STEREO DIVE FOUNDATION - Genesis (TV Size) · forum

Warpyc

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Warpyc 2016-01-22T16:06:42+00:00

Chibi Maruko wrote:
Hi. From my queue Hello!

Insane
00:05:141 (1) - Change this into blanket coz the overlap kinda look bad :o I really like how this looks
00:14:797 (1) - ^ ^
00:36:176 (1,2,3,4,5) - The stream kinda look too much spacing for this diff. Please fix this into close I'll keep it for now since I really like it
00:41:004 (7) - NC here? Fixed
00:42:383 (6) - ^ ^
00:46:521 (5) - ^ ^
00:47:900 (4) - ^ ^
00:49:279 (4) - ^ ^
00:58:935 (1) - Like first comment I still like how these sliders look
01:12:728 (1) - ^ ^
01:19:624 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4383283 maybe stack is fine Sure
01:20:314 (5,6,7,8,1) - Like third comment Same as above
01:24:452 (1) - Overlap kinda look bad. Please fix thisHmm maybe I'm the only one who thinks the sliders looks really good

Ok, gl with ur map \:D/ Thx!
sorry /me run away

Ben

26 posts

Joined August 2012

Ben 2016-01-22T18:33:15+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Hi, from my modding queue~

[General]

[Ben's Normal]

00:40:314 (2,3,4,5) - DS
Fixed
00:07:900 - Hmmm, just my preference but I want this downbeat to be clickable.
I like mines
00:16:176 (3,5) - Space them a bit? They almost overlapped each other.
Should be better now
00:32:383 (2,3) - Do a blanket? From what you have now doesn't look quite symmetric imo.
Done
Feels very weird when you skipped a downbeat between stanzas.
I think it sounds nice
01:03:762 (5,2) - You should stack them if possible.
Done
Imo some flows and minor visual stuff like blankets could have been improved in this diff.
Noted will look into later, thanks for the mod.

Potato-chii wrote:
Hi, from my queue~

[Ben’s Normal]
Maybe simplify some parts. This looks way too hard for beginners. Everything looks very fast even though the AR is slow. So yeah, simplify.
I think it already easy enough
00:06:521 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – They’re all squashed. It’s confusing.
Looks good to me
00:12:728 (2,3,4) – Confusing.
I don't see an issue
00:13:072 (3,5) – Going back and forth isn’t good for beginners.
00:16:176 (3,4,5,1) – Ok, the two points above happened again.
00:20:314 (1,3) – Back and forth.
01:06:866 (3,2) – Back and forth.
I feel due to the simple nature of the diff (white to whites) the back and forths make it more interesting to play

That’s all. Good luck and sorry if this didn’t help.
Thanks for the mod.

Cagrux wrote:
Hi from my queue
Sorry I'm a bit late but let's get this going

[notice]General
Ben's Normal have a different combo colour for combo 2 than every other diff
Going to speak to mapset owner as i feel i have best colour taste.
Ben's Normal[list]
[*]Blankets could be improved. Consider revising them
Fixed alot of them
[*]00:12:728 (2) - Up this a bit. It just doesn't feel right with the sliderend
I changed the slider end
[*]00:16:866 (5) - Probably change to this as it looks better to me
Fixed in a different way
[*]00:27:210 (2) - Try to reduce the angle of the curve a bit.
Fixed
[*]00:28:935 (1,2) - Blanket
[*]00:31:693 (1,2) - ^
[*]01:04:452 (1,2) - Blanket too and you probably wanna stack 01:03:762 (5,2) -
[*]01:06:866 (3,1,2) - Blanket
[*]01:14:452 (4,5) - ^[
All of the above blankets have been fixed/list]

And that's all!. Hope this helps and good luck with getting this ranked
Thanks for the mod

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-01-22T18:45:00+00:00

hm. soon.

Warpyc

406 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Warpyc 2016-01-22T18:53:48+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
hm. soon.

Hi dude! also it's good if you wait a while while I push everyone to update their difficulties

Nakano Itsuki

1,218 posts

Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2016-01-22T18:58:54+00:00

lost my mod reply since my pc crashed
not gonna reply to it again so... ya, sry for inconvenience

thx for mod anyway
added hitsounds

http://puu.sh/mFAkk/bda5f6f0d2.zip

Arf

901 posts

Joined December 2013

Arf 2016-01-22T19:06:54+00:00

Chibi Maruko wrote:
Hi. From my queue

Arf's Hard
00:31:176 (5,6,1) - Make it stack is better If I change this pattern in the future I'll consider it, but at the moment I'm keeping it
00:3:762 - Please add note coz sound eletronic is here This sound is a perfect place to have a gap imo, similar to how the first break exists
01:01:348 (4) - Ctrl + G coz awkward It's more awkward if I Ctrl+G, no?
01:03:072 (1) - This slider look same with insane lol. Please fix this into blanket Blanket with what ;_: - I like these late crook sliders.
01:03:590 (2,3,4) - Make it stack Changed this pattern
01:12:383 (5) - Ctrl + G coz awkward Again, feels more awkward with Ctrl G than without
01:16:866 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4383373 maybe triangle is fine I wanted to create a little jump to signify the end of the beat cluster right before the spinner at the more intense beat.
01:23:417 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4383381 this is good Why not.

Ok, gl with ur map \:D/ Thanks for the mod \O
sorry /me run away

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osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55055
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:Genesis
Artist:STEREO DIVE FOUNDATION
ArtistUnicode:STEREO DIVE FOUNDATION
Creator:Warpyc
Version:Arf's Hard
Source:Dimension W
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-Mo-

Nomination Assessment Team

953 posts

Joined December 2012

-Mo- 2016-01-22T21:11:18+00:00

Electoz

Electoz wrote:
[Mo's Insane]
00:01:521 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Imo the spacing between objects should be gradually increased like what Insane did, like, I don't understand why you make a jump here 00:02:210 (6,1) while the pitch is still building, I'm not sure if you will get my point cuz I don't know how to describe this properly, sry. Same applies to 00:02:900 (3,4). I understand what you're trying to get at, and although it's a nice idea, there's no reason for me to change it since there's nothing really wrong with what I currently have. 00:02:383 (1) and 00:03:072 (4) are jumps because these notes have slightly more impact compared to the other notes in this aprt of the music. I moved a couple of notes around, but I don't see the need to change any more than this.
00:09:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Well, I can see that you're using 2 DS here, but I prefer sth higher than 1.3 cuz the intensity is higher than the part before. Any higher than what it currently is seems a little bit excessive. The increased intensity is already being covered by having more notes to hit during this section anyway.
Maybe it would be better if some objects in back-and forth patterns didn't get stacked completely, like 00:59:279 (2,4) or 01:00:313 (2,4) for example. Nothing wrong with these.

Scebtile

Scebtile wrote:
Hello from my modding queue!

Now this is the kind of Anime openings that I love. I actually love this song and the Anime so thank you for making it. But anyways, lets go!

Mo's Insane

• 00:01:693 (4) - This finish is not needed here at all. There is a crashing sound in the background that this accompanies.

• 00:06:176 (1) - Remove NC

• 00:17:210 (1) - ^ There are SV changes on these sliders.

• 00:33:762 (1) - ^ The music drops here, and this slider is a 1/8. A NC helps with the readability of the unusual slider.

• 00:35:831 (1,1,2,3,4) - his part is a bit hard for a 4.2 don't you think? A 1/8 reversed slider following up with a short 1/4 stream. It kinda ruins the flow. (I might be wrong though) Seems perfectly fine to me. The flow is perfectly playable, and it wouldn't make much of a difference if I made it a 1/4 slider or not.

• 00:40:486 (2,4) - I think doing it like This is better and fits the flow more. Also the current one might be a bit too difficult for a 4.2 I prefer it how it is now. Doing either doesn't really affect the difficulty too much in my opinion. It's literally half a circle extra distance.

