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Affirmation

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Affirmation 2016-01-16T10:46:34+00:00

Euny wrote:
실생활에서 바쁘시거나, 피드백 방법을 모르시거나 등의 이유로 시간이 걸리는것은 이해 가능합니다. 실제로 외국 매퍼랑 m4m 했을때 한달 가까이 답변을 기다린 적이 있으니까요. 시간이 걸리는것은 괜찮습니다. 그 만큼 제 모딩을 생각하고 고칠지 안고칠지에 대해 깊이 생각했다고도 볼 수 있죠.
하지만 단순, "답변하기 귀찮아아아아아아앙" 이란 이유로 시간이 있음에도 피드백을 꺼려하시는건 모더로써 눈물나옵니다. 블로그 이웃이기도 했었고 매핑에 대해 여러 이야길 나누기도 했었던 네오님이 이렇게 답변하실줄은 꿈에도 몰랐네요. 아무튼 맵이 전체적으로 너무너무 이쁘고 좋아서 랭크되길 바라는 한명으로써 다신 절대 그렇게 답변 안하시길 바라겠습니다.

네....정말 죄송합니다..

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 2016-01-16T10:51:16+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
네....정말 죄송합니다..

괜찮아요 괜찮아요!
너무 나쁜단어로 꾸짖은 느낌이라 편찮네요 ㅠㅠ 죄송해요 저도 아직까지 잘 모르는 입장인데 아무튼 꼭 랭시켜봅시다!!

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Taeyang 2016-01-17T13:43:39+00:00

M4M req
Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

General

카운트다운 모든맵셋 다 꺼주세요
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Inconsistency in [LetterboxInBreaks]
{Doyak's Insane} : 1
{Easy} : 0
{Normal} : 0
{Pho's Light Insane} : 1
{Sonnyc's Hard} : 1
Inconsistency in [Source]
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{Easy} : moyashimon returns
{Normal} : moyashimon returns
{Pho's Light Insane} : moyashimon returns
{Sonnyc's Hard} : moyashimon
Inconsistency in [Tags]
{Doyak's Insane} : もやしもん moyasimon tales of agriculture sonnyc pho doyak
{Easy} : もやしもん moyasimon tales of agriculture sonnyc pho doyak
{Normal} : もやしもん moyasimon tales of agriculture sonnyc pho doyak
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{Sonnyc's Hard} : moyashimon returns moyasimon tales of agriculture sonnyc pho doy
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/54800 메타데이터 소스,태그 참고~

Easy

노트가 너무커서 오히려 DS거리감 알기가힘들어 어려울수 있습니다. CS2.5이나 3쓰시면 좋을것 같습니다.
00:04:246 (1,2,3) - 리듬 추천입니다. ;00:05:837 - 여기의 강한비트를 잡기위해 2/3 리버스를 사용하는편이 좋습니다.
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00:26:973 (2) - 슬라안에 휘슬들어가 있습니다.
00:47:882 (1,2,3,4) - 첫번째와 같은 이유입니다. 00:49:473 - 여기음을 잡아주는게 느낌상 더 좋아보입니다.
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00:50:610 (5,6) - 보컬에 맞춰 힛사 추가하는게 더 느낌 좋아보이네요
01:25:155 (2,3,4,5) - 힛사 빠진듯한?=

Normal

1다운비트 텀보단 이지와 같이 2다운비트 텀이 더 안정적이네요
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00:36:064 (3,4) - 서클 두개보단 슬라 하나?
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00:36:973 (1,2) -간격 너무 가깝네요 평행 만들어서 다듬는쪽이 괜찮아보입니다.
00:38:791 (3) - 슬라에 휘슬 들어갔습니다.
01:26:973 (1) - 다른난이도처럼 그냥 뉴콤 제거

Sonnyc's Hard

00:13:791 - 휘슬추가하는게 00:10:155 (4) - 여기와의 일관성으로 더 듣기좋아보입니다.
00:21:519 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 00:21:973 (6,1) - 이부분 흐름과 00:22:428 (1,2,3) - 오버랩이 어색해보여서 그냥 아래와같은 깔끔한 배치 추천해드립니다.
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00:23:791 - 힛사 빠진느낌; 채워넣는게 좋아보입니다.
00:34:700 (3,4) - 이스택 해제해서 이런식으로?
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01:18:564 (4) - 이거 살짤 오프스크린 위험 있는게 아닐지 아니더라도 너무 왼쪽으로 가서 플레이할떄 약간 불편함이 있을것 같습니다.

Pho's Light Insane

Awesome

Doyak's Insane

00:22:200 (4) - x441 y74; 00:21:291 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 대칭 모양 흐름도 중앙으로 바뀌어 더 나아보입니다.
01:09:700 (1) - 컨쥐가 흐름상 더 나아보입니다.
01:23:791 (6) - 배치 컨H해서 평행보단 아래 사진처럼
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굳럭!

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2016-01-17T21:16:07+00:00

Fixed the blankets mentioned by Down:

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osu file format v14

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That's my last update, oko will take care of my diff from now on.
And no, he will NOT mod the set or my difficulty.

Good luck!

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-01-18T05:44:39+00:00

Taeyang wrote:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/54800 메타데이터 소스,태그 참고~ 저거 12년이라 불확실해서 제가 콴 불렀음. 일단 제목부터 -TV Mix-가 맞는 듯한 거 같고 그래서 확실하게 한 번 해야 되기에...

Doyak's Insane
00:22:200 (4) - x441 y74; 00:21:291 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 대칭 모양 흐름도 중앙으로 바뀌어 더 나아보입니다. ㅇㅋ
01:09:700 (1) - 컨쥐가 흐름상 더 나아보입니다. 순간적으로 회전 방향이 바뀌었다가 도로 바뀌어서 별로인 거 같은데...
01:23:791 (6) - 배치 컨H해서 평행보단 아래 사진처럼 비슷하게 고쳐봄요
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Doyak's Insane

