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pocotan - Dear Jewel

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Meg
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Meg
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年8月4日 at 8:55:05

Artist: pocotan
Title: Dear Jewel
Source: アウトブレイク・カンパニー
Tags: 私の宝石箱 Watashi no Houseki Bako Housekibako Petrarca Ann Erudanto III ペトラルカ・アン・エルダント三世 Outbreak Company ending 渕上舞 Fuchigami Mai F/C A-Remix Nation 10 Remix DnB iMage--
BPM: 175
Filesize: 13892kb
Play Time: 05:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Jewelry Box (5.46 stars, 1534 notes)
Download: pocotan - Dear Jewel
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Meg , edited 33 times in total.
chucentry
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chucentry
COMES THE new #1 map of 2016?
Meg
1,617 posts
Joined August 2012
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Meg

chucentry wrote:

COMES THE new #1 map of 2016?
#1 app of 2016
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi
てきとー (’・ω・‘)

  1. 00:19:327 (7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - OMFG ILLUMINATIIIIIIIII nice doritossry just comment lol
  2. 00:24:470 (4,5) - この距離を00:29:956 (4,5) - と同じにするのは？
  3. 00:59:613 (2,5) - このOverlap気になったりならなかったり
  4. 02:10:413 (2,3,1) - このTripleだが02:11:784 (2,3,1) - より少し近すぎると思うヨ。自分でも好きじゃないが02:11:270 (1) -
    とかと位置変えて見たら？
  5. 02:41:784 (3,4) - 細かいけど02:41:441 (1,2) - とParallelにしたら？
  6. 03:05:270 (3) - 打ちずらいと思うのでCTRL+G?
  7. 03:22:413 (1) - ここだけど03:21:727 (1,1) - とのリズムが変わってなく見えるのでReverse入れたら？
  8. 05:29:441 - までいけてなかったのがちょっと寂しい(’・ω・‘)
さすがやね

This is how 5digit-scrub plays
Meg
1,617 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Meg

Akitoshi wrote:

てきとー (’・ω・‘)

  1. 00:19:327 (7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - OMFG ILLUMINATIIIIIIIII nice doritossry just comment lol :3
  2. 00:24:470 (4,5) - この距離を00:29:956 (4,5) - と同じにするのは？OK!
  3. 00:59:613 (2,5) - このOverlap気になったりならなかったり これくらいのoverlapなら汚く見えないしno change!
  4. 02:10:413 (2,3,1) - このTripleだが02:11:784 (2,3,1) - より少し近すぎると思うヨ。自分でも好きじゃないが02:11:270 (1) -
    とかと位置変えて見たら？ 近いとは思うけどplayしてみてもそんなにやりにくくないし問題ないと思うのでno change!
  5. 02:41:784 (3,4) - 細かいけど02:41:441 (1,2) - とParallelにしたら？ (一応ちょっとだけblanketなんですよ)
  6. 03:05:270 (3) - 打ちずらいと思うのでCTRL+G? 180° Rotateしました！
  7. 03:22:413 (1) - ここだけど03:21:727 (1,1) - とのリズムが変わってなく見えるのでReverse入れたら？ここだけreverse部分に音が全く鳴ってないのでreverseには出来ないです
  8. 05:29:441 - までいけてなかったのがちょっと寂しい(’・ω・‘) 多分そこまで作っちゃうとplayerも飽きると思うからここで終わりだよ～
さすがやね

This is how 5digit-scrub plays
thank you for modding!
chucentry
401 posts
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chucentry

Meg wrote:

chucentry wrote:

COMES THE new #1 map of 2016?
#1 app of 2016
waiting for it
Yunomi
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Yunomi
photoshop by handsome
shirt by cilvery
Yunomi
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Yunomi
Jewelry Box


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Meg
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Adore wrote:

Jewelry Box


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thank you for modding ^-^
Yunomi
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Yunomi
give me kd bitch
MillhioreF
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09:63:292 - add whistle
hehe
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hehe