• 00:59:279 (2,3,4,5) - There isn't anything wrong with this jump part, but you should be a bit more creative instead of just back and forth jumps. Back and forths aren't necessarily uncreative.

• 01:07:038 (2) - Add a soft hitsound on this note like the one at 00:55:831 (1) There doesn't sound like a need for this.

• 01:25:486 (1,1,2,3,4) - Same as before at point 5 Yeah. I still see nothing wrong.

Chibi Maruko

Chibi Maruko wrote:
Mo's Insane
00:18:072 (3) - Ctrl + G coz slider look awkward
00:27:383 (5) - ^ This will mess with the flow and the spacing. Ctrl+G won't even help if it's an 'awkward looking slider' anyway.

Thanks for modding.

Something something yada yada

osu file format v14

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Artist:STEREO DIVE FOUNDATION
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Version:Mo's Insane
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Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-01-23T03:16:15+00:00

Hi. Let's fix some things shall we?

General

Metadata

Source: ディメンションダブリュー Best to change this since it is originally Japanese. I cross checked this with the official Japanese source and re-rechecked it with a Japanese friend. Did I mention how much I hate checking metadata?

Tags

Since the source changed, you can put Dimension_W in as one tag.
ディメンションW is the manga source, so you can add that too.
damn you added a supporting role to tags
If you're gonna add character names it's best to add Japanese stuff too. Mira Yurizaki -> 百合崎・ミラ
Kyouma Mabuchi -> マブチ・キョーマ
Even loser has a japanese name holy shit -> ルーザー (I don't know what else I expected). You could also use his actual name but it's a bit long. ジュリアン・タイラー＝スミス

Spread/Other

Arf's Hard should probably have CS 3.5 to make the spread go quite nicely in increments of .5 each difficulty increase.
Insane could benefit from OD8 to differentiate it slightly from Mo's. Consider +1 on the HP too but maybe HP7 is too high. Dunno, it's really up to you.
Arf's Hard AR 7? 3 - 5 - 7 - 9 - 9 looks good to me and won't be as much of a jump from 5 to 8.
Ben's Normal has timing points at 100% volume. Please put these more in line with the other diffs (and never use 100% again pls)
There's several inconsistencies in kiai times across all difficulties. I suggest to have the mapset owner pick a kiai time and then the GD'ers should copy them.

StarR's Easy

00:17:210 - Even if it's easy, this note is really important especially since you're using a strong hitsound to emphasize these ticks. Maybe turn 00:16:176 (3) - into a reverse at the red tick?
00:18:935 (3) - above
00:33:417 (3) - I'm not up to date on standard ranking criteria but double check about note to spinner distance on easy difficulties.
00:34:107 (1) - Shouldn't this end on the downbeat? 00:39:624 -
00:53:417 (1) - first point xd
00:55:486 (3) - Why not angle more like this and then blanket it with 00:56:176 (1) - ? The downwards angle matches the vocals also.
01:08:590 (2,3) - seems imperfect but blankets has never been my strong suit. why do you think im a ctb mapper.
01:12:038 (3) - This placement feels awkward and it feels like the slider shape should just be straight imo. Angling it downwards like the picture I had above would help nicely.
01:13:762 (2) - Make this curve into a happy face not a sad face owo
If you do that, then move 01:14:797 (3) - up a bit.

Rest tomorrow

Warpyc

406 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Warpyc 2016-01-23T07:25:39+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
Hi. Let's fix some things shall we? Yay \o/ short metadata reply!

General

Metadata
Source: ディメンションダブリュー Best to change this since it is originally Japanese. I cross checked this with the official Japanese source and re-rechecked it with a Japanese friend. Did I mention how much I hate checking metadata? This was the original source I had then Kwan told me to change to Dimension W and add japanese name to tags so I'll keep it like that
Tags
Since the source changed, you can put Dimension_W in as one tag. ^
ディメンションW is the manga source, so you can add that too. Why not
damn you added a supporting role to tags Well only because they are a part of the background
If you're gonna add character names it's best to add Japanese stuff too. Mira Yurizaki -> 百合崎・ミラ sure
Kyouma Mabuchi -> マブチ・キョーマ ^
Even loser has a japanese name holy shit -> ルーザー (I don't know what else I expected). You could also use his actual name but it's a bit long. ジュリアン・タイラー＝スミス ^

Rest tomorrow Looking forward to it!

Nakano Itsuki

1,218 posts

Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2016-01-24T02:38:36+00:00

xd

metadata is free kds lmao

reply

00:17:210 - made this a circle instead
00:33:417 (3) - well Im pretty sure this length is long enough lol
00:55:486 (3) - changed, but no blanket
01:08:590 (2,3) - blanket is fine
01:12:038 (3) - tilted the slider to the left instead, I want to keep the slider curved for looks
01:13:762 (2) - current one is fine, looks better instead of curving towards the center
01:14:797 (3) - ^

thx for mod
@warpyc, remove the .osb file

mike4bn

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Genesis
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Creator:Warpyc
Version:StarR's Easy
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Cryptic

551 posts

Joined December 2013

Cryptic 2016-01-24T20:18:21+00:00

Ayy, I'm prone to accidentally deleting these as I type them so lets hope it doesn't happen this time around. I was a bit dissapointed to not see an Extra (lemme do one <3) but other than that your diffspread is great.

Mo's Insane

00:01:004 (1,2) - This plays fine, but I don't see the justification for it. Its not a super-needed change though, just a mild suggestion.
01:19:969 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - During playtesting this is the only place where I'd break (slider break). Its easy to read, but maybe curve the stream to overlap with the slider slightly more?
01:25:486 (1,1,2,3,4,1) - Same thing here, except I don't slider break, I just think it'd be better for consistency.

This diff is incredibly polished, not much wrong with it at all.

Insane

HP 6 please, until those rotating triangles are changed/moved the average player for this song will need HP6.
00:02:383 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I like the concept, but strongly dislike this as its quite hard for an opener on a 4.7* insane. Its not the spacing of the jumps themselves, but rather the constant rotation and expanding of the triangle. You have this, then go into this 00:09:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - which is actually a more intense section of the song but its significantly easier.
00:11:693 (1) - Just an aesthetic suggestion, but this slider looks a bit awkward, I think it looks a bit better like this.
00:12:900 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - This jump chain is pretty boring to play, I mean, its DS'd properly and it flows fine, but as a player I don't like it much at all.
00:15:314 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same thing for this one.
00:34:969 (1,2,3,4) - Try to rearrange these sliders in such a way that they don't overlap. It doesn't look that great aesthetically and it can be harder to read for a sight read.
00:35:831 (6,1,2,3,4) - Separating the repeating slider from the stream will make it easier to read, and also a bit more fitting for this starrating (IMO).
00:50:659 (1,2,3,4) - You can increase the DS between these a bit, as they're currently really boring to play.
00:52:728 (4,1) - Once again, I think it'd be better to separate the repeating slider and the beginning of the stream a bit, it just makes it easier to read.
00:55:314 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - The kick slider to this stream is a bit of a weird transition on sightread, I'd recommend narrowing these (00:54:797 (1,2,3,4) - ) and then making the stream start where the next kick slider would be if you continued that pattern. Kind of like this.
01:01:176 (4,5,6) - Make these bigger, its the kiai section after all!
01:19:366 (4,1) - Separate these a bit, make it easier to read.

So overall, these diff needs a lot of work (in my personal opinion). A lot of the jumps are fairly boring, and the only reason it has its starrating is because of the streams (I think). Also, the way some of the jumps are mapped makes it feel really cluttered but that may just be me. I'd recommend abusing blanketing with a lot of your jumps, as you only do it occasionally atm. That, or more organic patterns, because what you have now starts to feel super dull before you've even finished playing through the song. However, I would like to mention, this is just a personal preference and you shouldn't take it personally.

