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Morenatsu Project. - I Will Always Wait For You

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Topic Starter
Kyouren
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Namki
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[General]
Delete Boys Love from the tags, because Yaoi means boys love.


[Sieg]
00:37:178 (2) - а не забыл ли ты тут свисток.
Ну я не знаю, что здесь модить можно.

[Gone]
00:17:459 (2,3,4,5,6) - a lot of 1/2 patterns, compare to whole diff it looks bad, make rhythm easier in this part.
00:28:164 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing, make more patterns like this or make spacing 1x.
Else looks great.

good luck ♥
Topic Starter
Kyouren
Fixed all, thank you for mod, Namki~ <3
Waiting Sieg's diff! :3

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BoatKrab
Hi! from chat request lol ~

19:31 KittyAdventure: Hi :3
19:32 BoatKrab: Hi! Kitty :3
19:32 KittyAdventure: accepting a mod? just 45 second and 2 diff :3
19:32 KittyAdventure: furry song :3
19:32 BoatKrab: whoa
19:33 BoatKrab: lemme see

[Timing Check]
I heard this song, it's beautiful but something is look weird.
so try this
  1. BPM: 73.25 Offset: 256
  2. BPM: 73.215 Offset: 13406
  3. BPM: 73.200 Offset: 26525
  4. BPM: 72.000 Offset: 30622
  5. BPM: 73.000 Offset: 33122
  6. BPM: 73.215 Offset: 43017
  7. BPM: 73.215 Offset: 45373
Sorry if I wrong, but I think it's perfect to me

[Sieg's Normal]
  1. Perfect, it's fine to me (only me but somebody else I dunno lol)
[Hard]
  1. Make some jump because it's hard difficulty not normal (it's look like normal)
Topic Starter
Kyouren
Fixed about timing, thank you BoatKrab~ <3
Upgrade! :3

Edit:
For Sieg diff, Here some suggestion!:
00:04:351 (1) - Remove NC
00:10:084 (4) - NC
00:17:503 (1) - Remove NC
00:21:191 - Add a circle?
00:38:875 (4) - NC

That all :3
CrystilonZ
IRC mod :)

