Krisom wrote:

I can always map you an easy if you want =x
(I'll modpost asap)

[General]
Gray combocolor is """""kinda""""" hard to see during the sb'ed part of the map, maybe make it a little darker? Thats because my storyboard is not finished yet... Im planning to add other images, and hopefully it will make the white combo colour more visible, but lets just wait until its done.
The red combocolor is """""kinda"""" hard to see sometimes too, make it brighter a bit? Ughh... will wait for more opinions.. bright red looks kinda ugly... :x
I never liked the countdown, disable maybe? Okay

[Normal]
03:38:542 (1) - A weird place to put a spinner imo. Any particular reason that makes you think that this is a weird place for a spinner?

[Hard]
00:07:180 (1) - From this point up to 00:13:770 (4) - There's a different spacing. It's intentional, right? Yep, its intentional, same as in insane
03:38:542 (1) - Same as normal =x

[Insane]
00:07:180 - 00:13:770 - Same as Hard, I suppose it really is intentional.
00:50:133 (3) - Make it an horizontal flip of 00:49:679 (1) ? Nah i like it being asymmetric :x
01:27:179 (2) - I was expecting the triplet here, not in (3) Are you very sure? Cause im sure as well that the triple is where it should be
02:03:769 (3) - Make it an horizontal flip of 02:03:315 (1) ? Same as the other one :x
At the slow section of the map, the player loses way too much health when he/she reaches the stream. Hmm i know about this part, and i have tested it myself lots of times, and i think its fine.
03:38:542 (1) - Still a weird place to put a spinner =x

Awesome as always ehehe thanks! :D

Blazevoir wrote:

Even though there isn't an Easy yet as of this post, I'll still mod this.

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
02:41:042 (1) - Maybe split into two? Hmm.. nah its fine.
02:46:724 (2) - Eww... This is too long of a repeating slider in my opinion... Maybe split it into five (or at least two)? This one... ill do.

[Insane]
01:50:133 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Kinda a bit long for a combo... Add a new combo somewhere. Done, although even then, im not so sure about the combos of this map.
02:52:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - Way too long of a combo. I think they are okay, will wait for more opinion.

I didn't really have anything to complain about, so have a ★~

choche wrote:

Hi! I'm going to start with the mod in spanish (I saw that you're from venezuela) ok? ^^

Cosas que debes hacer
Sugerencias (si no estas de acuerdo conmigo, no tienes porque cambiarlo)


[General]

Me gusta la cancion y tu forma de mapear
La parte en la que el background cambia de color y se mueve, me gusta mucho :D
Tal vez deberías recortar el mp3? acabas de mapear en 3:41 y el audio dura 4:23 (para ahorrar espacio yo lo recortaria en el 4:00) Nah, creo que asi esta bien...

[Normal]

00:59:906 - Esta clap aquí no me gusta mucho... tal vez quedaria mejor un whistle(?) Okay

No hay mucho más que decir en esta dificultad, me parece muy buena ^^

[Hard]

00:50:140 (3) - Muevelo un par de grids hacia abajo para que quede alineado con el 1 y 2 (?)
01:31:042 (6) - Muevelo un grid a la derecha para alinearlo con 5 (?)[/color] Alinearlo de que forma?

No veo nada más muy buena ^^

[Insane]

00:50:133 (3) - Yo este lo colocaría así, no me gusta como lo has colocado... Nooo me gusta asi asimetrico.

No veo ninguna cosa mas que sea digna de mención...

Me encanta el map Buena suerte espero que te lo rankeen pronto, esta Muy Muy Muy bien Heheheh gracias!

*star*

DiamondCrash wrote:

General;

Resnap your notes bro. Ops...
03:11:951 - Kiai here? Okay

Hard;

00:35:361 (1) - What? Whats the problem with this?

Insane;

02:52:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - Lazy lazy lazy lazy Sighs fine! ill change it later...

Dusty wrote:

03:11:952 - It's kinda weird for the background to just change color without any kind of fade in/zoom out/whatever kind of transition you want

[Krisom's Easy]
disable countdown, it's disabled on all the other diffs. Done.
03:02:860 (5,6,7) - AAH why are these not stacked properly? Hmm... increased stack leniency...
03:26:497 (1,2,3) - hmm, I don't like the whistles on the red ticks much I think ill leave them as they are for now..