Warpyc

406 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Warpyc 2016-01-24T21:16:41+00:00

CrypticMech wrote:
Ayy, I'm prone to accidentally deleting these as I type them so lets hope it doesn't happen this time around. I was a bit dissapointed to not see an Extra (lemme do one <3) but other than that your diffspread is great. :^)

Insane
HP 6 please, until those rotating triangles are changed/moved the average player for this song will need HP6. Will change triangles
00:02:383 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I like the concept, but strongly dislike this as its quite hard for an opener on a 4.7* insane. Its not the spacing of the jumps themselves, but rather the constant rotation and expanding of the triangle. You have this, then go into this 00:09:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - which is actually a more intense section of the song but its significantly easier. Changed
00:11:693 (1) - Just an aesthetic suggestion, but this slider looks a bit awkward, I think it looks a bit better like this. Fixed
00:12:900 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - This jump chain is pretty boring to play, I mean, its DS'd properly and it flows fine, but as a player I don't like it much at all. Tried to make it less boring
00:15:314 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same thing for this one. I like this pattern
00:34:969 (1,2,3,4) - Try to rearrange these sliders in such a way that they don't overlap. It doesn't look that great aesthetically and it can be harder to read for a sight read. Fixed
00:35:831 (6,1,2,3,4) - Separating the repeating slider from the stream will make it easier to read, and also a bit more fitting for this starrating (IMO). Fixed
00:50:659 (1,2,3,4) - You can increase the DS between these a bit, as they're currently really boring to play. I agree they're boring but however I move them they still are
00:52:728 (4,1) - Once again, I think it'd be better to separate the repeating slider and the beginning of the stream a bit, it just makes it easier to read. I tried
00:55:314 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - The kick slider to this stream is a bit of a weird transition on sightread, I'd recommend narrowing these (00:54:797 (1,2,3,4) - ) and then making the stream start where the next kick slider would be if you continued that pattern. Kind of like this. I think it works fine
01:01:176 (4,5,6) - Make these bigger, its the kiai section after all! Made it a bit bigger
01:19:366 (4,1) - Separate these a bit, make it easier to read. Done

So overall, these diff needs a lot of work (in my personal opinion). A lot of the jumps are fairly boring, and the only reason it has its starrating is because of the streams (I think). Also, the way some of the jumps are mapped makes it feel really cluttered but that may just be me. I'd recommend abusing blanketing with a lot of your jumps, as you only do it occasionally atm. That, or more organic patterns, because what you have now starts to feel super dull before you've even finished playing through the song. However, I would like to mention, this is just a personal preference and you shouldn't take it personally. I can see how you'd find it boring but that's kind of the way I map anyways thx for mod!

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-01-26T13:28:20+00:00

Hi, from my queue !

[Easy (StarR)]

00:11:348 - For make a bit more consistency, I recommend a slider who begins here 00:10:659 - 1/1 slider with 1 reverse.

00:34:107 (1) - ~6 second spinner, that's not a bit too long for a easy diff ?

00:54:452 (2,3) - Fix blanket

00:58:590 (4,1) - ^

+ Chack AIMod with DS enabled, you have 1 thing to change :3

[Normal (Ben)]

00:21:348 (2,3) - Fix blanket

00:45:831 (2,3) - ^

01:03:762 (5,1,2) - ^

01:06:521 - Add circle

01:07:210 (1,2) - Fix Blanket

[Hard (Arf)]

00:09:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why not :
-Circle
-Circle
-Slider 1/1
-Circle
-Circle
-Slider 1/1

Rest is good for me, just don't make too many jumps.

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-01-27T03:37:07+00:00

ok im back soon

bejewelled

556 posts

Joined August 2015

bejewelled 2016-02-07T19:51:40+00:00

Hey, NM from queue.

Easy
~~IMO, all diff setting except CS should be lowered by 1.~~ NVM, it messed up on my computer.
00:35:847 - Too long of a spinner.

Normal
Change AR to 4.5, and HP to 3.5.
00:25:141 (4,5,3,4) - These are confusing, b/c the other 1/1 notes are spaced out so I think these are 1/2 notes.
00:47:210 (4,5) - ^
00:50:659 (1) - Too long.
01:12:038 (3,4) - Same problem as the first 2.

Hard
Change AR to 6.5, OD to 5.5, and HP to 5.
00:44:107 (1) - Replace w/ 3 1/1 notes.
00:47:900 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This could be unrankable; IDK what the limit is but sliders usually cannot overlap like that.
01:16:521 (4,5,1,1) - The last circle isn't spaced right.

Nakano Itsuki

1,218 posts

Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2016-02-07T20:39:52+00:00

dono

00:11:348 - no, because I want that circle as an emphasis to end the intro

Spinner will not be changed; refer to rc

Make sure that your spinners are a reasonable length. Aim for a maximum spinning time of about 5-7 seconds; any longer can cause the player's wrist to get sore. If your spinner must be longer, then check with a BN to see if it's acceptable.

Not to mention for an Easy, new players tend to spin slower, so a longer spinner is reasonable.

操你媽的

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Arf

901 posts

Joined December 2013

Arf 2016-02-07T20:55:39+00:00

Dono027 wrote:
Hi, from my queue !

[Hard (Arf)]

00:09:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why not : As it is a Hard, I preferred to map the percussion buildup over the vocals in this section before the little spinner
Rest is good for me, just don't make too many jumps.

Swegmec wrote:
Hey, NM from queue.

Hard
Change AR to 6.5, OD to 5.5, and HP to 5. Changed HP but nothing else as those values are rather unfitting for the map as a whole. I might be persuaded to make it 7.5 or even 7 (though I heavily think that nowadays people would prefer 8) but 6.5 is much too low.
00:44:107 (1) - Replace w/ 3 1/1 notes. Rather not, I believe the small whoosh is a better idea here.
00:47:900 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This could be unrankable; IDK what the limit is but sliders usually cannot overlap like that. Should be fine, it isn't that hard to read, especially at this AR, we'll see I suppose. Could change it to something else somewhere down the line.
01:16:521 (4,5,1,1) - The last circle isn't spaced right. It's a jump. You can hear the intensity increase in this part.

-Mo-

Nomination Assessment Team

953 posts

Joined December 2012

-Mo- 2016-02-07T21:14:44+00:00

CrypticMech wrote:
Mo's Insane
00:01:004 (1,2) - This plays fine, but I don't see the justification for it. Its not a super-needed change though, just a mild suggestion. The first note is a held note of whatever that sound is (synths?). I feel that it's held long enough to justify this extended rhythm.
01:19:969 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - During playtesting this is the only place where I'd break (slider break). Its easy to read, but maybe curve the stream to overlap with the slider slightly more?
01:25:486 (1,1,2,3,4,1) - Same thing here, except I don't slider break, I just think it'd be better for consistency. This should be fine in my opinion. The extended spacing is intentional.

This diff is incredibly polished, not much wrong with it at all.

Sorry for the late reply. Thanks for modding.

Why did some of my hitsounds break. (editted x2)

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Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-02-13T05:52:56+00:00

OH SADHIT

I FORGOT

also i cant map normals sry

you can ask Energeh if you want, I think he's available to do it, I talked to him and he seemed fine lolol

Warpyc

406 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Warpyc 2016-02-13T07:07:53+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
OH SADHIT

I FORGOT

also i cant map normals sry

you can ask Energeh if you want, I think he's available to do it, I talked to him and he seemed fine lolol

Nice meme dude

Nerova Riuz GX

1,413 posts

Joined April 2012

Nerova Riuz GX 2016-02-15T04:52:49+00:00

ok.

[general]
Yuii-'s name is not in tags, also who's Ben?

