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tasuke912 wrote:

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　完了しました

2nd mod. No kds.
前回での変更点に加えて細かいところにも触れていきます。

00:45:281 (203) - この音は明らかに低いのでdがベターではないでしょうか。dkkdd, dkkkd, dkk-d, etc.
02:49:869 (593) - k. 01:26:575 (106) - との一貫性
03:26:575 (817,818) - 817のvoclalが高いので反転しても良いと思います
03:27:986 (825) - k? ここも高いボーカルなので。

04:39:634 (181,182,183,184,185) - ここも同様01:26:575 (106) -との一貫性を考慮した配置にした方が良いと思います。例：d-k-kkd
04:42:810 (204) - d. 02:52:692 (613) - との一貫性
04:44:398 (214) - ここは01:30:986 (133) - との一貫性を考えるとdがベターです。流れを自然にする為に前のノートをkに変更するとより良いと思います。

01:33:810 - kiaiここで終わらせても良いかなと思ったり。

終わったらchatで呼んでください o/

Hi from request~

Oni

Tags にこの曲の英語曲名を追加できます。英語曲名は「Red Thread」です。

00:09:457 - k? ここと 00:10:163 (20) にあるインストの音は違わないと思います。03:49:692 もできます。

00:21:986 - この空いてる部分は01:45:281 (210,211,212,213,214,215,216) にあるリズムが入れれます。この間がある理由は「曲が始まるよ」って言う合図にしか見えません（この間は無必要と思います）。

00:30:369 (123) - このサークルを00:29:663 に移動したら、00:26:751 (106,107,108) の 1/4 triplet との一貫性のあるリズムになるでしょう。

00:48:810 (216) - これを d に変えたらどうかな？ 00:47:928 (213) や 00:49:339 (218) の綺麗なk インストの音だけでいいと思います。ここら辺はサークルの密度が低いから、ここのk をインストと合わせずに、ボーカルと合わせたら通常より目立つので、インストと合わせてるk が少し台無しになっちゃうと思います。

00:49:869 (219) - ^

02:13:164 (362) - ^

00:50:575 - ここに d を入れれることが可能です。

00:51:104 - ^

気合タイムはとてもステキー

01:33:810 - ここで気合タイムが終わった方が、インストの音量がはるかに低くなって、ビジュアル的に効果があると思います。これだけで後は気合タイムがなくてもいいし（オプション1）、01:35:045 から再び気合タイムを始めれることができます。再び気合タイムを始めるとしたら、また気合タイムを終わらせる場所は三っつぐらいあります。01:35:928 でボーカルの「さよなら」の「ら」が終わる時点で気合タイムを終わらせるし（オプション2）、01:43:692 で気合タイムを終わらせて後のインストの強いところを強調できるし（オプション3）、01:44:928 で気合タイムを終わらせて、次の静かな部分に transition していくこともできます（オプション4）。分かりにくいかもしれないから、図もつけます。
ちなみに、自分的には、オプション３が一番いいと思います。

01:45:633 (213,214,215) - Ctrl + G はどうかな？この方がインストの音調と合うと思います。ぞれか、01:45:633 (213) を d に変えてください。

02:02:927 (312) - d で次のサークルの音を協調できます。

02:05:751 (329) - ^

02:13:164 (362) - ここに d を入れれます。

02:24:810 - ^

02:31:692 (469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476,477,478) - これより、1/4 の stream が合うと思います。

02:43:870 (551,552,553) - これを01:20:575 (66,67,68) とマッチしてください。ここではリズムの一貫性がある方がよいと思います。04:33:987 (139,140,141) もそうです。

03:26:310 (815) - これを上記と同じ理由で03:20:663 (778) と同じにしてください。

03:31:163 - ここにd を入れれます。

03:32:575 - ^

03:33:986 - ^

04:13:516 - この inherited point を 0.9x slider velocity に変えたら、もう少し曲の音量と合ってイイと思います。

04:27:634 (96,97,98,99,100,101,102) - kkdkddk がいいかも。

04:47:222 - 気合タイム終了点をここにして、04:48:457 で始めてください。前に言ったように、効果的にイイと思います。

05:05:575 - 自分的には、ここで気合タイムを終わらせた方がいいと思います。それと、とても変わった提案だが、05:08:222 (1) のスピナーと 05:28:339 (1) まで気合タイムあたらいいかもしれません。試してください。

