beep boop m4m
[funky sliderrrrz]
00:03:229 (1,2,3,4) - rotate by 100~ degrees or make it something like
this
so 1,2,3,4 flows into each other. It doesn't flow that well imo
00:03:919 (5,1) - is a good example. The sliderend points to the pattern after, therefore flows good.
00:05:988 (1,2,3,4) - reduce scaling (ctrl + shift + s) to around 0.8x so the jumps are more consistent. Currently this is a bit too big of a jump, and the sound that you mapped this to doesn't have that much of a volume increase to warrant the distance.
00:08:746 (1,2,3,4) - could have a different pattern rather than 4 sliders going into a circle. Try experimenting with singles and sliders and maybe you will find something cool :>
00:11:505 (1) - Map something here. Even 00:08:746 (1,2,3,4) - fits here better than the spinner.
00:14:609 (4) - Move to where 00:14:953 (5) - starts, or somewhere else other than the end of 00:14:264 (3) - .
This is a strong beat and therefore, calls for a greater jump in spacing. 00:15:298 (6,1,2) - is a good example of what works
00:17:367 (6) - move to where 00:17:712 (7) - starts.
00:20:471 (8) - 2 1/2 slider is better imo. Just the repeating slider is a bit too stale
00:21:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Reduce scaling to 0.9x? Jumps feels a bit too big
00:40:471 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - it goes in a circle D: The stream is fine but do something with the sliders.
00:44:609 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Too spaced out compared to the singles before. If you want to keep this kind of spacing, make sure you have some sort of buildup, like the start of the stream being close together and increases in spacing with each note.
00:46:333 (2) - Kiai time for the chorus?
01:19:781 (1) - Something could definitely be mapped here. eg When the singer says "I'm here" then move the start of spinner to 01:21:850 - when you can actually hear the buildup
01:24:609 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - have a pattern instead of this. Experiment with your note placements/design and you will definitely find something more fun that just going around in circles.
01:35:643 (6) - funky
01:40:126 (1) - have this instead of the spinner?
01:43:229 (1,2,3,4) - Should have consistent spacing and smaller jumps (somewhat calm part in the song)
01:43:919 (4) - Slider should have started 1/4 earlier?
01:49:091 (4,5) - Nerf please
01:49:609 (1) - could have something here other than just a spinner
01:53:229 (2,3,4,5,6) - It's a reoccurring theme here but instead of just a simple line, it could be anything else. Makes it a lot more interesting.
02:00:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Reduce scaling to 0.8x~
02:00:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - could use a revamp
you can clearly hear the drum beats on where the spinner is (02:02:540 - 02:02:884 - even though there is another 'buildup' sound here, I personally would still map to the drums. Also if you listen carefully, the buildup actually starts at 02:01:851 (9) - so a slider over there fits pretty well.)
02:04:953 (5) - New Combo. This one actually starts 1 tick after the previous one, rather than 1/2 like the rest. these sliders are op btw
02:07:712 (7) - ^
02:28:574 (4,5,6,7,8) - Nerf please
02:29:953 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
02:34:954 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Too spaced out compared to the singles before. If you want to keep this kind of spacing, make sure you have some sort of buildup, like the start of the stream being close together and increases in spacing with each note.
02:36:333 (1) - Ninja spinner is unrankable
interesting style. Good luck :>