[starr is baka]

00:01:004 - all the other diffs start their notes here, I think you can add a spinner to follow them.
00:13:072 - imo you should better fill this gap with a circle. its the only while tick which has nothing landed on in this part, and your following pattern is kinda intense too.
00:29:797 (2) - This slider is kinda strange, it's the only one which starts on a red tick around here. Though obviously it's following the vocal, i still don't think that is a good one.
00:58:935 (1,2,3) - 01:09:969 (1,2,3) - They are a little bit inconsistent. I dont know they are intentional or not, but that's pretty strange to me

[yuii-]

00:23:072 - 00:34:107 - Those claps between these two points sound strange. They are not placed in an appropriate way imo.
00:34:107 (1,2,3) - to be honest, I cant really understand why you only mapped out a quarter in this section. If that's not for a specific reason, you should better remove those notes.
00:50:659 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - I think your beat placements here are really questionable. those drums are obviously more intense than 00:45:141 - , but the notes are much calmer, it doesn't make sense. switching their places can help on following the build-up.

[arf]

00:02:383 - a tiny suggestion, maybe you can start the actual break here
00:25:659 (5,6,1) - 00:31:176 (5,6,1) - These two triplets have different spacings. is that intentional? seems like your other streams are placed with 0.7x DS, like 00:58:072 (2,3,4) - .

[mo]

00:01:693 (4) - is this finish here intentional?
00:23:590 (2,3,4) - I'm wondering why did you choose such a crowded pattern instead of a well-flexed one like its context? Are those overlaps meant to provide something important here? There's a twisted flow on (4), and it feels not that necessary at this place.
00:35:831 (1,1) - Why don't you separate them? personally I think they are representing two different things, that's also why you added a NC there. If you stack them like this, the NC on stream would feel kinda useless here. same on some similar parts like 01:19:969 (3,1) - .
00:44:107 (1,1,1) - it's kinda weird when all the other stuff are manually stacked lol

[insane]

00:03:935 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I can understand the reason behind 00:02:383 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - , but the last two triangles are following the same sound but totally different pitch. The idea is quite good and obvious, but those two do not belongs to it.
00:12:038 - a questionable spot. it's really strange when such a strong beat is not compared with an actual click, especially it's the beginning of this part.
00:21:521 (1,2) - you should switch NC here. the star pattern is not as strong as those drums.
00:33:072 (5,1) - the spacing is still big even when there's vocal only?
00:57:555 - I don't understand why the spacings become smaller and smaller by time from this place. Song is still intense, but spacing got smaller with no reason.

imo this diff doesn't have a nice structure, though it did well on gameplay, there are some parts that can be improved. I still cant recognize some intentions you used on this diff after reading it for several times.

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gl

Speed of Snail

548 posts

Joined March 2014

Speed of Snail 2016-02-15T05:43:44+00:00

Hey, from my queue.

INSANE

00:02:383 - (1,2,3) I feel like these expanding triangles you've put here are a little much for the relative difficulty of the map, just considering that I have FC's of maps that're 5.8-6.2 stars, yet these jumps took me 5 retries before I could hit them without a single miss.

00:39:107 - (3,4,5,6) Since the entire section before you've been going out of your way to put a beat on every little tick of the music, it's weird that then you just stop since beat 5 which is a circle continues onto this red tick here, especially since this is imo a little more noticeable than the tiny little vibratos you've been mapping earlier.

That's about it, the diffs pretty clean already, nice job on it.

MO'S INSANE

General - This might sound odd, but honestly I prefer this diff with the AR moved to 8.6 rather than 9 flat, try it out.

00:20:831 - (2) So, am I the only one that thinks this placement is just bizarre, I think this would work out better if it were dragged to the right until they two sliders were just far enough to have no overlap.

00:21:693 - (1) Forget to make this repeat? Or just felt like not mapping that tick because of reasons?

00:59:279 - (2,3,4,5) This would feel better if 2 and 4 were a little offset from each other, rather than perfectly stacked, this applies to the following mirror of this pattern at 01:00:314 as well.

Other than that looks fine, Frankly this diff reminds me a lot of my own mapping

ARF'S HARD

00:01:004 - (1) Is this very necessary? no one's ever going to miss this, so all it's doing is making sure people can't skip the opening that has no notes in it.

00:28:590 - (1,2) Even if the DS is fine here, these two notes just look awkwardly close to each other in relation to everything else in the map, it just feels very out of place, honestly you can increase the DS here a little bit, I have some faith in players.

00:47:900 - (1-4,1-4) On the other hand, this is a bit much for a Hard, even having this pattern isn't inherently bad, but I think the way it just changes directions half way through is going to fuck with too many players to be considered a good idea, I'd recommend trying to make the entire pattern follow one path, or just reverse the pattern entirely.

00:53:417 - (1,1) I get why you split the spinner into two, but frankly the second one is just, really short, I think many players would get no bonus and with HR could even end up with a 100 easily, I'd feel better about it if it was just a single spinner since it would take the issue of OD and length out of the question.

01:11:521 - (2) While I'm sure this is rankable, this slider shape just bothers me, and it's not familiar from the rest of the map either, it's some weird outlying curvy thing that looks strange and could make someone panic pretty easily. I'm sure you could get away with it if you want, but I'd rather you didn't.

01:21:004 - (1) I retract my statement, it's also here. ^^^^^^

01:24:452 - (3) You can definitely improve the curvature of this slider here.

Alright that's about all I've got for now, Overall it looks pretty nice; while rankable, I feel there's still a lot of room for improvement on this set, GL with it.

Warpyc

406 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Warpyc 2016-02-15T06:32:44+00:00

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:
ok.

[general]
Yuii-'s name is not in tags, also who's Ben? Nice catch totaly forgot to change!

[insane]
00:03:935 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I can understand the reason behind 00:02:383 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - , but the last two triangles are following the same sound but totally different pitch. The idea is quite good and obvious, but those two do not belongs to it. Changed, too many triangles = akward anyways
00:12:038 - a questionable spot. it's really strange when such a strong beat is not compared with an actual click, especially it's the beginning of this part. Fixed
00:21:521 (1,2) - you should switch NC here. the star pattern is not as strong as those drums. Ye I must have missed it or placed it to make pattern look better, idk
00:33:072 (5,1) - the spacing is still big even when there's vocal only? Fixed
00:57:555 - I don't understand why the spacings become smaller and smaller by time from this place. Song is still intense, but spacing got smaller with no reason. Increased all of kiai time spacing to make it not smaller than non kiai time patterns (hopefully)
imo this diff doesn't have a nice structure, though it did well on gameplay, there are some parts that can be improved. I still cant recognize some intentions you used on this diff after reading it for several times. Thx for mod!

[]
gl

TheOnlyLeon wrote:
Hey, from my queue. Hi o/

INSANE

00:02:383 - (1,2,3) I feel like these expanding triangles you've put here are a little much for the relative difficulty of the map, just considering that I have FC's of maps that're 5.8-6.2 stars, yet these jumps took me 5 retries before I could hit them without a single miss. Fixed already

00:39:107 - (3,4,5,6) Since the entire section before you've been going out of your way to put a beat on every little tick of the music, it's weird that then you just stop since beat 5 which is a circle continues onto this red tick here, especially since this is imo a little more noticeable than the tiny little vibratos you've been mapping earlier. Thanks I totaly miseed this before!

That's about it, the diffs pretty clean already, nice job on it.

Yuii-

2,502 posts

Joined July 2013

Yuii- 2016-02-17T01:59:51+00:00

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:
Hi again! It's been like... 2 days.

[yuii-]
00:23:072 - 00:34:107 - Those claps between these two points sound strange. They are not placed in an appropriate way imo. - I took them from the Hard difficulty and I think they indeed sound pretty cool overall, especially the first one, is like splitting two different rhythms with one good clap.
00:34:107 (1,2,3) - to be honest, I cant really understand why you only mapped out a quarter in this section. If that's not for a specific reason, you should better remove those notes. - Hmm, yeah. I mean, I did have my reasons to keep them, but now that I look again you obviously have a point.
00:50:659 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - I think your beat placements here are really questionable. those drums are obviously more intense than 00:45:141 - , but the notes are much calmer, it doesn't make sense. switching their places can help on following the build-up. - Excellent point! Tried to kept the density a bit lower for the sake of the spread, as always, but you got me there!