M4M mod を待ってますね。この曲チョー大好き<3 Ranked を目指すのを頑張って下さい！

tasuke912 wrote:

2nd mod. No kds.
前回での変更点に加えて細かいところにも触れていきます。

00:45:281 (203) - この音は明らかに低いのでdがベターではないでしょうか。dkkdd, dkkkd, dkk-d, etc.
02:49:869 (593) - k. 01:26:575 (106) - との一貫性
03:26:575 (817,818) - 817のvoclalが高いので反転しても良いと思います
03:27:986 (825) - k? ここも高いボーカルなので。

04:39:634 (181,182,183,184,185) - ここも同様01:26:575 (106) -との一貫性を考慮した配置にした方が良いと思います。例：d-k-kkd
04:42:810 (204) - d. 02:52:692 (613) - との一貫性
04:44:398 (214) - ここは01:30:986 (133) - との一貫性を考えるとdがベターです。流れを自然にする為に前のノートをkに変更するとより良いと思います。

01:33:810 - kiaiここで終わらせても良いかなと思ったり。

終わったらchatで呼んでください o/

すべて変更しました

newyams99 wrote:

Hi from request~

Oni

Tags にこの曲の英語曲名を追加できます。英語曲名は「Red Thread」です。

00:09:457 - k? ここと 00:10:163 (20) にあるインストの音は違わないと思います。03:49:692 もできます。ここで音楽が切れてるので、初めから入れるのはよくないと感じました

00:21:986 - この空いてる部分は01:45:281 (210,211,212,213,214,215,216) にあるリズムが入れれます。この間がある理由は「曲が始まるよ」って言う合図にしか見えません（この間は無必要と思います）。5分超える曲は密度の変化が重要になってきます。だから最初は簡単にしてあるのです

00:30:369 (123) - このサークルを00:29:663 に移動したら、00:26:751 (106,107,108) の 1/4 triplet との一貫性のあるリズムになるでしょう。1/4の入ってる感カウを見てほしいです。こっちのほうが妥当だと感じました

00:48:810 (216) - これを d に変えたらどうかな？ 00:47:928 (213) や 00:49:339 (218) の綺麗なk インストの音だけでいいと思います。ここら辺はサークルの密度が低いから、ここのk をインストと合わせずに、ボーカルと合わせたら通常より目立つので、インストと合わせてるk が少し台無しになっちゃうと思います。キープで！

00:49:869 (219) - ^

02:13:164 (362) - ^

00:50:575 - ここに d を入れれることが可能です。

00:51:104 - ^密度の関係で見送ります。すいません

気合タイムはとてもステキー

01:33:810 - ここで気合タイムが終わった方が、インストの音量がはるかに低くなって、ビジュアル的に効果があると思います。これだけで後は気合タイムがなくてもいいし（オプション1）、01:35:045 から再び気合タイムを始めれることができます。再び気合タイムを始めるとしたら、また気合タイムを終わらせる場所は三っつぐらいあります。01:35:928 でボーカルの「さよなら」の「ら」が終わる時点で気合タイムを終わらせるし（オプション2）、01:43:692 で気合タイムを終わらせて後のインストの強いところを強調できるし（オプション3）、01:44:928 で気合タイムを終わらせて、次の静かな部分に transition していくこともできます（オプション4）。分かりにくいかもしれないから、図もつけます。

図

ちなみに、自分的には、オプション３が一番いいと思います。とてもいい提案ありがとうございます。自分なりに変更してみました

01:45:633 (213,214,215) - Ctrl + G はどうかな？この方がインストの音調と合うと思います。ぞれか、01:45:633 (213) を d に変えてください。ここはお気に入りの部分なので無しっす

02:02:927 (312) - d で次のサークルの音を協調できます。[color=#FF0000迷いましたがキープで[/color]

02:05:751 (329) - ^

02:13:164 (362) - ここに d を入れれます。はじめ入れてました。けどノーツライン長くなるので無しで

02:24:810 - ^

02:31:692 (469,470,471,472,473,474,475,476,477,478) - これより、1/4 の stream が合うと思います。してみました

