Timorisu wrote:

01:14:727 (2,3,4,5) - All of the patterns like this would be 1000x better if it was 4 circles and 1 slider, and not 3 circles and 1 slider. The way the slider ends on a downbeat removes and kind of emphasis this pattern could have, plus skipping the beat on the blue tick afterwards is pretty weird...

Chibi Maruko wrote:

From my queue

Oh my god. Im too late ;w; sorry laziest
here full mod

hyper and standard too slow for me

Insane

1. 01:22:091 (5) - Ctrl + G better, dude
2. 02:59:727 (3) - ^ no way
3. 03:01:909 (3,4,5) - This 3 notes are too much spacing jumps for this diff. Try use 1.8 DS to make better flow reduce to 1.9
4. 03:50:045 (3) - Stack at slider is better not a fan of stacked notes
5. 03:53:454 (6) - NC here? got it

Extra

1. 01:13:636 (3) - Ctrl + G cause awkward lol m wait why? too hard to think this one
2. 01:27:000 (8) - ^ how can that anti flow work?
3. 02:00:000 (1) - ^
4. 03:00:000 (4) - ^looks good
5. 03:40:909 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376110 this better cause stack is better pls i like overlaps :<

Everlasting Memory

1. 01:13:909 (3) - Ctrl + G cause the slider look awkward well that thing better than CTRL+G'd
2. 01:20:454 (9) - ^ distance and flow too far
3. 01:24:818 (8) - ^ that one is circular flow not realy a zigzag jump
4. 01:38:864 (4) - Can u change this overlap because this slider look soo woob stacked
5. 01:47:591 (4) - ^ it is actually fine
6. 02:05:045 (4) - ^ okay same
7. 02:11:454 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376078 this better cause look slanting fixed
8. 02:59:454 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4376085 like above comment fixed
9. 03:06:545 (5) - NC here? for what, there is no finish sound thing there
10. 03:41:182 (4,5) - Ctrl + G couse awkward talking same time i like back jump flow instead front jump flow
11. 03:43:227 (3,4) - ^ i can say same thing here

Ok, gl with ur map \:D/
If i bn, I can rank this map lol LOL

1. Aleycks' Another have different combo colors from other diffs
2. I'm pretty sure that this hitsound has no use: soft-hitclap20-1lama.wav
3. Why "110bpm" is on tags? It can be searched on the web just by typing "bpm=110"

1. 00:34:909 (1,2) - DS
2. 01:15:000 (2,3) - ^
3. 01:21:818 (2,3) - ^
4. 01:24:000 (3,4) - ^
5. 01:09:818 (1) - Move to the left. This slider if somehow outside of the editing screen.

1. The CS here is small for the spread imo.

Hpocks wrote:

My Disgusting Mod

General
-I dont think you need to add the gd creators names into the tags because they are already on diff names. i should put GD mappers into tags

Everlasting Memeory
00:25:909 - I dont really like the slider shape here. Also, I think it ends too early.
00:56:182 - Honestly I think the transition from slow to fast is too violent. Highscore had a long slider before falling into hardcore jumps. Maybe try extending the blue slider into a curved one similar to highscore and take out 2 and 3.
00:57:409 - Nice symmetrical pattern, then 00:57:818 - than not symmetrical at all in the slightest pattern. Looks ugly back to back imo without a slider
01:14:454 - Imo nc looks nicer
01:32:318 - would sound much cleaner as just a single note than a slider (Same for other sliders that are similar). Either that OR just reduce the volume at the end of the short sliders (its an issue of sound, not of playability) looks boring
02:27:273 - Personally I think this break should be uninterrupted. somebody needs to get free HP xD
02:54:000 - RIP reading lol im sure players can read that because it's really fits the music
03:16:364 - This break is totally unnesciary

Serious question... Why didnt you make this a marathon? You obviosuly showed by 04:13:091 - you can easily extend the map altogther by slow sliders, so why not make it a marathon if you can? (Also, I think the song should end at 04:13:091 - Residentsleeper) make it marathon really unecessary because too much slow parts can be boring in intro (yeah spend 1 minutes on slow parts really boring, so i decide to make it 40 seconds)

Strategas wrote:

why am I here after one month

[Everlasting Memory]