Thanks for the mod.
Update: http://puu.sh/naKg8/2ee92ead2b.osu

Arf

901 posts

Joined December 2013

Arf 2016-02-17T22:21:57+00:00

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:
ok. Heyo NRG

[general]
Yuii-'s name is not in tags, also who's Ben? RIP Ben ;_;

[arf]
00:02:383 - a tiny suggestion, maybe you can start the actual break here Sure why not
00:25:659 (5,6,1) - 00:31:176 (5,6,1) - These two triplets have different spacings. is that intentional? seems like your other streams are placed with 0.7x DS, like 00:58:072 (2,3,4) - Ah nice catch, adjusted both of them to be 0.7 as per the rest of them. I think on the second one I was trying to avoid an unsightly overlap, but whereas the first one was still somewhat close to 0.7, having a random 0.92 triple which doesn't agree with the others or have much of a purpose to the extra spacing is undesirable.

gl Tyty \O

TheOnlyLeon wrote:
Hey, from my queue. Hello hello.

ARF'S HARD

00:01:004 - (1) Is this very necessary? no one's ever going to miss this, so all it's doing is making sure people can't skip the opening that has no notes in it. There's a noise at the beginning that I didn't want to skip and the part after it with the buildup sounded perfect for a short break imo. I doubt a 4 second break will cause too many headaches, to be perfectly honest.

00:28:590 - (1,2) Even if the DS is fine here, these two notes just look awkwardly close to each other in relation to everything else in the map, it just feels very out of place, honestly you can increase the DS here a little bit, I have some faith in players. Increased slightly.

00:47:900 - (1-4,1-4) On the other hand, this is a bit much for a Hard, even having this pattern isn't inherently bad, but I think the way it just changes directions half way through is going to fuck with too many players to be considered a good idea, I'd recommend trying to make the entire pattern follow one path, or just reverse the pattern entirely. Did something somewhat different here, I don't know if I made it worse or not but reading should be a bit easier.

00:53:417 - (1,1) I get why you split the spinner into two, but frankly the second one is just, really short, I think many players would get no bonus and with HR could even end up with a 100 easily, I'd feel better about it if it was just a single spinner since it would take the issue of OD and length out of the question. I tried many many ways to get this to work without sounding like I was undermapping but due to spinner recovery time and the intensity of the beat I couldn't leave it unmapped or as a single spinner since that sounded horrendously underdone. Two quick spinners was the only (admittedly, a rather unsatisfactory) solution, and I really don't see anything else working here.

01:11:521 - (2) While I'm sure this is rankable, this slider shape just bothers me, and it's not familiar from the rest of the map either, it's some weird outlying curvy thing that looks strange and could make someone panic pretty easily. I'm sure you could get away with it if you want, but I'd rather you didn't. Other than maybe looking maybe a bit shorter or longer than it is, I don't see too many people going "wtf?" and dropping here, at least none of my playtesters did so hmm.

01:21:004 - (1) I retract my statement, it's also here. ^^^^^^ Aha, see

01:24:452 - (3) You can definitely improve the curvature of this slider here. Made it a regular old curve slider

Alright that's about all I've got for now, Overall it looks pretty nice; while rankable, I feel there's still a lot of room for improvement on this set, GL with it.
Thanks for the quality mod!

And on the seventh day, He rested.

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-Mo-

Nomination Assessment Team

953 posts

Joined December 2012

-Mo- 2016-02-18T18:10:54+00:00

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:
[mo]
00:01:693 (4) - is this finish here intentional? Yes it is. There's a crashing sound in the backgroud which I think this fits. I went and lowered the volume of it slightly since this was pointed out before, so I'm guessing it's a little offputting.
00:23:590 (2,3,4) - I'm wondering why did you choose such a crowded pattern instead of a well-flexed one like its context? Are those overlaps meant to provide something important here? There's a twisted flow on (4), and it feels not that necessary at this place. Well it's more to represent the distorted vocals, but yeah, this is kinda weird actually. Changed.
00:35:831 (1,1) - Why don't you separate them? personally I think they are representing two different things, that's also why you added a NC there. If you stack them like this, the NC on stream would feel kinda useless here. same on some similar parts like 01:19:969 (3,1) - . Sure. Changed.
00:44:107 (1,1,1) - it's kinda weird when all the other stuff are manually stacked lol Sure, changed.

TheOnlyLeon wrote:
MO'S INSANE

General - This might sound odd, but honestly I prefer this diff with the AR moved to 8.6 rather than 9 flat, try it out. I'd say the density of the ntoes during the more technical parts calls for a higher AR, but I'll keep this in mind for now.

00:20:831 - (2) So, am I the only one that thinks this placement is just bizarre, I think this would work out better if it were dragged to the right until they two sliders were just far enough to have no overlap. I wouldn't call this a problem, and I like this pattern.

00:21:693 - (1) Forget to make this repeat? Or just felt like not mapping that tick because of reasons? You know what, it does sound better with the repeat.

00:59:279 - (2,3,4,5) This would feel better if 2 and 4 were a little offset from each other, rather than perfectly stacked, this applies to the following mirror of this pattern at 01:00:314 as well. Nothing wrong with a perfect stack every once in a while. This is how I like to do these patterns /shrug

Other than that looks fine, Frankly this diff reminds me a lot of my own mapping

Thanks for modding.

"Two Insanes is too many"

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Strategas

1,378 posts

Joined July 2013

Strategas 2016-02-18T21:15:58+00:00

hi, return m4m for your insane as asked

[Insane]

from beginning to 00:12:038 - you can try using lower SV because it's calmer
00:02:383 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - kinda inconsistent nc if you wanted to seperate the triangles that badly use nc at 00:03:935 (4) -
00:04:107 - better put slider here so you follow that sound like with 00:04:452 (6) -
00:11:090 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'd consider this overmap tbh, much rather have sliders following vocals or smth.
00:12:038 (2) - nc here better, since it starts this section
00:25:659 (5,1) - poor transition from 5 to 1. try rotating it around http://i.imgur.com/nN8tOHs.png http://i.imgur.com/1ixiId3.png or something like this
00:27:038 (1) - it's a shame you don't emphasize beats like this, cause they are strong
01:08:245 (4) - 01:13:762 (4) - missing hitsound

overall what you can work more on this diff is some slider shapes. like a lot of them are really random, you don't really have to go crazy with them and can just use basic ones to not make it look too messy. if you really want to keep them well try to make them look better atleast zzz
another thing is rhythm emphasis. atm you mostly use same DS for your paterns which is kinda boring imo, if you made differences in spacing between weak and strong beats it would be better
a lot of paterns can use polishing and use better rhythm choice 01:20:659 (1,2,3) - etc

good luck with mapset and hf mapping ^^

Star Stream

2,035 posts

Joined June 2010

Star Stream 2016-02-19T04:34:49+00:00

[Easy]
01:15:486 (1) - this spinner is quite short for an Easy diff, I'd replace with notes instead

[Normal]
00:01:693 (1) - I'd start the spinner from 00:01:004 -
00:34:107 - I would not make break time on this short map

[Hard]
00:25:831 (1,2) - I'd put the new combo 00:26:176 (2) - instead, 00:26:348 (3) - is a bit hard to be read now
00:34:107 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - It's a Hard diff, you know what I'd say
00:39:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - ^
01:18:245 - ~ ^

Insanes are fine for me
clean map, but the Hard diff needs to be easier imo.