02:43:870 (551,552,553) - これを01:20:575 (66,67,68) とマッチしてください。ここではリズムの一貫性がある方がよいと思います。04:33:987 (139,140,141) もそうです。

03:26:310 (815) - これを上記と同じ理由で03:20:663 (778) と同じにしてください。

03:31:163 - ここにd を入れれます。

03:32:575 - ^

03:33:986 - ^

04:13:516 - この inherited point を 0.9x slider velocity に変えたら、もう少し曲の音量と合ってイイと思います。

04:27:634 (96,97,98,99,100,101,102) - kkdkddk がいいかも。

04:47:222 - 気合タイム終了点をここにして、04:48:457 で始めてください。前に言ったように、効果的にイイと思います。

05:05:575 - 自分的には、ここで気合タイムを終わらせた方がいいと思います。それと、とても変わった提案だが、05:08:222 (1) のスピナーと 05:28:339 (1) まで気合タイムあたらいいかもしれません。試してください。

M4M mod を待ってますね。この曲チョー大好き<3 Ranked を目指すのを頑張って下さい！

その他変更してみました。ありがとう！！

Bubbled! #1

tasuke912 wrote:

Bubbled! #1

Thank you　so much=

Nice~~, this map is already bubbled~~, why there isn't on pending section?

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Nice~~, this map is already bubbled~~, why there isn't on pending section?

Because I was afraid that this map enters the graveyard

I just missed

why would you remove the automated stuff from the first post <.<

Nwolf wrote:

why would you remove the automated stuff from the first post <.<

OH…lol
Just missing
I don't know how to fix that rewrite automatis first post

omg i love this song <3 _ <3 I love Rib's cover compared to this version hehe

Lol, the "automatic stuff" should be fixed when you update this map again. But first, let me mod this map, so hey again EdamaMe411!

[General]

1. I see that the mp3 file is at 128kbps, and it's not breaking any rules, but it can be improved a little more, which is why I've encoded it a 192kbps file from a better source. Also, yours has some distortion sounds due to loudness, so I decided to normalize it. In result, here's a new and better file: http://puu.sh/msoXN/9c0f5d8652.mp3
   You'll also need to strike -61 in the offset. And do this first, as I will mod this map with this offset.
2. The second kiai time must end on 02:55:455 because of the big crash. It's weird to see it ends on the downbeat although the bigger beat is on the red tick.

[Oni]

1. For the part 03:58:455 to 04:00:572 -, I have some concerns. To start of:
   
   1. 03:59:249 (967) - This stands on a ghost note, meaning that there is no beat that is heard, so I wouldn't add a note here. However, you can move this to 03:59:425 instead because this tick has a sound from the drum.
   2. 03:59:778 (971) - Probably subjective, but having this note on this tick sounds weird to me, in addition there is no beat there. How about you remove it?
   3. 03:59:690 (970) - If you removed the note above, maybe you can this note into d, so that the flow could be emphasized on 03:59:928 - (or maybe not lel), but the notes on red ticks are mostly dons, so perhaps that would keep consistency.

1. 01:03:396 (286) - 01:04:808 (294) - These doesn't fit very well with the music in my opinion. Maybe you should remove them to make drums sound better for 01:03:220 (285,287) and 01:04:631 (293,295) . I think they are more emphasized when leaving a gap in-between.
2. 01:13:455 (25,26) - Hmm... both should be d? I honestly don't see the use of the kats, as the instrument doesn't require a high sound.
3. 01:16:896 (47) - The reason for this note is like 03:59:249 (967) -, because there is no sound that makes the note to get here, yet there is on 01:17:425 -, so I think you better move it there instead.
4. 01:28:190 (116) - I prefer don instead of kat. It just sounds better to me as it is not the same sound as 01:28:455 (119) .
5. 01:43:631 (204) - In my opinion, turning it into a kat does a nice effect the guitar and the drum of 01:43:631 (204,205,206,207,208,209) . And I think it makes a nice feeling to play as you alternate the dons and kats after and after.
6. 01:52:102 (246) - I've seen you not adding a note after somewhat a crash, but something big like 01:49:102 (231) -, and I like how having a gap makes that beat more emphasized, so having 01:52:102 (246) doesn't really sound right. I suggest you remove it.
7. 01:56:514 (270,271,272) - ddk fits better, if I'm correct, because 01:56:690 (272) has a higher note than 01:56:514 (270,271) which are pretty low to me. Logically, the kat should be on a high note and dons on the less loud beats.
8. 02:08:337 (344,345) - Ctrl + G? 02:08:249 (343,344) have a different kind of drum sound, so maybe only kats fit better. And 02:08:425 (345) will be don to differentiate with the kind of drum before.
9. 02:15:749 (373) - You didn't add a note on 00:52:455 so maybe you should remove that note for consistency.
10. 02:27:309 (442) - This note doesn't fit here, but perhaps on 02:26:955 . That way, it could emphasize the beat on 02:27:397 (443) - (?), but it also sounds weird.
11. 02:29:072 - It is a pretty obvious sound here, so how about you add something here?
12. 02:34:720 (490) - Hm... I don't really see the use of having this note here, and it's pretty much the same reason as the one somewhere in the beginning of the mod, when it doesn't fit well because it doesn't hit anything.
13. 02:51:396 (601,602) - Ctrl + G instead? To support the voice with kat since it got higher.
14. 04:24:837 (76) - Lol, I think you get it after repeating the same thing. This instead should be on 04:24:661 .

