Mami Kawada - Contrail ~Kiseki~ · forum

Meg

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Meg 2016-01-12T10:30:39+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年2月5日 at 22:42:56

Artist: Mami Kawada
Title: Contrail ~Kiseki~
Source: 蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags: iMage-- Alyce vellya Homura- Lecana sprite opening tv size ao no kanata four rhythm beyond the sky into the firmament
BPM: 168
Filesize: 18706kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.46 stars, 89 notes)
hmr's Normal (2.19 stars, 186 notes)
Insane (4.42 stars, 314 notes)
Lecana's Insane (4.17 stars, 306 notes)
vellya's Hard (3.19 stars, 280 notes)

Download: Mami Kawada - Contrail ~Kiseki~
Download: Mami Kawada - Contrail ~Kiseki~ (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#14

Last edited by Meg 2016-02-13T08:14:32+00:00, edited 22 times in total.

Asahina Momoko

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Joined November 2013

Asahina Momoko 2016-01-12T10:40:18+00:00

let me make 8 SR difficulty please

Meg

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Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Meg 2016-01-12T10:40:45+00:00

Asahina Momoko wrote:
let me make 8 SR difficulty please

you will put 1/16 streams!!!

Shad0w1and

1,589 posts

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Shad0w1and 2016-01-12T11:09:18+00:00

this will be good

-Atri-

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Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2016-01-12T16:24:53+00:00

So fast

Mei

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Joined March 2012

Mei 2016-01-12T16:53:47+00:00

kimoi otaku

Rizia

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Joined January 2012

Rizia 2016-01-12T17:31:46+00:00

meg so fast

zyoi

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Joined May 2014

zyoi 2016-01-12T17:33:14+00:00

Mei wrote:
kimoi otaku

Meg

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Topic Starter

Meg 2016-01-12T22:36:15+00:00

君たちmodしてくれない？

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

KaedekaShizuru 2016-01-13T00:13:36+00:00

Meg速すぎ！
連鎖反応事故現場……

Shad0w1and

1,589 posts

Joined April 2011

Shad0w1and 2016-01-13T00:20:05+00:00

Meg wrote:
君たちmodしてくれない？

Nah I guess I will give a short mod;w;
[General]
I do believe you need +5ms offset for your current timing, 588+5ms it is.

[Insane]
HS is good, my only concern is do you really need two finishes on 00:45:230 (2,3) - , i suggest you remove the one on 00:45:230 (2) -
00:06:837 (2) - this flows better for me

SPOILER

00:09:159 (1,2,3) -

SPOILER

01:18:087 (2) - less curving looks better, and 01:18:802 (5) - curve more maybe ;w;

SPOILER

[vellya]
00:14:873 - 00:57:730 - downbeat for a hit object? I really want to hit something
00:32:909 (4) - stack this note on 00:33:087 (5) - instead. why? because vocal on both 00:32:730 - and 00:32:909 (4) - , the motion for 00:33:087 (5) - a really weak sound is so weird
01:21:659 (6,1) - blanket
01:23:087 - red stick slider end on clap, here does not make much sense, even a reversed slider should flow better

SPOILER

01:24:873 (5) - nc

[Normal]
00:31:123 (6) - red stick sliders really confusing..

SPOILER

or you might do

SPOILER

00:14:873 - slider end on dwonbeat.. it is really bad.. i want to hit something here
00:23:445 - slider end on dwonbeat. but this one might be acceptable

Lecana

253 posts

Joined March 2012

Lecana 2016-01-13T00:43:35+00:00

@Meg_iMage
http://puu.sh/mtBhL/524771228f.zip

Shad0w1and

1,589 posts

Joined April 2011

Shad0w1and 2016-01-13T01:00:52+00:00

ok,
No KD

If you want a better one: http://puu.sh/mtBGu/c2f309f7d1.flv (10mb) offset is 0ms
Also, just one thing, anyone is free to take my video, I did not get any kd from video req, so that video is not own by any map creator. Applied to Enjoy's set as well.

[Lecana]
00:05:945 (6,7,8,9,1) - this is too much for this clam part, use reversed sliders plz. 00:11:659 (6,7,8,9,1) - is fine
00:14:873 - prefer hit something on downbeat
00:15:052 (6) - NC
00:30:409 (5) - NC
00:51:659 (5) - this does not look good
01:04:516 (5,1) - blanket
01:06:302 (4) - 01:08:980 (7) - 01:14:873 (4) - 01:17:730 (5) - NC
01:19:516 (1,1) - no NC spamming
01:20:587 (6) - 01:27:730 (7) - NC
start a spinner here 01:27:820 - and end 01:29:159 -

overall, Homura-'s and Lecana's diffs need polish more imo (not try to be mean to them)

Preseas

4 posts

Joined November 2015

Preseas 2016-01-13T03:01:28+00:00

こんにちはMegさん、応援しています！お役にたてるかはわかりませんがModdingをします

Easy difficulty
01:14:873 (3) - スライダーのはじまりにwhistleをどうですか？
00:59:873 (4) - これはどうですか？01:00:587 - ここから始まります音はより良いになると思います http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4324338

hmr's Normal difficulty
00:17:373 (7) - あまり音楽にあいませんと思います、分解をしてこれをどうですか？ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4324356
01:11:123 - vocal soundにしています01:06:123 (4,5) - しかし、01:11:123 - ここは抜けています

vellya's Hard difficulty
00:10:052 (5) - 私は好みます、プレイヤーのためになるでしょう http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4324375
00:23:087 (3,1,2) - distanceは似ています、00:23:087 (3,1) - ２つ減らすはどうでしょう？
01:16:302 (1) - 強い音ありますので、distanceを増やしてみるとどうですか？

Insane difficulty
00:16:837 (4) - 僕は、逆向きにするといいかと思います　http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4324405
00:22:552 (3) - まとまりを作ります、試してみてください　http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4324413

伝わりませんでしたらごめんなさい、応援しています

Homura-

271 posts

Joined September 2010

Homura- 2016-01-13T03:41:01+00:00

Shad0w1and wrote:
Nah I guess I will give a short mod;w;

[Normal]
00:31:123 (6) - red stick sliders really confusing..
SPOILER
or you might do
SPOILER
fixed

Preseas wrote:
こんにちはMegさん、応援しています！お役にたてるかはわかりませんがModdingをします

hmr's Normal difficulty
00:17:373 (7) - あまり音楽にあいませんと思います、分解をしてこれをどうですか？ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4324356
リバースでfinishを取るのが好きなのと　その画像のスタックの仕方は優しくないので変えません
01:11:123 - vocal soundにしています01:06:123 (4,5) - しかし、01:11:123 - ここは抜けています
ここの前で1/2の音を結構使ってしまったので続けるのはどうかなと思って置いてません　あとそれ言い出したら切りないんで変えません

thanks for mod

緑線あほみたいにずれてたのを直したのと Widescreen Supportのチェック外しました
http://puu.sh/mtKTx.rar

Homura-

271 posts

Joined September 2010

Homura- 2016-01-13T04:58:16+00:00

めちゃくちゃ気になったとこだけ

[General]

AudioLeadIn: 1300
Lecana's InsaneのWidescreen Supportのチェック外し
Tags に「homura- vallya (alyce) lecana」入れませんか？　ていうか入れて