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207,232,32314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,232,32428,1,0,1:0:0:0:
317,291,32655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,115,32882,1,8,1:2:0:0:
80,181,33110,2,0,L|59:277,1,90,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
145,362,33564,5,0,0:0:0:0:
317,291,33791,1,8,1:2:0:0:
174,177,34019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,177,34132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,177,34246,2,0,L|153:273,1,90,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,353,34700,1,8,1:2:0:0:
370,201,34928,6,0,P|411:182|455:180,1,90,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
489,301,35382,2,0,P|448:320|404:322,1,90,0|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
243,227,35837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,191,35950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,155,36064,1,0,1:0:0:0:
390,73,36291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,109,36405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,145,36518,1,8,1:2:0:0:
368,328,36746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,227,36973,6,0,P|198:229|157:247,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
51,317,37428,2,0,P|32:276|30:231,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,45,37882,2,0,P|103:86|106:131,1,90
30,231,38337,1,2,0:0:0:0:
134,300,38564,2,0,L|234:310,1,90
331,136,39019,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,324,39246,2,0,P|402:283|405:238,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,136,39700,2,0,P|290:118|245:115,1,90
143,189,40155,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,241,40382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,89,40610,6,0,L|37:88,1,90
8,203,41064,2,0,L|97:203,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,318,41519,2,0,L|60:317,2,90,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,250,42200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
451,317,42428,6,0,L|362:318,1,90
256,250,42882,1,2,0:0:0:0:
367,191,43110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
362,318,43337,2,0,P|331:350|291:370,1,90
136,292,43791,1,2,0:0:0:0:
207,134,44019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
367,191,44246,6,0,P|379:233|376:278,1,90,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,290,44700,2,0,P|238:247|241:202,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,105,45155,2,0,L|411:118,1,90
508,198,45610,1,2,0:0:0:0:
411,361,45837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,198,46064,5,4,1:2:0:0:
146,263,46291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
146,263,46519,2,0,P|185:284|229:291,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,165,46973,2,0,P|290:143|246:136,1,90
84,220,47428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
115,70,47655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,262,47882,6,0,L|210:357,1,90,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,236,48337,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,102,48564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,99,48677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,48791,1,4,1:2:0:0:
368,61,49019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
291,249,49246,1,2,0:0:0:0:
117,159,49473,6,0,P|90:87|151:12,1,180,4|0,1:0|1:0,1:0:0:0:
384,91,50155,1,0,1:0:0:0:
266,280,50382,1,0,1:0:0:0:
37,193,50610,6,0,P|77:165|120:159,1,90,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,177,51519,6,0,L|176:281,1,103.500001974106,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,359,51973,1,8,1:2:0:0:
351,228,52200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,228,52314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
351,228,52428,2,0,P|390:200|443:186,1,103.500001974106,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,332,52882,1,8,1:2:0:0:
340,107,53110,6,0,L|230:88,1,103.500001974106,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
97,247,53564,2,0,L|207:228,1,103.500001974106,0|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
67,108,54019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,108,54132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,108,54246,2,0,P|39:147|25:200,1,103.500001974106,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,328,54700,1,8,1:2:0:0:
198,229,54928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
338,193,55155,6,0,L|363:303,1,103.500001974106,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,370,55610,1,8,1:2:0:0:
134,267,55837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,267,55950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,267,56064,2,0,P|127:207|152:169,1,103.500001974106,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,107,56519,1,8,1:2:0:0:
466,226,56746,6,0,P|427:254|374:268,1,103.500001974106,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
270,368,57200,2,0,P|242:329|228:276,1,103.500001974106,0|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
294,146,57655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,146,57769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,146,57882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
170,69,58110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,275,58337,1,8,1:2:0:0:
430,198,58564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
258,54,58791,6,0,P|217:85|197:140,1,103.500001974106,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,275,59246,1,8,1:2:0:0:
328,177,59473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,177,59587,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,177,59700,2,0,L|440:200,1,103.500001974106,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,342,60155,1,8,1:2:0:0:
227,275,60382,6,0,P|177:287|134:317,1,103.500001974106,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
66,146,60837,2,0,P|115:133|158:103,1,103.500001974106,0|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
295,148,61291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,148,61405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,148,61519,1,0,1:0:0:0:
210,321,61746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
158,103,61973,1,8,1:2:0:0:
42,251,62200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,275,62428,6,0,L|411:287,1,103.500001974106,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,286,62882,1,0,1:0:0:0:
360,92,63110,2,0,P|397:10|467:70,1,207.000003948212,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,209,63791,1,0,1:2:0:0:
310,166,64019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,172,64132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,178,64246,1,4,1:2:0:0:
101,317,64473,5,0,0:0:0:0:
115,278,64586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
129,239,64700,1,4,0:0:0:0:
74,61,64928,5,0,0:0:0:0:
103,96,65041,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,131,65155,1,4,0:0:0:0:
260,65,65382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,113,65610,5,4,3:2:0:0:
395,138,65723,1,0,3:2:0:0:
393,163,65837,1,0,3:2:0:0:
391,188,65950,1,0,3:2:0:0:
389,213,66064,6,0,P|346:242|296:254,1,103.500001974106,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,215,66519,1,8,1:2:0:0:
200,77,66746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,77,66860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,77,66973,2,0,P|232:117|248:166,1,103.500001974106,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,305,67428,1,8,1:2:0:0:
30,182,67655,6,0,L|139:190,1,103.500001974106,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
310,312,68110,2,0,L|206:304,1,103.500001974106,0|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
133,189,68564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,189,68678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,189,68791,2,0,P|148:140|181:99,1,103.500001974106,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,37,69246,1,8,1:2:0:0:
424,128,69473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
471,263,69700,6,0,P|419:270|369:260,1,103.500001974106,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,135,70155,1,8,1:2:0:0:
395,30,70382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
395,30,70496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
395,30,70610,2,0,P|418:76|423:127,1,103.500001974106,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,260,71064,1,8,1:2:0:0:
193,171,71291,6,0,L|81:161,1,103.500001974106,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
125,302,71746,2,0,L|13:292,1,103.500001974106,0|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
89,161,72200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
89,161,72314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
89,161,72428,1,0,1:0:0:0:
125,302,72655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,234,72882,1,8,1:2:0:0:
168,89,73110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,354,73337,6,0,P|297:376|348:381,1,103.500001974106,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
453,281,73791,1,8,1:2:0:0:
389,151,74019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,151,74132,1,0,0:0:0:0:
389,151,74246,2,0,P|352:186|330:232,1,103.500001974106,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,280,74700,1,8,1:2:0:0:
81,78,74928,6,0,P|127:100|163:136,1,103.500001974106,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
275,338,75382,2,0,P|228:315|192:279,1,103.500001974106,0|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
301,183,75837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,183,75950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,183,76064,1,0,1:0:0:0:
163,136,76291,2,0,L|55:146,1,103.500001974106,0|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
126,317,76746,1,0,0:0:0:0:
126,317,76860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
126,317,76973,6,0,L|234:327,1,103.500001974106,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,223,77428,1,8,1:2:0:0:
254,83,77655,6,0,P|217:119|316:195,1,207.000003948212,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
498,82,78337,1,8,1:2:0:0:
414,297,78564,6,0,P|368:335|219:319,1,207.000003948212,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,246,79246,1,0,1:0:0:0:
331,144,79473,6,0,P|360:232|271:258,1,207.000003948212,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,139,80155,1,0,1:0:0:0:
263,15,80382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,15,80496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,15,80610,6,0,L|363:25,1,90,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,104,81064,2,0,L|440:193,1,90,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,290,81519,2,0,L|271:281,1,90,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,201,81973,1,8,1:2:0:0:
356,164,82200,6,0,P|400:170|439:192,1,90,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
485,287,82655,2,0,P|479:331|456:370,1,90,0|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
335,335,83110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,335,83223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,335,83337,2,0,L|246:344,1,90,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,216,83791,2,0,L|206:225,1,90,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,199,84246,5,4,1:2:0:0:
284,152,84473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,277,84700,1,8,1:2:0:0:
402,199,84928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,55,85155,5,4,1:2:0:0:
159,174,85382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,152,85610,1,8,1:2:0:0:
38,141,85837,6,0,P|47:231|115:292,1,180,4|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
249,170,86519,1,6,1:2:0:0:
347,332,86746,1,2,0:0:0:0:
347,332,86859,1,2,0:0:0:0:
347,332,86973,1,6,1:2:0:0:
256,192,87087,12,0,89246,0:0:0:0:

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Affirmation 2016-01-18T05:58:23+00:00

Down wrote:
1:1 req

[Easy]
00:14:246 (4) - 이부분 플레이 하면서 봐도 살짝 담요가 엉성합니다. 가운데 점 살짝만 내려서 정교하게 맞춰주시면 좋을것 같아요.
00:38:337 (2) - 0.96x이라 조금 아슬아슬하니 조금만 조절해주세요.

[Normal]
00:42:428 (3,4) - 이부분도 1.05x니까 (3)을 (4)쪽으로 살짝 이동시켜주세요.
00:46:973 (3,1) - 1.06x
00:49:473 (4) - 이런식의 오버랩이 썩 좋진 않다고 생각합니다.
제가 추천드리고 싶은 방법은

이런식으로 하면 리딩하기 쉬워질듯 합니다.
--다른패턴으로 짰습니다.
00:53:337 (1,2) - 1.05x

~~그런데 Pho님 계신데 코리안에어에 올라가있네요..~~--코리안에어 등록하고 포님을 섭외한지라...내려갔습니다

도움이 됬으면 좋겠네요.

디스턴스 에러 모딩이라 전체 수정.
감사합니다

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-01-18T09:37:24+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Subject: KwaN's Metadata Checking Queue ヽ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ

Doyak wrote:
This time I'm gonna ask for an other mapper's mapset(with my GD included), since he seems to be lazy to ask around for metadata ><
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/399793

Thanks in advance!
Hello! Both sets below are acceptable.
1
Title: Wake Up -TV MIX-
Artist: ClariS
Source: もやしもんリターンズ

Reference:
http://www.clarismusic.jp/disco/archive/?SECL-1170
2
Title: Wake Up (TV size)
Artist: ClariS
Source: もやしもんリターンズ

Reference:
http://www.aniplex.co.jp/lineup/anime/m ... on/cd.html
Good luck!

둘 중 하나로 고치세요. 2번으로 할 경우 Size의 S를 소문자로 바꾸는 것도 잊지 마시고요. 그리고 소스를 원어로 적을 거기 때문에 태그에는 모야시몬 리턴즈 로마자화한 것도 추가하고요.

Riviclia

38 posts

Joined May 2012

Riviclia 2016-01-18T11:34:17+00:00

Easy

00:06:064 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/mA1FZ/adb49a8218.jpg 이게 더 어울리는것같음
00:49:246 (3,4) - 한 슬라로 합치는건 어떨까요

Normal

00:06:746 (2) - 맑은 소리(?)에 안맞출거면 없애는게 나은듯
00:34:928 - 여긴 서클 넣는게 나은듯

Sonnyc's Hard

01:08:564 (7,8) - 7을 한번 반복시키는건 어때요

Pho's Light Insane

01:05:155 (1,2,1,2) - I think two 1/2 sliders are better
01:26:746 (5,6,7) - just with one slider

Doyak's Insane

01:26:519 (2,3,4,5) - 2랑 345랑 자리 바꾸면 좋을듯

.-.