log
19:32 KittyAdventure: Hi :3
19:33 CrystilonZ: hi ~
19:35 KittyAdventure: accepting a mod? just 45 second and 2 diff :3 and furry song :3
19:35 CrystilonZ: ehh
19:35 CrystilonZ: I can only do a fast mod now
19:35 CrystilonZ: taking a short break from studying
19:35 *KittyAdventure is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/895987 SENTIVE - I Will Always Wait For You]
19:35 KittyAdventure: :3
19:35 KittyAdventure: okay
19:36 CrystilonZ: what kind of mod do you prefer?
19:36 CrystilonZ: forum or irc
19:37 KittyAdventure: you want forum or irc?
19:37 CrystilonZ: either is fine for me
19:37 CrystilonZ: nah. I will go with irc
19:38 CrystilonZ: ready?
19:38 KittyAdventure: ready
19:38 CrystilonZ: ok first off
19:38 CrystilonZ: I really doubt the correctness of metadata
19:39 CrystilonZ: I think this song is composed by the developers, not SENTIVE
19:39 *KittyAdventure is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/167589 SENTIVE - Kaze no Yukue -2nd-]
19:39 *KittyAdventure is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/228701 SENTIVE - Kimi to Boku ~Session. Version]
19:40 *KittyAdventure is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/204837 SENTIVE - Mushi Kago]
19:40 CrystilonZ: or somebody else
19:40 *KittyAdventure is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/241419 SENTIVE - rain drops]
19:40 *KittyAdventure is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/287511 SENTIVE - Sakura ga Furu Machi ...Short life.]
19:40 CrystilonZ: yeahh.. I know those
19:40 *KittyAdventure is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/202964 SENTIVE - The end of a century]
19:40 KittyAdventure: anyway, opening theme by SENTIVE
19:40 CrystilonZ: it's just I can't find this song on any SLOS pack
19:41 CrystilonZ: I tried really really hard browsing through tons of song lol
19:41 CrystilonZ: I found all of those in SLOS btw
19:41 KittyAdventure: It's because I Will Always Wait For You is not from SLOS album
19:42 KittyAdventure: and Yep
19:42 CrystilonZ: you sure?
19:42 KittyAdventure: All song by SENTIVE
19:42 KittyAdventure: http://slos.biz/soundz.htm
19:42 KittyAdventure: http://morenatsu.wikia.com/wiki/Full_Soundtrack
19:42 CrystilonZ: http://puu.sh/n6jet/36e495ebab.png
19:43 CrystilonZ: just.. make sure of it later on
19:43 CrystilonZ: maybe find some helpers
19:43 CrystilonZ: let's just put it aside for now
19:44 KittyAdventure: well, let me ask other metadata check
19:44 CrystilonZ: I suppose so..
19:44 CrystilonZ: ok, on hard diff
19:44 *CrystilonZ is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/895987 SENTIVE - I Will Always Wait For You [Gone]]
19:44 KittyAdventure: need official website of Morenatsu
19:45 CrystilonZ: it has been down for a while orz
19:45 *KittyAdventure is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/895987 SENTIVE - I Will Always Wait For You [Gone]]
19:45 CrystilonZ: almost for a year
19:45 KittyAdventure: yep
19:46 CrystilonZ: the bpm is quite tricky btw
19:46 CrystilonZ: it might need more red ticks to time it properly
19:46 CrystilonZ: 00:09:879 (4) - is this overmapped?
19:47 KittyAdventure: Fine
19:48 KittyAdventure: but it's blue tick and has a sound
19:48 CrystilonZ: eh? it does?
19:49 KittyAdventure: you can trying listening in 25% playback rate
19:49 CrystilonZ: nope, I don't hear anything
19:50 KittyAdventure: But i pretty sure that has a sound
19:50 KittyAdventure: maybe i need to rework in red timing
19:50 CrystilonZ: yeah, you really should
19:50 CrystilonZ: I will ignore that messy timing for now cuz I'm really bad at timing things lol
19:51 CrystilonZ: 00:10:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this set here
19:51 CrystilonZ: I don't quite understand why 00:10:084 (1,2) - are sliders
19:51 KittyAdventure: it's fine right?
19:51 CrystilonZ: the sounds on the tails are really strong though
19:52 CrystilonZ: 00:11:723 (3,4,5,6) - and these are circles which are weaker
19:52 CrystilonZ: it's fine... but weird
19:52 KittyAdventure: for me it's no
19:53 CrystilonZ: just saying that you should make strong sounds like 00:10:493 clickable
19:55 KittyAdventure: nah
19:55 KittyAdventure: it's sound fine :3
19:55 CrystilonZ: ok then
19:56 KittyAdventure: ?
19:56 CrystilonZ: 00:16:640 (1,2) - I think you should blanket them
19:56 CrystilonZ: and it will flow to 3 more smoothly as a bonus
19:58 KittyAdventure: done
19:59 KittyAdventure: Anyway, should be used "Morenatsu Dev Team" in Aritst?
19:59 KittyAdventure: Artist*
19:59 CrystilonZ: I am not sure
20:00 KittyAdventure: The Morenatsu OST consists of royalty free music provided by a Japanese group of musicians called "SENTIVE", and some original composed music from the Morenatsu Dev Team.
20:00 CrystilonZ: I can't find any reliable source for it as the main website is down and other things
20:00 KittyAdventure: anyway, if you has a SENTIVE - SLOS, can you screenshot?
20:01 CrystilonZ: screenshot what?
20:01 KittyAdventure: you say
20:01 KittyAdventure: you have all song morenatsu
20:01 CrystilonZ: I didn't seperate it from the packs though..
20:01 CrystilonZ: I just rummage through it lol
20:02 KittyAdventure: well,
20:02 KittyAdventure: I need check about that <__<
20:03 CrystilonZ: check about?
20:04 KittyAdventure: metadata check and timing too
20:04 CrystilonZ: ya
20:04 CrystilonZ: timing is definitely wrong lol
20:04 KittyAdventure: well, BoatKrab already posted
20:05 CrystilonZ: try them out
20:05 CrystilonZ: well, one more from me
20:06 CrystilonZ: 00:37:998 (3) - ctrl J this should improve the flow
20:10 KittyAdventure: Done!
20:10 KittyAdventure: and Timing is fine now!
20:11 CrystilonZ: that
20:11 CrystilonZ: is great :D
20:11 CrystilonZ: I'm waiting for this to be ranked btw
20:11 *CrystilonZ is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/871814 C.I.L. Cafe - Just a fool loves you]
20:11 KittyAdventure: mod done?
20:11 CrystilonZ: eagerly waiting...
20:11 KittyAdventure: Waiting ByBy13
20:11 CrystilonZ: yeah that should be all for your diff
20:11 CrystilonZ: beautifully mapped <3
20:12 KittyAdventure: savelog this chat and i will give a kudosu :3
20:12 CrystilonZ: kay

will mod Sieg's diff later if I have some free time
Good luck !
Topic Starter
Kyouren
Thank you for mod, CrystilonZ~ <3
Upgrade! :3

Well, need Metadata check!
http://morenatsu.wikia.com/wiki/Full_Soundtrack
Sauziteoi

General

  1. use this BG instead to avoid watermark. http://puu.sh/n7ipP/4410e1f781.png
  2. make soft-hitwhistle louder. it's too weak
  3. timing looks weird because its BPM constantly changes
    try this:
    TimingPoints
    [TimingPoints]
    256,821.917808219178,4,2,1,15,1,0
    3543,810.810810810811,4,2,1,15,1,0
    6786,831.024930747922,4,2,1,15,1,0
    10119,800,4,2,1,15,1,0
    11719,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,0
    13385,819.672131147541,4,2,1,15,1,0
    16663,829.875518672199,4,2,1,15,1,0
    19982,800,4,2,1,15,1,0
    21582,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,0
    23248,821.917808219178,4,2,1,15,1,0
    26535,821.917808219178,4,2,1,15,1,1
    27356,845.070422535211,4,2,1,15,1,1
    28201,779.220779220779,4,2,1,15,1,1
    28980,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,1
    30646,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,1
    33146,769.230769230769,4,2,1,15,1,1
    33915,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,1
    34748,857.142857142857,4,2,1,15,1,1
    35605,789.473684210526,4,2,1,15,1,1
    36394,800,4,2,1,15,1,1
    37194,857.142857142857,4,2,1,15,1,1
    38051,821.917808219178,4,2,1,15,1,1
    39694,789.473684210526,4,2,1,15,1,1
    40483,857.142857142857,4,2,1,15,1,1
    41340,789.473684210526,4,2,1,15,1,1
    42129,888.888888888889,4,2,1,15,1,1
    43017,789.473684210526,4,2,1,15,1,0
    43806,857.142857142857,4,2,1,15,1,0
  4. I suggest you change Sieg's Normal to Easy, it's just 1.17 stars

