1. Easy (1,35 stars, 95 notes)
2. Hard (2,79 stars, 227 notes)
3. Insane (3,56 stars, 293 notes)
4. Normal (2,12 stars, 170 notes)

My Little Acc wrote:

Modmod !

*red = unrankable

NORMAL :

00:29:756 - Blanket (Not critic)
01:21:383 (1) - This circle come too fast (for Normal Diff) fix

HARD :

00:31:151 - Blanket, not critic fix

INSANE :

I think it's ok, but Slider Velocity is maybe a little slow for Insane.

Great song, and good mapping !

TheOnlyLeon wrote:

Hey, from my queue, BTW, this is just a general check, stuff like metadata is not being looked at.

NORMAL

00:07:663 - (2) This slider shape is strange looking, the curves are too tight and there's a weird pinching on the corners of the slider path, You could try other things, but I'd suggest getting rid of one point and just making it a basic curve since it has to fit in such a small space.

00:09:523 - (2) ^^^^^^

00:12:546 - (1) ^^^^^^

00:31:849 - (2) ^^^^^^

No changes

OK, I really like the Normal, it's just that you have that same slider shape popping up all over the map, and that one shape just looks awful imo. It comes up a couple other times later but I got sick of just examining the sliders so I skipped ahead looking for any other issues, didn't really see any. Nice diff.

HARD

00:09:290 - (1,2) I'm going to assume this positioning was intentional, but on the off chance it wasn't, these aren't parallel. fix

00:51:383 - (6,7,1) This seems harsh, the entire map up until this point is 1/2 or 1/1 in terms on clickable objects, then for this one instance you throw on 1/4, STACKED 1/4, and then never use it again. This comes out of nowhere and could result in a break solely because the player has already gotten in such a cemented rhythm of 1/2. I'd recommend changing this out to maintain consistency. used another pattern

01:04:174 - (2,3,4,1) I get the square being used here, but the slider above is pulling inwards, so the sudden change to directly down is unnatural and doesn't make too much sense, I'd pull 3 and 4 to the right to make a diamond shape, it might make a couple of the notes look closer together than you wanted, however this would significantly improve the directional flow of the map. changed slider

Yea, that's it. the difficulty is still really clean, I really had to nit-pick to get anything to say at all. Good job so far.

INSANE

00:46:035 - (9.10,11,1,2,3) I get that this is the highest difficulty, but in general the map itself is quite easy, and a stream that ends off immediately into a large jump pattern, I know a lot of people MY rank that struggle with that, and the demographic for this set is much lower, so this is just cruel. Either nerf the size of the jumps so that it's easier to catch onto, or cut 3 or 4 from the length of the stream into a kick slider, so that you don't have to stream directly into the jump pattern.

00:48:360 - (3) All perfect triangles, then this random note over here, in itself this isn't normally a problem, but it's literally the only instance of it in the entire segment, so it ends up just REALLY out of place visually. I'd recommend shifting this around so that it's either consistent or consistently misaligned, take your pick.

no change, valid points though might concider nerfing the pre chorus A BIT, but not too much. i really like how it turned out.

That's all, honestly the set it really good right now, and the fact that you've got it to this state with as few mods as you have is amazing, so great work on that. All I could find were minor polish points that could be cleaned up on. Great set, have a Star.

XxSeonxX wrote:

hello, from my queue

General
ctrl+shift+a and fix the problems
since you are having same colour combos, why not just make 2 combos instead of 4? actually forgot to add combo colors. thanks for reminding me!

Insane
00:48:360 (3) - I think having this circle higher is better since other jumps are further apart no change


I can't see much problems from this map, its nice :O, good luck
Have a star

1. Widescreen support conflicts in Insane.
2. hitsounds with possible delay >5ms:
   soft-hitclap2.wav
   << Actually I rechecked this in Audacity and I'm pretty sure that this would be considered an unrankable issue, according to Osu! Ranking Criteria :
   

   Hitsounds must have an acceptable range of delay under 5ms, unless there's a special purpose. Every hitsound file should start in time, preferrably at 0ms. This is to ensure that every map doesn't sound mistimed, and therefore could provide acceptably synchronized rhythm feedback to players.

1. OD could have turned down a bit since it's the easiest diff in the mapset.
2. 00:29:756 - I feel like there should be a slider here to emphasize that high pitch sound and end it on 00:30:221 . So my suggestion here would be either Ctrl+g the rhythm here 00:29:290 (1,2) or just simply delete 00:30:221 (2) and make 00:29:290 (1) a reverse slider.
3. 00:36:732 (1) - It's kinda confusing because this isn't mapped on the piano while the rest of the combo 00:36:965 (2,3,4,5,6,7) did emphasize it.
4. 00:58:825 (1,2) - A spacing error.

1. 00:59:988 (5) - I don't know what this kickslider emphasized on, compared to 01:05:337 (3) .
2. Nice.

1. 00:08:477 - I can understand that what you're trying to do but I would make this beat either a sliderend or just leave this beat empty, up to you.
2. 00:36:965 - You could make this clickable so you can start emphasizing that piano sound here.
3. 01:05:104 (2,3,4) - 01:07:197 (3,4,5) - Not sure if this is intentional but it would be more preferable if they were placed identically.