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Affirmation 2016-01-20T05:22:38+00:00

Taeyang wrote:
M4M req
Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

General
카운트다운 모든맵셋 다 꺼주세요
SPOILER
Inconsistency in [LetterboxInBreaks]
{Doyak's Insane} : 1
{Easy} : 0
{Normal} : 0
{Pho's Light Insane} : 1
{Sonnyc's Hard} : 1
Inconsistency in [Source]
{Doyak's Insane} : moyashimon returns
{Easy} : moyashimon returns
{Normal} : moyashimon returns
{Pho's Light Insane} : moyashimon returns
{Sonnyc's Hard} : moyashimon
Inconsistency in [Tags]
{Doyak's Insane} : もやしもん moyasimon tales of agriculture sonnyc pho doyak
{Easy} : もやしもん moyasimon tales of agriculture sonnyc pho doyak
{Normal} : もやしもん moyasimon tales of agriculture sonnyc pho doyak
{Pho's Light Insane} : もやしもん moyasimon tales of agriculture sonnyc pho doyak
{Sonnyc's Hard} : moyashimon returns moyasimon tales of agriculture sonnyc pho doy
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/54800 메타데이터 소스,태그 참고~

Easy
노트가 너무커서 오히려 DS거리감 알기가힘들어 어려울수 있습니다. CS2.5이나 3쓰시면 좋을것 같습니다.수정했습니다.
00:04:246 (1,2,3) - 리듬 추천입니다. ;00:05:837 - 여기의 강한비트를 잡기위해 2/3 리버스를 사용하는편이 좋습니다.
SPOILER
수정했습니다
00:26:973 (2) - 슬라안에 휘슬들어가 있습니다.헐 왜있지...수정
00:47:882 (1,2,3,4) - 첫번째와 같은 이유입니다. 00:49:473 - 여기음을 잡아주는게 느낌상 더 좋아보입니다.
SPOILER
수정
00:50:610 (5,6) - 보컬에 맞춰 힛사 추가하는게 더 느낌 좋아보이네요아직 정확히 뭔뜻인지 몰라서 냅뒀습니다.
01:25:155 (2,3,4,5) - 힛사 빠진듯한?수정=

Normal
1다운비트 텀보단 이지와 같이 2다운비트 텀이 더 안정적이네요
SPOILER
00:36:064 (3,4) - 서클 두개보단 슬라 하나?
SPOILER
00:36:973 (1,2) -간격 너무 가깝네요 평행 만들어서 다듬는쪽이 괜찮아보입니다.평행은 아니고 간격수정
00:38:791 (3) - 슬라에 휘슬 들어갔습니다.
01:26:973 (1) - 다른난이도처럼 그냥 뉴콤 제거넹

Sonnyc's Hard
00:13:791 - 휘슬추가하는게 00:10:155 (4) - 여기와의 일관성으로 더 듣기좋아보입니다.
00:21:519 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 00:21:973 (6,1) - 이부분 흐름과 00:22:428 (1,2,3) - 오버랩이 어색해보여서 그냥 아래와같은 깔끔한 배치 추천해드립니다.
SPOILER
00:23:791 - 힛사 빠진느낌; 채워넣는게 좋아보입니다.
00:34:700 (3,4) - 이스택 해제해서 이런식으로?
SPOILER
01:18:564 (4) - 이거 살짤 오프스크린 위험 있는게 아닐지 아니더라도 너무 왼쪽으로 가서 플레이할떄 약간 불편함이 있을것 같습니다.

Pho's Light Insane
Awesome

Doyak's Insane
00:22:200 (4) - x441 y74; 00:21:291 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 대칭 모양 흐름도 중앙으로 바뀌어 더 나아보입니다.
01:09:700 (1) - 컨쥐가 흐름상 더 나아보입니다.
01:23:791 (6) - 배치 컨H해서 평행보단 아래 사진처럼
SPOILER

굳럭!

Reillia

1,162 posts

Joined August 2014

Reillia 2016-01-22T12:35:20+00:00

이지 노말 irc

21:11 Neoskylove: 모딩 가능하심?
21:14 [C u r i]: 노래듣고 경정함
21:14 [C u r i]: 결정
21:15 *Neoskylove is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/877926 ClariS - Wake Up -TV MIX-]
21:15 [C u r i]: pho껀 모딩 안함
21:15 Neoskylove: ?
21:15 Neoskylove: 왜영
21:15 [C u r i]: 영어
21:16 Neoskylove: 아
21:16 Neoskylove: 번역 해드릴 테니깐 쫘악 한글로 쓰센
21:16 [C u r i]: 이지 노말은 irc 하겠음
21:16 [C u r i]: 귗낳으니
21:16 Neoskylove: 아 저 바쁨(?)
21:16 [C u r i]: 따지면 저도 바쁨
21:17 [C u r i]: 00:24:246 (3) - 이거 좀만 아래로 내려주면 더 쉽게 칠수있음
21:17 Neoskylove: ㅇㅇ ㄱㄱ합시다
21:17 Neoskylove: irx
21:17 Neoskylove: ez?
21:17 [C u r i]: ㅇㅇ
21:17 Neoskylove: dzdz
21:17 Neoskylove: ㅇㅋㅇㅋ
21:18 [C u r i]: 00:36:973 (1,2,3) - 1의 꼬리가 3을향해 있으므로 리딩헷갈릴수 있음
21:18 [C u r i]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4382523
21:18 [C u r i]: 대충 이렇게 잡아도 됨
21:19 [C u r i]: 00:40:610 (1,2,3) - ^
21:19 [C u r i]: 00:44:246 (1,3) - 이런스택 위험할수있단건 아실거고
21:20 [C u r i]: 00:48:791 (2,3,4,1) - 
21:20 [C u r i]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4382525
21:20 [C u r i]: 이렇게 잡는게 더 예쁜듯
21:20 Neoskylove: 00:36:973 (1,2,3) - 이거는 일단 블랭킷 목적으로 한거라 냅둘게요
21:20 [C u r i]: 00:58:791 (1,3) - 이런스택도 위험할수있단거 아실거고
21:21 [C u r i]: 01:13:337 (1,2) - 흐름상 블랭킷해도 나쁘지않을듯
21:22 *[C u r i] is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/870313 ClariS - Wake Up -TV MIX- [Normal]]
21:22 Neoskylove: 그런거 안함
21:22 Neoskylove: 블랭킷 암걸림
21:23 [C u r i]: 00:02:428 (4,5) - 블랭킷 넣어주는게 더 좋아보임
21:24 Neoskylove: ㅇㅋ
21:24 Neoskylove: 저거 원래 블랭킷이었는데
21:24 Neoskylove: 어쩌다 저래됐지
21:24 [C u r i]: 00:05:155 (3,4,5) - 3의 머리에서 잡은 소리랑 4에서나오는 소리랑 같기때문에 4번도 1/2 슬라도 잡아저 박자 넣어주는게 좋음
21:25 [C u r i]: 00:06:064 - 이곳의 소리가 상대적으로 약하기때문에
21:25 [C u r i]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4382543
21:25 [C u r i]: 대충이런식으로
21:25 Neoskylove: 넹
21:26 [C u r i]: 노말은 저도 잡을게있어도 잡지를못함
21:26 Neoskylove: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
21:26 [C u r i]: 제가 노말을 안만드는게 뭔 설명이 더 필요함
21:26 [C u r i]: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
21:26 Neoskylove: 그럼 노말 스킵
21:27 [C u r i]: pho껀 모딩 안함
21:27 [C u r i]: 어차피 모딩할것도 없음
21:27 [C u r i]: (진심)
21:27 Neoskylove: ㅇㅇ

[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:01:519 (2,3) - 2번노트를 90도 돌려서 3번으러 놓는게 어떨까요?
00:02:882 (1,2,3) - ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ신박한 패턴

왜지 어째서 잡을게 없는거지

[ttaemuniya's Insane]
와이드 스크린 서포터 카운트다운 레터박스 다꺼주세여

아니 왜 잡을게 없어요

[ -Scarlet- ]

526 posts

Joined March 2013

[ -Scarlet- ] 2016-01-24T13:39:18+00:00

Hello there~ Sorry for the late mod

[General]

Remove Countdown and Letterbox if you're not making use of it http://puu.sh/mHKMv/f0bcecbd0b.png
Keep it consistent with other difficulties

[Doyak's Insane]

Very neat

00:21:291 (3,4,5) - I think this triples should be consistent with 00:06:746 (4,5,6) , not similar to 00:21:746 (1,2,3) since the beat are different here
00:22:655 (1,2) - Not sure about the rhythm here though, should keep this consistent with 00:26:291 (2,3) or 00:29:928 (2,3) where the slider are mapped to the vocal
00:26:064 (1,2) - The NC here should be consistent what you have done throughout 00:07:882 - 00:15:382 section. Seems quite off while playing since the NC is different
00:44:246 (1) - Not quite sure about the hitsound here though, the Normal sampleset almost overrides the finish because it's too loud. Maybe change the sampleset back to Auto and then change the additions to Normal finish would sound nicer
00:50:610 - Lower the volume at this part to around 50%? Since the section here is slower due to your low SV, and Kiai part starts at 00:51:519 . so lowering the volume here would be logical
01:04:700 (3) , 01:05:155 (3) , 01:05:610 (1) - Using the Normal sampleset would fit nicely here like 01:02:428 (1) .
01:05:610 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe change this to 2 1/4 slider instead? It emphasize on the loud 1/2 beat more
01:20:610 - Maybe lower the volume here back to 60%?
01:26:746 (3) - Missing normal sampleset?

