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15:29 Niko-nyan: you may add a note on 00:32:349 - i hear a sound here
15:31 Niko-nyan: also 01:03:787 - shouldn't this d ? You put d on 01:10:363 - too D: and same sound for both
15:32 Niko-nyan: 01:11:801 - also same with before but depends on the pitch that you used before.
15:34 Chocola_2287: all fixed
15:34 Niko-nyan: should be fine now and moar pp <3
15:35 Chocola_2287: kudo
15:35 Niko-nyan: no it's fine :3/
15:35 Niko-nyan: i'm lazy to get some kudos :3/
15:35 Chocola_2287: ;w;
chaica wrote:
hi.from pm?
[Kantan]
00:00:500 - K? - The other so
Slider end 00:32:965? - Hard pressing.
00:35:020(37,38,39,40) - remove finisher? -00:36:664 to show better. Finishers are to fit SE
00:45:294 - delete? - a little break
00:48:582 - ^
00:53:513 - ^
01:01:732 - ^
^ notes will become awkward if those notes are gone
01:09:952 delete,and 01:09:541 add finisher? - I think the sound can be heard well.
01:11:595 delete,and 01:11:184 add finisher,and 01:12:006 delete finisher?
^ added finisher but not deleting notes
[Futsuu]
00:08:102 - delete? - no sound. There is
00:13:239 - delete.
00:21:458 - ^
00:23:102 - ^
00:24:746 - ^
^ don't see a point
00:26:390 - ^
00:37:075 - ^ - a little break
00:37:897 - delete finisher?
00:40:363 - ^
00:43:650 - ^
00:55:979 - delete finisher?
01:05:431 - ^
01:08:719 - ^
^ the notes are mapped to fit the SE
spinner end 01:17:349? <- not important
01:25:568 - delete finisher?
01:39:541 - delete
01:40:363 - ^
01:41:184 - ^
01:42:006 - ^
^ don't see a point
[Muzukashii]
spinner end 00:06:664?
spinner end 00:34:609?
^ not important
00:48:273 - delete?
01:00:191,01:00:705 - delete.
01:09:541 - add finisher?
01:11:184 - ^
01:12:828 - ^
^Tricky, keep
spinner end 01:17:349? *
01:33:582 - add note
01:36:869 - ^
^ No SE
01:44:883 - ddd kkk d
01:32:554~01:45:705 - Exactly the same is Futsuu.a little reduce the Futsuu of Notes
[Oni]
00:19:506 - kk? dk instead
00:33:273 - delete? follows SE
00:52:178 - - It fits in rhythm fixed in other way
01:09:541 - add finisher?
01:11:184 - ^
01:12:828 - ^
Good Luck~
Ty for mod, kudos givenCharlotte wrote:
hi~ from game in chat.
[ about][ General]
- d is don note
- k is kat note
- D is big don note
- K is big kat note
good?
[ Kantan][ Futsuu]
I think this map is little hard...
00:25:157 (22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - I think hard for Kantan player.
^ I dont think so....
00:35:431 - You can remove.
00:41:595 - 00:56:390 - so hard...1/1-trilet is many → 1/1-quintuplets ><;
for example↓
00:50:226 - remove. & 00:53:513 - remove. & 00:55:157 - remove. & 00:55:568 - 00:56:390 - I think d K d or k K d is good.more fit.
^ Fixed a bit
otehr...sorry.short mod>< If get more mod,call me.I'll mod other diff></ Good luck
00:13:239 - You can remove. <- no, it follows the SE
00:23:719 (40,41) - ^ <- keep 41
00:35:020 - 00:52:280 - 1/1 + 1/2 pattern is long...Please add 1/1 break time
01:05:431 - & 01:08:719 - & 01:12:006 - I think no need finish...because,not strong sound...
^ok
01:06:664 - change to d.I think low pitch. & same as 01:07:075 -
01:13:239 - change to k?
^ Conflict? , the first one u want k d d and the 2nd one u want k k d
ty 4 moddingPatZar wrote:
[General]
first ODHP problems, if you mind follow minehereKantan and futsuu fixed , muzu and oni keepHP/OD
Kantan 8.5/3.5
Futsuu 7.5/4.5
Muzukashii 7/5
Oni 7/5.5
[Oni]
first, i don't really recommend about extending the SVs to 1.6x ( 00:32:349 - ), could you to recude it?, well becuase i have a DQ recent like this currently number of SVs, (reduced to 1.35x)
01:44:164 (142,145) - k , it's the best choise to get the flow no change, the hitsound are off track
[Muzu]
well i don't the pattern like ox in muzukashii 00:21:150 (49,50) - , when i was in BN, i have to qualify the map like this pattern and ono DQ'd it, so the best option, could you to change these ox? mmm...but it fits the song....keep, see if others mention this as well
clean muzu
and the rest of the diffs are fine for me
gl
remapped kantan and futsuu, modified muzu and oniNwolf wrote:
Sorry to say, but your map was not accepted by the TNA!