Gone

  1. it's Normal diff so: AR=3~5, HP=2~4, OD=2~4
  2. 00:03:532 (1,2) - 00:32:288 (5,1) - 00:33:943 (2,3) - blanket improve
  3. 00:04:965 - add a note here
  4. 00:17:503 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/n7i4l/586c8f10e0.jpg
  5. 00:26:525 (1) - http://puu.sh/n7i8j/cb13135edd.jpg
  6. 00:32:916 - better not to overlook the sound here
  7. 00:41:341 (3,4,5,6,1) - geometry improve? http://puu.sh/n7iga/6a01571e10.jpg
  8. 00:43:221 (1) - slience the end of spinner

Sieg's Normal

  1. 00:04:351 (1) - delete NC, 00:10:084 (4) - NC here
  2. 00:12:133 (6,1) - blanket improve
  3. 00:17:503 (1) - delete NC
  4. 00:29:803 (3) - NC, 00:30:623 (1) - delete NC
  5. 00:38:875 (4) - NC here
  6. 00:43:221 (1) - slience the end of spinner
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Kyouren
Fixed all, etc. 00:17:503 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/n7i4l/586c8f10e0.jpg because i want make that a harder!
Thank you for mod, Sauziteoi~ <3

Upgrade! :3

edit:
this mapset is normal-hard not easy-nomal
thank you~ <3
BoatKrab

Sauziteoi wrote:

TimingPoints
[TimingPoints]
256,821.917808219178,4,2,1,15,1,0
3543,810.810810810811,4,2,1,15,1,0
6786,831.024930747922,4,2,1,15,1,0
10119,800,4,2,1,15,1,0
11719,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,0
13385,819.672131147541,4,2,1,15,1,0
16663,829.875518672199,4,2,1,15,1,0
19982,800,4,2,1,15,1,0
21582,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,0
23248,821.917808219178,4,2,1,15,1,0
26535,821.917808219178,4,2,1,15,1,1
27356,845.070422535211,4,2,1,15,1,1
28201,779.220779220779,4,2,1,15,1,1
28980,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,1
30646,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,1
33146,769.230769230769,4,2,1,15,1,1
33915,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,1
34748,857.142857142857,4,2,1,15,1,1
35605,789.473684210526,4,2,1,15,1,1
36394,800,4,2,1,15,1,1
37194,857.142857142857,4,2,1,15,1,1
38051,821.917808219178,4,2,1,15,1,1
39694,789.473684210526,4,2,1,15,1,1
40483,857.142857142857,4,2,1,15,1,1
41340,789.473684210526,4,2,1,15,1,1
42129,888.888888888889,4,2,1,15,1,1
43017,789.473684210526,4,2,1,15,1,0
43806,857.142857142857,4,2,1,15,1,0
WoW real timing is here! <3
Topic Starter
Kyouren

BoatKrab wrote:

Sauziteoi wrote:

TimingPoints
[TimingPoints]
256,821.917808219178,4,2,1,15,1,0
3543,810.810810810811,4,2,1,15,1,0
6786,831.024930747922,4,2,1,15,1,0
10119,800,4,2,1,15,1,0
11719,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,0
13385,819.672131147541,4,2,1,15,1,0
16663,829.875518672199,4,2,1,15,1,0
19982,800,4,2,1,15,1,0
21582,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,0
23248,821.917808219178,4,2,1,15,1,0
26535,821.917808219178,4,2,1,15,1,1
27356,845.070422535211,4,2,1,15,1,1
28201,779.220779220779,4,2,1,15,1,1
28980,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,1
30646,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,1
33146,769.230769230769,4,2,1,15,1,1
33915,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,1
34748,857.142857142857,4,2,1,15,1,1
35605,789.473684210526,4,2,1,15,1,1
36394,800,4,2,1,15,1,1
37194,857.142857142857,4,2,1,15,1,1
38051,821.917808219178,4,2,1,15,1,1
39694,789.473684210526,4,2,1,15,1,1
40483,857.142857142857,4,2,1,15,1,1
41340,789.473684210526,4,2,1,15,1,1
42129,888.888888888889,4,2,1,15,1,1
43017,789.473684210526,4,2,1,15,1,0
43806,857.142857142857,4,2,1,15,1,0
WoW real timing is here! <3
Yep, it's fine now :3
Topic Starter
Kyouren
After discuss with Lanturn, we agree if SENTIVE is not making this song because not found in album (SLOS)
and In Morenatsu Wikia, it say:

The Morenatsu OST consists of royalty free music provided by a Japanese group of musicians called "SENTIVE", and some original composed music from the Morenatsu Dev Team.

(Please note that these titles are fan named due to the soundtrack never being officially released. The names that are noted below along with the sound pack they're found in are official names by SENTIVE)


Source: http://morenatsu.wikia.com/wiki/Full_Soundtrack

and We agree if Dev Team making this song! :3
Mafumafu
[Sieg's Normal]
OK!
[Hard]
00:19:152 (5) - 2 single notes are better because the piano sounds on both the head and tail are strong.
00:20:782 (2,4) - Same as above.

00:23:248 (1) - this should be 1/2. Because there's no sound at 00:23:864 but 00:23:658.

