[General]
personal preference, but maybe put the preview point at the beginning of the kiai? the preview point should be attention-catching imo
[
Muzukashii]
00:16:634 - add a k - this is leading into the onset of most of the percussion so the lack of a note here kind of detracts from the music's drive
00:22:424 (59) - this should be a D finisher as it's a pretty strong downbeat
00:23:350 (60) - move this to 00:23:582 and move 00:23:582 (61) to 00:23:813. these two notes should coincide with the guitar's second phrase, instead of starting in the middle of the guitar break
00:34:465 (94,95,96,97,98) - make this pattern d d k d k to better match the new direction the vocals take in terms of melody
the two measures from 00:46:507 to 00:50:212 - i realize that the music emphasizes the upbeats a lot, but these bars still play pretty awkwardly. try editing as follows:
- add d at 00:47:433
- delete the k at 00:47:665
- move the k at 00:48:128 to 00:47:897
- make the same changes for the corresponding notes in the second measure
00:57:970 (166,169) - these two notes should be d so that the 5 notes at 00:57:622 (165,166,167,168,169) follow the guitar part
[
Oni]
00:16:634 - put a k here for the same reason as this spot in the muzu
00:21:961 (74,75,76) - change these three to d k d. this way the first two follow the pitch direction of the guitar solo and the third note emphasizes the downbeat
00:21:961 to 00:24:276 - this measure needs to be reworked to match the guitar solo. try the following:
- move the d at 00:22:887 (77) to 00:22:655
- move the k at 00:23:350 (79) to 00:22:887
- add a k at 00:23:813
- add a d at 00:24:045
00:31:455 - add a k here since this is the end of one phrase and there's more accompaniment to compensate
00:35:160 - add a d here and make 00:35:392 (129) a k to match the new direction of the vocals
the rest of the diff looks good imo
[
Inner Oni]
this seems like a solid diff overall, i'll just be a bit nitpicky then orz
00:08:761 - add a d here and change 00:08:993 (38) to a k. there should be more notes in this measure since it's the fourth measure of the phrase
00:17:561 (85,86,87,88,89) - you use d k d k d three times in this section (00:19:413 (96,97,98,99,100) and 00:21:266 (107,108,109,110,111)). try to put a bit of variety in by changing some of them to d d d k d or d k d d d. i'll leave that up to you though
00:22:424 - reworking this measure again like i did with the previous two diffs. explanation: even though there's a kick at 00:23:350, it's a lot less important than the guitar solo
- 00:23:234 (120) - move this d to 00:22:771
- 00:23:697 and 00:23:813 - add ds here
00:31:339 - put a k here. similar reasoning as before, this is the fourth measure of the phrase and should have more notes to lead into the start of the next phrase
00:58:549 (338,339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362) - okay i realize this is an inner oni but this stream is still insanely long compared to everything else you've done so far in the diff. try deleting the two notes at 00:59:591 (347,353). it'll break this up into more manageable streams
good luck ranking this c: