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00:39 Kodora: Teichan! owo
00:39 [Teichan]: Kodora! owo
06:39 Kodora: zao Teichan owo
06:41 [Teichan]: wan kodora owo
06:43 [Teichan]: wa
06:43 [Teichan]: Would mind try my new map?
06:44 [Teichan]: trying*
06:44 Kodora: sure
06:44 *[Teichan] is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/559123 Akagami feat.GUMI - Kuroneko [Negai]]
06:45 [Teichan]: low sv high ds
06:45 Kodora: downloading
06:46 *Kodora is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/38041 RYTHEM - Houki Gumo [Hard]] +Hidden +DoubleTime
06:46 Kodora: wanna map this song too
06:46 Kodora: 35% left
06:51 Kodora: is it just me or timing is off..
06:56 Kodora: why you always have such a wonderful song choice lol
06:56 [Teichan]: yeah, I only map song that I like
06:58 Kodora: overral good
06:58 Kodora: I can give you quick irc mod if you don't mind
06:59 [Teichan]: this set is incomplete
06:59 [Teichan]: need a NM and a HD
06:59 [Teichan]: sure
07:00 Kodora: firstly
07:00 Kodora: I already find unrankable issue
07:00 [Teichan]: ehhh
07:00 [Teichan]: wut
07:00 Kodora: [http://puu.sh/dBwva/0a75ed641f.png this is your soft-hitclap]
07:01 [Teichan]: It's over 100ms, isn't it
07:01 [Teichan]: ?
07:01 Kodora: your delay is about ~10sec
07:01 Kodora: I can fix it, don't worry
07:03 [Teichan]: wa xiexie
07:04 Kodora: xiexie? o.o
07:04 Kodora: http://puu.sh/dBwPB/6f98825e77.wav
07:04 Kodora: here
07:05 Kodora: I removed delay and made it shorten (it was longer than 500ms which is weird for such hitsounds)
07:05 [Teichan]: xiexie means thanks in Chinese
07:05 Kodora: ah I see
07:05 Kodora: map is very nice, great job!
07:05 Kodora: plays quite smoothly
07:05 Kodora: I think you may lower AR a bit
07:05 [Teichan]: thanks!
07:05 Kodora: At feels kinda fast
07:05 Kodora: *It
07:05 Kodora: maybe consider 7.5?
07:06 [Teichan]: Because of low sv, right?
07:06 [Teichan]: I'll try
07:06 Kodora: because of low note density
07:07 Kodora: and because song is very calm
07:07 Kodora: 00:37:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - please don't make symmetrial patterns along with flowy ones
07:07 Kodora: it's just an estetical thing, but they basically looks out of place
07:07 Kodora: just keep them as you did at 00:30:348 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
07:08 [Teichan]: It won't be dull?
07:09 Kodora: just don't make them symmetrial along with x y azis
07:09 Kodora: and it's fine
07:09 [Teichan]: ah I see
07:11 Kodora: one sec please
07:12 Kodora: 01:02:705 (6,7) - how about make them follow vocals? http://puu.sh/dBxtz/4a86f48082.jpg
07:13 [Teichan]: I don't follow vocal in this map
07:14 [Teichan]: I think it's fine wwwwww
07:14 Kodora: 01:02:705 (6,7) - then continue to use 1/4 sliders here
07:14 Kodora: follow piaono
07:15 Kodora: cuz currently it feels more like misplaced 3/4 follow vocals
07:15 [Teichan]: 01:02:705 (6) - this slider follows guitar
07:17 Kodora: 01:09:348 (4,5) - I'd reduse DS here a little bit
07:18 Kodora: It comes kind of too sudden and doesn't works well with music orz
07:18 [Teichan]: OK
07:18 [Teichan]: reduced
07:18 Kodora: 01:15:777 (3) - make it just linear for better flow?
07:19 [Teichan]: fixed
07:20 Kodora: 01:19:634 (3,4) - this jump is kind of too large too and it's jump to offbeat slider.. maybe stack (3) with head of (1)? Example: osu.ppy.sh/ss/2363220
07:21 Kodora: 02:23:491 (1) - finish
07:22 [Teichan]: k
07:22 [Teichan]: fixed
07:23 Kodora: this part also feels a bit weird due to one thing
07:23 Kodora: you said that you haven't follow vocals at this map
07:24 Kodora: but all your mapped parts starts exactly when vocals starts
07:24 [Teichan]: I don't know...
07:25 Kodora: well i just want you to remove spinner and map 02:23:491 - 02:29:491 - this part
07:25 [Teichan]: I just follow drums in kiai time
07:25 Kodora: 02:37:205 (1) - finish here
07:25 [Teichan]: finish?
07:26 [Teichan]: I think this finish doesn't fit here...