00:21:818 (1,2) - use same shaped slider nub
00:34:636 (4) - nice finish on slider end
00:48:000 (1,2,3) - tbh I don't like how you handle these sliders in this whole part. you can try making them more neat or increase some distance between them or also try increase sv maybe in few retries this slider can be good
oh boy well 00:56:727 (1) - until 01:14:182 (1) - seems like you map this part with snares being on slider end everywhere, 00:57:136 (3) - 00:58:227 (4) - 00:59:318 (3) - etc. Idk what exactly you follow here but I'm quite sure those are stronger than anything in here (well except for some downbeats like 00:58:909 (1) - ) listen to melody please, yeah it kind a bit diferent with downbeat and upbeat there
00:58:909 (1) - so next, basicly this doesn't get emphasized at all, I mean because you already mapped fullscreen jumps to the "normal" rhythm so there's almost no way you can emphasize at right now, I suggest nerf a few previous jumps to set up this note as most spaced one so it actually feels strong
00:57:409 (1,2,3) - like compare this to 00:57:954 (2,3) - it's the same music yet it's like double the spacing difference the spacing difference quite big in end of that part i guess
01:00:682 (1,2,3) - 01:00:000 (1,2,3) - this kind of also feels wrong rhythm wise since 01:00:682 (1,2,3) - feels much more intense imo, but it's spacing is halved to the previous jumps fixed a bit
01:03:954 (1,2,3,1) - ye now you make the square but leave the downbeat unemphasized compared to 00:57:409 (1,2,3,1) - which was better handled squadre
01:04:909 (5) - wow there's actually one snare you mapped as clickable uu okay
01:12:409 (3,1,2) - so um 1 too close to 3 considering it's jumps everywhere it kind off slows the movement down too much
01:20:318 (9,10) - the flow tho, the 9 doesn't transition into 10 at all then 01:20:454 (10,1) - kinda unflowy either
01:37:909 (1,2,1,2) - yea beat emphasis can be better, atleast do something like 01:44:454 (1,2,1) - which is still acceptable
01:51:000 (1,2,1) - yep
01:53:182 (1,2) - those are much calmer than the previous but now they are fullscreen -___________-
02:04:091 (1,2,1) - zzz well they repeat so recheck which of these paterns you use make more sense and which less
02:23:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - nah this isn't as strong as you imply here
02:39:273 - you could split this into two spinners ye?
02:53:182 (1,1,1) - you can try playing with the SV here a bit
02:59:454 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - yeah weakest beats that are barely audible get spaced the most here atleast i followed synth and kick snare with intense pattern which can be better at gameplay
03:06:545 (5,6) - zz flow that just only sliders
03:10:364 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - this is so overdone compared to 03:01:636 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - . I'd suggest doign something like 03:01:636 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - because it actually had decent buildup i raise the spacing a bit, end of kiai
03:16:364 - why is there a break here xd because if i put pattern like 03:25:091 (1,2,3) - in 03:16:364 it will become unnecessary, so i put the break time there
03:40:909 (2,3,4,5,6) - this kind of distancing is what I felt should have been used more in this section
04:24:000 (1) - can try to make the bottom part more curved too look better. something like https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/6PMQ1Ru.png

um so I really want you to reconsider your first jumpy part of the map (00:56:727 (1) - to 01:13:909 (3) - ) and look at it closely again, atm for me it seems really sloppy and close to no structure but just jumps placed all over the screen to random beats
well maybe I don't get your style or something but it's just something how I see it, if you apply things I mentioned try to look for them in the whole map as most of the things I said here repeats.
Hope it helps, good luck with the set!

victor david wrote:

very good, muito bom

victor david wrote:

very good, muito bom

Fort wrote:

no longer map, because (you know right now what happen to me lol)

willia02 wrote:

---------------------------------MOD---------------------------------
Nhawak's Standard
00:56:727 . (Unnecessary), 01:13:636 .(unnecessary), 02:58:432 add kiai time for about 3 seconds to 5 seconds. that kiai thing isnt necessary
Collab Hyper
00:30:000 (3) Combo nomor 3 bisa dimiringkan sesuai dengan combo sebelumnya agar sesuai dengan combo sebelumnya (penempatan). (Kurang penting abaikan saja) | Third combo can be tilted to the same as previous combo to sync with previous combo. GAK PENTING!!!
00:56:727 and 01:13:636 (unnecessary) Same as Nhawak's Standard please add kiai time for epic moment.
01:15:682 (4) is not sync with beat because it should be a 1/8 rest.
02:16:773 (4) Same as above.
02:18:954 (5) is not sync with beat because same reason as above.
Insane
01:09:136 Combo nomor 6 tidak sesuai beat. Maaf sudah sesuai beat.
02:04:773 Combo nomor 2 tidak sesuai beat.
03:08:727 (3,4,5,6) Kurang sesuai jarak antar hitcircle jarak dari combo 5 ke 6 agak jauh, silahkan dilihat.. dibenerin dikit
03:32:454 (3,4,5,6,1) Tolong perhatikan jarak antar hitcircle, kurang sesuai dengan beatnya dan jarak antara 3 ke 4 terlalu dekat. ane gk ngerti knp terlalu dekat itu udah 1.6x jaraknya, konsisten sama jarak sebelumnya
Aleycks' Another
Mulai mabok dari difficulty ini
Nothing wrong but make sure to make the jump more closer because sometimes its not reachable with mouse.
Extra
01:48:545 (1,2,1,2) agak cukup membingungkan sebaiknya dihilangkan saja bisa dibayangkan betapa pusingnya pemain ketika melihat pola ini apalagi mouse player. alasan yang aneh, ane sendiri mouse player gk bingung liat pola kaya gini
Everlasting Memory
Ini nih masterpiecenya Fort.
01:03:954 - 01:05:318 Tolong dibuat lebih dekat lagi jaraknya dan kurangin combonya jangan terlalu jauh karena susah dijangkau. pls ini map 7 star, ada yang lebih jauh lagi dah jarak nya selain ini
03:50:727 (1,2,3,4) Terlalu jauh jarak antar combo, kalau bisa combo 2 dan 3 pas disumbu y. gk ngerti sama ini tapi okelah
03:34:773 Dibuat sejarak dengan combo sebelumnya Tidak masalah
03:35:864 Ibid. ane makin gk ngerti

Keseluruhan/Overall:
1. Tolong dipotong saja .mp3 jika tidak ingin dimap sampai 5 menit. | Please trim the .mp3 files if you don't want map this song until 5 minutes. gamau, ane udah map ending di diff terakhir
2. 00:56:727 dan 01:13:636 mungkin perlu ditambah kiai time yang hanya 3-5 detik saja. | 00:56:727 and 01:13:636 should have kiai time.
3. Mungkin difficulty Everlasting Memory perlu "dirapikan" polanya. Tidak perlu sudah cukup bagus polanya.