[vallya's Hard]

思い入れもクソもないって言ってたし AR7,5にしない？ｗ
00:00:588 - 00:01:123 - 00:01:837 - 00:02:552 - 00:03:445 - 00:03:980 - 00:04:695 - 00:05:409 - normal whistle
00:11:480 (5,6) - whistle
00:23:087 (3,1) - Hardでこの音取りしなくてもいいと思う　これどう？
00:47:195 (3) - 始点whistle
01:24:962 (1) - normal whistle

[Lecana's Insane]

00:23:087 (5) - clapとwhistle
00:33:980 (3) - 始点whistle
00:44:695 (1) - 終点whistle
00:45:409 (3) - 始点whistle
00:46:659 (2) - whistle
00:46:837 (3) - 始点clap
00:49:516 (2) - 終点clap
00:50:052 (4) - whistle
00:50:587 (1) - 始点whistle
00:51:123 (2,4) - whistle
00:51:659 (5) - 始点clap
00:52:373 (1) - 始点finishつけない？
00:55:230 (3) - 終点whistle
00:55:587 (4) - whistle 削除
00:56:123 (1) - 始点終点 whistle
00:59:337 (5) - whistle
00:59:873 (8,9) - whistle
01:05:945 (3,4) - どちらも終点にwhistle
01:08:266 (5) - whistle 削除
01:08:980 (7) - 始点終点 whistle
01:11:837 (8) - whistleとfinish
01:12:552 (3) - 始点whistle
01:16:837 (2) - whistle　始点と終点逆
01:17:373 (4) - 終点 whistleとfinish　　(finishは好み)
01:17:730 (5) - whistle 削除
01:17:909 (6) - whistle
01:22:016 (1) - whistleとfinish　　(finishは好み)
01:24:159 (4,5) - whistle
01:27:730 (7) - normalのwhistleにしない？

[Meg's Insane]

00:11:480 (1,2) - whistle
00:47:195 (3) - 始点whistle
00:48:445 (7) - 始点 Sampleset drum
00:51:302 (5) - Sampleset drum　Additions soft
00:49:516 (2) - 終点のwhistleをclapにするとパターン化できるけどこういうのは好み
01:24:962 (1) - normal whistle

れかなは相変わらず抜けてる

自分のもちょっと直したからこっちで更新して (tagsとかはいじってません)
http://puu.sh/mtP4h.rar

Meg

1,617 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Meg 2016-01-13T12:38:23+00:00

Shad0w1and

Shad0w1and wrote:
Meg wrote:
君たちmodしてくれない？
Nah I guess I will give a short mod;w;
[General]
I do believe you need +5ms offset for your current timing, 588+5ms it is. i thought so. fixed

[Insane]
HS is good, my only concern is do you really need two finishes on 00:45:230 (2,3) - , i suggest you remove the one on 00:45:230 (2) - no changed
00:06:837 (2) - this flows better for me ok
SPOILER
00:09:159 (1,2,3) - no changed
SPOILER
01:18:087 (2) - less curving looks better, and 01:18:802 (5) - curve more maybe ;w; no changed. it is symmetry
SPOILER

Preseas

Preseas wrote:
こんにちはMegさん、応援しています！お役にたてるかはわかりませんがModdingをします
Easy difficulty
01:14:873 (3) - スライダーのはじまりにwhistleをどうですか？ ok
00:59:873 (4) - これはどうですか？01:00:587 - ここから始まります音はより良いになると思いますそこまで変わらないと思うのでkeep http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4324338

Insane difficulty
00:16:837 (4) - 僕は、逆向きにするといいかと思います　このままで大丈夫だと思うのでkeephttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4324405
00:22:552 (3) - まとまりを作ります、試してみてくださいよくわからないけどこの配置は気に入ってるのでkeep　http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4324413

伝わりませんでしたらごめんなさい、応援しています

Homura-

Homura- wrote:
めちゃくちゃ気になったとこだけ

[General]
AudioLeadIn: 1300 ok
Lecana's InsaneのWidescreen Supportのチェック外し ok
Tags に「homura- vallya (alyce) lecana」入れませんか？　ていうか入れて ok
[Meg's Insane]
00:11:480 (1,2) - whistle
00:47:195 (3) - 始点whistle
00:48:445 (7) - 始点 Sampleset drum
00:51:302 (5) - Sampleset drum　Additions soft
00:49:516 (2) - 終点のwhistleをclapにするとパターン化できるけどこういうのは好み俺もつけるとき迷ったんだよね～　どうせだしclapつけといたｗ
01:24:962 (1) - normal whistle いいね

れかなは相変わらず抜けてる

自分のもちょっと直したからこっちで更新して (tagsとかはいじってません)
http://puu.sh/mtP4h.rar

thank you for modding all

5hiki

5hiki 2016-01-13T13:02:24+00:00

thanks

https://www.dropbox.com/s/a8fni362ql8dy ... D.osu?dl=0

Asahina Momoko

1,008 posts

Joined November 2013

Asahina Momoko 2016-01-13T13:28:26+00:00

ましろはいいぞ

Easy

00:59:878 (4) - 01:00:414 - で止めると00:58:450 (2,3) - と統一感でてよくナイス化？
01:06:307 (3) - アタマホイッスル

hmr's Normal

01:21:842 - kiai全体的というか特に直前の01:19:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - がボーカルフォローなのにここの音ないのは寂しいかなと思いました。01:23:985 - も同じように感じたので、01:22:021 (1,2,3,4) - をボーカルフォローに変えてみてはどうでしょうか

vellya's Hard

00:11:485 (5) - 00:10:057 (5,1) - ここみたいにNC?
00:17:646 (2,3) - プレイだとスタックが下みたいになっちゃうので、DS x0.3くらいでこうしてみるのもいいかなと思いました
SPOILER
00:30:414 (5) - NC忘れ？

Lecana's Insane

00:15:057 (6) - やや前のノートから遠い気がしたので、次のサークルのスペーシング調整もかねてこれくらいにしてみませんか？(あとこれにNC?)
SPOILER

Insane

00:50:592 (1,2,3) - Hardの00:17:646 (2,3) - のやつに同じ

ましろはいいぞ

Meg

1,617 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Meg 2016-01-13T13:54:48+00:00

Asahina Momoko wrote:
ましろはいいぞ

Easy
00:59:878 (4) - 01:00:414 - で止めると00:58:450 (2,3) - と統一感でてよくナイス化？ナイス化されてるけど今の音取りの方が読みやすいかな～って感じなのでkeep
01:06:307 (3) - アタマホイッスルアタマワイテタ keep

Insane
00:50:592 (1,2,3) - Hardの00:17:646 (2,3) - のやつに同じいいネ

ましろはいいぞ

ももこちゃん最高

Homura-

271 posts

Joined September 2010

Homura- 2016-01-13T14:11:56+00:00

Asahina Momoko wrote:
ましろはいいぞ

hmr's Normal
01:21:842 - kiai全体的というか特に直前の01:19:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - がボーカルフォローなのにここの音ないのは寂しいかなと思いました。01:23:985 - も同じように感じたので、01:22:021 (1,2,3,4) - をボーカルフォローに変えてみてはどうでしょうか
(手抜きがばれた・・・)

ましろはいいぞ

ましろどいつだ(無知)
http://puu.sh/muall.rar

Lecana

253 posts

Joined March 2012

Lecana 2016-01-13T16:12:05+00:00

Shad0w1and's

Shad0w1and wrote:
ok,
No KD

If you want a better one: http://puu.sh/mtBGu/c2f309f7d1.flv (10mb) offset is 0ms
Also, just one thing, anyone is free to take my video, I did not get any kd from video req, so that video is not own by any map creator. Applied to Enjoy's set as well.