[Pho's Light Insane]

Great diff! Just few suggestion here

00:31:291 (1) - I feel that there's no need for 1/1 slider here. Shorten it to 1/2 like 00:27:655 (1) or 00:24:019 (1) since they have similar vocals

Nothing much to talk about here @@

That's it from me here

Other difficulty looks really perfect for me @@ Good luck!

AkinOppai

9 posts

Joined December 2014

AkinOppai 2016-01-25T08:39:30+00:00

Hello!

General

-I think you should change the background. It's too white and it could distract new players that started playing the game and have %0 dimmed background that would ruin the experience.
-Add something like grey and cool then change the combo colors little darker if you want.
-Change the Hit sounds to soft? It would be a lot better

Easy

00:02:200 (1,2,3,4) - This part is odd you should remove the 2 and 3 then add this http://prntscr.com/9uin6z it should look like this. You could make like a half circle shape.
00:07:428 (1,2,3) - After this 1,2,3 change the others like this http://prntscr.com/9uipbv and stack the notes like this then add clap to the 2,4,6 notes.http://prntscr.com/9uippx it would fit the song and make it better

Normal

01:24:246 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Remove the 4 and put the 4,5,6 1 tick back then add a 7. It should be like this http://prntscr.com/9uirx1

I didn't map the GD's And i couldn't find that many things it's a great map you should bn it soon imo
Have a great day
Hope to see this ranked ^^
Cya

Exile-

Elite Storyboarder

449 posts

Joined April 2013

Exile- 2016-01-26T13:32:50+00:00

M4M

[General]

[Easy]

01:00:610 (3) - move to 335,323 for better flow
01:25:155 (2,3) - Move them a bit downward (but still on DS)
00:12:882 (2,3) - That's a little flowbreak

[Normal]

00:36:973 (1,2) - They're a bit too close to each other imo
00:58:109 (6) - Delete this note, triple is barely hearable here
01:12:655 (5) - ^
01:19:700 (6) - This slider can flow a lot better with 01:20:610 (1) - . Also his shape is not that nice

[Sonnyc's Hard]

00:14:246 (1,2,3) - This pattern doesnt really fit here. You should emphasize 00:15:155 (3) - . Not to mention that its hard to read

[Doyak's Insane]

00:26:291 (2,3,4,5) - This part feels pretty weird, I would try to ctrl + G 00:26:973 (4,5) - these

Nice DT farm

Mapset is really good, I couldn't find many issues here. Good luck ^^

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-01-26T14:28:03+00:00

Riviclia wrote:
Doyak's Insane
01:26:519 (2,3,4,5) - 2랑 345랑 자리 바꾸면 좋을듯 2를 강조해주기 위해선 슬라가 가는 방향에 있는 것보다 흐름을 꺾어주는 게 좋음

[C u r i] wrote:
[ttaemuniya's Insane]
와이드 스크린 서포터 카운트다운 레터박스 다꺼주세여 ㅁㄴㅇㄹ 왜 다 켜져있는 거지 다 끔

아니 왜 잡을게 없어요 다행인 듯

[ -Scarlet- ] wrote:
[Doyak's Insane]

Very neat
00:21:291 (3,4,5) - I think this triples should be consistent with 00:06:746 (4,5,6) , not similar to 00:21:746 (1,2,3) since the beat are different here I think it's fine. Those are not really same because 00:06:746 (4,5,6) - is an instrumental melody part while 00:21:291 (3,4,5) - is a quiet vocal part. Even the triplets represent the same sound, the place they're in are different.
00:22:655 (1,2) - Not sure about the rhythm here though, should keep this consistent with 00:26:291 (2,3) or 00:29:928 (2,3) where the slider are mapped to the vocal 00:22:428 (5,1) - is different than others. In 00:21:746 (1,2,3,4,5) - , the drums are prominent so I binded them with a combo. It's an entrance to a new song section, so it should be different than others. The rhythm is a bit little inconsistent, but we don't need to make all things exactly same. Some variations can be done to discriminate different things.
00:26:064 (1,2) - The NC here should be consistent what you have done throughout 00:07:882 - 00:15:382 section. Seems quite off while playing since the NC is different Again, the drums are different. For 00:07:200 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can hear the whole drum 'part' binded with one comboset. Also for 00:14:246 (4,5,6,7,8) - , you can clearly hear a 'set' of melodies and also two prominent drums at 00:14:927 (7,8) - so it's not good to disconnect the combo right there. On the other hand, 00:26:064 (1) - This whole part feels 'continuous' and the drums are very consistent too. So it's better to NC to the downbeat there.
00:44:246 (1) - Not quite sure about the hitsound here though, the Normal sampleset almost overrides the finish because it's too loud. Maybe change the sampleset back to Auto and then change the additions to Normal finish would sound nicer It's double emphasizing, doesn't it feel good?
00:50:610 - Lower the volume at this part to around 50%? Since the section here is slower due to your low SV, and Kiai part starts at 00:51:519 . so lowering the volume here would be logical The lower sv doesn't always mean it's weak. It's more like indicating that it's a unique point that makes players prepare for the highlight part. 00:50:610 - is not a weak point at all, and 00:51:064 - is still not quiet, as well as there's no addition sounds so it's not really loud too.
01:04:700 (3) , 01:05:155 (3) , 01:05:610 (1) - Using the Normal sampleset would fit nicely here like 01:02:428 (1) . Good suggestion, fixed.
01:05:610 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe change this to 2 1/4 slider instead? It emphasize on the loud 1/2 beat more I just hate 1/4 sliders and it doesn't really matter much here. Also I never used any 1/4 sliders on the whole map so it might be rather inconsistent to suddenly using it here.
01:20:610 - Maybe lower the volume here back to 60%? Fixed.
01:26:746 (3) - Missing normal sampleset? No, I just prefer current one.

Exile- wrote:
[Doyak's Insane]

00:26:291 (2,3,4,5) - This part feels pretty weird, I would try to ctrl + G 00:26:973 (4,5) - these I don't feel it weird. 00:26:746 (3,4) - This jump is for emphasizing 4 anyway.
Nice DT farm Idk lol I rather thought about nomoding this

Thanks for all of your mods!

Doyak's Insane

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TitleUnicode:Wake Up -TV MIX-
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ArtistUnicode:ClariS
Creator:Neoskylove
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Source:もやしもん リターンズ
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Ujimatsu Chiya

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Ujimatsu Chiya 2016-01-27T14:58:35+00:00

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[Easy]

00:01:973 (2,3) - 이 오브젝트들 대신 이런식으로 해보시는건 어떨까요? 노래랑 더 어울리고 좋네요.
00:07:882 - 이구간부터 00:18:564 - 이 구간까지 짜신 리듬이 노래랑 어울리시다고 생각하는지 조금 의심스럽네요.
전체적으로 드럼에만 편중되어있어서 많이 어색하네요. 이지라고해서 굳이 1/1간격에 공백을 줄 필요는 굳이 없습니다. 좀 더 보컬이나 뒤에 들리시는 전자피아노소리등 다양한 소리를 좀 더 잡아주신다면 어떨까요?

[Normal]

00:02:200 (3,4) - 리듬 스왑해주셔서 슬라부터 나오고 그다음이 서클나오도록 바꿔주시면 더 듣기 좋네요.
00:05:837 (4,5) - 이것도 위랑 마찬자기로 리듬 스왑해주세요. 00:06:746 (6) - 이건 들리는 음이긴하지만 열차를 피하기 위해서라도 과감히 지우시는 편이 난이도에 더 어울립니다.
00:09:473 (3,4) - 마찬가지로 리듬 스왑해주세요 00:09:700 - 이쪽보다 00:09:928 - 이쪽이 휠씬 더 명확한 소리가 나옵니다.
00:13:110 (3,4) - 위랑 마찬가지네요 리듬 스왑 추천드립니다.
00:16:746 (3,4) - ^
00:15:155 - 이쪽부터 00:18:564 - 이쪽까지의 리듬추천드립니다. ( 초록색 뉴콤1부터가 시작지점입니다. )
SPOILER
00:19:473 (2,3) - 이쪽도 리듬 스왑해주세요. 슬라 > 서클 순으로
00:49:473 (4) - 이건 1/2슬라대신 서클로 바꿔주시는 편이 지금처럼 연속으로 스텍이나오는 열차를 피하실 수 있습니다.
키아이 마다 거의 한파트씩 똑같은 리듬으로 채워버리셨네요.... 저게 노래랑 어울리시다고 생각하셔서 그런건지 아니면 귀찮아서 그러신건지 저는 모르니 말을 조금 삼가는 하곘습니다만 정말로 정성을 들여서 매핑하신건지 약간 의심스럽네요. 처음하시는분들이 하위난이도에서 뭘 잡고 뭘 잡지말아야하는지 잘 모르셔서 많이 막히시는분들도 많고 저도 그랬기때문에 어느정도 이해는 합니다만 지금이 최선이라고 생각하지는않네요.

