (6,1) –looks a bit weird on their own. And also maybe a placement like this for better flow: This applies to all similar cases.
Picture
01:08:506 (1,1) –I don’t really like these loud whistles. They mess up the beautiful song and doesn’t fit.
01:14:539 (7) –I suggest placing this note here for better flow from 01:14:213 (6) -:
Picture

I’m not really good at modding the hardest diff, but this diff looks nice~

HB’s Insane:

00:16:658 (1,1) –I would remove these two new combo’s cuz I don’t really hear anything in the music that suggests new combo’s there.
00:21:876 (1) -^
00:34:267 (1,2) –Make the spacing here bigger since the pause between these two notes are longer than the pause between these two: 00:34:756 (2,3) –
01:06:387 (5) –From this object further on you placed whistle sounds and I don’t think they fit into the music at all, but rather ruin the music, so I suggest removing them.
01:07:854 (3) –For consistency with the NC’s, shouldn’t you place a NC here as well since that twinkling sound is here as well.
01:10:463 (3) -^
01:12:419 (2) -^
01:12:745 (3,5) -^

Very nice Insane~

Linada’s Insane:

00:39:158 (1,1) –I would unstack this. I don’t really have a reason but it just looks and plays better imo, lol.
00:41:115 (3) –This slider is touching the HP bar a lot. Please lower it a bit.
00:46:985 (6) –Either space this circle out a bit more to avoid the slight overlap or make it overlap more, cuz right now it can be improved.
00:47:637 (2) -^
I wasn’t gonna mention any overlaps in bullet-form since there are so many, but this one is just really bad imo: 00:49:593 (3,1) –

I noticed that this diff has a lot of overlaps that are very unnecessary imo. I only pointed out one but there are many. Right now the diff does look a bit untidy and can be polished. It’s still a nice diff though, just requires a lot of polishing.

Insane:

00:16:658 (3) –I would Ctrl+J this for a different sliderflow than 00:16:006 (1) –
00:23:832 (1) –Curve this slider since you used straight sliders here: 00:23:180 (1,2) –
00:32:800 (5,2) –I would rather stack this.
00:32:800 (5,2) –Same thing about the loud whistles.

Nice diff.

Kalibe’s Hard:

00:23:180 (3,1) –Rather try stacking these. I don’t think unnecessary overlaps should really be in a Hard so try to avoid it. This applies to all similar cases since I realized that there are a lot of overlaps.
00:36:876 (1,1) –Hmm, this reaction time between the spinner and the next note feels so short. I suggest removing this object: 00:39:158 (1) –

Nice diff, kalibe~ I just suggest you try to avoid some of those overlaps so the diff can look neater.

Akitoshi's Normal:
I don’t really have any complaints with the Normal since you map a Normal a lot like me, but I just want to point out that I don’t really like the loud whistles though since they ruin the music imo. >.< But other then that, great Normal.

Janpai's Easy:

I suggest placing breaks in this diff like the previous mappers did. Just for consistency throughout all the diffs.
00:23:506 (1) –I don’t really like the rhythm that this slider is following. Try this instead:
Picture

Nice diff~

Sorry for a suckish mod >.<
I’m a bit pressured with time atm.

Good Luck and take a star~!

Seto Kousuke

osu! Alumni

610 posts

Joined June 2013

Seto Kousuke 2016-03-22T15:41:03+00:00

Heyy <3

[Insane]

00:22:528 (1,2,3,4,1) - Might be just ''me'', but for a 4.30* dif, I think this little section here is waaay harder than the entire map, maybe consider nerfing this pattern just a bit? The zig-zag movements with this spacing are way trickier than the rest of the map and this is in ''theory'' the calm part of the song xD
00:46:985 (6) - Ctrl+G ? Would have a better angle in the jumps and would still have a different flow to 00:47:229 (7,1) -

[Linada's Insane]

00:17:963 (4) - This note could feel a bit better if you unstack, maybe place this a bit far away...there is a higher momentum here, but the stack doesn't really show intensity and I think that only increasing the distance in the red tick (a.k.a. 00:17:800 (3) - isn't good enough)
00:20:571 (5) - similar thing, the stack IMO doesn't fit that well...specially because 00:20:898 (6) - is linear with 5, so we hear a change in music, but in the notes it just goes weaker, imo could be a bit better
00:28:398 (1) - Could use more spacing here....I understand the little ''pauses'' in movement and I like them, but there are moments that doesn't fit that well, for example, 00:29:050 (1,2,3) - is a good example of how i think it works....but 00:28:398 (1) - is just weird >w<
00:50:082 (2) - This note could be placed somewhere near x:64 y:160. I suggest this because the current placement is a bit too messy and the distance is way lower than 00:52:528 (1,2) - and 00:55:137 (1,2) - that are the same section, that would also help a bit more with the momentum to 00:50:408 (1) - (that I also suggest place the whole section just a bit more below in case you apply the previous change)

[Secret Night]