[Lecana]
00:05:945 (6,7,8,9,1) - this is too much for this clam part, use reversed sliders plz. 00:11:659 (6,7,8,9,1) - is fine
fixed
00:14:873 - prefer hit something on downbeat
fixed
00:15:052 (6) - NC
fixed
00:30:409 (5) - NC
fixed
00:51:659 (5) - this does not look good
sorry,keep
01:04:516 (5,1) - blanket
fixed
01:06:302 (4) - 01:08:980 (7) - 01:14:873 (4) - 01:17:730 (5) - NC
fixed
01:19:516 (1,1) - no NC spamming
fixed
01:20:587 (6) - 01:27:730 (7) - NC
fixed
start a spinner here 01:27:820 - and end 01:29:159 -
fixed
overall, Homura-'s and Lecana's diffs need polish more imo (not try to be mean to them)

thanks mod٩(｡•ㅂ•｡)و

おねえちゃん's

Homura- wrote:
めちゃくちゃ気になったとこだけ

[Lecana's Insane]
00:23:087 (5) - clapとwhistle
00:33:980 (3) - 始点whistle
00:44:695 (1) - 終点whistle
00:45:409 (3) - 始点whistle
00:46:659 (2) - whistle
00:46:837 (3) - 始点clap
00:49:516 (2) - 終点clap
00:50:052 (4) - whistle
00:50:587 (1) - 始点whistle
00:51:123 (2,4) - whistle
00:51:659 (5) - 始点clap
00:52:373 (1) - 始点finishつけない？
00:55:230 (3) - 終点whistle
00:55:587 (4) - whistle 削除
00:56:123 (1) - 始点終点 whistle
00:59:337 (5) - whistle
00:59:873 (8,9) - whistle
01:05:945 (3,4) - どちらも終点にwhistle
01:08:266 (5) - whistle 削除
01:08:980 (7) - 始点終点 whistle
01:11:837 (8) - whistleとfinish
01:12:552 (3) - 始点whistle
01:16:837 (2) - whistle　始点と終点逆
01:17:373 (4) - 終点 whistleとfinish　　(finishは好み)
01:17:730 (5) - whistle 削除
01:17:909 (6) - whistle
01:22:016 (1) - whistleとfinish　　(finishは好み)
01:24:159 (4,5) - whistle
01:27:730 (7) - normalのwhistleにしない？
All fixed٩(｡•ㅂ•｡)و

れかなは相変わらず抜けてる
おねえちゃんはしっかりもの

ももこちゃん's

Asahina Momoko wrote:
ましろはいいぞ

Lecana's Insane
00:15:057 (6) - やや前のノートから遠い気がしたので、次のサークルのスペーシング調整もかねてこれくらいにしてみませんか？(あとこれにNC?)
SPOILER
色々と変更しました！

ましろはいいぞ

ありがとう!!٩(｡•ㅂ•｡)و
宣伝botだ・・・・・・・・

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Contrail ~Kiseki~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61302
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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TitleUnicode:Contrail～軌跡～
Artist:Mami Kawada
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:Meg
Version:Lecana's Insane
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:iMage-- Alyce vellya Homura- Lecana sprite opening tv size ao no kanata four rhythm beyond the sky into the firmament
BeatmapID:878684
BeatmapSetID:403814

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2016-01-14T13:28:20+00:00

Really good quality at mapset, so I believe it can be further mod by BN in next step imo

[General]

Overall looks good

[hmr's Normal]

00:04:700 (3,5) - Distance, fix to keep consistent here plz.

[vellya's Hard]

00:20:235 (10) - Unsnapped slider want fix it

[Lecana's Insane]

01:00:414 (12,1,2,3) - The first downbeat at 01:00:592 (1) - here, you shouldn't make it put at sliderend there (Plays so weird now imo), so suggest use this rhythm :
01:04:342 (4) - Maybe this note make it cover better imo
01:27:825 (1) - Spinner end sound sounds like a biT loud, add a green line reduce the volume?

Lecana

253 posts

Joined March 2012

Lecana 2016-01-14T20:00:00+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Really good quality at mapset, so I believe it can be further mod by BN in next step imo

[Lecana's Insane]
01:00:414 (12,1,2,3) - The first downbeat at 01:00:592 (1) - here, you shouldn't make it put at sliderend there (Plays so weird now imo), so suggest use this rhythm :
change but,this part 3 Note
01:04:342 (4) - Maybe this note make it cover better imo
stack ok
01:27:825 (1) - Spinner end sound sounds like a biT loud, add a green line reduce the volume?
30%

