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MY FIRST STORY - Fukagyaku Replace [Osu|Taiko]

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Broccoly
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 4월 24일 월요일 at 오전 12:40:25

Artist: MY FIRST STORY
Title: Fukagyaku Replace
Tags: nobunaga concerto ending fugakyaku Asahina Momoko pishifat Asagi Sharkie mintong89 qoot8123 byfar VINXIS StarrStyx mokori
BPM: 200
Filesize: 14304kb
Play Time: 03:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Andy Kamal's Insane (4.58 stars, 662 notes)
  2. Asagi's Insane (4.77 stars, 698 notes)
  3. mint's Muzukashii (2.93 stars, 771 notes)
  4. mint's Ura Oni (4.92 stars, 1351 notes)
  5. momoko's Extra (5.7 stars, 875 notes)
  6. Normal (2.34 stars, 370 notes)
  7. pishi's Extra (5.32 stars, 753 notes)
  8. qoot8123's Oni (3.97 stars, 1062 notes)
  9. Sharkie's Hard (3.36 stars, 502 notes)
  10. StarR's Easy (1.68 stars, 255 notes)
  11. Weakness (6.3 stars, 923 notes)
Download: MY FIRST STORY - Fukagyaku Replace
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Andy Kamal collab by vinxis/byfar
ignoring map hitsound might mess up ur hitsound
Saut
!!!
Enon
weakness weakness
Ilias
nice song
Topic Starter
Broccoly

Ilias wrote:

nice song
Thanks for a star!
DeletedUser_1574070
ㅋㅋ
Topic Starter
Broccoly

Kloyd wrote:

ㅋㅋ
ㅋㅋ아니대체무엇이웃긴것인지??????

EDIT: 별풍선 감사합니다...........................................(_ _)
DeletedUser_1574070

Broccoly wrote:

Kloyd wrote:

ㅋㅋ
ㅋㅋ아니대체무엇이웃긴것인지??????

EDIT: 별풍선 감사합니다...........................................(_ _)
일리! 일리! 네어 십억 쓰고 또오오오 벌어 워우!
Reol
익기니스 익기니스
Asahina Momoko
KILL MY WEEBNESS WEBUNESU

http://puu.sh/m9RCa/65693df3da.zip
Len
노래 개좋다 그것보다 모모코 진짜 잘찍었다
pishifat
Topic Starter
Broccoly

pishifat wrote:

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/7518324/MY%20FIRST%20STORY%20-%20Fukagyaku%20Replace%20%28Broccoly%29%20%5Bpishi%27s%20Extra%5D.osu

i have too much free time
Wowww so fast
I'll upload it when I get home :)
Thanks
mintong89
I wish you accept Taiko diff :o
Topic Starter
Broccoly

mintong89 wrote:

I wish you accept Taiko diff :o
which diffs? I've never had taiko in my mapset so I have no idea how it works lol
mintong89

Broccoly wrote:

which diffs? I've never had taiko in my mapset so I have no idea how it works lol
both Taiko Hard and Taiko Insane lol so it will rankable :)
Topic Starter
Broccoly

mintong89 wrote:

Broccoly wrote:

which diffs? I've never had taiko in my mapset so I have no idea how it works lol
both Taiko Hard and Taiko Insane lol so it will rankable :)
Ok!
Tenseki
사랑해요 콜리오빠~~!!!!!
Jessie
I don't know what you decided to do with timing but you fucked it up so bad it's unplayable.
Topic Starter
Broccoly

Jessie wrote:

I don't know what you decided to do with timing but you fucked it up so bad it's unplayable.
you simply forgot to redownload the map as the mp3 has been changed. Timing's fine and nothing's fucked up here.