00:33:146 (1,2) - Blanket

00:34:748 (3,4) - Personally this flow plays poorly for me, since the note is in the opposite direction of the slider.

==============
00:04:353 (2) - Add a whistle on head

00:11:719 (3) - ^

00:17:492 (2) - ^

==============
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Kyouren
Fixed all, Thank you for mod, Regraz~ <3
Upgrade! :3
Nerova Riuz GX
does this even need to get more mods

[gone]
00:18:115 (3,4) - maybe you can stack them (because of 00:04:961 (3,4) - )

[]
nothing more i can do tbh
Topic Starter
Kyouren
Fixed that, thank you for mod, Nerova Riuz GX~ <3
Upgrade! :3

Need more mods? idk becuase this song is slower and idk if need more mod :/
CrystilonZ
I just read that you'd discussed things with Lanturn, so, I'll assume that this song is really composed by the developers.
Now the problem is the name. All the english names in that wiki are fan-made, no official sources, except those in parentheses which are taken from SLOS packs (yeah, I've already checked those)

The problem is I don't know fan-made title is rankable or not, but I understand you don't want to use that "piano3_001" thing... hideous.

You may as well ask Lanturn about this. Here's some information from me:

piano3_001 is the bgm's file name taken from the game's data by using the game's engine, Kirikiri.
While "I Will Always Wait For You" is named by the fans; no official source to be rely on.

Also, you might want to put 漏れなつ。プロジェクト in the artist slot, and Morenatsu Project. in the romanized slot.
They're the official term for the Dev Team which are used in the OP and appear before the title screen of the game and the Japanese name also appears in the credits.
http://morenatsu.wikia.com/wiki/Morenatsu_Project
(The wiki is a bit wrong tho. They miss a little "。" thing and a period after "Morenatsu Project")
You may also request a help from someone who can read Japanese(not me, I'm a total sucker). You might find something useful in the trailer or the credits.

Good luck ! :)
No KDS, self-voluntary rechecking :D
George
--Normal--
00:08:448 (2) - I would move this to the right more to make a better flow

--Gone--
00:03:132 (4,1) - I think something like this could end up being cool, idk if you'll do it tho
00:05:570 (5) - I would move this up
00:05:975 (6) - and convert this to a red point and make it symmetrical to the big green slider like this
00:10:919 (2) - move this red point up to the middle
00:16:663 (1) - move this down so it ends up making a form like this (It will make a straight line and make it look better / easier to play
00:26:535 (1) - this slider would be better if it was a copy of 00:24:891 (4) - just flipped and without the repeat
00:28:980 (8) - move this slider up a bit so it forms to make a good S shape
00:33:146 (1) - do that straight line thing I said before
00:41:340 (3,4,5,6,1) - I would try to move these and rotate them so theres better flow in the map (for example like this
Topic Starter
Kyouren

George wrote:

--Normal--
00:08:448 (2) - I would move this to the right more to make a better flow

--Gone--
00:03:132 (4,1) - I think something like this could end up being cool, idk if you'll do it tho. Too near!
00:05:570 (5) - I would move this up
00:05:975 (6) - and convert this to a red point and make it symmetrical to the big green slider like this
00:10:919 (2) - move this red point up to the middle. I not sure, it's better that! ;w;
00:16:663 (1) - move this down so it ends up making a form like this (It will make a straight line and make it look better / easier to play. It's to bllanket, so no.
00:26:535 (1) - this slider would be better if it was a copy of 00:24:891 (4) - just flipped and without the repeat
00:28:980 (8) - move this slider up a bit so it forms to make a good S shape. how? it's 1/4 slider ;w;
00:33:146 (1) - do that straight line thing I said before. nah! i like that! :3
00:41:340 (3,4,5,6,1) - I would try to move these and rotate them so theres better flow in the map. i like that style, it's star style :3
No comment = Fixed

Thank you for mod, George~ <3
Thank you for star too, Leo-chan~ <3

Upgrade with new Metadata by CrystilonZ! :3

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Bonsai
Heyho, saw you posting this in #modreqs, found three sections where the timing was a bit off:
  1. The very first combo is late in the middle (and the very first note too by a few ms), so I increased the BPM at the first timing section and added one at 00:01:871 to decrease it again so it connects to the next one
  2. 00:19:152 and the previous 1/4 were incredibly late, added a section with higher BPM at 00:18:322 and one to decrease again at 00:19:132
  3. 00:30:854 (2,3) in Gone was really messy / late , I couldn't do that much bc otherwise the reverse-slider in Sieg's Normal wouldn't work anymore, but I added a section with higher BPM at 00:29:813 until 00:30:634 where I let it decrease again, sounds a bit better now; The tail of 00:31:473 (4) is kinda late now but I tested it and it's not noticable ingame so it should be fine
  4. Also, the section at 00:45:377 is completely unnecessary, first, you can just let the spinner end on that 1/12 without setting that section, but second, I don't really understand why you let it end there anyways, the echo of the piano is still audible so I think simply ending it on the downbeat would feel better. And you don't need a red line to silence the end, just put a green line there ^^
Here's the code of the timing sections now (with the green line at the end instead of the red line), just resnap and everything's fine ;)
box=box!
[TimingPoints]
250,810.810810810811,4,2,1,15,1,0
1871,836.236933797909,4,2,1,15,1,0
3543,810.810810810811,4,2,1,15,1,0
6786,831.024930747922,4,2,1,15,1,0
10119,800,4,2,1,15,1,0
11719,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,0
13385,819.672131147541,4,2,1,15,1,0
16663,829.875518672199,4,2,1,15,1,0
18322,810.810810810811,4,2,1,15,1,0
19132,850.460666194189,4,2,1,15,1,0
19982,800,4,2,1,15,1,0
21582,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,0
23248,821.917808219178,4,2,1,15,1,0
26535,821.917808219178,4,2,1,15,1,1
27356,845.070422535211,4,2,1,15,1,1
28201,779.220779220779,4,2,1,15,1,1
28980,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,1
29813,821.917808219178,4,2,1,15,1,1
30634,839.160839160839,4,2,1,15,1,1
32312,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,1
33146,769.230769230769,4,2,1,15,1,1
33915,833.333333333333,4,2,1,15,1,1
34748,857.142857142857,4,2,1,15,1,1
35605,789.473684210526,4,2,1,15,1,1
36394,800,4,2,1,15,1,1
37194,857.142857142857,4,2,1,15,1,1
38051,821.917808219178,4,2,1,15,1,1
39694,789.473684210526,4,2,1,15,1,1
40483,857.142857142857,4,2,1,15,1,1
41340,789.473684210526,4,2,1,15,1,1
42129,888.888888888889,4,2,1,15,1,1
43017,789.473684210526,4,2,1,15,1,0
43806,857.142857142857,4,2,1,15,1,0
45520,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0