Wew, this is my first long Taiko mod, haha. So, just some concerns I notice. I might say something weird lel, but I think I said everything I want to say. Call me whenever applied my mod!

sheela901 wrote:

Lol, the "automatic stuff" should be fixed when you update this map again. But first, let me mod this map, so hey again EdamaMe411!

[General]

1. I see that the mp3 file is at 128kbps, and it's not breaking any rules, but it can be improved a little more, which is why I've encoded it a 192kbps file from a better source. Also, yours has some distortion sounds due to loudness, so I decided to normalize it. In result, here's a new and better file: http://puu.sh/msoXN/9c0f5d8652.mp3
   You'll also need to strike -61 in the offset. And do this first, as I will mod this map with this offset.
2. The second kiai time must end on 02:55:455 because of the big crash. It's weird to see it ends on the downbeat although the bigger beat is on the red tick.

[Oni]

1. For the part 03:58:455 to 04:00:572 -, I have some concerns. To start of:
   
   1. 03:59:249 (967) - This stands on a ghost note, meaning that there is no beat that is heard, so I wouldn't add a note here. However, you can move this to 03:59:425 instead because this tick has a sound from the drum.
   2. 03:59:778 (971) - Probably subjective, but having this note on this tick sounds weird to me, in addition there is no beat there. How about you remove it?
   3. 03:59:690 (970) - If you removed the note above, maybe you can this note into d, so that the flow could be emphasized on 03:59:928 - (or maybe not lel), but the notes on red ticks are mostly dons, so perhaps that would keep consistency.

1. 01:03:396 (286) - 01:04:808 (294) - These doesn't fit very well with the music in my opinion. Maybe you should remove them to make drums sound better for 01:03:220 (285,287) and 01:04:631 (293,295) . I think they are more emphasized when leaving a gap in-between.
2. 01:13:455 (25,26) - Hmm... both should be d? I honestly don't see the use of the kats, as the instrument doesn't require a high sound.
3. 01:16:896 (47) - The reason for this note is like 03:59:249 (967) -, because there is no sound that makes the note to get here, yet there is on 01:17:425 -, so I think you better move it there instead.
4. 01:28:190 (116) - I prefer don instead of kat. It just sounds better to me as it is not the same sound as 01:28:455 (119) .
5. 01:43:631 (204) - In my opinion, turning it into a kat does a nice effect the guitar and the drum of 01:43:631 (204,205,206,207,208,209) . And I think it makes a nice feeling to play as you alternate the dons and kats after and after.
6. 01:52:102 (246) - I've seen you not adding a note after somewhat a crash, but something big like 01:49:102 (231) -, and I like how having a gap makes that beat more emphasized, so having 01:52:102 (246) doesn't really sound right. I suggest you remove it.
7. 01:56:514 (270,271,272) - ddk fits better, if I'm correct, because 01:56:690 (272) has a higher note than 01:56:514 (270,271) which are pretty low to me. Logically, the kat should be on a high note and dons on the less loud beats.
8. 02:08:337 (344,345) - Ctrl + G? 02:08:249 (343,344) have a different kind of drum sound, so maybe only kats fit better. And 02:08:425 (345) will be don to differentiate with the kind of drum before.
9. 02:15:749 (373) - You didn't add a note on 00:52:455 so maybe you should remove that note for consistency.
10. 02:27:309 (442) - This note doesn't fit here, but perhaps on 02:26:955 . That way, it could emphasize the beat on 02:27:397 (443) - (?), but it also sounds weird.
11. 02:29:072 - It is a pretty obvious sound here, so how about you add something here?
12. 02:34:720 (490) - Hm... I don't really see the use of having this note here, and it's pretty much the same reason as the one somewhere in the beginning of the mod, when it doesn't fit well because it doesn't hit anything.
13. 02:51:396 (601,602) - Ctrl + G instead? To support the voice with kat since it got higher.
14. 04:24:837 (76) - Lol, I think you get it after repeating the same thing. This instead should be on 04:24:661 .