Terima Kasih Atas Perhatiannya | Thank You for Your Attention

21:01 Fort: hello
21:01 Kami-senpai: heyo
21:01 Fort: you know me?
21:01 Kami-senpai: ofc
21:02 Kami-senpai: i love your highscore
21:02 Fort: oh really
21:02 Kami-senpai: contrary to what others say i think its a great map
21:02 Fort: yeah haha, same here
21:02 Fort: and now
21:02 Fort: i talk to you because i need something from you
21:03 Fort: i map a map like highscore
21:03 Fort: again
21:03 Kami-senpai: ahaha
21:03 Kami-senpai: oh really
21:03 Kami-senpai: what do you need?
21:03 *Fort is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/842458 Panda Eyes & Teminite - Immortal Flame (feat. Anna Yvette)]
21:04 Fort: i need your help by mod this map, so i can push this map
21:04 Fort: for rank
21:04 Kami-senpai: sure
21:04 Kami-senpai: let me finish this mod right now
21:04 Fort: if you want something from me i can help
21:04 Kami-senpai: i would ask for a gd but unfortunately i dont have any maps that need it atm
21:05 Kami-senpai: can i ask you for a mod?
21:05 Fort: just tell me some okay
21:05 Kami-senpai: oh ok
21:05 Kami-senpai: ill ask you for a gd when the chance arises XD
21:05 Fort: i can mod
21:05 Fort: yeah i can do GD if the song was electronic genre
21:06 Fort: i rarely map anime or tv size songs
21:06 Kami-senpai: actually i do have one
21:06 Kami-senpai: its graveyarded atm but if you GD i will try for rank
21:07 Fort: umm okay
21:07 Fort: tell me if you really want to rank it
21:07 Kami-senpai: i honestly really do
21:08 Kami-senpai: the only reason why its graveyarded is because i had no idea how to map easy through hard at the time
21:08 Fort: yeah
21:08 Kami-senpai: i have practiced more for those recently so i think ill give it another shot
21:08 Fort: and 1 note
21:09 Kami-senpai: or spam some GD queues for easy and normal XD
21:09 Fort: dont ask me to make Easy, Normal, Hard diff okay
21:09 Fort: :D
21:09 Fort: i always make Insane or Extra fo GD
21:09 Kami-senpai: i wont
21:09 Fort: okay, just telling you haha
21:09 Kami-senpai: definitely want your style for an extra for this map
21:09 Kami-senpai: its very similar to highscore in that regards
21:10 Fort: lol okay
21:10 Fort: if i know your map, it can be great
21:10 *Kami-senpai is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/909757 Spag Heddy - Pink Koeks]
21:10 Kami-senpai: this one
21:11 Kami-senpai: sorry i was modding
21:11 Fort: oh that
21:12 Fort: drumstep skill
21:12 Fort: and okay, have fun with your modding job
21:12 Kami-senpai: ill mod your map rn
21:13 Fort: sure
21:13 Fort: it's really nice for me
21:13 Kami-senpai: which diff you want me to mod? all
21:13 Kami-senpai: ?
21:14 Fort: maybe only my diff
21:14 Kami-senpai: oh alright
21:14 Fort: like Everlasting Memory, Extra, Insane
21:15 Kami-senpai: ok got it
21:17 Fort: im waiting for your mod, probably i want to doing something on that map after you mod that map
21:17 Kami-senpai: ok ill be quick
21:17 Kami-senpai: i probably wont be able to find too much
21:17 Kami-senpai: wait ill just do it here lol
21:18 Kami-senpai: general: offset should be 4,358
21:18 Kami-senpai: but thats not too much of an issue
21:18 Fort: wait
21:19 Fort: it's a little bit late
21:20 Kami-senpai: lol its fine then
21:20 Kami-senpai: not too big of a deal
21:20 Kami-senpai: im just really anal about timing
21:20 Fort: im using program
21:20 Fort: to determine timing
21:21 Kami-senpai: oh really?
21:21 Fort: http://puu.sh/aibtD.zip
21:21 Kami-senpai: oh that looks super useful
21:22 Kami-senpai: eh well maybe im wrong, but i usually listen to it 25% to get the offset
21:22 Kami-senpai: anyways
21:22 Kami-senpai: back to the mod
21:22 Fort: :3
21:22 Kami-senpai: 01:08:727 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - i think you should keep these consistent with the patterns before
21:23 Kami-senpai: the slider, 2, slider 1 2 oattern
21:23 Fort: mention me the previous pattern
21:23 Kami-senpai: 01:01:091 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 
21:24 Kami-senpai: oh this is everlasting memory btw
21:24 Fort: 01:05:045 (1,2,3) -
21:24 Kami-senpai: listening to the music, 01:14:727 (1,2) - the sounds on these two are more emphasized than the sounds on 01:15:000 (3,4) - these two
21:25 Fort: eh wrong timestamps
21:25 Kami-senpai: i would move 01:14:727 (1,2) -  farther apart than 01:15:000 (3,4) - 