@Sieg's Normal: I dislike 00:00:256 (1,2,3) bc you mapped a high note of the piano on only the tail of (1) but then made (3), where no high note is, clickable, that's kinda the wrong way round imo and it also takes emphasis away from 00:03:132 (1) -, if you swapped the first combo rhythmic-wise I think that would be a lot better. Also, I don't really understand why you made 00:03:132 (1,2) and it's equivalent patterns offbeat, making it circle+1/1-slider+circle would fit better to the rhythm; same with 00:11:719 (2,3) which would fit the generaly rhythm better if ctrl-g'd and would seperate 00:12:969 -, where a new melody-line starts, from the rest. And there's a lot more offbeat-sldiers I don't like but ¯\_(ツ)_/¯, I hope at least for these here the explanation should be sufficient ^^

Good luck!
Prophecy
OMG >< , have someone pick up the mod request at #modrequest lol

Really nice!!!


Don't open this, really?
I want to use yaoi icon but will make many problem here lol
Sieg
@Namki @Sauziteoi @Regraz @George
thanks for the feedback guys, I guess KittyAdventure applied them for me. :3

Bonsai wrote:

@Sieg's Normal: I dislike 00:00:256 (1,2,3) bc you mapped a high note of the piano on only the tail of (1) but then made (3), where no high note is, clickable, that's kinda the wrong way round imo and it also takes emphasis away from 00:03:132 (1) -, if you swapped the first combo rhythmic-wise I think that would be a lot better. Also, I don't really understand why you made 00:03:132 (1,2) and it's equivalent patterns offbeat, making it circle+1/1-slider+circle would fit better to the rhythm; same with 00:11:719 (2,3) which would fit the generaly rhythm better if ctrl-g'd and would seperate 00:12:969 -, where a new melody-line starts, from the rest. And there's a lot more offbeat-sldiers I don't like but ¯\_(ツ)_/¯, I hope at least for these here the explanation should be sufficient ^^
It supposed to be Easy level, with all rhythm density limitations. And I don't have perfect pitch, so piano songs is a bit hard to me. D:
I'll look in details and will reply\try to apply something tomorrow. Thanks for the feedback, really appreciated.
Topic Starter
Kyouren

KittyAdventure wrote:

this mapset is normal-hard not easy-nomal
thank you~ <3
I will fixed when i'm home now!
I guess Sauziteoi and Bonsai it's good in timing! :3

Thank you for timing, Bonsai~ <3
Sieg
00:00:250 (1,2,3) - reversed, same 00:13:385 (1,2,3) -
Slider on 00:03:125 (1) - is supposed to cover 00:03:334 () - will be quite noticeable gap in rhythm without.