thanks mod(~ ・ω・)~

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284,135,51307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,227,51485,1,2,0:0:0:0:
165,133,51664,2,0,B|148:81|174:36|229:29|229:29|222:65,1,161.999995056153,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,48,52378,6,0,P|271:104|269:193,1,161.999995056153,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,275,52914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
114,178,53092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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433,248,53807,2,0,P|420:201|398:163,1,80.9999975280763,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,57,54164,2,0,P|284:104|262:142,1,80.9999975280763,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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250,254,55057,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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244,113,55592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,113,55771,2,0,L|156:141,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,316,56128,6,0,B|250:285|250:285|265:235|265:235|235:242,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,264,56664,1,8,0:0:0:0:
126,181,56842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
23,139,57021,1,8,0:0:0:0:
145,282,57200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,208,57378,2,0,L|312:193,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
453,292,57735,6,0,P|372:323|296:282,2,180,14|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
490,193,58628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,124,58807,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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418,248,59342,1,2,0:0:0:0:
301,279,59521,1,8,0:0:0:0:
331,173,59700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,248,59878,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,199,60057,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,199,60146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,199,60235,1,8,0:0:0:0:
301,336,60414,1,2,0:0:0:0:
301,336,60503,1,2,0:0:0:0:
301,336,60592,5,2,0:0:0:0:
193,290,60771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
322,195,60950,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,155,61128,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,316,62021,6,0,P|342:280|343:177,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,66,62557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,66,62646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,66,62735,1,2,0:0:0:0:
213,161,62914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
361,97,63092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
251,246,63271,6,0,P|161:234|72:231,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,360,63807,2,0,P|97:341|136:338,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,320,64164,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,231,64342,1,2,0:0:0:0:
153,155,64521,2,0,P|164:111|172:66,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,231,64878,6,0,P|149:270|72:231,2,180,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,134,65771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
354,230,65950,2,0,P|346:291|339:324,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,163,66307,6,0,P|425:102|418:69,1,90
321,25,66664,1,8,0:0:0:0:
161,151,66842,2,0,P|217:167|287:127,1,135
282,133,67200,2,0,P|262:200|257:236,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,321,67557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
422,243,67735,5,6,0:0:0:0:
224,295,67914,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,295,68003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,295,68092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
311,196,68271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,112,68450,2,0,P|166:122|121:125,2,90,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,43,68985,6,0,P|414:68|393:177,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,250,69521,1,8,0:0:0:0:
435,299,69700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,299,69789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,299,69878,1,2,0:0:0:0:
222,369,70057,2,0,P|196:319|197:281,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,171,70414,6,0,P|371:186|440:192,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,95,70950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
327,237,71128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,237,71217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,237,71307,1,2,0:0:0:0:
355,119,71485,1,2,0:0:0:0:
403,304,71664,1,8,0:0:0:0:
355,119,71842,1,6,0:0:0:0:
117,175,72200,5,2,0:0:0:0:
187,99,72378,1,8,0:0:0:0:
255,183,72557,2,0,L|225:361,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,237,73092,2,0,L|388:184,1,45,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,64,73271,2,0,L|358:96,1,45,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,156,73450,6,0,P|246:181|159:103,2,180,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
434,229,74342,1,2,0:0:0:0:
357,312,74521,2,0,P|317:292|272:276,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,313,74878,5,2,0:0:0:0:
156,176,75057,1,0,0:0:0:0:
29,216,75235,1,8,0:0:0:0:
274,276,75414,2,0,B|344:295|391:254|391:254|420:272|449:265,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,366,75950,2,0,P|245:355|204:325,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,84,76307,6,0,P|364:123|298:200,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,200,76842,2,0,P|249:189|205:185,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,257,77200,1,2,0:0:0:0:
321,294,77378,2,0,P|369:276|393:244,1,90,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,106,77735,5,0,0:0:0:0:
217,271,77914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
338,176,78092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,46,78271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,46,78360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,46,78450,1,2,0:0:0:0:
347,72,78628,2,0,P|413:64|460:58,2,90,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,184,79164,5,6,0:0:0:0:
398,297,79521,1,10,0:0:0:0:
121,347,79878,5,2,0:0:0:0:
195,282,80057,1,2,0:0:0:0:
195,282,80146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,282,80235,1,8,0:0:0:0:
290,353,80414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,197,80592,6,0,P|357:153|373:103,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,96,80950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
401,297,81128,2,0,L|311:312,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,203,81485,1,2,0:0:0:0:
281,239,81664,1,8,0:0:0:0:
117,310,81842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,343,82021,5,6,0:0:0:0:
117,310,82200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,254,82378,2,0,P|216:316|210:353,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,221,82735,1,2,0:0:0:0:
106,104,82914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
150,182,83092,2,0,P|213:177|245:164,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,85,83450,6,0,L|353:177,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,327,83807,1,8,0:0:0:0:
226,226,83985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,336,84164,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,327,84342,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,327,84432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,327,84521,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,236,84700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,229,84878,6,0,L|365:136,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,72,85235,1,2,0:0:0:0:
255,175,85414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
463,293,85592,2,0,L|439:193,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,63,85950,1,2,0:0:0:0:
255,175,86128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,269,86307,6,0,L|292:359,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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274,21,87021,1,2,0:0:0:0:
359,80,87200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,142,87378,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,39,87557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Meg

1,617 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Meg 2016-01-14T20:10:21+00:00

i fixed GD instead them.

smallboat wrote:
Really good quality at mapset, so I believe it can be further mod by BN in next step imo

[General]
Overall looks good
[hmr's Normal]
00:04:700 (3,5) - Distance, fix to keep consistent here plz. ok
[vellya's Hard]
00:20:235 (10) - Unsnapped slider want fix it the problem is on Lecana's diff. i fixed it

thank you for modding

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2016-01-15T00:08:43+00:00

Okay fine, bub it

Meg

1,617 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Meg 2016-01-15T00:10:55+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Okay fine, bub it

thanks a lot \:D/

Depths

681 posts

Joined January 2014

Depths 2016-01-25T09:59:10+00:00

wow fast

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2016-01-25T13:46:04+00:00

true god

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2016-01-30T14:07:07+00:00

To : smallboat or next BN

only Lecana's Insane diff some unrankable issue. so I check'd irc mod.