21:25 Kami-senpai: just for emphasis
21:26 Fort: so i need to increase distance for 01:14:727 (1,2) - ?
21:26 Kami-senpai: yea 
21:26 Kami-senpai: 01:23:454 (1,2,3,4) -  same with these four
21:27 Fort: i trying to make ascension distance but i think it's too hard
21:27 Fort: but i can try this
21:28 Kami-senpai: 01:26:045 (4) - 
21:28 Kami-senpai: i would make this into a circle and slider
21:28 Kami-senpai: circle at 1:26:045
21:28 Kami-senpai: and slider at 1:26:182
21:29 Kami-senpai: 01:28:227 (4) - same with this
21:29 Fort: okay will handle this
21:29 Kami-senpai: 01:28:909 (6) - maybe make this a more interesting shape than just a curve since the sound in the music is so different
21:30 Fort: how about this 01:23:864 (4) - ?
21:30 Kami-senpai: yea same for that as well
21:30 Kami-senpai: cuz theres emphasis on the music where each of those sliders end
21:30 Fort: but i like this break shot
21:30 Fort: :<
21:30 Kami-senpai: i do as well
21:31 Kami-senpai: eh
21:31 Kami-senpai: maybe keep it then
21:31 Kami-senpai: its fun
21:31 Fort: really?
21:31 Kami-senpai: im just really used to mapping close to the music
21:31 Fort: wow cool
21:31 Fort: thanks
21:31 Fort: i'll keep it
21:31 Kami-senpai: btw i really like what you have in this section 01:31:636 (1) - 
21:31 Kami-senpai: starting there
21:32 Kami-senpai: 01:37:909 (1,2) - although these can be made a little bigger jump wise
21:32 Kami-senpai: NC off
21:32 Kami-senpai: 01:47:864 (1) - 
21:33 Fort: oh i have new idea for that part
21:34 Kami-senpai: 03:00:409 (8,9) - 
21:34 Kami-senpai: align these in a line. I think itll flow better
21:34 Fort: release NC
21:35 Fort: you mean
21:35 Fort: line slider?
21:35 Kami-senpai: yea
21:35 Kami-senpai: sorry if its going too fast
21:35 Kami-senpai: im just trying to get these in before i forget XD
21:35 Fort: make it linear with 03:00:545 (9,1) - ?
21:35 Kami-senpai: no
21:36 Kami-senpai: tilt 03:00:547 (9) - so that its in line with the jump from 03:00:411 (8) - 
21:36 Fort: oh i see
21:36 Kami-senpai: 02:58:911 (1,1,1,1,2,1) - i think it would be really awesome if you increased slider velocity for these and made them more unique shaped
21:37 Fort: good good good
21:37 Fort: ummm
21:38 Fort: for sliders only? or for circle pattern too?
21:38 Fort: and
21:38 Fort: is that yell hitsounds feels too loud?
21:38 Kami-senpai: what do you mean circle pattern
21:38 Fort: if yes i'll fix it
21:38 Kami-senpai: and yea yell is a bit loud
21:39 Fort: okay i'll fix
21:40 Kami-senpai: 03:50:727 (1) - feel like this is a bit too far away
21:40 Kami-senpai: 04:01:500 (2,3) - align these
21:40 Fort: oh too far ya
21:41 Kami-senpai: 04:34:909 (1) - 
21:41 Kami-senpai: this is supposed to be heart right?
21:42 Fort: :D
21:42 Fort: it's my quick design skill
21:42 Fort: i create and didnt polish it but it's looks good for me lol
21:44 Kami-senpai: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/SjKGI3W.jpg
21:44 Fort: 04:01:091 (1,2,3) - umm i think for this, hard to say but i want keep this triangle flow
21:44 Kami-senpai: something like this maybe?
21:45 Fort: 04:01:091 (1,2) - this pattern looks cool haha
21:45 Kami-senpai: oh ya i know
21:45 Fort: lol
21:45 Kami-senpai: just telling you to tilt 04:01:636 (3) - a bit
21:46 Fort: oh good idea
21:46 Kami-senpai: i think thats all for everlasting memory
21:47 Kami-senpai: gonna do extra once you've finished modding that
21:47 Fort: about that heart shape
21:48 Kami-senpai: what about the shape?
21:48 Fort: i make that slider more neater by fix the slider border to make that slider sync more with song
21:48 Kami-senpai: oh i see
21:48 Kami-senpai: thats fine then
21:48 Kami-senpai: not essential change, just aesthetics
21:48 Fort: the shape no change haha
21:49 Kami-senpai: ok onto your extra now
21:49 Kami-senpai: like your hardest diff, i would suggest you make long sliders like 00:52:364 (1,1) - these more unique
21:49 Kami-senpai: instead of just simple curves
21:49 Kami-senpai: 01:03:000 (5,1) - blanket these properly
21:50 Fort: eh yeah
21:50 Fort: about high SV changes
21:50 Fort: i think my SV setting is enough in that part
21:50 Kami-senpai: oh i know
21:51 Kami-senpai: it just seems like just straight line is sort of boring
21:51 Fort: if too fast it's should be really hard to make slider keep stable
21:51 Fort: sorry for that but im focusing for jump flow