http://puu.sh/nckTu/cd68f0a553.osu
Topic Starter
Kyouren
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Shiranai
Log
22.29 KittyAdventure: Hi kak! Accepting a BN stuff? just 2 diff and 43 second (adek minta bantuan kakak malah kakak off terus Dx)
22.29 Mako Sakata: Masa sih
22.30 Mako Sakata: Aku kalo irc suka dc
22.30 KittyAdventure: kalau kakak irc, adek sudah tau
22.31 KittyAdventure: tapi pas kakak lagi on benaran
22.32 KittyAdventure: anyway, kakak gak nerima bn stuff?
22.33 Mako Sakata: Terima kok
22.33 *KittyAdventure is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/895987 Morenatsu Project. - I Will Always Wait For You]
22.33 KittyAdventure: :3
22.34 Mako Sakata: Sebentar yah download dulu
22.34 KittyAdventure: okay
22.37 Mako Sakata: Mp3 nya kaya pecah gitu suaranya -_-
22.38 KittyAdventure: Masalahnya itu memang begitu
22.38 KittyAdventure: waktu adek main gamenya opening memang begitu <__<
22.38 Mako Sakata: Ga ada yang lebih bagus sedikit gitu de?
22.38 Mako Sakata: Ohh
22.38 Mako Sakata: Jadi dari sananya?
22.39 KittyAdventure: adek sudah bandingkan dengan versi game + youtube
22.39 KittyAdventure: sama saja <__<
22.39 KittyAdventure: Yep
22.40 Mako Sakata: Mau irc aja atau gimana?
22.40 KittyAdventure: Ya terserah kakak
22.40 KittyAdventure: Kalau Sieg, gak dipermasalahkan
22.40 KittyAdventure: :3
22.41 Mako Sakata: Oke
22.41 Mako Sakata: General overall volumenya terlalu kecil, jadi kurang feedback gitu
22.42 Mako Sakata: Mungkin coba dinaikin jadi 25% terus pas yang kiai nya jadi 30%
22.42 KittyAdventure: okay
22.43 *Mako Sakata is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/895987 Morenatsu Project. - I Will Always Wait For You [Gone]]
22.43 KittyAdventure: Done!
22.43 *KittyAdventure is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/895987 Morenatsu Project. - I Will Always Wait For You [Gone]]
22.43 Mako Sakata: 00:05:975 - Tambah whistle buat suara piano?
22.43 KittyAdventure: Done!
22.45 Mako Sakata: 00:19:557 (6) - Stacked nya agak tricky
22.45 Mako Sakata: Tapi so far ga terlalu aneh
22.46 KittyAdventure: Gpp kalau dibuat blanket?
22.46 KittyAdventure: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4565240
22.47 Mako Sakata: Iya boleh
22.47 Mako Sakata: Lagian bagian itu agak jump sedikit ya, sedangkan yang lainnya ga ada jump
22.47 KittyAdventure: Done!
22.48 KittyAdventure: Ya, karena memang sengaja begitu buat hard diff
22.48 KittyAdventure: Ya meskipun ada kesalahpahaman, banyak modder pikir map ini Easy-Normal padahal Normal-Hard
22.48 Mako Sakata: Whistle yang 00:31:263 - coba didelete, terus tambah whistle di sini 00:31:473 -
22.49 Mako Sakata: Iyaa gpp kok
22.49 KittyAdventure: Done!
22.49 Mako Sakata: Bpm nya juga kecil sih jadi agak susah bedainnya xD
22.49 KittyAdventure: Piano song so many red timing
22.50 Mako Sakata: 00:33:146 (1,2) - Jarak (2) agak terlalu deket deh, coba pake ds 1,00
22.50 KittyAdventure: Done!
22.50 Mako Sakata: Ini juga 00:38:051 (3,4) -
22.51 Mako Sakata: 00:39:694 (1,2) - Sama
22.51 Mako Sakata: Kalo ada yang ga cocok modnya bilang aja :D
22.51 KittyAdventure: Done!
22.52 KittyAdventure: Cocok kok
22.52 Mako Sakata: 00:45:377 - volumenya coba jadi 15%
22.52 Mako Sakata: Biar pas fade outnya bagus
22.53 KittyAdventure: Okay :3
22.55 KittyAdventure: Kak, mumpung Siegnya lagi on, kakak bisa tanya sama dia :3
22.57 Mako Sakata: Bentar yah
22.57 KittyAdventure: okay
23.07 Mako Sakata: Yuk
23.07 Mako Sakata: Hahaha
23.07 Mako Sakata: Ada kejadian lucu tadi
23.07 KittyAdventure: xD
23.07 Mako Sakata: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/408939/start=75
23.08 KittyAdventure: Siegnya bilang gpp kalau aku yang ngurus diffnya
23.09 KittyAdventure: kok osbnya 2 :v
23.11 Mako Sakata: Ga tau
23.14 *Mako Sakata is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/901276 Morenatsu Project. - I Will Always Wait For You [Sieg's Normal]]
23.14 Mako Sakata: 00:17:492 - whistle buat piano?
23.14 *KittyAdventure is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/901276 Morenatsu Project. - I Will Always Wait For You [Sieg's Normal]]
23.15 KittyAdventure: Done!
23.16 Mako Sakata: 00:45:377 - volumenya dikecilin jadi 15% ?
23.17 Mako Sakata: 00:08:448 (2,3) - Spasi error
23.17 Mako Sakata: 00:19:132 (3,1) - Sama
23.18 KittyAdventure: Done!
23.19 Mako Sakata: 00:19:982 (1,2,3) - Kok ds nya jadi 1.1x
23.19 Mako Sakata: 00:26:535 (1,2) -
23.19 KittyAdventure: Fixed!
23.20 KittyAdventure: Done!
23.21 Mako Sakata: 00:37:194 (2,3) - sama
23.21 KittyAdventure: Sudah difixed!
23.22 Mako Sakata: Placementnya bagus
23.22 Mako Sakata: De kalo bisa spacingnya disamain, walaupun bpmnya naik turun
23.23 KittyAdventure: Okay
23.23 KittyAdventure: tapi kalau pas blanket itu nah kak
23.23 KittyAdventure: dipasang spacing sama waktu note diblanket dibilang blanket error
23.23 KittyAdventure: Blanketnya error*
23.24 Mako Sakata: Yang diff gone?
23.24 KittyAdventure: Yep, punya adek
23.24 Mako Sakata: Yaudah stacked itu ga usah diganti gpp untuk sementara
23.25 KittyAdventure: tapi sudah telanjur, ya gpplah
23.25 Mako Sakata: Hmm oke deh
We improve, volume, hitsound, some placement and spacing. Good luck for now :)
Topic Starter
Kyouren
To doing this map:
-SB is placeholder~
-Mod
-Metadata check from IamKwaN