AlneCraft

83 posts

Joined January 2014

AlneCraft 2016-02-19T06:33:35+00:00

hi~! for m4m from you modding q!

legend: blue - my preference, red - something that i don't understand

StaR's Easy

1. 00:01:004 - add a spinner here and make it end at 00:05:141
2. make slider ticks slightly louder at most of the two tick sliders (like these: 00:12:038(1), 00:14:797(1,3), 00:18:935(3)) so that it syncs with the claps(? or whatever that sound is in the background) in the background
3. 01:15:486(1) - this spinner is way too short for an easy map, i don't think that easy level players will be able to complete it on 300 on the first try

Yuii-'s Normal

1. 01:03:590(5,6,7) - mayb turn it into something like this?

Arf's Hard

1. 00:35:831(2) - wth these claps? it sounds much better without them imo
2. 01:25:831(3,4) - mind turning this or any two 1/4 sliders followed by another slider into a 1/4 stream?

Mo's Insane

1. 01:27:555(1,2) - turn these into a 1/4 stream?

that's all i can give to you, your mapset is really solid!

Warpyc

406 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Warpyc 2016-02-19T07:02:57+00:00

Strategas wrote:
hi, return m4m for your insane as asked Hi and thx!

[Insane]

from beginning to 00:12:038 - you can try using lower SV because it's calmer I already used a really low sv for this diff decreasing it further would be too slow imo
00:02:383 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - kinda inconsistent nc if you wanted to seperate the triangles that badly use nc at 00:03:935 (4) - Fixed
00:04:107 - better put slider here so you follow that sound like with 00:04:452 (6) - Nice catch
00:11:090 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'd consider this overmap tbh, much rather have sliders following vocals or smth. Ehh, I think it's fine I do hear some kind of 1/4 here
00:12:038 (2) - nc here better, since it starts this section Fixed
00:25:659 (5,1) - poor transition from 5 to 1. try rotating it around http://i.imgur.com/nN8tOHs.png http://i.imgur.com/1ixiId3.png or something like this Fixed
00:27:038 (1) - it's a shame you don't emphasize beats like this, cause they are strong I tried to make spacing bigger on stronger beats
01:08:245 (4) - 01:13:762 (4) - missing hitsound Fixed

overall what you can work more on this diff is some slider shapes. like a lot of them are really random, you don't really have to go crazy with them and can just use basic ones to not make it look too messy. if you really want to keep them well try to make them look better atleast zzz
another thing is rhythm emphasis. atm you mostly use same DS for your paterns which is kinda boring imo, if you made differences in spacing between weak and strong beats it would be better
a lot of paterns can use polishing and use better rhythm choice 01:20:659 (1,2,3) - etc Tried to fix spacing stuff and make silders look better but the exampe you used follows a good rhythm imo nad I like the pattern

good luck with mapset and hf mapping ^^ thx

-Kanzaki

889 posts

Joined June 2012

-Kanzaki 2016-02-19T16:51:29+00:00

Cannot consider this map as 'old map' since i am coming from old map queue but damn, i like these dubstep parts.

There is a tag conflict with Ben's Normal.

Insane :

00:16:176 (1) - I think this slider should start on 00:16:004 this moment based to the thing that you've followed.

01:10:659 (3,4) - I am not sure if there is a reason to make these this close i couldn't see the difference with 01:09:452 (3,4) - not sure on this if you have a good different reasons for both okay.

01:16:866 (8) - Add a circle and start spin at 01:16:952 - fits better i think.

00:50:659 (1,2,3,4) - Well nice, you made the volume increase but in gameplay you can't really understand the volume change. Maybe try to use more volume increase like %15 every time and one more suggest maybe you can apply : SV increase every other slider?

00:58:935 (1) - I don't like this slider end drawing, though. But its not something to deal since it doesn't effects anything or something.

01:12:728 (1,2) - Technically it seems okay, but really, you should know that slider end doesn't have any effect to your cursor while playing so 2 is like on wrong side. I am not sure if you emphasize 2 for some reason (If you do just ignore whole this) but when i saw that slider end and next object like has some kind of flow that is forced.
check this

01:22:383 (1,2,3,4) - Try to use faster SV on these since vocal goes crazy.

01:27:900 (1) - Well played

Warpyc

406 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Warpyc 2016-02-19T19:46:54+00:00

-Kanzaki wrote:
Cannot consider this map as 'old map' since i am coming from old map queue but damn, i like these dubstep parts.

There is a tag conflict with Ben's Normal. You must have had map before we removed ben's normal and replaced it with Yuii-'s normal

Insane :

00:16:176 (1) - I think this slider should start on 00:16:004 this moment based to the thing that you've followed. Fixed

01:10:659 (3,4) - I am not sure if there is a reason to make these this close i couldn't see the difference with 01:09:452 (3,4) - not sure on this if you have a good different reasons for both okay. Strong beats lies on theses two notes 01:10:831 (4,5) - thus the jump on that part while 01:09:452 (3,4) - is strong beats thus the jump though moved 01:09:797 (5) - to make it consistant (if that makes any sense

01:16:866 (8) - Add a circle and start spin at 01:16:952 - fits better i think. Thanks!

00:50:659 (1,2,3,4) - Well nice, you made the volume increase but in gameplay you can't really understand the volume change. Maybe try to use more volume increase like %15 every time and one more suggest maybe you can apply : SV increase every other slider? Haha I actually never thought of this before, changed!

00:58:935 (1) - I don't like this slider end drawing, though. But its not something to deal since it doesn't effects anything or something. Fixed bc it looked a bit weird

01:12:728 (1,2) - Technically it seems okay, but really, you should know that slider end doesn't have any effect to your cursor while playing so 2 is like on wrong side. I am not sure if you emphasize 2 for some reason (If you do just ignore whole this) but when i saw that slider end and next object like has some kind of flow that is forced. You're correct this slider doesnt emphasize anything and feels out of place
check this

01:22:383 (1,2,3,4) - Try to use faster SV on these since vocal goes crazy. True

01:27:900 (1) - Well played :^)

Thanks for mod really friendly and helpful!

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2016-02-20T22:58:41+00:00

Sorry so late! Ended up busy yesterday. M4M like promised

[Easy]
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4556160
First try <3 Nice stuff. Great diff!

00:47:210 (3,1) - Some new players may follow vocals here. Maybe try a less complex gap here and keep 1/1 flowing so the note is hit on a slider end (and goes over the vocals)
SPOILER
01:25:141 (3,4) - These extra claps feel a bit forced to me. nothing really supports them. I would just use a simple whistle then clap on the heads of (3) and (4) and leave the tails blank.

[Normal]

00:32:038 (3,4) - Loosen this slider a little? Try moving the middle node on (3) to x296 y288 and then adjust (4) as needed.
SPOILER
00:34:107 (1,2,3) - I find it odd that you mapped this, and then randomly went into a break since the next part isn't any different from this. It'd make more sense if you continued to map this, or went on a break after a circle at 00:34:107 -
00:43:417 (4,5) - A lot of 1/2 sliders in a row at this point. Maybe use circles for these so they don't become too monotonous?
01:22:038 (4) - change this to one circle? Gives a bit of breathing room since this is a pretty long 1/2 section.

[Hard]
Quite a bit of 1/4 gaps in this diff. To be honest, it's a bit too much. The main issue is that they're all so cluttered together in places that it really spikes up the difficulty in those spots. It's more reserved for insane material, not Hard.

00:28:245 (5) - Just a circle for more breathing room? You want to have some 1/1 breather spaces here and there so the player isn't tapping or holding all the time.
00:37:210 (3,4) - could easily work as just a couple circles instead.
00:41:693 (3,4) - Stuff like this can work just as fine as a 1/2 slider or 2 circles. or...
00:42:038 (5) - you could shorten this by 1/4 for a bit more breathing room.
01:16:521 (4,5,1) - I think this would play better with even spacing. Try (1) at x256 y148.
01:19:969 (2) - You really don't need to map this 1/8 here. A simple 1/2 suits this difficulty much better.
01:22:038 (5) - No matter how you look at this, there isn't a 1/8 here. Even the higher diffs don't use 1/8. Maybe delete (4) and then use a 1/2 slider or *shrug* a couple 1/4 sliders if you have to keep the stream in.
01:24:797 (4,5) - Why can't this just be two 1/2 circles? Your hitsounding even supports it.
01:27:555 (4,5) - Same as above really, not so much as that, but it doesn't hurt.