Broccoly wrote:

Changed mp3 pls ReDL 12/30/15
VINXIS
http://puu.sh/nbHyG/ef22054816.zip NOT HITSOUNDED XXDXDXD
_Indeketsu
Good map :)
moot2
Why unranked? ;_;
Anxient
sth

3 minutes later


well then

i still didnt mod it

m4m for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/415910
Omar Qiu's Insane
00:03:743 (4) - not even a NC?
00:20:843 (3) - this is repeating for way too long bro. shorten to 00:20:993 - here
00:21:593 - not even keysounded?
00:23:393 (1,4) - wanna perfect stack?
00:24:443 (1) - continue combo. make NC in 00:24:593 (2) - instead.
00:25:043 (3) - place this somewhere that ISNT there i think it lacks emphasis ;l im assuming you havent hitsounded this. http://puu.sh/nUxOp/867858366d.jpg try stacking with 00:25:943 (1) - sliderstart. works pretty well imo
00:26:393 (2,3,4,5) - the amount of people misreading this as a stream is too high yo. make a jump sequence.
00:29:843 (2,3,4) - nice spacing bro. 5/7 wont get misread. even this works better imo http://puu.sh/nUxTQ/c1bab0a96e.jpg
00:31:043 (2) - i dont hear anything in the song that requires a break in flow .-. ctrl g maybe?
00:36:143 (3,4,5) - ye im not mentioning this anymore. seems like youre doing this on purpose.
00:45:143 (5) - pretty sure you forgot to NC.
00:45:743 (3,4) - bruh this plays like brick. try this? http://puu.sh/nUy71/f83a8aac51.jpg :(
00:48:593 (1) - better space this out imo it needs emphasis. try moving the triangle somewhere there http://puu.sh/nUyap/7c54482f73.jpg. highlight em all and move em to x152:y66
00:52:793 (3,4,1) - not even perfect triangle http://puu.sh/nUyfp/bb221d9627.jpg
00:58:643 - 00:59:693 - brand new asian
01:02:243 (2) - i believe ctrl g works better.
01:05:768 - better silence the sliderend bruh
01:06:893 (2) - since (3) has emphasis , i think itll be better to place 2 closer to (1). http://puu.sh/nUyis/3ec36111df.jpg
01:07:943 (6) - NC
01:14:243 - thats an awkward pause.
01:21:068 - silence?
01:21:968 - you know the drill. and any similar parts?
01:22:793 (2,3,4) - so you gonna autostack it or not? .-. choose one this looks really dumb.
01:28:043 (4) - lol okay this one is too hard to read for the lowest diff of the insane of this set. so why not give a bit of mercy and place it a bit to the left? http://puu.sh/nUypL/e065d083d7.jpg
01:33:743 (2) - missing one more repeat.
01:41:243 (1) - if you wanna map the WOOOO, place this slider on the blue tick.
02:20:543 (1) - why NC?
02:43:493 (2,1) - woah. overlap >:[
02:55:193 (3,4) - this looks not pretty :ccc try rotating it a bit http://puu.sh/nUyyn/5a44ba2768.jpg
03:01:943 (2) - try doing this. it puts less strain on the player and actually emphasizes the next note properly. http://puu.sh/nUyAc/2bc1ac9630.jpg
03:08:243 - map this dammit :(
03:26:243 (2,1) - and similar parts. 300% sure this is overmap. just make a 3/4 slider and hitcircle.
03:31:643 (1,4) - staaaaaaaaaaaaack
03:33:068 (7) - overmap?
03:36:443 - *raspy AUUUUUUUUUUUU*
03:42:143 (5,6,7,8) - how about not making this a antijump? it feels so underwhelming lol especially for the last notes of the diff.
10/10 would never kiai again
aksagi's insane
00:29:093 (4,2) - would stack better
01:24:293 (4,1) - fix blanket?
01:26:843 (5) - try placing this further away lol im sure this would work better http://puu.sh/nUyU6/f645361e1e.jpg or something like this
01:52:193 (1,1,1) - why NC spam? this isnt camellia :ccccc
02:20:993 (1,2) - plays awkwardly imo. maybe do this? http://puu.sh/nUz1X/fcf72287c2.jpg
02:58:043 (5,1) - fix blanket pls
03:32:693 (4) - making it two hitcircles would make the part more interesting to play? http://puu.sh/nUz7d/73fd7b82dc.jpg
03:49:943 - silence? :D