[Sonnyc's Hard]

00:02:882 (1,2,3) - 굳이 슬라이더 3개를 이렇게 스텍해놓으실 필요까지 있으시나요? 노래랑 어울리게 한다면 00:03:337 (2,3) - 이 2개정도만이라면 이해는 하지만 3개는 조금 아닌거 같다고 봐요. 00:14:246 (1,2,3) - 이쪽도 저는 어색한거같네요.

[pho's Insane]

01:02:428 (1,1) - remove NC which one better. it seems to abuse now. or match like 01:17:655 (1,2,3) - here.

[Doyak's Insane]

필요없는 말이니 무시하셔도 상관없습니다. 다 좋은데 뭔가 디자인쪽이 많이 미묘한거같네요. 맛좋은 빵인데 모양이 이상하다고 하시면 이해하기 편하실까요?
조금 더 아트매핑(?) 하시면 퀼이 휜씬 높아지지 않나 기대가 되네요.

Doyak

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Doyak 2016-01-27T17:32:45+00:00

eINess wrote:
[Doyak's Insane]
필요없는 말이니 무시하셔도 상관없습니다. 다 좋은데 뭔가 디자인쪽이 많이 미묘한거같네요. 맛좋은 빵인데 모양이 이상하다고 하시면 이해하기 편하실까요?
조금 더 아트매핑(?) 하시면 퀼이 휜씬 높아지지 않나 기대가 되네요.

저도 제 자신이 그런 부분이 많이 부족하다는 걸 계속 느끼고 있고, 앞으로 더 잘생긴(?) 맵을 찍도록 연습해 보겠습니다. 빵에 비유한 건 제가 생각해도 참 적절한 것 같네요.

eINess wrote:
키아이 마다 거의 한파트씩 똑같은 리듬으로 채워버리셨네요.... 저게 노래랑 어울리시다고 생각하셔서 그런건지 아니면 귀찮아서 그러신건지 저는 모르니 말을 조금 삼가는 하곘습니다만 정말로 정성을 들여서 매핑하신건지 약간 의심스럽네요. 처음하시는분들이 하위난이도에서 뭘 잡고 뭘 잡지말아야하는지 잘 모르셔서 많이 막히시는분들도 많고 저도 그랬기때문에 어느정도 이해는 합니다만 지금이 최선이라고 생각하지는않네요.

귀찮아서 대충 짜신 건 아니라고 제가 대변해드립니다. 하지만 그 뜻은, 앞으로 네오님이 좀 더 매핑 실력을 키워서 노래와 더 어울리게 짜는 법을 깨달으셔야 되는 거겠죠?

MokouSmoke

495 posts

Joined May 2013

MokouSmoke 2016-02-02T07:10:14+00:00

from #modreqs
maybe i'll do a full mod later if I'm less lazy

Normal
01:26:064 (4) - there's no sound here. the drums and strings land on 01:26:291 - so I would skip the downbeat. maybe something like this instead. http://puu.sh/mSOv8/aa94cf0a18.jpg

Left

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Left 2016-02-02T08:29:26+00:00

노래 매우좋다는 것~

[노말]

01:18:337 (3,4) - 여기 사이를 비우는 게 상당히 어색하게 들립니다. 비트가 상당히 강한데 그 뒤에 아무것도 없는데서 슬라를 시작하셨네요. 노말 정도면 01:16:973 (1,2,3) - 이것처럼 가능할거라 생각합니다.
01:19:700 (6) - 이부분도 어색한 것 같습니다. 앞과 같은 이유.
01:26:519 (4,5) - 여기도 마찬가지입니다. 3단타로 마무리하시는게 자연스러울 것 같네요.

[손닉's 하드]
00:05:154 (2) - Aimod

[Pho's Light Insane]
00:47:882 (1) - How about Blanket?
01:25:837 (3) - NC

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-02-02T12:42:45+00:00

m4m

[General]
lead in 1000ms

[Easy]
00:36:519 (5,1,2) - nazi modding but if yu make this curve symmetry it would flow nicer
00:40:155 (4,1,2) - ^
01:20:610 - kiai should end here imo, fits better with the rhythm

[Normal]
imo red ticks like 00:12:200 - 00:15:837 - 00:17:655 - should be mapped, since beginners can follow vocals better than some beats imo cuz they download the song they liked first
00:31:519 (4,5) - make (4) point to (5) would flow better
00:54:246 (5,6,7) - if this rhythm is a triplet, 00:50:155 (5,6) - should be a triplet too
01:03:791 (3,4,5,6) - maybe you can make this a perfect square / rectangle just because they'd look better
01:26:746 - this sound is important, should be mapped imo. its the end of the map anyways so it could be a little bit more intense

[Sonnyc]
00:06:973 (5) - end at 00:07:428 - and add circle at 00:07:655 - fits more imo
00:10:382 (5) - could be spilt to 2x 1/2 sliders, i feel like this slider is too long (lol
01:21:973 - should be mapped ?

[Pho]
00:02:882 - 00:09:700 - imo you shouldnt skip 1/1 ticks in insane diffs unless they have no sound on them
00:14:246 (4,5) - this jump should be bigger, there are strong sounds there
00:49:473 (1,2) - (2) is strong, shoudnt stacked

[Doyak]
00:49:928 - this is strong, should be clickable imo
idk the rest looks fine to me lol

good luck!

YawaH

83 posts

Joined November 2015

YawaH 2016-02-02T13:21:29+00:00

M4M mod request from #modreq!

the song's not really my thing. but whatever

daimn this one's pretty neat and hard to mod

M4M

Easy

00:26:973 (2) well, I think this suggestion has very low priority since it might destroy the whole thing. I think it would be better if you'd move this note's start at the 1's middle. also the same at 01:14:246 (2).

Normal

00:31:519 (4) make it aligned like what you did at 00:29:700 (1,2,3)
01:16:973 (2,3,4) seems silent here

Sonnyc's Hard

00:05:392 (2) hmm try to put 2's start a very bit down or properly align both of 2 and 3's borderlines. The same but with low priority at 00:12:428 (2)

Pho's Light Insane

01:01:291 (3,4) I'm not really sure about this. I played this diff once and I had no problem with this part but others might.

Doyak's Insane

00:02:655 (2,4,5,6) align 4 with 2, not 6 with 2
01:12:200 (3,4,5) align these with the end point of 01:11:291 (1)

Go go go go!

F D Flourite

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Joined March 2013

F D Flourite 2016-02-03T06:28:39+00:00

Nothing really to say. Leave a star here

Affirmation

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Topic Starter

Affirmation 2016-02-03T06:53:42+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
Nothing really to say. Leave a star here

Thanks

Doyak

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Doyak 2016-02-03T07:06:06+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
[Doyak]
00:49:928 - this is strong, should be clickable imo That's true, but at the same time I want to indicate the dragging vocal and sounds on 00:49:473 -
idk the rest looks fine to me lol

slandotski wrote:
M4M mod request from #modreq!

the song's not really my thing. but whatever

daimn this one's pretty neat and hard to mod

M4M
Doyak's Insane
00:02:655 (2,4,5,6) align 4 with 2, not 6 with 2 That's not how automatic stack works. I can manually fix it like that, but that'll ruin HR mod even worse. At least now it has the end of the triplet on the same location.
01:12:200 (3,4,5) align these with the end point of 01:11:291 (1) Same

Thanks for all your mod~

__Hatsune_Miku

598 posts

Joined July 2014

__Hatsune_Miku 2016-02-03T13:28:34+00:00

M4M

-TV MIX- 가 아니라 (TV Size)
태그 ( agriculture )다음에 ( opening ) 추가
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/167619 이맵 참고함

Normal

01:27:200 (1) - 이 스피너 시작 01:27:087 으로 # 다른난이도는 같은데 노말만 이상함
00:33:337 (1) - 01:19:700 (7) - 꺽은 슬라이더 보다 곡선이 나을듯

Sonnyc's Hard

00:02:882 (1,2,3) - 일렬로 곂치지 말아주세요

Doyak

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Doyak 2016-02-03T13:31:27+00:00

_ Hatsune Miku wrote:
M4M
-TV MIX- 가 아니라 (TV Size)
태그 ( agriculture )다음에 ( opening ) 추가
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/167619 이맵 참고함

아쉽게도 저 맵이 틀린 겁니다... 제목은 -TV Mix-가 맞아요. 또는 (TV size)에서 s를 소문자로 써야 하거나요.