It's a nice map, but if there's no advanced difficulty to help support this density, you'll have to nerf it otherwise I can't see this passing through the QAT or BN.

[Mo's Insane]

00:05:917 (4) - overmap. No sound here to support it. After coming off the 1/8 reverse though, it works better if there's some space between (3) and (5)
00:22:038 (2) - Sounds like 1/4 to me, I don't hear the 1/8th note. It would honestly make more sense in a rhythm like this:
SPOILER
00:28:935 (2) - Could probably shorten this, since you don't even do it at 00:31:693 (2) - and they're pretty much the same.
00:33:762 (1) - Makes more sense as a 1/4 slider because of the sound that plays at 00:33:848 -
00:36:521 (1) - 1/2 circle slider would be more appreciated. There's a big sound playing at 00:36:693 - that doesn't make sense to skip. This will also let players recover appropriately as well.
01:18:417 (1) - to 01:27:900 (1) - Basically you could stand to shorten some of those 3/4 sliders. This is the lighter insane in the difficulty, and it really shouldn't be a nonstop 1/4 fest. If you want to keep all the 1/4s and 1/8 notes, then you should probably give a bit more breathing room in the 3/4 sliders by reducing them to 1/2 sliders.

[Insane]

00:05:917 (3) - Like mentioned in the other Insane mod, No sound here to support it, so it's kind of overmapped.
00:10:659 (1,2,3) - P (1,2) should be swapped (There are powerful vocals on (2)'s tail), and (3) is overmapped again and should be deleted.
00:14:279 (4,5,6) - These could all be even DS, There's no real difference in their sounds.
00:28:245 (5,6) - Swap places for a more circular flow?
00:43:072 (2) - Please NC this SV change, especially at a 0.25 SVM difference.
01:10:314 (2) - This could be moved over the left some so it doesn't overlap the 01:10:831 (4) -
01:18:935 (3) - NC SV change. 0.55 is HUGE.

Good luck. Easy/Normal are looking great, a bit more work on the Hard and Insanes and you should be ready.

Warpyc

406 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

Warpyc 2016-02-21T00:25:27+00:00

Lanturn wrote:
Sorry so late! Ended up busy yesterday. M4M like promised No worries, thanks a lot!

[Insane]
00:05:917 (3) - Like mentioned in the other Insane mod, No sound here to support it, so it's kind of overmapped. Fixed
00:10:659 (1,2,3) - P (1,2) should be swapped (There are powerful vocals on (2)'s tail), and (3) is overmapped again and should be deleted. Moved (1) and (2) but kept 3 I do defenitely hear a sound there
00:14:279 (4,5,6) - These could all be even DS, There's no real difference in their sounds. Strong beats on (4) (5) which is emphasized in hitsounds as well
00:28:245 (5,6) - Swap places for a more circular flow? Nice
00:43:072 (2) - Please NC this SV change, especially at a 0.25 SVM difference. Thanks must have missed it!
01:10:314 (2) - This could be moved over the left some so it doesn't overlap the 01:10:831 (4) - Fixed
01:18:935 (3) - NC SV change. 0.55 is HUGE. Nice catch!
Good luck. Easy/Normal are looking great, a bit more work on the Hard and Insanes and you should be ready. Thanks for mod!

Come[Back]Home

1,785 posts

Joined October 2011

Come[Back]Home 2016-02-21T09:41:42+00:00

StarR's Easy

00:29:797 (2) - This slider starting on a redtick will get many new players out of the rythm, they need a constant rythm which is mostly just the white ticks. Its the only slider in the whole diff to start on a redtick aswell.

Yuii-'s Normal

00:34:107 - Wouldnt a single circle here fit more than mapping till 00:35:314 - ? I mean, the break can start here 00:34:107 - and its kinda weird if you start mapping one part and dont finish it 00:35:486 - 00:39:279 -
00:56:176 - 01:16:866 - is the ds here higher than usual? i would keep the ds the same throughout the map, for consistency. ds changes in Normals are kinda unpopular

Arf's Hard

00:10:314 (7,8) - Move those here 148/241 for a perfect square

I'll skip this one, doesnt fit my quality standards. It has many weird slidershapes and stacks which doesnt fit. There are even 1/8 objects and too many kicksliders, its a bit too hard.

Thats it from me!
Good Luck ^-^

Nakano Itsuki

1,218 posts

Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2016-02-21T10:31:56+00:00

我一拳打爆nerova

00:29:797 (2) - well this is a slider anyway, and slider leniency exists.. if bn points this out I'll change this, for now I'm keeping it
00:58:935 (1,2,3) - 01:09:969 (1,2,3) - i see no problem lol

S.S

01:15:486 (1) - well I asked others and it's enough tho..

AlneCraft

01:15:486(1) -

CBH

see my reply to nerova

others fixed
thx for mod

fix the tags, im too lazy

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-Mo-

Nomination Assessment Team

953 posts

Joined December 2012

-Mo- 2016-02-21T14:17:08+00:00

AlneCraft wrote:
1. 01:27:555(1,2) - turn these into a 1/4 stream? I'd say kick sliders are better to match the vocals, and would break up the would-be stream from being too long for this difficuty.

Lanturn wrote:
[Mo's Insane]
00:05:917 (4) - overmap. No sound here to support it. After coming off the 1/8 reverse though, it works better if there's some space between (3) and (5) Yeah you're right.
00:22:038 (2) - Sounds like 1/4 to me, I don't hear the 1/8th note. It would honestly make more sense in a rhythm like this:I'd say there's a more intense sound on the second slider compared to the first slider, and I say 1/8 fits that. Also these were extended to repeat to the red tick, but someone forgot to update this properly...
00:28:935 (2) - Could probably shorten this, since you don't even do it at 00:31:693 (2) - and they're pretty much the same. Fair enough.
00:33:762 (1) - Makes more sense as a 1/4 slider because of the sound that plays at 00:33:848 - Alright.
00:36:521 (1) - 1/2 circle slider would be more appreciated. There's a big sound playing at 00:36:693 - that doesn't make sense to skip. This will also let players recover appropriately as well. Very well.
01:18:417 (1) - to 01:27:900 (1) - Basically you could stand to shorten some of those 3/4 sliders. This is the lighter insane in the difficulty, and it really shouldn't be a nonstop 1/4 fest. If you want to keep all the 1/4s and 1/8 notes, then you should probably give a bit more breathing room in the 3/4 sliders by reducing them to 1/2 sliders. I changed a couple of them. I'd say most of these 3/4s fit the music better than 1/2, and wouldn't call it worth changing most of them in favour of making the difficulty easier.

Thanks for modding.

Please update this properly this time.