why is this diff easier than omar's
pishi's extra
01:15:593 (2,3,1) - maybe make the DS same or make the DS 01:15:593 (2,3) - lower? doesnt make sense why (2,3) is getting more spacing than (3,1). featuring the worst idea 2016 http://puu.sh/nUzjr/8d331e5adf.jpg
01:33:968 (2) - im guessing you forgot to silence the slider.
01:52:493 (2) - this looks so out of place. try placing here x5;y123
02:22:043 (1) - ctrl g works better imo. also continue combo.
02:22:343 (2) - NC here.
02:31:943 - 02:50:843 - bless you for keysounding.
02:50:093 - maybe you forgot one note?
02:51:593 (2) - ctrl g maybe?
03:07:943 (1) - continue combo?
03:08:243 (2) - NC?
03:13:943 - 03:20:918 - delete all green lines in this area
5/7 diff would play again
momoko's extra
00:08:543 (1,2,1) - maybe making this ctrl h and moving it here x300;y204 http://puu.sh/nUzMy/e6869a29a2.jpg (just stack to 00:06:593 (3) - slider head to make your life easier.
00:17:468 - you couldve placed a note in 00:17:543 (1) - slider head to get that triple.
00:23:843 (2,3) - yeah totally wont misread this as a stream. try moving 00:23:843 (2) - somewhere around x117;y255? http://puu.sh/nUzTi/9e29a80ee7.jpg seems to work for me
00:43:943 (1) - well that was a random speedup. wonde where that came from.
00:50:543 (1,1) - you cant just place kicksliders just coz you feel like it man :c
00:50:993 (2) - NC
00:51:443 (1) - continue combo
00:55:493 (5) - better make to hitcircles coz 00:55:643 - seems like a clickable sound
01:28:718 - 01:29:018 - im assuming you meant to silence these.
01:45:368 (4) - overmapped :c i dont care if you say "it fits the map hurr durr" its overmapped :( you even silenced it
02:02:768 - silence?
02:19:043 (2) - ctrl g maybe? plays better imo
03:08:243 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - crazy stream out of nowhere. make it normal lol theres nothing in the song that suggests this.
03:15:893 (2) - eh w/e. this is overmapped. reduce the repeat by 1.
03:24:593 - make a kickslider?