00:46:985 (1,2,3,1) - I think the angle of this movement is just too evil, it's a really forced movement specially because the slider is 0.20x more far away, so specially in HR that would be a really tense and forced pattern, I know it happens in other maps, but imo this pattern is just way too forced and evil to play ;w; one quick fix to this would be just stack the 2 notes in the slider, would keep your pattern but make it way less forced and better to play
00:50:082 (2,1,2) - Why not stack 2 with 1 just like the other segments? (00:52:691 (2,1) - and 00:55:300 (2,1) - ) imo it plays way better
01:00:191 (5,6,1,2) - Starting these kind of jumps with a triplet is really complicated for players because the intensity of those back and forths are way bigger than the stacking of a triplet, I would suggest you make a slider in the end of this triplet, and make the first few jumps sliders too, so the player can have a better feedback of the sudden change of intensity (that you must agree, there is A LOT of intensity here xD) it's good enough if only the first jumps have sliders (you can use a higher spacing on them too) after that you're free to spam the shit out of those skystar jumps since they had a better feedback xD

Going to leave 2 stars because linada too cute and sotarks too sexy

<3

Linada

994 posts

Joined November 2014

Linada 2016-03-22T16:35:21+00:00

Ambient

Linada's Insane

00:20:408 (4,5) - I don't agree with this stack, feels too clumped. try moving the note to the right of the slider or move it in general. i didn't think it was bad but fixed
00:23:180 (1,2) - Try adding a note on the red tick, it messes with the whole flow since there are no other patterns like this, I get that you're trying to emphasize the piano but its at the cost of the flow there is no sound here, i have no reason to overmap
00:24:974 (1,2) - Definitely remove the 2nd note and move the slider onto the red tick, a triple after a slider can be incredibly awkward.oops fixed
00:46:985 (6,2) - What's with these 2 notes just BARELY touching the sliders. Move them a tad further out since you don't see this later on at 01:08:506 (3,4) - and 01:11:115 (3,4) - yep fixed

So much overlappiiinngggggg but with more mods should be swell.

SnowNiNo_

[Linada's Insane]

00:36:550 (2) - i would change this to a note since there isnt really a beat at 00:36:713 - i let since i'm following that strong beat which end at the end of my slider
01:06:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - there are different tone 01:07:528 - to 01:08:017 - so it this shouldnt be all stick together
01:14:539 - stream start at here, since HB's Insane and Secret Night start here i don't see why i would but ok

-Nya-

Linada’s Insane:

00:39:158 (1,1) –I would unstack this. I don’t really have a reason but it just looks and plays better imo, lol. ok i trust you o/
00:41:115 (3) –This slider is touching the HP bar a lot. Please lower it a bit. fixed
00:46:985 (6) –Either space this circle out a bit more to avoid the slight overlap or make it overlap more, cuz right now it can be improved.fixed in previous mod
00:47:637 (2) -^
I wasn’t gonna mention any overlaps in bullet-form since there are so many, but this one is just really bad imo: 00:49:593 (3,1) – fixed

I noticed that this diff has a lot of overlaps that are very unnecessary imo. I only pointed out one but there are many. Right now the diff does look a bit untidy and can be polished. It’s still a nice diff though, just requires a lot of polishing.

Seto Kousuke

[Linada's Insane]

00:17:963 (4) - This note could feel a bit better if you unstack, maybe place this a bit far away...there is a higher momentum here, but the stack doesn't really show intensity and I think that only increasing the distance in the red tick (a.k.a. 00:17:800 (3) - isn't good enough) i changed but i'm really not convinced of what i did, maybe will need some examples ><
00:20:571 (5) - similar thing, the stack IMO doesn't fit that well...specially because 00:20:898 (6) - is linear with 5, so we hear a change in music, but in the notes it just goes weaker, imo could be a bit better tried to change a bit
00:28:398 (1) - Could use more spacing here....I understand the little ''pauses'' in movement and I like them, but there are moments that doesn't fit that well, for example, 00:29:050 (1,2,3) - is a good example of how i think it works....but 00:28:398 (1) - is just weird >w< yep
00:50:082 (2) - This note could be placed somewhere near x:64 y:160. I suggest this because the current placement is a bit too messy and the distance is way lower than 00:52:528 (1,2) - and 00:55:137 (1,2) - that are the same section, that would also help a bit more with the momentum to 00:50:408 (1) - (that I also suggest place the whole section just a bit more below in case you apply the previous change) added the spacing since i changed all place in previous mod

Going to leave 2 stars because linada too cute and too sexy pls marry me >//<

<3

Thanks for the mods guys ! And most of overlaps are made on purpose (the ones mentionned are all fixed tho)

ok

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157,98,75028,6,0,P|132:91|111:75,3,51.7500009870529,8|0|0|0,1:1|2:0|3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
244,32,75354,6,0,P|268:39|289:54,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,1:1|2:0,0:0:0:0:
288,196,75517,2,0,P|263:188|242:173,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
368,108,75680,2,0,P|392:115|413:130,1,51.7500009870529,8|0,1:1|2:0,0:0:0:0:
412,272,75843,2,0,P|387:264|366:249,1,51.7500009870529,0|0,3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
500,204,76006,5,6,2:0:0:0:

I'm going to leave a star because Linada is so cute omg please give me affection ><

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-03-22T17:59:02+00:00

Heya!!