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Arf

901 posts

Joined December 2013

Arf 2016-02-21T16:11:20+00:00

Star Stream

[Hard]
00:25:831 (1,2) - I'd put the new combo 00:26:176 (2) - instead, 00:26:348 (3) - is a bit hard to be read now Changed for now, If someone complains about downbeats I'm not sure.
00:34:107 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - It's a Hard diff, you know what I'd say As per Lanturn's mod, changing
00:39:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - ^ ^
01:18:245 - ~ ^

Insanes are fine for me
clean map, but the Hard diff needs to be easier imo. I'll have a look at this

AlneCraft

Arf's Hard
1. 00:35:831(2) - wth these claps? it sounds much better without them imo Depending on whether or not I keep these, I may or may not change this
2. 01:25:831(3,4) - mind turning this or any two 1/4 sliders followed by another slider into a 1/4 stream? No way, streams in a Hard is a personal rule that I will never break. I also think it's too hard to have streams in a difficulty of this level

Lanturn wrote:
Sorry so late! Ended up busy yesterday. M4M like promised

[Hard]
Quite a bit of 1/4 gaps in this diff. To be honest, it's a bit too much. The main issue is that they're all so cluttered together in places that it really spikes up the difficulty in those spots. It's more reserved for insane material, not Hard.
00:28:245 (5) - Just a circle for more breathing room? You want to have some 1/1 breather spaces here and there so the player isn't tapping or holding all the time. Agreed. Very slight overlap here now, but it's barely visible during gameplay, should be all right.
00:37:210 (3,4) - could easily work as just a couple circles instead. Changed it to a 1/4 repeating slider. Due to the 2 notes before it corresponding to different types of noises, I didn't want to use the same pattern for these new sounds, and I think this works all right without being too hard.
00:41:693 (3,4) - Stuff like this can work just as fine as a 1/2 slider or 2 circles. or... Changed all except one of these.
00:42:038 (5) - you could shorten this by 1/4 for a bit more breathing room.
01:16:521 (4,5,1) - I think this would play better with even spacing. Try (1) at x256 y148. Adjusted
01:19:969 (2) - You really don't need to map this 1/8 here. A simple 1/2 suits this difficulty much better. Sure, nerfed.
01:22:038 (5) - No matter how you look at this, there isn't a 1/8 here. Even the higher diffs don't use 1/8. Maybe delete (4) and then use a 1/2 slider or *shrug* a couple 1/4 sliders if you have to keep the stream in. Changed to a simple 3/4 to 1/2
01:24:797 (4,5) - Why can't this just be two 1/2 circles? Your hitsounding even supports it. Why not
01:27:555 (4,5) - Same as above really, not so much as that, but it doesn't hurt. Changed this one due to the slowdown after it, kept the one just before for variation
It's a nice map, but if there's no advanced difficulty to help support this density, you'll have to nerf it otherwise I can't see this passing through the QAT or BN.

Good luck. Easy/Normal are looking great, a bit more work on the Hard and Insanes and you should be ready. Thanks! Let's hope I nerfed it enough.

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Yuii-

2,502 posts

Joined July 2013

Yuii- 2016-02-22T03:36:40+00:00

"Star Stream"

[Normal]
00:01:693 (1) - I'd start the spinner from 00:01:004 - - I'd rather keep a little gap from the previous object before placing a spinner, just a personal prefence so players don't start spinning before finishing the slider (just for personal experience, I used to do it haha).
00:34:107 - I would not make break time on this short map - I agree with you, however the Easy is mapped the same way. Mapping that section on a Normal difficulty is far, far away from my mapping skill yet and so I'm unable to map something to complex to take it up to something very simple. Not this time, maybe when I map a little bit I'll be able to do all these crazy soundszzz

"AlneCraft"

1. 01:03:590(5,6,7) - mayb turn it into something like this? - This isn't really a bad suggestion, and I tried many many things as other viable options such as removing 01:03:590 (5) - but due to density and a couple of random beats being here and there, making this not too dense might not be the best idea.

"Lanturn"

[Normal]

00:32:038 (3,4) - Loosen this slider a little? Try moving the middle node on (3) to x296 y288 and then adjust (4) as needed. - I have no clue on how that slider ended up being so curved haha, my bad, my bad! Fixed as you asked :$
00:34:107 (1,2,3) - I find it odd that you mapped this, and then randomly went into a break since the next part isn't any different from this. It'd make more sense if you continued to map this, or went on a break after a circle at 00:34:107 - - Did you update the version of the map?
00:43:417 (4,5) - A lot of 1/2 sliders in a row at this point. Maybe use circles for these so they don't become too monotonous? - I only changed 00:42:383 (1) - into a circle. In my opinion the current density is decent enough because is a good way to open the most intense part of the song which is fine. I could map it a bit different, but the current setting follow both vocals and beats really decently.
01:22:038 (4) - change this to one circle? Gives a bit of breathing room since this is a pretty long 1/2 section. - Of course!

"ComeBackHome"

Yuii-'s Normal

00:34:107 - Wouldnt a single circle here fit more than mapping till 00:35:314 - ? I mean, the break can start here 00:34:107 - and its kinda weird if you start mapping one part and dont finish it 00:35:486 - 00:39:279 - - Previously it was mapped up to there as you can see on the other mods, however everyone was complaining because "I should either not map that section or map it completely". As, I can't make rhythms so intense into something very simple, I'd rather add a single circle before the break and that's it. Sorry for being unskilled on this )))):
00:56:176 - 01:16:866 - is the ds here higher than usual? i would keep the ds the same throughout the map, for consistency. ds changes in Normals are kinda unpopular - It is and I love to do it on every single Normal / Advanced. Only during the Kiais or when the music gets really intense (in case that there's no Kiai). It's a mechanic I learnt from Irreversible and I really like it!

Thanks everyone for the mods, much appreciate your hard work!!!
http://puu.sh/ngRZk/6c5b42e2b9.osu

DreaM117er

1,596 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2016-02-22T12:24:46+00:00

m4m in game~

[General]

Off Normal's "Widescreen Support"
I think you set wrong sounds file name, remove last number "1". If you don't use these sounds, remove them

[StaR's Easy]

00:07:555 - 00:08:935 - 這裡我覺得沒必要空著，circle加上去吧
00:25:486 - 這裡也是啊
00:28:590 (1,2) - 我自己的建議啊，是http://puu.sh/nhcjQ/5fa1abafc7.jpg，跟的到鼓根vocal，要不要用看你啦
00:31:693 - 這裡我也覺得沒必要空著
00:34:107 (1) - 這個轉盤在Easy裡太長了，我自己建議這裡可以空著，從轉盤尾的地方開始map
00:48:245 - 這裡我也覺得沒必要空著
01:06:866 - ^
01:15:486 (1) - 剛剛那個轉盤太長，這個太短，建議換成長滑條代替

[Yuii-'s Normal]

00:01:004 (1) - I really think no need this slider here, why not let spinner start from 00:01:004 - ??
00:13:072 - 00:18:590 - 00:24:107 - add circle, no reason to miss this drum (I think these are very important sounds.)
00:16:521 - miss clap
00:26:348 (2,3) - try slider first, I think rhythm very strange here
00:47:900 (1,2) - 1/1 reverse slider here??
00:59:797 - 01:10:831 - miss a important drum
01:02:555 - miss clap??
01:03:072 (4) - ^, whole slider
01:05:314 - ^
01:06:004 - 01:06:176 - ^
01:06:521 (6) - ^
01:08:072 - 01:08:590 (4) - ^
01:13:590 - 01:14:107 (4) - ^
01:27:900 (1) - I think a circle enough

[Arf's Hard]

00:13:762 (2) - wow, DS
01:14:624 (2) - ^

seems fine, GJ

[Mo's Insane]

00:06:004 (4) - use circles to replace it. (more better)
00:24:797 (6) - no sense on this bending slider, seriously
00:34:279 - I hear a sound here, maybe rhythm is a circle + treble circles here
01:05:486 (4,5) - I think rhythm is not 3/4 slider and a circle, is a 1/1 slider
01:16:520 (4) - use 1/2 slider to follow vocal and sounds, blue line have nothing

fake Insane, like Extra

[Insane]

00:11:090 (3,4,5) - try remove these circles, hope you like the rhythm
00:22:383 (1) - no need NC
00:50:659 (1,2,3,4) - I think these reverse sliders is bad, try Mo's rhythm

00:59:797 - 00:59:969 - umm...my suggestion, I hope you can focus these two drum to map whole song; Like a circle on 00:59:797 - , a 1/2 slider on 00:59:969 - (example). You can get very fantastic rhythm, trust me
01:16:693 (7,1) - this jump too far in Insane, get close may good

If have any question, you can call me anytime

A powerful song

Good luck

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