00:08:846 (2) and 00:10:352 (2) - I think these should match the pattern found at 00:07:842 (3).
00:18:637 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - It wouldn't hurt if these slowly became more spaced out over time,as right now it seems a bit repetitive.
00:35:708 - I think there should be another beat in between 00:35:582 (2) and 00:35:833 (3).
01:07:591 (6) and 01:19:641 (6) - There should be NCs here.
02:06:070 (7) - I think this should be just beside 02:05:870 (6).
02:08:670 (4) - Straighten this out a bit.
02:13:070 (2) - This looks strange,move it so it's on top of 02:12:270 (5).
02:24:670 (6) - NC.
02:27:370 (2,3,4) - This should be a bit closer,but not like at 02:25:470 (1,2,3,4),slightly longer,like at the changes on 00:18:637 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5).
02:27:870 (5,6,7,8) - This should be like 02:26:270 (5,6,7).
02:58:824 (4,5,6,7) - A pattern going back and forth seems perfect for this section.Something like this:
03:01:432 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This should be similar to the changes on 00:18:637 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5).
03:04:563 (3) - There is a definite break away from the slider at 03:05:084;remove the repeat and add a fourth beat at 03:05:084.
03:07:171 (4,5,6,7) - Another perfect section for a back and forth.
03:08:215 (3,4,5,6) - This should be a square instead,with 03:08:606 (6) a bit close to 03:08:737 (1).
03:12:911 (3) - Same as 03:04:563 (3).
03:15:519 (4,5,6,7) - A back and forth here wouldn't hurt.
03:16:563 (3,4,5,6) - In case you're still wondering what I mean by back and forth,like this.This should also,instead of being a back and forth,a square pattern,as having a back and forth almost immediately after another one seems a bit Tengaku-y.
03:21:258 (3) - This is okay though,as there is a more definite break at 03:21:911 (1).
03:25:693 (2,3) and 03:29:867 (2,3) - These should be sliders.
03:54:128 (2) - This should be moved a little bit down.
03:55:693 to 04:12:258 - A soft single tap section seems a bit fitting here,with a few sliders at places like 03:58:824.
04:15:911 (3,4,5,6) - It wouldn't be too much if this were a single stream(i hope).
04:24:258 (3,4,5,6) - ^
04:58:808 (9) - NC maybe.
05:39:754 (1,2,3,4,5) - This should be moved a bit or lengthened.
08:50:294 (1,2)and 08:54:474 (1,2) - These shouldn't be that close together,or at least in a pattern like that.
09:23:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) and 10:27:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This section is staring at you in the face,and is a bit risky.Try putting these closer together if you're going for rank.
13:49:740 (1,1) - Break in between here?
14:49:651 (7,8) - This should be a bit far apart,like at 14:49:151 (3,4).