10/10 would pp again
Bluekrait
Broccoly's M4M request

[General]
[StaR's Easy]
  1. 00:35:543 (3,1) - Blanket maybe by curving 1
  2. 00:57:743 (6,1) - Blanket
  3. 01:12:143 (3,1) - ^
  4. 01:52:343 (3,4) - ^
  5. 01:54:743 (3,4) - ^ (minor)
  6. 03:29:543 (3,4) - ^
[Normal]
  1. PM me when it's finished
[Sharkie's Hard]
  1. If you're only going to use one hitsound, at least tone down the volume at soft parts of the song
  2. 01:53:093 (2,3,1) - Spacing might be tough for a hard
  3. 03:24:743 (1,2,3) - ^
  4. 03:43:643 - Map the vocal here? Turns out no one mapped this :(
[Omar Qiu's Insane]
  1. If you're only going to use one hitsound, at least tone down the volume at soft parts of the song
  2. No kiai time? :(
  3. 01:20:843 (3,1,2) - I don't think this pattern fits well here. Maybe remove the 1 and extend slider 3
  4. 01:21:743 (4,5,6) - Same pattern, but fits better
  5. 01:32:243 (2,1,2) - Stack?
  6. 03:02:993 (2,1) - ^
  7. 01:42:443 (1,1) - Blanket
[Asagi's Insane]
  1. If you're only going to use one hitsound, at least tone down the volume at soft parts of the song
  2. 00:59:693 (2) - NC here instead of at 00:59:393 (1)
  3. 01:13:193 (3,4) - Blanket (minor)
  4. 01:24:293 (4,5) - ^
  5. 02:52:343 (1,3,4) - ^
  6. 01:49:793 (4,1) - Stack
  7. 02:46:343 (1,1) - ^
  8. 03:29:693 (2,2) - ^
  9. 02:02:543 (3,1) - Void between these. You don't have to add anything here, but I think the vocal should be mapped. Something like you did here 01:09:743 (1) and 03:25:343 (5) maybe?
  10. 02:15:593 (3,4,2) - Blanket 4
  11. 02:58:793 (2,3,4) - NC these for SV change since you did it here at 01:52:193 (1,1,1)
  12. 03:01:643 (1,3) - Blanket (3's slider end is closer to 1 than start)
[pishi's Extra]
  1. 00:59:693 (2) - NC here instead of at 00:59:393 (1)
  2. 01:19:643 (1) - Why NC just these four? Makes stream look very uneven
  3. 02:12:443 (1) - ^ little better than first because direction change
  4. 03:35:243 (1) - ^ much beter than frist because direction change
  5. 01:25:643 (4,3) - Stack
  6. 03:25:943 (1,2) - ^
  7. 03:36:893 (2,4,5,1,5,4,2,2) - ^ (minor because timeline spacing)
  8. 01:33:968 (2) - Consider silencing slider end or using softer hitsound if ending on blue tick
  9. 02:10:193 (1) - Don't NC this
  10. 02:19:793 (1) - ^
[momoko's Extra]
  1. 00:23:843 (2,3) - Personal thing, I missed these twice xD
  2. 00:39:293 (2,3) - Blanket
  3. 03:36:293 (4,1) - ^
  4. 03:36:743 (2,3) - ^
  5. 03:38:393 (3,4) - ^
  6. 03:40:643 (3,4) - ^
  7. 00:43:043 (2,1,2) - Blanket (minor)
  8. 03:37:943 (1,3) - ^
  9. 01:09:743 (1,2) - Favorite implementation of this part
  10. 01:12:293 (2) - Silence slider end
  11. 02:02:543 (1) - ^
  12. 02:05:843 (2) - ^
  13. 02:21:293 (1,2) - ^
  14. 03:27:893 (2) - ^
  15. 01:45:368 (4) - Why put this here if you're silencing it?
  16. 03:24:743 (1,2) - Yes
  17. 03:25:643 (3) - Decrease length by 1/8 tick or move whole slider closer to next
  18. Fine diff
[Weakness]
  1. 00:27:893 (4,1) - Point 4 to start of 1 or Ctrl G 1
  2. 00:34:193 (1,2) - I think these should be combined into one slider
  3. 01:07:793 (2,4) - Were these meant to be stacked?
  4. 01:09:743 (1,2) - Simple things are nice too :)
  5. 01:31:493 (2,3) - Unstack (make another jump)
  6. 01:52:193 (1,1) - Blanket
  7. 02:02:543 (9,1) - FC killer
  8. 02:08:393 (5) - Ctrl G
  9. I feel like I'm missing something... Maybe because I'm finally done!
Good job Broccoly and friends! This should have very little difficulty becoming ranked.

My Map
Manic by cYsmix

DeletedUser_7520443
Nice map! :D
Topic Starter
Broccoly

QuillGill wrote:

Nice map! :D
thanks, wanna mod ?
DeletedUser_7520443

Broccoly wrote:

thanks, wanna mod ?
I don't know how to mod ;P
But I just wanted to say its a nice map and I'm having fun with it :D
also, why no 4 star maps? ;-; so many 5* but allot of players may not be skilled enough to beat them
Topic Starter
Broccoly
OmarQui's insand is 4.5 stars!
Log Off Now
#modreqs M4M

[General]

Looks fine

[Stark's Easy]

00:36:593 (1) - Maybe consider a little kink near the end of this slider so it blankets 00:35:543 (3) - better? Just a thought

00:42:743 (1,2) - Make these the same shape?

00:45:143 (1,2) - ^

01:28:343 (3) - I would invert this slider so it angles the other way to improve flow (just a tiny bit)

01:33:143 (3,4) - Make 4 blanket 3? Looks a bit weird atm imo

02:02:543 (5) - I would personally just make this instead of a slider since you follow the drums for this whole section and suddenly switching just before the chorus feels a bit off to me

02:22:343 (1) - Silence/5% soft end?

02:31:343 - Normally following vocals in easy diffs isn't recommended but I really think this plays nice, the hitsounds are also spot on, like seriously nice job on this section

02:59:243 (5) - Remove mid point? (this is so minor)

03:45:143 (1) - Same comment as 02:22:343 (1) -

[Normal]

Check AIMod for distance snapping

00:20:843 (3) - Drum sampleset - Whistle hitsound? Just sounds better imo compared to current hs

00:34:043 (5,1) - nazi blanket

00:42:143 (2,4) - This can be easily misread by newer players, I would probably raise 4 above the slider instead of stack it underneath like so (my suggested pattern is similar to this one 00:44:543 (2,4) - )

01:22:043 (6,1) - nazi blanket

02:04:043 (3,4) - Consider making 4 blanket 3?

