Battle wrote:
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02:00:924 (7,8,9,10,1) - This is a pretty lopsided stream, maybe make it look a bit smoother for aesthetic purposes? That stream is a little strange form, but I feel it will make a good flow
pishifat wrote:
01:50:424 (1) - not sure what you're trying to do by extending this over vocal and instrumental stuff. probably would be better as a 1/1 sliderf oh it's already 1/1 slider xD the slider will follow the vocal.
Zexous wrote:
01:47:574 (4,1) - Blanket could be better yes but it does not matter. also this slider is already beautiful to me http://puu.sh/nbV3A/5bb272580c.jpg
01:59:724 (3,2) - ^ ^
thank you for modding \:D/FCL wrote:
01:43:224 (1,2) - relying on the previous part, I can say that you should replace these patterns to 1/1 slider since red tick have nothing sounds good idea but I will remake the rhythm different from you.
My part
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