Alheak

910 posts

Joined November 2013

Alheak 2016-02-04T15:23:13+00:00

M4M

[General]

no custom combo colours? :^(
you can make your bg high res with no pixelation or artefacts with http://waifu2x.udp.jp/

[Doyak's Insane]

00:07:882 (5,1) - switch NC
00:11:519 (7,1) - ^
00:15:155 (8,1) - ^ (i think you get the picture, imo it would make more sense to NC on big white ticks and try to keep the combos consistent, you have some going only until 4 then others going up to 8)
other than that i can't really say much, it's simple, plays well

[Pho's Light Insane]

00:02:882 - this strong note should be mapped, it really feels weird otherwise
nice as well

[Sonnyc's Hard]

00:02:882 (1,2,3) - wouldn't do this in hard but eh, it's fine otherwise
00:22:428 (1,2,3) - please don't overlap
00:39:700 (4,5,1) - ^, just place (1) a bit higher, a higher spacing wouldn't hurt for emphasis
00:58:791 (1,2,3) - im a blanket freak but whatever, i just think they'd look better with them
01:09:700 (1,2,5,7) - one of the rare cases where angled straight sliders just don't look that good imo
01:21:973 - this really needs a circle
i really like this classic osu design

[Normal]

00:11:519 - to 00:21:519 - , i think you should remove some circles/rearrange some sliders like 00:14:019 (6) - , 00:17:655 (6) - etc, this part really feels too saturated
01:18:791 (5) - there's nothing on this slider's start, you can start it 1/2 earlier with 01:19:473 (6,7) - , then add a circle on 01:20:155 -
01:16:973 (1,2,3) - this rhythm doesn't follow the song well imo, here's a suggestion that should be easy to play for beginners while fitting the rhythm
SPOILER

good luck for rank, nice mapset overall

FCL

1,478 posts

Joined July 2014

FCL 2016-02-04T22:48:02+00:00

you summoned me for m4m

don't like standart combo colours, pls try this

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,153,0
Combo2 : 190,186,12
Combo3 : 218,34,238
Combo4 : 47,255,120

[Doyak's Insane]

00:02:655 (2,4,5,6) - what happened with this stack? D: Also plobably they will looks better here http://puu.sh/mVN6h/e61da91d8e.jpg
00:12:200 (2) - you could stack him with 00:11:064 (6) - for aesthetic. but then need to move 00:11:519 (7,1) - to 67 40
00:14:132 (3,4) - fix stack
00:19:700 (6) - sliderend has strong vocal beat, i recommend to replace slider by 2 circles
00:31:973 (3,4) - absolutely opposite situation, but the current version is acceptable
00:33:564 (1,2,3,4,5) - what about to follow by the same way, that previous patterns? looks beautiful http://puu.sh/mVOpL/29c25d9872.jpg
00:54:246 (5) - you can hear sound of bell here, so i think that follow them will have more sence. Replace slider to 2 circles
00:58:110 (6,7,8,1) - square flow? why not http://puu.sh/mVZ7H/37024e690f.jpg
01:02:200 (8,1,2) - stack under 1/2 slider could be confusing for playing, replace 1/2 to 3/4 or move circle to some position
01:08:791 (5) - same as 00:54:246 (5) -

[Pho]

01:05:382 (2,1,1) -probably blanket will be look better here for aesthetic http://puu.sh/mW0mq/6a528db760.jpg

[Sonnyc]

00:10:382 (5) - hmm, u could make this blanket better in my options
00:13:110 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/mW15r/962cd93712.jpg
00:22:428 (1,2,3) - meh, this overlaps really looks bad, maybe try to increase the spacing here to avoid these overlaps?
00:24:019 (4) - if you want save symmetry here, i recommend you make blanket with 00:24:700 (5) - for aesthetic
00:54:019 (3,5) - stacks like these are not confusing in low diffs like this?
01:18:564 (4) - this slider too far extends beyond the grid, please move the slider to right

[Normal]

00:11:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - too long following of without 1/1 break imo. What about these rhythm 00:15:155 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/mW2cC/7d1a42fcfa.jpg?
00:36:973 (1) - ctrl+j form for better flow?
00:47:882 (1,2,3) - fix straight flow
01:19:700 (7) - don't like elbow like this, maybe move red dot to a bit down? http://puu.sh/mW2Ob/fd88277d99.jpg
01:26:519 (4,5,6) - too sharp flow for Normal imo, ctrl+h form looks better

[Easy]

00:58:791 (1,3) - overlap doesn't feels good, maybe move 00:59:700 (2) - to 283 210 and 01:00:610 (3) - 312 361? http://puu.sh/mW38H/72458e69f5.jpg

Doyak

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Doyak 2016-02-05T06:36:17+00:00

Alheak wrote:
[Doyak's Insane]
00:07:882 (5,1) - switch NC
00:11:519 (7,1) - ^ Applying to this only. I agree with your point, but some of those NCs are based on the 'set of sounds' which I don't think is a good idea to disconnect them with a new combo.
00:15:155 (8,1) - ^ (i think you get the picture, imo it would make more sense to NC on big white ticks and try to keep the combos consistent, you have some going only until 4 then others going up to 8)
other than that i can't really say much, it's simple, plays well

FCL wrote:
[Doyak's Insane]
00:02:655 (2,4,5,6) - what happened with this stack? D: Also plobably they will looks better here http://puu.sh/mVN6h/e61da91d8e.jpg That itself would be great, but you need to give me an example of the connection to next... I would need to fix a lot of later parts if I fix that. Also the current one isn't bad, and that's how the automatic stack works. the last note of the stream is stacked.
00:12:200 (2) - you could stack him with 00:11:064 (6) - for aesthetic. but then need to move 00:11:519 (7,1) - to 67 40 I think that half-overlap looks good too
00:14:132 (3,4) - fix stack Fixed
00:19:700 (6) - sliderend has strong vocal beat, i recommend to replace slider by 2 circles I'm not gonna make that part too intense. It's kind of a quiet part.
00:31:973 (3,4) - absolutely opposite situation, but the current version is acceptable On the other hand, this part is strong so it makes sense to use more circles
00:33:564 (1,2,3,4,5) - what about to follow by the same way, that previous patterns? looks beautiful http://puu.sh/mVOpL/29c25d9872.jpg That's another good suggestion, but again, I can't think of a good connection to the next part. I would need to remap like 10 seconds to make it good.
00:54:246 (5) - you can hear sound of bell here, so i think that follow them will have more sence. Replace slider to 2 circles I don't think it's that strong... gonna keep this
00:58:110 (6,7,8,1) - square flow? why not http://puu.sh/mVZ7H/37024e690f.jpg Same here. That suggestion itself is cool, but I have to ruin all the later parts only for the sake of that one pattern.
01:02:200 (8,1,2) - stack under 1/2 slider could be confusing for playing, replace 1/2 to 3/4 or move circle to some position I don't think it's confusing that much. It's an Insane diff, not Easy/Normal/Hard. If someone suffers from reading that stack, he/she is not skilled enough to play this diff
01:08:791 (5) - same as 00:54:246 (5) - Same

Thanks for all your mod~

Doyak's Insane

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01:04:473 (1,2,3) - (116,324)로
01:14:019 (3,4,5) - (5) 꼬리가 스택이 제대로 안됐어요
01:14:700 (6) - 얘도 스택 제대로 안된거같은데..
01:22:200 (1) - ^

[Normal]
초반부에 반시계방향으로 도는 모습이 많이 보였는데 의도적으로 흐름을 시계방향으로 전환시키는 것도 좋다고 생각해요

00:36:973 (1) - 머리에 피니시
00:40:610 (1,2) - 얘네 둘은 꼬리에 클랩 넣으셨는데 00:36:973 (1,2) - 는 안넣었음..
00:50:155 (5) - 하드나 인세인을 참고해서 여기에 히트사운드 하나쯤은 넣는 것도 좋을 것 같아요
00:54:246 (5) - 얘 혼자 드럼휘슬인데.. 의도하신건가요??
01:16:973 (1,2,3,4) - 힛사가 없는건 별로 좋지 않은 선택인듯.. 뭐라도 넣는게 어떨까요?
01:20:610 (1) - 01:21:519 - 에 피니시 ㄴㄴ
01:29:360 - 노말만 스피너가 여기서 끝나요

[Easy]
00:31:519 (3) - 스택 깨끗하게

~~오예 날먹~~~

HappyRocket88

4,321 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2016-02-06T04:05:50+00:00

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Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2016-02-06T04:12:24+00:00

븡 모딩 오면 한꺼번에 고칠게요

Sc4v4ng3r

1,232 posts

Joined August 2014

Sc4v4ng3r 2016-02-06T06:20:35+00:00

Returning the favour of M4M as requested in-game.

[General]

You might be better off with some combo colours :c

[Easy]

00:46:064 (3) - A potential place to have a finish on the head of this slider, the instrument is quite prominent here, and you've placed a finish on the same instrument at 00:40:610 (1) - .
00:47:882 (1) - Here as well, like above, could have a finish on the head of this slider.
00:48:791 (2) - And here too, could have a finish on the head and the repeat of this slider for the prominent instrument.

[Normal]

00:11:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - That's one long chain of notes on a Normal. Even at low BPM, this long of a chain can easily strain player's stamina by a lot, and even on the kiai there was no rhythm that was this long. I would suggest you to remove 00:12:200 (2) - for consistency in rhythm between this and 00:07:882 (1,2) - , then turn 00:13:791 (4,5) - these 2 into a 1/2 slider, then remove 00:15:837 (2) - this again for consistency, then make 00:17:655 (6) - this into a 1/1 slider then 00:17:882 (7) - remove this note, then move 00:18:564 (8) - this back to 00:18:337 - , then remove 00:20:155 (3) - this note and move 00:19:473 (2) - this to start at 00:19:700 - for consistency of rhythm again.
00:22:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again, I would suggest you to make the rhythm less dense here, by removing 00:24:019 (4) - this note, so that it can be kept constant with the kiai's rhythm. If you are applying this make sure to apply for all the same rhythm in this section.
00:33:337 (1) - Even in Normal, the path for sliders should be clear - right now the sharp curve on the end of this slider is not quite 'visible' for beginners as they will try to follow exactly the slider path and they might get thrown off by this. Try to move the red node in the middle of the slider to avoid this. If you are applying this make sure to apply for 01:19:700 (7) - this slider as well.
00:51:519 (1,2,3,4) - Relating to the point made at 00:22:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - , I would rather use the denser rhythm here instead to reflect on the stanza, so I would suggest you to add a circle at 00:53:110 - . If you are doing this you will need to add circles on the subsequent rhythms, or to be precise, on 00:56:746 - , 01:00:382 - , 01:04:019 - and so on.
01:16:973 (1,2) - Both of these sliders can have finishes on their heads as the instrument is prominent here. Or at least try to have a whistle on (2)'s head as that's the most prominent instrument among these 2.
01:26:973 (6) - Have a clap and a finish on this circle for the hitsound consistency from Easy.

[Sonnyc's Hard]

00:05:155 (2) - Why not a finish on the head of this slider? You've placed a finish to follow the same instrument in 00:05:837 (3) - , so it might be better to follow the consistency.
01:13:337 (1,2,3) - Just like you did with all other overlapping sliders/circles, the pattern might be better for reading if they weren't perfectly stacked and instead stacked like 00:02:882 (1,2,3) - .
01:20:610 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Not really getting why you've decided to map this part out more easier than the beginning... This part has more instruments present than the beginning, and it's weird that you are skipping over a lot of them. If you have a reason for this I won't complain, but I do feel that the note density should be kept consistent for both parts.

That's all from me, GL!

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-02-06T17:45:17+00:00

Dailycare wrote:
[Doyak's Insane]
00:49:019 (6,7) - 여기 ctrl+G 해보시는건 어때요? 처음에 그렇게 했다가 마음에 안 들어서 이렇게 했다가 결국 또 되돌리게 되네요... ㅋㅋㅋ
01:04:473 (1,2,3) - (116,324)로 아 저게 왜 저렇게 엉뚱하게 멀리 가있지 수정했습니다.
01:14:019 (3,4,5) - (5) 꼬리가 스택이 제대로 안됐어요
01:14:700 (6) - 얘도 스택 제대로 안된거같은데..
01:22:200 (1) - ^ 아오 진짜 이 에디터 버그 좀 고쳐졌으면 좋겠음... 수많은 매퍼들의 시간을 얼마나 뺏어왔는지 합산해 생각해보면... ㅂㄷㅂㄷ

모딩 ㄳㄳ~

Doyak's Insane

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Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-02-06T17:46:44+00:00

아 ㅁㅊ 공홈 터져서 다시 포스트했더니 더블 포스팅이라니

Reillia

1,162 posts

Joined August 2014

Reillia 2016-02-07T01:08:10+00:00

Sc4는 참 대인배인거같..

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Affirmation 2016-02-07T07:11:02+00:00

[C u r i] wrote:
Sc4는 참 대인배인거같..

무슨뜻임

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-02-07T08:02:21+00:00

https://osu.ppy.sh/u/4838429 이 분이 모딩을 엄청나게 요청해대도 너무 친절하게 잘 해주셔서 대인배라는 뜻

Broccoly

1,359 posts

Joined May 2012

Broccoly 2016-02-11T08:24:22+00:00

m4m

[general]
soft-sliderslide 무음처리해주는게 좋을거같네요

[doyak]
00:23:337 (3,4,1) - 00:54:700 (6,7,1) - 01:09:246 (6,7,1) - 갠적으로 linear flow가 별로 맘에안드네요
00:32:655 (7,8,9) - 9번 슬라이더 방향이 외곽으로 향해서 칠때 느낌이 불안정한듯. 00:43:791 (5,6,1) - 여기처럼 좀 구부려주면 좋을듯함

[pho]
00:07:314 (7,8) - stack?
00:32:655 (4) - NC?
01:02:428 (1) - no need for nc imo
01:25:837 (3) - NC?

good diff

[sonnyc]
못찾겟다 꾀꼬리

이지노말은 못보기때문에..
랭크굿럭

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Gloria Guard 2016-02-13T04:58:07+00:00

안녕하세요 In- game pm request ~

Normal irc mod

SPOILER

12:32 *Gloria Guard is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/877926 ClariS - Wake Up -TV MIX-]
12:32 Neoskylove: 아죠 딱히..
12:32 Gloria Guard: 이거 노말만 아얄로 해드리고싶은데
12:32 Neoskylove: 네?
12:32 Neoskylove: irc?
12:32 Neoskylove: spd
12:32 Gloria Guard: 다른건 포스팅해드리는데
12:32 Neoskylove: 넹
12:32 Gloria Guard: 약간 노말 손볼게 좀많아보여서 ㅇㅅㅇ
12:33 Neoskylove: 아...
12:33 Neoskylove: 넹 지금 해주시면 됩니당
12:33 Gloria Guard: 00:03:110 (4,5)
12:33 Gloria Guard: 여기 박자 의도하신건지? 아니면 따로 박자를 만드신건지 궁금한데
12:34 Neoskylove: 00:02:200 (3) - 얘를 리버스 해버리면 노말에 안맞는 오버랩이 생길것 같아서요..
12:34 Gloria Guard: ㅇㅎ
12:34 Gloria Guard: 그러면 제가 하나 예시 드려볼게요
12:35 Gloria Guard: http://puu.sh/n5XX0/13bcfb3890.jpg
12:35 Gloria Guard: 이런 박자는 어떠실지?
12:35 Gloria Guard: 전자 피아노에 맞추면 더 자연스러울 것 같은데
12:36 Neoskylove: http://puu.sh/n5Y18/1eb6062148.jpg 이렇게 고쳤습니당.
12:36 Gloria Guard: good
12:37 Neoskylove: 올 감사합니당
12:37 Gloria Guard: 00:06:519 (3,4,5,6) 여기도 위에 언급하신것처럼 똑같은 박자부분인데
12:37 Gloria Guard: 노말에서는 일관성을 많이 권유해요
12:37 Gloria Guard: 노말뿐만아니라 다른난이도에서도 일관성을 많이 중요시하는데
12:37 Gloria Guard: 아까 수정하신 박자처럼 똑같이해주시면 좋을 것 같아연
12:38 Gloria Guard: 박자 인식을 좀더 자연스럽게 할 수 있도록