[Sotarks' Mod Reply]

pink = stuff fixed
purple = i take it in consideration but keep it like that for the moment
red = missunderstanding
dark blue = keep my own patern

Anxient

Anxient wrote:
m4m for https://osu.ppy.sh/b/905047, assigned to HB24.
secret night
00:26:767 - you might want to map this. as it is right now, the spacing for 00:26:604 (2,3) - can be easily misread as a 1/2 jump, especially after you do something like 00:27:582 (3,1) - this later. so please fix the spacing. Okay so instead I changed the positions of 1 and 2, and overlaped with the next patern and NC the triple so it won't confuse anybody if you follow the rythmn propely.
00:30:680 (2) - wanna ctrl g this? theres a emphasis on this note so might wanna represent that note. Okay, nice suggestion I accept it, and also Ctrl G the next one to keep a nice flow there :3
00:41:115 (2) - ctrl g, coz 00:40:789 (1,2) - these two belong in the same song part and imo 00:41:441 (3) - you dont need to emphasis it that much. if you still insist on emphasizing it, consider moving it to somewhere around x148:y268 I can agree your suggestion here, but I like this kind of V flow here for this type of rythmn and it fits well, so I won't change it sorry.
00:44:539 (6,1) - the spacing in here is far too low, especially if the previous jumps were 00:44:213 (4,5,6) - that big. consider moving it like this? http://puu.sh/nPLdD/65873b8c53.jpg or at least make the spacing that wide or wider. this is a boss diff so dont hold back. Okay dude, seems legit here. Followed your suggestion.
00:51:550 (2) - ctrl g this. feels more natural to me. Alright
01:07:854 (5,6,1) - space these normally. they can be easily misread if you space em with a distance as wide as this. I can understand what you think, but for the moment i'll keep it, i'll see if some other dudes notice it.. But I really like the way it it tho.
01:11:930 (2,1) - emphasis is lacking. consider ctrl+g'ng 01:12:093 (1) - . itll give a nice flow break with additional distance. Alright, i agree totally wew

nice diff. really like it.

good luck!

Thanks a lot for this really usefull mod Anxient ! :3

SnowNiNo_

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
as you request :3

[Secret Night]
00:16:006 (1,2) - i would make the spacing bigger cause the spacing here is similar with 00:05:572 (1,2,1,2) - , and this confused player(me) lol oh, well xD i think i don't want to change the spacing here tho ..
00:26:604 (2,3,4,1) - make this as same/similar as 00:28:398 (3,4) - or 00:29:702 (5,1) - since 2>3 is 1/1 but the spacing is similar as 00:26:441 (1,2) - Changed the patern here
00:30:354 (1) - dont need to NC on this (suggestion ok
00:42:908 (4,5,6,1) - spacing here should be increasing shouldnt be decreasing imo Well I emphasized the 2 first note of what you mentionned because clap note and voice emphasize, but the other one is the continue voice but the sound is low, so I reduced it a bit..
01:07:365 (2) - stick with 01:05:898 (2) - sliderend? okay i guess it's legit xd
01:09:321 (2) - move to 294 159 to cinsist th espacing with 01:08:343 (2,2) - ok !
well GL~

Thanks dewd!~

-Nya-

-Nya- wrote:
Heya~ M4M here.

Secret Night:
00:23:506 (2) –Nazi thing, but I suggest moving this circle to the left and upwards a bit for better flow with 00:23:180 (1) – Okay done
00:24:974 (1,2) –Spacing looks a bit intense for such a fast rhythm in the music >.< I suggest spacing it normally and not placing a jump there. emphasizing the voice here, and I like this type of patern ...
01:02:637 (1,2) –For a very fast rhythm I suggest making the spacing between these two a bit smaller. The jump looks pretty big. This similar jump: 01:05:245 (3,4) – looks better since the spacing is smaller. Ok fixed
01:07:854 (5,6) –Same as 00:24:974 (1,2) – These two notes: 01:08:099 (6,1) –looks a bit weird on their own. And also maybe a placement like this for better flow: This applies to all similar cases. Same here I like it but I'll fix the flow here sure thing :3
01:08:506 (1,1) –I don’t really like these loud whistles. They mess up the beautiful song and doesn’t fit. I took of 2 because It was bad placed but it's sampleset tho, and it will only be those whistle for poeple wich use default skin xd
01:14:539 (7) –I suggest placing this note here for better flow from 01:14:213 (6) -: Alright good idea

I’m not really good at modding the hardest diff, but this diff looks nice~

Insane:
00:16:658 (3) –I would Ctrl+J this for a different sliderflow than 00:16:006 (1) – oki
00:23:832 (1) –Curve this slider since you used straight sliders here: 00:23:180 (1,2) – I curved it a bit lol
00:32:800 (5,2) –I would rather stack this. ok
00:32:800 (5,2) –Same thing about the loud whistles.