02:13:643 (3,4) - blanket (will stop pointing blankets out, but it happens often in this diff)

03:10:343 (7) - NC ***only suggesting this because it would be nice to add a bit of emphasis (even if it's only colour wise) on the piano here)

03:29:543 (4,5) - This flow looks a bit misleading, I would at least Ctrl + H (4) so it looks a bit more like it's heading in the direction of 5

[Sharkie's Hard]

This diff is really fun to play

00:18:593 (1) - This feels werid to me, maybe because you're missing the downbeat when the previous sliders at least sounded like they were following the violins

01:16:043 (1) - (super minor) Consider making the second half of this slider angle towards 01:15:143 (1) - a little? Just so it looks like it could potentially blanket or hit that direction or idk really

02:18:743 (1,2) - nazi blanket

02:55:793 (4,1) - ^

[Omar's Insane]

You have no kiai time

00:20:843 (3) - This is one note too long

00:26:393 (2,3,4,5) - Super easy to misread, if you want to keep this pattern I would at least NC each note because this looks like a stream on first playthrough

00:36:143 (3,4,5,1) - ^

00:51:743 (3) - aesthetics Ctrl + H?

01:05:543 (1,2,3) - This confused me, why not just extend (1) to where (2) is placed? Seems really unnecessary for (2) to be there imo

01:07:943 (6) - NC?

01:08:993 (14) - ^

01:14:243 - I know this is intentional but this is really jarring to play without a note here

01:23:018 (3) - Overmap

01:56:543 (3) - NC slider velocity changes, really hard to read without them

02:07:043 - Same comment as 01:14:243 -

02:31:943 - Hitsounds are a bit loud in this section, especially when compared to the rest of the map

02:42:893 (1) - This doesn't fit the vocals that you're following, if you still want to follow the held note you should turn 2 into a slider instead and end at 02:42:893 -

02:51:593 (1) - Any reason for NC here?

03:39:443 - Same comment as 01:14:243 -

[]

Hope this helps! (I stopped here since I'm not really comfortable modding higher diffs yet, although I would suggest Asagi checks blankets through his diff since theres a lot of issues with them)
Enon
별 한 개 ._. 이제 sp 12네욥!
Topic Starter
Broccoly
으악감사합니다~~~!!
Prophecy
我才不會摸呢 :<
自已的圖也没管好呢
lop
Mod via pm
[Mint's Taiko Ura]
00:15:293 (22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - ddk d kkddk 更适合这里的节奏感觉
00:20:543 (73,74) - ctrl + G?
00:19:043 (57) - k?
00:31:568 (158,159) - dk? 00:31:643 (159) - 变蓝的话感觉跟后面finishi比较搭
00:40:343 (226) - why k QAQ kdddk dt好卡手啊 00:40:493 (228) - 感觉这个地方k更好
01:08:618 (459,460) - kk follow人声?
01:13:343 (491,492,493,494,495,496,497,498,499) - ddkdk d kkd?
01:14:468 (502) - move to 01:14:618 (503) - ?
01:14:543 (502,503,504,505,506,507,508,509,510) - kkddkdkkd?
01:19:343 (546,547,548,549,550,551,552,553,554) - ddkdkkkkd?(跑路
01:34:043 (638) - d? and 01:34:193 (639) - move to 01:34:243 (639) - ?
02:05:393 (805,806,807,808,809,810) - d kkddk?
02:12:143 (867,868,869,870,871,872,873,874,875) - kkdkddkkd?(不跑怀疑要被打死 02:12:668 (874) - 变成d有惊喜>.<
03:27:593 (225,226,227,228,229,230) - d kkddk?
03:33:743 - 感觉这里k d k d这样会很爽
btw: 1.1x谋杀dt QAQAQ
btw2:多数摸目的是sr嘿嘿嘿

[qoot's Oni]
00:15:743 (21) - k? 比较适合节奏
00:54:668 (199) - move to 00:54:818 (200) - ? 这里人声更适合三连感觉
01:19:418 (58) - changed to k and move to 01:19:718 (61) -
03:35:318 (254) - ^