mod log here

23:44 *Satellite is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/878684 Mami Kawada - Contrail ~Kiseki~ [Lecana's Insane]]
23:45 Lecana: ふぉい
23:45 Satellite: 00:06:307 (1,2) -
23:45 Satellite: 音取り逆じゃない？
23:47 Satellite: 00:07:914 (6) - ここもwhistle必要じゃない？
23:48 Satellite: 00:08:271 (8,9,1) - 8.9より9.1のほうが曲調的に広くならないとだめじゃない？
23:48 Satellite: ついでに 00:09:075 - ここ裏の音あるから
23:48 Satellite: add noteしてもいいかもね
23:49 Satellite: パターンどおりなら 00:09:700 - ここと 00:10:057 - ここにwhistleじゃないかな
23:50 Satellite: 00:11:575 - ここの音抜く必要性がない・・・多分ミス
23:51 Satellite: 00:11:753 - 逆にここに音いれるほうが違和感ない？
23:51 Satellite: 00:15:592 (5,6,7) - ちょっと無理があるかも
23:52 Satellite: ぎりぎりだけど流れ的にはこっちのほうがいいと思うけどどう？　https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4420458
23:53 Satellite: 00:18:985 (5,6) - ここだけど
23:53 Satellite: 00:18:985 (5) - これを6にある位置へ
23:53 Satellite: 00:19:164 (6) - これを8のある位置へスタックさせたら
23:53 Satellite: めっちゃ曲調にフィットすると思う
23:53 Satellite: 00:19:164 (6,7,8) - ここの３つは行き来する音だと思う
23:53 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mMRiB/0163453e33.jpg
23:53 Satellite: こういうことだね
23:54 Satellite: 何か意見ある？
23:56 Lecana: 00:08:271 (8,9,1) -
23:57 Lecana: 間隔はそのままでいいかなぁ
23:57 Satellite: noteもいれないでそのまま？
23:57 Lecana: うん
23:59 Satellite: 好み？
00:00 Satellite: 00:22:646 - ここ詰めない？
00:01 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mMRGh/5b2d5df635.jpg
00:01 Lecana: 出だしは連打入れたくないってところある
00:01 Satellite: たとえばだけどこんな感じ
00:01 Lecana: 00:22:646
00:01 Lecana: ここは入れるか
00:01 Satellite: ちなみにHardは出だしでも連打そこそこ入ってたきがするけど・・・
00:02 Satellite: 00:23:450 - ここ意図的に空けてるのはわかるんだけど詰めない？
00:03 Lecana: いいね
00:03 Satellite: 詰め方わかる？
00:03 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mMROT/81cec49906.jpg
00:03 Satellite: 多分これが一番いいと思う
00:04 Satellite: 00:28:807 (5) - x257 y211はお嫌い？
00:04 Lecana: いいね
00:05 Satellite: 00:32:378 (3,4,5,6) -
00:05 Satellite: うーんって感じ
00:05 Satellite: 00:32:378 (3,4) - 多分これスライダーにかえたほうがいいんじゃない？
00:07 Satellite: それか
00:07 Satellite: 00:32:735 (5) - これもうちょっと下げたほうがいいかも
00:08 Satellite: 00:39:164 (4,5) - ちょっと意味がわからない形
00:10 Satellite: 00:41:664 (4) - 流れ的に x172 y43はお嫌い？
00:11 Satellite: 00:42:378 (6,7,8) - うーーーーーーーん。。
00:11 Lecana: iine
00:12 Lecana: うーん
00:13 Satellite: いいづらいけど
00:13 Satellite: スライダー単発にかえて
00:13 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mMSmy/a7fba490bb.jpg
00:13 Satellite: こんな感じで流れ作ってあげたほうがいいかも
00:13 Satellite: ６７８だけで見ると現状よくわからない
00:16 Lecana: 単発にするか～
00:17 Satellite: 00:50:592 (1) - ここのリバースは音にあってない
00:18 Satellite: いや、現状でも音はあるけど3/4の音のほうが強いからそっちのほうがいいと思う・・・
00:19 Satellite: 00:55:235 (3,4,5) - 音取りなめ過ぎじゃない？ｗｗｗ
00:19 Lecana: それやりづらい？
00:20 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mMSI4/56afaaef92.jpg or http://puu.sh/mMSJ9/9aec2af3d3.jpg
00:20 Satellite: 個人的に後者の音取りしたほうが
00:20 Satellite: 00:56:128 (1) - ここが映える
00:20 Satellite: 00:55:414 - ここから音がのびてるからスライダーの終点に来るのは
00:20 Satellite: ほぼ間違いなくおかしいと思う
00:21 Satellite: 00:58:717 - ここはadd noteして３連打の音だと思う
00:22 Satellite: 00:59:700 (7) - overmapped. dq要素になりうるかも
00:22 Satellite: おと伸びててそもそも音がない
00:23 Satellite: 01:05:950 (3) - 単発にかえて
00:24 Satellite: 01:06:217 - add noteして３連打のほうが合う
00:24 Satellite: 01:10:414 (1) - 頭のfinishは浮いてると思う
00:25 Satellite: スライダーの終点からのfinishはあんまりいいとはいえないかも
00:25 Satellite: 違う形思い浮かばないなら提案するからあとで声かけて
00:25 Satellite: 01:19:878 (1) - Ncいらんくない？
00:26 Lecana: いらねえ・・
00:26 Satellite: 01:22:200 (2) - 行き来する場所ではないと思うな
00:27 Satellite: 上に飛ばしてもいいかも
00:27 Satellite: 01:22:735 (4,5) - 不自然なジャンプ
00:28 Satellite: 01:25:414 (3,4) - 同じく曲に対しての不自然なジャンプ
00:28 Satellite: 01:25:950 (5,6,1) - 一番気になった場所としてはDSがおかしい
00:29 Satellite: とりあえず以上だけど何か聞きたいことある？
22:16 Lecana: あ
22:16 Lecana: お
22:16 Lecana: 今時間ある？？
22:16 Satellite: あ
22:16 Satellite: お
22:16 Satellite: と
22:17 Satellite: いいぞ
22:17 Satellite: ちょっとだけよ
22:17 Lecana: OK
22:17 Lecana: この前の修正終わったからさ
22:17 Satellite: osu
22:17 Satellite: oszで
22:17 Lecana: たのもうかと思って
22:17 Satellite: くだちい
22:18 Lecana: OK
22:19 Lecana: http://puu.sh/mPiZp/d1706dc579.osz
22:19 Lecana: ふぉい
22:19 Satellite: ふぉおお
22:19 Lecana: サビ前
22:20 Lecana: 他の人のDIff見て同じ感じだったから
22:20 Lecana: これNote消さないとまずいなーって感じて結局消したｗｗ
22:20 Satellite: 00:58:717 - ここは埋めたほうがいい
22:20 Satellite: Hardもmegカスも
22:20 Satellite: ３連打入ってる
22:20 Lecana: そこも入れる感じか
22:21 Satellite: 01:00:414 (3) - ここから123って３連打にしたほうがいいよ
22:21 Satellite: Ｎｃ
22:21 Satellite: 入れ方
22:21 Satellite: 綺麗になる
22:21 Satellite: 00:59:878 (1) - ここでＮｃうつなら
22:21 Satellite: 00:59:342 (5) - ここもadd ncしたほうがいい
22:21 Satellite: 01:00:592 (1,2,3,4) - このジャンプ
22:22 Satellite: 同じ動きで見栄え綺麗にして叩きやすくしない？
22:22 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mPj7o/f516ab6063.jpg
22:22 Satellite: 逆向き台形を使えば
22:22 Satellite: １２と３４が平行だから
22:22 Satellite: えいむの動きが同じで
22:22 Satellite: 叩きやすい
22:22 Satellite: かつ、見やすいし
22:22 Satellite: Editでも綺麗だと思う
22:22 Lecana: 00:59:342 (1) -
22:23 Satellite: ポイントとしては１３の距離と２４の距離同じにしよう
22:23 Lecana: 1の部分ちょっとずれてたから直すとして
22:23 Lecana: 00:58:985 (5,1,2) -
22:23 Lecana: ここと
22:23 Lecana: 00:59:878 (1,2) -
22:23 Lecana: ここは別々に分けたいってのがあるなぁ
22:24 Satellite: 　ごめん
22:24 Satellite: アスペだから言ってる意味わからないｗ
22:25 Lecana: 00:58:985 (5,1,2) - 5,1,2でちょっと間隔狭い感じに置いて
22:25 Satellite: 今の指摘は 01:00:592 (1,2,3,4) - ここの部分だけど
22:25 Satellite: Ncの話？
22:25 Lecana: あ
22:25 Lecana: WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
22:25 Satellite: アスペかな？
22:25 Satellite: ほんと大丈夫？
22:26 Satellite: 寝たほうがいいよｗ
22:26 Lecana: こっちが
22:26 Lecana: アスペだったｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ
22:26 Lecana: 申し訳Nasus
22:26 Satellite: いやなにいってるかほんと
22:26 Satellite: わからなかったんだけどｗ
22:26 Satellite: あせるからやめろｗ
22:26 Lecana: ｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ
22:27 Lecana: OK
22:27 Satellite: 他きになるとこある？
22:27 Satellite: なかったら
22:27 Satellite: 最初からみていく
22:28 Lecana: ないニョ
22:28 Satellite: 00:09:164 (1) - 頭whistle抜けてる
22:29 Satellite: 00:11:485 (5,6,7) - Ctrl+J + Ctrl+Hして 00:10:414 (1) - ここに重ねたら
22:29 Satellite: かっこいいとおもうんだけど
22:29 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mPjrm/891c207068.jpg
22:30 Satellite: 流れも良いし
22:30 Lecana: awesome
22:30 Satellite: 00:12:378 (2,3) - ここより 00:12:735 (4,5) - ここが狭くなるのは流れ的にやりづらいから
22:30 Satellite: できれば４５が広くなったほうがまだ良いと思う
22:31 Satellite: 00:17:200 (3,4) - 流れ急すぎるから
22:31 Satellite: 手前から図形にして４角形にいれない？
22:31 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mPjvG/f072c25cb7.jpg
22:32 Satellite: 00:18:985 (5) - 細かいけど x257 y109
22:32 Satellite: 00:19:164 (6,8) - 細かいけど x203 y269
22:32 Satellite: 00:19:164 (6) - add Newcomboかな
22:34 Satellite: 00:54:878 (1,2,3,4) - 流れが最悪すぎる
22:34 Satellite: １２３だけでみると綺麗だけど
22:34 Satellite: １２３４で見ると
22:34 Satellite: 凄いやりづらい部類に入ると思う
22:35 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mPjH0/036bc7009a.jpg
22:35 Satellite: まだこういった流れ作ったほうが
22:35 Satellite: 綺麗にたたけると思う
22:35 Satellite: 違う形でもokだけど
22:35 Satellite: 現状は微妙
22:36 Satellite: サビ前はさっきいった感じ
22:37 Satellite: 01:11:842 (8,1) - できればこういうのはスタックさせたほうが
22:37 Satellite: 雰囲気出るよ、ただ修正がちょっと難しいかもしれないけど
22:37 Satellite: 一度重ねてみて良いなって思って
22:37 Satellite: 配置が思い浮かばないなら考えるよ
22:37 Satellite: 01:15:235 (3,4) - 多分音取り逆
22:38 Satellite: 01:17:378 (4) - 終点にfinish云々は前のmodのときもいったかもしれないけど
22:38 Satellite: 凄い違和感ある
22:38 Satellite: 01:22:914 (5) - これは 01:23:092 (6) - ここにスタックさせたほうがいい
22:38 Satellite: 01:22:021 (1,2,3) - こことのパターンを統一するほうがいい
22:39 Satellite: 01:27:735 (1) - 最後はSampleset : Nじゃなくて
22:39 Satellite: Additions : Nね
22:39 Satellite: Samplesetは元に戻して
22:40 Satellite: 以上なんかききたいことあればどうぞ
22:56 Satellite: 00:31:664 (1) - remo nc
22:56 Satellite: 00:31:842 (2) - add nc
22:56 Lecana: あ
22:56 Lecana: ok
22:58 Satellite: 00:58:985 (5) - できればこれ3/4sliderにしたほうが映えるよ
22:58 Satellite: 01:00:414 (3) - add nc 01:00:592 (1) - remo nc
22:58 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mPkJ3/10839bc34a.jpg
22:59 Satellite: 01:01:128 (6) - 位置的に x191 y172あたりがきれい
22:59 Satellite: 01:11:842 (8,1) - いいぞ～これｗ
23:00 Lecana: 01:12:557 (3,1) -
23:00 Satellite: 01:17:378 (4) - これ伝わってなかったな
23:00 Lecana: ここスタックしてるところが気がかりだけど左に飛ばしてうえにあげるしかなかった・・
23:00 Lecana: あ
23:00 Lecana: Note+Slider?
23:00 Satellite: 01:17:378 (4,1) -
23:00 Satellite: 音取り逆にしたらいいとおもう
23:03 Satellite: That's all!