Wew, this is my first long Taiko mod, haha. So, just some concerns I notice. I might say something weird lel, but I think I said everything I want to say. Call me whenever applied my mod!

really really sorry,,,,,,
this map is submited TNA now......so i can't change this map and give kudosu,,,,sorry

Actually, you can apply my mod. I've talked to OzzyOzrock because I wanted to know how does the TNA works, and waiting for a member from the TNA to bubble or qualify whether the map got accepted seems quite odd to me, as the BNs can do what they feel like. Here the chatlog if you want to check:

You can put my mod under consideration though, but if you need someone, contact me!

yes you should consider sheela's mod, it can be good use for the map and can reduce TNA's work when they come to check your map
and sheela can actually bubble/qualify if he wants because any BN can qualify any maps!

RANK ;_;

sheela901 wrote:

Lol, the "automatic stuff" should be fixed when you update this map again. But first, let me mod this map, so hey again EdamaMe411!

[General]

1. I see that the mp3 file is at 128kbps, and it's not breaking any rules, but it can be improved a little more, which is why I've encoded it a 192kbps file from a better source. Also, yours has some distortion sounds due to loudness, so I decided to normalize it. In result, here's a new and better file: http://puu.sh/msoXN/9c0f5d8652.mp3 Thank you~
   You'll also need to strike -61 in the offset. And do this first, as I will mod this map with this offset.ok
2. The second kiai time must end on 02:55:455 because of the big crash. It's weird to see it ends on the downbeat although the bigger beat is on the red tick.ok

[Oni]

1. For the part 03:58:455 to 04:00:572 -, I have some concerns. To start of:
   
   1. 03:59:249 (967) - This stands on a ghost note, meaning that there is no beat that is heard, so I wouldn't add a note here. However, you can move this to 03:59:425 instead because this tick has a sound from the drum. fmm,,,ok your right
   2. 03:59:778 (971) - Probably subjective, but having this note on this tick sounds weird to me, in addition there is no beat there. How about you remove it?If I did simple sound mapping,this map a little boring . so a desided put ghost notes. But other bN say this point ,I change here
   3. 03:59:690 (970) - If you removed the note above, maybe you can this note into d, so that the flow could be emphasized on 03:59:928 - (or maybe not lel), but the notes on red ticks are mostly dons, so perhaps that would keep consistency.^