Nice diff.

Sorry for a suckish mod >.<
I’m a bit pressured with time atm.

Good Luck and take a star~!

Thanks a lot for the mod Nya-chan ! :3

Seto Kousuke

Seto Kousuke wrote:
Heyy <3

[Insane]
00:22:528 (1,2,3,4,1) - Might be just ''me'', but for a 4.30* dif, I think this little section here is waaay harder than the entire map, maybe consider nerfing this pattern just a bit? The zig-zag movements with this spacing are way trickier than the rest of the map and this is in ''theory'' the calm part of the song xD Well I can maybe agree with you but since I want to emphasize the guitar here I think it's good and it's not DAT hard imo xD It will get new insanes players mad so that's cool LOL
00:46:985 (6) - Ctrl+G ? Would have a better angle in the jumps and would still have a different flow to 00:47:229 (7,1) - arggh pls my V flow trademark xD well actually here I disagree this patern fits totally well tho..
[Secret Night]

00:46:985 (1,2,3,1) - I think the angle of this movement is just too evil, it's a really forced movement specially because the slider is 0.20x more far away, so specially in HR that would be a really tense and forced pattern, I know it happens in other maps, but imo this pattern is just way too forced and evil to play ;w; one quick fix to this would be just stack the 2 notes in the slider, would keep your pattern but make it way less forced and better to play pok sure thing I agree here, stacked those 2 notes.
00:50:082 (2,1,2) - Why not stack 2 with 1 just like the other segments? (00:52:691 (2,1) - and 00:55:300 (2,1) - ) imo it plays way better actually I like the actual flow of those dude
01:00:191 (5,6,1,2) - Starting these kind of jumps with a triplet is really complicated for players because the intensity of those back and forths are way bigger than the stacking of a triplet, I would suggest you make a slider in the end of this triplet, and make the first few jumps sliders too, so the player can have a better feedback of the sudden change of intensity (that you must agree, there is A LOT of intensity here xD) it's good enough if only the first jumps have sliders (you can use a higher spacing on them too) after that you're free to spam the shit out of those skystar jumps since they had a better feedback xD I can agree with you about that but first of all it will fuck up why whole patern and also I don't want this to be really easy so"omg players will win ppp so easily" but I really wanted to emphasized the first note, but the ssecond one shouldn't be a slider imo just because it's "hard".. This is my opinion about that...

Going to leave 2 stars because linada too cute and sotarks too sexy

<3

U are love thanks for the mod dewd! :3

__________________________

God guys thanks for those walls of mods OwO !!

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-03-22T19:32:25+00:00

~~fudge o(╯□╰)o I'm gonna answer the mods once I got home school and gonna edit this lmao~~
ok i arrived

Aihuro wrote:
Hello! Here as requested in-game~
Hopefully my mod will be useful >.<
Well, here goes nothing.

Janpai's Easy:
00:06:876 (3) - Why not follow the same rhythm like you did here: 00:08:180 (1) - . It follows the vocal nicely~ http://puu.sh/nPKD1/a831938218.jpg
00:12:093 (2) - ^ Same here. Not sure why you do this, so maybe an explanation would be nice. I removed the intro part for consistency
00:18:615 (1) - Move this slider here: X: 232 Y: 296; then move this note: 00:19:267 (2) - here: X: 368 Y: 352. To avoid overlapping with 00:16:658 (2,1) - . okie
00:23:506 (1) - I don't really like the way you start the slider here. I don't hear a beat ( Or it can just be me being deaf ). But I suggest you add a note here: 00:23:506 - and move that slider over here: 00:23:832 -. OR, instead of adding a note, just add another slider, like these: 00:21:876 (2,3) - . Sounds better to me~ I think this is fine for now cuz I map the start of the vocals and it would be pretty dense if I turned it into 2 sliders
00:30:354 (3,3) - Don't like this overlap, looks really messy. Maybe stack them by bringing 00:31:985 (2) - closer, like this: http://puu.sh/nPL3x/da975b0f99.jpg okay
00:55:463 (2) - I think it would be better if you end the slider here: 00:55:789 - . It ends on the beat and fits the music better imo. It fits but I want to keep my rhythm for here it follows some bg sounds too
01:06:224 (2,3) - Maybe make them similar? Would look neater imo. okay
Otherwise, the diff looks really neat and plays very nicely~ Just some overlaps keep begging me.

-Nya- wrote:
Heya~ M4M here.

