hi dirai, as I can see this was unranked .. so let's try to bring it back!
[Easy]
Actually a really good easy. Nothing that can be pointed out, savely mapped! Nice.
[Yuii]
00:11:248 (5) - Can I suggest making this a 1/1 slider? It will fit the "tooown" way better. You should give it a try and see if it works for you.
00:16:328 (1) - I believe that 126 39 looks cleaner.
00:17:296 (3) - 201 182
00:18:264 - I would simplify the rhythm again a bit. Try:
http://puu.sh/nf9d8/6a3690faa2.jpg Reason is that it will be probably easier to the player to follow this rhythm, and it suits the vocals good too.
00:20:925 (2,3) - Hm, I'm not too sure about it. A stack AND a 1/2 repeater?
00:32:780 (3) - If you moved this a bit down I'm sure the flow for newbie players improve. It's easier for them, than such a straigth flow.
00:52:377 (4) - Bad rhythm. I see what you did normally but here it just feels like a cutoff. You should try some more 1/1 sliders too.
00:56:248 (4) - ^
00:58:909 (3) - Try to make a heart slider? XD
01:16:812 (4,5,6) - I think this is a keysentence, as it is really heavily emphasized. It wonders me that you NOW used 1/1 sliders, when it's not an optimal situation. You should consider mapping this a bit more closely and instead remove some 1/2 on other parts.
01:56:974 (1) - NC because DUDUNDUNDU. It's ok to break consistency here.
You just need to work a bit on the rhythm and this will be fine too.
[Firmatorenio]
00:18:990 (6) -
http://puu.sh/nf9yO/eb02883102.jpg00:21:167 (3) - Rotate that one slightly for a blanket?
That one is solid too.
[Hard]
Can't say anything, your mapping looks clean to me.
[Voli]
00:52:135 (3,4,5,6,1) - This pattern didnt' make too much sense to me. Her vocals are clearly split, why putting a star over the whole? Maybe try redoing it while fully listening to the song.
00:56:006 (3,4,5,6) - Same. Can be fine if you have a reason why you did that though.
[Arphi]
00:08:949 (2) - I think this is equally emphasized as 00:09:070 (3) - so imo
http://puu.sh/nfa6L/fa5065b20b.jpg would fit better (and look better imo)
00:16:328 (1,2,3) - Rule n°1: If there isn't anything significant in the background, never ever overmap on a white tick.
00:33:990 (2,3,4) - That triplet looks so low spaced compared to all others.
00:41:490 (1,2,3) - Mhh.. everything so far looks really patterned, but this kinda doens't compliment each other too much. Try working with the sliders a bit differently?
00:48:748 (5,1,2) - nice
01:20:199 (10,1) - vs. 01:18:264 (1,2) - (check NCing)
01:42:457 (5) - NC HIP SONG
Rest is good too!
After Yuii improved some rhythms here and there and you've taken a look at the mod, we'll see how it goes on.
01:24:070 - Add a circle and shift the spinner by 1/4? And in my opinion the 01:23:103 (1) - NC here doesn't really fit. It's one sentence, so.
00:18:990 (6) -