• 00:05:104 (1) - consider changing the shape of this. Doesnt fit the sound there imo
  00:08:476 (5) - this note is overmapped. Its not wrong or bad, but if more ppl dont like this then you should change it. I think having 00:08:360 (4,6) - as a high spaced jump fits better with that "WUUSH" sound.
  00:09:290 (2,3) - awkward drop off. kinda messes with the visual flow of that part
  00:15:221 - you should put smth here D: Changing this 00:15:104 (4) - to a 1/4 slider works better
  00:27:197 (6,7) - having a slight curve there would work better
  like this

  
  00:42:314 (1,2,3) - the spacing between 1 and 2 is almost inexistent (slider liniency from a squiggy 1/1 slider). There is also no reason to recude the spacing. Keep it the same beteen these 3
  00:46:035 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - duuude the jumps. I know its an "Insane" but those are bit much. 00:46:035 - put a 1/2 slider here so the transition starts smoother. Reduce spacing between those 00:47:430 (4,5) - so you emphasize 00:47:895 (1) - more (relative spacing). You could put a 1/2 slider here aswell 00:47:430 (4) - .
  00:51:151 (6) - slider here aswell?
  00:55:104 (6,7) - mb destack these (like here 01:15:570 (7,8,1) - )
  01:00:686 (5) - reduce the spacig on this so 01:00:918 (1) - has more emphasis (move to 232|256) (you could do this on more than just this part. not pointing out or else this would take too long)
  01:02:546 (6,1) - awkward flow
  01:07:197 (3) - higher spacing. like here 01:06:035 (6,1) -

• 00:40:221 (6,1) - no need to stack
  00:52:314 (2) - You double the spacing here. For someone who plays Hard maps this would be a bit too much
  00:57:663 (2,3,4,5) - this square rly looks off-putting. Change it to a curve
  01:03:477 (2,3,4,1) - same
  01:10:918 (3,4) - no need to stack
  01:21:849 (2,3,4) - let the whole pattern here follow the direction of the slider

• 00:11:383 (2) - try using more smooth curves.
  00:36:965 (2,3,4) - you could change this to a 1/2 repeat slider. Its a normal and the chilled part of the song. You need to hold back a bit
  00:37:895 (5,6,7) - same
  00:41:383 (3) - copy paste this and change this 00:41:849 (4) -
  00:52:314 (4) - this kinda doesnt fit. just having these 00:51:616 (1,2,3) - feels a lot better

DavidEd wrote:

No response: Fixed (most likely)

Smokeman

Insane

00:05:104 (1) - consider changing the shape of this. Doesnt fit the sound there imo
00:08:476 (5) - this note is overmapped. Its not wrong or bad, but if more ppl dont like this then you should change it. I think having 00:08:360 (4,6) - as a high spaced jump fits better with that "WUUSH" sound. youre the first to complain then. i like that little fill there and theres a low chance ill change that
00:09:290 (2,3) - awkward drop off. kinda messes with the visual flow of that part
00:15:221 - you should put smth here D: Changing this 00:15:104 (4) - to a 1/4 slider works better
00:27:197 (6,7) - having a slight curve there would work better
like this

00:42:314 (1,2,3) - the spacing between 1 and 2 is almost inexistent (slider liniency from a squiggy 1/1 slider). There is also no reason to recude the spacing. Keep it the same beteen these 3
00:46:035 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - duuude the jumps. I know its an "Insane" but those are bit much. 00:46:035 - put a 1/2 slider here so the transition starts smoother. Reduce spacing between those 00:47:430 (4,5) - so you emphasize 00:47:895 (1) - more (relative spacing). You could put a 1/2 slider here aswell 00:47:430 (4) - . some people dont like it, and some people do. and i love to play those jumps so again, low chance of change
00:51:151 (6) - slider here aswell?
00:55:104 (6,7) - mb destack these (like here 01:15:570 (7,8,1) - )
01:00:686 (5) - reduce the spacig on this so 01:00:918 (1) - has more emphasis (move to 232|256) (you could do this on more than just this part. not pointing out or else this would take too long)
01:02:546 (6,1) - awkward flow really? i like it
01:07:197 (3) - higher spacing. like here 01:06:035 (6,1) -

tbh i dont like the way it looks. Some of the patterns dont flow into eachother very well.

Hard

00:40:221 (6,1) - no need to stack
00:52:314 (2) - You double the spacing here. For someone who plays Hard maps this would be a bit too much
00:57:663 (2,3,4,5) - this square rly looks off-putting. Change it to a curve
01:03:477 (2,3,4,1) - same
01:10:918 (3,4) - no need to stack
01:21:849 (2,3,4) - let the whole pattern here follow the direction of the slider

this dif looks a bit awkward while playing aswell D: not really

Normal

00:11:383 (2) - try using more smooth curves. not too big of a deal, but i guess i could do that on some sliders
00:36:965 (2,3,4) - you could change this to a 1/2 repeat slider. Its a normal and the chilled part of the song. You need to hold back a bit
00:37:895 (5,6,7) - same
00:41:383 (3) - copy paste this and change this 00:41:849 (4) -
00:52:314 (4) - this kinda doesnt fit. just having these 00:51:616 (1,2,3) - feels a lot better

00:07:663 (2) - i feel like you are using too many of those slider shapes nothing wrong with that.

This still needs some work, but it doesnt look too bad. hang in there only some fine polishing

(abou tthe math thing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Summation&#41; think my mind just exploded

Thanks for mod!