Janpai's Easy:
I suggest placing breaks in this diff like the previous mappers did. Just for consistency throughout all the diffs.
00:23:506 (1) –I don’t really like the rhythm that this slider is following. Try this instead:
Picture

Nice diff~ fixed all

I'll post my latest update after I answer the new mods

Last edited by Janpai 2016-03-23T09:35:09+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Annadine

490 posts

Joined July 2015

Annadine 2016-03-22T20:36:18+00:00

Hello! NM from modding queue~!
Another 2.5 hours of modding =="

Secret Night[]
Can't mod 5* \:D/

Waa it's all good and neat, I just feel like 00:49:593 (5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3) - too crumpled ><

HB's Insane[]
Can't mod 5* \:D/

00:34:756 (2) - Waaaa >< move this beat to 00:34:593 (2) -
00:55:300 (2,3,4) - do something with this spacing...?
01:00:191 (5,6,1) - ^

Linada's Insane[]

00:20:571 (5) - I think this slider should have more angle to the left
00:24:974 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think the tapping style is a bit weird... I testplay it for like 5 times and I always miss ._. What about triangle jump?
00:41:441 (4,5,7,8,1,1) - Whoa too crumpled imo.
00:43:235 (4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Aand its also hard not to miss here ;w;
If you want to keep it, at least move 00:44:376 (1) - a bit to the left to make it the same angle as 00:43:561 (2,2) - :/
00:45:354 (3) - I think this would be better to be moved a bit to the right and maybe also up a little bit.
00:49:756 (4,1,2) - I think this is too intense + too far.
01:00:028 (1) - I would suggest you to make this slider facing down more.
01:00:354 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - unpredictable jump pattern especially with the lack of follow points ==" My suggestion would be: 01:01:332 (1,2) - > reverse selection, would be a seriously better pattern that will make more sense.
01:02:148 (2,1,2) - and I don't like how this flow feels like. Just make this a square jump? Or at least move 01:02:311 (1) - down.
And 01:01:985 (1,2) - is not straight.
01:02:963 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Also these jumps. They just doesn't feel right and the location of the next circle just feels like, it could be anywhere.
it looks like this when I tried to draw it
and what pattern is that.
What I did was,
1. move 01:02:800 (2) - a bit to the right
2. move 01:03:289 (1) - down to make a better triangle, then move 01:03:452 (2) - evenly between 01:02:963 (1,2) -
  img
3. Either make 01:03:289 (1,2,1,2) - a square or an even trapezium.
4. 01:03:778 (2,1,2,1,2) - fix this angle in some way =="
It's not *fair* that 01:05:898 (2,3) - is so far apart then 01:06:224 (3,4) - so close together. Probably ctrl+shift+R 01:06:550 (4) - to make it feels nicer to aim 01:06:876 (1) - as well. (What I did was -23 degrees)
to make it more neat, probably just add curve to both sliders
01:07:202 (3,4) - Maybe move this down a little bit
01:09:811 (2) - what about more curve here, looks like a blanket ^^
I'm not quite sure with this one but what about moving 01:10:626 (2) - to where 01:10:137 (1) - was
01:13:235 (2) - what about a bit of curve here
Maybee move 01:14:050 (3) - to the left a little bit, probably where 01:14:539 (1) - is.

Insane[]

00:20:571 (1,2) - I think this feels oddly too close >.>
00:21:550 (2,3,4) - ^
00:23:180 (1,2) - ^ I mean, it's technically still the same beat as 00:22:528 (1,2,3,4) - but why is it soo close?
00:25:463 (3,4,5,6,7) - eeeh not a perfect star pattern? Move 00:25:952 (6) -
00:28:398 (3) - I think this needs to be a little bit to the left.
00:35:898 (1,2) - too close...? Either move 00:36:224 (2) - or probably adding a note in 00:36:550 (3) - won't hurt since it's starting to get upbeat there anyway.
img
00:44:376 (3,4) - too far imo.
01:04:267 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I always missed here ^^" What about 01:04:919 (1,2) - reverse selection?
00:50:408 (3,4,5,6,1) - I got confused here, and 00:53:017 (4,5,6,7,1) - here. However, not 00:55:626 (3,4,5,6,1) - here or 00:58:235 (3,4,5,6,1) - here. I think it's because of the angle.
Eeeh what about moving 01:15:680 (2) - away from 01:15:354 (1) -

Kalibe's Hard[]

00:05:572 (1,1) - Eeh same location?
I think it would be better if 00:23:017 (2,3,4) - is straight :/
Mmm make 00:49:267 (3) - curving the other way round and move it a little bit to make 00:49:267 (3,4,1) - a curve?
I think 00:52:202 (4) - is too far :/
00:58:398 (4,5,1) - they're the same beat but why different spacing ^^"
01:09:485 (1) - add a liiitle bit more curve? to make it a better blanket.
01:14:050 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - nazi, tapping

Akitoshi's Normal[]

00:17:311 (4) - curve?
00:27:419 (3,4) - eeh fix blanket
00:56:767 (5) - move up a little bit?
01:16:169 (1) - I think this spinner starts too soon.