[Mint's Muzu]
no problem >.<

good luck 火速跑路
Asahina Momoko

Anxient wrote:

momoko's extra
00:43:943 (1) - well that was a random speedup. wonde where that came from. lol not random
00:50:543 (1,1) - you cant just place kicksliders just coz you feel like it man :c they have a role to emphasize from calm to strong guitar part. also listen to drums carefully and you'd get it
00:50:993 (2) - NC no
00:51:443 (1) - continue combo ^
01:45:368 (4) - overmapped :c i dont care if you say "it fits the map hurr durr" its overmapped :( you even silenced it hm it's hard to explain, but actually here has the lyric and sound "ku", but yea so quiet. "bo"(01:45:143 -), "ku" (01:45:368 -), "no" (01:45:443 -)
02:19:043 (2) - ctrl g maybe? plays better imo no
03:08:243 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - crazy stream out of nowhere. make it normal lol theres nothing in the song that suggests this. no
03:15:893 (2) - eh w/e. this is overmapped. reduce the repeat by 1. listen to vocal please
03:24:593 - make a kickslider? not my taste.
10/10 would pp again
others fixed, and also adjusted some blankets as Bluekrait mentioned, thanks for mod :)

http://puu.sh/ogIhM/91c906de5a.zip
Surono
Halo, M4M reqs for Mintong~

>General
* that diffname is fine on Mintong diffs?

>mint's Taiko Ura
* 00:10:043 - here have a beat so wanna put don? and 00:10:343 - spinner can started from here. looks better with flow
* 00:14:543 (15,16,17,18,19) - I think is better to make kkkkd for emphasize, 00:16:943 (38,39,40,41,42) - bcus this has kkddk
* 00:15:743 (26,27,28,29,30) - not feels overemphasize with kat? ddkdd enough fine Imo
* 00:24:293 (99) - change to kat for high sound? if you want a differ emphasize with 00:23:693 (93,94,95) - this
* 00:33:218 (171) - this time for kdddk? ( change to don, clear to hear the guitar )
* 00:39:593 - why this empty? I hear that drum and the flow still clearly to heard
* 00:50:843 (307,308) - I think better to change d and K, bcus previous cymbal is had D. so here is K for guitar+cymbal, also d for better contrast
* 01:09:743 - kill my, 01:10:343 - WUEAKNENUUSSS.
* 01:57:593 - fill don to consistent follow drum, I dont see reason for kd dk. if 01:57:743 - cymbal oke. and if you accept to fill don, 01:57:743 (746,747) - swap this.
* 02:56:693 - just akward to leave empty this drum for vocal.. 02:51:143 - check from here, and make something..
* 03:11:543 - wanna put spinner this? but oke that flow is smoothh. but I seen your placed spinner at end of song for smooth sound.
* 03:27:893 - lol, change this kat? for 100% follow the same vocal 03:27:743 (226,230) - ? if you accept, 03:28:193 (231,232) - swap this to avoid monotone, 03:28:343 - and here is fit with kat

okey just it.. fun tako like usually! xd

>qoot8123's Oni
* 00:29:093 - add kat and 00:29:393 - fill finisher? I just think this need variation with previous. 00:38:543 (107,108,109,110) - and you did at here
* 00:38:993 - fill finisher?, 00:50:993 - okay I saw why just filled finisher like this, your focus on strong sound?
* 00:59:993 - kat? to follow vocal

idk more to do for this diff
fine with spread, has long 1/2 and various short stream, but rarely 5plet

>mint's Taiko Muzukashii
* 00:10:043 - & 00:10:343 - like Ura diff Suggestion
* 00:30:593 (82) - delete and 00:31:043 - change this kat? I think theres overlap and long pattern
* 00:39:293 - fill don in here or next red tick?
* 00:50:693 - delete? heres no drum, and unnecessary
* 02:59:543 - move to 02:59:693 - here? vocal at here

this really wasnt kill waeknus.. seems slider this diff is long, consider since this high bpm, maybe try to make pattern like 1/2 and 1/4 on strong drum?

GLuck for Qot and Mintong!
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