1. 01:03:396 (286) - 01:04:808 (294) - These doesn't fit very well with the music in my opinion. Maybe you should remove them to make drums sound better for 01:03:220 (285,287) and 01:04:631 (293,295) . I think they are more emphasized when leaving a gap in-between.oh,,,your suggestion is good .,,,,ok!!
2. 01:13:455 (25,26) - Hmm... both should be d? I honestly don't see the use of the kats, as the instrument doesn't require a high sound.umm,,,, I change kdk,,,I want put irregular notes
3. 01:16:896 (47) - The reason for this note is like 03:59:249 (967) -, because there is no sound that makes the note to get here, yet there is on 01:17:425 -, so I think you better move it there instead.Because I gave priority to carry the finger
4. 01:28:190 (116) - I prefer don instead of kat. It just sounds better to me as it is not the same sound as 01:28:455 (119) .ok
5. 01:43:631 (204) - In my opinion, turning it into a kat does a nice effect the guitar and the drum of 01:43:631 (204,205,206,207,208,209) . And I think it makes a nice feeling to play as you alternate the dons and kats after and after.umm..I change if other BN say this point,,,keep
6. 01:52:102 (246) - I've seen you not adding a note after somewhat a crash, but something big like 01:49:102 (231) -, and I like how having a gap makes that beat more emphasized, so having 01:52:102 (246) doesn't really sound right. I suggest you remove it.change and arange
7. 01:56:514 (270,271,272) - ddk fits better, if I'm correct, because 01:56:690 (272) has a higher note than 01:56:514 (270,271) which are pretty low to me. Logically, the kat should be on a high note and dons on the less loud beats.01:56:337 (269,270,271,272) - change k ddk
8. 02:08:337 (344,345) - Ctrl + G? 02:08:249 (343,344) have a different kind of drum sound, so maybe only kats fit better. And 02:08:425 (345) will be don to differentiate with the kind of drum before.ok
9. 02:15:749 (373) - You didn't add a note on 00:52:455 so maybe you should remove that note for consistency.i bheard base sound,,so no change
10. 02:27:309 (442) - This note doesn't fit here, but perhaps on 02:26:955 . That way, it could emphasize the beat on 02:27:397 (443) - (?), but it also sounds weird.aranged
11. 02:29:072 - It is a pretty obvious sound here, so how about you add something here?ummmmmmmmm....keep
12. 02:34:720 (490) - Hm... I don't really see the use of having this note here, and it's pretty much the same reason as the one somewhere in the beginning of the mod, when it doesn't fit well because it doesn't hit anything.The last kiai, i Think need more ghost notes for notes dence
13. 02:51:396 (601,602) - Ctrl + G instead? To support the voice with kat since it got higher.keep
14. 04:24:837 (76) - Lol, I think you get it after repeating the same thing. This instead should be on 04:24:661 .aranged

Wew, this is my first long Taiko mod, haha. So, just some concerns I notice. I might say something weird lel, but I think I said everything I want to say. Call me whenever applied my mod!

soooooo Thank you!! your mod is high quality and very kindness!! Almost fix^^

Little recheck before I do something:

1. 02:30:220 (462) - Remove the finisher? In my opinion, it doesn't go well with this part. In a previous section, 01:06:925 (306) is only a small don, and that fits very well when the part went all low and soft. For 02:30:220 (462) that part is similar to the one previously, meaning that it is a little softer.
2. 02:31:631 (468) - I do not recommend a finish before a stream. That makes the player a little imbalanced because they have to press both keys simultaneously, and 02:31:631 (468,469) are both kats. In addition, the beat doesn't need a finish, as there is no crash. I think it's better to leave it as a normal kat.

Let me know when you have updated your map!

sheela901 wrote:

Little recheck before I do something:　Well,,,no kudos?

1. 02:30:220 (462) - Remove the finisher? In my opinion, it doesn't go well with this part. In a previous section, 01:06:925 (306) is only a small don, and that fits very well when the part went all low and soft. For 02:30:220 (462) that part is similar to the one previously, meaning that it is a little softer. ok! your right
2. 02:31:631 (468) - I do not recommend a finish before a stream. That makes the player a little imbalanced because they have to press both keys simultaneously, and 02:31:631 (468,469) are both kats. In addition, the beat doesn't need a finish, as there is no crash. I think it's better to leave it as a normal kat.

No , I put this big kat for separate 02:30:220 (462,463) - ~02:31:455 (467) - .Because these part is extended synthesizer sound We used big notes for separate pre section constitution of sound.But stream part change a little simple

Let me know when you have updated your map!

Thank you! And updated!

I don't need another kudosu when I already have one in this map, lel. Welp, I don't think I can find anything, so here's my very first bubble for Taiko!

Bubble #2!

sheela901 wrote:

I don't need another kudosu when I already have one in this map, lel. Welp, I don't think I can find anything, so here's my very first bubble for Taiko!

Bubble #2!

Thank you~!!!!

Take My Star. I Want Some Taiko Maps Ranked ☆ --> ★

Ppuskalin wrote:

Take My Star. I Want Some Taiko Maps Ranked ☆ --> ★

thank you!

move to pending first pls

niceu did desu~

Volta wrote:

move to pending first pls

Lol volta it's right
To have a qualified map you need to move the map to the "beatmaps list pending" unless the map is for approval.