Thank you for IRC Mod and Star Icon, Mako Sakata~ <3
Will waiting 3 weeks/21 days from now! :3

Upgrade~ :3
BoatKrab
Take my star :D
Good luck, Kitty!
CrystilonZ
Hey, you added an extra "。"

The artist is "漏れなつ。プロジェクト"
Copy and paste that ^^ without the quotes.

no KDS
Del05
IRC
19:03 *Del05 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/901276 Morenatsu Project. - I Will Always Wait For You [Sieg's Normal]]
19:04 Del05: 00:10:119 (1) - coba mid anchornya pindah ke 296,188
19:04 *KittyAdventure is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/901276 Morenatsu Project. - I Will Always Wait For You [Sieg's Normal]]
19:04 Del05: ato sbgnya pokoknya bentuk slidernya mirip itu
19:04 Del05: karena menurutku flownya jd lbh enak buat ke 2 nya
19:07 KittyAdventure: tapi bukannya kejauhan gak kak?
19:07 Del05: yg dipindahin cuma mid anchor
19:07 Del05: bukan object
19:07 KittyAdventure: mid anchor?
19:07 Del05: yg putih2 tengah itu, digeser aja
19:07 KittyAdventure: apa itu?
19:07 Del05: bentar
19:07 Del05: aku screenshot aja xD
19:08 Del05: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4661411
19:08 Del05: yg ada pointer ku itu mid anchor
19:09 KittyAdventure: okay
19:09 KittyAdventure: ....
19:09 KittyAdventure: masih gak ngerti
19:09 Del05: itu yg aku tunjuk pake pointer mouse itu
19:09 Del05: itu mid anchor
19:09 Del05: km geser ke koordinat yg aku kasih tadi
19:10 Del05: cuma rubah bentuk slidernya
19:10 KittyAdventure: adek gak lihat pointer mouse kakak
19:10 Del05: oh iya lol xD
19:10 Del05: sori
19:10 Del05: bentar aku edit dulu
19:10 KittyAdventure: okay
19:12 Del05: http://puu.sh/nvzD2/afef18bd78.jpg
19:12 Del05: 00:12:135 (3) - http://puu.sh/nvzEG/67a4ace841.jpg
19:12 Del05: biar flow dr 2 ama ke 1 enak ^^
19:13 KittyAdventure: Done :3
19:13 Del05: 00:33:146 (1) - nih gimana ya, mepet banget ama health bar kalo pake skin default, siapin aja kalo misal ada yg minta dibawahin (untuk sekarang gpp liat BN dulu aja)
19:14 Del05: 00:40:911 (2) - blanketnya dirapiin :D
19:15 Del05: eh udah selesai xD lol, lagunya pendek ya tp bgs suka aku ama piano nya :D
19:15 Del05: lanjut ?? ato aku tunggu ?
19:15 Del05: sekarang pindah ke
19:15 *Del05 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/895987 Morenatsu Project. - I Will Always Wait For You [Gone]]
19:20 KittyAdventure: Done
19:21 KittyAdventure: Fixed all
19:21 *KittyAdventure is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/895987 Morenatsu Project. - I Will Always Wait For You [Gone]]
19:21 Del05: 00:05:164 (1) - Knapa NC ?? gk ada big white tick ?
19:22 KittyAdventure: new sound :3
19:22 Del05: hm... kalo gaya map ku sih bakal gk pake
19:22 Del05: tp ya udah gpp rasanya
19:23 Del05: 00:10:919 (2,1) - menurutku rasaku flow nya kurang enak
19:23 Del05: coba diganti
19:24 Del05: ato consider dulu :D
19:24 Del05: 00:26:535 (1,2) - ^^
19:24 KittyAdventure: done :3
19:25 KittyAdventure: 00:26:535 (1,2) - it's fixed
19:25 Del05: 00:33:146 (1,2) - ini km coba blanket ta ??
19:25 Del05: kalo iya rapiin ya :D
19:25 KittyAdventure: ya
19:25 Del05: yg ujung atas mencong dikit wkwkwk
19:25 Del05: sebenarnya gk keliatan juga sih xD
19:26 Del05: 00:33:915 (2,3) - ini juga blanket ?
19:26 Del05: kalo iya rapiin
19:26 KittyAdventure: ya
19:26 KittyAdventure: blanketnya sesuaikan dengan distance snap soalnya
19:27 Del05: 00:41:340 (3) - coba di stack ama 00:43:017 (1) -
19:27 Del05: bisa kok harusnya
19:27 Del05: biasanya aku bisa :D
19:27 Del05: kalo iya di stack perbaiki DS buat 00:41:734 (4) -
19:27 KittyAdventure: itu sih memang begitu kak :/
19:28 Del05: oke
19:28 Del05: itu yg dr aku aja :D
19:28 KittyAdventure: done!
19:30 KittyAdventure: okay, thank you, oni-chan >w<
19:30 KittyAdventure: post log thhis
19:30 Del05: iya sama2 :D
Topic Starter
Kyouren
Thank you >w<
Nozhomi
Hi~ as requested. Wtf this timing D:

- General :

  1. Artist name conflict between diffs.

- Sieg's Normal :

  1. More like Sieg's Easy no ? Ohwell...
    00:03:125 (1) - It's an Easy right ? So let's do flow smooth as possible, move it to 168:112.
  2. 00:11:319 - I don't know why you skip this strong piano note when you don't with your reverse at 00:10:519 - .
  3. 00:12:135 (3) - Move it to 120:68 to adjust spacing perfectly.
  4. 00:26:535 - The finish feels too loud for this song.
  5. 00:40:483 (2,3) - Damn this blanket dude :c you can do it.