MillhioreF wrote:

09:63:292 - add whistle
agreed
Asahina Momoko
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Asahina Momoko
hall of quality mod
Meg
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MillhioreF wrote:

09:63:292 - add whistle omg nice whistle
thank you for fuckin modding >w<
Meg
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Meg
ここは遊び場じゃねえ！
Nathan
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好き
Meg
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sukiNathan wrote:

好き
<3
Depths
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Depths
wow cute bg, this must be ranked
Meg
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Depths wrote:

wow cute bg, this must be ranked
of course ;3
Yunomi
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Yunomi
fuck
Meg
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Meg
>Adore

here is not SNS
Yunomi
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Yunomi
here is my house, get the fuck out MEG
Meg
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Meg
adore kirai
Akitoshi
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Akitoshi

Meg wrote:

ここは遊び場じゃねえ！
ｗ
HootOwlStar
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HootOwlStar
As requested.
[Extra]
  1. 00:01:670 (1,2,3,4) - imo 00:07:156 (1,2,3,4) - is better in emphasizing music since reversing motion doesn't really help here
  2. 00:16:241 (6,7,8) - either stacking them at position of 00:16:413 (8) - or making them as a linear one instead of curve since it is reaally untidy thr
  3. 00:58:070 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5037059
  4. 01:18:813 (2) - separate them int o 2 circles is better in clicking sense tbh
  5. 02:14:613 (2) - move to around x:108 y:68?
  6. 02:18:641 (7,1) - separate them a little since they are like almost crashing together imo
  7. 04:07:156 (1,2,3) - doesnt flow well. what about making (2) like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5037103?
  8. 04:23:956 (2) - better unstack imo since it kind of like destruct the motion
sorry for short mod. and good luck
Meg
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Meg

HootOwlStar wrote:

As requested.
[Extra]
  1. 00:01:670 (1,2,3,4) - imo 00:07:156 (1,2,3,4) - is better in emphasizing music since reversing motion doesn't really help here i think it doesn't need to change, keep
  2. 00:16:241 (6,7,8) - either stacking them at position of 00:16:413 (8) - or making them as a linear one instead of curve since it is reaally untidy thr it makes flow, keep
  3. 00:58:070 (4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5037059 ok
  4. 01:18:813 (2) - separate them int o 2 circles is better in clicking sense tbh ok
  5. 02:14:613 (2) - move to around x:108 y:68? i changed like it
  6. 02:18:641 (7,1) - separate them a little since they are like almost crashing together imo ok
  7. 04:07:156 (1,2,3) - doesnt flow well. what about making (2) like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5037103? this pattern is specific style of this map, keep
  8. 04:23:956 (2) - better unstack imo since it kind of like destruct the motion ok
sorry for short mod. and good luck
thank you for modding!
Reillia
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Reillia
[Jewely Box]
00:19:756 (4,1,2,4,1,2) - 三角形出るようにするのはどうですか？
00:44:270 - ここから 00:48:984 - ここまで必要としない緑の線消去くれ。
00:50:699 (5,1) - 赤い点を 00:50:699 (5) - 尾にスタックさせるのはどうですか？もっときれいになると思います。
EX
00:56:184 (1,2) - 00:56:184 (1) - のブランケットするのはどうですか？
EX
01:01:327 (1,2,1) - このように、三角形作るのはどう？
EX
01:13:499 (2,3,2) - ^
EX
01:16:413 (1,1) - 01:16:413 (1) - の尾を完全にスタックするのはどうですか？
02:18:641 (7,1) - 表示良くないオーバーラップと思う。

疲れてここまで ;w;
Haruto
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Haruto
yo meg, as requested :D