Janpai's Easy[]
So, we meet again ^^

00:22:528 (3) - curve?
Idk, the rest is already neat, well done o/

[]

Overall is veryyy nice. I like the song, and the map has some taste indeed! It's just Linada's diff that is a bit crumpled here and there (edit: I'm not saying this in a teasing way, AND GAYS STOP QUOTING LINADA GOT REKT IM SOWWY D':), and I hope I'm not too useless ^^" Good luck~
edit2: fixed one typo -__--- and have a star🌠 ><//

Last edited by Annadine 2016-03-22T21:40:17+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-03-22T20:40:15+00:00

Linada got rekt xD

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-03-22T20:53:40+00:00

Annadine

Annadine wrote:

Hello! NM from modding queue~!
Another 2.5 hours of modding =="

Secret Night[]
Can't mod 5* \:D/
Waa it's all good and neat, I just feel like 00:49:593 (5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3) - too crumpled >< Yeah I was planing to fix it anyway so yeah.
Insane[]
00:20:571 (1,2) - I think this feels oddly too close >.> It's to emphasize the "weird noise" xd
00:21:550 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:23:180 (1,2) - ^ I mean, it's technically still the same beat as 00:22:528 (1,2,3,4) - but why is it soo close? ^
00:25:463 (3,4,5,6,7) - eeeh not a perfect star pattern? Move 00:25:952 (6) - ehh well ok
00:28:398 (3) - I think this needs to be a little bit to the left. nope it's blanketed with the other slider, and there's no overlap here so it's perfectly fine :3
00:35:898 (1,2) - too close...? Either move 00:36:224 (2) - or probably adding a note in 00:36:550 (3) - won't hurt since it's starting to get upbeat there anyway.ok fixed
00:44:376 (3,4) - too far imo. emphasized the new beat
01:04:267 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I always missed here ^^" What about 01:04:919 (1,2) - reverse selection? it's already a reversed zigzag tho
00:50:408 (3,4,5,6,1) - I got confused here, and 00:53:017 (4,5,6,7,1) - here. However, not 00:55:626 (3,4,5,6,1) - here or 00:58:235 (3,4,5,6,1) - here. I think it's because of the angle.
Eeeh what about moving 01:15:680 (2) - away from 01:15:354 (1) -its fine here
[]
Overall is veryyy nice. I like the song, and the map has some taste indeed! It's just Linada's diff that is a bit crumpled here and there, and I hope I'm not too useless ^^" Good luck~

Thanks for this mod !!

Kalibe

2,060 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2016-03-22T21:00:43+00:00

Janpai wrote:
Linada got rekt xD

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-03-22T21:06:33+00:00

Kalibe wrote:
Janpai wrote:
Linada got rekt xD

Annadine

490 posts

Joined July 2015

Annadine 2016-03-22T21:28:08+00:00

Don't bite me ;ww;

Linada

994 posts

Joined November 2014

Linada 2016-03-22T21:40:26+00:00

vbesulbknesbnjr,n

Linada

994 posts

Joined November 2014

Linada 2016-03-22T22:22:45+00:00

Annadine wrote:

Linada's Insane
00:20:571 (5) - I think this slider should have more angle to the left k why not
00:24:974 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I think the tapping style is a bit weird... I testplay it for like 5 times and I always miss ._. What about triangle jump? nah, i like the way it plays actually
00:41:441 (4,5,7,8,1,1) - Whoa too crumpled imo. tried to arrange
00:43:235 (4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Aand its also hard not to miss here ;w; but it's cool to miss here and i arranged the spacing to the right
If you want to keep it, at least move 00:44:376 (1) - a bit to the left to make it the same angle as 00:43:561 (2,2) - :/
00:45:354 (3) - I think this would be better to be moved a bit to the right and maybe also up a little bit. tried to arrange pattern a little bit
00:49:756 (4,1,2) - I think this is too intense + too far.
01:00:028 (1) - I would suggest you to make this slider facing down more.
01:00:354 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - unpredictable jump pattern especially with the lack of follow points ==" My suggestion would be: 01:01:332 (1,2) - > reverse selection, seriously would be a better pattern that will make more sense. unpredictable stream in freedom dive ??!!11!!1
btw i fixed xD
01:02:148 (2,1,2) - and I don't like this flow feels. Just make this a square jump? Or at least move 01:02:311 (1) - down.
And 01:01:985 (1,2) - is not straight.
01:02:963 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Also these jumps. They just doesn't feel right and the location of the next circle just feels like it could be anywhere.
it looks like this when I tried to draw it
and what pattern is that.
What I did was,
move 01:02:800 (2) - a bit to the right
move 01:03:289 (1) - down to make a better triangle, then move 01:03:452 (2) - evenly between 01:02:963 (1,2) -
img
Either make 01:03:289 (1,2,1,2) - a square or an even trapezium.
01:03:778 (2,1,2,1,2) - fix this angle in some way =="
i fixed that jump part with some of your advices and a bit from myself
It's not *fair* that 01:05:898 (2,3) - is so far apart then 01:06:224 (3,4) - so close together. Probably ctrl+shift+R 01:06:550 (4) - to make it feels nicer to aim 01:06:876 (1) - as well. (What I did was -23 degrees)
to make it more neat, probably just add curve to both sliders
i rotated a bit (4) but i don't want it too curved
01:07:202 (3,4) - Maybe move this down a little bit ok
01:09:811 (2) - what about more curve here, looks like a blanket ^^ it's already a blanket :v
I'm not quite sure with this one but what about moving 01:10:626 (2) - to where 01:10:137 (1) - was nice
01:13:235 (2) - what about a bit of curve here yolo
Maybee move 01:14:050 (3) - to the left a little bit, probably where 01:14:539 (1) - is. moved a bit
Thanks for the mod !! /me need huges hugs