07:26 Kodora: make it soft-default and reduse volume to like 40%
07:26 Kodora: should be fine
07:27 [Teichan]: ah I know
07:29 Kodora: 02:42:134 (9) - definitely soft-finish on head
07:29 Kodora: 02:44:062 (1) - ^
07:29 Kodora: 02:47:491 (1) - ^
07:29 Kodora: 02:50:919 (1) - ^
07:29 Kodora: 02:52:419 (6) - ^
07:29 Kodora: 02:54:348 (1) - ^
07:30 [Teichan]: yeah
07:30 Kodora: 02:57:777 (1) - ^
07:30 [Teichan]: I'll add
07:30 Kodora: and so on
07:30 [Teichan]: I know where I should add
07:31 Kodora: 03:08:062 - it's kinda weird to start spinner on strong beats
07:31 Kodora: as spinner is passive hitobject and not requires hitting
07:31 Kodora: please add note here and start spinner 1/4 or 1/8 later
07:32 [Teichan]: k
07:32 Kodora: also i'd extend spinner to 03:14:919 -
07:32 Kodora: as it works better with music here
07:33 Kodora: 03:39:348 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - these new combos looks confusing as it becomes hard to read spacing between 03:38:919 (1,1) - and 03:39:348 (1,1) -
07:33 Kodora: just remove NCs from 03:39:562 (1,1,1,1,1) -
07:34 [Teichan]: k\
07:35 Kodora: 04:12:348 (3,4,5) - very confusing, as this is the first part where 1/8 comes out and it's almost end of map
07:36 Kodora: I'd replace it with 6/8 reverse here at least to let players learn rhythm at first
07:36 Kodora: but since you probably won't do this please at least keep spacing between 04:12:348 (3,4,5) - consistent
07:37 Kodora: 04:21:562 (9) - new combo due to jump?
07:38 [Teichan]: k
07:39 Kodora: 04:36:348 (1,2,3,4) - this would be pretty tricky to hit due to timing change
07:40 Kodora: make it [http://puu.sh/dBzA9/9d7535b667.jpg like this]
07:40 Kodora: so slider would solve this problem
07:40 Kodora: 04:37:459 - add note here and start spinner 1/4 later
07:40 [Teichan]: yes
07:41 Kodora: that's all what I can find now
07:41 Kodora: good map <3
07:41 Kodora: you're learned mapping so quicky lol
07:43 [Teichan]: Thanks!
00:39 [Teichan]: Kodora! owo
06:39 Kodora: zao Teichan owo
06:41 [Teichan]: wan kodora owo
06:43 [Teichan]: wa
06:43 [Teichan]: Would mind try my new map?
06:44 [Teichan]: trying*
06:44 Kodora: sure
06:44 *[Teichan] is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/559123 Akagami feat.GUMI - Kuroneko [Negai]]
06:45 [Teichan]: low sv high ds
06:45 Kodora: downloading
06:46 *Kodora is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/38041 RYTHEM - Houki Gumo [Hard]] +Hidden +DoubleTime
06:46 Kodora: wanna map this song too
06:46 Kodora: 35% left
06:51 Kodora: is it just me or timing is off..
06:56 Kodora: why you always have such a wonderful song choice lol
06:56 [Teichan]: yeah, I only map song that I like
06:58 Kodora: overral good
06:58 Kodora: I can give you quick irc mod if you don't mind
06:59 [Teichan]: this set is incomplete
06:59 [Teichan]: need a NM and a HD
06:59 [Teichan]: sure
07:00 Kodora: firstly
07:00 Kodora: I already find unrankable issue
07:00 [Teichan]: ehhh
07:00 [Teichan]: wut
07:00 Kodora: [http://puu.sh/dBwva/0a75ed641f.png this is your soft-hitclap]
07:01 [Teichan]: It's over 100ms, isn't it
07:01 [Teichan]: ?
07:01 Kodora: your delay is about ~10sec
07:01 Kodora: I can fix it, don't worry
07:03 [Teichan]: wa xiexie
07:04 Kodora: xiexie? o.o
07:04 Kodora: http://puu.sh/dBwPB/6f98825e77.wav
07:04 Kodora: here
07:05 Kodora: I removed delay and made it shorten (it was longer than 500ms which is weird for such hitsounds)
07:05 [Teichan]: xiexie means thanks in Chinese
07:05 Kodora: ah I see
07:05 Kodora: map is very nice, great job!
07:05 Kodora: plays quite smoothly
07:05 Kodora: I think you may lower AR a bit
07:05 [Teichan]: thanks!
07:05 Kodora: At feels kinda fast
07:05 Kodora: *It
07:05 Kodora: maybe consider 7.5?
07:06 [Teichan]: Because of low sv, right?