21:51 Fort: so i make slider more straight, for easier pattern reading
21:51 Kami-senpai: oh this is for slow part
21:51 Kami-senpai: 00:26:182 (1) - 
21:51 Kami-senpai: this
21:52 Fort: yeah
21:52 Fort: that's too
21:52 Kami-senpai: ya i understand straight sliders for fast parts
21:52 Fort: just like highscore
21:52 Fort: haha
21:52 Kami-senpai: ah ok
21:52 Kami-senpai: maybe simplicity is better
21:52 Fort: yeah i think
21:53 Kami-senpai: 01:14:864 (3) - I think this would be better as single circles instead of slider
21:53 Fort: the song is not really strong
21:54 Kami-senpai: 01:21:682 (4) - i would move this to where 01:21:545 (3) - is right now, timing wise
21:55 Fort: i need to swap that thing?
21:55 Kami-senpai: yea on the timeline
21:56 Kami-senpai: 02:21:273 (6,7,8) - these would work better as single long slider
21:56 Kami-senpai: 03:08:182 (3) - 
21:56 Kami-senpai: i like this slider
21:56 Fort: weird
21:57 Fort: 01:21:682 (4) - i swap this as you said before
21:57 Fort: the beat feels weird :/
21:57 Kami-senpai: maybe cuz your hitsounding
21:57 Fort: 01:21:682 - holding slider in here is nice i think
21:57 Fort: lol no
21:57 Fort: im using 0% effect sound now
21:58 Kami-senpai: hmm
21:58 Kami-senpai: maybe get rid of the repeat then
21:58 Kami-senpai: and just have normal slider?
21:58 Kami-senpai: it feels weird to me the way you have it
21:59 Fort: if im doing normal slider it will same like 01:22:091 (5,6,7) - then
21:59 Fort: it same like i make LOL slider
21:59 Fort: too repetitive
22:00 Fort: okay maybe i can change01:22:091 (5,6) - to circle
22:01 Kami-senpai:  https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/sTyEULf.jpg
22:01 Kami-senpai: something like this?
22:02 Kami-senpai: 02:09:273 (2,3,4) - I like this pattern better than 02:07:091 (2,3,4) - 
22:02 Fort: dam
22:02 Fort: i already fix that slider pattern before
22:02 Fort: lol rewind this
22:04 Kami-senpai: 03:44:454 (4) - maybe make this curve the other way so its in line with 03:44:182 (2,3) - 
22:05 Kami-senpai: wait
22:05 Fort: 02:09:273 (2,3,4) - pattern changing
22:05 Kami-senpai: are you sure you mapped 80% of the song?
22:05 Fort: i think it feels same :)
22:05 Kami-senpai: yea i get that now
22:05 Kami-senpai: thats fine 
22:05 Fort: yeah
22:05 Kami-senpai: cuz you stop at 80% but you have lots of breaks
22:06 Fort: i feel like somebody map some song in 30%
22:06 Kami-senpai: lol
22:06 Kami-senpai: those are unrankable
22:06 Fort: and it's ranked
22:06 Fort: LOL
22:06 Kami-senpai: pretty sure it needs to be at least 80% total song
22:06 Kami-senpai: wait wtf
22:06 Fort: im forget the map
22:06 Kami-senpai: WHAT
22:06 Kami-senpai: BN PLEASE
22:06 Kami-senpai: WHY
22:07 Kami-senpai: fml. people told me to edit mp3 on my map because i had long space after
22:07 Kami-senpai: smh
22:07 Kami-senpai: anyways onto insane now
22:07 *Fort is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/666347 KOAN Sound & Asa - Starlite [SNB's Light Insane]]
22:07 Fort: this maybe
22:07 Kami-senpai: sorry for blazing thorugh this
22:08 Kami-senpai: 01:17:318 (4,5) - these are sort of unpredictable due to slower AR and space in between
22:08 Kami-senpai: move farther apart i suppose
22:08 Kami-senpai: 01:26:045 (4,5,6) - same with these
22:09 Fort: slow AR
22:10 Fort: wow
22:10 Fort: this diff has AR9.3
22:10 Fort: you said that's slow, oh god
22:10 Kami-senpai: no this is insane rn
22:10 Fort: oh lol
22:10 Kami-senpai: lmaooo
22:10 Kami-senpai: yea no
22:10 Kami-senpai: im not that crazy
22:11 Fort: sure changed to 1/1 slider
22:11 Kami-senpai: ok cool
22:11 Kami-senpai: 01:49:091 (1) - for this, maybe move somewhere not in line with 01:48:818 (7,8) - 
22:12 Kami-senpai: makes kind of a hard slow down since jump speed is higher than slider speed
22:12 Kami-senpai: 02:18:545 (5) - too many repeats in this. makes it unpredictable
22:13 Kami-senpai: 03:10:636 (3,4,5) - evenly space these
22:14 Kami-senpai: other than those i think your insane looks great
22:15 Fort: spaced
22:15 Fort: change repeat to 1/1 slider + 1 circle
22:17 Fort: oh really nice
22:17 Kami-senpai: yup
22:17 Kami-senpai: i think thats it
22:17 Kami-senpai: hope the mod helped
22:18 Kami-senpai: im gonna shoot a star at your map
22:18 Kami-senpai: pew pew
22:18 Fort: 98% helped
22:18 Fort: :D
22:18 Fort: wow this is crazy acc
22:18 Kami-senpai: lol
22:18 Kami-senpai: glad it did