I don't touch this mapset. so If you are need translation. call me.

Lecana

253 posts

Joined March 2012

Lecana 2016-01-30T14:13:05+00:00

修正しました。

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230,227,51128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,147,51307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,227,51485,1,2,0:0:0:0:
165,133,51664,2,0,B|148:81|174:36|229:29|229:29|222:65,1,161.999995056153,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,48,52378,6,0,P|271:104|269:193,1,161.999995056153,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,275,52914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
114,178,53092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,270,53271,2,0,B|324:249|324:249|361:266|361:266|395:245|431:247|431:247|448:258,1,161.999995056153
433,248,53807,2,0,P|420:201|398:163,1,80.9999975280763,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,57,54164,2,0,P|284:104|262:142,1,80.9999975280763,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,266,54521,2,0,L|255:254,1,80.9999975280763,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,232,54878,5,2,0:0:0:0:
208,181,55057,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,318,55235,1,8,0:0:0:0:
486,217,55414,2,0,P|431:147|346:158,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,316,55950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,316,56128,6,0,B|250:285|250:285|265:235|265:235|235:242,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,264,56664,1,8,0:0:0:0:
126,181,56842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
23,139,57021,1,8,0:0:0:0:
145,282,57200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,208,57378,2,0,L|312:193,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
453,292,57735,6,0,P|372:323|296:282,2,180,14|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,124,58628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,124,58717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,124,58807,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,56,58985,2,0,L|451:155,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,218,59342,5,4,0:3:0:0:
220,126,59521,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,126,59878,5,10,0:0:0:0:
301,336,60057,1,10,0:0:0:0:
301,336,60414,5,2,0:0:0:0:
301,336,60503,1,2,0:0:0:0:
301,336,60592,1,2,0:0:0:0:
193,290,60771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
389,250,60950,1,2,0:0:0:0:
215,165,61128,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,316,62021,6,0,P|342:280|343:177,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,66,62557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,66,62646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,66,62735,1,2,0:0:0:0:
213,161,62914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
361,97,63092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
251,246,63271,6,0,P|161:234|72:231,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
33,360,63807,2,0,P|97:341|136:338,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,320,64164,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,231,64342,1,2,0:0:0:0:
153,155,64521,2,0,P|164:111|172:66,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,231,64878,6,0,P|149:270|72:231,2,180,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,134,65771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
349,236,65950,1,10,0:0:0:0:
433,163,66128,1,2,0:0:0:0:
433,163,66217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
433,163,66307,6,0,P|425:102|418:69,1,90
321,25,66664,1,8,0:0:0:0:
161,151,66842,2,0,P|217:167|287:127,1,135
282,133,67200,2,0,P|262:200|257:236,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,321,67557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
422,243,67735,5,6,0:0:0:0:
224,295,67914,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,295,68003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,295,68092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
311,196,68271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,112,68450,2,0,P|166:122|121:125,2,90,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,43,68985,6,0,P|414:68|393:177,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,250,69521,1,8,0:0:0:0:
435,299,69700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,299,69789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,299,69878,1,2,0:0:0:0:
222,369,70057,2,0,P|196:319|197:281,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,171,70414,6,0,P|371:186|440:192,1,180
456,95,70950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
327,237,71128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,237,71217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,237,71307,1,2,0:0:0:0:
355,123,71485,1,2,0:0:0:0:
431,279,71664,1,8,0:0:0:0:
205,207,71842,1,6,0:0:0:0:
205,207,72200,5,2,0:0:0:0:
123,305,72378,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,133,72557,2,0,P|217:103|295:166,1,180
378,237,73092,2,0,L|392:184,1,45,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,64,73271,2,0,L|358:96,1,45,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,156,73450,6,0,P|246:181|159:103,2,180,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,245,74342,1,2,0:0:0:0:
303,331,74521,2,0,L|325:235,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,78,74878,5,2,0:0:0:0:
172,170,75057,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,276,75235,2,0,B|344:295|391:254|391:254|420:272|449:265,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,181,75771,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,366,75950,2,0,P|245:355|204:325,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,84,76307,6,0,P|364:123|298:200,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,200,76842,2,0,P|249:189|205:185,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,236,77200,1,2,0:0:0:0:
249,93,77378,1,8,0:0:0:0:
217,271,77557,2,0,L|200:369,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,236,77914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
298,178,78092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,116,78271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,116,78360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,116,78450,1,2,0:0:0:0:
347,72,78628,2,0,L|450:89,2,90,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,190,79164,5,6,0:0:0:0:
398,297,79521,1,10,0:0:0:0:
121,347,79878,1,2,0:0:0:0:
195,282,80057,1,2,0:0:0:0:
195,282,80146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,282,80235,1,8,0:0:0:0:
290,353,80414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,197,80592,6,0,P|357:153|373:103,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,96,80950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
401,297,81128,2,0,L|311:312,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,203,81485,1,2,0:0:0:0:
302,227,81664,1,8,0:0:0:0:
117,310,81842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,343,82021,5,6,0:0:0:0:
231,254,82200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,254,82378,2,0,P|216:316|210:353,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,218,82735,1,2,0:0:0:0:
150,182,82914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
150,182,83092,2,0,P|213:177|245:164,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,85,83450,6,0,L|353:177,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,327,83807,1,8,0:0:0:0:
226,226,83985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,336,84164,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,327,84342,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,327,84432,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,327,84521,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,236,84700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,229,84878,6,0,L|365:136,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,207,85235,2,0,L|247:300,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
463,293,85592,2,0,L|439:193,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,102,85950,1,2,0:0:0:0:
255,175,86128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,269,86307,6,0,L|292:359,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,231,86664,2,0,L|138:141,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,21,87021,1,2,0:0:0:0:
359,80,87200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,142,87378,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,39,87557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,211,87735,5,2,0:1:0:0:

Meg

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Meg 2016-01-30T14:16:51+00:00

Satellite wrote:
To : smallboat or next BN

only Lecana's Insane diff some unrankable issue. so I check'd irc mod.

mod log here
23:44 *Satellite is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/878684 Mami Kawada - Contrail ~Kiseki~ [Lecana's Insane]]
23:45 Lecana: ふぉい
23:45 Satellite: 00:06:307 (1,2) -
23:45 Satellite: 音取り逆じゃない？
23:47 Satellite: 00:07:914 (6) - ここもwhistle必要じゃない？
23:48 Satellite: 00:08:271 (8,9,1) - 8.9より9.1のほうが曲調的に広くならないとだめじゃない？
23:48 Satellite: ついでに 00:09:075 - ここ裏の音あるから
23:48 Satellite: add noteしてもいいかもね
23:49 Satellite: パターンどおりなら 00:09:700 - ここと 00:10:057 - ここにwhistleじゃないかな
23:50 Satellite: 00:11:575 - ここの音抜く必要性がない・・・多分ミス
23:51 Satellite: 00:11:753 - 逆にここに音いれるほうが違和感ない？
23:51 Satellite: 00:15:592 (5,6,7) - ちょっと無理があるかも
23:52 Satellite: ぎりぎりだけど流れ的にはこっちのほうがいいと思うけどどう？　https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4420458
23:53 Satellite: 00:18:985 (5,6) - ここだけど
23:53 Satellite: 00:18:985 (5) - これを6にある位置へ
23:53 Satellite: 00:19:164 (6) - これを8のある位置へスタックさせたら
23:53 Satellite: めっちゃ曲調にフィットすると思う
23:53 Satellite: 00:19:164 (6,7,8) - ここの３つは行き来する音だと思う
23:53 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mMRiB/0163453e33.jpg
23:53 Satellite: こういうことだね
23:54 Satellite: 何か意見ある？
23:56 Lecana: 00:08:271 (8,9,1) -
23:57 Lecana: 間隔はそのままでいいかなぁ
23:57 Satellite: noteもいれないでそのまま？
23:57 Lecana: うん
23:59 Satellite: 好み？
00:00 Satellite: 00:22:646 - ここ詰めない？
00:01 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mMRGh/5b2d5df635.jpg
00:01 Lecana: 出だしは連打入れたくないってところある
00:01 Satellite: たとえばだけどこんな感じ
00:01 Lecana: 00:22:646
00:01 Lecana: ここは入れるか
00:01 Satellite: ちなみにHardは出だしでも連打そこそこ入ってたきがするけど・・・
00:02 Satellite: 00:23:450 - ここ意図的に空けてるのはわかるんだけど詰めない？
00:03 Lecana: いいね
00:03 Satellite: 詰め方わかる？
00:03 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mMROT/81cec49906.jpg
00:03 Satellite: 多分これが一番いいと思う
00:04 Satellite: 00:28:807 (5) - x257 y211はお嫌い？
00:04 Lecana: いいね
00:05 Satellite: 00:32:378 (3,4,5,6) -
00:05 Satellite: うーんって感じ
00:05 Satellite: 00:32:378 (3,4) - 多分これスライダーにかえたほうがいいんじゃない？
00:07 Satellite: それか
00:07 Satellite: 00:32:735 (5) - これもうちょっと下げたほうがいいかも
00:08 Satellite: 00:39:164 (4,5) - ちょっと意味がわからない形
00:10 Satellite: 00:41:664 (4) - 流れ的に x172 y43はお嫌い？
00:11 Satellite: 00:42:378 (6,7,8) - うーーーーーーーん。。
00:11 Lecana: iine
00:12 Lecana: うーん
00:13 Satellite: いいづらいけど
00:13 Satellite: スライダー単発にかえて
00:13 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mMSmy/a7fba490bb.jpg
00:13 Satellite: こんな感じで流れ作ってあげたほうがいいかも
00:13 Satellite: ６７８だけで見ると現状よくわからない
00:16 Lecana: 単発にするか～
00:17 Satellite: 00:50:592 (1) - ここのリバースは音にあってない
00:18 Satellite: いや、現状でも音はあるけど3/4の音のほうが強いからそっちのほうがいいと思う・・・
00:19 Satellite: 00:55:235 (3,4,5) - 音取りなめ過ぎじゃない？ｗｗｗ
00:19 Lecana: それやりづらい？
00:20 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mMSI4/56afaaef92.jpg or http://puu.sh/mMSJ9/9aec2af3d3.jpg
00:20 Satellite: 個人的に後者の音取りしたほうが
00:20 Satellite: 00:56:128 (1) - ここが映える
00:20 Satellite: 00:55:414 - ここから音がのびてるからスライダーの終点に来るのは
00:20 Satellite: ほぼ間違いなくおかしいと思う
00:21 Satellite: 00:58:717 - ここはadd noteして３連打の音だと思う
00:22 Satellite: 00:59:700 (7) - overmapped. dq要素になりうるかも
00:22 Satellite: おと伸びててそもそも音がない
00:23 Satellite: 01:05:950 (3) - 単発にかえて
00:24 Satellite: 01:06:217 - add noteして３連打のほうが合う
00:24 Satellite: 01:10:414 (1) - 頭のfinishは浮いてると思う
00:25 Satellite: スライダーの終点からのfinishはあんまりいいとはいえないかも
00:25 Satellite: 違う形思い浮かばないなら提案するからあとで声かけて
00:25 Satellite: 01:19:878 (1) - Ncいらんくない？
00:26 Lecana: いらねえ・・
00:26 Satellite: 01:22:200 (2) - 行き来する場所ではないと思うな
00:27 Satellite: 上に飛ばしてもいいかも
00:27 Satellite: 01:22:735 (4,5) - 不自然なジャンプ
00:28 Satellite: 01:25:414 (3,4) - 同じく曲に対しての不自然なジャンプ
00:28 Satellite: 01:25:950 (5,6,1) - 一番気になった場所としてはDSがおかしい
00:29 Satellite: とりあえず以上だけど何か聞きたいことある？
22:16 Lecana: あ
22:16 Lecana: お
22:16 Lecana: 今時間ある？？
22:16 Satellite: あ
22:16 Satellite: お
22:16 Satellite: と
22:17 Satellite: いいぞ
22:17 Satellite: ちょっとだけよ
22:17 Lecana: OK
22:17 Lecana: この前の修正終わったからさ
22:17 Satellite: osu
22:17 Satellite: oszで
22:17 Lecana: たのもうかと思って
22:17 Satellite: くだちい
22:18 Lecana: OK
22:19 Lecana: http://puu.sh/mPiZp/d1706dc579.osz
