1. 00:54:199 - , 02:12:744 – change to k? the kind of sounds high. It seems to fit your style imo.
   And, they need the something variation with plays, Players did dkd, too much times from 00:43:290 (54) -.

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Rebirth of Juda
[Kantan]

1. 00:54:199 - , 02:12:744 – change to k? the kind of sounds high. It seems to fit your style imo. fixed
   And, they need the something variation with plays, Players did dkd, too much times from 00:43:290 (54) -.

And about the timings , I've already suggested you.

As suggested by JuDa, here is the new timing:
1. Offset 956 bpm 164.000
2. Offset 5346 bpm 158.000
3. Offset 8381 bpm 165.000

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OzzyOzrock wrote:

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thomas1195 wrote:

For d = don(red) k = kak(blue) D = Finisher of don K = Finisher of kak

Futsuu

01:10:017 ,02:28:562 ,03:51:471 - D > K D would be fine as the pitch is decreasing.
04:04:926 - Add d Because of the neighbouring patterns, I cannot make this one too hard.

Muzukashii

01:55:835 - kkk > ddd kkk would accompany the relatively high-pitched sound there imo.
02:15:108 - d k > k d d k would sound better for the increasing pitch.

03:09:835 - k k D > k D The music is more prominent at 03:10:017 - , so it would be better to keep the note.
03:10:381 - Add d with the above change. Refer to ^

03:16:381 - 03:17:290 : k d d kkk D > k ddd k k D Retained to fit the snares there.

Oni

00:00:000-00:08:381: Better if add a slow part? The part is rather short for a SV decrease.
03:09:835 - : k k D > k D same as Muzukashii
03:10:381 - : Add k with the above change. ^

The mapset is really good. Hope this mod can help a little bit.
I can feel that the style of Oni is really fresh for me. Even that the patterns are a little bit unstable and some of unnatural off-beat, it is really let me have another feeling of a full ver map.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Timing on the first point still seems off. It's not a very important point, but it seems like an earlier offset matches the timing better.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Nardo x qoot OTP