Annadine wrote:
It's just Linada's diff that is a bit crumpled here and there
(edit: I'm not saying this in a teasing way, AND GAYS STOP QUOTING LINADA GOT REKT IM SOWWY D':), and I hope I'm not too useless ^^" Good luck~
i'm not even mad i'm just crying

s a l t e d

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Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Sotarks 2016-03-22T22:26:37+00:00

Linada wrote:
unpredictable stream in freedom dive ??!!11!!1

i died

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2016-03-22T22:57:11+00:00

Anxient

Anxient wrote:
m4m for https://osu.ppy.sh/b/905047, assigned to HB24.

hb's insane
00:28:316 - silence this note. // why especially this note?
00:49:267 (1,2,3) - this feels quirky to play. make the moving distance about the same. http://puu.sh/nPLAD/eecd1cea11.jpg here is a ugly workaround to show you what i mean, but i believe that you can find a better solution. //i really dont know where to place it x(
00:54:811 (4,1) - lower the spacing, it looks weird lol to me at least :l looks better like this imo http://puu.sh/nPLDr/668696aa84.jpg// i use 1.3 ds for this kind of things so :v
00:55:789 (4) - 00:57:745 (4) - 00:58:398 (7) - NC? //only on the second one
00:59:702 (3) - ctrl g? //nah
01:02:637 (5,6,1) - same here. make the moving distance about the same. feels weird to play. try this? http://puu.sh/nPLJH/c148d6f95f.jpg// i tried ;w;
01:08:017 (4,1) - not enough emphasis to 1 imo. try doing this http://puu.sh/nPLMQ/4cf4faab70.jpg //did ctrl+g on the kekslider :p
01:15:843 (1) - why NC? //sv change :v
01:18:615 - delete unused green line.

good luck!

SnowNiNo_

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
as you request :3

[HB's Insane]
i prefer AR9, 9.1 just seems weird //meh :p
00:27:419 (6) - NC or make 5>6 spacing bigger, this is hard to read/play, same 00:30:028 (6) - 00:32:637 (6) - 00:34:756 (2) - you can consult Linada's Insane //ye ye
00:35:245 (4,5) - i would make 1/1 spacing bigger then 00:34:756 (2,3) - since is hard to read, just like sth you map it 00:51:061 (1,2,3) -
00:43:071 (5) - stick with 00:42:093 (1) - //ok
00:45:680 (4) - move a little bit sownward to stick with 00:45:028 (2) - sliderend //isnt it stacked already? aanyway
01:07:691 (2,3) - here should decreasing the DS since the music got lower here ( hope you know wat i mean lol //lol, the piano notes are acutally getting louder there
01:10:300 (2,3,4) - ^ //for me its actually decreased there
well GL~

-Nya-

-Nya- wrote:
Heya~ M4M here.

HB’s Insane:
00:16:658 (1,1) –I would remove these two new combo’s cuz I don’t really hear anything in the music that suggests new combo’s there.
00:21:876 (1) -^
00:34:267 (1,2) –Make the spacing here bigger since the pause between these two notes are longer than the pause between these two: 00:34:756 (2,3) –
01:06:387 (5) –From this object further on you placed whistle sounds and I don’t think they fit into the music at all, but rather ruin the music, so I suggest removing them. //its not my hitsounds x(
01:07:854 (3) –For consistency with the NC’s, shouldn’t you place a NC here as well since that twinkling sound is here as well.
01:10:463 (3) -^
01:12:419 (2) -^
01:12:745 (3,5) -^

Very nice Insane~

Everything else is fixed, thx for this usefull mod ^_^

Annadine

Annadine wrote:
HB's Insane[]
Can't mod 5* \:D/
00:34:756 (2) - Waaaa >< move this beat to 00:34:593 (2) - //folowing the loud beat
00:55:300 (2,3,4) - do something with this spacing...? //i used ds for that so its consistent
01:00:191 (5,6,1) - ^ //^

Thx guys 0/

Linada got rekt

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Anxient

1,568 posts

Joined June 2014

Anxient 2016-03-23T03:03:09+00:00

linada got rekt

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-03-23T03:25:04+00:00

The gap between Normal and Hard is pretty big compared to the rest in the mapset imo.