Volta wrote:

move to pending first pls

I don't know how to move to pending list for approval

I couldn't upload as pending list

Please how to move to pending list

ok!
I talked to OzzyOzrock

oh nice to know that!

Lel, now that you guys know that, I'll restore my second bubble!

sheela901 wrote:

Lel, now that you guys know that, I'll restore my second bubble!

sorry and thank you! !

こんにちは、新しくBNグループに加わりました！やったぁ！
Approved にする前にもう一度 mod します。kudosu はもうもらったので別にくれる必要はありません。

Oni

00:51:043 - ここに k を追加。ドラムの音がよく聞こえます。

01:29:514 (127) - Finisher を追加。01:26:690 (107) と同じシンバルの音取をした方がいいです。

01:57:043 (274,275,276,277,278,279) - ここでは 1/4 パターンの終わりが d になっててドラムの音取ができてません。01:57:043 (274,275,276,277,278) をどうにか k で終わるようにしましょう。01:57:572 (279) も D に変えましょう。

02:15:397 (372) - Finisher を追加できます。

02:52:631 (612) - k に変えたら 02:52:808 (613) と強調ができて良いと思います。

04:01:102 (979,980) - ここと04:00:572 (977,978) の音調がおなじだから　D Dの方がよいかもしれません。05:06:043 (357,358) と比べると、05:06:043 (357,358) は05:05:514 (355,356) の音調より低いです。

04:01:631 (981,982) - ^

04:47:161 - ここで気合タイムを終わらせて04:48:396 にまた始めた方がいいと思います。最初の気合タイムと同じ効果があります。

04:48:396 - 最後の部分すっごく上手に出来上がってます。

これぐらいです。色々してくれたお礼です。
読み終わったらPMかメッセージをください。それから Qualified にします。よろしく　( ｀・∀・´)ﾉ

Moving to pending is not necessary.

Once approved, the map goes into the "Ranked&Approved" section automatically.

newyams99 wrote:

こんにちは、新しくBNグループに加わりました！やったぁ！おおおおお！！！まじ！？おめでとう！！
Approved にする前にもう一度 mod します。kudosu はもうもらったので別にくれる必要はありません。

Oni

00:51:043 - ここに k を追加。ドラムの音がよく聞こえます。ここはボーカルにも合わせてるので、完全ドラム合わせじゃないです。だから大音符独立させてます

01:29:514 (127) - Finisher を追加。01:26:690 (107) と同じシンバルの音取をした方がいいです。good! fixed

01:57:043 (274,275,276,277,278,279) - ここでは 1/4 パターンの終わりが d になっててドラムの音取ができてません。01:57:043 (274,275,276,277,278) をどうにか k で終わるようにしましょう。01:57:572 (279) も D に変えましょう。ここはなんていうかっ楽器構成が少なくなっている中でエレキギターの高音が一番響いてると思います。だからここは変えたくないです><

02:15:397 (372) - Finisher を追加できます。おk!

02:52:631 (612) - k に変えたら 02:52:808 (613) と強調ができて良いと思います。GOOD

04:01:102 (979,980) - ここと04:00:572 (977,978) の音調がおなじだから　D Dの方がよいかもしれません。05:06:043 (357,358) と比べると、05:06:043 (357,358) は05:05:514 (355,356) の音調より低いです。

04:01:631 (981,982) - ^どっちかっていうと音程よりplay感重視した感じ。。。DD　DD　DDだと味気ないと感じてしまった

04:47:161 - ここで気合タイムを終わらせて04:48:396 にまた始めた方がいいと思います。最初の気合タイムと同じ効果があります。ほかの方にも言われたのでなおします！

04:48:396 - 最後の部分すっごく上手に出来上がってます。 うれしい！ありがとう！

これぐらいです。色々してくれたお礼です。
読み終わったらPMかメッセージをください。それから Qualified にします。よろしく　( ｀・∀・´)ﾉ

すごいなあBN!頑張って‼そしてありがとう！

Raiden wrote:

Moving to pending is not necessary.

Once approved, the map goes into the "Ranked&Approved" section automatically.

　

Thank you in advice~

再チェックして大丈夫だと思います。
ファーストQualified おめでとう！

こんなカンジでBNの仕事をしたらいいのかな ~.~ w

Gratz~ 1st ranked~

Changed the icon to flame.