[Normal]
00:21:952 (1) - Unstack? D: Okay
02:42:860 (2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this section has too much whistle IMO Hmm... whistles reduced...

Hard is very cool :D

*star

dkun wrote:

Have a transition between the invert, it may hurt some user's eyes, unless they play novid.

dkun wrote:

'ello there.

General
I feel kiai time should start at 02:41:042 at the guitar solo. Maybe I'm wrong. Naw, i dont like kiai time at the guitar solo.

Krisom's Easy
I noticed there's no kiai time. Inherit from other diffs? Okay

Normal
Nothing much to report here.

Hard
00:15:134 (2,3) - I don't know if this is a beat transition, but spacing issues here? Same goes with the two beats w/ sliders until break. Ermm what? Im not really getting what you're trying to say. But, as far as i know, they are already correctly spaced?
02:56:724 (SB) - Is it just me, or does this only appear in here? This.... what? >_>
03:11:952 (SB) - Have a transition between the invert, it may hurt some user's eyes, unless they play novid. I guess the effect of hurting people's eyes is kinda intentional... but i may consider it for the next sb update. And what does video have to do with storyboard?

Insane
Same SB remarks here.
But a damn good difficulty for insane. Ehehe thanks!

Take a star.

1. Poner todas las dificultades con el mismo color de combo (el rojo es diferente en la easy y normal).
2. Poner los círculos de la easy más grandes.
3. Agregar spanish a los tags.

Lizbeth wrote:

Aquí apoyando mapas en español o/
Me gusto el mapa =3 Eheheh :D
No vi ningún problema.

Aunque tengo unas sugerencias:

1. Poner todas las dificultades con el mismo color de combo (el rojo es diferente en la easy y normal). Ops se me olvido
2. Poner los círculos de la easy más grandes. Okay
3. Agregar spanish a los tags. Okay

Dejo estrella!

Kurai_ wrote:

Hi~

[Hard]
02:45:247 (1) - Sound off, Remove and add a circle at 02:45:360 ? Okay
03:38:543 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier and extand by 1/4 Okay


[Insane]
03:38:542 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier and extand by 1/4 Okay
:D


OhmaGad, That's Awesome Ehehehe glad you liked it :D
DoubleStar~

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]

*Just noticed that the current mp3's bitrate is below 128. Could you try to find a better quality mp3? Lol? never knew ahhaha. Oh wait, the bit rate is exactly at 128 kbps not exactly sure where you are checking it, but if you insist then ill find another one.

*Expected more than just one kiai section in this song, or at least a single fountain at 03:41:043 since the map ends a bit before the song does. Added fountain at 03:41:043

*Not sure if this map should use the sb epilepsy warning or not. I never have problems with strobing, but the bright red/white continuous pulsing hurt my eyes a little bit. =x Okay, actually, i guess it was kind of my intention... ahaha, oh and added them

*Since you have pause menu buttons, you might as well add a pause menu background (even the map's bg would work I suppose). Okay

*blood_1.png: For one thing, this is larger than 1024x768, which is the max allowed _background_ size. For an sb image, this should be no larger than 800x600, although 640x480 is recommended. Hmm weird... thought i resized everything at 800x600... oh well at least it is currently a multiple of it, anyways resized it to 800x600, i prefer this size...

[Krisom's Easy]
03:11:952 - Is this inherited section for kiai? Otherwise it's redundant. Ahahah i fail

[Normal]
*There are unsnapped notes in this diff. And i fail again.

[Hard]
Looks nice.

[Insane]
01:13:088 - expected a note here instead of silence Added
01:14:679 - and possibly here Hmm... added
03:16:497 (5,1) - spacing? (expected these to overlap) *tests* This plays fine, but again, unexpected. If you could space these a bit closer, and then have the similar 1/4 spacing sliders afterwards get more spaced out, then maybe it would be a bit more apparent when playing. Hmm not sure what youre talking about... considering that the whole last chorus is mapped at 2x distance snap, except for the streams

Nice job~

ErufenRito wrote:

Burnt, and replaced for another with a bitrate of 192 kbps... for a total of 6 mb...
Sighs... now... new mp3, new timing >_>
Not sure if my new timing is correct <__<

rust45 wrote:

[SB]
Holy shit, that's not subtle at all. How about you try scaling it from 0.8 (Like you have it) to 1.1 (.2 less then before) I think it looks much better that way.