Here's a short summary of the reasons:Also your offset is wrong; I tried it out and got 516 for a better offset.
- Kantan: Lacks 4/1 breaks, a good help would be 01:16:116 (1) - removing this and making it a break.
- Futsuu: This diff, too, lacks bigger breaks. Best thing would, again, be removing the spinners. This diff also has very long 1/1 and 1/2 combinations so it's quite hard.
- Muzukashii: Also has no 2/1 breaks until the first kiai which is not good. 00:13:650 - The rhythm here is also pretty hard so making it a little bit simpler wouldn't hurt.{but removing this part will rip the diff spread) 00:33:376 (1) - Leave a 1/2 gap until next note please
- Oni: 00:33:376 (135) - Leave a 1/2 gap before a slider/drum roll please. The 1st kiai has very inconsistent rhythm (00:49:815 (203,204,205,206) - vs 00:56:390 (237,238,239,240,241) - ) so you should unify rhythm a little bit more to have a nicer flow.
- Overall: Big note usage is very questionable, many don't make much sense for example: Kantan 01:02:143 (83) - . Reconsider them.
Good luck!
ty for mod, kd givenll-oscar wrote:
oni00:14:899 (32) - d -> k seems sound better
00:15:926 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42) - dd dd kkk -> kd d k dk match with the BG music lost consistency
00:18:187 (49) - same as 00:14:899 (32) ^
00:19:214 (53,54,55,56,57,58,59) - same as 00:15:926 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42) ^
From 00:20:242- 00:24:762 - all follow with the patterns of 00:13:666 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - , 00:16:954 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - (d k d dd dd k) lack variable
00:25:892 (86,87) - kd -> dk from low pitch to high pitch
00:26:303 - add k dk match with the BG music does not make sense, this place is for a break
00:29:899 - ddk -> _ _ k ,separate into two parts there is SE here
00:33:392 (1) - change slider into spinner, there are no any BG hit sounds, use with slider is strange
00:38:940 (15,16,17,18,19) - k kkk d -> d kkd k
00:42:228 (30,31,32,33,34) - same as 00:38:940 (15,16,17,18,19)
00:45:516 - same as 00:38:940 (15,16,17,18,19) will lack variables
00:47:776 (57) - have finish due to 00:44:488 (41) -
00:50:242 (71) - d -> k high pitch with BG music
00:51:063 (75) - same as 00:50:242 (71)
00:52:194 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - http://puu.sh/mLg5v/c86c48300d.jpg , to match with BG music
00:53:529 (87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99) - http://puu.sh/mLgbm/9efb12914b.jpg, match with BG music too
00:56:406 to 01:02:159 - can copy and paste the last part due to same music
^ fixed in my own way
01:17:776 (1) - K -> D low pitch
01:18:598 (3) - D -> K high pitch
^Overall is a decending pitchs
01:19:420 (5,6,7) - d k d ?.? why different from the last part? (for example: 00:49:831 (68,69,70,71) - )
^variables, too dull if copy from 1st kiai
01:23:118 (24) - d -> k lost consistency with the following notes+very weird
01:25:995 (40,41,42) - same as 01:19:420 (5,6,7) ^
01:34:009 (84) - del d, separate into two part seems better
01:35:447 (91) - D -> K, same as 01:33:803 (83) - they have different SE
01:37:296 (99) - del d, separate again ~.~
01:38:735 (106) - D -> K
01:42:228 (125,126,127,128,129) - kdddk -> d ddk, sounds better k ddk insteadfutsuu00:33:392 (55) - change into spinner like oni
00:35:036 (56) - K -> D ,match with BG music
00:35:858 (58) - D -> K ,match with BG music +1 reason mentioned in oni
00:39:557 - add d, feel strange with the blank blank because no SE
00:42:844 - add k ^
00:46:132 - same as 00:39:557 ^
00:49:420 - same as 00:42:844 ^
00:52:296 (100) - change d to k??
00:58:872 (119) - d- > k too those place are of same pitch
01:16:132 (155) - spinner plz
01:17:776 (156) - K -> D ^
01:18:598 (158) - D -> K ^
01:21:885 (168) - d -> k due to high pitch ^
01:28:461 (187) - same as ^ ^