[General]
  1. Maybe add DnB or EDM to the tags? since this is a remix anyway
  2. Why not change the diff name to Jewelry instead ww
[Storyboard]
  1. You know, instead using SB/Black you can Fade out Backgrounds like, become blackish tho :/ consider to remove SB/Black and Fade the Background manually
  2. 00:44:184 - i think the fade out here are too early, maybe make it slowly fade on 00:43:670 - ?
  3. Highlight from 00:49:327 - 00:49:413 - are a bit out of place imo. This can cause a DQ tho
  4. 00:55:841 - you didnt fade SB/Black slowly here as i pointed out before ;_;.
  5. 03:33:041 - highlight here are a bit out of place too
  6. 03:56:184 - the SB loads really huge here, you placed 2 rings and highlights. consider to reduce these stuff, might be unrankable i guess
  7. 04:19:499 - 04:23:613 - SB loads really huge too here x__x

    Ok, your SB is kinda confusing for me xD too many Files of SB/Black which makes me confused when modding the sb ;_;
[Jewelry Box]
  1. 00:00:299 (1) - nazi, the curve here can be better imo :D
  2. 00:19:327 (7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - meg so illuminati ww
  3. 00:22:756 (3) - do you know what is claustrophobia? this slider looks like a claustrophobia map means it doesnt have any space/room left. consider to stretch sliders like this but uh just my personal preference anyway www
  4. 00:26:356 - make something clickable here maybe?
  5. 00:27:384 - why not add a circle here? kinda weird to ignore this beat imo
  6. 01:17:784 (5,1) - hmm the spacing, this feels really weird and kinda , unreadable imo. players are focusing on 01:17:270 (2,3,4,5) - and then you suddenly put a cirlce below 01:17:441 (3) - and NC'ed the circle which is kinda, yea weird. i think the note here needs an emphasis more
  7. 01:35:613 (1,2) - nazi, blanket ww
  8. 02:40:927 (2) - i think the wave can be better imo
  9. 02:45:727 (2) - claustrophobia slider, like no more space or room left
  10. 03:00:813 (1) - i think there's no sound on 03:00:899 - , overmapped maybe? or just convert this slider into 1/2 notes
  11. 03:33:899 (1,2) - nazi stack ww
  12. 03:42:984 (5) - why sudden claustrophobia slider?
  13. 04:00:641 (3,1) - nazi blanket www
  14. 04:01:499 (3,1) - the spacing feels a bit large imo, players still focuses on 04:01:327 (2,3) - meanwhile you added a note with NC. that is suprising tho xD i've miss stuff when playing here lol
  15. 04:17:784 (1,1) - blanket www
  16. 04:46:070 (4,5,6) - why 04:46:413 (5,6) - isnt used the same slider like 04:46:070 (4) - ? make it consistent would be nice imo ww
  17. 04:55:327 (1,2,3) - triangle could be better imo :DDDD
Feedback : Really Awesome map and SB, not really structured style but so flowy and plays really nice. Rank this please!
[]
Thats all i guess, kinda useless mod cuz the map is already nice as it is imo ;w;
Good Luck Meg (」・ω・)」
Meg
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Meg

Haruto wrote:

yo meg, as requested :D

[General]
  1. Maybe add DnB or EDM to the tags? since this is a remix anyway ok
  2. Why not change the diff name to Jewelry instead ww
[Storyboard]
  1. You know, instead using SB/Black you can Fade out Backgrounds like, become blackish tho :/ consider to remove SB/Black and Fade the Background manually
  2. 00:44:184 - i think the fade out here are too early, maybe make it slowly fade on 00:43:670 - ?
  3. Highlight from 00:49:327 - 00:49:413 - are a bit out of place imo. This can cause a DQ tho
  4. 00:55:841 - you didnt fade SB/Black slowly here as i pointed out before ;_;.
  5. 03:33:041 - highlight here are a bit out of place too
  6. 03:56:184 - the SB loads really huge here, you placed 2 rings and highlights. consider to reduce these stuff, might be unrankable i guess
  7. 04:19:499 - 04:23:613 - SB loads really huge too here x__x

    Ok, your SB is kinda confusing for me xD too many Files of SB/Black which makes me confused when modding the sb ;_;
[Jewelry Box]
  1. 00:00:299 (1) - nazi, the curve here can be better imo :D ok
  2. 00:19:327 (7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - meg so illuminati ww :33
  3. 00:22:756 (3) - do you know what is claustrophobia? this slider looks like a claustrophobia map means it doesnt have any space/room left. consider to stretch sliders like this but uh just my personal preference anyway www the sliders are style on this map. i don't change
  4. 00:26:356 - make something clickable here maybe? keep
  5. 00:27:384 - why not add a circle here? kinda weird to ignore this beat imo i wanna make a different rhythm for avoiding to feel boring. so i put it
  6. 01:17:784 (5,1) - hmm the spacing, this feels really weird and kinda , unreadable imo. players are focusing on 01:17:270 (2,3,4,5) - and then you suddenly put a cirlce below 01:17:441 (3) - and NC'ed the circle which is kinda, yea weird. i think the note here needs an emphasis more i asked many palyers to testplay. but they didn't confused so no problem xd
  7. 01:35:613 (1,2) - nazi, blanket ww ok
  8. 02:40:927 (2) - i think the wave can be better imo ok
  9. 02:45:727 (2) - claustrophobia slider, like no more space or room left same as above
  10. 03:00:813 (1) - i think there's no sound on 03:00:899 - , overmapped maybe? or just convert this slider into 1/2 notes ok
  11. 03:33:899 (1,2) - nazi stack ww ok
  12. 03:42:984 (5) - why sudden claustrophobia slider? same as above
  13. 04:00:641 (3,1) - nazi blanket www ok
  14. 04:01:499 (3,1) - the spacing feels a bit large imo, players still focuses on 04:01:327 (2,3) - meanwhile you added a note with NC. that is suprising tho xD i've miss stuff when playing here lol this is last Kiai time. so i made hard a bit
  15. 04:17:784 (1,1) - blanket www ok
  16. 04:46:070 (4,5,6) - why 04:46:413 (5,6) - isnt used the same slider like 04:46:070 (4) - ? make it consistent would be nice imo ww same as above
  17. 04:55:327 (1,2,3) - triangle could be better imo :DDDD ok
Feedback : Really Awesome map and SB, not really structured style but so flowy and plays really nice. Rank this please!
[]
Thats all i guess, kinda useless mod cuz the map is already nice as it is imo ;w;
Good Luck Meg (」・ω・)」
thank you for modding!
i will see SB mod later
Meg
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Meg
I fixed SB code also Haruto's SB check
Patchouli
824 posts
Joined July 2009
Patchouli

待たせたな！

とりあえず54行目ですがeasing入れたほうが綺麗かなー？って思いました。表示時間が少し長めに取られてるのでeasing1で
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG1.jpg",320,240
F,0,90813,91841,1,0
S,1,90813,91841,0.644,1
F,0,112756,113784,1,0
S,0,112756,113784,0.644,1
F,0,263613,264641,1,0
S,0,263613,264641,0.644,1

素材とかはチェックしてないですスペアナ演出が大変綺麗でした。
Meg
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Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Meg

Patchouli wrote:


待たせたな！

とりあえず54行目ですがeasing入れたほうが綺麗かなー？って思いました。表示時間が少し長めに取られてるのでeasing1で
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG1.jpg",320,240
F,0,90813,91841,1,0
S,1,90813,91841,0.644,1
F,0,112756,113784,1,0
S,0,112756,113784,0.644,1
F,0,263613,264641,1,0
S,0,263613,264641,0.644,1

素材とかはチェックしてないですスペアナ演出が大変綺麗でした。
こういう使い方するんですね～勉強になった・・・
ありがとうございます！
iyasine
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iyasine
がんばえ～～
Homura-
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Homura-
01:19:499 (2) - うわ近ーッ！　 見た目重視で01:18:813 (2,3) - の中間(x:68 y:217)あたりにしない？
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