12:39 Neoskylove: 고쳤어요
12:40 Gloria Guard: 00:17:655 (4,5,6,7,8)
12:40 Gloria Guard: 약간.. 드럼 따라가신 느낌이 있는데
12:40 Gloria Guard: 따로 이유가 있나요 ??
12:41 Neoskylove: 단순히 힛사 쳔하게 넣으려고...? 그것 외엔 닥히 없어요...
12:41 Gloria Guard: http://puu.sh/n5Yek/02d52ace81.jpg
12:41 Gloria Guard: 그럼 요건 어떠세요?
12:43 Neoskylove: 고쳤습니당
12:43 Gloria Guard: 00:20:382 (3,4,5)
12:43 Gloria Guard: 4번 노트 지우신다음에 5번 슬라이더를 4번노트 있던자리에 놓으시고
12:44 Gloria Guard: 00:21:519 여기에 노트를 넣으시는건 어떠실지?
12:44 Neoskylove: 넹
12:44 Neoskylove: http://puu.sh/n5YrB/51bde5cb7a.jpg 노멀은 이거 안되죠?
12:45 Gloria Guard: 아뇨
12:45 Gloria Guard: 됩니다
12:45 Neoskylove: 오 되는군요
12:46 Gloria Guard: 심하게 오버랩된게 아니면 다되요
12:46 Gloria Guard: 유저가 확실하게 인식할 수 있으면 ok 그게 아니면 no
12:47 Neoskylove: 고쳤습니당
12:47 Neoskylove: 00:26:973 (3,4,5) - 얘도 고칠게요ㅋㅋㅋ
12:47 Gloria Guard: 으어.. 말하려던걸 선수쳐졌군요
12:47 Neoskylove: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
12:47 Gloria Guard: 저부분이랑 똑같은 부분은 다 일관성있게 맞춰주셔야되요 ㅋㅋ
12:49 Neoskylove: 00:28:337 (5) - 얘도요?
12:50 Gloria Guard: 거기 부분은
12:50 Gloria Guard: 00:13:791 (4,5,6,7,8)
12:50 Gloria Guard: 여기랑 같다고 보시면되요
12:52 Gloria Guard: 00:34:928 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) 여기는
12:52 Gloria Guard: http://puu.sh/n5YMQ/d5a3de14d0.jpg 요렇게 박자 만들어주시면 될 것 같아연
12:55 Gloria Guard: 다되시면 말씀해주세요~
12:57 Neoskylove: 고쳤습니당
12:57 Neoskylove: 00:42:200 (3,4) - 얘도 고쳤어요
12:57 Gloria Guard: 넵~
12:58 Gloria Guard: 00:45:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
12:58 Gloria Guard: 00:44:928 (2)
12:58 Gloria Guard: 여기노트 지워주시고
12:59 Neoskylove: 걔도 고쳤죠ㅋㅋㅋ
12:59 Gloria Guard: http://puu.sh/n5Z7y/6344cd9a93.jpg
13:00 Neoskylove: 넵
13:00 Gloria Guard: 00:50:382 (5,6)
13:00 Gloria Guard: 이건제안이지만 6번노트지우고 5번을 리버스 걸어주시는건 어떠실지?
13:00 Neoskylove: 00:50:610 (6,7) - 이거 두개를 강조하고 싶어욤....
13:01 Gloria Guard: 아~
13:01 Gloria Guard: 알겠습니다
13:01 Gloria Guard: 확실히 저기가 강조부분이긴하네요
13:01 Gloria Guard: 패스
13:02 Gloria Guard: 00:52:200 (2)
13:02 Gloria Guard: 노트지워주세요 ~
13:02 Gloria Guard: 그리고 뒤에 2번 부분 부터 박자를
13:02 Gloria Guard: http://puu.sh/n5Zjl/6e9f529130.jpg 요로콤 바꿔주세요 !
13:03 Neoskylove: 넵 했어요
13:03 Gloria Guard: 아아
13:03 Neoskylove: 00:56:064 (3,4) - 아마 얘네도?
13:03 Gloria Guard: 네 거기도 똑같이 해주셔야되여
13:04 Gloria Guard: 그리고 말하려다 말았는데
13:04 Gloria Guard: 00:53:791 요부분에 제가 노트로 해놧는데
13:04 Gloria Guard: 짧슬로 리버스 한번 걸어주시고
13:04 Gloria Guard: 뒤에 3,4노트는 지워주시는게 더자연스러울것같은데
13:05 Gloria Guard: http://puu.sh/n5Zq5/9e650eb7df.jpg
13:07 Neoskylove: 키아이는
13:07 Neoskylove: 리맵 해볼게욤
13:08 Gloria Guard: 으어.....
13:08 Gloria Guard: 그럼 마지막으로
13:08 Neoskylove: 넹?
13:08 Gloria Guard: 01:29:246 (1)
13:08 Gloria Guard: 여기 스핀 끝 확인해주세요 ~

[General]

No problem~

[Easy]

01:26:973 (1) 노트뒤에 스핀이 너무 가까이있지 않나 싶네요.. 유저들 실력이 상향평준화 됬다해도.. 왠만한 초보자들은
인식이 어려울것같아요 노트지우고 스핀을 당기는게 박자면으로도 더 정확할 것 같구요

[Sonnyc's Hard]

00:05:155 (2) 슬라이더 머리부분 피니쉬랑 클랩이 빠졌어요
00:30:155 (2) 요기 무시된 가사박자가 좀많은것 같은데 이렇게 바꾸시면 어떨까싶네요

SPOILER

00:52:428 (3) 슬라이더가 너무 올라간거 아닌가싶어요
01:06:519 (2) 같은 방향으로만 늘어놓는 것보단 여기는 슬라이더 방향을 바꿔주시면 동선이 괜찮아 질것 같아요
01:08:110 (6) ^ 마찬가지에요~
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Nozhomi

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Nozhomi 2016-02-14T00:04:15+00:00

Hey finally here with my M4M XD

- General :

Are you sure to keep the basic combo color ?

- Easy :

00:13:337 (3) - Your flow here is the opposite of what you would expect, because it counter the movement from 00:11:519 (1,2) - . So suggest you to do this way and even fit your next pattern. http://puu.sh/n6LMb/afb7080d87.jpg
00:16:973 (3) - Could you move it to 476:212 to make this more smooth ?
00:31:519 (3,4) - Honestly with that flow I want to go for 00:33:337 (1) - instead of (4). A solution could be to move 00:32:882 (4) - to 204:148.
00:48:791 (2,3) - Same as above. You clearly break the flow when this kind of diff must be smooth as possible.

- Normal :

00:28:337 - Did you forget hitsounds until 00:33:337 - ? Fix that pls.
00:36:973 - Again a whole section without hitsounds (end at 00:40:155 - ).
00:51:519 - You forget a Finish here, Easy have one.
01:05:610 (7,2) - The stack pls.
Did you really copy/paste 2nd kiai from 1st ? Tbh this is too obvious and make me think you was just lazy to map this part sadly. I would really suggest you do map differently 2nd kiai.

- Sonnyc's Hard :

00:02:882 (1,2,3) - This is a really hard pattern to read for a Hard diff. I think people could easiely missread this pattern.
00:09:473 (3,5) - I think this blanket could be improved here, you can clearly see start is way closer than rest of it.
00:14:246 (1,2,3) - Same than 1st one.
00:22:428 (1,2,3) - These overlap dude...really ? Looks really messy like that.
00:28:337 (5,6) - This is minor, but you go from 1.12x to 1.07x spacing and it's kinda noticable here.
There is some rhythm inconsistencies on your kiais, let me explain :
1) 01:08:564 (7,8) - I know you did this one on purpose of your pattern, but it's inconsistent with 00:54:019 (3) - who is basically the same rhythm for both. Also don't fit the way you follow vocals.
2) 01:09:473 - This break is...really weird, and this just beceause you map it on the first kiai because you followed vocals and decide to not here, resulting to this strange break where you want to click a circle but you can't.
3) 01:15:610 (5) - This one come from nowhere, when you did only 01:00:382 (4,5,6) - for the first kiai, here you decided to add a circle to follow drum, who could make sens if you did it for both times.
01:18:564 (4,2) - Why so long sliders who follow...nothing ?
01:21:973 - I think you should add a circle here, just to make this drum be clicked and will avoid a polarity issue.

- Pho's Light Insane :

00:34:019 (3,4) - Your jump makes no sense here, since you didn't do anyone for 00:32:655 (4,5,6,1,2) - this part who is the same rhythm structure and have same intensity.
00:39:246 (2,3,4) - Could you keep same spacing between them ? There is nothing to emphasise here with this 0.30x spacing difference.
00:53:791 (2,3) - So I understand you did stack on purpose to emphasise the vocal here, but then why you didn't do it for 01:01:064 (2,3) - who is basically the same.

- Doyak's Insane :

I don't really get it how you did your NC from 00:07:882 - to 00:49:473 - . I assume you did it based on vocal, but then why you NC 00:08:110 (1) - here for vocal and not 00:11:746 - here ? There is no logic behind this.
01:11:291 (1,3,4,5) - This stack pls.
Overall map play well, but there is two places where the flow could be improved : 01:00:837 (2,3,4,5) - & 01:14:246 (5,6) - . On both of them you break the flow and they don't reflects your diff at all since only them are done this way. A rounded flow like you often did would work much better here.

Guess that's all for me.
Mukyu~

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