Good maps, my only gripe was the fact the SB scaled far too greatly.

Neethime wrote:

Hi~ Sorry for delay

Pink words:You have to fix these,they are mistakes.
Black words:Just suggestions.

[Storyboard]
BG change at 02:55:573 and 03:11:937 is a little stiff,try to use fade. >_>....

[Krisom's Easy]
00:16:255 (2) - clap at end Okay
03:04:664 (7) - new combo Okay
03:31:710 (4,5,6,1) - change these to (1,2,3,4) since 03:31:710 (4) - is a bit hard to read to noobs. You mean as in... combo? Im not really understanding you here... But... added new combo at 03:31:710 (4) and changed this aprt overall a bit...

[Normal]
00:18:192 - Add a note. You sure about the time? Cause it is in the middle of an slider...
00:46:028 (5) - move like this Hmm i wasnt exactly aiming for symmetry so i dont see why i should... But changed a bit...

[Hard]
nice~

[Insane]
01:22:846 (8) - new combo
01:23:755 (1) - remove new combo
01:24:664 (5) - new combo
01:30:118 (6) - ^
All of them okay
02:03:300 (1,2,3) - move like this? Wasnt aiming for symmetry... I wonder why you didnt pointed out this part too 00:49:664 (1,2,3) -
02:43:754 (5) - new comboOkay
02:51:254 (7) - ^Okay

Quite good map!+Star
Thanks for the mod!

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Krisom's Easy:
Normal mod:
00:40:119 (1,3) - I think you should turn down the stack leniency to make these go right on top of each other
00:45:573 (5,1) - it would look better if these notes were not partially overlapping each other
00:52:846 (3) - form a straight line with first part of slider 4?
01:00:573 (2) - would look better if not partially overlapped by 1
Since i have a feeling I am getting a little too picky, I am going to ignore any repeats or small overlaps for the rest of the mod of this diff. If you want to change them, I advise you comb through the rest of the map for them
01:39:664 (2) - would look better if not partially overlapped by 4
03:12:846 (3) - point this in another direction to avoid being overlapped by 2

Combo mod:
01:10:118 (4) - new combo to follow your pattern of a new combo every 8 whole notes
02:23:754 (4) - ^
03:01:937 (4) - ^

Timing section mod:
03:11:937 - there are two timing sections at this point, please remove the non kiai one
Yay, krisom is going to look for this... seeing that it is kinda... radical... :x


Normal:
Normal mod:
01:01:937 (1) - it would look better if this was directly under the repeat of 2 or not touching 2 at all
01:05:573 (1) - please move this note so it does not hit the hp bar Ops

Combo mod:
01:59:664 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 01:56:027 (1) Okay

Hard:
Normal mod:
01:35:573 (1) - the part between here and the break was relatively boring to me. There were a few small jumps, but almost everything else was a stream of circles and sliders that almost always were a half note apart. It was a little annoying after a while Im too scared inventing too much stuff that makes it too insane for a hard in the end... :x

Combo mod:
01:56:027 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 01:52:391 (1)
02:16:482 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 02:09:436 (4)
03:30:119 (5) - new combo to follow your pattern of adding a new combo every 4 whole notes (that is the pattern that sticks out the most to me here)
All okay.

Insane:
Combo mod:
01:33:755 (6) - new combo to follow your pattern of a new combo every 4 whole notes? Okay
01:52:618 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:56:255 (10) I think id rather do 01:56:255 (10) new combo, cause someone already stated that the other combo of 17 was too long >_> (if i remove the new combo, the combo will increase to 17)
02:09:436 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 02:16:482 (1) Okay
02:20:118 (6) - since from here to the new combo is about almost 4 whole notes and the music slightly changes here, I advise adding a new combo here Okay
03:26:482 (6) - ^

Nice mapset overall. I guess what needs to be improved most is hard to make it a little more fun. Also, easy needs to be cleaned up a bit. Besides that, I have very few complaints, star!
Ehehe thanks, and thanks for the mod again! Will try to make hard a bit more interesting a bit later

Justin Bieber wrote:

Overall:
End your break at 00:36:482 instead of where it is right now. I like it were it is >_>
I'm not sure what it is, but the pulsing in the SB feels off ;~;

03:11:710 - The transition right now is ;~;. Purpose >=o

Krisom:
End that second break at 02:41:936, going straight into the solo guitar, instead of the bridge guitar.

>w<.