22:19 Lecana: ふぉい
22:19 Satellite: ふぉおお
22:19 Lecana: サビ前
22:20 Lecana: 他の人のDIff見て同じ感じだったから
22:20 Lecana: これNote消さないとまずいなーって感じて結局消したｗｗ
22:20 Satellite: 00:58:717 - ここは埋めたほうがいい
22:20 Satellite: Hardもmegカスも
22:20 Satellite: ３連打入ってる
22:20 Lecana: そこも入れる感じか
22:21 Satellite: 01:00:414 (3) - ここから123って３連打にしたほうがいいよ
22:21 Satellite: Ｎｃ
22:21 Satellite: 入れ方
22:21 Satellite: 綺麗になる
22:21 Satellite: 00:59:878 (1) - ここでＮｃうつなら
22:21 Satellite: 00:59:342 (5) - ここもadd ncしたほうがいい
22:21 Satellite: 01:00:592 (1,2,3,4) - このジャンプ
22:22 Satellite: 同じ動きで見栄え綺麗にして叩きやすくしない？
22:22 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mPj7o/f516ab6063.jpg
22:22 Satellite: 逆向き台形を使えば
22:22 Satellite: １２と３４が平行だから
22:22 Satellite: えいむの動きが同じで
22:22 Satellite: 叩きやすい
22:22 Satellite: かつ、見やすいし
22:22 Satellite: Editでも綺麗だと思う
22:22 Lecana: 00:59:342 (1) -
22:23 Satellite: ポイントとしては１３の距離と２４の距離同じにしよう
22:23 Lecana: 1の部分ちょっとずれてたから直すとして
22:23 Lecana: 00:58:985 (5,1,2) -
22:23 Lecana: ここと
22:23 Lecana: 00:59:878 (1,2) -
22:23 Lecana: ここは別々に分けたいってのがあるなぁ
22:24 Satellite: 　ごめん
22:24 Satellite: アスペだから言ってる意味わからないｗ
22:25 Lecana: 00:58:985 (5,1,2) - 5,1,2でちょっと間隔狭い感じに置いて
22:25 Satellite: 今の指摘は 01:00:592 (1,2,3,4) - ここの部分だけど
22:25 Satellite: Ncの話？
22:25 Lecana: あ
22:25 Lecana: WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
22:25 Satellite: アスペかな？
22:25 Satellite: ほんと大丈夫？
22:26 Satellite: 寝たほうがいいよｗ
22:26 Lecana: こっちが
22:26 Lecana: アスペだったｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ
22:26 Lecana: 申し訳Nasus
22:26 Satellite: いやなにいってるかほんと
22:26 Satellite: わからなかったんだけどｗ
22:26 Satellite: あせるからやめろｗ
22:26 Lecana: ｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗｗ
22:27 Lecana: OK
22:27 Satellite: 他きになるとこある？
22:27 Satellite: なかったら
22:27 Satellite: 最初からみていく
22:28 Lecana: ないニョ
22:28 Satellite: 00:09:164 (1) - 頭whistle抜けてる
22:29 Satellite: 00:11:485 (5,6,7) - Ctrl+J + Ctrl+Hして 00:10:414 (1) - ここに重ねたら
22:29 Satellite: かっこいいとおもうんだけど
22:29 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mPjrm/891c207068.jpg
22:30 Satellite: 流れも良いし
22:30 Lecana: awesome
22:30 Satellite: 00:12:378 (2,3) - ここより 00:12:735 (4,5) - ここが狭くなるのは流れ的にやりづらいから
22:30 Satellite: できれば４５が広くなったほうがまだ良いと思う
22:31 Satellite: 00:17:200 (3,4) - 流れ急すぎるから
22:31 Satellite: 手前から図形にして４角形にいれない？
22:31 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mPjvG/f072c25cb7.jpg
22:32 Satellite: 00:18:985 (5) - 細かいけど x257 y109
22:32 Satellite: 00:19:164 (6,8) - 細かいけど x203 y269
22:32 Satellite: 00:19:164 (6) - add Newcomboかな
22:34 Satellite: 00:54:878 (1,2,3,4) - 流れが最悪すぎる
22:34 Satellite: １２３だけでみると綺麗だけど
22:34 Satellite: １２３４で見ると
22:34 Satellite: 凄いやりづらい部類に入ると思う
22:35 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mPjH0/036bc7009a.jpg
22:35 Satellite: まだこういった流れ作ったほうが
22:35 Satellite: 綺麗にたたけると思う
22:35 Satellite: 違う形でもokだけど
22:35 Satellite: 現状は微妙
22:36 Satellite: サビ前はさっきいった感じ
22:37 Satellite: 01:11:842 (8,1) - できればこういうのはスタックさせたほうが
22:37 Satellite: 雰囲気出るよ、ただ修正がちょっと難しいかもしれないけど
22:37 Satellite: 一度重ねてみて良いなって思って
22:37 Satellite: 配置が思い浮かばないなら考えるよ
22:37 Satellite: 01:15:235 (3,4) - 多分音取り逆
22:38 Satellite: 01:17:378 (4) - 終点にfinish云々は前のmodのときもいったかもしれないけど
22:38 Satellite: 凄い違和感ある
22:38 Satellite: 01:22:914 (5) - これは 01:23:092 (6) - ここにスタックさせたほうがいい
22:38 Satellite: 01:22:021 (1,2,3) - こことのパターンを統一するほうがいい
22:39 Satellite: 01:27:735 (1) - 最後はSampleset : Nじゃなくて
22:39 Satellite: Additions : Nね
22:39 Satellite: Samplesetは元に戻して
22:40 Satellite: 以上なんかききたいことあればどうぞ
22:56 Satellite: 00:31:664 (1) - remo nc
22:56 Satellite: 00:31:842 (2) - add nc
22:56 Lecana: あ
22:56 Lecana: ok
22:58 Satellite: 00:58:985 (5) - できればこれ3/4sliderにしたほうが映えるよ
22:58 Satellite: 01:00:414 (3) - add nc 01:00:592 (1) - remo nc
22:58 Satellite: http://puu.sh/mPkJ3/10839bc34a.jpg
22:59 Satellite: 01:01:128 (6) - 位置的に x191 y172あたりがきれい
22:59 Satellite: 01:11:842 (8,1) - いいぞ～これｗ
23:00 Lecana: 01:12:557 (3,1) -
23:00 Satellite: 01:17:378 (4) - これ伝わってなかったな
23:00 Lecana: ここスタックしてるところが気がかりだけど左に飛ばしてうえにあげるしかなかった・・
23:00 Lecana: あ
23:00 Lecana: Note+Slider?
23:00 Satellite: 01:17:378 (4,1) -
23:00 Satellite: 音取り逆にしたらいいとおもう
23:03 Satellite: That's all!

I don't touch this mapset. so If you are need translation. call me.