[Janpai's Easy]

00:10:137 (3,1) - Not sure if this is a mistake but make a consistent DS please.
00:27:745 (3,1,2) - The flow here is really complex for Easy, some players might go for 00:29:376 (2) instead of 00:29:050 (1) so highly suggest to unblanket 00:27:745 (3,2) and place 00:29:376 (2) somewhere above 00:29:050 (1) so it'll be less confusing (This will be similar to what you did on 00:31:658 (1,2) ).
00:40:789 (3) - 00:43:724 (4) - 00:46:006 (3) - Idk why you skip those white ticks in the middle, all of this could have been a 1/2 repeat slider or something. Both instruments and vocal landed there so strongly recommend not to skip those.
00:47:311 (1) - Feels weird when you have a stronger beat on the tail, I think Ctrl+G the rhythm here 00:47:311 (1,2) would be better because both 00:47:392 - 00:47:637 will be clickable, like what you did on 00:42:093 (1,2) .
00:53:180 (2,3) - Optional here but if you want to avoid that 3/2 spacing+a better polarity change you might want to try this rhythm.

[Akitoshi's Normal]

01:15:191 - 01:15:517 - Add something? I think those beats are pretty strong as well and that way make things more intense at the end.
Well everything else looks fine, I modded your diffs several times and I know you don't need mods anyway. /me runs

[Kalibe's Hard]

00:17:963 (3) - Better use that N-Clap on the head here.
00:21:224 (1,2,3) - The flow feels uncomfortable for some reason, I think it's because of the angle though.
00:27:582 (6,1,2) - Why you stacked 00:27:582 (6,2) when they have a different beat spacing? At least I misinterpreted that completely.
00:30:354 (1,1) - Feels weird to left those beats empty tho, maybe a 1/1 slider starting from 00:31:006 could work here.
00:52:528 (1) - Dude not sure if it's just me but I clearly heard a cymbal here.
Lmao I just realized later that Sotarks didn't update your diff by the time I'm modding this, rip me.

Btw I think HP's a bit low for Insane considering it's 4.39 tho, actually I would prefer 6 but 5.5-5.9 is also fine too, good luck~

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-03-23T05:15:12+00:00

Annadine wrote:
Akitoshi's Normal[]
00:17:311 (4) - curve? due to same slider 00:17:963 (5) - so no change
00:27:419 (3,4) - eeh fix blanket idk if there's wrong with my blanet but ok fixed I think :3
00:56:767 (5) - move up a little bit? tried, but I can see this can break the flow so I'll go with my current style.
01:16:169 (1) - I think this spinner starts too soon. 1/2 gap isn't hurt bro

Electoz wrote:
[Akitoshi's Normal]

01:15:191 - 01:15:517 - Add something? I think those beats are pretty strong as well and that way make things more intense at the end. nice idea. Added slidertail on 01:15:843 - but not on 01:15:191 - because it will be too intense xd
Well everything else looks fine, I modded your diffs several times and I know you don't need mods anyway. /me runs /me chase

Thanks guys!

Update, sry for being late I was on dreamland

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291,104,64267,2,0,P|312:153|302:223,2,105,8|8|8,1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
213,33,65245,2,0,L|137:38,1,52.5,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
113,59,65571,6,0,P|66:70|7:60,1,105,12|8,1:1|1:1,0:0:0:0:
17,166,66224,2,0,P|64:155|123:165,1,105,8|8,1:1|1:1,0:0:0:0:
219,194,66876,1,8,1:1:0:0:
293,267,67202,2,0,L|301:331,1,52.5,8|2,1:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,367,67528,2,0,B|370:370|370:370|428:353,1,105,8|8,1:1|1:1,0:0:0:0:
491,275,68180,6,0,L|477:154,1,105,8|10,1:1|1:1,0:0:0:0:
473,65,68832,1,8,1:1:0:0:
378,19,69158,1,8,1:1:0:0:
293,81,69485,2,0,P|246:108|179:107,1,105,10|8,1:1|1:1,0:0:0:0:
92,97,70137,1,8,1:1:0:0:
23,176,70463,2,0,L|30:243,1,52.5,8|0,1:1|3:0,0:0:0:0:
38,279,70789,6,0,P|82:309|130:325,1,105,12|8,1:1|1:1,0:0:0:0:
234,338,71441,1,8,1:1:0:0:
336,316,71767,1,8,1:1:0:0:
417,250,72093,2,0,L|405:143,1,105,8|8,1:1|1:1,0:0:0:0:
394,94,72582,1,0,3:0:0:0:
387,41,72745,2,0,B|331:32|331:32|270:46,1,105,8|8,1:1|1:1,0:0:0:0:
183,74,73398,6,0,B|127:83|127:83|66:69,2,105,12|8|8,1:1|1:1|1:1,0:0:0:0:
284,43,74376,2,0,L|331:103,1,52.5,8|0,1:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,129,74702,2,0,P|343:182|320:232,1,105,8|8,1:1|1:1,0:0:0:0:
228,275,75354,2,0,L|164:280,1,52.5,8|0,1:1|3:0,0:0:0:0:
160,229,75680,2,0,L|96:234,1,52.5,8|0,1:1|3:0,0:0:0:0:
55,240,76006,5,6,2:0:0:0:
256,192,76169,12,0,79919,0:0:0:0:

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