07:06 [Teichan]: I'll try
07:06 Kodora: because of low note density
07:07 Kodora: and because song is very calm
07:07 Kodora: 00:37:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - please don't make symmetrial patterns along with flowy ones
07:07 Kodora: it's just an estetical thing, but they basically looks out of place
07:07 Kodora: just keep them as you did at 00:30:348 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
07:08 [Teichan]: It won't be dull?
07:09 Kodora: just don't make them symmetrial along with x y azis
07:09 Kodora: and it's fine
07:09 [Teichan]: ah I see
07:11 Kodora: one sec please
07:12 Kodora: 01:02:705 (6,7) - how about make them follow vocals? http://puu.sh/dBxtz/4a86f48082.jpg
07:13 [Teichan]: I don't follow vocal in this map
07:14 [Teichan]: I think it's fine wwwwww
07:14 Kodora: 01:02:705 (6,7) - then continue to use 1/4 sliders here
07:14 Kodora: follow piaono
07:15 Kodora: cuz currently it feels more like misplaced 3/4 follow vocals
07:15 [Teichan]: 01:02:705 (6) - this slider follows guitar
07:17 Kodora: 01:09:348 (4,5) - I'd reduse DS here a little bit
07:18 Kodora: It comes kind of too sudden and doesn't works well with music orz
07:18 [Teichan]: OK
07:18 [Teichan]: reduced
07:18 Kodora: 01:15:777 (3) - make it just linear for better flow?
07:19 [Teichan]: fixed
07:20 Kodora: 01:19:634 (3,4) - this jump is kind of too large too and it's jump to offbeat slider.. maybe stack (3) with head of (1)? Example: osu.ppy.sh/ss/2363220
07:21 Kodora: 02:23:491 (1) - finish
07:22 [Teichan]: k
07:22 [Teichan]: fixed
07:23 Kodora: this part also feels a bit weird due to one thing
07:23 Kodora: you said that you haven't follow vocals at this map
07:24 Kodora: but all your mapped parts starts exactly when vocals starts
07:24 [Teichan]: I don't know...
07:25 Kodora: well i just want you to remove spinner and map 02:23:491 - 02:29:491 - this part
07:25 [Teichan]: I just follow drums in kiai time
07:25 Kodora: 02:37:205 (1) - finish here
07:25 [Teichan]: finish?
07:26 [Teichan]: I think this finish doesn't fit here...
07:26 Kodora: make it soft-default and reduse volume to like 40%
07:26 Kodora: should be fine
07:27 [Teichan]: ah I know
07:29 Kodora: 02:42:134 (9) - definitely soft-finish on head
07:29 Kodora: 02:44:062 (1) - ^
07:29 Kodora: 02:47:491 (1) - ^
07:29 Kodora: 02:50:919 (1) - ^
07:29 Kodora: 02:52:419 (6) - ^
07:29 Kodora: 02:54:348 (1) - ^
07:30 [Teichan]: yeah
07:30 Kodora: 02:57:777 (1) - ^
07:30 [Teichan]: I'll add
07:30 Kodora: and so on
07:30 [Teichan]: I know where I should add
07:31 Kodora: 03:08:062 - it's kinda weird to start spinner on strong beats
07:31 Kodora: as spinner is passive hitobject and not requires hitting
07:31 Kodora: please add note here and start spinner 1/4 or 1/8 later
07:32 [Teichan]: k
07:32 Kodora: also i'd extend spinner to 03:14:919 -
07:32 Kodora: as it works better with music here
07:33 Kodora: 03:39:348 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - these new combos looks confusing as it becomes hard to read spacing between 03:38:919 (1,1) - and 03:39:348 (1,1) -
07:33 Kodora: just remove NCs from 03:39:562 (1,1,1,1,1) -
07:34 [Teichan]: k\
07:35 Kodora: 04:12:348 (3,4,5) - very confusing, as this is the first part where 1/8 comes out and it's almost end of map
07:36 Kodora: I'd replace it with 6/8 reverse here at least to let players learn rhythm at first
07:36 Kodora: but since you probably won't do this please at least keep spacing between 04:12:348 (3,4,5) - consistent
07:37 Kodora: 04:21:562 (9) - new combo due to jump?
07:38 [Teichan]: k
07:39 Kodora: 04:36:348 (1,2,3,4) - this would be pretty tricky to hit due to timing change
07:40 Kodora: make it [http://puu.sh/dBzA9/9d7535b667.jpg like this]
07:40 Kodora: so slider would solve this problem
07:40 Kodora: 04:37:459 - add note here and start spinner 1/4 later
07:40 [Teichan]: yes
07:41 Kodora: that's all what I can find now
07:41 Kodora: good map <3
07:41 Kodora: you're learned mapping so quicky lol
07:43 [Teichan]: Thanks!