- Gone :

  1. Would go AR and OD -0.5.
  2. 00:03:543 (1,2) - When you try to blanket, do it right :3
  3. 00:07:201 - Explain me why you skip this note, and this one 00:08:032 - too. Because I can't understand why you did that and map them all after.
  4. 00:08:448 (2,3) - I know you can blanket them nicely like that http://puu.sh/nIL1B/38181fbb1b.jpg .
  5. 00:18:115 (3,4) - If you really want to do a nice curved flow, I suggest you to move them to 112:192.
  6. 00:19:982 (1,2) - Spacing a little too low here (0.92x when should be around 1.00x).
  7. 00:26:535 - Honestly the Finish sound feels too much here. A single whistle is way enough.
  8. 00:26:535 (1) - Also for this slider, it would be sooooooo more logic to have it at 316:188, just because it makes the flow 100% more coherent with your pattern.

Call me back after you get your metadata check.
Mukyu~
Topic Starter
Kyouren

Nozhomi wrote:

Hi~ as requested. Wtf this timing D:

- General :

  1. Artist name conflict between diffs.

- Sieg's Normal :

  1. More like Sieg's Easy no ? Ohwell... It's a slow song and i asked Sieg to making Normal diff but much Easy Icon :/
    00:03:125 (1) - It's an Easy right ? So let's do flow smooth as possible, move it to 168:112.
  2. 00:11:319 - I don't know why you skip this strong piano note when you don't with your reverse at 00:10:519 - .
  3. 00:12:135 (3) - Move it to 120:68 to adjust spacing perfectly.
  4. 00:26:535 - The finish feels too loud for this song. It's better than only adding whistle
  5. 00:40:483 (2,3) - Damn this blanket dude :c you can do it. Fixed a bit

- Gone :

  1. Would go AR and OD -0.5. I disagree because this diff is hard
  2. 00:03:543 (1,2) - When you try to blanket, do it right :3
  3. 00:07:201 - Explain me why you skip this note, and this one 00:08:032 - too. Because I can't understand why you did that and map them all after. It's weird when i put that
  4. 00:08:448 (2,3) - I know you can blanket them nicely like that http://puu.sh/nIL1B/38181fbb1b.jpg . It's already blanket lol
  5. 00:18:115 (3,4) - If you really want to do a nice curved flow, I suggest you to move them to 112:192.
  6. 00:19:982 (1,2) - Spacing a little too low here (0.92x when should be around 1.00x).
  7. 00:26:535 - Honestly the Finish sound feels too much here. A single whistle is way enough. It's better than only adding whistle
  8. 00:26:535 (1) - Also for this slider, it would be sooooooo more logic to have it at 316:188, just because it makes the flow 100% more coherent with your pattern.

Call me back after you get your metadata check.
Mukyu~
No comment = Fixed
Waiting IamKwaN's metadata! and it's really hard because the official website can't open in my place!
Thank you for your mod, Nozhomi~ <3

Upgrade! :3
Shiranai
As requested, will recheck after noz's bubble :p
Topic Starter
Kyouren

Mako Sakata wrote:

As requested, will recheck after noz's bubble :p
It's because you're so long not online osu!
Nozhomi
On Gone diff :

KittyAdventure wrote:

00:08:448 (2,3) - I know you can blanket them nicely like that http://puu.sh/nIL1B/38181fbb1b.jpg . It's already blanket lol
No it's not
I'll bubble after you fix that.
Topic Starter
Kyouren
Done!
Nozhomi
Ok should be good to go now!
Bubbled~

@Mako : double check if spcaing variation on Gone diff are ok. They looks ok for me.
Topic Starter
Kyouren
Thank you so much, Nozhomi~ <3
Waiting Mako Sakata's mod now!
Shiranai
Hello recheck as requested
Sugestion,

General
  1. Did you already ask to kwan about the metadata? I don't see any log about that ><
  2. Again about the mp3, can't you find it a better one? it looks like the current is on low quality, furthermore if you hear closer how the song end is kinda odd imo because there's piano sound re-appear around here 00:45:806 - it sounds like a bad cutting o.o
Sieg
  1. 00:11:719 (3) - Add whistle for strong piano sound?
  2. 00:34:748 (2) - Comparing to the rest spacing, that one a bit not consistent, try to readjust a biit
  3. 00:43:017 (1) - I guess the spinner end on that one will more reasonable if stopped on here 00:44:663 - imo which still have strong piano sound, because literally you stop on nothing here 00:45:377 - (1/6 snapping)
Gone
  1. 00:19:132 (1) - Add whistle for strong piano sound?
  2. 00:31:892 (1) - I prefer to change that into a circle instead on 00:31:892 - , because the passive beat on 00:32:103 - kinda weird to play and literally no beat on that one imo http://puu.sh/nLb8f/9cbf22daa8.jpg
  3. 00:43:017 (1) - I guess the spinner end on that one will more reasonable if stopped on here 00:44:663 - imo which still have strong piano sound, because literally you stop on nothing here 00:45:377 - (1/6 snapping)
I don't have a problem about the spacing on both Gone and Sieg difficulty, from my point the bpm itself may be low and fluctuative but based on its density for Gone it can be categorized as a Hard so it's fine, aku ngantuk
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